But if you think the writing is extremely amateur then are you implying you could do better? That you can actually write something that entertains a lot of people? Can you really, amateur?
Do you have to be a professional cook to critique a shit meal?
>>25180878I could 100% do better, but I would never debase myself by releasing work that I am not completely satisfied with. So you’ll have to wait. Writing redditslop is easy, anyone can do it. I don’t want to write reddit-adjacent slop.
>>25180878It's just feels so weird to know this even got published.
>>25180878There are people here who have proven that they can do better. The writing and poetry general isn’t the best shit you’ll ever read but it’s better than this slop.
>>25180878>entertains a lot of people>implying this is the goal Just say you’re a jeet op
>>25180881You have to be if you're claiming that the professional is in fact a rank amateur.>>25180884Post something better. Write a worthwhile passage. I dare you.>>25180886Give me examples.
>>25180887I'd cave your skull in if you said that to me irl.
>>25180896Andy is that you why are you so hellbent on defending this literal shit. It is ready player one tier bad. It’s amateurish, I guarantee you - a majority of English speaking high school graduates can write a better piece of fiction, certainly fucking dialogue than this. Surely you have to recognise that?
>>25180897lol jeet confirmed you don’t understand the English language properly that’s fine pack up the thread lads your punches are weak
>>25180900>>25180905All I am hearing is just empty yapping. Thanks for proving my point. You can't write anything better. Weaklings.
>>25180896>Give me examples.You lazy cunt. Just go into the threads that are up.
>>25180913I'd choke the air out of you like chauvin did to Floyd for acting this uppity.
This thread is dedicated to John, Paul, George, and Ringo.
>>25181008Stfu weeb subhuman. You're lower on the totem pole.
>>25180878People liking slop instead of the right movies or books used to upset me a lot as a teenager and I was all like wake up sheeple but really as an adult why does it bother you? I wouldn’t read Andy Weir but his fans don’t affect you at all.
It's not that bad.
>I-I COULD DO BETTER I JUST DON'T WANT TOthe cope on this board is unreal
