File: 594658__suggestive_artist(...).jpg (2.29 MB, 1184x1387)

2.29 MB JPG

>>42837665
Last updated in thread #132:
>How to train a Scootaloo
Scootaloo receives a special kind of Wonderbolts training.
https://ponepaste.org/10804 ( Temporary paste )
https://ponepaste.org/10827 ( Unlisted backup of the above paste)
WIP of the setting used for the story:
https://ponepaste.org/10675

Last updated in threads #127 and #127.1:
>Untitled
The perfect Accessory to own.
Starts here: >>41365586

Last updated in #126:
>Harsh is The Night by ManicQuil
EQG story with a sub Rainbow Dash and her mistress Luna.
Starts here: >>40261868
Last update here: >>41332381

Last updated in #124:
>Thralls of Twilight by ManicQuil
The retired princesses show Twilight a new hidden side in their relationship.
Starts here: >>41137667
Last updated here: >>41137667

Last updated in #121:
>Short EQG christmas story with Dom Celestia and sub Dazzlings by ManicQuil
Starts here: >>40663996
Ends here: >>40670457

Last updated in #118:
>Untitled
Applebloom trying out a special outfit for Nightmare Night
Starts here: >>40211580
Last update here: >>40241892

File: 802056__suggestive_artist(...).png (2.27 MB, 1000x1507)

2.27 MB PNG

>>42837672
Last updated in threads #127 and #127.1:
>Untitled
The perfect Accessory to own.
Starts here: >>41365586

Last updated in #126:
>Harsh is The Night by ManicQuil
EQG story with a sub Rainbow Dash and her mistress Luna.
Starts here: >>40261868
Last update here: >>41332381

Last updated in #124:
>Thralls of Twilight by ManicQuil
The retired princesses show Twilight a new hidden side in their relationship.
Starts here: >>41137667
Last updated here: >>41137667

Last updated in #121:
>Short EQG christmas story with Dom Celestia and sub Dazzlings by ManicQuil
Starts here: >>40663996
Ends here: >>40670457

Last updated in #118:
>Untitled
Applebloom trying out a special outfit for Nightmare Night
Starts here: >>40211580
Last update here: >>40241892

There, fixed it. And desuarchive wasnt fast enough to record my mistake.

File: 3706332__safe_artist-colo(...).png (3.15 MB, 1500x1814)

3.15 MB PNG

Always a slow warm up on weekends.

File: IMG_0270.jpg (143 KB, 1280x1063)

143 KB JPG

>>42837948
True

Any cute alicorns

>10

>>42838835
How well would it fit the pegasi to have a slavery custom like the spartans ?

>>42838929
Let me give a better context to this.
Im trying to think how the warrior focused pegasi in that pred/prey setting would view the slavery of the other flying races like the gryphons, hippogriffs and such, who they probably skirmish with a lot. And the idea of their culture being one born from having to constantly defend and show sky superiority to others, like how the Spartans had with their neighbours, crossed my mind.

>>42838562
Is this cute ?
https://derpibooru.org/images/3715731

Huh, there was another one?,
Well then to post what is next. Or anyone has a suggestion of other mares?

>>42839184
I want to see Vinyl inducing Tavi into the doll role, and then bringing her into the herd as an unequal partner.

>>42838562
>R&S logo in the corner
Rarity made it.

>>42839630
She acts all indignant during school and yet always pays a visit at her bully's house afterwards.
https://derpibooru.org/images/2040221

Carat and the Stick update when?

>>42838825

>>42841001
Extra realistic sloppa is the only good kind of sloppa.

>>42841001
Where is her saddle?!

>>42841134
Better question is, where is her choker or collar?

>>42841001
I wanted to post a link but now I cant find it for the life of me.
Does anyone know about a 3D animation where Rarity is fucking anon cowgirl style, and his head is covered with a paperbag with Spike's photo taped to it ?

>>42841377
https://twibooru.org/2695903

>>42841485
Thank you ! Man why didnt I favorite this when I first found it ?

>https://ponepaste.org/7575
Thanks for adding those two Glimmer stories grapenut.

>>42838562
Confess your sins
https://derpibooru.org/images/3714645

>>42841494
It wasn't hard to find it.
human on pony action, rarity, webm,cowgirl position

The beggar at the Gate

Be Rarity, once the untouchable jewel of Canterlot, now a mare whose nights end with her thighs clenched, sheets soaked, body screaming for a touch that was forced upon her and then ripped away.

By Celestia and Tartarus, how you burn for what Fluttershy did.

You have tried (desperately, shamefully) to drown the memory.

Three herds, each more prestigious than the last.

Stallions with velvet coats and velvet tongues, unicorns who sparked like diamonds, earth-pony lords whose cocks filled you with polite, perfunctory thrusts.

They finished inside you, kissed your cheek, and asked if you wanted breakfast.

It was nothing.

No teeth sinking into your throat until you sobbed.

No leather harness biting your flanks, straps creaking with every breath, framing your dripping cunt like a work of art.

No blindfold plunging you into velvet dark where every sensation became torture and rapture.

No phantom tongue that knew your clit better than you knew yourself, licking until you shattered, then stopping at the edge, leaving you dripping, begging, ruined.

You left every herd within weeks.

Not because they were cruel.

Because they were ordinary.

You crave the hunger you tasted that week:
the absolute, shattering devotion you saw in mares who had nothing yet were given everything.

You want to be spread, bound, filled until your mind blanks and your body surrenders.

You want to be owned so completely that pride becomes a distant memory.

And you despise yourself for it.

Tonight you stand before the plain wooden door behind the comic shop (no carriage, no gown).

Only a black cloak, hood drawn, nothing underneath.

Your nipples are peaked against the silk lining, your cunt already slick, pulsing with every heartbeat.

The green card is clenched between your teeth like a bitter aphrodisiac.

You knock three times (soft, shaking, wet).

The door opens.

Cheerie Star stands there, pink coat glowing in the lantern light, sapphire eyes calm but knowing.

You drop to your knees before she can speak.

The cloak falls away.

You are naked, coat gleaming with nervous sweat, thighs trembling, cunt glistening in the torchlight, clit swollen and aching for a touch you’ve been denied for half a year.

Your voice is a broken sob.

“Please…
I was wrong.
I mocked what I didn’t understand.
I thought love was something you wore, not something you bled for.
I thought the Stables were a game.
They broke me… and I’ve been starving ever since.”

Tears spill, hot and ugly, dripping onto your heaving chest.

“Give me a stallion (just one).
Let him want only me.
Let him love me the way those mares were loved.
I’ll pay any price.
I’ll sign anything.
I’ll wear green forever if that’s what it takes.
Just… please…
let me feel whole again.”

Cheerie regards you for a long, terrible moment.

Then she kneels (matron to mare) and cups your chin with a gentle hoof, forcing you to meet her eyes.

“No green card this time, little diamond.
You’ve already paid in full.
But love isn’t bought.
It’s earned.”

She presses something into your hoof (not a card).

A single black rose hair clip, identical to Fluttershy’s.

“One year as a red-silk mare.
Public level.
No special treatment.
No shortcuts.
Prove you understand what you mocked…
and maybe (just maybe) a stallion will choose you for keeps.”

You clutch the clip like a lifeline, tears dripping onto your bare, aching breasts, your cunt clenching around nothing, the memory of denial still throbbing between your legs.

“Thank you,” you whisper, voice raw.

“Thank you for not turning me away.”

Cheerie’s smile is soft steel.

“Every mare deserves a second chance to be wanted, Rarity.
Even the ones who once thought they were above it.”

She steps aside.

The velvet curtain waits.

You rise (naked, shaking, dripping with need), and step forward.

The Stables open their arms a second time.

And this time, you beg to be let in.

A little epilogue for Rarity.

Still working on the Vinyl and Octavia part

>>42841872
Nice epilogue.
And thanks for taking the request. Not sure if you will end up writing a different outcome, but it would still be nice if her jealousy over her human and the caring attachment she has for Tavi were big factors in it.

File: 76407__safe_artist-colon-(...).jpg (169 KB, 825x638)

169 KB JPG

Which headcanon do you guys go with to explain a pony's grip ?
Could horseshoes nullify it in your version ?

>>42842638
Just a hook grip.

File: 772917__safe_artist-colon(...).jpg (301 KB, 1880x2807)

301 KB JPG

>>42842872
What about frontal grabs ?

