Talk about poems/poets you like, post your own work, and critique others.
>>24950975O Waters cutThy great divideChaos sproutedTo make the SkyThe whirlwind sowsThe whirlwind reaps!His harvest in motionSince waylaying the Deep
/lit/ is a shitty boardi'd rather fall on a swordthan read what fags shill/lit/cels have shitty tasteand only consume wasteas swines to their swill
recently started reading poetry. i’ve always enjoyed it, but never read it much. i started reading it constantly, i read it on my phone at work, and my face has changed, the way i walk. i read one that really caught me at the right time and i was thinking about the last two lines all day, someone said ‘you look miles away’.
>>24951047another one claimed
>>24951060the most dog-true of dogs.
>>24950982yeah (uh), your poem be shitty (uh)your poem's not litty (uh)
>>24950982where were you going with this?
>>24951089>>24951129closer to the divine than u muhammed
Wrote this poem some while ago (printed in the last &). Would be interested in feedback/thoughts.
I hide small stones in the forgotten cornersCount the dust grains half heartedlyStill the certainty of sun and moon Offers some solace and measures the timeWell spent, lost forever
EverydayShowing up to the same jobHating itNo time offIrregular hoursTo hurry up and waitOn a payoff Never comingLost in shippingReorderedLost againTimeless waitingOn a gift Of it ending While they never pay himAnd he's alwaysThe first one inEternally sufferingSo he can (occasionally)RemarkThey're really screwing me hereTo transient othersIn a carparkLike one day That will make him Stop
"Cartel" - Julio Cortazar-I see the world as chaos, and at its center a rose. I see the rose as the happy eye of beauty, and at its center the worm. I see the worm as a fragment of immense life, and at its center death. I see death as the flame of nothingness, and at its center hope. I see hope as a stained-glass window singing at midday, and at its center man.
>>24951252It's not a poem.
What's the one by Kipling about a settler/pioneer making his way into an undiscovered land? Thanks in advance, pic unrel
