Post here if you need a REDLINE, REDRAW or a REPAINT or if you want to help other anonsMake sure to specify what area you're struggling withAll skill levels welcome
Not looking for a redraw but advice on how to improve my figure drawings.I've been drawing from photos and doing gestures/silhouettes everyday this year and I'm still no better than I was last year.
>>8027825i think they're good but try spending less time per figure some guy said it looks doll like maybe going faster will help with making the pose flow better
>>8027825I've seen your inspiration map, you draw nothing like those artists and don't even attempt to. If you want to draw in your own style, you've accomplished it and it sucks balls
/3RT/ sounds like a dumb name.>>8027825they way you draw lines (thick lines, lots of straights) looks ugly. especially since it looks like your goal is curvy coomer figures.
>>8027829>/3RT/ sounds like a dumb name.any better idea?
>>8027828You also failed to read the fucking post next to the map about the artists I WANT to emulate, you illiterate retard. I literally said things like mechs and furries aren't things I necessarily want to draw, but those just happened to be SOME of the artists that inspired me.Jesus I literally typed a list of artists I specifically wanted my art to look like but you keep bringing up that influence map and ignoring the posts that explained it.
>>8027828Why is /ic/ so aggressive these days
>>8027831/beg/
>>8027831just /RRR/ or /redline/
>>8027847slow board so it only takes one guy i've seen hundreds of posts by one guy in one thread get deleted on other boards
>>8027852>/RRR/SIR
>>8027810>Make sure to specify what area you're struggling withalso your goals, like what style/mood/genre you are going for. so people can give you advice that actually aligns with your goals.
>>8027831Keep it. /3RT/ is clever because it almost spells ART. It's a lot better than /RRR/
>>8027810This is what /beg/ is for. Another useless thread.If you want to fix the board kill/ignore discords but you can't since they are the ones ignoring new people thus creating a deadboard full of circlejerking and names.External input is always cancer. Now let me copy paste
>>8027853>slow boardDead board* The ppm is abysmal, only /beg/ gets a constant influx of new posts and the discord circlejerk constantly ignores the actual /begs/ in the /beg/ thread while shitting on the few people that still post their work for whatever reason.Not like /dad/ /alt/ /draw/ /drawshitpile/ are any different.No community no board
>>8027831/R3T/ is better than /3RT/
>>8027836Stagnate Others gave you good advice too, but you're too far up your ass It's all studies, never a finished work
Can someone help me with the folds here? Someone told me they look wrong but idk what to do, maybe its my line art, for reference >>8026959
>>8027853>>8027871tho board's faster than in its heyday, dumb zoomers
>>8027831/Niggerline/
no drawings posted
>>8027914his skirt looks like it's glued to his pants, the rest I'm not sure
>>8027914easier to draw the body and then the folds
yeah I'd like to see how shitty this is
>>8027978what happened to her left hand
>>8027875>never finished workRetard.
>>8027978skin looks muddyid make the skin more saturated in the shadows and a bit more redif shes blonde and blue eyed, fairer skin makes more sense too
>>8027978Looks off and not drawn, AI.
>>8028002yes
>>8027978>Make sure to specify what area you're struggling withFucking retard hope you get raped by horses
>>80278313RT sounds like Turd, so yeah i agree to change it like these anon suggestions>>8027852>>8027873
>>8028020Op here gonna be r3t next thread
>>8028040why not RRR? Like the anime? Anime site?>implying it's going to last
>>8027978The anatomy is poorly rendered in your piece.Help me in this thread in return for this redline
>>8028077This thread***>>8026388
>>8027917It's only faster in terms of number of post per thread, not number of posters who draw or post work.
>>8028091>it's only faster in term of things that can be quantified to prove me wrong, muh fee fees tho
No reason for this general, when we have /beg/. more split, no gains because it is the same crowd.
>>8027810>redline>awful offmodel goon trashgo back to /beg/
>>8028117>>8028121samefag
>>8027978the way you did her side rolls irks me >>8028081nta i've looked but i dont know, you should try /his/ or reddit honestly
>>8028152 forgot img
>>8027825Try this. There's a feeling behind it that if you can capture it with your own hand, you might smooth out your gestures. GL.
