Eternal flower—Its beauty will not witherIts fruits will not come
what a big baka>writing haiku in englishget out of jaypee
>>49568503Sorry, I don't know how to write japanese poetry.
>>49568557Thank (you) very muchI will commit seppukuCan't delete thread, though
>>49568989dont. pls remberwen u feel scare or frigtenrember happy day
Sweet lady feet, yetIn half a millenniumNot a single wash
>>4956934900/10
>>49569349feet feet feet feet feetfeet feet feet feet feet feet feetfeet feet feet feet feet
>>49568503holy shit get outof page ten you unseen threadI just need to think
Soft delicate lipsLet loose the screams of anguishI LOVE Satorin!
ずんだもち美味しいなのだ食べたいな～
At the station, two bright faces come the train to take.A lotus floats along the lake.I don't know how to write actual haikus
>>49568503Cherry blossoms falling on the groundTheir scent lingersYuyu a cute
>>49580642I forgot about the syllable per verse thingCherry blossoms fallTheir scent still lingers aroundYuyuko a cute
In the evening sky,clad in red and white, maidenof eternal shrine.
Marisa's bodyheight more or less a child's worthmanhandled by me.
>>49586208that's fucking beautifuli'm in tears
>>49568503I don't have the IQ to make haiku on the fly.
>>49587018Fairy laughed at that"It's not problem with your head—You don't fly, silly!"
Sad that such a fun thread is being ignored.Another one (pic related).Subterranean room,earth rumbling in the distance,comfiness inside.
Sparrow chirps gentlyBut I can't understand itAm I deaf to song?
>>49597139more like deaf to calliope.
Yuyuko is fatI don't care about that thoughShe's still my ghost wife
>>49597162I was going for "not getting semantic meaning" as a form of "deafness", but I see that my poetic skill was found severely lacking... lol.
Shrill winds from the eastEcho to the mountain tops Snow on Hakusan
Bright flowers dancingOver the riverine wavesTo liberation
the jizz i have spilledin my life to touhou girlsa summer lake's worth
>>49580164A pure lotus swimsSky and sea unite in red—Time gently passesIt's a bit hard to write a haiku about Renko.
Storm is gathering—Wind's rumblings send on crow's wingsVolatile as news
Pink cherry petalsFalling on the garden soilWarrior's passing
Red-white butterflyDancing to the sound of flutesDawn fills the country
Rabbits under starsBamboo reaching for the moon—Where could dust arise?
Mountain frogs greet dawnWind stirs the reeds by the lakeThe mountain — unmoved
Moon over KyotoRabbit watches turning starsA lotus unfolds
Will sun rise again?Will Fantasy continue?Stop worrying and drink
A crow passing byThe old town’s weary districtsCrow’s view — summer’s wind
>>49568503
Deep in the jungle,hidden, an abandoned shrine—signs of ancient cult.
At the mountain's slopesEcho terrifying sounds—It's just some barking.
Profoundly orientalist thread
Old road filled with holesCold wind blows thru the shrine gateA world made of gaps
/jp/ is surprisingly good at poetry.
>>49630489i like this one.
Dressed in black, strong windFalling leaves carried aboveIn a moment — gone
Cold waves from the seaRise towards the mountain peakWhite moon in the waves
In the sunny woodsA doll in a house, aloneUnbound by its strings
A heron flies downStillness under the full moonNo arrow in flight
It would be cool if we got a haiku for every 2hu.
Withered maple leafTwirling through cold autumn airLands on soothing streamBy the river shoreUnder crimson canopyTwirls the goddess, too
The Moon standing stillLight in the old, silent shrineA sound at midnight
No clouds on the roadTo the snowy mountain shrineSmall rock by the side
>>49632915/jp/-Just Poetry
Drops of barley juiceFrogs sing to the cloudless moonIt's long after ten
As I fight the worldYour smile my call and purposeForever, always
A hot moonlit nightRabbits in the bamboo groveOne rabbit looks up
For you all
Untrodden valleyOnly the wind passes byThe leaves turning red
I think it's interesting which 2hus end up being represented in threads like this.
熱い夏燃えるの感がチルノの死
>>49569923足足は足足足の足足だ！
Quietude aboveHot sun whips blackened storm cloudsThe flash of lightning
淋しい小枝恋は気まぐれな容赦ない夏
On the village roadA white shape in the dark nightWind turns at its back
Old light of the moonShines on the bamboo forestAn untouched mansion
>>49688940Is it because some 2hus are more inspiring than others or because some fans are more creative than others?
