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Welcome to /salt/, sexual energy recharged by spring edition.
Your general thread dedicated to sexual artworks ranging from simple pinups with exaggerated proportions, to explicit pornography. Please feel free to pick your best works in progress, or finished work, and post it here.

>General Rules & Guidelines
1. All forms of art styles are welcome; submit your work and receive feedback from others.
2. Please resize your images below 1000x1000 pixels before posting.
3. Don't be afraid to ask for an honest, constructive critique. Be specific on the type of help you need.
4. Share whatever knowledge you can. Please provide references whenever possible.
5. Remember all GB3 related content such as LOLICON, SHOTACON, FURRY and FURRY PORNOGRAPHY along with BESTIALITY are BANNED on ALL boards, including red boards— except for /b/ and /trash/. PLEASE DO NOT post that content here. Thanks.
6. DO NOT reply to Al bait posts. Report and hide, then let the janitors and moderators deal with the problem.

>Community Resources
>>>/ic/courses
>>>/ic/artbook
characterdesignreferences.com/character-anatomy

>NSFW image resources
pornpics.com
female-anatomy-for-artist.com
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some figures I did a few days ago
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>>7903486
Very cute. Is there a specific course you did on showing three-dimensionality with line alone?
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>>7903489
Thanks, I don't know of a course that focuses solely on lines, but one I recently watched and really liked is the Hide Channel figure/head courses on coloso.
To improve linework, I study manga/doujin pages
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>>7899190
Decided to color this one.
>>7899405
Why not? I even livestreamed the whole thing, though ultimately decided to scrap it for another Angels of Delusion drawing featuring her.
>>7903486
Berry nice.
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Why did it take so fucking long for you retards to put up the new thread someone posted a nude woman to beg/int thread since /salt/ wasn’t around and now I’m super triggered
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There is a LOT of nuance to sexual art that can take your piece from just a naked chick
with a dick in her mouth, to something TRULY sexy and appealing.
Facial expressions?
Heavy panting?
Sweating?
Spit?
Cum?
Drool?
How plush is the ass?
How plush are the breasts?
Make that plushness clear.
Any tattoos - and if so where are they located?
Are the fluids viscous and stringy or watery?
And so, so, so much more to consider..
Keep this in mind when drawing.
We want our art to radiate sexual energy so-to-speak, and being able to
clearly/believably communicate these sexual ideas is a sure way to reach that goal.
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>>7903632
And to get money. That's all I care about.
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>>7903589
because it looked too good to be an /ic/ poster's work.
I'd have sooner guessed an east asian pixiv deviant than that
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When it comes to my main fetishes, I usually only like images that I've created based on my own ideas. I dislike the vast majority of porn based on those fetishes.
Are there any other picky assholes like me here?
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>>7903433
I just redraw my own drawing with the same pencil and brushes, colors. Only with a small changue in proportions and they look so diferent, like diferent styles.
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>>7903652
yeah. the porn pic resources in OP disgust me. I find porn I like then screenshot parts of the vid, or find models and save their photos where they're wearing what I want or in a particular pose or whatever the fuck I need.
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I once did this.

A blank page that I installed a Cassandra into, doing something magical. The Something came out well enough to have Professor Milo admiring it, and their interactions grew around it, and the panels bounce around the negative spaces around their tableu, requiring the reader to follow a numbered trail. World Building through dialog, a duel of dares, a dance of ideals. And after doing this...
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I did this.

I never tried drawing an anthromorph nude before, and I decided to attempt it to educate myself. Getting her expression right was the goal, a dare with sociopolitical undertones, things that need explanation. The anthromorphs were slaves of humans until a long revolutionary war ended a decade ago, so there is a dynamic in play. In another story revolved around Spark Keepers, anthromorph girls given to young male aristocrats to set the Spark of Puberty alight, and sometimes the arrangement was sought by both, a way out of harsher duties for the slave girls, who were occasionally older than their human master and took advantage of the situation. So her smile suggests those implications of centuries of culture are in her mind as she spreads her invitation like playing cards at a poker showdown.
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>>7903433
why didnt my drawings make it to the banner do you hate me
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Had its own share of fuck ups with the shading but managed to mostly salvage it.

>>7903659
You might wanna consider her centerline, her body on the right is like a slightly leaning stack of body parts tilting to our left without anything to support her weight.
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Old gobo sketch
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>>7903840
We took a vote on the secret salt server and, yes, we hate you.
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Would appreciate feedback. I want to make my girls as erotic as possible.
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>>7903957
Stiff torso, stiff and straight arm parts, no depth, no gesture. It looks like a lifeless doll posed to an unnatural pose. I have no idea what the red round blushes on top of her tits and shoulder are meant to represent
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>>7903970
Thanks, gonna try to improve in those areas.
>I have no idea what the red round blushes on top of her tits and shoulder are meant to represent
I was just emulating ecchi anime from the 10's (might have gone overdone with it, tho)
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>>7903677
I really admire what you do, the incredible effort and passion you put into your stuff. Even when it's not for me, I'm always amazed by these elaborate pieces.
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>>7904066
Your art is more pleasing without the colours that said you should continue working on colours. Without colors the viewers imagination fills out a lot of work, but when you render suddenly you're in charge of everything.
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>>7903486
Pretty fuckin good. You a manga artist?

>>7903672
left boob being squished doesn't make much sense for doggy style, that shit would be flopped down swaying back and forth. but i understand you're hustling coom brains for money so whatever

>>7903916
hmmmmmm.. this has some soul to it.. curious to see where you go with this

>>7903659
>only with a small change in proportions
Everything on her is like 250% larger lol, is this supposed to be bait?
Right side is certainly an improvement.
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Is there anywhere I can follow you? Love this one since it features the CZN girls
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Meant to reply to this one, is there anywhere I can follow you? Love this one since it features the CZN girls
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>>7903486
I can't believe I fucked up 2 times but this should be the right one. Is there anywhere I can follow you? Love this one since it features the CZN girls
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>>7904413
>>7904416
>>7904419
this guy is THIRSTY
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Can't get my alma elma face to look like her...
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>>7904245
>You a manga artist?
I wish... maybe someday
>>7904419
@rein1155
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>>7904547
very nice, very lewd.
low res is also a plus.
>alma elma
rare based MGQ drop.
>Can't get my alma elma face to look like her
prob just need to emulate the original more closely.
>her tattoos are light pink
>her eyes are bigger, and do not have well defined pupils
>her skin is paler
On a side note, work on hands and feet. but overall very nice.
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She's a "shortstack" here so it's okay.

