would people say this is a great opener if it came out today?
on one hand, writing sentences this long is clearly racist. on the other, it's about muh mental health, which is good. but it's about the feelings and problems of a male, which is bad. you'd probably need to invoke the fact of him having passionate gay sex with queequeeg later to salvage it as a queer narrative.
>>24982668>would people say this is a great opener if it came out today?Intelligent people would. Woman and faggots would whine.
>M-dashesAI slop.
>>24982668no, and they'd be perfectly correct. in the 19th century it was a great opening.
>>24982668>very first sentence contains the sequence of words "the watery part of the world"
>>24982668Literature isn’t fungible.
>>24982668no. overwritten, purple, and em-dashes as well as it doesn't start immediately with action! Call me Ishmael isn't captivating either!
>>24982668>em dashAI slop