After time

Be Rarity, once the untouchable gem of Canterlot, now simply Red Silk #17.

One year.

Three hundred and sixty-five dawns of waking soaked in another stallion’s scent, thighs trembling, body marked inside and out.

The first three months were chaos.
Random humans (rough hands, gentle hands, curious hands) took whatever they wanted.

My mouth, wrapped around thick, pulsing heat until tears streaked my mascara and my throat burned with salt.

My cunt and flanks used in tandem (one human buried deep while another claimed the tighter ring behind), the stretch so complete I forgot my own name.

Torture by denial (hours of licking, fingering, edging) until I sobbed, begged, broke… only to be rewarded with a climax that shattered me, wave after wave ripping through my core until I saw stars behind the blindfold.

Then came the nights of fire and worship. Humans who learned my body like a symphony:

Slow, deliberate thrusts that made me sing,
hands cradling my face while they filled me, whispering

“You’re beautiful when you come undone, Rarity.”

Nights where I was held afterward, kissed until dawn, where the ache in my chest finally quieted.
I
hated how much I loved it.

I hated how much I needed it.

And then, one ordinary evening,
Fluttershy walked in (belly flat again, wings glowing with new-mother light).
She found me on my knees in the common area, a human’s fingers tangled in my mane, his cock sliding slow and deep between my lips, my throat working, eyes watering, body trembling on the edge.

She waited until he finished (warm, thick pulses painting my tongue), until I swallowed every drop with a shuddering moan.

Then she knelt, cupped my tear-streaked cheek, and asked, soft as sunrise:

“Do you regret it, Rarity? One year of this…
for one chance to be chosen?”

Before I could answer, my regular (tall, dark-haired, the one who always kisses my horn when I come) lifted me onto the cushioned bench, spread my thighs with reverent hands, and took me (slow, deep, claiming).

I arched, crying out, the pleasure so intense it hurt.

Through the haze of my building climax I saw Fluttershy watching.

She smiled (warm, proud, maternal).

“Be happy, Rarity,” she whispered. “You earned this.”

The human’s thrusts turned ferocious (exactly how I secretly crave).

He gripped my collar, growled my name,
and poured himself inside me (hot, endless, mine).

I came screaming, body convulsing, walls milking him in desperate, grateful pulses.

When the world returned, he was cradling me, kissing my forehead,

whispering the words I had waited a year to hear:

“You’re not Red Silk #17 anymore.
You’re Rarity.
My Rarity.
Come home with me.”

The black rose clip in my mane glowed gold.

I looked up through tears and saw
Fluttershy at the door, smiling the gentlest smile I have ever seen.

“Welcome to forever, darling.”

>>42842638
In a world that's full of magic, where most pony abilities are explained by magic being used as and when it's needed too; having some subconsciously linked manipulating magic field around the hooves/feathers etc isn't too implausible.

>>42843794
So how would one try to nullify that magic field and turn those grippers into useless horse hooves ?

>>42844237
but how does she breathe?

>>42844462
Air holes on the side of the mask. Makes it really hard for her to sleep without squeezing one of the inner tubes.

>>42843870
An interesting question, and one I hadn't put any thought into.
The obvious quick answer would be to drain the pony of magic like Lord Tirek did in Twilight's Kingdom. I'll have to re-watch those episodes to see if anypony drained still pick up, or continue holding something.

Another option would be similar to how Anon took away Rarities magic in RapeApe's story. Finding and numbing the nerve responsible for regulating magic in that area.

As for non-surgical ways, I'll have to put more thought into it.

File: 1762398706126259.png (2.82 MB, 1272x2896)

2.82 MB PNG

>>42845067
>non-surgical ways
What if they wore horseshoes made from the same material used to make horn rings ? Or in a prisoner's case, had them nailed at the hoof wall like its done with real horses ?

>>42845119
I can't see how that wouldn't work, nailing a non magically conducting metal to the hoof I imagine would create a barrier of sorts, much like covering our hands in very slick oil, or bulky, frictionless gloves.

Prisoners could be forced to wear rusting; ugly, and uncomfortable horseshoes to humiliate them more, and vice versa, Master's could gift lovely one's.

bump

>>42845365

https://derpibooru.org/images/3692665

File: 2830655__suggestive_artis(...).png (638 KB, 2000x2400)

638 KB PNG

Kiss it.

p10 bump

File: 78832__suggestive_artist-(...).jpg (263 KB, 1280x940)

263 KB JPG

>>42845034

File: 773308__suggestive_artist(...).png (622 KB, 960x720)

622 KB PNG

>>42848839

RapeApe when? It's been a long time.

>>42849156
He's holding out for a christmas release.

File: 1762414823586394.png (1.2 MB, 1280x1280)

1.2 MB PNG

Does Manic still lurk this general ? We need more kinky smut.

File: 3500221__safe_artist-colo(...).jpg (436 KB, 3000x2183)

436 KB JPG

Any ideas on what could be used to contain a dragon ?

>>42849156
Hoping for more Harshwhinny training.

>>42850382
I hate Harshwhinny. When I imagine her I have the urge to puke. I considered just skipping reading those scenes.

>>42850214
Chokers make my pp hard.

>>42849481
>regalia over latex
>latex over wings all around not just over
The prompter could have fixed those to make it look better.

File: 2869429__artist+needed_sa(...).png (25 KB, 1213x1125)

25 KB PNG

>>42851017
Gold looks good over black though.

>latex over wings all around not just over
I dont get that one. You mean it should have been an uniform wingbinder instead of latexed feathers ?

>>42851029
>latex over wings
I mean that it looks like every feather got its own latex sock. Just like in the pic you posted.
Something like this is what would be "realistic": https://twibooru.org/3304492 or this https://twibooru.org/3184786

>>42851189
So the single sleeve wingbinder thats used in every pegasus bondage art. Yeah that is more realistic, but I do like these cases where the feathers look like they were dipped in latex.
It gives a pretty shiny black wing that's useless for flying, and maybe even for any kind of manipulation if its the slippery kind of latex.

>>42850214
Keep him or her in a freezer but with a small heated stool or a heat lamp (the kind for birds/lizards). Cut the heat when they mess up.

>>42851707
Never crossed my mind that they could have a cold blooded trait.
>small heated stool or a heat lamp
Make this more perverse, how effective would an oversized heated dildo be at keeping them from freezing ?

>>42851784
That's good. For dragons with dicks imagine having to fuck a heated fleshlight. Make it more degrading somehow. really ugly realdoll model or they fuck a pony doll or even a phantom mare (it's degrading because they would never consort with ponies).

the heat could only be in erogenous zones, like their ticklish little toesies.

>>42851797
What would the female dragons have ? A big horse shaped dildo ? A stallion doll with it attached that they have to ride in a forced intimate manner ? Do they have to heat them up themselves with a deepthroated firebreath?

>really ugly realdoll model or they fuck a pony doll or even a phantom mare
I would go with the fake doll or the phantom mare idea, it conditions them to only getting off to the sight of horse pussy.
Although I think the fleshlight would be more of a "good boy" alternative compared to a more degrading take I've seen involving a heated dildo and chastity cage. Something degrading on both ends, from the pony dildo they have to beg to take in for warmth, to the pleasure from the act that can be seen from boner being painfully squeezed by the small cage.

>the heat could only be in erogenous zones, like their ticklish little toesies.
Tickle isnt really my thing, but I do like some paw torture, like with spiked mats, or really tight hoof shoes that pony slavers would force other creatures to wear.

>>42851707
>>42851784
>cold blooded
>in a freezer
>heated dildo
Thats genius

>>42851707
What about something to keep them weakened when they are let out of the freezer ?

>>42851543
I hate this character.

>>42852949
All Haber characters are awful.

>>42852954
This one >>42850214 is fuckable.

>>42849208
Is she enjoying it

>>42853372
I do

File: 2422421__safe_artist-colo(...).png (1.23 MB, 2100x2100)

1.23 MB PNG

Which characters do you see being easily tempted and corrupted by the ponies's kinky ways ?

>>42853866
Ponies.

File: 3617731__safe_artist-colo(...).png (3.43 MB, 8000x4500)

3.43 MB PNG

>>42853328
And her ?

>>42853859
But I want twilight to enjoy what is done to her.

>>42854802
Nope.

File: 3635466__explicit_artist-(...).png (1.2 MB, 1100x1500)

1.2 MB PNG

The thorns keep her from changing shape.