This one's restriction was to stay locked into one zoom level the whole time. I think it worked out pretty well.
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>>7905405
Brainrot crap. Do better.
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>>7905405
I think you're at a point where you should start taking anatomy more seriously.
A lot of this is just guess work, or what "feels right", or "looks believable enough".
You obviously have good intuition regarding the female figure, but now you need to refine it with truth.

I'm getting exhausted rewriting my critique and being meticulous, so I'm gonna condense it heavily in to caveman speak:

>whole left arm bad. elbow rotated too much to side. hand orientation wrong.
>centerline of back look like hump and useless light, this no good.
>hair no 3d, just render slop
>cranium much huge
>practice hands, they no look good, think 3d
>think more 3d
>etc..
>crude pic relate. gesture of more natural arm and notes
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>>7906314
>whole left arm bad. elbow rotated too much to side. hand orientation wrong.
I would have kept it mostly the same anyway, just for the silhouette and the way mind imagine her really dragging/lifting that ass forward in a weird/awkward way, with elbow leading the movement. The elbow overlap angles are a bit off for it though. Your example is definitely the most natural way to draw the arm here.
>hair no 3d, just render slop
The hair just mimics the official art in that area. I don't have much else to say about that.
>cranium much huge
Yes, but also as huge as I would still keep it even in hindsight.
>practice hands, they no look good, think 3d
I don't think they are perfect, but they look serviceable for the amount of effort, or lack of thereof (1h 9m from sketch to finished lineart).
>centerline of back look like hump and useless light, this no good.
This is where I agree with the most. Ironically, backs specifically are something I get lot of praise for, even though I still think they are a subject-in-progress. But yeah, it's questionable enough to raise some eyebrows.
>think more 3d
I don't really think much when I draw. I only see what my imagination tells me, as well as I can see it. If I had done more zooming out for extra comprehension, I probably would have adjusted things, but since the main purpose of this drawing was to see how well I can do with 100% locked in zoom for a great-value result, I'm very happy how it turned out in such a short stretch of time. Even if I were to somehow stay locked at my current quality level forever, I'd be satisfied if this is all the effort and time it takes.

Thanks for the honest critique.
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Doodle
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>>7906421
Aren't you like close to 40 now? A bit old to be using image boards aren't we now ojisan?
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>>7906490
why would anyone write something like that, that's so autistic
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>>7906421
You don't need to protect your ego. Just take in the valid critique and work on it.
You have very appealing art. It's just time to bring it to the next level so it doesn't look like generic slop.
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>>7905196
Thanks for the suggestions, I'm too hung up on getting things to 'feel' right when I'm just trash at fundamentals anyway.
>>7905405
I wish I could get even half as decent as this at drawing poses and figuring out how to draw shortstacks...
>>7906314
I think the arm works better in the original compositionally because it shows off more of the body, not accurate but a lot more appealing.
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>>7906516
>I wish I could get even half as decent as this at drawing poses and figuring out how to draw shortstacks...
Your art is unironically better than this.
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>>7906533
My art is flat, mediocre trash at best, I can only wish that I could actually draw what I want instead of fumbling out the most boring pose possible because I can't figure out how to do anything else.
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>>7906593
Then you're on the same level as that guy.
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>>7906421
fair enough.
keep up the good work, anon.

>>7906516
>I think the arm works better in the original compositionally because it shows off more of the body, not accurate but a lot more appealing.
The pose is actually fine and possible, it's just that for it to make sense and look good, so many other things need to change in relation.
It's not an easy pose to draw for an arm because it's not particularly common and it's certainly not one used for gripping and lifting something, that's why I proposed a less awkward arm.

but it is what it is. after all "there are no rules, only tools".
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>>7907136
Love your stuff in general. In this particular pic, I think you posed her left hand/arm too unnaturally.
It comes across as you didn't know really what to do with it.
I did a quick suggestion.
As for the rest of the pic, I think everything works quite well, except for the butt being a bit too boney/squareish and her lower half is a tad too small (this is a recurring thing I noticed in your work).
I also changed the orientation of the head just slightly in order to make her face less flat.
I'm ntpicking like crazy btw.
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>>7907197
I'm writing like a monkey today.

>It comes across as if you didn't really know what to do with it.
>I made a quick sketch as a suggestion.
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>>7907197
thanks sempai
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>>7907197
damn anon you sure can draw
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>>7907136
ai sloppa

hand-drawing will become a miracle in the future
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>>7903659
what brushes do you use? is this csp? it seems like you copy mossa's style, or maybe you're the real one, maybe not.
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Inb4 AI slop paranoids.
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>>7907545
kill yourself
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>>7907751
Care to elaborate on that, good sir and scholar?
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>>7907545
I drew her mouth way too low. Fixed.
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>>7907784
Too good, really cute face.
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>>7906491
Hi JADF
I like to tease you unc, it's very fun
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It’s been about a year since I’ve drawn anything. iPhone sketch, no reference..

Is there any point in continuing? I would need to draw every day for like 1-2 years to get anything serviceable but I’m wondering if I still have any spark at all.


I need a ton of anatomy work but I would like to someday do some yaoi and smut or tattooing.
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>>7908264
>Is there any point in continuing?
Yes.

>I would need to draw every day for like 1-2 years
Time doesn't really matter because you'll just be saying the
exact same thing in 4 years anyway - having gotten nowhere.

>serviceable
And? That's just how it goes. If you're not good enough to flip the
burgers then you stick to the register.

>I’m wondering if I still have any spark at all
Obviously you do, otherwise you wouldn't have drawn and come here.

>I need a ton of anatomy
Anatomy is not as important as you think it is.
It's the whipped cream with the cherry on top of your milkshake,
but obviously you need to have a milkshake first.
The single most important part of drawing is being able to break down a subject in to it's simplest three-dimensional components.
I know how to draw a book because I know how to draw a rectangular prism.
I know how to draw a snake because I know how to draw a tube.
I know how to draw ass cheeks because I know how to draw two spheres side by side.
etc.
Practice this along with gesture and you're 90% complete.
The remaining 10% is just garnish, albeit incredibly valuable garnish.
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>>7908264
dont second guess yourself and just do it!
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Something something gravitating towards this stuff.
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>>7903883
Yes, I wanted to draw a tilted pose, but it doesn't feel as natural as I expected.

