Dumping the first chapter here You can read the 9 chapter here: https://altarusia.thecomicseries.com/archive/
Oh snap it's done? Long time coming amigo.I'll check it out, aint been in the general for a while
Great work. I really really fuck with the style. Keeps the viewer engaged and tells a story without the need for dialogue. Keep it up
Done>>7916956After almost 3 years
>>7916969Thanks. I played a lot with visuals and panneling with Altarusia, I should say it was a very experimental work
Your artwork is really strong, and the story works well overallI did find the flow of the text a bit difficult to follow at times, especially when the placement moves around quite a bit
>>7916980Going off what he says, I felt the story flowed very well. Agreed on the text, it changes early on.Not over doing the amount of panels on each page really helps the flow. It gets a lot done, but it doesnt feel too long at the same time
