/ourgirl/ is getting slandered by some clout chasing loser.>The Second Story is a conservative media critique channel who hates everything modern. She's wrong. In this video I break down exactly how. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Oa1L-kE5lm8What do you think?
honestly what the fuck, i left a comment on the video mocking the tranny but he is right, that woman is retarded.
>>24960330This guy is beyond retarded. I didn't like the chick's definition of a hero either, but it was all of six minutes before I already put holes in ten of this guy's premises alone (he didn't construct many actual arguments)
>>24960330Not even 60 seconds in and the guy isn't even responding to her directly, he's responding to another guy who's criticising her and complaining about it. Is this really what YT reviewers are coming to? Second hand shitflinging?
>>24960330He's a butthurt tranny that is butthurt because she made fun of his favourite books. As >>24960383 said, he doesn't provide any real arguments, he's just upset that this woman made fun of his favourite books and he's trying to piggyback off the outrage that she causes amongst the wider tranny/LGBT community to hopefully garner free views/attention.
>>24960330Are her videos actually good? I'm left wing but I'll listen to anyone talk about books if they're smart.
>>24960439>I'm left wing but I'll listen to anyone talk about books if they're smart.You’re in no position to judge anyone’s intelligence though, your hero is failson Will Menaker.
>>24960439I like her because she shits on fanfic writers for being insufferable gooners.
>>24960439They just state obvious things, yet seem to make a ton of people seethe. She's right, but doesn't say anything really interesting.
>>24960448It's because a (married) woman is saying them so they can't easily dismiss her opinions as that of a seething incel who's upset at women having fun gooning to books.
>>24960330>What do you think?I think libtards don't know they're libtards and think anyone who makes an argument they can't compute is a conservative. You see it all the time on /lit/. Pretty funny.
I present to you a classical analysis of Cristopher Nolan's Oppenheimer>wow, this film has amazing cinematography, directing, lighting, acting, sound and music>I can't follow the story beats though, they're all out of order! BAD CINEMA
>>24960573Writing is not Nolan's strong suit.
>>24960330Sha'annno't be watching, purchase an advertisement for both of your channels ma'am
>>24960573It was poorly written though.
It doesn't matter. Stop using YouTube.
>>24960445She 100% has read or written fanfiction with how obsesses she is with them.The question is what characters has she shipped in the past.
>>24960698>She 100% has read or written fanfiction with how obsesses she is with them.I mean every woman has.
>>24960573She's right. The pace is too fast to tell a coherent story. Same with the new Napoleon film.
>>24960330Did she really even provide her own actual definition of a hero? She just pulled some definitions up and read them to us she never stated "I claim a hero to be this and that."
>>24960448Fair. But someone has to.
>>24960703I mean the Napoleon movie has far more flaws than just that. Rydley clearly wanted to make a pure "Napoleon bad" movie.
>>24960738>I mean
>>24960383Elaborate
>>24960738That's just Ridley being Bri'ish
>>24960439As you can see by the replies in the thread, the only people defending here are racist and deranged /pol/tard who both hate women but are simps. She is a conservative grifter and is on record saying blatantly fake shit like twilight being a fanfiction of harry potter.
>>24960439>>24960444Actually his hero is probably braindead Matt Christmas, he wipes up his drool 4free and changes the baby's diapers since Matt is too much of a vegetable to do it himself.
>>24960698>>24960700Probably wrote fanfic as a kid, grew out of it, and cringes at it now, but feels genuine disgust when she sees 40yo men in dresses lauding it as being High Art.
>>24960439I've only seen one of her videos and it was great. She laid out the problem of modern fiction being almost entirely smut that has been mistakenly or maliciously re-labeled as "art", and how it has crowded out actual writing. I've been saying what she said in the video for a while now and it felt like I was screaming into the void, I'm glad the problem is getting more widespread acknowledgement.
>>24960439I liked her explanation of dialogue. Then again, I'm a stemfag, so I never had any serious instruction in writing things other than research papers.
>>24960439She just observes modern lit-slop, so of course it makes trannies and women seethe. It’s good but it really isn’t saying anything we don’t know
>>24960573>criticize her for being wrong>it's a case where she's obviously rightWhat did Anon mean by this?
>>24960330>NOTE: I can't find the article I read that explicitly stated that Twilight was originally fanfiction. It might have been, it might not have been. how does one refute this logic?
>>24961062Fair play to her if you ask me
lynch every single booktube/tok posting faggot
>>24960330>/ourgirl/That isn’t a picture of Honor Levy tho.
>>24960330I don't mind her- I just think her videos are the most obvious braindead takes possible. It's the issue I have with all "writing" channels, >Don't make your main character overpowered>Don't forget world-building>Don't self-insert politics>Make your plot actually matter> Make sure you plan out your stories>Have a unique castAnyone who needs to be told this shouldn't touch a pen or keyboard in the first place. I don't think there's a single YouTuber tips vid I'ver watched that wasn't complete dog shit.
Why can't trannies voice train?
>>24960330Her anti hero piece where the Punisher is only an anti hero because there isn't a consensus over the morality of executing criminals in the street yet.
