first time try drawing a comic on mspaint, thoughts?how can i improve?
>>7907905i think it is fine how it is
autism
why is this board such shit now
>>7907930projection
>>7907930that's what you get for enabling middle school drama wars for more than a decade
>>7907942Whats wrong
>>7907905It's a perfectly good comic if you want a comedic toneJust polish the style while keeping it simple
>>7907905It's just kinda boring. It's a blog post in comic form.There's a lot of ways you could have made it more visually interesting; The name of the old joint and all that text, it's all a big nothing burger. It doesn't actually capture the vibe of those kinds of places the way an illustration of it would. It doesn't have to be an amazing illustration, bu this is one of those spots where and image can say a lot more than words.The slop joint stuff is a bit on the nose, but it's probably fine.
>>7908060Fair enoguh
everything
>>7908272I mean, E for effort F for fucking retarded. You seem witty and clever maybe you can come up with something now.
>>7907905confusing dialog layout
>>7907905only use text for important stuff that can't be expressed visually. why not draw her generosity instead of explaining it? perhaps find a way of visually connecting the location instead writing "i will visit there" and "it was closed years ago".
>>7908440Show me your vision
>>7908440Ok
>>7908683No