>>8027831>/HRT/
>>8028191The thread isn't about you
>>8027810why draw over the good drawing >>8027392 instead of redlining the original >>8027004 that needs it desperately more?Also if you're just picking from /beg/, why not keep it in /beg/?
I love the dunning kruger that comes out of these threads, and that includes what I do myself.
>>8028209needed to put tits in the op for attention, dont take it too seriously>>8028209>Also if you're just picking from /beg/, why not keep it in /beg/?where the fuck am i supposed to pick from when the thread doesnt exist yet?
>>8027825I gave you this same advice like a year ago, but I'll say again.You have so many bad habits it would take me a while to point out everything, so I'll tell you what to do instead. Stop trying to stylize the figure and try to copy more accurately when doing it from photos. Make sure to get the proportions right because yours are extremely inconsistent. Only then you can begin thinking about the forms.Use a different pen, one that you struggle with, to force your brain to switch its mindset. Oh, and if you've ever head about line economy and you're trying to follow it, just completely forget about it until you've improved because it's not doing you good.
>chicken scratch redlineasg gives better redlines thanks
>>8028268No one improves on /asg/, even when given redlines.
>>8027825Gesture will help you. You draw nice mannequins but they are very very stiff.
>>8028272Redlines help your understand and solve problems that are specific/grounded, which is good if you're not a beg. Begs have problems with basic, broader concepts, and redlines are not going to help them very much in that case.
>>8028281I completely agree, which is the biggest issue with /asg/ because 95% of the posters there are beginners who cannot utilize a proper redline.
>>8028281It is probably equally helpful/unhelpful, as long as you can comprehend the change. For example, a person who draws like this [ ] will look at something like this [ ] as just a better drawing. But if you just move the eyes a bit lower, that is a change they can comprehend. Similarly, the person who painted the girl can see the different colors and change what they pick if they agree it looks better. But if you go full Sargent on them, they will just get sad.
>>8028281redlines do not help, its like math the answer sheet doesn't help you understand the problem.
I remember that redliner who was making like 5 redlines a day on his redline threads. He filled the image limit all by himself. This is a lame travesty.
>>8028317yes they do
just fucking enable fappe tyme and hide all posts without images so you can ignore all the nodraw retardsyes this post included
>>8028317>like math the answer sheet doesn't help you understand the problemyou're brown
>>8028319He was a /pro/ before he got ousted. But this was before 2020 iirc.
>>8028317?????????????????????????????Then master studies are also.... pointless? You are the niggerest nigger I have ever meet on this board.
>>8028368before 2020?I meant these threads from a few years agohttps://warosu.org/ic/thread/6650734https://warosu.org/ic/thread/6690796https://warosu.org/ic/thread/6708812
>>8027958cute
>>8028360I'm black>>8028370if you think redlines and studies are the same, you are truly helpless.
>>8028385This guy did redlines on /ic/ not sure when.https://exhentai.org/g/2788523/a46c011e85/
Here's the thing about redlines: it's almost impossible to know how helpful they are, because the person asking rarely follows up with applying the advice given to them. They either realize how much work is ahead of them and abandon the piece in favor of a new one; or if the redline is particularly detailed and well drawn, they just use that as a basis instead of doing the work themselves. It's probably better to keep redlines as basic as possible to illustrate concepts.
>>8028705It's possible to know they weren't helpful when the begtard that got the redline makes the same mistake again. It happens way too often.
>>8028479>if you think redlines and studies are the same, you are truly helpless.Says the baddraw
>>8028705Redlines are a goyslop concept to begin with.There are corrections like some Japanese channels do, where they completely repaint/redraw the thing to actually fix its issues and make it look better as a finished piece while making it biased to their own style.Then there are anime pipeline style corrections where you redraw the lineart on a separate layer in the exact style the anon was trying to attempt.Redlines are just low effort slop where it always looks badly made but that's excused cause it's le educational or something. You should be posting pngs of your corrections on a new layer and make them actually high quality finished art level lines so that anons can learn, but obviously this is too high effort for the redlinoors farming /ic/ cred, it's much easier to slop some vague lines onto the page to illustrate "concepts" instead of actually making artistic corrections.>It's probably better to keep redlines as basic as possible to illustrate concepts.Those aren't "redlines", that's edutainment /ic/ street cred farming stuff.
