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I've been playing around with acrylics. I kind of like this one. How terrible is it?
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I also did this turtle astronaut one.
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>>7907752
There isnt much to critique here cause its all wrong, you can just pick a spot and point out an error. guessing you are an absolute beginner. I dont know much about painting but to my understanding you should get the forms right with a sketch before rendering. I think at your stage it doesnt really matter thougheverbeitly since you could just start a new painting and improve if you put slightly more effort in.
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>>7907752
I kinda dig it, except the red eyes. It has a naive appeal.

>>7907754
Trash.
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>>7907756
Yes, I am an absolute beginner. I did do a pencil sketch beforehand, see attached. I thought I put a good amount of effort it. Could you expound on what is "all wrong?" Please and thank you.
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>>7907758
What color should the eyes have been?
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>>7907764
Something other than evil demon red?
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>>7907752
It's a pretty good start. I would recomend you to stop using black for making darker colours. Every time you want to make something look darker just mix up opposite colours. And also use a refrence for practice and pay attention to what you are seeing in the refrence, I bet the lion's nose didn't look like a literal piink triangle in the photo. I know some artists do that intentionally but you need to learn the rules to break them.
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>>7907752
Cute i love it. The colours are awesome. Obvious form and anatomy are way off but its a fun painting.
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>>7907870
Thank you for the feedback.

>>7908011
Thank you for the feedback.

I was worried I would get nothing but trashed, so I am grateful I received some constructive criticism. I'm just starting all this, obviously, but I enjoy doing it quite a bit. I am hopeful it is something I can keep doing to keep my mind healthy as I am recovering from a left leg amputation following being run over by a bus. In a fair amount of physical pain, and even more phantom pain. This helps to distract from that.
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>>7908071
Fugging hell thats rough
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hehe look at that pride of lions
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>>7907752
It looks more like a Stuff toy version of a Lettuce monster.
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>>7907752
I actually really like the lions a lot. I can’t put my finger on it but there is some emotion there and I like the colors. I’d be really interested to see more work from you that comes from this place inside of you. The turtle is cute but doesn’t make me feel much other than delight at his tiny turtle space helmet and lack of spacesuit but has an emblem nonetheless, lol
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>>7908071
you know the whole point of art is to be fun and expressive. even the advice that you hear from masters are just optional. as long as you don’t make ai slop and call it art you are a respectable artist.
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>>7907752
Sky is really pretty and the red eyes mesh well with it



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