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Rate my prose. 10/28/25(Tue)14:25:24 No.24836461

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Rate my prose. Anonymous 10/28/25(Tue)14:25:24 No.24836461 Archived

americans are acting asocially and autistically, aspiring as affected assholes and also absorbing androgenic amniotic albumens.

Anonymous
10/28/25(Tue)14:28:57 No.24836468

Anonymous 10/28/25(Tue)14:28:57 No.24836468

>>24836461
A for effort

Anonymous
10/28/25(Tue)14:49:44 No.24836518

Anonymous 10/28/25(Tue)14:49:44 No.24836518

Check out Alphabetical Africa

Anonymous
10/28/25(Tue)14:59:48 No.24836542

Anonymous 10/28/25(Tue)14:59:48 No.24836542

>>24836461
It's gay

Anonymous
10/28/25(Tue)15:01:47 No.24836549

Anonymous 10/28/25(Tue)15:01:47 No.24836549

>>24836461
Smartest poster on /lit/

Anonymous
10/28/25(Tue)19:16:21 No.24837202

Anonymous 10/28/25(Tue)19:16:21 No.24837202

>>24836461
alliteration.
*clapping*

Anonymous
10/28/25(Tue)19:18:57 No.24837209

Anonymous 10/28/25(Tue)19:18:57 No.24837209

>>24836461
can i show this to my malewife?

Anonymous
10/28/25(Tue)19:22:44 No.24837221

Anonymous 10/28/25(Tue)19:22:44 No.24837221

>>24837202
>assonance
>*farting*
ftfy

Anonymous
10/28/25(Tue)19:28:00 No.24837239

Anonymous 10/28/25(Tue)19:28:00 No.24837239

>>24836461
holy fuck read some satirist or something you have net negative talent in writing

Anonymous
10/28/25(Tue)19:37:22 No.24837283

Anonymous 10/28/25(Tue)19:37:22 No.24837283

>>24836461
You're a diarrhea moth anon.

Anonymous
10/28/25(Tue)20:45:11 No.24837466

Anonymous 10/28/25(Tue)20:45:11 No.24837466

>>24836461
>brings up Americans
You ESL?

Anonymous
10/29/25(Wed)07:18:13 No.24838707

Anonymous 10/29/25(Wed)07:18:13 No.24838707

>>24836461
I thought I was reading Ulysses

Anonymous
10/29/25(Wed)07:20:35 No.24838719

Anonymous 10/29/25(Wed)07:20:35 No.24838719

really good. reminds me of when Epic Fail Guy posted on /b/
>breetings /b/, i bring you bastards brilliant breads
or w/e it was. 'twas indeed epic.

Anonymous
10/29/25(Wed)07:24:18 No.24838728

Anonymous 10/29/25(Wed)07:24:18 No.24838728

>>24836461
MF would put a clown beat behind this throw in egypt and then claim it's super dope hip hop for the culture while smoking a blunt.

Anonymous
10/29/25(Wed)07:32:15 No.24838753

Anonymous 10/29/25(Wed)07:32:15 No.24838753

>>24836461
>asocially and autistically
Asocially and autistically what? These adverbs need an adjective to modify.
>aspiring as...
You mean "aspiring to be..."