>>8028705I had a different experience or outlook on this, but I just read the old threads, and fuck me, these OR's are funny aren't they?
>>8028705>if the redline is particularly detailed and well drawn, they just use that as a basiswhich is how the animation pipeline works, and results in junior animators growing in skill from each correction
>>8028745This is probably true. But what's DEFINITELY true is 90% of people posting for crit don't know what the problem is they're asking about. >You should be posting pngs of your corrections on a new layer and make them actually high quality finished art level lines so that anons can learnHalf these anon's know fuck all about style, how do you expect a red liner redoing the art in their style to help them anymore than trying to demonstrate the real problem in simple terms?The solution is that either dumbass anons think critically, read the sticky and realise their problem is fundamental, OR red liners carry on posting "unhelpful" help to jerk themselves off at how good they are and how bad anon is (this is rarely the case btw, most of the time they just wanna help or warm up or some shit). Which do you think is more conducive to progress here?
>>8028756> But what's DEFINITELY true is 90% of people posting for crit don't know what the problem is they're asking about.Yeah I was mostly dunking on the redliners, but the beginners and people asking for corrections themselves need to be more based too.> how do you expect a red liner redoing the art in their styleThe issue is that if it's an actually good high effort style that anon is attempting (which granted is almost never so on /ic/) the redlooner himself cannot draw in it so they make it look like slop (biased towards their style) but excuse that with it being educational or something.I have posted traces of pro Japanese works in these threads before and redlooners lack any discernment at all to see that it's a piece way beyond their skill level. They post sloppy lines drawn over it to show how "it's supposed to be done" without getting close to the quality of the lines I traced at all. Idk why they think this is acceptable at all, if you can't draw better than the person you're correcting even at the most obvious level you should not be farming /ic/ street cred by showing "concepts".
>>8028749Ok but in this image the guy putting up perspective lines on a pose where limbs are bent at different angles is the true retard
I want the muscles to be smooth and clear, but I find I draw them way too smooth and clear, its just open space. its supposed to have more subtle details to suggest things, and scratchy details than this, even if i want it smooth.
like for example, this one has gooder 3D shapyness in the belly, but it still just needs a bit more "scratchy" detail I feel, like say in the arms
the scratchy lines on the belly are the kind im thinking of, but I don't know how to do it. I want to be able to "suggest" forms better, especially for the belly and arm.
Still in the planning phase, don't want to cleanup yet. How can I improve? Thanks in advance.
It's already red, so a blackline(?) would be swell
>>8028953I just noticed the t-rex Arms on my own, but if there's anything else please highlight
>>8028825something like this or no cigar?
>>8028981the perspective of the implied ground plane vs the perspective of the shoes, makes it feel like the far leg is floatingI'd redline but I think you are skilled and able to see it
>>8028999it is helping just to see it, thanks
>>8029006Yup, you're correct. Come to think of it, for this sort of deep squat, both feet would have to be turned outwards too, so I have to change the far leg anyways. Thanks for the pointer!
>>8028874this is a bit too abstract to redline, maybe this is my light suggestion on perspectiveEven if you're going for a disorientating feel it's probably better to distort perspective rather then flattening it
something about the balance feels off. Especially the arm on the right. help please.
>>8028953the arms are in a different angle from the torso and it makes it look like her right arm is a lot longer than her left's, also one hand should be tucked in if she is crossing her arms unless it was done on purpose, looks silly tho.the chin shouldn't be that tucked in, it looks like the angle of the head it's pointing down a bit but the cheeckbone should be lower if we follow that angle, the eye in the left shoul be less visible too.the hat could have better wrinkles and form, but that could depend on the stylization you are going for,since her boots and clothes follow some realistic drappery the flat shape of the top hat looks off in contrast imo.
>>8029156IT'S DANDAN(@icantdravv)!!
