ITT we're nice.I'd love to hear about what you're writing. And if you're just starting out, I believe in you. Everyone starts somewhere.
>>24890607Short story about the upcoming rapekrieg
>>24890607>ITT we're nice.Saysfucking who?
>>24890607I actually do appreciate it when anons post their writing, the only people I rip on are the incels who are so spergy and angry nothing but direct words might affect them, so even then, boom, doing them another favor.
>>2489060720 yo first time writer. Did I cook with my opening?
>>24891662I like it
>>24891662Watch the modern phrases like "for once in my life, stood up.These phrases feel off after establishing a more historical setting, phrases, and language. But who am I to criticize, indo the same thing.
>>24891662>prithee sirInconsistent dedication to actual historical writing will come off as comical. The broken sentence structure is modern and would be enormous run on sentences in actual historical work. You’re always balancing pastiche and homage over the pitfall of failure, attempting this. I think you have something good that needs a couple more passes for consistency of tone.
>>24891897>>24892019Absolutely agree, I find myself having a hard time being as committed to the old english as I would like to be. Any suggestions for how to get better at this? Considering cracking open the bible honestly.
