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Anonymous
03/30/26(Mon)07:42:46 No.7908448

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Anonymous 03/30/26(Mon)07:42:46 No.7908448

Looking for thoughts/feedback on my comic, ty
https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/142933333
I'll post the first dozen pages or so here, it's about 130 pages.

Anonymous
03/30/26(Mon)07:43:06 No.7908449

Anonymous 03/30/26(Mon)07:43:06 No.7908449

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Anonymous
03/30/26(Mon)07:43:37 No.7908450

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Anonymous
03/30/26(Mon)07:44:39 No.7908451

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Anonymous
03/30/26(Mon)07:45:10 No.7908453

Anonymous 03/30/26(Mon)07:45:10 No.7908453

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Anonymous
03/30/26(Mon)07:47:48 No.7908456

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03/30/26(Mon)07:48:19 No.7908457

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03/30/26(Mon)07:48:50 No.7908458

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Anonymous
03/30/26(Mon)07:49:21 No.7908460

Anonymous 03/30/26(Mon)07:49:21 No.7908460

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Anonymous
03/30/26(Mon)07:49:53 No.7908461

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Anonymous
03/30/26(Mon)07:51:03 No.7908462

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Anonymous
03/30/26(Mon)07:51:34 No.7908463

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Anonymous
03/30/26(Mon)07:54:51 No.7908465

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Anonymous
03/30/26(Mon)08:34:49 No.7908479

Anonymous 03/30/26(Mon)08:34:49 No.7908479

>>7908448
This was quite good
I was glued to it with the pages you posted and finished on pixiv without any distractions
Story is well put together and it made me smile
It reminded me of the short story The Last Question written by Isaac Asimov which I also liked

Anonymous
03/30/26(Mon)10:22:21 No.7908534

Anonymous 03/30/26(Mon)10:22:21 No.7908534

>>7908448
I like it...and it really makes me feel I should deep down make my comic idea come to life instead of stalling it in a word processor.

Anonymous
03/30/26(Mon)12:35:46 No.7908621

Anonymous 03/30/26(Mon)12:35:46 No.7908621

>>7908448
You wrote all that? What an accomplishment!

Can't really comment further without giving the story away for others here. Maybe I'll wait a few days. Well done.

Anonymous
03/30/26(Mon)16:00:31 No.7908793

Anonymous 03/30/26(Mon)16:00:31 No.7908793

>>7908479
Thank you, happy to hear that!

>>7908534
As PAI told Sunshine, the best time to plant a tree was twenty years ago. The second best time is now. One of my biggest regrets is not earnestly starting learning earlier.

>>7908621
Thank you! I spent a lot of time and effort on this. There are a lot of interesting ideas to chew on. Looking forward to hearing the rest of your thoughts.

Anonymous
03/30/26(Mon)20:01:47 No.7908965

Anonymous 03/30/26(Mon)20:01:47 No.7908965

>>7908448
I don't wanna say the quiet part out loud not to anger the OP

Anonymous
03/31/26(Tue)00:15:21 No.7909078

Anonymous 03/31/26(Tue)00:15:21 No.7909078

>>7908965
this is a safe space, speak your mind

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