Hello 4channers, im still new here. If you can, give some advice towards my art, please. Since im not from 'merica, i want to sell comissions for life i guess.What can i do to improve my artstyle/art in general?(FYI, i've never gone to art school, nor i've been drawing for years. Its been less than a year since i've started drawing).Thank you people for your future comments, genuinely thank you :)(i just understood that i cant necesserly post more than 1 picture, if you're intrested, i can post more later)
well, for a start, why don't you fuck off, and come back whenever you can make a leg outline in 1 (one) fucking line and not in 5 (FIVE)
>>7938684okay, thank youim sorry :(
>>7938652>GoalgemmyU gonna draw Toni next?
>>7938652>pizda I was considering telling you some advice but what if you are russian? Swearing everywhere like that you must be a real vodka gremlin. I don't want to contribute! You'll later harm people with that knowledge
>>7938774
Use the /beg/ thread because you'd get more bang for your buck. Drawing purely for monetization's sake is going to greatly hinder your progress, however, in some way. Remember this going forward that passion is how most artists improve fast. You'd be surprised at how big the difference is. Wish you luck!
>>7938652Appeal will carry your work much further than anything elseStudy artists you find appealing - check why you like them. Study their stuff and try redrawing their workEventually you'll find what works for you and will develop a style of your ownAs for your work, its unappealing. The character is lumpy The colours are flat and muddy The face - the most important part - is uglyYour proportions look okay and depending on how long this took you to draw then you're doing well - especially if you've only been studying for a year.I dont like the shadows I dont like the hair - you're not using shapes and haphazardly throwing around linesKrillin looking face Dreamworks expressionI can't imagine anyone paying for this work though in your current skill level
>>7938860>passion is how most artists improve fastI wish that was true...
>>7938868..it is?Even artists who've "made it" once their pinterest gets big their art drastically declines in quality Check out pantsuripper - before patreon he has crazy perspective drawings, detailed backgrounds, unique colours Now its mostly girl in void
>>7938766This, Toni is best girl
>>7938652Grind more shapes and lines and forms. Do more continuous line drawing, I can see the lack of confident lines. Draw from life more. Draw your character actually leaning on something or in an environment, I see that fucking blank void she's in.I wouldn't recommend rendering until you nail down line quality and construction.
Its the face. It doesn't even follow the contour line look at how far away the eyes are from the eye line. That thing isn't even human.
>>7939002Although lowering it down makes it seem even wrong, so there's other things that has to be done to the face.
>>7939003When you know the shape of the cheek bones then draw it underneath, then you get a feeling of what direction the features need to be set
>>7939006
>>7939009Moved cheek blush slightly so it would sit on cheekbone.
For me, it's Toni.
>>7939011Now that the features are moved, hair line also needs adjusting.
>>7939014I also move the mouth slightly upwards because her jawbone would be too small otherwise.
>>7939017Also I tweaked some things on one half of her face. I can't really explain but this is what I'd do personally. Since it's an intuitive change and not something I can explain logically, I cannot say that these changes are "right" but only stylistic.
>>7939018Forgot pic
>>7939019Also this is exagerrated, but according to bridgman the shape of the head and hair would follow the lumps on the head contruction in the upper right corner.
>>7939022And headband will go that way.
paypal needs to ban third world countries
>>7938652just keep practicingput yourself out there and maybe you will get a few bites - but you'll never know if you don't tryI just draw for fun so have no advice on how to make money on artBut if I was to commission something it would be someone who can draw something appealing - not necessarily complicated drawings, just something that is appealing
>>7938652is it ok if I upload this on my socials? (I wont do it if you dont want to <3
>>7939024But now she doesn't even look like the character any more
>>7939181Well, my hand moved on its own when tweaking the features. I'm no Naoki Saito, I'm not good at controlling my stylistic impulse but I hope I was of help since all the pros left this board anyway :(
>>7939205nta might be something to keep in mind when giving future advice