>>42856133
That's one sexy bug.

File: 2693163__suggestive_alter(...).png (387 KB, 1280x720)

387 KB PNG

>>42853328

>>42854802
I really like her eyeshadow.

>>42856563
Such a naughty little minx.

She definitely needs a good hard spanking until her butt is redder and hotter than a stovetop. And a nice good stuffing up her ponut after!

>>42857493
>hotter than a stovetop
This saying will go out of fashion. Modern induction stoves barely get lukewarm with the proper cookware.

>>42857010
Does anyone else see her being a full on bdsm slut ?

>>42857900
With that eyeshadow on, definitely. Little minx.

File: smolder.png (119 KB, 322x396)

119 KB PNG

>>42857936
The little minx who grew to really like this version the ponies came up with for a controlling relationship. Much more fun and less rudimentary than the dragon way of just chaining their partners to the treasure hoard.
https://derpibooru.org/images/3408039

>>42858355
Any stories where she helps enslave her stuck up boss ?

>>42856563
Rarity will be this old when Anon finally fucks her again in RapeApe's story.

>>42858921
In RapeApe's story changelings' can breathe underwater.
So how much pressure could she survive before her chitinous carapace reaches crush depth?

>>42856563
Mmm I just can't STAND it anymore, this little mare needs to be FUCKED until she can't hardly walk straight and her hindlegs are quivering like jelly

>>42859646
No they simply dont need to breathe at all, their bodies sustain themselves on magic.

>>42860011
While wearing a locked corset that robs most of her breath during it.

File: 43805__suggestive_ai+gene(...).png (1.19 MB, 1024x1024)

1.19 MB PNG

>>42839630

I clearly don't pay close enough attention if we've been back this long. Somebody in the previous thread told me to update more often.
That was some of the most poignant criticism I've ever encountered.

>>42849156
I'd apologize, but words are cheap. I need to actually become productive again.
Somehow.

>>42850382
>>42850646
This is a problem. I obviously can't please everyone here. Would you mind telling me what it is you hate about her? Is it the character herself, or how I handle her? Is there something I could do to make her at least tolerable?
I think I'm a bit too committed to just ditch her. She's never really been meant to be the focus of the story, rather she's a tool to pull Coco in, but she's a tool I think I need at this point.

>>42859570
I know she's not real but I still feel a bit cruel. She wasn't really meant to be chaste for so long.

>>42860106
Yep. As arcanovores, they don't need to oxidize anything for chemical energy, so oxygen isn't important. Not having to eat in the classical sense would have a lot of other perks, but it does make them entirely dependent on ponies to survive. Not ideal when there's so much hostility between the two.


>Coco gently stepped through the palace, wearing the ugliest, frumpiest dress she could find.
>She moved delicately, quietly, fearful of attracting attention.
>It seemed as though every time she went out, she attracted unwanted attention.
>At least today, nopony had tried to mount her…
>She once again checked her side to ensure she still had her canister of pepper spray, trying desperately not to think about how hard it would be to use with her mouth.
>”Coco?”
>She very nearly wet herself in shock.
“P-princess Cadence!”
>”Come on in.”
>She invited Coco into an overly crowded study, with two small desks wedged in, and a blackboard set up in the front.
>”Sorry, I know it’s crowded. This room was really only meant for one pony. But it’s a perfectly good study now that we’ve gotten all the dark magic relics out of it!”
“The… what?”
>”Oh, sorry. This palace WAS Sombra’s for a while. Don’t worry, it’s perfectly safe. Well, as long as you stay in the decontaminated areas… stay above ground, by the way.”
>Coco couldn’t help but grimace.
>”Did you talk to Rarity?”
“No. I… was scared to face her.”
>”I see… you don’t have nearly as much to worry about as you think.”
“She HUMILIATED me!”
>The words echoed in the small chamber.
>Coco covered her mouth, surprised by her own outburst.
>And Cadence smiled warmly.
>”I thought you said you didn’t blame her.”
“I-”
>”Shh, it’s okay. You’ve been through a lot lately, it would be weird if you were completely rational. But there’s a very important question we need to address before we can deal with any of that. Do you still love her?’
>A morose nod was the reply.

>>42861771
>”Great! Now, I need you to be honest with me. What do you think her intention was when she put that thing on you?”
“She was trying to protect me.”
>”That’s what I had gathered, too.”
>Her tone was strangely wooden when she said that.
>Coco found herself doubting the princess’ words.
>Was it just paranoia?
>Maybe.
>She’d been under a lot of stress.
>So much stress that she spoke before thinking.
“Liar.”
>The princess looked as shocked by Coco’s accusation as Coco felt with herself.
>And yet, she didn’t deny it.
>”You saw right through that, did you?”
>Coco’s blood ran cold.
>She WAS being lied to!
>But then…
>”If Rarity’s only goal was to protect you, it would have just been boring old metal. I think that’s what she wanted at first, she DID seem to want you safe, but there’s more to it than that. Of course, she’d never admit it to herself. But she's not entirely selfless, there’s more to her than that.”
“What’s going on here?”
>”I’m telling you that Rarity has wants and desires too. She’s sexually interested in you, and she doesn’t want to share with strangers. She wants you safe, and she also wants you to herself.”
>Coco didn't even dignify that with an answer.
>Rarity wasn't interested in mares.
>It was a mistake to be here…
>”I know you don't believe me, but Rarity wants you. We just need to help her find that out.”
“She's already with a stallion, though.”
>”I'm aware of her current relationship.”
“But… it would be wrong to break them up.”
>”Do you want to be alone forever?”
>The thought HAD occurred to her.
>It was always chilling.
>”Whether or not you can get Rarity- you can, by the way- it's not healthy for a mare your age to be alone. I'm here to help, and I'm telling you that Rarity is a good goal. Do you remember the look on her face when you were cumming everywhere?”
>Coco did.
>It was downright predatory.
>”Did it look like she was interested? Perhaps like she was attracted to you?”
>Coco nodded, unable to deny that Rarity had looked more fascinated than disgusted.
>”And does she seem interested in your body?”
>She always made Coco wear the most humiliating outfits…
>”Rarity doesn’t want to admit that she likes mares. Or maybe she's even deluded herself into thinking she doesn’t. But she does, and it's both your opportunity and your duty to help her realize that. She'll be much better off after a few rolls in the hay with you.”
>Coco covered her eyes once more, her face flush with embarrassment and arousal.
>”Ultimately, her reaction to that incident is because she liked what she saw. She wanted more of it.”
>Coco’s eyes were watering.

>>42861772
>”I already told you Rarity has needs, and is a bit sexually repressed.But not nearly as repressed as you. You need help, Coco, and that's why I'm inviting you to the Crystal Preparatory Academy! The premier education institution for desperate mares.”
“I've never heard of it.”
>”Well, you're the second student-”
“Did the first one get their special somepony?”
>”I'm working on it!”
“Is this an accredited institution?”
>”Do you want my help or not?”
>Coco firmly shut her mouth and sat at one of the desks.
>”It won't be easy, but I assure you that Rarity will be yours. This recent incident proves it, even if she did handle it poorly. Now, you have two problems. You don't know how to be seductive, and you're too prudish.”
>Coco mumbled something under her breath about being surrounded by perverts.
>”If Rarity walked right up to you right now, kissed you on the cheek, took you on a romantic date, how long would the relationship need to last before you let her fuck you? Weeks? Months?”
>Coco averted her gaze just a bit.
>”Years?”
>A sheepish grin was the only reply.
>”Oh, Coco… that's not normal. That's not even sane! Intimacy isn't a desire, it's a NEED; we're not adapted to living without at least a sensual touch. But don't worry, I intend to set you straight.”
>Coco had no way of knowing that was a pun.
>”It's going to be difficult, and you'll have to do your homework exercises. Do you think you can keep up?”
“I don't know…”
>”Can you do it for Rarity?”
>She had to at least try.
>”Class will be starting soon. There's about 5 minutes left before we start, so your classmate should be here-”
>The door opened.
>”Oh, wow. 30 seconds earlier than usual!”
>Miss Harshwinny walked in, head held high, wearing her regular attire.
>”Yes, well, I'm rather looking forward to this lesson. Seduction for the unfuckable, was it?”
>She pulled Coco’s seat out and nearly sat in it before noticing it was occupied.
>“What are YOU doing here? You're attractive, you don't need this program!”
>”Coco here is your new classmate. She has some problems of her own to overcome.”
>”Wait just a moment… I recognize you! Weren't you meant to be making some attire for me? I feel as though it's past due!”
“We, um, are having some problems with development of the materials.”
>Harshwinny shrugged before taking the free seat.
>Coco watched in a mix of awe and fear as she produced and arrayed her various notebooks and writing tools.
>The instant the last highlighter was in place, Cadence started speaking.