Nice bobas, no a big fan of that nipple style.
Btw, could advise me a way to draw big boobs concistenly?

>>7904245
>Everything on her is like 250% larger lol, is this supposed to be bait?
kek, I mean. I was taking about line quality and the "blurry effect".

>>7907520
csp and krita.
csp: the redmi pencil, square tecture brush. (I have changed parameters in both)
Krita: Dry roller(Parameters changed)
A like mossa's painting style. Yes, a reduction of his style.
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>>7908264
I am at 5 years, but I do much worse, so I guess you are doing fine.
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>>7908652
>Btw, could advise me a way to draw big boobs concistenly?
It's not "how to draw X", it's "how to draw in general".
And no, the answer is not to study everything. The answer is just to fix your process' problems that usually revolve around observation, precision and control, and not some pre-learned mumbojumbo that falls apart or looks out of place the second you draw something you haven't studied before.
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>>7908264
Is picrel yours? It's very appealing

>>7908291
Same bro
Same
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Sup guys, been forever, looking for some smutty friends to evolve my art with if interested!
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>>7908764
Thank you, yes it’s mine. It’s been about a year, I need lots of reference work and actual time but it was cathartic to draw. Just on the iPhone app, I’m going to get my tablet out when I get back home. I love juicy femboy butts.
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>>7908850
Based and same.

Hope to see more of your stuff in here.
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>>7908838
if you aren't averse to sharing canvas with prebeg...
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>>7908902
adorable. some small changes i would make.
>>7908838
too bad you are not drawing traps.
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>>7909364
>too bad you are not drawing traps.
What a retarded thing to say jfc.
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>>7909364
Damn, some of those changes are pretty nice. Shows me what I need to work on.

Thanks anon.
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>>7909600
>Shows me what I need to work on.
You have to work on everything. What you lack the most is experience and mileage.
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>>7909600
np
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trying to figure out pomni
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>>7910225
Pomni is so 2023, the new trend is jujutsu keaizen
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>>7908963
What is ”prebeg”?

>>7909364
I dont mind tarps, femboys, dick girls, but im infuriated by futa

>>7910225
Cute! I’m also working on some Pomni art
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>>7910523
>What is ”prebeg”?
pre-beginner, can't draw my own things
I copy things and do exercises
tho end goal is same as yours
>infuriated by futa
why tho?
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>>7910369
Juju Kai-Kai has been dead since 2024 bud.
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>>7910551
It’s an abomination is the eyes of god, it has no human warmth, it’s just a lump of meat shaped for gooning, can’t relate to it, and it tends to replace characters i might actually find interesting. It’s the most mindless goon slop imo… a being purely constructed for porn… ofc tentacle monsters are too, but allenast they dont pretend to be more than that… i think futa is just very boring for the flame gaze maybe
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delivery for /aco/
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>>7910316
very esthetic lines and colors.
>>7910561
are you a woman?
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>>7910586
Good stuff! Is that Alpha lock on the lines? Just learnt about Alpha lock today!

>>7910588
>are you a woman?
Yessir
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>>7910603
So what's it for you in *that* kind of smutty things you're drawing?
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>>7910606
I mean I'd completely understand without extra questions if a male drew this
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>>7910606
Huh?
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>>7910561
>It’s an abomination is the eyes of god
Imagine being this retarded.
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>>7910603
It's a transparency lock in a way, yes. But I find it's less destructive to use a clipping mask on the lineart layer instead. Nice art btw, i sent you a follow (OtakuMindy)
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>>7910560
What about Fruit Love Island?
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>>7910627
what?
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>>7910629
Ah, sweet! Thank you for the follow, followed you back! I think you really deserve a bigger audience, you art is great! :O
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>>7910586
some small things i would have done different:
slight deviation of the lower arm from an orthograde view
stronger ass cheek compression
a bit more volume to the upper body.
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>>7908902
May I ask how people get so clean with the lines? Is it just a paper over another with a light below, or people can just do this?
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>>7910715
I used an eraser

>>7909856
My King

>>7910586
Nice

>>7910561
I also dislike futa. Just doesn't do anything for me.
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>>7910628
It is though, but so is all porn.
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>>7910852
it should be "fan17", not "fun17"
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>>7910834
I was referring to retrds that believe in fairytales.
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This is a shitpost.
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>>7910852
Wow, this looks great!
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>>7911038
I really like your style, blog?
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>>7911088
not much there at the moment, my account got blasted the other day.
https://x.com/notRulean
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>>7911279
How'd you get your followers back?
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>>7911312
I've only got like a 10th of them back but I just posted mentioning my account got bonked and asking people to retweet, a few friends did and it popped off from there.
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>>7911038
Asanagi style. Bleh.
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request from /h/, critiques are welcome.
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>>7911338
Dick feels detached from the man's body. I don't think that he should have so fat pubes that her pinky isn't visible because of this.
Explain how her sleeve on the left side wraps around his thigh?
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Anyone got any sexy references of tight dresses bunching up around the pelvic, breast and hip regions?
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>>7911353
thanks
>Dick feels detached from the man's body.
fair point

>I don't think that he should have so fat pubes that her pinky isn't visible because of this.
All the references I found of flesh or silicone toys easily hide the pinky and ring finger.
I liked how it looked, maybe softening that edge so it doesn’t break as sharply.

>Explain how her sleeve on the left side wraps around his thigh?
fair point
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>>7911338
looks like ai trace, you have absolutely no control over your linework. 0 line confidence
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>>7911374
Fair enough, any particular area where that stands out to you?
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>>7911356
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>>7911368
Why do you need a reference for this? Can't you check it by yourself?
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>>7910316
another attempt
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Got called names for this one before , desu, theres not enough size stuff..
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>>7911392
im so bad at drawing boobs I should stick to femboys
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>>7911385
Thanks. You got anything from a bottom-up perspective. Maybe something tighter? I literally cannot comprehend what the folds should look like.
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>>7911338
Looks like an anime screenshot. I like the background.
>>7911389
Female?
>>7911467
Yes, because there's nothing sexy about being crushed to death. I know alot of size people and they're sick and demented. I know people in real life. My mechanic saw a mouse on my front yard and crushed it with his boot. I was like "what the fuck is wrong with you, there's blood and guts all over the pavement now". Ever since then I started doing repairs myself.
Please seek some help and learn about normal human sexuality. Sexuality = pleasure.
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>>7911594
>Yes, because there's nothing sexy about being crushed to death.
Speak for yourself...
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>>7910561
BASED AND TRVE.
The same is true of dickgirls if you define them seperate than futa tho
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>>7911468
>I should stick to drawing femboys
Yes.
For my pleasure.

