What would you do if one day you were kidnapped, taken to a city forgotten by God, and forced to race in the most dangerous, brutal, and degenerate festival in the world—where rules do not exist, and every race is not a competition but a war, where not even being the fastest would guarantee your victory?Welp, i´m not finished yet, so go play Motorstorm and you will get the idea
>>7885765that sounds sick. please God learn how to actually write if you haven't already. don't fumble this idea.
>>7885765Read Reverend Insanity.
>>7885765you can do it, aniki
Death Racing is a mood
Sounds like Wacky Racers and Death Race 2000 with all the fun sucked out of them. Sorry, just my boomer-ass opinion
>>7885765Sounds like a fun plot. Make it happen.
>>7885765I'm starting to think "forgotten by God" is taken literally, like your story has a supernatural angle to itwould be a nice element to your story though
>>7885765>What would you doi dont know... haha...do you have more art?
>>7885765I would remind myself I will never be Japanese
>>7885765A race war?
>>7887624more like a war race
>>7886277aww hey, i completely forgot to check the post.i think i have pretty good ideas for the story, but i guess i'm just lazy
>>7886682i was thinking the exact same thing, edgy Wacky Races
>>7886285ANIKI, ANIKI, ANIKI
>>7887575yeah, i do
>>7887577i'm Argentinian, which is worse
>>7887564it has sci-fi and paranormal stuff, so yeah, i guess you are right
>>7888048sweet>>7888046better than being chilean
>>7888046it seems like south americans and western europeans love making comics
>>7888053because we want money to get out of our countries
>>7888042learn about lineweight and drop the aliased memecrutch
>>7888059>memecrutchthe what
>>7888060shitty noise to hide the shortcomings of the lineart the same way chromatic aberration is elsewhereyour panels will look like badly upscaled unreadable shit
>>7888062it needs to look like shit, that's the whole pointbut that image is just a concept art, it should look much more detailed like the artwork above
>>7888066it's not about detail, it's about noisemore detail makes the noise worse because you can't tell what the fuck you're looking atink like a normal person, drop the aliasing>le it needs to look like shitfuck off, retard
>>7888070i'll make it shittier
>>7888042>aliased lineworkUltrabased.>>7888059>>7888062Cringe. Hard pixel lines aren't going to be hiding anything, retard. As a matter of fact, aliased lines are by definition kind of the diametric opposite of "noisy", so you're not only a faggot, you're also completely factually incorrect. The OP image is aliased too and that has proper lineweight.One thing to take away from this, though, OP- you're going to need to export your images in a lossless format, because jpeg artifacts really mess with hard lines and solid colors.
>>7888081i really don't mind desu, i like the low quality and imperfectionmy very first digital drawings used to look like shit to, though i improved with time. i never got used to higher resolutions, so i recently decided to embrace the Game Boy ass image quality
>>7885765>What would you doI'd break out with my sick kung-fu skills and beat up all the bad guys and save all the ladies and then kiss them, it'd be so cool.
>>7888088cool
>>7888081There's a difference between hard crisp lines and aliasing, retard. Aliasing is by definition noise distortion, literally the same as "jpeg artifacts", you worthless dumb nigger. It's not actual pixel input, it's a meme brush mapping to arbitrary blocks which is why it looks like SHIT
>>7888042wonder if she has a dedicated car or she shuffles between many
>>7885765>>7888042Lovely, I wish you luck
>>7888110every character should have at least a couple of vehicles depending on the situation and circuitshe starts with a Honda Africa Twin bike (with other name) for example
>>7888042I think you should work on drawing the boots better , looks a bit awkward in the foot and heel area
>>7888126yeah, maybe
>>7888107you can express these arguments without sounding like a 14 year old who just discovered 4chan, stop trying so hard.
>>7888042>tranime
>>7885765No thanks Gippity-chan
>>7886284Not the OP, but I read it, why did you say that? It has nothing to do with the post?
>>7888081it looks like shit
>>7888042Sexy as fuck
>>7888042>Posts work and the no draws come out with asinine crab advice Keep on drawing, brother
>>7888342good
>>7888353thx
>>7888107Even so, the brush still behaves like a hard pixel brush and thus still doesn't obfuscate anything. Your complaints are those of visual fidelity, not the brush itself being a crutch to hide a lack of linework skill.
>>7885765Wasnt that the same premise as that shitty Death Race movie with StathamLearn originality slop eater
>>7888942Surely you mean Stallone and it's a classic.
>>7888942it's inspired on a videogame, lol
>>7888744ding ding ding ding!I'm trash at lineart
>>7888961literally who?
>>7889429the man himself
>>7889429I mean yeah, he's not as big as Carradine but he did get his name on the poster.
>>7888942I'm sure you probably watch anime, and are probably on your hundredth school setting harem slop, or is it your isekai slop, etc. etc. all while unironically typing that comment.Originality or quality, to a lot of you faggots, means a 'made in japan' tag.That aside, the idea of a race where you kill each other is cool, and can be done in plenty of different ways. Is Twisted Metal and Carmageddon also Death Race rip offs?.. well, maybe they are actually are?... anyway, my point still stands.
>>7889767NTA, but I don't know if the same people watching modern isekai anime and the people who know old Roger Corman films have to a ton of crossover. You could have called out horror slasher flicks, that would have hit where it hurts.The death race concept is just enough of a thing where the influences are known, but it's not enough of a thing where no one bats an eye at yet another one to add to the pile. OP should just do it, if it's good it'll shut us boomers up.
>>7889767Carmageddon literally had car designs ripped from the film, it was a homage and wasn't even trying to hide it.
>>7889774gotta love niches where making your spin on it is the big fun of it
>>7889781>it was a homage and wasn't even trying to hide it.Does having a homage make it unoriginal slop?
>>7889787Yeah, but it inherently attracts the kind of people (me). What can't help but point out, "THIS IS LIKE X, AND Y, WITH A LITTLE BIT OF Z ADDED IN", just ignore us. We don't get to talk to people about our interests often so we sperg out when presented with the opportunity.
>>7889797I feel you, man
>>7889797I always thought creatives crying about such comments were being kind of stupid.One, you have people sincerely engaging with your work.Two, If they accurately guessed the influences, shouldn't you be happy that you're emulating them so well?Three, if they're wrong and had never heard of those things, shouldn't you be happy to see what they're talking about, as a possible reference for your work going forward?Or, if they annoy you, just scroll past them. Most comment are vapid, empty, basically overdone memes, at this point. Just scroll past them.
Don't depreciate yourself that much OP, just try following the advice above as rule of thumb when making this comicDESU, if an anon wants to give a sincere critique of your work, they wouldn't be throwing out buzzwords and slurs.
>>7889856how tf did desu turn into DESU
>>7889856>>7889860Zoomer newfag-kun...
>>7889811meh, i really don't care about that kind of comments, because being "original" is like trying to invent a new colorthe only way of making something "original" is taking an existing concept and adding your own twist and style(and yeah, I literally described what's the meaning of inspiration and why genres in media exists)
>>7890510oh yeah, forgot to add, if you want some inspo for your setting, I would consider checking out the car-related artwork from Gregory Fromenteauwishing you luck
>>7892153woah, that's cool thanks
>>7892877No probs, I know it's more Sci-fi focused, but I'm sure you can snuck in some fantasy elements in it for your setting/worldbuildinganything to flesh out your future work
>>7888042awesome design
>>7885765I guess kill myself that sounds like too much
>>7896369???
>>7885765Please let it be lots of netorare sex. That would be awesome. Everyone will want to read it.