>>42861773
>”The goal of seduction isn't to get sex out of somepony, or at least it shouldn't be. While it CAN lead to that, you’re aiming much too low if you’re satisfied with getting into their bed. It's about infiltrating their thoughts, focusing their attention, and to inflame passion. It's about connecting with your partner in a primal way, something more ancient than language or even thoughts.”
>Coco sniffed the air.
>There was a marvelous perfume floating about that hadn't been there before…
>”There are plenty of animals that have mating rituals like dancing or singing. While we like to think we're too smart for that kind of thing, we're quite similar. If you don't do the ritual properly, you'll have trouble attracting attention, and when you DO it's less likely to be any sort of serious commitment.”
>”Clarify. Do you mean to say that performing the ritual results in non-serious relationships, or that not performing it does?”
>”The latter. You can, with patience, find a desperate stallion who will spend a night with you. Finding somepony who will keep you takes more effort. Right, so, the biggest difference between ponies and beasts is that our rituals are MUCH more complicated.”
>That actually made some sense.
>Coco had been trying to get Rarity’s attention for years, and it hadn't worked.
>Did she just not know the proper method?
>”Now, we're primarily appealing to the subconscious mind for this. Ponies ARE capable of reasoning and CAN have pragmatic thoughts about mate selection, but most of that stuff is done on a level far more primitive than anything that can be conscious thought. Thanks to brain imaging technology, we now know that this isn't the exception, it's the norm. The vast majority of the things that happen in our head occur without us being aware of them. You can learn things, develop deep fears, react to stimuli, all without noticing. If you think that unconscious actions are unusual, they're not. It’s the THINKING that's unusual, the unconscious is the bulk of who we are.”
>Coco was rather surprised by where this lesson was going.
>She had been expecting a simple instructional lecture.
>Being told the philosophy behind it was fascinating.
>But was it useful?
>”You might be asking yourself if this is useful. The short answer is yes. The long answer is yyyyeeeessss.”
>Jokes during a lecture?
>”Since the unconscious is the bulk of the decision making, it needs the bulk of your attention. Communication is important, but you need to pay attention primarily to involuntary communication, the stuff they’re not aware of. What's their body language? What are their pupils doing? What are they looking at? Do they get an erection? That last one was probably obvious.”
“And disgusting…”
>”Your classmate disagrees.”
>”You brought a lesbian to your class? Were you not aghast at me for spreading, and I quote, dyke propaganda?”
“She said WHAT?”

>>42861776
>Coco was expecting Cadence to deny it.
>She was expecting some kind of an excuse, or at least an attempt to change the subject.
>Cadence had a surprising amount of conviction as she spoke.
>”Yep! It causes immense distress, reduces options for relationships, and most importantly it inhibits the creation of families.”
”But-”
>”Is your dating pool limited because of your desires, Coco?”
“That's not the point-”
>”That's exactly the point. You're here because you want Rarity and she prefers stallions. Would your life be simpler if you didn't have to deal with that?”
“Well-”
>”I have a very specific vision of what an ideal relationship is, and foals are a big part of it. I don’t want anything that inhibits the creation of happy families to be promoted.”
>Coco still felt offended.
>But she couldn't think of a good way to object.
>”What, are you really surprised that I, the love princess, the only princess to ever become a mother, the one who's dedicated her life to matchmaking, care about making families? It's not always possible, and I HAVE set ponies up in relationships with no chance of pregnancy before. I'm sure I'll do it again, but it’s not ideal.”
>Coco was getting desperate to change the subject, or leave.
>Thankfully, Cadence seemed willing to move on.
>Whether it was because her point was made or because Harshwinny was staring at her watch was unclear.
>”Okay. Signs that a pony is interested in you. You're trying to pay attention to what their eyes focus on. If they're stealing glances and otherwise focusing a bit too hard on something, they're trying and failing to hide their interest. You should also try to be mindful of sudden, unprompted grooming. Now, to see if an attempt is working, try to keep track of the rhythm of their breathing. If it's speeding up and you can't see any other reason for it, their body is getting ready for something physical.”
>Cadence was able to speak on the subject for a surprisingly long time, and Coco quickly found herself wishing she had been taking notes as well.
>It would be almost impossible to be mindful of everything she was mentioning.
>But if there was any truth to this, then Rarity WAS interested!
>Maybe there WAS hope!
>”Alright, I think that’s about it for the lecture. Time for a quick practice session.”
“Practice?”
>”You didn’t think it would be ALL theory, did you?”
>She had.
>”Harshwhinny, you’re up.”
>”Of course.”
>She stood up and walked out the door.
>Almost instantly, she returned.
>One of the buttons on her undershirt had been undone, and her mane was just a bit messy.
>She wore a sultry smirk as she locked eyes with Coco, walking with a slightly exaggerated sway in her hips.
>She didn’t say a word as she sauntered over to Coco’s desk, draping herself over it, her tight and trim body gliding effortlessly over the surface.
>She looked up at Coco, her half lidded eyes full of warmth and desire.

>>42861782
>”Fancy seeing you here.”
>She crossed her hind legs.
>”Got any plans for the evening? Or night? Hm… Perhaps you should just clear up the week. I would hate to rush things.”
>Her face hardened for just a moment as she analyzed the situation.
>Cadence walked up behind her and swatted her ass.
>”ACK!”
>”Think with your brain, not your face.”
>”Right! Ahem.”
>She slowly peeled herself off the desk, rubbing her sore butt slightly.
>”I- oh, that feels good.”
>She offered a suppressed moan.
>”Sorry. I’m just a bit sore after my day. I hope you wouldn’t mind if I did a bit of… stretching.”
>She lowered her head, nearly touching her jaw against the ground while keeping her rump up in the air.
>Her tail just barely obstructed Coco’s view.
>Miss Harshwhinny then stood up straight, her neck extended as far as it would go, her rump lowered ever so slightly.
>So easy to mount…
>She walked past Coco, standing intimately close, brushing her tail against Coco’s muzzle as she went.
>”Oh, hold on. You seem to have something on your face.”
>She stepped up close, breathing gently into Coco’s ear.
>”Let me get that for you.”
>She delicately licked Coco’s cheek.
>And Coco lost it.
>She bolted for the door, inserting herself in the first vacant room she could find.
>That belt.
>That accursed belt!
>Only now was it showing the true depths of its cruelty.
>Every breath, every step, every heartbeat teased her mercilessly.
>It was exactly as Cadence had said.
>She could not control her unconscious mind.
>It screamed for sex in every way it could, flushing her cheeks, bringing sweat to her brow, clouding her mind…
>And engorging her clit.
>The belt, which had already been just a bit too tight, which had been gently poking at her nethers all along, had become a firm and controlling companion, the warm, smooth metal caressing her, driving her desires ever higher and thereby accelerating the cycle.
>She lay on her back, hind legs spread in some vain attempt to pull away from the torturous assault.
>And though her higher mind knew it was impossible, some part of her, perhaps the bulk of her, refused to believe/
>It insisted that she had some agency in all this, that she could at the very least control the intensity, even as she struggled against the unrelenting steel.
>She hated it.
>She hated humiliation, the perversity, the loss of control…
>But the other Coco felt differently.
>She loved it.
>She didn’t understand the helplessness they were being subject to, and pushed Coco to seek more.
>Coco was aware of her hooves moving on their own, reaching down to her groin, rubbing and stroking the metal plate as though that would accomplish something.
>She found herself rubbing at her inner thighs, enjoying what sensation she could get, mind quickly being consumed be her base impulses.
>She wasn’t sure when it happened.
>And later on, she wouldn’t admit to herself that it had happened at all.

