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The general thread for Manga / manga-styled comic-making, manga-style illustration and related comic work. That said, everyone is welcome here.

Support each other and talk about your work or the work of others that excites you. Inking, character design, paneling / layout, writing, planning, and other discussions are all welcome.
Post resources, questions, in-progress pages, breakdowns of other works, etc. If a work is not yours, credit the maker (unless it's fucking obvious like a full page of One Piece or something).
Thanks to everyone for making /mmg/ a level-headed and helpful place. Remember, drawing and making comics and manga are difficult endeavors, and we're all in this struggle together.

Previous thread: >>8019797
Some resources:
/asg/, our stylistic sister-thread series for those focused more on illustration >>>/ic/asg

Books:
Understanding Comics
https://e-hentai.org/g/2042453/83e7da6ed0/
Making Comics
https://annas-archive.org/md5/d55168f7579c1e23275d1fc9f0a2255d
Manga in Theory and Practice: The Craft of Creating Manga
https://annas-archive.org/md5/2877da11e2f852d220853e9944e6ea49
Story: Substance, Structure, Style and the Principles of Screenwriting
https://archive.org/details/RobertMcKeeStorypdf/
Even a Monkey Can Draw Manga
https://kupdf.net/download/even-a-monkey-can-draw-manga_58b9ca16e12e89233badd376_pdf
The Shonen Jump Guide to Making Manga
https://mega.nz/file/i81imLpI#GcheJ9Jjk3lw1RE9nQWgL4RG4wEBNOcRmgA-iaU6Wpg

Videos:
"Manga Senpai/Tokyo Name Tank", "SMAC! THE SILENT MANGA AUDITION COMMUNITY"
Habanero Scans: https://www.dailymotion.com/HabaneroScans/videos
Manben link can be found on archive.org on different pages separated by season: https://www.reddit.com/r/manga/comments/1bu9f0y/found_all_of_naoki_urasawas_manben_and_manben_neo/
Urasawa Channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCkIFOAoFm47XOAlJwTa6Ieg/videos

OP image is from Ikusa no Ko - Oda Saburou Nobunaga-den Chapter 11.
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>>8027411
Other open comic publishers:

Dark Horse ( https://www.darkhorse.com )
>Dark Horse still welcomes your submissions, and all submissions will still be reviewed, just as they always have been.
>All unsolicited story/series proposals must have a full creative team on board. Writer-only proposals will not be reviewed.

Image comics ( https://imagecomics.com/ )
>Image Comics only publishes creator-owned material. They do not contract creators; they’re only interested in publishing original content for which you would retain all rights.
>Image Comics publishes creator-owned/creator-generated properties and THEY DON’T PAY PAGE RATES. Image takes a small flat fee off the books published, and it will be the responsibility of the creators to determine the division of the remaining pay between their creative team members.

Drawn and quarterly ( https://drawnandquarterly.com/ )
>Please email a low resolution PDF with at least 20 pages of comics and cover letter to submissions. Do not send dropbox links, scripts, or proposals. Please read our submissions FAQ.

Fantagraphics ( https://www.fantagraphics.com/ )
>submission page: https://www.fantagraphics.com/pages/faq

Top Shelf Productions ( https://www.topshelfcomix.com/ )
>Regarding submissions, we're easy. Just email us a download link of what you'd like us to review. NOTE: We cannot accept cover letters, plot synopses, or scripts unless they are accompanied by a minimum of 10-20 completed pages (i.e., fully inked and lettered comic book pages).

Additional publisher lists:
> https://jasonthibault.com/definitive-list-comic-publisher-submission-guidelines/
> https://writingtipsoasis.com/best-independent-comic-book-publishers/
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>>8027412
Some western / indie publishers of Manga:

Saturday AM ( https://www.saturday-am.com/ )
> Digital indie magazine, seems to be on the up-and-up
> Open submissions for long-form series; also distributes series currently being published elsewhere.
> Regularly publishes one-shots, making it a good potential outlet for already-finished work.

Oni Press ( https://onipress.com/ )
> Technically indie, but at this point large enough by comic standards to be mentioned in the same breath as other publishers.

Antarctic Press ( https://antarctic-press.myshopify.com/ )
> Longtime large-indie publisher of OEL / manga-esque books.
> Seemingly taking submissions at present if https://antarctic-press.myshopify.com/pages/submissions is anything to go on.

Yen Press ( https://yenpress.com/ )
> Started out as a small indie publisher of original / Korean material, and has grown reasonably popular since.
> As of 2016, it is also one of the western arms of the Kadokawa Corporation, with Kadokawa owning a 51% stake.
> Editorial inquiries can apparently be sent to yenpress@yenpress.com, however, they apparently are not open to new submissions at this time.

Viz Media / Viz Originals ( https://www.viz.com/originals )
> *The* western manga publisher.
> Currently in the exploratory stages of setting up an English label.
> Submissions are open and several books have been announced. However, progress on the label seems to be moving very slowly.
> Still might be worth a shot anyway.

Shrine Comics ( https://shrinecomics.com/ )
> Small indie manga publisher
> Seemingly attempting to make the transition to physical volumes
> Allows crossposting to other sites

Iconic Comics (https://www.iconiccomics.com/)
>A bit like Oni Press and Antarctic Press
>A small publisher with a focus on indie works with manga inspiration
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>>8027414
/mmg/'s very own anon-led anthology: /ic/onography
https://discord.gg/QYnFBves7V
https://forms.gle/d3a2Cwwd44sJYyqv9
(Anthology project is defunct but the discord is alive)

Additional community added Resources:
Mangafonts: https://mangafonts.carrd.co/
Hiro Mashima YT: https://www.youtube.com/@mashimaCh/videos
Ganmo, a job listing board for manga assistant work: https://ganmo.j-comi.co.jp/posts

How (You) can help /mmg/:

> Know about a contest or a publishing opportunity? TAG THE OP and post a link.
> Have a new resource? TAG THE OP and link / mention it for inclusion.
> Don't be a crab
> Have a link / DL for a mentioned resource? TAG THE OP and mention what you're supplying a link for.
> SCREENSHOT / PASTEBIN effort posts that help you for posterity.
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I want to learn cape shit rendering, is there a book or a course or something?
I am okeyish with crosshatching, but chiaroscuro solid black shadows is something my tiny brain struggles with.
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>>8027083
Yes, they are thousands of dollars and gigantic and let me clarify, for a regular person who even happens to have a spare 500$ you can get an all in one and the quality of the scans will probably be ok. There's another manufacturer by the name of "mustek" or "plustek" and some people are lucky enough to get a working one, but afaik for the better part they are just fragile as hell or old and don't function anymore (I attempted to get a """working""" one on ebay and immediately had to send it right back)
You can stitch images easily just don't be a cheapskate you'll be fine.

here's somethin
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>>8027439
>capeshit rendering
>posts manga
Just copy the art from famous comic artists.
So much of art is learned through observation. Because many techniques and things can't be put into words, they are purely visual. You have to feel it by looking at it and trying to mimic it.
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>>8027439
The solid blacks don't have any secrets. Just study more inking values/shadows. Rendering in pen and ink by Arthur Guptill is great overall. The hard shadows are mostly where occlusion happens, or on terminators, and of course you can play with it for appeal/mood by emulating a strong contrast with local light sources. Tatsumaki has a black dress, so Murata often marks/draws where the highlights would be and then drops the big black (the gray shades is added digitally afterward), though he also has a tendency of just going for it without any marks. He did many streams, so you can watch him drawing if you like: https://www.bilibili.com/video/BV1Mp411o7Xw

In general, I don't think there is anything special about them. Where it is really dark, just go full black instead of hatchings.
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>>8027446
Howies can't ever grasp this concept.