>>8029155her left arm is way too long or im misjudging the length of her torso but then her shoulder to shoulder width would be too narrow, anyway the opening in the right sleeve should be wider
im trying to render my sketches, any tips for rendering butts and other parts?
>>8029197the AI shitter who got so absolutely mogged by simon he took a vacation from here?
>>8029469qrd?
>>8029455whats wrong with it exactly? I think the only issue is it's bleeding out of the outline which in my experience makes everything look 3x worse than it actually isAlso are you the type of freak to put pubes in places where chicks dont even grow them or have you made a mistake
>>8029235>made her boobs smallerunforgiveable. thanks for the help bro. it definitely feels a lot better. the opening on the right sleeve made it look more appealing too. i just started drawing fabric more, and you seem familiar with it. do you have any tips, or guides to point me towards?
This torso and the breasts simply feels offi used a reference for the legs but the torso escapes me
>>8030048im sure there are books about this but imo you just need to know how to draw forms and learn some basic stuff about drappery.Learn how to draw forms is key, you are not gonna eyeball drappery you need to know how clothes deform accordingly around forms/mases, this can vary drastically depending on the material of clothing, tension/physics etc... this seems like a lot but it's actually easy to learn.Once you have the basics down, you can worry more about ehhh the nuanced stuff like line choices, types of hatching that depict forms without fulling outlining it, stylization etc....Also sorry i haven't watched Rezero in forever i would never deflate some honkers ever!
>>8030347sexo
>>8030347This book is good at explaining it, but it has to be paired with irl studies of draping cloth over forms, and clothed figures
>>8030352i will argue against using real life stuff for learning drappery because it's extremely hard to deconstruct and line picking when you are beg, if you already have your forms and basic shit down maybe, but most real life stuff it's too adv tier to studie from. unironically studying from drawings is the best option as long as it's well drawn
>>8030133You are missing a very important part, the pect insertion to the arm, rest is not bad the arm is kinda boxy too.the legs need better forms unless you are doing an architect build .
>>8030347hell yeah, brother. thank you, sensei!
>redline thread>no teal>no jadf>no cro>only noname nobodies with dunning kruger from asgwow what a good thread
>look at me, I can namedrop but can't draw
>>8030493>Mentions a bunch of dunning krugers he worshipsEmbarrassing post, please back to beg with you
>dont get named>immediately starts samefagginghow predictable
>>8030493did you get raped and mindbroken? lol
>be worthless but also paranoidthe way of schizo
>>8030493>don't do anything unless you're in my listI don't think you actually believe this but just wanted to name drop some people and sound cool/ in the know. There's some decent people in here
>>8030395kek Tapeei is really trying to do anything for people to like Emilis
>>8030577>wanted to name drop some people and sound cool/ in the knowand it made him sound like the most pathetic brown-noser on the site, lelw
>>8030491i overdefined it but shouldnt the forearm muscle start earlier than that?
>>8027978can we please stop this trend of giving em digusting flabby fat dumpers. it shouldnt look like kneaded dough
>>8030925>it shouldnt look likepaint it
i would post in /beg/ but i would like a redline, please
>mad because didn't get namedskill issue
>>8031433I don't usually do redlines but here's one anyway.I think you did pretty well! There isn't much to criticise. First, I changed the position of the head because in the current position, regarding foreshortening, the neck is pretty long. (Unfortunately I didn't indicate it in red but you see it when you look closely).You may also emphasize the deltoid muscles more to give it more 3D structure.Lastly, and I think it's the most important thing, you need to pay attention to the breasts. In your current drawing, they are unaffected by gravity. She is upside down, so they should sag accordingly.I've made an attempt to illustrate it but you should experiment with it to get it right. Reference material is just a Bing search away.Personally, I always draw the pectoral muscles first. Then I draw the breasts on top of it.But once again, you did a great job with this drawing. With the hands especially. I'd love to see it finished.
I need help with ana and coloring, mine lacks depth and lighting im not very good at shading either
>>8031783All this wrinkled stuff looks kind of dope. Why not finish doing what you were doing?