>>42861784
>But Coco eventually submitted to her impulses.
>Both her higher and lower order thoughts acted in harmony despite their inability to communicate as they worked toward the same, unifying goal.
>Her unconscious mind pushed against the belt with all its might, leaning into what stimulation it could get.
>She conscious mind tried to think of Rarity, remembering her in her flashier outfits.
>Her unconscious mind spread her legs as far as it coil and moved its tail aside, preparing her for mounting.
>She tried to remember Rarity’s scent, the fresh aroma subtle but distinct, reminiscent of a coastal breeze just after the rain.
>Her vagina dilated, opening itself up, inviting anything, everything to enter.
>She tried to remember Rarity’s musk, the rich aroma that had once inhabited that discarded rag.
>She felt mortified, remembering being caught with it.
>She felt a deep sense of loss, remembering how she’d discarded it.
>Her unconscious reached down to her still blocked groin, coating itself with the fluids that had seeped out..
>She breathed deeply, not fully aware of what was happening, the scent awakening something deep within her.
>It was a familiar smell.
>One that she’d used many times for her own pleasure.
>One that made her burn with shame and passion.
>She had told herself she wouldn’t do it anymore.
>That she wasn’t a pervert.
>That she wasn’t a freak!
>She told herself that she was above such things.
>And she lied.
>Coco reached out with her tongue, her mouth already salivating as it anticipated her favorite treat.
>She licked her fluids off her hoof.
>Tentatively at first, delicately, as though she was trying to savour some exotice delicacy.
>Then hungrily.
>Greedily.
>She rubbed at her crotch, desperately gathering what she could before going back, drinking like she’d not seen water for days.
>She loved the sensation, loved the perversity, and hated that she loved it.
>Pressure was building up inside of her.
>It was familiar.
>But not TOO familiar.
>It felt different from when she normally did it.
>Purer.
>Cleaner.
>Rife with shame, but free from guilt.
>She screamed with delight as one last wink of her clitoris finally sent her over the edge, her only stimulation the belt itself, eyes blissfully vacant.

>>42861785
>Shining Armor was eager to leave his meeting room.
>He had spent what felt like days in there, trying to sort out the bureaucratic nightmare that was the Empire.
>They had survived a massive act of terrorism, and things had largely returned to normal.
>But “normal” wasn’t exactly good.
>The rapid changing of rulers had left the Empire’s foreign policies as an absolute nightmare.
>Never mind the passage of time!
>Today’s mess had revealed that they were both allies with and invading a power that hadn’t existed for several centuries.
>Of course, the fact that it didn’t exist didn’t prevent a fair amount of wealth from being devoted to this historical footnote.
>And somehow, most of the money was going to Senator Garnet.
>Her audacity never failed to dumbfound.
>He had corrected the error with his most recent meeting, and was finally ready to leave.
>Except for one minor annoyance.
>”Your highness! You have one more visitor.”
>One of his grunts informed him, peeking their head through the doorway.
“They don’t have an appointment.”
>”They say it’s important. Should I send them away?”
>”It’s a tad more than just important.”
“Applejack? Oh, send her in! You did what you were supposed to, soldier, but for future reference. Applejack here is a VIP. If she says it’s important, we’ll make time.”
>”Sir!”
>Applejack walked in, flagrantly disregarding propriety by wearing her hat indoors at the palace.
>She seated herself opposite the prince and leaned against the table.
>He found her casual demeanor refreshing.
>And yet, she seemed tense.
“Good to see you! Sorry about the fuss there, lots of ponies want to talk to me about silly things. Now, you said it was important?”
>”I saw Chrysalis.”
>She was right.
>It was a tad more than just important.
>”Alley by the train station. The one between the abandoned hotel and the dilapidated hotel.”
“I know the place… what was she doing?”
>”Talking. To me.”
>The prince could feel his blood pressure rising.
>”She came to me saying she had a bunch of dirt on your human. Something that happened before he came out here, I think. Some kind of legal trouble.”
“What kind?”
>”Ain’t sure yet. But I intend to look into it. I’m hoping that it’ll be enough to convince you to help me get Rarity away from him.”
“Applejack-”
>”I know, you don’t believe it. All the proof is there, but he’s your friend. You don’t wanna believe it. That’s why I’m looking for proof of any kind that he’s rotten.”
“Why would you trust anything Chrysalis says?”
>”I don’t. That’s why I came to you first. Well, that and to let you know you’ve got bugs again. See, I know she’s trying to play me like a fiddle, and I want to know what she’s getting at.”
“How am I supposed to know what her plan is?”
>”You probably don’t. But you know a heck of a lot more than I do.”
>It was… reasonable.

>>42861787
>Applejack didn’t know most of what had happened with that act of terrorism.
>She probably knew about the explosions and the confusion.
>She might have even known they were teetering on bankruptcy.
>But she DIDN’T know that Chrysalis had fumbled and revealed her ultimate goal.
>Assuming that had been Chrysalis, of course.
“I think she wants the Crystal Heart. It’s a focus that attracts and stores love magic. To us it’s a shield, but to her…”
>”She’s already tough, she might just become unstoppable. That seems to check out... She’d said she was going to use me to tear down the Empire. Losing the Heart would do that.”
“She-”
>”I don’t intend to play into her plans if I can help it, and to be blunt I don’t see how I even could.”
“You DO realize you just announced you’re a pawn in some master plan to destroy my kingdom and tear down my family, right?”
>”Yep. I figure you want to avoid that, and I don’t much like being manipulated. Hopefully we can work together to keep it from happening. Now, I intend to tell you everything I know, no strings attached. Then I’m going to ask a few questions. Chrysalis showed up out of the blue holding and immediately revealed she’d been following me. ‘Course, I didn’t know it were her just yet, she was in disguise. She told me that the human WAS hurting Rarity, just like I thought, and that Cadence not only knew but helped make it happen.”
>Uh oh.
>”She said she weren’t sure whether or not you knew what was happening. Maybe you know something’s up but you don’t know the full scale, or maybe you’re totally oblivious. She wasn’t sure. She then told me that Rarity destroyed some equipment and very nearly killed ‘Twi. Then she told me the human had some legal trouble, and that if I tracked down the fella who was suing him I’d find some stuff you certainly don’t know, but ought to. I haven’t yet found the fella, but I’m heading to Canterlot tonight to get a hold of the embassies and see if they can help me dig anything up from human records.”
>Shining Armor nodded.
>How the HAY had Chrysalis known about the blood spill?
>Just how thoroughly had they been infiltrated?
>“I took a swing at her and broke her jaw, but by the time she hit the ground she was all better. Didn’t look afraid of me at all, neither. I think they can shapeshift their injuries away.”
“That’s pretty worrying… I’d been assuming that shooting her would be enough to stop her, but if she can heal from a broken bone, why not a bullet wound?”
>The bug that had stabbed Twilight nearly died of infection.
>They weren’t immortal.
>But maybe, had the wound been cleaner, it wouldn’t have mattered at all.
>Except, it fled when Anon stole its weapon.
>Maybe there’s some limit to which parts can recover, or how much damage they can tolerate?
>Maybe it’s just Chrysalis that can shrug that off?
>Maybe it’s a trick of some sort?

>>42861789
>”Now for the questions. Do you know what your wife gets up to behind your back?”
“She’s a matchmaker. Sometimes she sets up unconventional couples.”
>”Hm… unconventional like a human and Rarity, I suppose. Do you approve of their relationship?”
“I trust my wife’s judgement.”
>He immediately regretted that answer.
>Applejack had set him up to fail by implying Cadence had been involved.
>He’d treated that like it was known, and in doing so confirmed it.
>”Got any inkling what kind of dirt I might find if I look into Anon’s history? Perhaps sexual assault or rape?”
“It can’t be anything that serious or he’d have never been admitted into Equestria.”
>”Right, fair point.”
“I’m still not convinced she’s telling the truth about that, by the way.”
>”I have my doubts too, though it does sound a lot like him… Is it true that some medical equipment was destroyed right around when Twi got stabbed?”
“Yes.”
>That would be easy to confirm.
>Twilight knew, if nothing else.
>”Did Rarity do it?”
“I think it was the bugs.”
>”Then why did you tense up when I first brought it up?”
>The heartburn was back.
>”That place is full of cameras. Surely you looked at the footage to try and track down whoever was responsible, right? Given it was your own sister being attacked and all.”
>Clever girl.
>Not quite clever enough, though.
>He could see the trap coming.
>They had found Rarity in the clinic that night.
>If he had looked at the footage, he’d have definitely seen her.
>If he was investigating at all, he’d have definitely looked.
>And there’s no way he wouldn’t have looked into it.
>But…
>That was only the first layer of her trap.
>”Why do you only THINK it was bugs?”
“The footage showed Rarity, but I’m confident it wasn’t actually her.”
>”Oh. That’s actually a pretty good answer. Well, how long did you know where Rarity was without telling us?”
>There it was.
>Blaming changelings was obvious.
>But it opened up new questions.
>Questions like, why didn’t you say anything about having seen the missing pony?
>And why no follow-up investigation after she showed up right under their nose?
>”It’s not a complicated question, Shining. You knew we were looking for Rarity. Did you know where she was?”
“Yes.”
>Applejack looked surprised.
>Whether she was shocked by the revelation, or not believing that Shining had admitted it, he couldn’t say.
>He had no choice, though.
>Applejack knew he’d seen her on the cameras.
>And it was only a matter of time before she figured out that Rarity had been located long before that.
>He’d already messed up and admitted that Cadence had pushed them together, and he obviously hadn’t been surprised to see her.
“I knew she was around.”