The answers to all your questions are right there on the page if you use your eyes
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I meant the 90's style with black shadows and a lot of hatching with very little crosshatching, like pic related.
>>8027446
>posts manga
Yeah, my fault. I posted Murata because he inspired me to learn more about dc/marvel style of inking, as he does something a little bit similar.
Copying sure, but i don't understand enough to copy, i don't get the logic behind this style.
>>8027459
>Howies can't ever grasp this concept
That's basically it, i can't grasp the concept. I mean i have never read or drawn this style in my life, i have no idea where to start.
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>>8027472
>like pic related
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>>8027472
>>8027473
It's right there. Look at it. Think about it. It tells you exactly what it is.
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>Manga making general
I'm making a manga
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>>8027484
Do i need refs with special lighting? I tried to draw from a ref foto of superhero poses it looks nothing like what i want.
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>>8027490
Post it and the ref. Most likely you just have poor skills and it has nothing to do with any certain style.
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I need to learn how to draw backgrounds. I love drawing.
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Just about finished with the cover for volume 1 at this point. Obviously gonna change the placeholder text, and maybe might some things around a bit. Am I missing the mark, or am I on the right track here?

On another note, I did a portrait of Priscilla for the top part of the spine and I don't remember digital inking being so slippery feeling. Like damn
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>>8027553
Quite pretty. Based on what I'm seeing here, it looks like you're going to put it up on Amazon. If you do so, I'll buy a copy to support you. But I do hope you're not going to actually go by "Scandinavia Anon" lol. You don't have an actual artist name to go by?
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>>8027586
Thanks! The plan is to try out Amazon, yeah. I checked out mixam as well, but the shipping costs are insane. Actually, I haven't looked too deep into the costs of going through Amazon, but there's no way it's any more expensive. And yeah, the name is just placeholder as well. Wasn't sure whether I'd go by my artist name Chives or my RL name
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>>8027616
As somebody who is also on Amazon, it's great that printing costs are so cheap and that you can also buy author copies without any added markup. Just note that on pages that deal with a lot of black, their printers are more likely to have a single streak/line running vertically down the page versus something like Mixam which has never done that to me across over hundreds of prints. You get what you pay for (or in this case charge for I suppose), that's all.
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>>8027553
Lili is nice. Kerning of the text is not good. The placement of the zero is not good eighter.
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>>8027492
https://www.artstation.com/marketplace/p/1WMRY/800-superhero-energy-male-action-poses
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>>8027620
That's good to know, thanks!

>>8027629
I know what kerning is, but honestly I have no idea what you're saying here
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>>8027633
Tried to make it look more like a comic
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>>8027675
If I had to take a stab at a translation I think he's trying to say that some letters are hard to read, but he didnt specify if its the title the back cover text font, or what. And then he has a problem with the positioning of the little o/0 in the middle of your E in "Pristine."
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>>8027553
Looks great! exciting stuff, how do you know how wide to make the spine? Did you have to contact the printer?


Hefferchu vol1 is complete (read @ https://efsius.net), lookin for feedback/suggestions. working on the print files:
https://www.twitch.tv/efsius1/
https://www.youtube.com/@efsius1/streams
(Yt for no music)
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Haven't been here in a long while.
What's i miss?
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>>8027696
>he has a problem with the positioning of the little o/0
I meant 1, the number in the white circle
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>>8027700
Not Pristine anon, but when you put in the amount of pages the book is going to be, Amazon (Mixam does this too) automatically calculates what the proper spine dimensions are and can generate a template with the proper dimensions. Worst case scenario they give you the numbers and then you make a custom canvas with those dimensions to draw on top of. It's actually super easy to deal with once you're crossing that bridge.
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I'm still a /beg/. I don't want to work professionally in the industry. I don't want to work under constant time constraints and under the breath of editors and publications skewing my perfect vision for a "safer" and more marketable story. I want to work at my own pace. I want to complete my entire story first, have every chapter made beforehand, and then release chapters weekly without having to worry if I will be able to get a chapter out in time or not. I do not want to learn Japanese and I do not want to socialize with anyone in-person. I will post chapters on my own website.

My goal? To have the story become so popular that it gets an animation adaptation, and an incredibly high quality one at that. I want people to discuss my story. I want people to speculate and theorize about all of its mysteries an intriguing aspects. I want people to make memes about my story. I want to see threads on /a/ about my story, glazing it or calling it slop. I want to see shitty YouTube reactions of my story or shitty video essays critiquing it and claiming that it's a flawed masterpiece that are way too long for their own good. I want people to make fan art of my characters. I want to see high effort cosplays of my characters. I want nice figures to be made of my characters. I want to see arcs of my story become movies in theaters and blow up on the internet for weeks.

Today, I will make the first step and start planning out my first story. There are 14 stories I want to tell, some short enough to fit into a single movie, others long enough to make long running shonen series' look minuscule. I will not focus on making the art good as the writing is more important. My stories will be digital only so I will not concern myself with proper physical formatting and which side of the page everything goes on. One day, a professional mangaka will see my story and be fond enough of it to want to bring the world's attention to it.

If ONE can do it, then so can I. I am going to make it.
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>>8027679
>>8027633
This isn't that bad. With lighting you're just gonna have to learn how to visualize light coming from a source so you can determine where the shadows are, plus a bit of exagerration for effect. Look up 3d models of bodies with lights you can move around.
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>>8027746
What's the synopsis of your story?
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If you're not willingly to put 6 years of unpaid labor only to get your manga cancelled within 19 weeks, you're not cut out for being a mangaka.
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>>8027759
>6 years
RIP Alice-anon.
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>>8027746
>I do not want to learn Japanese
ngmi
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My job sucks total shit but now whenever I check my bank account there's like 3x the money in there than I expect. I'm working on finishing a patreon doujin project when I'm free.

>>8027553
super dope.
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>>8027791
Software engineer?
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>>8027553
This is rly pretty scandinavian anon! Could you share that template for the cover?
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>>8027795
Just retail. but for some reason they pay daily. It's been very helpful.
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How’s it been laundry, haven’t seen you in a while
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>>8027799
>>8027791
Great you got a job then, I know you mentioned it was part time, which is great, working fulltime is soul sucking.

I'm soon to hand in my resignation to my IT customer service job, cause it is so hard trying to draw after 9 hours of having your brain turned to mush.

I'm probably gonna do a Jim Lee for a bit and wait a couple of months before getting a part time job, cause I wanna focus on getting better at my art full time, and focus on a couple of art endeavors.