Those boobs aren't bad tho.
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Boobs are evil.
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>>7903486
new set of figures
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>>7911838
I really like the way you draw faces and clothing details but you ought to work on the proportions and foreshortening of your limbs. That girl has long ass orangutan arms with stubby crab rangoons for legs.
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>>7911906
Stop blocking people. It lowers their Tweepcred score.
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>>7912267
I only block schizos that crab sperg me on my twiiter comments section
Until today, you were the only one who was Snowv
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>>7910316
>>7910523
I like these
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>>7910852
>>7912364
Need blog
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guys I desperately need gooner advice, how do I make hotter art? what could I change here to make it more gooner?
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>>7912521
your drawing skill does not match the intricate pose. you propably used a reference. post the reference picture and we might be able to help.
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>>7912521
looks good to me as a rough pass. if you wanna make it coomer-grade, make it a sensory overload hazard. add onomatopoeia, motion lines, make it alive

my own little gripe with this drawing -- if you're drawing characters, use their characteristics to your advantage. you could swap juri and cammy with nondescript OCs and it wouldn't make much difference. juri is a psycho, whould she have that expression, that body language?
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>>7912521
I'm a huge whore for sweat, more expressive facial expressions, cleaner rendering.
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>>7912521
you could use points of contact to squish or pull the tissue.
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I think I bit off more than I can chew with this.

He's meant to be rubbing his dick against a small enchanted theatre mask he uses as a cod piece.

It spends the day mocking him and he's trying to insert dominance but it's scathing remarks and the lewd faces it makes makes him cum.

These hands are fucking me up so bad bros. .
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>>7913758
Why does it have to be a transgender thing? Why not draw a sexy girl?

Why is the mask enchanted?
Why use it as a codpiece if he can just purchase a new one?
Why doesn't he fart on the mask to assert his own dominance?
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>>7913758
Proof that autism in art isn't always a good thing.
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>>7913758
Idgi. Why did this drawing trigger such a negative reaction?
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Trying out a new art style, looking for suggestions on what should be improved.
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>>7913758
I need to get better at expressions and atylizing/simplifying them.

All in all this was much funner to draw.

>>7914264
People just wanting to bump the thread? Idk.

>>7914412
Really like the overall designs and general style.

I don't think those pauldron/shoulder guards work with the rest of that fighters gear. Just too stylistically different to the rest.

The sorceress/mages design is fucking sick tho.

>>7914277
Hot
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>>7911467
Funnily enough, the idea of crushing animals, sickens me desu.. I won't act like im normal for this, but

To many people post weird drawing of children here for me to be taking shit from anyone over this ..

Pearl clutching faggot
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>>7911594
Whoops
>>7914475
This was for you
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>>7914478
>>7914475
It's the truth. Many teens aren't taught about normal human sexuality because their religious groups and parents don't think it's important.
So usually young adults develop these squishing fetishes from the media that they watch. And cartoons normalizes violence and body transformations from a young age onwards.
>>7911596
The first reply that I got proves my point with a literal screenshot from the amimated television seriously "Futurama" (season 3, episode 5) from the year 2001.
That anon could've chose any sexy crushing bitch to post as a reply but he didn't. He defaulted to the cartoon that popularized it...

Lastly to end this, the list of fetishes that come with crushing are, Giantess, TF transformations. Vore, and farting.
All things that don't relate to act of sex. Prove me wrong.
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>>7914412
how is the overall body shape and face? drew the same character in some more costumes today.
kinda just practicing redrawing the same character multiple times and having it look like the same person.
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>>7915053
meant for >>7914444
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>>7915053
Overall I like it. She has the face of a complete gremlin and stylistically I like the way her legs are thicc all the way down. Including ankles.

Honestly I had assumed you drew the nude body once and then just drew different outfits over the top.
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>>7915726
I used to do that but it ended up hurting my progress in the long run. I still do it for some things but for the most part I try to redraw it just for the practice, even if nothing changed with the pose.
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>>7911338
You might wanna check up on your values and color balance. Maybe the monitor settings aren't sitting quite right or maybe you just didn't notice.
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>>7916453
Adding to this.
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>>7916454
Not him but thanks.
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What she said.
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>>7916529
giwtwm
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>>7916453
>>7916454

Thank you, anon. It's a combination of not having much experience with color balance and compositing. What I did was play with the luminescence using an orange overlay, but while I liked the end result, it looked a little washed out, and I didn't know where to go from there.

Do you recommend any resources to learn more about color balance?

Regarding the monitor issue, what's your workflow? Do you check your work on multiple screens, or only on the one you're working on?
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>>7916572
>Do you recommend any resources to learn more about color balance?
>Regarding the monitor issue, what's your workflow?
I just have 5 monitors and tediously compared them until I could not get them compare more accurately. I'm sure there are better ways to achieve color accuracy, but that's what I did.
>not having much experience with color balance and compositing
To be honest, I'm still working on that myself, which is part of why I took interest in the subject. However, if you find yourself with results that lean too bright, I recommend starting off with a darker background. I recommend using 50-58% brightness grey background while you work on the WIP, 55% would be optimal, unless you've got something specific in mind.
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>>7916586
Well, thank you for your valuable input. I will do my homework on this as well. If you ever create a thread about your findings, I will happily participate in it.
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Been drawing a lot of nsfw stuff lately but I’m so intimidated by the idea of starting an account for some reason? Any other artists want to recommend platforms to post nsfw on? What are some general rules to follow on all platforms to avoid being deactivated?

>>7912861
Best redline I’ve ever seen holy
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>>7916654
Twitter. Avoid Insta and FB because they're gay.

Always mark your account as NSFW. Verify your account but that's optional. Don’t use too many cuss words in your posts, they can reduce your reach.