>>42861791
>”And it didn’t occur to you that you might want to, I don’t know, tell us she was ALIVE?”
“I CHOSE not to. And if you ever need some privacy, I’ll choose to hide you as well.”
>”What, y’all expect me to think you were doing Rarity some great FAVOUR?”
“That is not my secret to share. There ARE things being hidden from you, and yes, Rarity is involved. But ultimately, they’re her secrets to keep. She’s safe, and is exactly where she wishes to be. I feel we should respect her desire for privacy, she is a grown mare after all.”
>”So you ain’t telling me what’s going on.”
“Correct. If you can convince me she’s in danger I’ll help protect her, and I’ll gladly work with you to figure out what Chrysalis is planning. But I don’t intend to help you get in the way of Rarity’s private affairs.”
>Applejack rubbed her chin for a moment, mulling over the information she’d been given.
>From the look of her face, she wasn’t happy with it.
>”Chrysalis said you didn’t know what was going on, or at least, that you didn’t know how far it was going. Can’t help but wonder. Was she right? Or are both of you playing me?”
“If she impugned my character, I really should remind you who was talking.”
>”Naw, she hates you ‘cause you’re too good, or so she says. Cadence, on the other hoof…”
“I won’t have you badmouthing my family, especially not based on the word of Chrysalis!”
>”I know she ain’t exactly trustworthy. But then again, it’s starting to look like nopony around here is. I’ll be in touch.”
>Applejack left.
>It hadn’t been an accusation, or at least, it hadn’t sounded like one.
>But it was clear she wasn’t going to take him at his word.
>He wasn’t worried about it, though.
>At least, not very.
>Rarity had made it very clear that she wanted to stay with Anon.
>While he couldn’t deny some degree of disgust, the fact remained that she was where she wanted to be.
>However…
>Chrysalis had stated this was some part of a master plan.
>Was it just idle bloviating?
>She’d never been one for empty threats…
>What was she getting at?
…
>He had to find out how she knew so much.
>And ideally, he’d find out what dirt she had on Anon.
>Somehow, some way, he was part of all this.


>You were finishing up late, as usual.
>Luna’s crew has, quite mercifully, only produced two wounded so far.
>Each had radically different injuries that seemed… un-natural.
>First there were the glowing not-teeth.
>Then the freakishly clean incisions that started talking to you as you sewed it shut.
>It was shockingly eloquent, if somewhat rude.
>The patients were doing…
>”Good” is an exaggeration.
>Not nearly as bad as expected?
>Whatever had happened to them, conventional medicine worked.
>Mostly.
>You’re pretty sure there was some kind of magical support going on too, though you didn’t have any real proof.

>>42861793
>The weird sparkling you keep finding on them seems to support the hypothesis, though.
>Whatever’s going on, you’d very much like to be less involved in it.
>You’ve almost finished cleaning up for the night when you hear it.
>Gunshots.
>And nearby.
>You hit the deck, old instincts honed from working in Detroit coming to mind, covering your head in case of artillery fire.
>It doesn’t come.
>The door creaks open, and you do your best to hide.
>”Anon?”
>Shining!
>You bite your tongue, not yet confident it’s safe.
>”Anon, just what the hay is going on here?”
>You’re still doing your best to stay silent.
>He opens the theater to the operating room, but doesn’t expose himself.
>You see him levitate a small mirror around the corner to get eyes on you without opening a line of fire.
>”Are you in danger?”
“I DON’T KNOW!”
>He lets out a long suffering sigh.
>”I got attacked on the way here. They were… good. Not just brigands.”
>Concern for your friend and your habit of treating the wounded briefly conspire to override your fear as you step out.
>He’s got a black eye and a bloodied muzzle.
>You immediately set to cleaning his injuries.
>”If you think this looks bad, you should see my assailant."
“They got it worse?”
>”No, I couldn’t touch them. Hay, I SHOT them and they didn’t care.”
“Did- did you hit?”
>”I’m not sure. I think so…”
“Did you get a good look at them?”
>”Yeah.”
>He shuddered.
>”I’m going to have nightmares for weeks.”
>Nightmares.
>Was it her, trying to keep her secrets?
>Maybe.
>”I have no idea where Chrysalis came up with that shape. I don’t want to know.”
“I don’t think it was her.”
>”Why? What do you know?”
“Err…”
>His good eye locks with yours.
>”Are you in danger?”
>You don’t answer.
>”Are you hiding something from me?”
>You CAN’T answer.
>He nods slowly, seemingly understanding the position you’re in.
>He asks you no more questions, so you’re not forced to tell him any lies.
>You can’t help but feel grateful for that small mercy.
>”I’m sorry that you got roped into whatever this is.”
“What makes you think I’m involved?”
>”Chrysalis says that you’re part of some master plan.”

>>42861794

“Excuse me?”
>”Yeah. She showed up recently, told Applejack she had dirt on you, and that she was somehow going to use it to take me down.”
…
“Fuck. Wait, are YOU Chrysalis?”
>A quick test demonstrates that he isn’t.
>”I came here hoping to get some hints on what she’s doing, but obviously you can’t talk. It’s okay. I know you’d tell me if you could.”
>Ah yes.
>Guilt.
"Hay, um, whatever's going on here... don't get involved, okay? I don't know how far they'd go if you started looking into it."
>"Hm... Thank you for the warning, Anon. But I can take care of myself."
"Can you? I don't think you can, not this time."
>The instant you’re done bandaging him, he leaves for home.
>You’re pretty surprised by the confidence in his stride.
>If you’d been jumped in the middle of the night by bulletproof thugs, you’d probably be worried.
>Mercifully, you’re pretty sure you’re safe as you make your way back.
>Pretty sure.
>Your best bet is that it was Luna’s goons.
>Maybe even Luna herself.
>He’d probably come close to stumbling on them, and needed to be distracted.
>Had it been Chrysalis, she’d doubtlessly have gone a bit further than just roughing him up.
>You have no idea how Chrysalis knows about the lawsuit.
>And you’re pretty sure that she knows.
>There’s not a lot of other dirt out there on you.
>Nothing that big, at least.
>And you have no idea how it could be used as a weapon against the Empire.
>It COULD be used against you pretty easily.
>But the Empire?
>You open the doors to you home, too tired and too distressed to notice the lights were on.
>”Master? We need to talk.”

It's high time we finally figure out Anon's backstory. We've talked a fair bit about what he did after coming to Equestria and the Empire, but we've never discussed why he went there in the first place. Will any of you care? Hard to say, but I feel like it's something Rarity should know.

>>42861784
Nice to see that feature of the belt being a catalyst to her sexual awakening. And Im loving the prospect of her becoming a constant victim of that side effect the more she opens up to her lustful side. That thing probably doesnt even let her clit rest once it starts touching it so even a prolonged wet thought or intimate gesture from Rarity would leave her in that ensnared state for hours on end.

>>42861793
Those wounds seem like something straight out of "Look Outside".

>>42861807
I would care, and it would bring more closure between those two.

File: 558923__suggestive_artist(...).jpg (304 KB, 1200x1650)

304 KB JPG

>>42861793
In case you dont already have something planned for her, what would you think of Applejack searching the empire's seedy underbelly, doing all sorts of degrading acts to get favors or leads that will bring her to the truth ?

It would be like a disconnected side story, but not so much that Cadence wouldnt be hearing about it from her connections, and maybe subtly help push the element of honesty on a prolonged cat and mouse game that will only erode her feelings of self worth with each depraved request she takes.
https://derpibooru.org/images/3192222

File: 1546639774961.jpg (150 KB, 1400x922)

150 KB JPG

bumping to read

>>42862880
That can be changed my dear.

