Specifically inner monologueNo talking to more women irl is not an option
>>24888155first write a man then...
>>24888155I love spackled bitches where their face is a different colour than the rest of their skin. This one remembered to paint her neck as well but forgot the transition to bare shoulders. Oh well gotta stop somewhere or just go for the full body paintjob.
>>24888155I bet you'll get great insights from 4chan posters. Good thinking making this thread.
They dont have oneThey dont even exist unless a man is perceiving them
>>24888157
>>24888155Go to TwoX and look at their endless insecure rambling combined with wild mindcanon about who did what why and why it makes them The Worst and then just copy that. For dialogue note their snarky replies to any who dare dissent, never in a “shut up you’re wrong” way but “you’re so brave for noticing such a thing when you wrote a message 3 years ago saying you thought Israel was right to respond” and then let the hordes descend on them. This will go a long way to realism. But wait is that what you want? If not, look up the romantasy slop and see what their idealized selves look like.
>>24888210this is like someone asking how to write the internal monologue of men and sending them to r/foreveralone
>>24888221While men are told by society to censor their misogyny, women are actively encouraged to embrace this type of bitter feminism found on TwoX.So no, it is accurate
>>24888235you'll get mad at me for saying this, but you should get offline for a while.
>>24888243I could do that, but it won't change reality. Reality is reflected online by the simple fact that everyone is online now
>>24888251you are too far gone.
>>24888273Im doing fine. Thanks for your concern though
>>24888155Learn from the master. Insert monologues about big breasts and nipples, maybe some milk?
>>24888155Being raised by sisters helps. I don't know OP. It's a looser way of communication. When done right you feel it in your stomach as it rises to your chest as opposed to the usual center mass rock of emote that you're probably used to.
>>24888243YWNBAW
>>24888243The situation is far worse offline. Women have already basically destroyed everything that was ever slightly positive about civilization and not one of them, not a single fucking one on the entire planet can take even the mildest criticism.
>>24888155>inner monologue>women
>>24888155What are you gonna do about it if I do?
>>24888273No he's technically right
>>24888155Women are like little girls except slightly more articulate. Imagine how a little girl, like a toddler, would respond to a situation and you have women. Women are also good at and like working within systems, yet are bad at defining them (making new ones, working outside of them).
>>24888155>Real talkThis is not a negro space, please leave.
Write them like teenagers with short term memory loss, hybristophilia, and mild to moderate symptoms of a cluster B personality disorder.
Just orient everything the character does or thinks about around sexual politics
>>24888194>>24888157This but unironically. The other thing I would add is make emotions more prominent than logic in every day matters. Do this too much and it comes off as a parody to women but just right and even women will say it is relatable.
"I'm a woman," she thought, taking care not to rub her breasts on the furniture as she made her way to the bathroom. "All of my make-up is here. I think I should go shopping for clothes." She continued, applying lipstick for a night out with "the girls."How'd I do?
>>24888221Are you actually unaware of how mainstream TwoX is? More to the point it’s about their thinking. None of these bitches are analogous to “foreveralone” since they’re universally sexually active women with large friend networks. You just did the thing where the equivalent of a basementdwelling loser man is an average woman? Do you even understand how insane that is?
>>24888155Nobody wants to read about realistic female characters, there is nothing less interesting.
>>24888711>she thoughtCompletely unrealistic.
they don't have an inner monologue. You know this right? You can tell because a woman will have to analyze herself to discover why she did a thing. As a man I have never done a single thing without knowing why. It would not even be possible for me to not know why I did something as having a reason precedes doing a thing.
>>24888243>you'll get mad at me for saying this, but you should get offline for a while.
>>24888299Unfortunately I'm a guy and the oldest child so that doesn't help. My younger brother and I get along fine. My sister, the middle child and most accomplished, is a petulant cunt who thinks guys like me should be euthanized. It really sucks being in a family where you have a sister who is the first girl born in two generations so everyone sits around her in a wigwam listening to her cluck like a hen about her ordinary, trite life with her second husband because I suspect her first one simply just got sick of her shtick of being an irl Mary sue so he cheated on her with a college freshman coed.
>>24888377Micropenis?
>>24889348I bet your sister gives some amazing top
>>24889381Dude, nasty. She's 40. I'm 43. Too close in age and I don't want to think about it.
>>24889386Then again one of my exes was literally ten months younger than her. She was a whore, though.
>>24889386>too close in ageNigga would you prefer to think about your 14 year old sister giving you head?
>>24889396It depends. Is she built like she's six years older?
>>24888155>No talking to more women irl is not an option))))))))
>>24889376Everything is well above average you subhuman, incoherent whore.
>>24888155Consider the character. What you seem to want to do is write stereotypes. Write the character.
>>24889396God yes, she was hot as fuck back then
>>24888155Read some Margaret Atwood or other female authors who can write well. Experience how they see the world through their eyes. 'does he like or does he not like me'/'is he hot or not' is the part of their core arc for almost every woman - that visceral aesthetic valuation. Keep that in mind and women are easy to write well. Women go 'awww' where men can only growl. That is one of the key dividers.
>>24889396most girls expire after 20some after 1715-16 is the perfect age
>>24891526Shut up pedo faggot, you’ll never have any of them anyway
>>24889844>well above averageMicrocock detected
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>>24891560VirginI know you’ve never fucked a 10/10. You’ll probably never even fuck a 5/10.
>>24888155If you come at it from the angle of "writing a woman" your work going to fucking suck. You need to approach every single character as a distinct individual human being and not just a representative of some group or identity. Otherwise the character WILL just turn into a stereotype (positive or negative, it doesn't matter) and lack any real depth or psychological realism.The fact that there are 45 replies to this thread and no one until me has told you this is just resounding evidence that nobody on /lit/ can write. Good writers are interested in human beings and the anons here are too jaded and arrogant to show any genuine interest in people.
>>24888711Funnily enough, I wrote a ~4000 word play all about women (girls) applying makeup just last week
Integrate into lolcow
>>24890593Very good rec, i would also recommend Rupi Kaur.
>>24891549I hooked up with a 17 year old when I was 22Yeah I probably won’t have any younger like 14-15 but that’s life
>>24890593Brutal truth
>>24891660don't give up
>>24891566Duly noted. I honestly don't even care at this point. The internet is a trash heap.
