>Write 1st person story jumping between other people's assumptions constantly>this is considered fair game and a mark of incredible social understanding>Write 3rd person omniscient style establishing personal dispositions for various characters>get accused of head hoppingHow did this happen? How is the style of retards and toddlers being given a free pass while the style that has omniscience in its title become the target of every post-modern editor? Are they stupid or something?
The latter has no meta reason why the narrator doesn't reveal the answer to every mystery you hint at.Why doesn't the narrator know the future?The latter ought to lead to the narrator being a character himself. Does the narrator become self aware that he's observing a world he can observe but not change? What if he says what he just said differently? Can he unmake his own narration and save her?
>>25173948Why am I saying it like this? I was in this other head just now. This voice has much narrower frames of mind.Aaah he stopped reading, hello?!I'm in a different book I AM THE VOICE IN EVERY HEAD