When I leave I should have close to 25kaud (18kusd), so that should last me a bit
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>>8027553
this is looking dope superstar.
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Do you think it's okay to insert your fetish into your work even if the story isn't porn related?
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>>8027926
It depends. But the potential to have a negative effect on the story is greater than to be beneficial.
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>>8027926
You just have to make it not obvious.
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It's been a while since the last time I tried doing something manga-style, but I actually like how it turned out.

My backgrounds and speech bubbles are still ass though, ngl. That, and I still have no fucking idea how to use sound effects lol.
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>>8027926
It depends on the aesthetics of the fetish. Shoving feet in the camera every 2 seconds it noticeable, but if you like buff chicks lets say, and half your females are buff, its less noticeable, look at Dorohedoro for example, or Beastars for furries.

Probably not best to force it tho, hardest thing I've ever had to do in my life was when I was writing >>8027898 and came up with a much more thematically appropriate subplot for one of the main side characters that didnt involve her turning into a giantess. Very tragic but it tied the story in alot better so unfortunately the character isnt gonna turn into a big titted 12 foot tall nervous giantess.
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>>8027935
that looks awesome, blog?

>background and speech bubbles are ass

??? Bro they look fine. They are very serviceable
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>>8027457
NTA but I think watching these strokes made me figure out something really important
This must be what watching porn for the first time feels like
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>>8027905
gotta download a jap text type-set, and figure that endeavour out.
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>>8027926
No.
Sexual element is just noise which pollute every story.
Picrel.
Such an epic ENTER scene and the mangaka has to ruin it by adding gratuitous booba and erect nipples to appeal for filthy coomers.
Shameful display.
Look at how much better when I fix it on the left.
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>>8028049
I'm really interested in you
I believe you're the same person who comes out of the woodworks now and then to rail against sexuality
What's your current project?
What are your values?
What are your inspirations?
What do you consider great art?

You seem to be a very interesting person.
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>>8028049
Obviously bait but I agree with this.
You can have big tits because that's just the character, but adding erect nipples for no reason in such a scene that is supposed to evoke a rallying of an army, that's just like shitting in your own soup.
Also double shitting on its own story and characters because the character was raped and tortured by the goblins, so she should have nothing but unfiltered hate, contempt and disgust for them.
Sure, you can argue the hardened nipples are just a reaction to anger or an heighted emotional state, but in visual works it doesn't work like that.
You can also argue that the saintess body is just reacting and getting aroused at the sight of goblins because nature and sex and shit, but's that just triple shitting on your own characters and story.

If the author's intent is to make goblin rape porn, he should do that, since most of the audience he seems to pander to and those who enjoy the mango are such people and go independent instead of forcing himself to make manga to keep getting published by some company.

i will not argue because i am right and stop coming up with schizophrenic episodes so before posting, just don't.
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>>8028049
Are you trans
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>>8028049
This but without the gay plebbit irony.
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Guys, why don't you use Liquid Charcoal for your comics?
inb4: me? I have no money for art materials, unfortunately.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m4FsTEFmSkw
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>>8028060
>because the character was raped and tortured by the goblins
Anon, it's obviously a fetish comic from the start. Adding sexual visuals to every scene is just on brand.
You're reading porn hoping for shakespeare
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Anybody have any tips on drawing good trees and foliage digitally? Every tutorial for nature is done with traditional pens and aren't very detailed, basically scribbles. My comic has heavy emphasis on nature for it's backgrounds.
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>>8028122
Go outside and look at nature
Digital or traditional makes literally no difference in drawing, only if you are using premade assets.
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I am checking and considering four platforms:
- Webtoon
- Tapas
- NamiComi
- Pixiv
All four have support for indies to publish work and all four have ways of monetization (though the eligibility numbers seem a little steep).
Do you anons have any experience with these platforms?
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>>8028137
Do you have a product to publish?
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>>8028140
I am working on it. However, I need experience first, so I am just working on something smaller. I don't have expectations, just another brick on the wall, but I still wish to know more about those platforms. As a reader, I only have some knowledge of the webtoon platform as of now.
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>>8027747
I tried to make it look even more like a comic. But i don't understand the logic of this hatching enough.
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How can I explain the fact that my catgirl's tail stays tucked in her clothes in certain scenes? I wanted her to do that because first it would be weird to have her tail out while wearing thermal/spacesuits and I also thought of making her specialized clothes with some outer sleeve for her tail, but that would look really ugly and uncool. But I can't just keep her tail tucked in either because realistically that would be extremely uncomfortable and maybe even painful for her.
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>>8028170
>How can I explain the fact that my catgirl's tail stays tucked in her clothes in certain scenes?
I had to explain to police, why my little Johnson was hanging out of my pants, a couple of times. I think you will be able to explain why her tail ins't.
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>>8028175
Kek. Ok...
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>>8028137
>Webtoon
Fuck you for trying to host your stuff on our site. Did you draw BL/GL? No? Then fuck you, because you're not going to get seen. Did you draw something that might even vaguely look like the human form, even if they're clothed? Fuck you, you better fucking censor that shit up and you better make it look like it was your idea to censor it from the get go and make it look super natural, or else you're banned. Yes, a bikini is considered lewd, so you better cover that up. What? Our favored darlings and korean artists suddenly don't have to abide by any of those rules? Fuck you for noticing. Oh, and you better upload your comic to our hyper specific dimensions that no other site uses for each single page, or else your comic isn't appearing.
>Tapas
Everything said about Webtoons but dialed down to only about 5-10%. Allows for normal rectangular black censorship bars. Requires formatting all exported images to a specific size guideline that no other site uses as well.
>NamiComi
No real rules, anything that might not be friendly for Mr. Advertiser has to have the user logged in first in order to see it. Due to Google and Apple getting their panties in a wad, anything considered NSFW for any reason will not be searchable on the NC mobile app, which can potentially limit your comic's reach. They are continuing to develop their site/app, but what seems to limit them is a lack of actual readers. Even popular comics don't have as high of a number as it may get on another site. Image size dimensions are rather liberal (no, I'm not talking about politics, I'm using the normal non-political variant of the word), no immediate restrictions.
>Pixiv
It's a normal hosting site and uploading your comic to them is easy enough. Image guidelines are easy going. Seems to be easier to get views here than on social media, but again if you're not already dealing with something that's insanely popular (insert popular IP here) you're likely out of luck.
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>>8028181
I knew webtoon was fucked with the LGBT garbage and stuff, but the censorship is that bad as well? Gosh, I hate the left so much.
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>>8028183
>"The left"
Its nothing but rich people stomping down the competition while also exploiting and robbing them. And rich people are without exception right-wing, no matter what their pretend persona says
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>>8028183
>Gosh, I hate the left so much.
Post on xshitter than, Chud, lol.
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>>8028183
This is >>8028181 responding - actually, I don't think there's any political leanings to be blamed here at all when it comes to Webtoons. It's mostly a pragmatic thing. Webtoons is based in S. Korea and thus the jurisdiction of their laws. S. Korea much like Japan has some really weird grey areas when it comes to what is considered lewd/indecent and pornography is outright banned there. Webtoons is required to adhere to those laws along with whatever else is going on with Google/Apple/what have you. The only real difference is that Tapas allows for blatant censorship bars whereas Webtoons wants everything to look au naturelle with the censorship. As for the BL/GL, that's just because the majority of people who go to these webtoon sites are women, and it's not even close. And THEY want to read that stuff, so naturally Webtoons and other similar sites will play to that effect because they want the readership coming back.
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>>8027746
ONE has sabotaged a generation of aspiring manga artists
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>>8028194
True, they think a "smart" idea is more worth than years of hard work.
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>>8028196
Thats not wrong.
The problem is these people are more in love with the idea of being 'the guy', the idea to them is just a means to that end. They dont have a real creative drive or interest, they just want to have any thing thats famous.
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>>8028193
>Yes, a bikini is considered lewd, so you better cover that up. What? Our favored darlings and korean artists suddenly don't have to abide by any of those rules? Fuck you for noticing
This part is what confused me. It seems to imply anything slightly suggestive is bound to censorship for the Western publishers. Well, I do not intend to do porn or anything like that, but if we are at the MiHoYo level of censorship, then it is fucked.