Post fully rendered art at least once a week. Don't post too many shitty scribbles cuz people don't really care for those.
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>>7916529
Work on proportions and maybe try to be less derivative with your stylization.
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>>7916654
Post on X/twitter.
Post your art for free, receive zero retweets from me and get ignored by your fellow artists.

have fun!
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>>7916683
Seems like a (you) problem. Skill issue?
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>>7916695
It's not a skill issue, it's unironically just a X/twitter problem. Because i just released a successful project.
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>>7916529
>>7916682
Yeah, make her tits bigger and thighs thicker
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>>7916707
Why do I get likes and retweets and don't get ignored by fellow artists on xitter then?
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>>7916787
>Why do I get likes and retweets and don't get ignored by fellow artists on xitter then?.

Because
1. You're already popular.
2. You're small and in a small bubble.
3. You're a small hamster chasing free likes in the hopes of finding magic water.

Ok?
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>>7916787
>>7916529
Because you're Joint Arms Defense Force. Stop wasting my time nigga.
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>>7916837
>>7916842
>bs excuses in order to excuse my own shortcomings
clockwork
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>>7916897
Platform limitations can't just all be my own shortcomings? Right?

And what? Just draw and pray for that 0.002% chance that some popular person reposts my picture that caters to his hyper obscure fetish. At the 5% chance that he discovers it that same evening?
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>>7916787
>>7916529
>>7916454
Share some insights. Have you've been drawing and posting before 2022? I dare you to start a fresh new account without cross posting yourself.
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ermm rendering critique???
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>>7916943
Here's some "insight":
Drawing is less than 10% of your success on social media.
You have to behave like a literal sociopath to make numbers and you could get away with drawing like a beg.
Most of the nsfw audience is autistic hence they can't even fathom you're playing them or they're on the same grift anyway and won't call you out.. until you make the tiniest slip up like doing something they can twist into something that can be mental gymnastic'ed into being "wrongthink" then they're going to get your ass.

Best advice i can give you; Stop giving a shit about social media, it's dead and full of bots anyway and once it dies for good, even the current psychos who use their schizophrenic digital numbers as social currency will kill themselves.
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>>7916897
>>7916842
I guess I'll have to use trip for my future posts since people love to roleplay as me for some malicious reason.
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>>7917055
>just don't be an artist, wait for the new world
Sasuga, that truly was some "insight". You touch on bots in your own post yet you don't realize that as an artist you can also out source the grifting to AI. If an artist doesn't have the chops to make proper commercial work, their only viable option is social media.
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>>7917063
thank you, chatpgt
unplug yourself
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>>7917070
how dare he use punctuation nyoooo
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>>7917081
saar, please redeem the sui and side
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>>7916668
>Drop render
>1k likes
>Drop ship post scribble
>10k likes
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>>7916912
>And what? Just draw and pray for that 0.002% chance that some popular person reposts my picture that caters to his hyper obscure fetish. At the 5% chance that he discovers it that same evening?
Yes.
But let me get you on a little secret. Those percentages increase exponentially based on how good your art is and/or the subjects you draw.
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How do you get permission to draw sinful, disgusting things like this? I drew boobs once in school and got into a lot of trouble for it.
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>>7916943
>Have you've been drawing and posting before 2022?
Yes.
>I dare you to start a fresh new account without cross posting yourself.
I've considered starting my social media NewGame+ for many times, but alas, I decreed it was not worth properly *chasing* after it.
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>>7917172
you become an adult, and while you're at it realize there's no such thing as sin.
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Thanks for the insight.
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>>7917115
I rather waste my time at the casino desu.
I'd have better luck.
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>>7917238
Uniconically a loser's mentality.
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>>7916950
Errmmm this is barely rendered. Add some rim light/glow or some shit. Also I hate your feet because they're fucking massive and not cute at all.
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>>7916654
My accounts are DeviantArt, Pixiv, Twitter, Instagram, NewGrounds and Tumblr. That's also the order from The most interaction to the least interaction.

For DeviantArt, you can't post sexualized underage characters or even aged up characters UNLESS they are behind paid gallery. You can't post involuntary sex either UNLESS it's behind paid gallery.

For Pixiv you need to censor genitalia, simple black box or mosaic is enough. You can have a link in your bio that leads to non-censored works but you CAN NOT advertise it by saying "See the uncensored version here". Just list your lenient sites and DO NOT say anything about uncensored. The viewers know why you list those other sites, you don't need to say it out loud.

For NewGrounds anything goes, you just need to to tag it mature correctly.

You should also make yourself an E-Hentai gallery where you post all uncensored and no-no works and just link it in your bio for people looking for uncensored and no-no versions.
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>>7917689
>>7917689
>Instagram


boobs are illegal on insta
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>>7917972
Covered boobs are fine. Sexual art doesn't automatically mean nudity.
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>>7903433
Werewolves probably fall under furry don't they?
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>>7918038
Werewolf on human is A ok
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>>7916950

Pick a light source and stick to it like glue.
From what I can tell the light source is directly above - the shadow under her
body being the biggest tell - so shade relative to that.

Make your shadows darker, doesn't need to be a ridiculous amount;
I should be able to know what's a shadow and what's not immediately from a glance.
A good rule of thumb is if the shading doesn't make sense when the
shadows are black, then something's wrong.

There's no need for that highlight on the back leg, it's in an area receiving no light.

A tiara is shiny, it could use a highlight or two.

The hair needs shadows on it's undersides as well, not just the figure.

You should probably commit to shading the underside of the front leg as well since
that area is receiving no light relative to the light source.
Yes I could see how it would not need shading - but again, establishing your light source better
will mitigate ambiguous interpretations.

That ankle bone is jutting out, yes?
Which means it needs shading under it because it's keeping light from getting to that area.
Just like you did with the knee cap.

Where her left wrist meets the glove there needs to be shading because the cuff of the glove
is shielding light from that area.

etc.........................

