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what do you think of these character designs?
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4 is best
the rest eeeehhh
shapey af
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Unique but still recognizable enough to have some niche appeal, not overly designed but I think the silhouettes are a bit messy.

What is for? just drawings or you plan to do something with it, if you can do a proper character sheet with it or maybe draw them in a 360 pose I would say is good. but not my thing. I could complain that I don't know what half of the animals are supposed to be, but is not like it's a big deal, did you know francine from arthur is supposed to be a monkey? Yeah.
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>>7898365
they’re characters from the multimedia project doll eye
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pure sexo
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>>7898359
Okay, two gets a pass as well
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okay now post the main character
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>>7898356
>>7898406
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>>7898417
Absolutely unremarkable, and yes the whacky cartoon style doesn't save it.
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>>7898356
hmm yes yes, character design, very kikiboba
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now post the doctor
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>>7899272
you didn’t even post the full versions s m h
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what the fuck am I even looking at in all these images
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>>7899348
art
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>>7899337
That's why I talked about the sillhuetes and if whoever drew this can do a proper character sheet out of the designs.

Shit is all over the place, you really have to put some effort to know what's going on. It's unique at least, and the colours are nice. I don't think that makes it good.
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>a proper character sheet out of the designs
like these?
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More like this. being able to draw the character in any angle or pose and something he can go back to reference later.

But even that would not fix the issue of that image, it would just fix how they are always just...standing there with not a lot of motion.

I would probably recommend the person to learn some graphic design or something like that to make the shapes he draws pop off more and everything not be so meshed together when two characters interact. a number of things would fix that like an white outline around each character. a thicker more noticeable lineart too, no tangents where lines meet and so on.
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>>7899356
this is an old turnaround he made of mystery back in 2018, i believe the only one he ever made (or at least posted publicly) of any of his characters
i agree with your criticisms, a lot of his art is very stiff and hard to read, especially when two or more characters are interacting
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sorry i’m stupid as fuck he also made one for kao
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this is a piece from 2022 of the same three characters together
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another piece from 2022 with two characters together in an environment
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Wow. This art style makes me want to punch a wall. Why is the creator trying to make every character as viscerally unappealing to the eye as possible?
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bump
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>>7902326
they're ugly and no one is interested in whatever theyre from, move along lil bro
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Oh no, this schizo has found /ic/
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bump
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>>7898356
troonslop
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>>7898356
Terrible, just terrible. Saged btw



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