>>8031805Folds? I am but i keep undoing the progress cause it felt wrong thats why i need a redraw heres reference
>>8031783avoid amking the parts of the cloth exposed to light saturated, if you do that you need to commit to a lot of artistic shit to make the whole thing look cohesivei dont understand why you are having problems with this thing? you drew the roundness of the skirt and didnt shade it accordingly, drew the roundness of the dress and didnt shade it accordingly. itsway too late and way too early at the same time to be having problems.
>>8031779Thank you!
>>8030782Your forearms are also incorrect, lol
why be on ic if you only wsnt empty platitudes instead of critique?
>>8031924Are you talking with the voices in your head again?
nigger.
>>8031924This is literally the crit thread can you fuck off
>>8030491>>8030782might want to try some cylinders in perspective to amplify the way her upper arm goes backward and her forearm comes forward. there's some angles and overlaps you guys might miss if you don't use the basic shapes.
>>8033077This is the thread where you are supposed to draw.
redline my fuckass car?>Make sure to specify what area you're struggling withIdk man, it just doesnt look good, it loos like a child drew it
>>8034534BUT WHAT ABOUT THE CAR
>>8034542I tried some changes, but I know nothing about cars and do not know what you want it to look like.no one draws here anyway
>>8034542Tbf, >>8034534 is an improvement over the original in that it distracts the viewer from the car
>>8034580>Brr dum dum dum, dum da da da da dum
hello sirsso I'm trying to "study" a drawing, like, attempting deconstruct it and try drawing it myself. next thing I realize that I can't visualize overlaps and forshortenings, it always becomes a mess. need help with the left shoulder (can't pinpoint the anatomy when you twist the arm like that) and the torso. what lines do you put down to make a top down view of the torso appealing? what is happening in the ref. what is "studying". what is "drawing">>8034492is your goal do draw photorealistic cars or lightning mcqueen cars. the cars you'be drawn look believable as 3d objects already. is it just the technical design?
>>8034542Heres my attempt on fixing the car: Im not sure what models you’re referencing nor i have experienced drawing cars i just fixed the proportion i find odd i think it looks like what your typical salary man Toyota’s than a sport car the seats are shoddily drawn so are the windows thats probably why it seem like childish scribble
>>8034640You ruined it.
>>8034647Ok you do it
>>8034647Bad proportions are a better and actual answer to the OP's problem, as opposed to my girl's drawing.
>>8034652Thanks for fixing it i didnt realized how much i stretched it kek
>>8034652>>8034640oh... i shouldve mentioned i was trying to make it look good with ink aloneI just wasted your time
>>8034667I'm aware. Painting is for fun.
redline pleasei need help with the torso and the head
feel like the proportions here are all out of fuck. help me!!!
>>8034853Idk it's so low effort and loose, you could probably figure it out on your own if you gave it another try
>>8034883ok
>>8034854I suck a redline but thought Id try. Correct me if im making a mistake. Also sorry, your character's gesture might be wrongly represented.Proportions are a problem, but your perspective is fucky. I wonder if you just winged these vanishing points. Either way, you should study it a bit more, specifically learning patterns of what happens to a box when it's placed in space under different viewpoints (centred, more left or more right - above or below the horizon).Cute character.
>>8034991solid stuffyeah i 100% winged the vps which i have a bad habit of doing. sometimes i cba to make proper ones and clearly i paid for it. gotta stop bein a lazy cunt. thanks
very bare bones but im having trouble with this pose.
>>8035661sorry my dumb ass forgot to mention it's specifically the legs, though really i'm not certain about the pose as a whole
>>8035662I think the posw itself is fine and puckish for a fairy character but including the feet in the drawing and not cropping them out would probably help it feel more grounded
>>8035807>but now it looks incomplete fuckkkkkkI believe crop is fine, otherwise I feel it gets too descriptive. like its a funny photo
>>8035661>>8034853ngl fellas this is more of a prompt for an original drawing than something to redline. too early.
