I'm working on a screenplay (or "treatment" or whatever the fuck they call it). It's about a guy who gets acquired psychopathy from a brain injury. The injury also gives him ASS (Acquired Savant Syndrome, yes, it's a real thing, and it really is called ASS)Because of his ASS (lmao), he becomes a programming savant, and he can become more fluent in a language than an experiened developer in under a week. The guy has this elaborate revenge fantasy, and, in order to get his revenge, he needs to start working for Peter ThielIn the scene I'm working on, the main character is in Thiel's office. He says he will do anything to get the job, which Peter takes as an invitation to a blowjob. The protagonist unzips Peter's pants and starts sucking his cock. Right before Peter Thiel cums, his secretary bangs on the door, which startles the protagonoist, making him bite down on Thiel's cock, making it bleedWhat should happen after thatAlso picrel is Trevor Moore (RIP) because I've always imagined him in this role, and when I was psychotic a few years ago, I started thinking in his voice, and that never really stopped. Whenever I imagine myself doing something I see Trevor doing it.
>>24956379> He says he will do anything to get the job, which Peter takes as an invitation to a blowjobIt was fine up to here. Too on the nose
>>24956385I thought OP's post was the first genuinely funny one for a while.
>>24956390It is funny and original I just don't want to see him kneecap success by laying it on too thick
>>24956390thanks! i try. it's a comedy, but holy shit is it dark. i can't write like tarantino but i'm trying to make it at least twice as racist and violent.
>>24956390>>24956394Just banged this out. It's a rough draft
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This thing needs an edit for sure, I'm just riffing rn
of course things wouldn't be complete without a horrifying domestic abuse scene starring zuck and his wife priscilla chan
Sounds good OP!
>>24956508thanks bby
>>24956379I'd watch that.
>>24956379too many hoops
>>24956682that's just, like, your opinion, mani like hoops
>>24956379I, too, am currently writing a novel where I'd have Trevor Moore play the main character.Guy had a nice voice.
Hey op i thought i'd give you some material to work with maybe youll be inspired by my experiences(DONT LAUGH) i never knew my father. I was raped by my gay cousin. my grandfather tried to kill my brother by throwing him out of a two story window. Then he died from cancer. I’v been in dozens of jumpings and countless fights, many of which resulted in my ass getting handed to me. I got listed as a potential school threat due to harmless drawings back in 7th grade resulting in expulsion and rumors involving a second columbine, and everyone involved trying their hardest to get me to do it by relentless bullying that followed me for the rest of middle school. After being diagnosed with ADD right after, and prescribed a stimulant. i developed hyper anxiety disorder and lived in a constant state of paranoia where anything caused a minor panic attack, and the feeling that nowhere was safe. i was Unable to sleep most nights because my heartbeat rarely slowed down enough for me to relax for almost 3 years. I had to wait until i was literally too tired to fight sleep. Closing my eyes was terrifying. This usually resulted in me staying up until i got to school the next morning to pass out in all my classes. Which in turn made me look super depressed to everyone including the bullies, As they at the time believed i was just one push from a school massacre they could say the lived through. a shitty cycle.
>>24957042I can kinda relate to him because he wrote a song called "God Says" that's all about having OCD. I got OCD too, that song was 100% on the mark
