I feel like something looks off..but I can't figure out what :((((
You made a thread instead of using any other available thread for critique. That's off.
>>7940818oh sorry.. i'm new here :Đ
anatomy is phoned in, mostly as an excuse to chicken scratch some Pinterest-tier textile patterns all over the canvas
>>7940824Thanks for the critique! :Đ I'll work more on anatomy ^^
>>7940815looks pretty good to me, i like the patterns
>>7940830My advice is to give the anatomy 4x the time of the detailing. You only need to do this once or twice, then your brain will automatically make sure all the shortcuts *also* improve the final result.
>>7940815the eyes are too far from center too close to ears? It's way too detailed idkLooks like you are going for anime girls, so the tits I can ignore. yeah the right eye look to close to the elf ears
>>7940815I feel that this was poorly planned. The anatomy is flawed too but it could’ve been less recognizable if the planning for the landmarks, proportions, etc was more consistent. Try to spend as much time planning as possible, focus on details later.
>>7940815face is symbol drawn, flat, not buying the form on the hair. left boob is squished in, and i can see the references used. line weight on nose and breast dividing line is just lazy, hand is completely phoned in and right arm is flat, clearly no underdrawing of anatomy. otherwise its good, you have decent line quality and usage of patterns, im sure you could find money in this, but if you want to improve you will need to focus on forms.
>>7940815None of the anons have this thread have pointed out the actual flaw. You got a bunch of fags saying "anatomy is phoned in" but no one is actually pointing out the fucking flaw that the bitch in your pic doesnt actually have a proper cranium. You drew what would be the front part of her bangs but didnt actually draw the rest of her cranium/hair.Like what you basically did is draw her the way Yugi from Yugioh is drawn, where you draw the bangs but then get into a decorative headpiece straight away. But for Yugi's case at least its intentional, you clearly arent going for that vibe.
Like look at this basic edit. I just altered the headpiece to make it sit like a hairband and added the back of her skull, and now the head looks has proper shapeHOWEVERnow that I did that it reveals that where you drew the eyes is way too fucking high
So then what you would have to actually do next is lower the eyeline(and therefore the other features like her ear and nose) but if this is traditional drawing you fucked yourself.HOWEVER to cheat it you can just move the nose lower and cover the eyes completely until there is no trace for the easier fix
Everything else is fine. Honestly ignore the rest of these fucking anons their critiques are vague as shit. Honestly the face looked like pic related and no one on here could fucking explain that?
while the critiques here are true, it still looks good, normie looks at this and theyll think its cool. Alot of cool art has problems when you analyse it but overall its cool, the issues dont outweigh the negatives. just gotta improve is all
>>7940824How is the pattern 'chicken scratch'
