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Been uhh while. Theres some to start the thread off.

What's the requirements for a poem

>>41696700
idk people been arguing over that bullshit since the creation of writing. just post something. Maybe stick to written tho

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>>41696682
Lyrics but same difference

Drinking a beer
lonely queer
time for bed
let out all the thoughts
in my head
Chips Ahoy! chewing
like a child born a boy
we can do anything, yeah

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>>41696730
Bips ahoy, bochlate bip bookie, BEWY.

The devil's soul
Taking control
Of a poor young girl
With golden hair full of curls
And before it left,
It said put the goat down to rest
For this dumb rhyme makes no sense
And poems don't even have to rhyme you stupid bitch

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>>41696795
good enough luv

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Not a poem but I think it's quite good

Your meter is whack and your words are all cracked
And attack through a lack of good taste and of tact
I retract drawing back from the stack and change tack
Away from the poems of blackness

sit on your clouds,
drink your tea
and stay the hell away from me

>>41697807
>ur meter is whack
kek okay shakespeare

Maybe give a writing prompt idk
I'm more a prose writer and write longer formats that won't fit here

So many asses to pick,
But I don't have a dick.
So many holes to plow,
But I don't have the how.
Such is my submission
In this humiliation.

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>>41696682
Big one I
One big Eye
One eye See
Two eye die

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Just wrote one up
Dealing with shit irl

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Huh, I'm liking it so far OP
I don't know if I'm doing good or whatever but I'm enjoying it so far

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>>41696682
Yay hooray please like my bad poetry written in chicken scratch!
I posted this first one in another threat but I have more

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>>41696814
This is my favorite one of yours that you’ve posted itt. I generally like how vivid the imagery that you conjure is
>>41698634
I like how visceral this one is, I feel placed into the narrator’s shoes

bump

Whisper in the night

faint and shallow, hard to hear
they speak of a thing many hold dear
closer it gets the harder it be
the many things it could be
one day youll bloom
one day youll boom

but tonight you are just a whisper in the night

>>41702242
i freestyled this on in like 5 mins for the thread. I used to be into poetry. i think i should get back to it desu

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i have a rough recording of me singing these over the guitar part i wrote it for but i’d bad and too scared to be heard singing by housemates