Previous thread >>7878631Welcome to /salt/, sexual energy recharged by spring edition.Your general thread dedicated to sexual artworks ranging from simple pinups with exaggerated proportions, to explicit pornography. Please feel free to pick your best works in progress, or finished work, and post it here.>General Rules & Guidelines1. All forms of art styles are welcome; submit your work and receive feedback from others.2. Please resize your images below 1000x1000 pixels before posting.3. Don't be afraid to ask for an honest, constructive critique. Be specific on the type of help you need.4. Share whatever knowledge you can. Please provide references whenever possible.5. Remember all GB3 related content such as LOLICON, SHOTACON, FURRY and FURRY PORNOGRAPHY along with BESTIALITY are BANNED on ALL boards, including red boards— except for /b/ and /trash/. PLEASE DO NOT post that content here. Thanks.6. DO NOT reply to Al bait posts. Report and hide, then let the janitors and moderators deal with the problem.>Community Resources>>>/ic/courses>>>/ic/artbookcharacterdesignreferences.com/character-anatomy>NSFW image resourcespornpics.comfemale-anatomy-for-artist.com
some figures I did a few days ago
>>7903486Very cute. Is there a specific course you did on showing three-dimensionality with line alone?
>>7903489Thanks, I don't know of a course that focuses solely on lines, but one I recently watched and really liked is the Hide Channel figure/head courses on coloso. To improve linework, I study manga/doujin pages
>>7899190Decided to color this one.>>7899405Why not? I even livestreamed the whole thing, though ultimately decided to scrap it for another Angels of Delusion drawing featuring her.>>7903486Berry nice.
Why did it take so fucking long for you retards to put up the new thread someone posted a nude woman to beg/int thread since /salt/ wasn’t around and now I’m super triggered
There is a LOT of nuance to sexual art that can take your piece from just a naked chickwith a dick in her mouth, to something TRULY sexy and appealing.Facial expressions?Heavy panting?Sweating?Spit?Cum?Drool?How plush is the ass?How plush are the breasts?Make that plushness clear.Any tattoos - and if so where are they located?Are the fluids viscous and stringy or watery?And so, so, so much more to consider..Keep this in mind when drawing.We want our art to radiate sexual energy so-to-speak, and being able toclearly/believably communicate these sexual ideas is a sure way to reach that goal.
>>7903632And to get money. That's all I care about.
>>7903589because it looked too good to be an /ic/ poster's work.I'd have sooner guessed an east asian pixiv deviant than that
When it comes to my main fetishes, I usually only like images that I've created based on my own ideas. I dislike the vast majority of porn based on those fetishes.Are there any other picky assholes like me here?
>>7903433I just redraw my own drawing with the same pencil and brushes, colors. Only with a small changue in proportions and they look so diferent, like diferent styles.
>>7903652yeah. the porn pic resources in OP disgust me. I find porn I like then screenshot parts of the vid, or find models and save their photos where they're wearing what I want or in a particular pose or whatever the fuck I need.
I once did this.A blank page that I installed a Cassandra into, doing something magical. The Something came out well enough to have Professor Milo admiring it, and their interactions grew around it, and the panels bounce around the negative spaces around their tableu, requiring the reader to follow a numbered trail. World Building through dialog, a duel of dares, a dance of ideals. And after doing this...
I did this. I never tried drawing an anthromorph nude before, and I decided to attempt it to educate myself. Getting her expression right was the goal, a dare with sociopolitical undertones, things that need explanation. The anthromorphs were slaves of humans until a long revolutionary war ended a decade ago, so there is a dynamic in play. In another story revolved around Spark Keepers, anthromorph girls given to young male aristocrats to set the Spark of Puberty alight, and sometimes the arrangement was sought by both, a way out of harsher duties for the slave girls, who were occasionally older than their human master and took advantage of the situation. So her smile suggests those implications of centuries of culture are in her mind as she spreads her invitation like playing cards at a poker showdown.
>>7903433why didnt my drawings make it to the banner do you hate me
Had its own share of fuck ups with the shading but managed to mostly salvage it.>>7903659You might wanna consider her centerline, her body on the right is like a slightly leaning stack of body parts tilting to our left without anything to support her weight.
Old gobo sketch
>>7903840We took a vote on the secret salt server and, yes, we hate you.
Would appreciate feedback. I want to make my girls as erotic as possible.
>>7903957Stiff torso, stiff and straight arm parts, no depth, no gesture. It looks like a lifeless doll posed to an unnatural pose. I have no idea what the red round blushes on top of her tits and shoulder are meant to represent
>>7903970Thanks, gonna try to improve in those areas.>I have no idea what the red round blushes on top of her tits and shoulder are meant to representI was just emulating ecchi anime from the 10's (might have gone overdone with it, tho)
>>7903677I really admire what you do, the incredible effort and passion you put into your stuff. Even when it's not for me, I'm always amazed by these elaborate pieces.