>>8028186
>>8028193
Here is the thing: I read webtoons on that cursed website. Especially for western stuff, they have been infected by trans and gay stuff for a long time. That also includes feminism and other retardations. You can check comments to see it. Does the character go back in time? Make the character be interested in the girls, and you will see what comes. It is full of extreme left fanatics there, probably mostly women, though not necessarily biological ones. I don't like politics or make it about politics, but the culture of that website is absolutely DEI and anti-anime.
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>>8028194
It is funny watching a number of non-Japanese teens thinking they can make it in the same way as ONE all these years.
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>>8028132
I've been practicing different tree bark, but I can't make it look realistic at all. Or even appealing.
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>>8028238
Take a look at Bill Watterson and how he drew trees for Calvin and Hobbes. He drew them both black and white as well as in color. A nice blend of stylization while still looking somewhat realistic.
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>>8028170
Remember this is a comic, moreover, a "manga" styled comic. So you have "out of the box" visual and 'graphic language' creative tools limited only by your imagination and 'taste'. Don't corner yourself behind invisible walls.
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>>8028205
These people don't realize that the time to get into amateur comics in the west was 25 years ago. MangaPlus and manga contest are right there and noone is picking up any of the beg comics made by 15 year olds because people are looking for actual skill. You keep aiming to be like ONE not realizing that ONE never aimed to some amateur maker to begin with he wanted to be good and he busted his ass until he lucked out with his great writing , the one thing nobody ITT is good at. Your writing all fucking SUCKS and that's exactly why you're all compensating with either porn, ultraviolence and rape, or cynical ass ironyslop comic. You are NOT a one in a million mangaka like ONE. You are a grown ass man posting on 4chud. Sooner or later you people have to stop deluding youselves and come to terms with there being zero market for western amateur comics that look still looks like amateur in the current day.
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>>8028238
I have this collage which features some trees, it's a bit blurry but I hope it will be of some use to you
https://files.catbox.moe/7wstcc.jpg
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>>8028262
Truth mustard gas
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>>8028262
>until he lucked out with his great writing
Anon, I agree with you on basically everything you state here except this. OPM does not have good writing and I say this as somebody who enjoys OPM......... enough. It's literally just another EDF styled comic with a bunch of different superheroes he came up with and a guy with a meta-commentary gimmick. I say this as somebody who's read the original webcomic and the eventual redo by Murata. If OPM is considered great writing, then we truly live in hell.
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>>8028266
He had a gimmick joke and rode the memes to success. Weebs are too underread and oblivious to realize theyre just watching capeshit with big eyes (while they shit on capeshit with small eyes)
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>>8028289
>Yeah, man, I wonder why people don't like Western cape shit
you talk as if people don't see the shit that they do with heroes
>internet gas
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>>8028266
I'm not going to get into a debate about ONEs skills as a mangaka, he's worked on enough well received projects at this point to have proven that a) he's a competent creative and b) he doesn't need Murata's art to carry him. Again, noone on /ic/ will ever become the next ONE and aspiring to be like him because you think him "being bad" and making it means that you can be bad and make it is a recipe for absolute failure.
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>>8028263
Another one. Unfortunately this features alot of duplicates from the last one, but there are some new ones in here and even a few closeups of tree trunks with texture
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>>8028296
Nigger, japanese manga have been pushing alphabet people since the 70s.
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>>8028302
There's a difference between depicting trannies as abnormal, as they do in manga, and depicting them as normal like they do in comics.
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>>8028301
I see you post all these collages all the time, which work is yours?
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>>8028302
With Superman/Batman/Spider-Man/Thor? Or with a completely original character in their own stories?
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>>8028305
I hesitate to say, for fear that my collages and often subsequent rants about manga art techniques are not well received.
If I ever gain any success with my comic, I'll have the confidence to speak with my name.
In the meantime, have another. I don't know if I've posted this one or not
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>>8028306
Didnt they just recently replace the Gundam protagonists with girls?
Lets not forget the blatant tranny propaganda of Ranma, now that these collages have reminded me
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>>8028307
Also, an amusing story about Katsuhiro Otomo's speedlines.
I think most people will agree that, there is something very special about Otomo's speedlines. They have so much more weight and energy than most artist's speedlines.
I recently watched Naoki Urusawa's episode of Manben about Otomo, and in it, Urasawa is soo enthusiastic about the speedlines that Otomo draws, that he gets out a pen and paper and draws some in front of him, excitedly counting the pattern of lines. To express how profound an impact they had on him. I think Otomo is made somewhat uneasy by this but it's all in good fun and passion.
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>>8028306
they just made little mermaid into modern day yurislop
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>>8028308
having a show with it is not equal as pushing it compared with western comics going out of their way to kill all the beloved characters, and marvel/dc using as excuse to kill in their movies too
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>>8028308
>tranny propaganda of Ranma
Its different with Ranma because in that case you had magic springs that would turn you fully into the thing that last drowned in that pool. You fully transform while keeping your mind, but the body is genuinely changed. Works the same exact way with Ranma, with Genma, with Mousse, with Shampoo, with Ryoga. Its nothing like what we have in the real world.
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>>8028311
It's less autistic than I make it out to be, watch it yourself
https://archive.org/details/nhk-anime-manga-videos_202507/NHK+Anime+%26+Manga+videos/Manben+-+Behind+the+Scenes+of+Manga/Season+05/Manben+-+Behind+the+Scenes+of+Manga+-+21+-+Otomo+Katsuhiro.mp4
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>>8028315
Yeah, i know the story.
The conceits of fiction do not change the fact that it is a story about a boy who turns into a girl and gets into sexual hijinks with both genders and the gags do not change that this is presented as positive and fun.
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>>8028238
I'm number one foliage fan >>8027444
When it comes to nature and organic things, smattering the details here and there helps sell the organic feel, but the details aren't randomly scattered. They're concentrated around the edges of the observable areas to sell the form of a round trunk.
Less is more. More details don't make for a more pleasing drawing, it's about where they go. Black and white drawings especially demand attention to where those details belong in order to avoid cluttered pictures.
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>>8028316
Also it kind of bothers me that this is the only episode of Manben in which the guest start doesn't draw a single line. Unless you count the Tezuka episode, but in that case, Tezuka doesn't draw because he was dead. What's his problem?
I wonder if Urasawaa has tried multiple times to get big name artists on his show like Akira Toriyama, Rumiko Takahashi, Eiichiro Oda, Masashi Miskimoto, etc but they rejected him. Manga artists are sensitive creatures.
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>>8028327
Perhaps they are frauds
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>>8028325
Well, there is a corelation between trannies and anime. But also nazism and anime... some times both... like if trannies and chuds are different faces of the same coin even if they hate eachother.
I think that if you are terminally online and anime is the only thing that you consume you will turn retarded. One wants to find a moe anime girl to marry and the other wants to be a moe anime girl.
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>>8028325
Yeah, man, those old anime "propaganda" are just like the ones we have today, right?
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>>8028331
Nazis were pretty infamous crossdressers, most of them were not military but instead theater kids and jewish
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>>8028325
Fuck off mutt, you are the only one dreaming every night of bbc fucking your wife.
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>>8028334
>nazis were jews
I know some of them were in the higher ranks but I doubt the soldiers were
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>>8028337
>pajeet moment
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>>8028338
They werent actually part of the military. There were German soldiers and Nazi "officers"
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>>8028329
There's a peculiar character trait to manga artists, they are extremely private when it comes to the creation of their work. They're not private about their techniques... but rather the physical act of creating. They cannot dare to be seen when making their manga.