>>42861807
Damn, Coco got enrolled by Candance and she has begun to accept that side of he.

The plot advance with Applejack reveling her encounter with Chrysalis.

And that last part. The past of the doctor, is gonna be good hear/read the reason for what he leave earth.

>>42861771
Nice I can’t wait to read this

Words are not cheap make more give us more

>>42861785
You're getting much better at writing nsfw scenes RapeApe.
This moment with Coco really inspired the imagination, and was beautiful to read.

>>42862534
Don't die thread until I made my response!

>>42865215
RapeApe could stick around for a bit. It gets kinda boring when he dumps the story and then vanishes for 2-3 weeks..

>>42865412
You dont praise him enough to stay.

>>42865417
But I like his story ! Its just that I like even more when the writer is around to ask him things about it.

And also there are some updates where there's more buildup than actual scenes, which dont leave much to praise on besides asking about whats coming.

Well, what do guys think could be Applejack's corruption path in this story? I already gave my suggestion above.

I HATE 4CHAN'S SPAM FILTER!
>>42862038
>Look Outside
I'd never heard of it, but it certainly sounds neat.
>>42862383
Somebody- possibly you- had made a similar suggestion a while back. I love it. There's too much going on right now to try and fit it in, but that's definitely going to happen.
Unless I forget.
>>42864239
I waffled for quite a bit on whether or not Applejack would have that meeting before looking into the lawsuit. Unfortunately, this approach makes structuring the story a fair bit harder, but I figured she would be more interested in what Chrysalis had said about Cadence than anything else.

>>42864299
Thanks. I suppose that was probably the wrong aphorism for a writefag to use.
>>42865412
You know, you're right.
>>42865417
I don't think that's the problem, but even so, I do like being praised

>>42865800
Yeah it was me, but I dont think I mentioned that Cadence part before.
I figured it would be a nice way to portray the perverted nature of the Crystal empire citizens, specially from the ones under Cadence's employment, and show how Applejack tries seeing herself above the lecherous people whom she performs ever more depraved acts for.

>Unless I forget.
Put "Applejack whoring out for the truth" somewhere in your notes. It will sound odd enough to make you ask here what it meant.

>>42865804
Also I got curious with something after reading the story from the start. Was there anything planned regarding Rainbow's injury ? It seemed severe enough that it would leave something to be explored later on, like in Twilight's case when she was recovering and Anon used that as an excuse to put those implants.

>>42865922
There was a plan, but I couldn't quite fit it in. He was going to demand a cup of urine to look for kidney damage, which would convince Dash he was a pervert and she'd wind up working with Applejack, but I dropped it because having both of them working on the same thing was superfluous. It would just add complexity for no reason.

Boops

>>42864681
No clue how I missed this one.
Thank you. They've always been a weak point of mine, I'm glad the effort is paying off.

https://derpibooru.org/images/939199

>>42866949
Do you think Cadence could have any use for Harshwhinny as part of her goverment staff ?
She did brag about having worked for Celestia as an ambassador or advisor I think, and it could be a way to get her pet cougar closer to Shiny without weirding him out with a sexual approach.

Bumping

>>42869191
Safety is in numbers.

File: 1763613175469333.png (215 KB, 900x675)

215 KB PNG

Bump

Is there anything interesting that could happen to a unicorn's magic when their horn is pierced ?
https://derpibooru.org/images/341915

>>42867546
Sexy pone.

>>42861807
>nopony had tried to mount her
Yet.
>hard it would be to use with her mouth
And she would end up spraying herself in the mouth too. I assume the pepper spray is not designed for use by ponies and it is from earth.
>stay above ground, by the way
Do they just randomly sink into the ground or what?
>outburst
Oh, she is capable of that? Huh.
>weird if you were completely rational
Heh. That's one way to categorize her actions.
>trying to protect me
She can't be this stupid.
>Liar
Maybe she is not that stupid. But why would she test Cadence?
>She wants you safe
That's not entierly true. Mental damage is damage too. Suffering isn't safe either.
>she also wants you to herself
Right. That's why she tries to get Coco raped by any random stallion.
>not healthy for a mare your age to be alone
Not everypony is named Cadence and is constantly horny.
>Perhaps like she was attracted to you?
If she believes this lie, Coco is stupid and easy to manipulate even when she is thinking straight.
>she liked what she saw. She wanted more of it
Now this is true. But it could have been any mare. Herself included.
>She'll be much better off after a few rolls in the hay with you
Or anypony for that matter. When was the last time she got a release?
>is a bit sexually repressed
By Anon.
>accredited, Do you want my help or not
Heh.
>being surrounded by perverts
She is not wrong.
>it's a NEED; we're not adapted to living without
Do not ever let Cadence see this board.
>I intend to set you straight
Or gay in her case.
>You're attractive, you don't need this program!
Heh.
>get Rarity’s attention for years, and it hadn't worked
Rarity isn't gay might have to do something with that.
>Thanks to brain imaging technology, we now know that this isn't the exception, it's the norm.
Did she really need pet scan to see that the blood starts flowing downwards if a pretty mare shakes her ass near the face of a stallion? Or that if a mare is in heat then she becomes a magnet for stallions with a fifth leg?
>and foals are a big part of it
I wonder how do they manage to not have more if she drains Shining to the point of shooting sand every day.
>couldn't think of a good way to object
Difficult when she couldn't think much in general.
>mindful of sudden, unprompted grooming
Coco had her fair share of that. Oh you wrote grooming not groping.
>locked eyes with Coco
Seems like Harshwhinny got used to the dyke shit with Cadence.
>Her face hardened for just a moment
Cadence seems to aim these lectures to achieve short term gain, rather than a lifelong one.
>and swatted her ass
I'm surprised there was nothing more than a tiny yelp of pain as a reply. A sharp comeback or something.
>So easy to mount…
The "think with your brain" was not aimed at whoever watches her performance that's for sure. I guess "think with your lower brain" could apply to them.
>That belt
Oh, she is still wearing that?
>She loved it.
That's a complete 180. I did not expect that.

Cont.

>>42870966
>preparing her for mounting
If this ever works out, Rarity needs to visit Lovelace for a strapon.
>she wasn’t a pervert
So that's why she sniffed/licked the wet spot Rarity left behind. Oh wait, that's the opposite reason.
>free from guil
Oh that will set in later when she realizes where she did it.
>Shining Armor was eager to
This is a sudden scene change. You could mark the scenes somehow.
>Applejack here
Or it could be Chrysalis. Do they still test for changelings? Also, I expected Shining to find Coco.
>But you know a heck of a lot more than I do.
AJ probably knows (suspects) more about Rarity's circumstances than Shining. Or Shining just ignores it or fine with it since he knows what her wife is doing.
>you just announced you’re a pawn
At least she told him instead of letting her curiosity win.
>Uh oh
Did he not know what his wife is doing?
>How the HAY had Chrysalis known about the blood spill?
Why wouldn't she know? It was before she departed. Plus Anon helped a drone, but they don't know this, I can't recall what Anon said during this. Also Chrysalis was a furniture for who knows how long (Shining knows this I assume), Anon could have mentioned Rarity's rampage.
>unconventional couples
She seemed to like traditional (conventional) values. Like having a foal.
>think it was the bugs
Hm, I thought he knows. Rarity got punished for it after all.
>having seen the missing pony
Was she missing at that point?
>I CHOSE not to
I would need to re-read the first part of the story, now I'm uncertain in what Shining knows and what he does not.
>she wasn’t happy with it
She hoped for more that's for sure.
>I’ll be in touch.
If AJ's cutie mark were not apples, it would be something what represents stubbornness.
>clean incisions that started talking to you as you sewed it shut
If this were not Equestria, I would say Anon had one more drink than what he can handle.
>Whatever’s going on, you’d very much like to be less involved in it.
Asking Luna for confirmation would be good. These patients could be just as well changelings or something.
>honed from working in Detroit
Heh.

Cont.

>>42870980
>but obviously you can’t talk
He is strangely ok with it.
>Chrysalis knows about the lawsuit
Oh, so there is something.
>Master? We need to talk.
Anon seems to find himself in trouble after trouble.

>be productive
Next time, instead of dumping a monster sized update, I recommend posting smaller ones more often. This could have easily been three smaller one.
>She wasn't really meant to be chaste for so long.
You are the one writing the story!
>what it is you hate about her
Have you ever seen slim body builder girls? Add 40+ years if age to that, and ponify them. Then add an annoyingly repulsive personality and voice. This is how I imagine her. It's not just your writing, it has just as much to do with hiw she appeared in the show.