Litter of kittensEight delivered, two survived—Girl's got too few teatsDoors left wide agapeHollow wind shears empty houseSome call this place home
Night falls on the other sideLavender clouds gather, witnessingThe telltale sign of an evening star
A current pushes forthUnbound by norm and rationaleWord of Wind God
Moonlit autumn nightThe wind brushes a gravestonePink blossoms spring forth
i can't write one u_u i have writer's block
>>49719175I don't quite recallThis thread being about youNo-one ever asked
Red and white maidenShrine bells echo through the mistDuty calls again
Silver knives through timePerfect maid serves endless teaSeconds bend for her
A past, fading to dustDeified, her duties mount"For them, I'll do my best!"Once, on Christmas EveKanako asked for her wish— "Total Youkai Death!"
Light in the cold nightNoise in the mausoleumAll dust falls in place
The stars in the skyBeyond the clouds, far awayBut close to the eye
>>49724204cute doodle. the haiku is fine too.
>>49719273look at that bellyholy shit just look at itoh my fucking god
Come on, college boyCan't suck a dick worth a damnI'm taking that assIt's so fucking deepAh! Ah! AAH! Yeah, take it boy!Grab my fucking balls
Upon the mountainFrog’s call echoes alloverThe old earth stands still>>49724585Thanks anon, it means a lot coming from you.
hidden from the sightlittle lady jumps and playshe slept for all day
The sun's heat risesFrom beneath the mountain snowEggs spun by hot steam
No wind blows awayThe pink petals on the roadNo footsteps crush them
At dollmaker's houseNo human shape moves aboutDay's end, night has come
Even the moon sleepsLost rays of light run aboutThe cock in the dawn
Lux in tenebris Even darkness cannot hide—From eternal flame
Green fields and forestsFilled with festive sound and lightGone like drifting smoke
Wind brushes the cup—Steam dances up to the sky,Mind drifts without weight
Trees are turning greenClouds pushed by the eastern windSnow melting, so soon
>>49738599Good one.
newborn leavestickled by the windharu desu
The south wind ceases,The hill shakes under bird’s wings—Jizo fell over
It's surprising how this thread has gone on for so long.
Flowers drift aroundIn the calm river water,From the fog, new waves
Harvest moon, cold night—By the road, a stone JizoWearing a straw hat
Oni and MaidenSplit the melon’s crimson heartFriendship in the shade
Train wheels start turning,The misty fields move backwardsTo the engine's hum
>>49775024Japanese GoblinStarts reading between the linesHopes she isn't next
Thru the sun-filled path,Under a roof made of leavesGreen shower of light
A black wind dashes,Bathed in the white clouds above—The lark on the breeze
A form on the fieldFloating on yellow petalsThe sun shines above
A sparrow flies byMelting in the night's dark shade—It's song ringing still
>>4956934910/10
At the mountain topOver the snow-filled pathwayA face in the mist
By the shrine at night,A sudden sound vanishesIn a purple flash
Slashing from aboveCrimson blade of the angelNeither here nor there
The mist rolls aroundWet branches rock back and forth—A forest of dolls
Peaceful summer daysPass unwitnessed as she restsSun warming her skinPanting Purple WitchMourning loss of literatureWakes her with a slap
Is that your money?Everything belongs to me.Your money is mine.
Buddhist training? Bah!Screw the rules, I have money!Earthly desires rule!
The unchanging moonShoots arrows of light below,The rabbits sleep tight
Night of providenceHis divine light shines northward,Where veiled gold awaits.
Loud noise approaches,The birds in the trees take flightThe train, coming home
>>49568503i fuckinglovekpop
"No season words" verdict.A ladybug Is less of an eyesore Spam filter?InsteadBlock mosquitoes >>49580164Finally at least a bowl of stale water in this hell >>49581313>syllable per verseWestoid invention irrelevant to actual Japanese haiku rules>>49600818Interesting, if a bit basic.>>49604917Naming the season is not a season word if you're not evoking the very feeling of the season.>>49611848Storms aren't specific to a season.>>49612033This is fine.>>49635188This is okay.>>49647370Yahoo!>>49662116Okay.>>49669820Interesting, actually."Temperature alone's enough for kigo"Bigger disaster Than post-drought floodFaint buzz and bloomWorthThe mud surroundingsCicada my witness as I can't go on;Yet to rant on kireji, mono no awareA haiku pro - not even
Summer thunderstormBlack-white witch rides lightning homeStars ignite the night
I can't think of one, but I don't want this thread to die.
Wicked hermit’s artJiangshi necromancer callsSilent bump from grave>>49846747Thanks anon.