You are not outlining, you are not drawing a silhouette, you are drawing a three-dimensional
subject occupying a three-dimensional space with a three dimensional light source.
Keep this in mind at all times with every single thing you draw.
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>>7916950
Your stuff is great, though your figs seems to lack "purpose". I want to see something sexy or weird.
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>>7917344
>Add some rim light/glow or some shit
dunno how to do that. I think big hands/feet look cute in a silly way
>>7918331
ah sounds so easy! thanks, I have put darker colors where I think the shapes would be in shadow, and added highlights with lighter colors, but the rendering still looks ass...
>>7918344
eeh more complex stuff would take more time which isn't worth it when I'm unsatisfied with my stuff
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>>7919312
What type of rendering are you trying to achieve?
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>>7919312
This is perfect.
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>>7919312

>rendering still looks ass

You say that as if all of the modifications you've just made - which greatly improved your work - aren't already part of the rendering process.
You opted for a hard cel-shaded style drawing with a very simplistic subject and environment, so there isn't much to render in the first place. The rendering isn't "ass", it's just simple.

Beyond the bare fundamentals of rendering which are just your base colors and lighting/shading, you get in to a realm where your tastes as an artist have to take over.
This is probably why you feel like something is "missing" - the work is fundamentally sound but doesn't have anything to make it truly "yours".

You could add more highlights in other lit areas if you want her to look shinier or oiled up.
You could change your shadows to be hatched lines instead.
You could opt for more of a stencil shading look with hard black shadows.
You could soften the edges between lit areas and shaded areas - having a gradient of light to dark instead of the 100% hard cel-shaded approach.
You could play with the colors more; make your shaded areas a different hue from the lit areas. This is one place where color theory starts to rear it's menacing head.
You could play with the color of the outlines.
You could have shadows within your shadows. It's not a rule to use only one level of brightness for shadows unless you yourself stipulate it.
You could mix and match one or more of these options.
You could ...
So on and so forth to infinity.

Rendering is about establishing the fundamentals of light first (color, shadows, highlights, and reflections are all light-related phenomena), and secondly pushing the envelope of what that light is communicating in creative ways.

There are no rules, only tools.
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>>7911906
more figures
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>>7919590
I'm not reading all that shit
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>>7919738
Bottom left. Are those supposed to be her arms crossed on her stomach? Are you kidding?
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Drawing the face over the shoulder is challenging. But less mistakes then before.
>>7919738
I request that you unblock my account. Or at-least unblocked my sfw account because that's just racist and discrimination towards my artwork. Otherwise you won't be able to see my game updates.
>>7919312
Use the anime 1-3 shading technique. Rim lights?
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>>7919855
>game
link?
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>>7919863
I'm sorry Anon, i can't share or else i risk getting blocked again. When this happens, this creates dirty data that indicates to the website that people aren't interested. The website will naturally find people are interested without external small traffic.
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people "that"


Anyways. what's a cute/cool/mature hairstyle?
wrong thread... eh fuck it.
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>>7919869
>that bg
>probably RPGMaker or Wolf
I know your kind.
I know what you are.
You're most definitely gooned out to the max.
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>>7919923
>>7919923
>RPGMaker.

Cute picture, but no, it's a dance dance revolution game in disguise. And maybe more if i improve, I must; I have to defeat all of my rivals or else I won't be happy. Tfw some1 insults you, then they completely forget you years later.
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>I must; I have to defeat all of my rivals or else I won't be happy
kek, bro lives in an anime
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>>7920052
Bro is just autistic.
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>>7920390
Bro, Not everything has to be autistic like you and Chris chan. Post your work and prove me wrong.

Do it coward.
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>>7920438
if somebody has good art it doesn't mean they can't be autistic, you absolute lowiqlet.
if anything being pedantic about one's hobby could be a sign of autism.
here's my art
>>7907784
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>>7920442
Cool, nice work. Still doesn’t change what I said though.

>Not everything has to be autistic like you and Chris chan.
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>>7920438
>Post your work and prove me wrong.
>posts work, mogs, doesn't change his stance because assblasted
you weren't right to begin with.
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>>7903486
Who is the character on the left
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>>7920553
KEK
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>>7920553
I said nice work, What more do you want?

I took a neutral stance because anybody can go
"hmm yes, This is my work"
>>7916453

nobodies getting assblasted over anime girl on white canvas.
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>>7919985
>>7919869
>>7919855
fuck... I need...
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>>7920438
Chris is literally like, half retarded and is incapable of improving his art.
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>>7920595
>>7920596
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>>7920052
Nah anon isn't bro. He's certified UNC status and older than everyone else in the thread fr fr
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>>7920596
>What more do you want?
I was joking, but it seems you really do have autism jfc.
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>>7919331
something that would fit the linework and shapes I'm currently able to draw
>>7919590
thanks. it's rather that I'm looking for practical guidance. you've told me a lot of what I could do, but I've no idea how to apply it with the tools I have. what brush would be best to draw a highlight on her right upper thigh, and should it even be there? what kind of shape should the highlight be? what layer should I put the highlight on? what color should it be? would the hightlight fit the style of the overall drawing? etc. etc.
these are the kinds of questions that fill my head when I try to approach the matter

now, I understand that it's all about EXPERIMENTING and FIGURING IT OUT MYSELF, which I read as 'mashing my head against the wall ad infinitum'
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>>7921203
>>7921203 #
What drawing software do you use?
I can share my brushes with you if you have a discord or email.
I'm still
experimenting but I use
All normal layers with the stroke brush.
Stroke brush gets soft or sharp depending on how hard I press.
Soft or sharp pen for highlights.
Then airbrush for blush or lights set to soft light.
I only use multiply for specific things like water or something that effects an objects look like a wet t-shirt or sunglasses.
>>7919869 #
>>7919870 #
It looks like you already have good values. Applying color should be easy if you already know about what color space to use.
>>7916454 #
A little bit like what this anon was explaining. The colors aren't balanced but he's showing Red,Blue,Green. That seems confusing. There's a simpler way, just convert your picture to black and white and see if it reads well. Color harmony, when a particular color isn't overpowering the other colors I guess. Unless you want it to for like artsy fartsy stuff like tri colors. Or certain moods for vibrant colors or dull colors.
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>>7921203
>dryhumping big titty tomboy with sportshorts
this guy just fucking gets it
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>>7921203
look at how I'm actively ruining the sketch with line and color
>>7921259
I'm a drawpilechud. I tried asking around in the drawpile general in the past but they're not a talkative bunch
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It's an unspoken rule that artists don't talk. They express their ideas with pictures.
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>>7921704
That's gay and autistic.
I'll be your ass.
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>>7921704
is this your way of saying "we're gonna gatekeep"
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>>7921827
>>7921827
>>7921827
>>7921827
how long did this take
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>>7921203
>>7921681
You're way too hard on yourself man. I think it looks great.
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>>7921203
>it's all about EXPERIMENTING and FIGURING IT OUT MYSELF
Precisely
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>>7912521
>>7912647
>>7912659
>>7912766
>>7912861
thanks for all the advice guys, I'm trying my hand at "normal" rendering now, opinions?
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>>7922276
Now this is erotic, good stuff
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>>7922276
Venus mound looks deformed. Pussies usually don't protrude outside like that.
Her upper arm is too long. You should move the elbow closer to her body.
Really like everything else.
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>>7921888
that piece took me like 13-maybe 14 hours, i did it in bursts so i'm not actually sure
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>>7903433
oh hell yeah, can't believe my work got featured. Just finished it recently, happy with the result
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>>7921203
I think you should work on your sketching and perspective drawing. A lot of the forms and proportions like the bend in the dude's neck and the excessive anime sidemouth. I also think you're over relying on the high stabilization in Drawpile
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>>7923004
high quality crab comment
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>>7923017
If you disagree with me feel free to point out where I'm wrong. I think his work stands out due to the shape design and gesture but a lot of his forms and perspective is very clearly off
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>>7922990
This aint 2009 DeviantArt. Some retard crab quickly cropped your shit so they could be the first to post the new one. It don't mean shit.