>>8035926You could express the correction on the same level of completion if you wanted to draw
the circled part is completely wrong but is there ANY way to make the face visible from this angle or is it just a lost cause? i think i made it look right when i tried to just make him facing away from the camera, but the expressions are the whole point of the drawing. Sorry in advance for gay porn
>>8035963>>8034853ogeynot doing the other one cuz he arleady finished it
>>8036882if not gay redraw the girl
>>8036885but i am gay
>>8036886redraw gay couple then
>>8036888the gay couple was mine idk how to redraw it thats why i asked and rotating the scene is just cheatingi think you got a good think going with the girl and the stylized body shape, i just butcher, the beg harbor butcher
>>8036914>rotating the scene is just cheatingrotating the scene is composition
>>8036920It's CHEATINGif i just rotated to make it easy for myself i would alwayd end up with a side view like a hack
>>8036882thanks
>>8028953Nice stylization. Great use of shapes. Digging the linework but could use more consistency when hatching. My advice would be to cel shade but you do you. Only things that bug me other than what previous anon mentioned are the somewhat unnatural pose and proportions and simple perspective errors.
>>8036874Forget the face, the hips are too narrow. Give them the bbl treatment (the bed needs widening too) and then you can worry about the face.
>>8037485where's the draw?
>>8034620I don't understand exactly what you're having trouble with in terms of anatomy whether it's the muscle/bones/positioning but here's some ref. More if you look up dumbbell/barbell/gorilla rows.
>>8037486>Redline yaoi for freenuh uh
>>8037553then fuck off from the thread retard
i stg something is wrong with his ass but i cannot figure it out
>>8037638Probably a lot of mistakes in mine, I kinda just turned this into an anatomy session for myself. However, I try not to mention anatomy because there's no point - but you do need to study it more.Main problems:1. Weird proportions, possibly stylistic, I doubt it though. I tried to keep it as close as possible, but the anatomy is more carved than you're style. The head is a little too small on him. I gave a rough indication of what size I would find a bit more appealing, but up to you - similar thing with the hands. His right arm (the raised one) is too short, probably because you're fighting for space at the edge - just enlarge the canvas and crop it later.2. You're either missing the torso midline or trying to twist the upper body for that male stripper pose, not sure. Look at the midline running from sternum to between the abs, your haphazard drawing of details draws attention to the messed up horizontal alignments with the abs and pecs. The way you've drawn it makes the abs look 3 dimensional, but the chest/pecs look completely deflated - but this is partly because of your faulty chest anatomy. Draw a midline for the torso and try to keep things either symmetrical or horizontally aligned and it'll look better. 3. Just for drawing in general, keep outer lineweight thicker than the inner lines and details. It'll make your lines look nicer. Also, looking at the white shirt fabric, use less lines for details, it makes it look like you don't know what you're doing..Overall, im shocked how good the hands are given all the other issues, better than mine generally turn out. Nice.
>>8037762incredible critique, tysmit looks like I don't know what i'm doing becausee I DON'T lol, i'm horrible with clothing folds and whatnot.and apparently i'm also horrible with anatomy x.xthe mid-section is wonky because i initially had him positioned leaning forward and tilted quite a bit to the side. i shoulda probably just redrawn the whole body rather than try to re-shape it...this redline is tremendously helpful tho! i think... i can understand the chest problem i've been having for a long while! like i genuinely felt one of my synapses connect, it's incrediblebelieve it or not, i'm still pretty unfamiliar with doing stuff like changing the canvas size. only had this tablet for almost 9 months lol, been a slow learning process.
>>8037780I get you. It's really not too bad for 9 months, and its not the worst anatomy ever. Perhaps a little ambitious, but not bad.My opinion is that you'd benefit from anatomy study, but put more emphasis on simplified forms rather than learning every single muscle. This way, you learn how to play about with bodies of different shapes and sizes. It seems you have some handle on anatomy, but more study on drawing consistent 3D shapes in perspective (like picrel) will bind together all the detailed anatomy you learn. Obviously learning origins and insertions of muscles and stuff is good, but just improving general proportions and alignments will make your work better and make learning anatomy easier. Just so you know, I was referencing different illustrations in the Morpho book on Muscled Bodies. I recommend Morpho for understanding anatomy with that form in mind, like I mentioned. Good Luck.