A cold wind at nightThe clouds reveal the full moonIts light fills the field
In the autumn airStars rush across the night sky,Wide eyes gaze at them
>>49831315I kind of like this one, despite it not having a season indicator. Even the direction of the wind could work. Something like "Bright light follows the north wind."
Above the old dirt,A stone faced by the cold windsEver unmoving
I’ve got nothing right now, but I’m bumping to keep this thread alive. Keep up the good work, anons!
White mist, sunny dayA blossom drifts from a branchNever to return
Autumn winds gustingA new world, far from it allThe snake is rebornAlternatively:I love her so muchA really wonderful girlMiracles happen
Midsummer's downpourPebble on the river bankUnconscious white rose
>>49897271>>49901848nice ones
As the seasons change:A good thread, on page 10? How?Don't die, /2haiku/!
Wind brushes the trees,Its sound fills the blazing night—Eyes close, smoke rises.
I don't have time to think of one again, I'm not letting this thread die though.
>>49919856
Lamb of AvariceDevouring worlds, conquers allGlutton's Ambition Greedy little lambEndless desires consume meAll of mine is yours
The summer sunsetReflects on each coming waveBreaks—then comes again.
Below the green treesLike a doll with sunlit stringsA girl looking back
Go up haiku threadYou shouldn't go to sleep yetAnons should write more
On the blooming fields,Thru sunlit hills and rivers,Cold wind in the grass
bump
Autumn wind arrives,The sun rises from the hills,Pyon! Rabbit rabbit!
>>49946975nice one
秋の夢：「明日ハレの日、ケの昨日。」In English:An autumn night's dream:"Tomorrow will be special,yesterday was not."
At the end of spring,The little umbrella says:BOO! Are you surprised?
>>49951672AAAAAAAH!
I'm the strongest!And the best at writing haikus!Off by one? Can't be me!
>>49951718Cheeky.
I'm out of ideasWriting haiku is hard, dudeI'm going to bed
>>49955560a princess like kaguya should be able to come up with haiku on the spot...
>>49956579Isn't haiku supposed to be more rustic, all things considered? I'd expect Kaguya to be pretty proficient in tanka.
>>49956618i said on the spot for a reason. the longer a piece a poetry, the harder to improvise it.
>>49956618If this thread reaches bump limit, we should have a 2waka thread next.
River guideHard at work todayBreast sweat
Keep it going!
An alien visagePlayful mischief, primal fearsThe Unknown mirage
False corpse in the depthsYour journey has yet to endVoyage to the peak
The leaves hold steadyIn the early wind and rain—Summer's end has come
Over melted snow,Winds gather around a treeTo bring pink petals
The cold wind blows forth,Ascends towards the heavens—The bright stars stand stillWe did it, we're half way to bump limit!
>>49972947>we're half way to bump limit!sasuga ne
The sun gilds the fields,Mossed towers cast their long shade,Two birds fly away
Emptied of their leaves,Branches shiver, rock, then stop—The cold wind has comeThru mists of orange, red and green,A blue wind stirred, then flew away,And left the world in wintry fray,A snowy vision, early seen
renko a shitbut when you think about itmaribel too
It seems once againThis thread is about to dieHow terribly sad
Frigid, piercing glareBlade strikes with will for a causeBigger than one's self
With all my mightI must not shedA single tear whenOur loved thread dies
A flower is bloom—Ah, flower I cannot see!Thy fragrance, how true
>>50014021>>50019303both good ദ്ദി ˉ͈̀꒳ˉ͈́ )
Froggies go mlem mlemSlithering snakes go pbth pbthThanks for coming folks
>>50028433Thank you for your divine wisdom Sanae-sama
Today's market trend Seven colors of successInvest in yourself
>>50028433I like this one more than I should.
Life everlastingAlone in the pyramidThe last one standing
>>50051034Giza Hieroglyph!
She is seventeenMind the gap in her storiesStop asking questions
Tiny CommanderDowsing duties, Lost and foundTreasure seeking mouse
>>50064011nice
The sun and the moonDespair stirs divine vengeanceA mother's fury
Rumbling flowerDrifting through the purple field—She's in a temper!!
>>50072140Rare Rika post!
>>50085406profound
Autumn gale carriesFresh scandal through mountain peaksCamera shutter clicks
Kannushi's secret:"Devving works best when you're drunk"Beer? Kirin, of course
Lonely mountain hagCooks warm meals for visitorsOnly fall stops by
I say baa-ram-eweTo your greed and to your fleeceGouyoku be true
I wait in my webTo catch a morsel to eatNothing flies by here.
Oh! Potential prey!I challenge them on the groundInstead, I had lost.
The bridge that I guardIs cold in the winter nightsI shiver at that.