With that said, nice art I guess. But it feels a little unfinished if im honest. There's a clear line between "this isn't in focus so I don't need to render it" vs "I hate rendering hands but the face and shoulders are half decent so maybe I'll get away with it".
Its nice to look at in a lot of ways and im defintiely projecting because I used to paint like this too. Haven't seen enough of your work to give worthwhile critique, so post more.
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>>7923030
Your “suggestions” are going to kill the appeal of his work, hence your crab title.
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>>7923004
retard
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>>7923037
>>7923056
Nevermind. I forgot this place has people who don't draw and doesn't actually want to improve
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>>7923067
alright, mr perspective, whatever helps you sleep
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>>7923071
what a fucking child jfc
genz beglets truly are insufferable
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>>7923031
I mean, im just happy its on the banner lol

and yeah you got me there. Its one of the main flaws I'm facing and shows up on my other artworks too. Before id spend weeks on one single piece, over detailing it without the whole looking that much better (skill issue) Since then Id try to put a limit if I feel like I'm burning out on a piece, though in this case maybe I overcorrected. I'm content with it, but ofc there's always room for improvement, in a month or so I can give the piece another pass and just refine areas I didn't feel like doing beforehand.

Also nice painting
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>>7923111
just do sketches instead of jumping directly into painting
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Been practicing with some recent advice and it definitely made an improvement. Any critique is appreciated.
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>>7911650
More baraslop
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>>7923111
Go at your own pace, but if I had to guess at why you're taking months, I'd bet one of the big reasons is that you're too impatient to draw lines or refine the sketch and just wanna render skin. The shoulder strikes me as the best part of this, but it's like your putting half learned skills into practice but you're not applying the same theory elsewhere.
The shoulder and skin demonstrate really nice value blocking, but the hair is complete mulch with no shape or value control at all. Same goes for pretty much everything else.
Looking at your first sketch, It's clear that you're playing a guessing game and chopping/changing as you go. Thats a hellish way to paint, it's understandable that you'd burn out. Little changes are fine, but fully changing the face and tits shows you lacked control and maybe didn't understand what made the sketch good (subjectively speaking). You fucked the boobs up because you didn't keep the shapes you started out with (the curve of the on the left was very important and you covered it with shitly-rendered fabric????).

If you want speed with a cleaner result, you need to plan better, not cut out key steps. Spend at least triple the amount of time you did here solidifying the sketch and do thumbnails for color and value. Take hours, and don't change it so much while rendering.
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>>7923247
The pose makes no sense = AI
Fuck off, retard.
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>>7919738
dat ass (where she is standing) and soft saggy breasts... WOULD!
and really like you sketch style
but
on the bottom left that's not how crossed arms work (unless her left arm is literally broken). Also her ass could be more "puddle-like" in the area of contact
Ass on two right pics feels strange, but I can't pinpoint why exactly

>>7919869
so cute and breedable expression
>>7919985
u should make it a faphero game

>>7921203
sexo! 2komas are fun
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>>7923260
When id initially got into digital yeah months was pretty normal, now the worst if I'm really taking too long is a week, but focused I usually work through in 4-8 hrs. Burnout now usually comes if I'm working on the same piece for days and something isn't clicking.

This specific sketch was a quick drawing I made months ago with no intention to render, I left in the back burner until I got interested in it again, and the work afterwards was about 6 hrs.

Everything you said was pretty on point, I made changes to make it to my liking and make a bit more SFW (without the cum) on different sites, without considering the whole and realizing what I was doing, it was a whole lot of chop/changes on the fly since I did not have a plan when I initially started it. These are good points, and I intend to internalize them on the next painting I start.
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>>7923301
>but focused I usually work through in 4-8 hrs
wanna laugh? >>7923048 look at time spent just to copy
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>>7923260
Following up, took about 40 min and tried revising where i could. Not perfect, but I think the change is good. The only thing I don't know how to wrangle is the hair, im not sure how I would go about retouching it, but if anyone wants to jump in and highlight what i could do i'd appreciate it.

I'm ok with the face, I personally like it better than the original sketch. Anyway I appreciate the constructive feedback
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>>7923421
polished turd/10
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>>7923421
Nice, only seeing one side of the knot on a non dog cock makes it look a bit tumorous though.
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>>7923410
Gave it a go. Its been a while since I've done render like this. Tiring.

