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First comic I've ever made, and it's about cum pseudo-hentai (can't believe it) The guy is an "ugly bastard" who has a group of female bodyguards whom he uses for pleasure anywhere and under any circumstances.

Should I continue?
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>>7906304
SOVL
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It looks like you are beginner in comic art. Why not use the basic 4 panel layout, with all the panels symmetrical squares?
That small 3rd panel doesn't add to the scene
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>>7906308
As I said, this is my first time making a comic; the small panel is a continuation of the second girl bodyguard.
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It's kinda hot
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Why are so many men today into ntr adjacent cuckold fetishes?
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>>7906304
try to make 2-4 pages a week to train yourself
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>>7906399
What can I say? Nuclear thermal rocketry is just cool.
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Moving forward a bit, I don't have a script, just ideas that come to me.

>>7906399
It's always been there, the same thing happens to women in the same amount, it's like the fantasy of playing at the forbidden extreme.
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>>7906304
>Should I continue?
Might as well.
If you want to make comics, you gotta start, or you'll never do it.

>>7906399
>men today
There's loads of older and historical art about men being cuckolds, being cheated on, etc.
Surprisingly, I don't think there's quite as much art of men doing the cheating and banging two broads, and given that the majority of art has been made by men, I do wonder why that is? Do men just like the feeling of dominating another man's woman?
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>>7906399
Where the fuck do you see ntr in that comic you fucking retard? It's just an ugly bastard having his way with hot women. That's an old as fuck trope.
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>>7906304
so this is the autism people talk about
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Continue the story. Get it on paper. Learn how to do these things by a project and the page inked is certainly sellable and this genre has its adherents, so you can find a home for it, possibly in physical print. You may want to consider the length of the comic, the episodes and pages telling some chunk of a greater narrative. Having your own website is one way of controlling both output and structure of your stories, but you may want to consider a short self contained series of 6-8 pages to sell to the print publications to develop a presence in the community.
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>>7906818
Interesting, thanks for the advice. I don't know which platform to use or which one would be best for me (Patreon, DeviantArt, etc.). But I'll continue making strips of no more than 5 pages featuring this degenerate character in a universe where ugly tycoons use their bodyguards as muses and where free use is the norm.
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>>7906580
Cucks always bring up old paintings and plays, but it's obvious those things are doing it for dramatic effect rather than eroticism.
>>7906645
Because rather than the male being an afterthought in your porn, you chose to focus on him. So there's an element of homosexuality there as well. Not only do you focus on him, but you also make him this grotesque monstrous depiction that you have nothing in common with unless you're 40+. In summary you want to see a certain type of man that isn't you engage in sex with the object of your desire.
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>>7906304
Based beyond all recognition. Go get 'em champ! Go impregnate those h*les!
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>>7906820
What's the profile on the ugly bastard? Did he born in poverty? Is he a self made man? Does someone want to kill him? Does he have a wife or is he divorced? Does he have any proper education? Does he have any moral limits or any weakness?
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>>7906828
I don't have a name yet, but I imagined that like tycoons compete to have their entourage of sexiest and most provocative bodyguards until he looks for new recruits and passes the harassment test in situations of attempted kidnapping or murder while he fucks them in action.
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>>7906825
> Target Successfully trolled.
> High Quality Triggering acquired.
BASED OP
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>>7906825
>that you have nothing in common with
yeah, haha....
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No.
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>>7906839
>merely pretending to be retarded
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>>7906304
blog/socials?
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>>7906304
Should I continue?
Of course. If you want to ever leave your current beg stage, the best way by far is to draw as much as possible.
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>>7906825
>M3nt4l Gymn4st1c5
Pseudo intellectuals always crack me up.
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>>7907049
Seconding
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>>7906399
Male sexuality is a fucking meme, they'd do anything for the sake of the COOOOOM
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>>7906399
It's not NTR he's in a polygamous relationship as can be clearly seen
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>>7906534
Why does he need bodyguards? Does he have a fuckton of money? Does he have a mansion? Does he have a dog or a cat?
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>>7907416
>>7906838
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You're doing great bro. Keep it up. Post more.
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>>7906304
well done.



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