I'm jealous of themWho could travel far and wide.How I wish they die.
I am an oniHorn on head, sake in hand,I'm always happy
I'm never soberBut I am always so boredSo I test my strength.
>>50085406giant giant titsgiant giant giant titsgiant giant tits
>>50109105And people say poetry is dead
rigid word structurehopping, speaking, recitingpoetry is dead
luna in the skybright star in the sapphire bluesunny night come true
Other than my petsWho are always gone at workNo one will love me.
Rocks by the Sanzutoppled over by oni --Stack more tomorrow
>>50122435A birthday partyUnattended, cake untouchedWhy did no-one come?
Golden field in bloomAll tended to save for oneThe caregiver wilts
Lonely moonlit shrinePortal to another worldFantasy awaits
>>50137428God damn it MaryDon't shine that right in my eyesIt's dark out you dork
>>50137865If Renko was promptWe could do without flashlightsBut she is not prompt
This thread deserves to liveThough I'm not of mind to writeMuch that is of worth
Lost spirits gatherWithout body, without voiceTheir wishes are heard
Big oni partyHere to eat, drink and revelWatch the petals fall
By the riversideA curious creature stridesErrant yet steadfast>>50069849I like this one.
Through the sheer volume and massNo one can ignore your huge ass
Holy shit, page tenLast post wasn't long agoI'm in disbelief
Sickness on the bridgeEmerald waters run freelyWhy you and not I?
>>50181674This is actually good
"Are you edible?"The surrounding darkness asksIt already knows
We told the Head Priest,"Your games are just too easy,"He replied, "LoL, K."
what the fuck why thoeven though i bumped the threadit’s still on page 10??
Nostalgic spring breezeAt the edge of fantasyFlying shrine maiden
>>50196325>>50196460these are so bad the thread just refused to be bumped.
>>50196460Bumping on this siteA Sisyphean task, no doubtPage ten to page onePage one to page tenWatch it tumble - what to do?Imagine (You) happy
>>49632915this or they're just cheating by asking the ai to compose some haiku.
>>50196512Moon wanes, ink runs thin,The wind mocks my trembling handHaiku eludes me.
>>50196628Haiku is a breezeFive seven five and natureSet a scene; you're done.
Autumn's proud panacheHeeds October's chilling windsAll that blooms must die
Where there once was lifeIs now but cold shades of greyA slate is wiped clean.>>50210273Hasting for a bumpMy last line came out too rough:"To bloom means to die"
Come on, let's go upPage ten's just a bit too lowGiven the spammers
Stuck in scarlet hallsThe stranger is discoveredPop goes the weasel
thread needs a wee bumpto escape the page ten slumpwhich 'hu would you hump?
雲の下裸地で足音春へ道路
Suspicious motives flowConstructed words form a patternA woven trick you see
In the cold eveningWhispers heard between the treesFade into the night
Leaves fall to the groundWinds die in the horizonOne sound still heard: bump.
>>50245549funny haiku
Wish it were colderThis mild autumn really stinksFrankly, I'm quite miffed
>>50249376Autumn is lovelyFiery leaves, bountiful cropsSo fuck off, Letty
>>50249433Oh, for sure - at firstNow a month's passed - nothing's changedI just want some frost!
White fields, frozen lakesThese wouldn't be a bad thingIf it weren't spring's turn!
Late-night gibberishWordsalad to save a thread"Sure, that's good enough."
SerendipityAll that goes 'round, comes aroundAlright, good night, now.
Small stone? Young woman?Boy, you should know that... RING! RING!She's right behind you!
>>50249376It's kinda cold hereIt's really nice, near freezingmmm cocoa sipping
It's that time againWish this place were livelierThat's the state of things.
How can she be called"The Evening Star", when at nightAll she does is sleep?
>>50264251Stars can go to sleep—Their bright rays of long-dimmed lightHave yet to arrive
>>50267785While that's nice and allThis girl is millennia oldLight can't be that slow...
>>50267987Wait, I take that backShe's actually way younger!(Please, don't hurt my kids)
>>50268034Hag hag hag hag hagHag hag hag hag hag hag hagHag hag hag hag hag
Bump I must doBefore it's all doomed
>>50275460Hehe, "bump", more like"Hump", like 2hus in the butt... Please, just go back up.
>>50276846Oh, wait, goddamnitThat joke's already been made... But theft fits this gal.
AyayayayaTaking pics of ya pantiesIs my pride and joy!
I am not that flat!Don’t believe the lies of thatDamned sham reporter!
Lazy gatekeeperDreams of fighting a catfishGet back to work now!
Three bumps and counting,Methinks this thread wants to die…Well, let’s set it free!
