"Opening" EditionPrevious: >>25020764/wg/ AUTHORS & FLASH FICTION: https://pastebin.com/ruwQj7xQRESOURCES & RECOMMENDATIONS: https://pastebin.com/nFxdiQvCPlease limit excerpts to one post.Give advice as much as you receive it to the best of your ability.Discuss the written works below for practice; contribute, and you shall receive.If you have not performed a cursory proofread, do not expect to be treated kindly. Edit your work for spelling and grammar before posting.Shitposters should be ignored and reported.Beginner guides on writing:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pHdzv1NfZRMhttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=whPnobbck9shttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YAKcbvioxFkIntermediate guides on writing:https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/48654.Storyhttps://www.goodreads.com/book/show/3097766-borges-on-writinghttps://www.goodreads.com/book/show/23056.Image_Music_TextAdvanced guide on writing:Just do it.Theme: https://youtu.be/6egTkeULN88?si=IBGaKWIjoJJ1PCdG
>>25026390Wow writing is just like my hecken favorite faggy RPG
>>25026390My current manuscript is chaotic neutral
>>25026398Yay.
>>25026398if that was true more people would write
>Uh... the thing is...or>Uh... The thing is... ?
>>25026390I've been working on a science fiction story for over a decade, but I'm too lazy to ever finish it. What advice would you have for that?
>>25026553Fuck off, and don't post here again.
>>25026390Bill sighed as he loaded a bag of garbage into the can. His life sucked and will suck forever because he's a willfully malicious piece of shit. The end.
>>25026390chaotic evil is better lawful good
>>25026423top
>>25026390Neutral here
Don't post your work here, self... it's not worth it, self...
>>25026632man you really got assblasted last thread didn't you? seething unprompted over it even now
https://mega.nz/file/7kFHWKrQ#jRKIAv7jvLHBpld_atPFp5DTLOv9-zdcXGALt6CfUe0Anyone have any feedback for me? Im trying to write different scenes that might popup instead of writing from start to finish. Is that a good idea?Mostly its just for practice, but i think itll be useful in the future as an outline.
>>25026862Fuck off, and don't post here again, avatarfaggot.
>>25026567>>25026882Fuck off, and don't post here again.
>>25026567>>25026882>Being mad that people are talking about writing in a writing general
>>25026901There isn't any writing here>>25026862Nobody wants to download your virus
>>25026862>>25026948Then heres a pastebin you whiny bitch."So let me get this straight. You want to look for your father?" He whispered.https://paste-bin.org/wl8okgciyj
>>25026986You have way too many "noun did x" sentences next to each other. Thrown in some metaphors, similes, hyperboles, random syntax changes, etcYou should also have the characters "play with the setting" in the conversation.>Although the old man tore open the condom packet, a dark bathroom wasn't a place Amelia wanted to have sex; perhaps she could convince the old man to use the living room.There we get a sense of setting where a room has a bathroom connected to it, there's a condom packet open, and we can infer it's nighttime.