It's not because they're a fraud. I think it's because the very nature of creative work is an intensely vulnerable experience. To put your heart on the page, you must be totally comfortable, you must feel secure. Even in the artists Urasawa does manage to rope onto his show, he's forced to set up convoluted fixed cameras, in hopes that the artist, for a short moment, forgets they're there at all. There's no possibility to have a live camera man in the work studio to watch them work. They must be alone in their studio, hidden from all the world.

Even when they have assistants, the main artist is often still hidden from them, they pile up books and stationary around their desks to conceal themselves from the assistants. And in the case of Tezuka, he wasn't even in the same room as them.
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>>8028339
Nobody watching a fun comedy like Ranma about your sick shit, mutt. You understand that?
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Manga has had trannies for decades. Ouran High-school Host Club had a tranny in the 00s, Angel Sancurary has a tranny around 90s, Grell from black butler was a tranny made in the 00s, one of the gung ho guns from trigun in the 00s, firepunch had a tranny in the 10s, and Oscar lived life as a 'man' over 50 years ago and that just what I remember off the top of my head. I swear this general is full of people serverly underread faggots who want to pose as mangaka but don't actually engage with the medium outside of the top 10 battle shonen and rapeslop seinen.
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>>8028345
the point >>8028289
melty start here >>8028296
why don't you address this one? >>8028313
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>>8028341
You know, every day Im more convinced the nazis werent that monsters towards jews and most of the crimes towards them were caused by nazi partisans in the east not germans. If anything hitler tried to spare them
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>>8028345
Japs are occupied by the alphabet country for over 80 years.
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Does anyone draw here?
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>>8028346
>Decades later and nothing changed
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>>8028353
I had erased that show from my mind, you moron, why did you have to remind me of that trash?
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>>8028263
>>8028326

Thanks for the advice! I tried differently. For some reason it still doesn't look like it belongs in a manga to me. It doesn't feel like a person would fit aesthetically next to this tree, more a cartoon character.
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>>8028363
It's hard to say with just a single tree on its own. against a white background. Try adding a manga style character beside it, see if it fits.
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>>8028346
>gay shit >:(
>gay shit japan :)
This >>8028296 is notsuperman, that is his son and western cape shit has ALWAYS made what if comics and spin offs. You're only pretending its different and an attack on western values because everything has been infected with ternimal culture war syndrome. Comic as alway has politics in them, but who do you think were writing most of these comics? Because it sure as fuck wasn't the conseverative KEK
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>>8028371
Yes, when you hit the market with the Comics Code Authority for 50 years, it becomes difficult to develop anything else
but why don't you address this one? >>8028313
or this >>8028333
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>>8028367
It just doesn't seem to look the aesthetic.
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>>8028367
nta but I wanted to give it a go myself
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>>8028379
I think this particular example doesn't work because the lineweights don't match up. The lines on the figure are thinner than the lines of the tree. This is a matter of zoom.
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>>8028379
In my opinion, the line is too thick, especially the inner line
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>>8028381
This works really nicely. Probably because the character is stylized too and the screentones.
>>8028382
>>8028383
I'll focus on more thin line weights then and see if that helps.
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>>8028345
I don't disagree but Ouran Highschool did not have trannies. It was one girl pretending to be a boy so she could work there, she was still straight.
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>>8028326
I liked your trees anon. Try drawing them in trad, it's better for texturising it
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>>8028378
You already got your answer: the medium that always included politics in them included politics you didnt like because you're obsessed with culturewar slop. Little has change in way of comic messaging but you want to believe otherwise because you are privy to muh Jewish sorcery or some other nodra2 shit. None of this will help you make it in comics btw. Remember what was said earlier >>8028262 you can't worm you way into success by being a western faggot who draws like dogshit.
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>>8028388
Haruhi's dad and his friends are the trannies, you'd know that if you hadn't watch it on 2x speed and muted.
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Guys, stop arguing. I believe we can all make it if we try our best! Ganbare!
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>>8028262
You have no right to say all that.
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>>8028289
>just watching capeshit with big eyes (while they shit on capeshit with small eyes)
>Little has change in way of comic messaging
Yes, you're a buthurt tard defending the "honor" of American comics
>it's just the same as back in the time
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>>8028363
Like I told the mehitable guy, it's just an example. You can stylize things in a myriad of ways but i'm just trying to show you how dividing up the details can give a good result. That collage is a great resource. When I was learning I copied Kaiji's backgrounds of all things.
Here's a few more examples from my work. In my experience, when you draw a tree you're usually not drawing a carbon copy of the same ones in every scene. Naturally when you end up having to think about backgrounds in general you'll likely end up making it conform to your needs.
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>>8028405
comic?
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Is MangaPlus worth sending work to?
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>>8028407
>comic
It's called "manga". Thank you.
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>>8028405
I like these. The hatching is really nice and something I'm trying to get down. Its really hard. >>8028390
That'd be a good idea if I were doing everything traditionally. It looks good on paper.
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>>8028404
Im sure your kill all jews homo aids comic will be all the rage in the femboy nazi servers once you're finally able to hold a pencil without crying.
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>>8028407
Hunters himera ants arc, i guess
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>>8028449
>jews out of nowhere
you lost
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>>8028418
>It's called "manga"
Not in Japan
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>>8028255
Haha. Thanks Peril. I'll keep that in mind.
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How do you ink that?
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Started storyboarding... Shit is hard. Like, I often struggle with what camera angles to use, what panels might be worth it, and so on. It is difficult to bring to life what I envision. And my story starts with a heavy environment scene, so I can't abuse much of the faces in the void.
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>>8028430
Most people can't tell the difference and just assume it's digital. Regardless of that it's all about technique, you can do a fine job either way just by grabbing a brush that's close enough to trad and paying attention to line widths.