>>7904066Your art is more pleasing without the colours that said you should continue working on colours. Without colors the viewers imagination fills out a lot of work, but when you render suddenly you're in charge of everything.
>>7903486Pretty fuckin good. You a manga artist?>>7903672left boob being squished doesn't make much sense for doggy style, that shit would be flopped down swaying back and forth. but i understand you're hustling coom brains for money so whatever>>7903916hmmmmmm.. this has some soul to it.. curious to see where you go with this>>7903659>only with a small change in proportionsEverything on her is like 250% larger lol, is this supposed to be bait?Right side is certainly an improvement.
Is there anywhere I can follow you? Love this one since it features the CZN girls
Meant to reply to this one, is there anywhere I can follow you? Love this one since it features the CZN girls
>>7903486I can't believe I fucked up 2 times but this should be the right one. Is there anywhere I can follow you? Love this one since it features the CZN girls
>>7904413>>7904416>>7904419this guy is THIRSTY
Can't get my alma elma face to look like her...
>>7904245>You a manga artist?I wish... maybe someday>>7904419@rein1155
>>7904547very nice, very lewd.low res is also a plus.>alma elmarare based MGQ drop.>Can't get my alma elma face to look like herprob just need to emulate the original more closely.>her tattoos are light pink>her eyes are bigger, and do not have well defined pupils>her skin is palerOn a side note, work on hands and feet. but overall very nice.
She's a "shortstack" here so it's okay.This one's restriction was to stay locked into one zoom level the whole time. I think it worked out pretty well.
>>7905405Brainrot crap. Do better.
>>7905405I think you're at a point where you should start taking anatomy more seriously.A lot of this is just guess work, or what "feels right", or "looks believable enough".You obviously have good intuition regarding the female figure, but now you need to refine it with truth.I'm getting exhausted rewriting my critique and being meticulous, so I'm gonna condense it heavily in to caveman speak:>whole left arm bad. elbow rotated too much to side. hand orientation wrong.>centerline of back look like hump and useless light, this no good. >hair no 3d, just render slop>cranium much huge>practice hands, they no look good, think 3d>think more 3d>etc..>crude pic relate. gesture of more natural arm and notes
>>7906314>whole left arm bad. elbow rotated too much to side. hand orientation wrong.I would have kept it mostly the same anyway, just for the silhouette and the way mind imagine her really dragging/lifting that ass forward in a weird/awkward way, with elbow leading the movement. The elbow overlap angles are a bit off for it though. Your example is definitely the most natural way to draw the arm here.>hair no 3d, just render slopThe hair just mimics the official art in that area. I don't have much else to say about that.>cranium much hugeYes, but also as huge as I would still keep it even in hindsight.>practice hands, they no look good, think 3dI don't think they are perfect, but they look serviceable for the amount of effort, or lack of thereof (1h 9m from sketch to finished lineart).>centerline of back look like hump and useless light, this no good.This is where I agree with the most. Ironically, backs specifically are something I get lot of praise for, even though I still think they are a subject-in-progress. But yeah, it's questionable enough to raise some eyebrows.>think more 3dI don't really think much when I draw. I only see what my imagination tells me, as well as I can see it. If I had done more zooming out for extra comprehension, I probably would have adjusted things, but since the main purpose of this drawing was to see how well I can do with 100% locked in zoom for a great-value result, I'm very happy how it turned out in such a short stretch of time. Even if I were to somehow stay locked at my current quality level forever, I'd be satisfied if this is all the effort and time it takes.Thanks for the honest critique.
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>>7906421Aren't you like close to 40 now? A bit old to be using image boards aren't we now ojisan?
>>7906490why would anyone write something like that, that's so autistic
>>7906421You don't need to protect your ego. Just take in the valid critique and work on it.You have very appealing art. It's just time to bring it to the next level so it doesn't look like generic slop.
>>7905196Thanks for the suggestions, I'm too hung up on getting things to 'feel' right when I'm just trash at fundamentals anyway.>>7905405I wish I could get even half as decent as this at drawing poses and figuring out how to draw shortstacks...>>7906314I think the arm works better in the original compositionally because it shows off more of the body, not accurate but a lot more appealing.
>>7906516>I wish I could get even half as decent as this at drawing poses and figuring out how to draw shortstacks...Your art is unironically better than this.
>>7906533My art is flat, mediocre trash at best, I can only wish that I could actually draw what I want instead of fumbling out the most boring pose possible because I can't figure out how to do anything else.
>>7906593Then you're on the same level as that guy.