They call me "birdbrained",but I am way too hot to care!Like, way *too* hot! Help!
>>50249541Great frost came todayTrees shimmered until middayBreathing made cool clouds
Never realizedLetty's theme is about frost:"Crystallized Silver".
Won't you please go up?We have a full 60 postsOf this left to go.
>>50283495nice one.
Night sky shooting starA wish to shine foreverBriefness is beauty
Begrudgingly aliveSweet release, e'er out of reachKind of like this thread.
Sweet potatoes forma pleasant bulwark againstLetty's invasion
In quiet, weeks passDay in, day out, to no endHope that things will change.
>>50276855Hump rhymed with bump infolk song Carrion Crow too.Suits my Aya lust.
It is cold outsideYellow oaks stand by the road—Alas, fall has come!
An abandoned wellNot because of the waterDeath flows out of it
>>49569025C'mon, go aheadAttack me with Master SparkI fucking dare you
>>50300322your angry wordsa ramune bottlefull of nothing
Peace on the lakefrontCritters go about their daySDM explodes
もし それ が簡単に伝えたら一瞬寒くて
Underneath the trees,A river in the valley,A straw doll floats down
>>50280988Heavy particlesClash, then break themselves apart—Puff! And there was light!
>>50313598nice one
Invasion of lifePushing against stagnation"Moon bitches ain't shit."
Though things come and goOne thing will persist through all:Matara Monday.
Sixteenth night moonlightJack the Ripper stalks these hallsDog of the devil
Sex Fox, Sexo FoxFox Sex, Sex Fox, Sex the FoxSex with the Sex Fox.
>>50313651Moon bitches ain't shitbut hoes and tricks –– Suck the dickand lick on these nuts
The board flows onwardMoving down ever fasterTowards the 10th page
>>50313598mean one
Don't die so close to the bump, limit thread!
>>50283495This one is actually pretty good.
>>50312586Weighed down atoms clashTheir light shines in the darknessAnd out comes just oneThat one was about fission, this one about fusion.
>>50332917Beautiful
Whispers on the windBlowing in the trees' red earsOumagatoki
>>50181674Willows by the streamGreen light, white robes, red irons I forsake all love.
>>50332917i've heard this one before.
I still don't get how haikus work
>>50340664In principle, 5/7/5 syllable structure, a break in the text at some point, a seasonal reference and plain, descriptive language. It's also good if the mood is consistent with the one associated with the season referenced.It's definition uses a lot of concepts that don't really exist in English. For instance, Japanese haiku are not actually based around syllables, but around morae(or on, in Japanese; a rhythmic timing unit, not a grammatical unit), which can sometimes be shorter than syllables, but Japanese pronunciation is stricter than English, so the morae of an English syllable can vary more than the on of a Japanese syllable. There is also supposed to be a break in the text, marked by a "cutting word," something that simply doesn't exist in English, so it's replaced by a break in intonation, sometimes marked with an em dash.
>>50309283Beautiful one
>>50340664Count the syllablesFirst five, then seven, then fiveMake it sound pretty.
>>50340664i dont write them :)
We're 20 posts from bump limit, come on.
The dim, dark chamberFilled with echoes of cold windA pale mist––purple
Beautiful blossoms.Blood-soaked trunk -- the final taste.Seal these evil roots!
to me it seemsthis thread would needanother chance to live
A lone bamboo shootSits waiting on the table.Still seeking moonlight
oh green bamboo shootfrom your heart of jade are bornhaikus of no worth
Empty words of scorn—bamboo shoots rising towarda Moon they can’t grasp
far beyond my heartthe moon shines cold in cold bluenot so your warm hand
Far above floating—the full Moon, round and shining,fills the room with light
I need hag pussyMommy please start touching meEternal Beauty
if words could tellwhat my chest treasures best i would drown them dead
>>50363545Tthis one was beautiful
The cold Moon outsidelights up each smiling drunk face—warmth fills the black night
Stupid sexy foxWhy are you so erotic?Get pregnant you bitch
>>50371517rude
November's bright Moonwanes over its last cold night—Ha! Rabbit rabbit!
tene tiny 'mongive this thread a lemonbumpthree ten aint it yet
Flowering BeautyShe is feared by all peopleYet I call her wife
It was pleasantly surprising that this thread reached the bump limit.
there were many good haiku. even a few great ones. ദ്ദി ˉ͈̀꒳ˉ͈́ )
Even in hard timesCreativity may bloomMemento mori
>>50387018sad but good
Five and a half monthsA good time was had by all -Thanks for a good thread.
Maybe we'll have a 2tanka thread some time later!
