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Anonymous

09/13/25(Sat)17:26:59 No.24721251

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Where did you stop reading?

Anonymous
09/13/25(Sat)17:30:37 No.24721258

Anonymous 09/13/25(Sat)17:30:37 No.24721258

I never started.

Anonymous
09/13/25(Sat)17:38:00 No.24721270

Anonymous 09/13/25(Sat)17:38:00 No.24721270

>>24721251
Why write about the petty days of women when you can write about potent and virile men?

Anonymous
09/13/25(Sat)17:42:47 No.24721288

Anonymous 09/13/25(Sat)17:42:47 No.24721288

I made it halfway through the first big paragraph before I gave up. I'm immediately embedded in the mind of a self-obsessed girl with context being drip fed through her observations despite it being a third person narrator who could have succinctly described a scene for me. Instead I'm forced to see the world through this bimbo's eyes and I don't have enough hours in my day to bother.

Anonymous
09/13/25(Sat)18:12:01 No.24721359

Anonymous 09/13/25(Sat)18:12:01 No.24721359

>>24721251
i read the whole thing. it's quite good but the subject matter isn't for me. Give me your elevator pitch.

Anonymous
09/13/25(Sat)18:18:50 No.24721371

Anonymous 09/13/25(Sat)18:18:50 No.24721371

>>24721251
When I realised I'd entered the romantasy ghetto.

Anonymous
09/13/25(Sat)20:09:35 No.24721578

Anonymous 09/13/25(Sat)20:09:35 No.24721578

>>24721251
is this AI?

Anonymous
09/13/25(Sat)20:29:52 No.24721608

Anonymous 09/13/25(Sat)20:29:52 No.24721608

>>24721251
After the first sentence: I started thinking about the Highlander

Anonymous
09/13/25(Sat)20:50:28 No.24721646

Anonymous 09/13/25(Sat)20:50:28 No.24721646

>>24721258
fpbp

Anonymous
09/14/25(Sun)12:44:47 No.24723125

Anonymous 09/14/25(Sun)12:44:47 No.24723125

>>24721251
>Where did you stop reading?
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