The way you eat apricots is an invitation to collapse,your lips pressed against orange suns.The cat is a small black cloud, pacing the edge of the curtains,its tail the flicker of longing.A woman in a straw hat stands in a field of wheat, her face obscured by light.I want to be an arm reaching into her pocketor the shadow following the curve of her hip.There is a particular way rain smells on concrete depending on how much time has passed since it last stopped.The snake continues its quiet ritual,a small act of predation against the immensity of the meadow.This longing does not disappearit just shifts, becoming the fabric of breathing. Each inhale is a reaching, each exhale a surrender.
i'd take the likes of rupi kaur over this schlock every day. you're havin a laugh right?surely you could have coaxed something better out of the model than this besides? my friend, i really recommend finding some poetry collections and broadening your horizons. it would do you some good to see something well written. a poem i like has been included so as to not leave you empty handed.
>>24825922Tried to Google this poem and the AI said William Faulkner wrote it. That true?
>>24826796no.
>>24826796sorry, forgot to include the actual poet's name. James Wright.
>>24827326>>24827320I love you and but I hate lifeSo who are your favorite poets I love eliot and Pessoa and frank Stanford and Hart crane is cool tooDo you want to dieI want to die by suicide I can see that there is an astronomical end to it allIt can be mapped in mathTechnology and time and just the wideness of spaceSorryI'm drunk againAs alwaysAnywayHow Are you?
>>24827909i don't usually share my preferences in poetry.you should stop drinking, man. anyway, try Ted Hughes.Don't kill yourself.
>>24827915Idk the list of poets who were suicidal and alcoholic was / is pretty longI want to learn Chinese so I can understand their poetryTo me it seems almost elementary, but that's me reading it in translation And idk how their language worksIt's ideographic, right? And idk really how that worksAnywayDo you write poetry?Do you drink a lot?If you write poetry then can I please read your poems?
>>24827931I don't drink a lot, no. I write poetry, but do not share it here.I'm not going to condone in any sense the act of suicide.go have a cup of coffee or tea and sober up.
>>24827956LMAOI can see why you don't share your shit poetry. Even the AI in OP did a better job.
>>24827956Read T S Eliot "reflection on verse libre" and then rewrite your poem and then come back to us.>>24827938Could you please tell me everything possible about your poetry without sharing it. Like the blind guys groping at the elephant. One felt a broom, another a wall, another a spear, another a snake, etc.Pls?Ok
>>24827970i just showed you the poem, so i don't know what you want.
>>24827966Don't be mean. I'm op. Don't be mean. Either share your own poetry or remain silent. ....I'm going to kill myself Ok coolHow much do you drink, anon?
>>24827980i wrote that response, i also posted the poem. you understand nothing. stop drinking
>>24827982Was Hart Crane a good poet because he drank or because he killed himself?
>>24827986hart crane was a good poet because he was a sensitive faggot
>>24827989Literally name one (1) poet who's an insensitive heterosexual.
>>24827995that was the point
>>24828000Do you like frank Stanford or Robinson jeffers?I wish to dieWhat's your favorite holiday Mine Is Halloween Love you Bye
>>24828016goodbye.
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I wanted to ask,has anyone else noticed that the majority of AI-generated novels you find are either 1. scams where they rip off a concept for a different real book, change the title slightly, and self-publish in the hopes of people buying them without realizing they're not the real books they're trying to read, or 2. written by right-wingers with a bunch of themes like deep state conspiracies or great replacement theory shit