I guess I didn't mention edge work before, but your 40 minutes made this 20x better than it was. Good stuff. With the hair, its the same thing, you probably just need more crisp edges. My current style is a bit more graphical, so it doesnt really fit your skin rendering, but add those edges and you can fix that mess quite easy.
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>>7923525
dammmnnnn! this is going to help a lot, I can see now where my shape/values where completely lacking. Sincerest thanks, i'll have to revise it again when i get the chance!
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>>7923533
Timelapse if it helps also
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comic I drew just now
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>>7923525
rtx off/rtx on
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>>7923260
>>7923525
thanks for the feedback yall, im very happy where the painting is now
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MILF sketches
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>>7923421
What resolution do you draw at?
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>>7923712
Another 15 min pass, hair looks better now. I will come back with different paintings in the future.
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>>7923809
From: (<3000)px x 3000
to: 4340px x 3000px
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>>7923871
do you have any socials?
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Stop gooning.
Flee from lust.
Restore your soul and repent, brothers.
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>>7925129
It is merely a symptom of our capitalist society where wealth continue concentrate at hand of a few and workers are forced to work more and more for less pay. To the point where they dont have the time to form meaningful relationships nor the resources to form families and responsibily raise children. So the worker and their shit lives barely above water must resort to cheap entertainments that gives them the buggest dopamine hit without resorting to drugs. If you wish to address the vices of proletariats, start by dealing with unchecked greed at the top
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Porn is pretty much the main carrier of your "capitalistic" society.
I like tits like any other but you won't get me to lie about numbers.
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Today's turd.
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>>7925388
at least it's polished
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>>7923339
crazy how much hotter the lamp is than the actual focus of the image
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>>7925388
Hi JADF! Big fan since 2008 :-)
Almost 20 years now, huh?
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Going to have to actually take the time to learn hands.
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>>7923871

is it intentional that these look like men?
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>>7923004
is "work on your X" supposed to help mel? I mean, I already know that I gotta improve lol. anatomy and perspective is something I at least know how to study, I'm having issues with color
the problem that often comes up when I'm drawing is
>if I draw this 'correctly', it's gonna weaken the silhouette, or will make the parts I wanna emphasize less visible, etc.
I disagree with the mouth / neck critique though, the guy I wanted to draw in an exaggerated 'dumb-pleasured' way, like he's sticking his neck all the way forward haha
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>>7925834
delicious
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>>7925849
i was wondering the same thing. looks like he's using himself as a ref or has little to no understanding of a female skull.
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>>7903433
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>>7923133
cute Rossi. As for advice, I'd say watch your shading. In some places it feels like you went for a more hard style, while others, especially lower leg/feet, just feel soft, or worse, muddy.
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>>7903433
What do you have to do to have your art put in the OP?
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>>7926897
Just post it. I've gotten my art into OP few times
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>>7925849
nope, and i don't base it on myself either. hate to lie and say i wouldn't touch it again but did revise it again. I will make more paintings of her so i wanted her face to be more consistent. can't say i fixed it completely but i like the change, hopefully this addresses the issue you brought up.
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>>7926899
ive been posting here for months.
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>>7926907
Git gud
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>>7926912
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>>7926915
Practice thumbnailing. Interesting concept is more likely picked
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>>7926918
practice my dick in your ass
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>>7926926
Which pic is yours?
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>>7926897
Become the OP and make the next collage.
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>>7926729
Thanks, i'll keep that in mind. The original intention was to try and guide the eye away from them and keep the focus on the upper body but it does just look messy yeah.
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>>7926907
you've posted no art in this thread though, nodrawbro
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>>7926957
Not true at all faggot
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>>7926953
You can still achieve that, but the secret is to simply have less value variation between light and dark, while keeping the same shading style.
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>>7926897
Why do you care? You don't get rewarded cash money for being in the OP.
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>>7927041
He wants to feel he belongs (he doesn't)
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>>7927074
>>7927041
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>>7925388
Never thought id see you in these threads
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>>7918332
uhhhh i tried doing this again and I think there was some improvement in the overall pose and proportions
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>>7928142
wait a minute, this character was a women??? reee. This second version is much nicer simply because of the awful rendering job on the other one.
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I've never really explored /ic before, but maybe I should? Anyway, some stuff I drew yesterday.
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>>7928374
>wait a minute, this character was a women
yes, sorry to burst your bubble anon but no femboys are getting pounded by giant ogres here
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>>7928381
based racist feet enthusiast
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>>7928381
please post more. do you have any gallerys?
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>>7928662
whoops i'm retarded, thank you for including a signature in your stuff lol
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>>7928969
I wanna make love to your lines.
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Had a vision so I captured it.
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Hey guys, new to here, i posted this to /beg/ but i didn't get a response within ~2 hours, i dont know how long it takes so just in case, im posting it here. I need some help with this one. All of the construction lines i used are still there, apart from a few ones that werent really necessary that stood out. I have a thoughts:
I don't know how to draw nostrils without them looking really ugly,
I don't know how to draw pupils without them taking all of the viewer's focus.
I don't know how to draw someone biting their lips.

This was a very difficult drawing, i did a whole lot of constructions on the ribcage to figure out the angle but i did one, deleted it, did the next, deleted it, so on. This was for me to just get what the angles would be that i would have to draw, so i didn't draw on top of them, i draw after deleting them.

Thanks in advance :3
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>>7930690
Realistically it looks like you spent only a couple minutes roughing this out so people aren't going to care to respond. The ref itself is already ugly but everything you've done is completely off. Practice accurately copying.
https://www.dorian-iten.com/accuracy/
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>>7930812
It took me about 30 mins to do that one. I am new to drawing in general started 2 months ago so I spend lots of time trying to figure out why an image looks how it does while trying to copy it. The link you gave is of someone selling a guide? Do i need to buy it? A lot of my proportion measurements aren't drawn and are just shadowed over the ref then over my drawing then drawn. I think it is relatively well copied, apart from the torso length and head angle and size. Please elaborate on what you think is "completely off".
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>>7930824
>>7930812
If instead you mean for me to just see the front page of the site, this is precisely what I was taught to do by a friend and still do, maybe i just need more practice with it is all?
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>>7930824
Did you try overlaying them?
It's from the beg guide https://hackmd.io/UMnZVhNITW-T2wZpHw6d0Q?view=#Absolute-beginners
I should have mentioned it's free with the code DORIAN
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>>7930831
I did overlay them, but is that not somewhat close, apart from the head angle/size and slightly the torso length? I see loads of other small mistakes but should I be aiming for 1:1 replication? I want to learn to render after getting a foundation in drawing first.
Also thanks for the code I'll check that out.
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>>7930833
I'd also like to know if 30 minutes is an ok time for something like that, or rather what is? I only really get critique from a small friend group which isn't always the best, which is why I came here.
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>>7928969
beautiful
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rawr

>>7928969
lick lick lick



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