Do any of you guys have experience writing erotica? Recently I started writing some, but it is not very good.Also, where do you read erotic fiction?
>>24795391Only in my diary desu.I like the challenge of writing about sex, because it's difficult to pull off without being unintentionally funny.>pull off, LOL
>>24795398Yes, everything I write ends up being ridiculous and more funny than hot.
Back in my yahoo messenger days I had a harem of grooling servantwomen hanging on my every depraved word.All you have to do is describe the friction of your rough fingertip against her turgid clit and it's over for them. They can't handle it. Coombrained sluts, the lot of them.
>>24795391No, I haven’t; but I think you would like the book “The Pornographer” by John McGahern.
>>24795391i read wbe on substack
>>24795398Posting an extract for keks:->At last C's insides clenched around my finger, an event which caused an audible expulsion of air. I found it amusing, but C was all apologies. What was more, her apparent mortification had caused her arousal to evaporate. I had seen this phenomenon before: a distraction as innocuous as a chime from her mobile phone can bring C down to earth in an instant, and set us both back to square one.>Taking a moment to flex my spine, I set about rolling the stone back up the hill. C felt a little dry on the inside by now, and I made a point of working some saliva into her. Perhaps I pressed a little heavily with my tongue this time: not long after she began to come, C backed away, as if she had grown oversentive. She reported, rather breathlessly, that she had in fact enjoyed a clitoral orgasm which made her legs tingle, though it had seemed somewhat less intense than usual.>This seemed rather unsatisfactory. I contemplated the tiny pink head of C's clitoris, set like a gem amid the glistening flower of her genitals. I thought that if I gave her a little time to recover, we might yet storm the heights of ecstasy. I speculatively blew on the organ, rather gently I thought, though even this caused her to flinch. After giving her a little longer, I suggested that if I used my tongue very lightly on her, she might get used to it. We had overcome the refractory phase in this way before, and C affirmed she was game to try.
>>24795881>Very tentatively, we eased back into the procedure. C shuddered violently at first, but encouraged me to continue, and presently she could stand full contact with my tongue again. Initially she tilted her hips downwards to shield the exposed head of her clit but, toying with the hooded shaft, I was pleased at how hard and erect the little organ felt. Before long there was no more need to use saliva to lubricate her. Her breath grew short, and she eagerly rocked her hips to match the motion of my tongue. This completely threw off my aim, and now all I could do was lick blindly and rapidly for all I was worth. This frantic phase seemed to go on for longer than I'd bargained for, but at last C uttered a crescendo of shouts, rising both in tone and amplitude, until she could no longer stand it and scrambled away from my touch. "Your voice doesn't normally go that high," I observed with satisfaction.>C lay dazed and immobile like a thrown rag doll, her spine bent and her limbs at all angles, her magnificent breasts swolled and firm. The occasional involuntary twitch jolted her whole body. Her slick, swollen vulva gaped like the sucker of some rock-dwelling crustacean. I took a fond, lingering mental snapshot of her before withdrawing to the bathroom to clean up.
>>24795884>swolledswollen FFS
>>24795391I started working on my prose alongside watching the Brandon Sanderson lectures a while ago. So far, I've seen an improvement in pacing, less repetition, and enough positive change overall that I'm able to keep at it without getting disheartened at the inhuman gobbledygook that is a lot of the dialogue I've written. As a kid I was never in any advanced writing courses but I was in music, and it seems to me that learning to write is much like learning an instrument: it's countless hours of making slight improvements on trash while pushing aside the feeling that you'll never be able to hold a candle to the people that make the art that inspires you.I started writing smut for myself to bang out my practice in a way that keeps me motivated. I'm able to write and proofread 3-4k words a day consistently in one sitting. It's been easier to get into the heads of each of my characters, hunt down the right-feeling descriptions, and stay in the writing mood for a couple hours straight while I'm rock hard.
>>24795391Yes, I have published it anonymously on choose your own change . net. It varies in quality from absolutely grammatically and conceptually gobbledygook to half decent.
>>24795391Find less used innocuous words that can have sub-erotic meanings and work them into your writing.I remember "moist" gave girls the ick a decade ago because how ubiquitous it was throughout the genre. Not sure what triggers girls now. Pretty sure they can't even read so it doesn't matter.
