I wrote a short story>https://pastebin.com/6rP99b5Zor>https://docs.google.com/document/d/1QpIp152-XIxHKXQF4R5-irfQAZ3IuyjODTSGiJcliww/edit?usp=sharingIt's a sci fi horror. A bunch of scientists investigate a new potential fuel source, but things don't work out well. I got some feedback after posting the first draft last week, I trimmed cut and tightened up as much as I could and managed to make it a few pages shorter.
>>25235733checked its pretty late now, if the thread is still up in the morning i´ll read it and give some input
>>25235733I'll give it a read when I can. Thread probably won't be up by then but I'll write my thoughts in the, well, write your thoughts thread. Look for its title.
>>25235733Fix your formatting and cut separate those paragraphs. I read the first one and the content does not justify being kept in a single paragraph.
