I came up with it when I was thinking of a JAV I would like to watch, it became so sophisticated I've gooned to it several timesI just don't know how to turn it into a book, AI just gives me generic shit based on everything I've written, it doesn't give it life or creativity, what can I do?
>>25229916Try to give us a barebones attempt of a description lad
>>25229919Should I explain it or try describe the scenery?
>>25229937I'm not tryin to build a world, I'm just trying to bust a nut. AI has words that give the story feeling, myself I just write way too logically, worse than AI, "X did Y", yet it's taking me a while to get the whole book written. I don't want to prepend the erotica with a bunch of world-building filler first, the reader doesn't want that, so in my draft I started with *SPANK*, big in bold. "The fourth is always the worst" *SPANK*I want to get hooked immediatelyAnd then it just escalates in taboo and twists from there. "Who is being spanked and why? Are they willing?">"Her knees had given up a while ago but she was held upright by the chains wrapped around the pole" (or something, wrote it better in the draft)>*SPANK*>"...">All she was hoping for was that ,,, would find her soonAI added a lot of details to this start scene which made it very, very, very goodBut once AI starts to deviate it becomes hard to get it back on track and the edits start ruin the creativity
>>25229916you'll never turn it into a text unless you can find a world and voice that will let you invest individual scenes and sentences with the same sense of desire you've invested in the concept. raymond chandler's hardboiled detective novels aren't just the mystery plot - the 'who did what' plot-generating machine - they're also the scene-generating machine of 'travel around los angeles and visit the private abodes of various freaks' and the word-generating machine of 'come up with some wacky similes and cynical observations'. the machines all plug into each other in a kind of circuit through which the desire never stops flowing; it's constantly humming and powering away and churning out the text. you feel me?if you use ai you'll never figure out how any of this works.
>>25229945i deleted and reposted with edits, apologies >>25229948just drop the ai dude. if you're stuck then read stories you enjoy for inspiration.
>>25229951I won't read books in order to write my own book. I'm writing based on the voice in my head, based on what I would want to read, then I reread and I realize it's too logical.AI does a lot of good with fleshing out the scenes. It turns my draft into a real thing you could read. It's good. Obviously I wouldn't ask it to write a generic thing, that's the problem I wrote in the OP. I'm also obviously not trying to write a LOTR epic, just a gooner fiction based on my very unique vision that would be interesting for the reader to exploreIt's afantastic situation that could happen. Very wrong, very hot, I've nutted to the idea a few timesI've got a good 4 chapters so far but it's moving slow and I need to be horny to be inspired
Should I give the basic gestalt, anons?