I can't say it's easy at all. This chapter was drawn in 2022 and even since then my major bottleneck is having the patience to sit down and think through where lines ought to go, "thinking while you draw" and planning it out. I think most people get filtered right at making the lines adhere to the form. People notice when it looks good, so there's some direct pay off.
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>>8027721
thanks, I will def look into this
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>>8027553
Priscilla's face needs more Loomis. One eye is bigger than the other. Her feet are to simple of a triangle shape given the style and the anatomy looks pretty wonky overall. Your composition and overall presentation looks interesting but I think you definitely do better with your fundamentals
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While I like manga making and want to tell stories, I noticed a small difference between me and many other artists in this path... I don't enjoy coming up with new character designs. Many are the exact opposite, they have a wonderful time coming up with new character designs, even without having any story for them.
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>>8028637
Ngmi
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>>8028637
>I don't enjoy coming up with new character designs.
But that's......... like......... the fun part. If it's really giving you trouble, pick a real life civilization that is the closest to what you're thinking of and then use that as a springboard to jump into whatever it is you're going to do. If it's something set in the modern day or is less fantasy based then that's even easier - just think about what the character would be like and what they would wear from the options normally available in that time period and based on how much money they have.
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>>8027926
Depends if I like your fetish or not.
Please add rape.
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>>8028663
Based goblin slayer fighter enjoyer
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>>8028663
I was going to ask you which comics in /mmg/ you think need it, but I feel like you're just going to say "all of them."
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>>8028654
After all, I just like tears in the rain.

>>8028662
It is less about struggle and more about... There are too many characters. It is tiresome to create designs for all of them... Those things need hair, eyes, clothes, colors, details, and so on.

On a slightly off-topic note, it is fun to see Murata streams where he struggles to draw Tatsumaki properly, redoing her a couple of times, only to proceed and draw an egg shape and have Saitama done in a few seconds.
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>>8028697
>There are too many characters
................... are you the anon who's doing a fighting comic that's Baki reminiscent? Because I cannot for the life of me think of anybody that has THAT many characters that it becomes a chore.
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>>8028702
I am not the Baki anon. But for curiosity, where do you draw your line for:
>THAT many characters

I am a world-builder retard, so anything I manage to think is bound to have TOO MANY characters.
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>>8028708
The line differs from person to person. The real question is whether you can juggle having XYZ number of people while maintaining their interests, personalities, weaknesses, etc....... while also making them genuinely important to the plot. The first lesson of anything when it comes to planning or writing a story is to always be willing to kill your darlings. Always cut the fat.
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>>8028708
You don't even sound like a storyteller. If you're not that then what are you doing trying to make comics
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>>8027926
Reminder to never incorporate any fetishistic sexual elements in your work if you want your manga to sell.
Made in Abyss could have been a multi millionaire IP with dozens of collaboration campaigns e.g. theme park, travel, kids toy, etc..
But the mangaka choose to burn it all to ground because he wants to draw porn of underage children.
He could have been an ultra rich guy.
What a retard.
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>>8028801
whats so good about that manga?
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>>8028802
The designs, the worldbuilding, the lore, literally everything beside the child characters.
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Guy, tries the slop machine to gaslight me into selling my ass out?
So Kishimoto can wait 5 years and take all the rights back and own the full Naruto franchise or what?
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>>8028832
This offends the western sensibilities.
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>>8028834
How much would i have to pay a Japanese parasite of a lawyer, so his trainee can put my (by now not existent) contract with shonen jump through chat gpt?
How can i know, the lawyer is not working with shonen jump? If there is a juristic battle, the court will side with the Japanese company regardless what the contract says, right?
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>>8028809
Maybe the child characters are necessary part of the plot. You aren't the cook, you dont' know what he has planned
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>>8028860
>no children = no made in abyss
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>>8028866
Yes, maybe the story wouldn't work with older characters.
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>>8028860
>>8028870
None of the pedoshit ever added anything to the narrative. It's just in the story because he jacks to children.
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>>8028801
Yeah what a shame about made in abyss. The world and the adventure vibe was peak but the raunchy scenes were cringe as fuck though.
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he is a god so it doesnt matter
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do you still have the comic you drew when you were a grade school kid
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>>8028939
Only pedophiles and anime onlys care about him
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>>8028730
Who the fuck sounds like a storyteller on 4chan?
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What is up with these redditors around here lately? Though, I think the Made in Abyss schizo is the same fag from previous threads.

Japanese are based. Both Made in Abyss and Berserk are huge successes, and both authors don't give a fuck about Western feminism/trans/DEI values, and they love drawing cute lolis. Fetishes have been part of manga since its inception. Even Dragon Ball Z had some shenanigans.

The influx of massive faggots to 4chan boards is nauseating.
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What if you could draw 16 pages in 2-3 days?
You would have 3-4 days in a week to do what you want, playing idolmaster, watching anime and stuff. Or you could start a second series.
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>>8028809
>literally everything beside the child characters.
You can't be serious
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How do I shade? Crosshatch or halftone?
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Guys, i had a very nice idea for Cape shit deconstruction.
Something like The Boys and Invincible, but with an original spin on the idea.
Can i publish it in America?
How much would it cost if someone would draw it? Or should i do it myself?
>>8027926
>Do you think it's okay to insert your fetish into your work even if the story isn't porn related?
That's actually pretty interesting. What about a fetish and not my fetish.
The idea is my mc is bullied by a girl, her bf and their clique in the beguinning.
I have 2 versions i my head, one is straight bullieng. I don't know, maybe boring, for me it is.
The other version is with sexuall undertones, like the girl is sadistic and my mc is somewhat liking that. Like he gets an errection when she uses him as an ashtray. He is depressed bocouse his cildhood gf died and he is like oh no i hate myself and im suicidal, but im too big of a pussy to do something about it, so a crazy bitch that treats me like shit, injures and degrades me feels like a sublimation for my dark desiers...
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>>8029029
>What about a fetish but not my fetish.
What i mean by that, that's not really my cup tea. I was never into tsunderes for example. But it is sort of a fetish, is it bad for business or what?
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>>8029031
No this is a bad idea.
Ask yourself, why do people include their fetishes into their work? What even is a fetish anyway? How do we explain this behaviour?
To me, this is an expression of ones deepest desires, their true unfiltered passions. The kind of person that puts their heart on the page does so without rationale or excuse. They simply express, and along with that come things that are sometimes strange, like fetishes.
But it is the very compulsion that leads to the greatest masterpieces. What lies deep within our hearts, if we can express it, is what is the most touching in a story, the most meaningful. If you cannot put your heart onto the page, you cannot make something truly worthwhile.
Series like Made in Abyss succeed despite the author's poorly disguised fetishes. For some people it is actually the appeal, but that's beside the point.
The work comes from the heart, that's why it's good, that's why nobody else could have made it. The fetish in it exists almost as an inconvenient byproduct of such raw unfiltered self expression.