>>7906421fair enough.keep up the good work, anon.>>7906516>I think the arm works better in the original compositionally because it shows off more of the body, not accurate but a lot more appealing.The pose is actually fine and possible, it's just that for it to make sense and look good, so many other things need to change in relation.It's not an easy pose to draw for an arm because it's not particularly common and it's certainly not one used for gripping and lifting something, that's why I proposed a less awkward arm.but it is what it is. after all "there are no rules, only tools".
>>7907136Love your stuff in general. In this particular pic, I think you posed her left hand/arm too unnaturally.It comes across as you didn't know really what to do with it.I did a quick suggestion.As for the rest of the pic, I think everything works quite well, except for the butt being a bit too boney/squareish and her lower half is a tad too small (this is a recurring thing I noticed in your work).I also changed the orientation of the head just slightly in order to make her face less flat.I'm ntpicking like crazy btw.
>>7907197I'm writing like a monkey today.>It comes across as if you didn't really know what to do with it.>I made a quick sketch as a suggestion.
>>7907197thanks sempai
>>7907197damn anon you sure can draw
>>7907136ai sloppahand-drawing will become a miracle in the future
>>7903659what brushes do you use? is this csp? it seems like you copy mossa's style, or maybe you're the real one, maybe not.
Inb4 AI slop paranoids.
>>7907545kill yourself
>>7907751Care to elaborate on that, good sir and scholar?
>>7907545I drew her mouth way too low. Fixed.
>>7907784Too good, really cute face.
>>7906491Hi JADF I like to tease you unc, it's very fun
It’s been about a year since I’ve drawn anything. iPhone sketch, no reference.. Is there any point in continuing? I would need to draw every day for like 1-2 years to get anything serviceable but I’m wondering if I still have any spark at all.I need a ton of anatomy work but I would like to someday do some yaoi and smut or tattooing.
>>7908264>Is there any point in continuing?Yes.>I would need to draw every day for like 1-2 yearsTime doesn't really matter because you'll just be saying theexact same thing in 4 years anyway - having gotten nowhere.>serviceableAnd? That's just how it goes. If you're not good enough to flip theburgers then you stick to the register.>I’m wondering if I still have any spark at allObviously you do, otherwise you wouldn't have drawn and come here.>I need a ton of anatomyAnatomy is not as important as you think it is.It's the whipped cream with the cherry on top of your milkshake,but obviously you need to have a milkshake first.The single most important part of drawing is being able to break down a subject in to it's simplest three-dimensional components.I know how to draw a book because I know how to draw a rectangular prism.I know how to draw a snake because I know how to draw a tube.I know how to draw ass cheeks because I know how to draw two spheres side by side.etc.Practice this along with gesture and you're 90% complete.The remaining 10% is just garnish, albeit incredibly valuable garnish.
>>7908264dont second guess yourself and just do it!
Something something gravitating towards this stuff.
>>7903883Yes, I wanted to draw a tilted pose, but it doesn't feel as natural as I expected.Nice bobas, no a big fan of that nipple style.Btw, could advise me a way to draw big boobs concistenly?>>7904245>Everything on her is like 250% larger lol, is this supposed to be bait?kek, I mean. I was taking about line quality and the "blurry effect".>>7907520csp and krita.csp: the redmi pencil, square tecture brush. (I have changed parameters in both)Krita: Dry roller(Parameters changed)A like mossa's painting style. Yes, a reduction of his style.
>>7908264I am at 5 years, but I do much worse, so I guess you are doing fine.
>>7908652>Btw, could advise me a way to draw big boobs concistenly?It's not "how to draw X", it's "how to draw in general".And no, the answer is not to study everything. The answer is just to fix your process' problems that usually revolve around observation, precision and control, and not some pre-learned mumbojumbo that falls apart or looks out of place the second you draw something you haven't studied before.
>>7908264Is picrel yours? It's very appealing>>7908291Same broSame
Sup guys, been forever, looking for some smutty friends to evolve my art with if interested!
>>7908764Thank you, yes it’s mine. It’s been about a year, I need lots of reference work and actual time but it was cathartic to draw. Just on the iPhone app, I’m going to get my tablet out when I get back home. I love juicy femboy butts.
>>7908850Based and same.Hope to see more of your stuff in here.
>>7908838if you aren't averse to sharing canvas with prebeg...
>>7908902adorable. some small changes i would make. >>7908838too bad you are not drawing traps.
>>7909364>too bad you are not drawing traps.What a retarded thing to say jfc.
>>7909364Damn, some of those changes are pretty nice. Shows me what I need to work on.Thanks anon.
>>7909600>Shows me what I need to work on.You have to work on everything. What you lack the most is experience and mileage.
>>7909600np
trying to figure out pomni
>>7910225Pomni is so 2023, the new trend is jujutsu keaizen
>>7908963What is ”prebeg”?>>7909364I dont mind tarps, femboys, dick girls, but im infuriated by futa >>7910225Cute! I’m also working on some Pomni art