>>8027810clicked on thread because boobs
>>8037576
>>8037799epic
>>8037789i've never heard of morpho, will look into it!here's where i was a whole year ago - just pencil and paper and a dreamalot of my current trouble is coming from trying (and then giving up) more interesting/complex poses. this red one is a prime example, if i had just drawn it simple the anatomy wouldn't have ended up so fricked.i gave up on the complex pose because i wanted to learn how to do fire and recolor my lines and add texture/noise and a BUNCH of other little things
>>8037543>I don't understand exactly what you're having trouble withwas I vague im my phrasing? I don't think about issues I'm having beyond 'it looks bad'anywas your post is helpful, thanks! and you actually found the exact pose is was trying to draw. there really is a ref for everything huh
>>8037799hmm, even with this as a reference i cant make mine to look right. bummer
>>8027810Anon, help plzIf I made the right drawing with one eye on the tablet and the other looking at a photo reference, and it doesn't particularly raise questions for me at this stage, then the left one is already boxes with Sycra's anatomy, and I feel that something is off here.Plus I completely don't know how to position these bags of fat on the ribs.
>>8037935>then fuck off from the thread retardSeriously, wtf is wrong with some of you. Dude went above and beyond and you can't even put "thank you" in your announcement that you're a retard beglet. Holy fuck.
>>8038151Pretty akward to thank him after i told him to fuck off innit? Also im int
>>8038157How does that change anything?How can you possibly call yourself int if you can't spot the difference between their work and yours? You're a coping cunt. Get over yourself.
>>8037762https://files.catbox.moe/ty0ugp.jpgit's not perfect, but i think i can keep this level of anatomy up in future pics
>>8038176*Drags my balls across your face*
>>8036874ugh.. yaoi rly grosses me out... how tf are women even attracted to men
>>8038338Do women see/enjoy watching men have sex with each other similar to how men could enjoy watching two women?
>8038190let this be a lesson to never help gay faggots
>>8038338Yaoi isn't gross just my drawing is>>8038394You've not helped anyone nodraw retard hahahaha, getting offended for another person, the dude drew anal 4 times on the same page and he's not a tenth of a cock gobbling faggot you are
>>8038130Maybe is because you need go back to draw boxes and cylinders anon
>>8038475mad and bald
>>8038338>how tf are women even attracted to menboys are cute. cute!>>8038369yes it goes both ways. I like when they hold handswe're all the same in the end
any advice before I continue with this?i'm not very happy with the colors or the folds
>>8038615feels the mog
>>8038629
>>8038869do you think this is reproducible using lasso tools instead of opacity brushes?
>>8038890does it look convincing?>do you think this is reproducible using lasso tools instead of opacity brushes?but doctor I'm a lassomost brushing is not a necessary step but is trying to achieve a desired effect
>>8039028honestly... it still kinda looks like chocolate? Just like super high quality chocolate that melts in your mouth instead of the shitty rations soldiers got in foxholes that mine looks like the bumper looks awesome which is the part they didnt let the ape called me pick the colors for, so maybe im just picking a bad palette?
>>8039040maybe chocolate is the color, or maybe because reflections lack details and perceived as blurry
>>8038685... ohhhhhhh, now i get it
>>8039057this is literally perfect, and isnt this jurst the bottom right care hue shifted?
>>8039083Yes, I shifted the top right component of the right column car for 'is chocolate just a color. "Reflection" layer is the same.
>>8038814i did something, not sure it will be of any use>colorssorry cant help you wit that
Does this need fixing? :( feel like the light source isn’t properly demonstrated
>>8039490Its gas
>>8030498>Mentions a bunch of dunning krugers>dunning krugers
>>8039494*flutter my eyes and turns away blushing*
>>8039490this is normal for white light in a white room
>>8038615thx, Anon, you are best
Fellas, is there a way to show the wolf lunging at this guy in the perspective its in while also showing enough of the wolf's face to see its emotion? Also how much did I fuck up the foreshortening of the wolf?
I cant figure out how to fix this and make the pose appealing and interesting, I also need help making the eyes more vicious. Anyone who can help? Pretty please?
>>8039490my brain doesn't even register this artstyle as something people made by a person. Seeing it in a drawing program boggles me.
>>8042514>People made by a person my brain shut off
>>8027825Can you please drop a blog? I love your figures.