To include a fetish in a work that isn't the result of such self expression would be pointless. What you make would neither appeal to you, nor anybody else save for a few degenerates, and even then, unless you understand their fetish as well as they do, you probably won't pull it off well enough for them to crank their hog to it.
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>>8028413
No one? It seems to have huge prizes monthly:

>Gold Award: 1,000,000 JPY + official publication on the main MANGA Plus service.
>Silver Award: 300,000 JPY + official publication on main MANGA Plus.
>Bronze Award: 100,000 JPY + official publication on main MANGA Plus.
>Creator Award: 30,000 JPY (for notable entries).
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>>8029080
What are the criteria? Can i send in my comic with bad hatching?
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Can one learn to draw cape shit without American jeans?
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>>8029014
Where's your light source? How bright is it? start there.

>>8028991
Do you think drafting wikipedia entries is the same as writing a story with a beginning middle and end? Be so real.
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>>8029083
There is a FAQ: https://mangaplus-creators.jp/help/#help-creators-category

Relevant for you might be:
>Can I submit a draft or a name before inking?
>You can submit a draft, name, and a Manga drawn with pencil. However, your work might not be published if we consider it is improper as a Manga. (For example, it is considered improper if it does not contain illustrations or the drawing is incomprehensible.)
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>>8029093
>Do you think drafting wikipedia entries
I have actual stories, retard, not only world-building ideas. And it was not even the point of the discussion.
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>>8029094
I mean i'm trying to learn the classical American style. Just without color.
And i don't speak Japanese, i don't even speak proper English.
Hypothetically i would write the thing in German and it would look like American comic. Does it even makes sense to apply then?
I mean realistically speaking the biggest problem will be me not finishing anything, but you know...
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>>8029096
alright, pitch me your characters.
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How are anons storyboards in terms of details? Do you set up as much as you can while doing the draft, or do you go as crudely as possible and define things better later when doing the actual line art? Do you indicate a background?
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>>8029199
I get it more accurate than not when I draft. Unless I'm working on a throwaway panel I ALWAYS do the background. I've tried drafting the storyboard fast and loose before as an experiment but I've learned I pay the price for it when it comes time to actually draw. Spending the time earlier on actually speeds me up later.
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Guys i'm watching David Finch's videos, i quite like his style. That's what i imagine when i hear superhero comics.
But then i wanted to check out something modern. Absolute Batman seems to be very popular.
I looked it up and the main artist is weird for a soperheros comic, he draws tumbler noses and overall his inking style is very digital. But it looks nothing like David Finch, but more like an lgbt-comic. Maybe it is, i only watched the pictures.
Then i saw on wiki the series has many other artists and like all of them are very indie, i would call them avant-garde or postmodern.
The covers look very different, the covers look more like David Finch. The comic itself is very weird. Not very ugly perse but very feminine.
Is masculine style comic not more en vogue or what?
I'm trying to get the hatching style right, which is hard, but it seems nobody draws like that anymore?
P.S. skipping through Absolute Batman was such a shitty experience, it's all noise, the style is switching up all the time.
I really don't understand American "culture" it's like you guys try to make every aspect of it as shitty as possible on purpose. What a luck i'm a weeb. Japan thing good, unironically.
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>>8029199
I don't get storyboards. I tried to draw them, but than i changed up so much while drawing it did 0 sense. At least that was the case for me while working digitally. You can make the page small and work on it like on a thumbnail.
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>>8027553
This looks great anon. It's nice to see someone in here thinking of their work as more than a practice manga and actually trying to sell it. I hope it does well!
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>>8029080
It's a scam.
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>>8029094
>or the drawing is incomprehensible.
Well that eliminates half the people here
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>>8029102
>I mean i'm trying to learn the classical American style
I gotchu
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>>8029291
It's cool but a bit too old school.
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>>8029302
All the guys you think you want to learn from, learned from that.
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>>8029288
Mean.

>>8029286
Elaborate.
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>>8029304
David Finch mentions it in the video course im watching right now. But i have no nostalgia feelings attached to American history.
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>>8029317
It has nothing to do with nostalgia, it's about learning the basics.
You want to learn to do a backflip but you can't even stand up.
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>>8029320
I reject your hypothesis.
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>>8029322
Never gonna make it, then. Of course, I knew that from your first post.
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>>8029325
>Never gonna make it, then.
Ignoring a crab's advice, is the only way to go.
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>>8029325
pretty sure this is our german schizo, so dont bother. Reading through his posts and rants like >>8029265
theres no logic. Wants to learn American style > given best book to learn American style, that literally all pros recommend -> doesn't want to learn from it because he has no nostalgia for American history? What does that have to do with anything?
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>>8029329
Not just American style, but specifically "classical" American style >>8029102
Then responds that literally exactly what he said he wants is too old.

What a retard
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>>8029080
it doesnt seem to have any actual discovery on the site. every comic in the top ten is viewed by fans of the manga creator.
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>>8029333
this is an English speaking forum sir
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>>8029564
So why the fuck are you here?
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>>8029291
Have you ever actually read this book? It's mostly a generic how-to-draw book with a shallow coating of superheroes. It's not a proper style guide for working at Marvel. It's just a cash grab. Like Arnold Schwarzenegger making a "how to be strong just like me!" video course, and it's him explaining the bare fundamentals of fitness rather than a deep dive into anything more substantial.
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>>8029586
pic, do you really think a book that's teaching you how to draw a box in one point perspective is going to come anywhere close to providing any concrete info on drawing in the Marvel way?
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>>8029591
>>8029586
Yeah im also not a huge fan of the marvel way, but its not awful
Studying Loomis, alongside general anatomy, and copying the comics you want to emulate is probably a much better course.

The guy hes replying to is being pretty confusing though, and looking over his messages, I'm not certain if he knows what he wants
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>>8029593
As for right now im figuring out the logic behind chiaroscuro shadows and how to feather them out to convey form. Which is hard to understand as i am familiar with the French Academic method which technically works very differently.
The crab asshole is recommending the meme childrens book just to troll me.
The style in the book is from the 50s, it’s completely out of fashion by now no one is drawing like that except maybe for boomer bait.
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tfw been making my mangas for 5 years and putting them online and still getting 0 likes...
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>>8029597
you asked about classic american comics, 50s american comics is what people think of when you say "classic" american comics. What do you want then? Do you mean older inking styles like Charles Dana Gibson in picrel?

>>8029591
also yes a book that's teaching you how to draw a box in one point perspective is useful, you have to start somewhere, the books fine. pyw I'm curious what it looks like seeing as you seem to have skipped the fundamentals

>>8029604
post them, we'll be able to see what your doing wrong and how you could potentially improve
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>>8029604
it's a cold world
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>>8029606
Of course you have to start somewhere. But drawing high level Marvel style is not a start, it's an end. You won't be able to draw like that for atleast 5-10 years. If your "how to draw like Marvel" book has you learning one point perspective, it's safe to say that it's not going to teach you to draw like Marvel
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>>8029604
Getting 0 attention on something is like being in a pit. There are countless hundreds of thousands, millions of people with 0 attention, in that pit, you have no exposure. It doesn't matter how good your comic is, you are in a sea of noise, nobody is looking at you.
However, if you can step even the slightest amount out of that pit, you immediately become the top 0.01%. Having 10 likes on something makes you top 0.01%. And the journey from there upwards is a million times easier than being in that pit.
Focus on getting out of that pit. And making your posts more interesting isn't the way to do that, becuase nobody is looking at them. Get people to look at your posts first.
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>>8029606
>What do you want then?
I posted examples before, i want to make stuff like that.
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ok so your below?
>>8029086
>>8028485
>>8027633


This is an anonymous message board so people cant tell what you posted and didnt post. You said classic style so people assumed you meant classic comics.

