Can chapters with mostly dialogue work?
[sarcasm] No. [/sarcasm]
>>24854105Yes. Entire books with mostly dialogue can work. Have you never read a play?
>>24854138What if there's a chapter that mostly exists to throw some light into the antagonists' motivations and seeing them react to a significant event of two chapters prior?
>>24854105no, people don’t talk that much, you’d break verisimilitude
>>24854105Read JR by Gaddis
>>24854105What I used to by mostly description, I started accomplishing with dialogue more often. It beaks it up, it shifts gears. There's something "happening".
>>24854105Whole books with just monologue work, why wouldnt one chapter of mostly dialogue?