>>8042543reverse crab
>>8042547not sure if you're the guy or not, but discord would work too. Surely your presence online isn't 100% on 4chan?
Could someone please color this in using this (https://files.catbox.moe/z3bxfc.png) as a guide?
Wow I was just hoping for one of these. Last time I posted someone recommended me an amazing book. Help with the lower leg, or anything else that you think you could fix?
>>8027978Here Anon. I think probably the biggest thing for you to study right now for coloring would be ambient occlusion. You're using too much of it. It only goes in the darkest of places where light can't reach. It's muddying your values and creates too much contrast in an unpleasant way. Other notes: you extended the pelvis too much, you wouldn't see the other thigh's buttcheek from this angle, and I changed the leg pose for something that feels more natural and comfortable.You can switch between your pic and this one to get a better feel for what else I changed. Honestly once I got rid of the occlusion issue, your values weren't bad. I color picked everything. :3Also make sure you study hands a bit more! Just a little more work on your anatomy in general and you'll be golden!
>>8042983thought you said you wouldnt ever post redlines here again after you and ortamaw had a melty over picrel lol
>>8043227I'm trying really hard to remember what happened. Either way people change their minds all the time. No harm in bringing positivity and encouragement to an art community. Oh, correct me if I'm wrong. I think what happened was I made a new thread or something to continue that thread with my own redline as the OP? And Ort joined in or something. And for some reason everyone was upset with Orta because she just did a redraw for fun instead of doing it as a redline. It was a really strange moment. I think everyone was just being mega cringe because we were having fun drawing, which makes sense because you know, it's /ic/. No fun allowed.
>>8043263sexo
>>8042487You can make their stance wider for a more dynamic pose and I found the eyes hard to see in general, so I made them slightly bigger and added contrast to that area to make them stand out. I also made the iris small. The only other issue I felt like could be addressed was the perspective with the arms and sword. I slightly tweaked these.
>>8042514Youre accusing me of ai?
>>8043227kino
>>8040665i am bad with animal anatomy. consider this redline just as a general showcase of dynamics.
>>8027825the replies you got are so weird and crabby.Your figures are fine. There is no issue with them. But they're just mannequins. Draw actual paintings or at least sketches with emotion with them, applying what you know, and studying gesture for more dynamicity if you can't push it to the edge of motion, that's it
>>8045765if they were fine, he wouldn't be asking to be told how to improve themthere's nothing crabby about people pointing out what the consider ugly and how to fix it about the thing the guy literally asked for instructions how to improve>but I think they're finenobody gives a shit what you think, he doesn't like them
>>8045768pff what a dumb opinionhe can keep "improving them" until he diesmy advice is as valid as theirs, besides the fact theirs won't improve anything. If you keep drawing figures and even gestures with no emotion or stakes in them you'll never improve past that anon's level. The only correct advice to him is: "you can draw confident mannequins, now draw something you're invested in". Then his copied poses won't be enough and he'll know exactly what to improve next, because his pinup won't be sexy enough for his taste, or his goblin won't be squat enough to convey how gross he wants him to be
>>8045769>my advice is as valid as theirsInsofar theirs is "weird and crabby", sure.
>>8045773It is if you can read, while mine of course is absolutely spot-on in comparison and entirely beneficial without unnecessary projection. This is about the point where you ought to realize you're doing the same and stop posting unnecessarily
>>8045774PYW or no more tardfeeding
This is broken but I still want to save it. Need tips on her figure and the motorcycle before I redraw.
im back again with another shitty rendering that need fixing, somehow i feel my values are muddy and fuck up but i cant for the life of me understand whyIt doesnt have that pop up feel
>>8046037its unclear to me which part is intentional and which parts are mistakes, do you maybe have an aesthetic/artist you're going for?
>>8046468I mostly try to replicate Jamie Hewlett's and Andrew Hussie's early comics.The figure and motorcycle are meant to be simplified but exist in perspective, sorta like a 3D model of a cartoon.The problem is that they both have super inconsistent vanishing points, and I wouldn't know where to place them when redrawing. Her posture is also weird. I can tweak the background myself.
Looking for a redline hard pose for me, drawing haman karn