>>8027633
is actually pretty solid though dude, good job. Keep doing stuff like that and you'll make it
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>>8029625
I'm trying to get the logic right. Hard for me to draw such stylized shadows as i never do it this way. In Academic art the shadows get always bounce light. You focus on the termenator not on the solid shapes of the shadow.

Batman is not mine. But the logic behind such rendering is more clear to me, but it looks good in pencil, i don't know if you can properly ink it.
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>>8029606
>post them,
here's the last manga page I made. you can say what you want.
>>8029607
tell me about it
>>8029615
yeah I actually got a decent amount of likes for awhile. about 50 max? but it dwindled back to 0 again.
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I learned to describe soft forms, pic related is me trying to use mora visible hatching, normally i would draw even softer, with softer gradients.
I have a hard time to comprehend abstract black shapes for shadows.
I was in an art store, i bought some very thin fine liners, 0.05-0.03mm. They skip quite a lot. I thought maybe i can use them to simulate softer pencil shading. But it's still ink and can be scanned and cleaned up afterwords.
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>>8029643
thats really good. do you draw manga?
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>>8029644
I tried, for years, actually. I did world building for a shonen over many years.
But lately i gave up on the manga art style. It's just too abstract, my brain don't get abstract shapes.
I watch anime since im a child, but till today the style never felt natural to draw.
I thought American style is much closer too reality, but it's still too abstract. I don't know, maybe im just retarded.
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>>8029651
why are you in mmg then?
its hard to believe these are both you. how far apart in time are these drawings?
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>>8029651
nta but,
What do you mean the manga art style?
This is why you're failing to get it. Because there is no manga art style. It's stylization to be sure, but it's not a replacement of realism. When you draw an anime eye, you're not throwing out your knowledge of real eyes to draw some cartoony shapes of an eye. The anime eye is still an eye, it is just as real but it is viewed through the lens of stylization.
It's supra-realism, as opposed to not-realism.
Draw an eye, or anything else, a real one, but stylishy, not cartoonishly, stylishy.
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>>8029654
>That said, everyone is welcome here.
Not your safe space Chud.
My story is shonen jump influenced.
The skull is from last year, the manga drawing are from this week.
>>8029658
Nah, for faces it's all the same. Some styles have pretty realistic bodys, though.
The fundamental problem is that layer of abstraction that lays over the whole thing. The face is a shape, the nose is a shape, the eye is a shape. There is no physical connection between them. The nose is placed in a white space, the size, the angle, the form all of that is just an abstraction. And i guess for some people it's freedom, but not for me.
If you draw a face in an Academic style, everything is connected. it can look sketchy and stylized, but its like a puzzle. The cheek turns, than a fold, then the nose, than the other cheek, everything is connected, the angels the lighting. I get that. If i place my nose wrong, i can see that.
Like if the nose and the lips are too far apart the philtrum looks weird. So i can move the nose, or the lips to make it look right. Ir if i want the face to look weird i can make it even longer.
But in anime and other abstract styles. You have the shape of the face and its in most cases just white. There is no representation of the form of the cheek, there is often no philtrum at all, no upper lip, no under lip, just the slit between the lips. And you have to place it relying on your asian jeens, or talent, or i don't fucking know.
it's random, sometimes i place the slit and it looks okey, most of the times it does not. I have no idea why.
It feels like I'm playing a slot machine.
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>>8029666
It's not a shape! It's a nose! Look at them, look closer! This is the part that westerners miss all the time. It's not a cartoon, it's not a replacement of realism. It's totally realistic... just drawn with the lens of a style.
If you think of it as just a cartoonish shape, you'll never pull it off. You have to draw it as though it's real... but viewed through a lens that stylizes things.
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>>8029666
anime still has 3D form it's not really abstract
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>>8029672
I can't, it really feels like wasting my time.
I thought i can get the style, but it's just like another language, i'm to old to learn properly.
A white statue is what my brain craves, just form, nothing else, no abstract bullshit, not even hatching. Just light photones hitting the surface of the stone and reflecting back onto my retina.
Maybe i should draw a manga about Greek statues, i will never understand your picture.
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>>8029677
>anime still has 3D form it's not really abstract
But for me it works only in one direction.
I have zero problems reading manga and watching anime.
I see the drawing i understand the 3d form behind it.
But if i have a 3d form and i have to translate it to manga, i can't.
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>>8028049
>>8028663
How the mighty has fallen.
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grinding away... didnt finish the chapter this month but I'm close. I still have to design the swimsuits.

summer technically ends september 22nd so I'm still safe
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>>8029699
Are those 2 pages combined or is it a webtoon?
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>>8029701
two pages stacked vertically just to share here
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>>8029702
Got it. I think your faces look much better now, more like anime, less like Sinix. Even though i like Sinix.
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>>8029704
thanks, I'm glad its noticeable
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>>8029642
Oh, it's you Plemin anon. I personally like your comics and think they're cute but the artistic skill shown in your comics doesn't do anything to make people think netter of it. Everything is depicted very two dimensionally (heh), there isnt much in the way of interesting poses or camera angles, etc. It looks like a perfect carbon copy of every single deviantart baby's first comic and thus nobody gives it a chance.
Additionally, some of the plot progression is a bit hard to follow for some of the comics, or what DOES happen seems to literally be "and then something completely random happened, isn't that wild?!?!"
Despite all this, again I can't help but like your comic a bit as it's full of SOVL, but if I were to analyze it dispassionately these are my immediate hard stops that I believe prevent your comic from getting more traction.
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>>8029666
It is just stylized, anon.
>it's random
It is really not, there are just a number of proportions to play around with to position the face features and create characters. If you study anime, you would know.
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>>8029755
>It is really not
Obviously there is a system, many people can draw manga and anime that looks great.
>If you study anime, you would know.
I have for many years. The first time i actually tried to draw more seriously was me copying Nihei, i tried for years to draw like him.
From now on i not a weeb anymore, fuck that.
>Capture (1).png
Retrospective, such nonsense tutorials did more harm than good. The let you think there i scheme you can learn, but there is non. Just intuition. It's basically pic related, really.
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>>8029824
>>8029564
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>>8029824
>I have for many years.
You have not.
>i tried for years to draw like him.
You have not, twice.
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>>8029699
Keep up the good work, I dig the designs and you do a good job making things expressive
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>>8029755
This is stupid. Nobody draws like this.
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>>8029942
It's a diagram to show you how despite being stylized, all the common ways that mangaka have drawn a nose are simply just simplified abstractions of an existing point somewhere on a real nose. Nobody is telling you to draw a million lines and chart out the nose exactly at all. Where on earth did you get that idea?
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Fuck, I need to draw a battlefield full of bodies and stuff.
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>>8029942
I can't even fathom an answer to your stupidity.



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