Thanks for the update!

>>42870980
>Was she missing at that point?
They only found her after Twilight got stabbed.
>I'm uncertain in what Shining knows and what he does not.
Shining knew about the slavery arrangement, he wasnt okay with it, mostly because it involved Rarity instead of a random mare his wife picked, but still wanted to trust his wife.

>>42871102
Thanks for the clarification.

Fast board, lately.

>>42869978

Sub ponying

>>42872206
I noticed the opposite. The amount of slidethreads is a tenfold since last week or so compared to what it was for a solid year. Maybe the fag who makes those countless slidethreads (like 2-3 every hour) gone on vacation or something?

File: xgiu6d.png (88 KB, 619x502)

88 KB PNG

Would you headcanon gryphons being kept flightless with a very tight vest ?

>>42869978
Spanks

Page 10!

>>42861784
Is harshwinny starting to become or accept that she is a masochist

>>42861785

>She conscious

I think you mean her conscious

>>42861785

> as far as it coil

I think you mean could

>>42861807
Damn you Clifthangers damn you

>>42873824

>>42874180
That or her tastes are leaning more towards the degrading side of her training.

>>42870985
And RapeApe disappears just before commenter Anon replies.

>>42876405
Did the mind control thread die or something?

>>42876802
It keeps dying.

Once again, 4chan's spam detection has big gay.
>>42867814
I had vague plans about that, yes.
>>42870966
Point of order. Rarity didn't want Coco to actually get raped, just harassed and groped.
>I think it was the bugs
Shining was lying. He knows it was Rarity.
>>42874186
>>42874188
My mistake. That's what happens when you writefag on mobile.

>>42875785
I have returned.
>>42874180
Perhaps, but for the most part she's just a desperate slut who will do almost anything to get laid. The nice thing about desperate sluts is they're into whatever you want them to be.

File: 1765671938560606.png (225 KB, 678x720)

225 KB PNG

Unicorns get really pent up if they dont use their magic at least once a day.

Well, posting link for the Vinyl green or short story of how she ended on this AU:
https://ponepaste.org/11611

Just a comment, it the last time that I use "**" on the text, this don't made a change. On the green. Really I'm a sucker for listening.

>>42877385
Oh nice !

>that I use "**" on the text
What was it supposed to do ? Turn it italic ?

>>42877385
I liked new writing format. Its always nice to have an easy way to distinguish dialogue from everything else.

>…except now Octavia’s heat came early,
>and I pushed her straight into the Stables’ arms
>because my jealousy is a greedy, ugly thing.
>And I still don’t know how to fix what I broke.

How long has she been there ? A few weeks ? Months ?

>>42877385
Nice

>>42877421
Yep.

But was a waste of time and I was lazy to correct it.

>>42877471
This was a year or two, before Octavia problem with her heat.

Working on the next part and the little talk with her roomie.

File: 526799__safe_artist-colon(...).png (197 KB, 494x704)

197 KB PNG

>>42878660

Bump

>>42878181
I meant Octavia's stay actually. Vinyl is already talking about having broken something, figured it would have been her roomie.

Would that Cadance consider sealing it off if a mare was really undeserving of having a partner ?
https://derpibooru.org/images/722039

>>42878660
>>42878667
It's been a while since RapeApe's Raricow.

>>42880439
She also had a clit piercing that got removed later on.

>>42879545
she's pretty hot

>>42861785
Hope Cadence's teacher outfits come back with a new flair after this experience.

File: 2751450__questionable_der(...).png (475 KB, 828x1631)

475 KB PNG

>>42851707 #
>>42852300 #
What if the exiled ones were sealed in heat shrinking outfits ?
The material could be so sensitive to heat that they have to live in colder places.

>>42881358
Matrix vibes

>>42882878
Look at her multitasking!

File: 3706332__safe_artist-colo(...).png (2.75 MB, 1400x1693)

2.75 MB PNG

>>42883417
She needs some incentive to not use her horn. Maybe with a horn ring that uses some of her maigc output to turn up a hidden vibrator. And anti grip shoes to make her mouth necessary for every task.

>>42876889
Are horngasms a thing in your story ?
Cause I was wondering if your Anon couldnt in the future try some experimental nerve crossing, or some other less invasive procedure, to make magic use be almost pleasure inducing.
Could be a fun next project to work on Twilight or Rarity.

>>42879290

>>42884125

Do you people want to keep the thread up until christmas ?

>>42885506
Until February at least!

>>42884804
An indebted party mare has to put on special parties to entertain the guests Mayor Mare's brings over.
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/63360769/

>>42885873
Oh and also riding on this, what if using black/grey makeup like that >>42884804 was a social custom for ponies who wants to remain anonymous ?

Hey grapenut, is there an archive of equestriaafterdark that I could find somewhere ?

>>42885944
NTA, wasn't that just a blog? Was there anything on it? Are we talking about Sethistos blog?

>>42886813
https://mlpfanart.fandom.com/wiki/Equestria_After_Dark
Seems like it was Sephisto's but then it changed hands, and then it died a few years later.
Im not sure if it had its own content posted there or if it was just an Equestria Daily equivalent for clop.

File: 3671576__suggestive_artis(...).png (2.01 MB, 1840x1990)

2.01 MB PNG

Can someone take bump duty for a bit ?
Or at least bring something to talk about ?

>>42885944
>Hey grapenut... archive of equestriaafterdark
No clue, I'm just a smol boy.

>>42887603
For some reason I read dump duty and immediately associated scat fetish with it.

>>42887733
Diapers and bdsm is fun.

File: 3732062__suggestive_artis(...).png (3.02 MB, 1480x1480)

3.02 MB PNG

"Do you dare say that all you really want is to save her ?"

>>42887802
No.

>>42887603
hmm

we could talk about the hypnovember thing that finished last month.

or we could talk about fics we liked. I really liked pink haze and i need to finish it.

what about pony colonialism, or race poltics, unicorns are almost always in positions of power, are they are a minority a majority how does this work.

File: 384520__suggestive_artist(...).png (2.11 MB, 1119x1412)

2.11 MB PNG

Its not a pony fic but there was this story I read that involved two types of mages, users and sources. It was a heavy bdsm focused concept where only an user is able to harvest and use the power stored inside a source, and for that to happen the source needs to accept and reminded of its place under the user.
I always thought it would be a really hot concept to apply among the unicorns, specially with these two.

>unicorns are almost always in positions of power
>are they are a minority a majority
Minority, but they compensate it with a large power syphoned from their harems of sources. Of all pony races they are the ones who needed this structure the most to fend off against outsiders int he past, and from that need a whole culture of dominant/user and submissive/source castes propped up.

>pony colonialism
I really like when they are the kinky ones who spread their culture on other nations.

>race politics
Unicorns aside, I like thinking about the pegasi being really territorial in their sky cities, to the point of having a hegemonic stance towards the other flying races.

https://twibooru.org/3457065

>>42888729
What would be the horse equivalent for that ?
Tie her to a slippery vertical pole with a dildo waiting under her ?

>>42888070
>pony colonialism
Blueblood bringing back an exotic zebra slave from his safari travels ?
https://derpibooru.org/images/516746

>>42883569
Not for Rarity they aren't, at least not right now. But in general? I had never really considered them, but connecting Twilight's horn to her clit or something would certainly be fun.

>>42889249
Certainly would. Especially if it was accompanied by some heightened sensitivity on the horn that made her have to constantly control the urge to rub it anywhere.

>>42888070
Any fans of orgasm denial should give this fic a try.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/568700/the-pearl-kingdoms-legacy

Posting this to explain why this exist:
https://ponepaste.org/11623

>>42890778
I didnt think she would support it like that, especially for birth rate reasons. I thought that would have been a big reason for the herd system's existence and perpetuation.

>>42891083
The births began to decline.

It become to big to maintain between 6 or 9.

Then come those that don't want to share or dislike more Mares that is allowed on a herd.

You end with a lot of mares unhappy and lonely.

>>42891139
So the solution to the birth issue would be to shrink the size of the herds ?
Not that it would solve the ressentment part in any way, but that one was always something the mares had to live with in that kind of arrangement.

File: 3713514__suggestive_artis(...).png (623 KB, 2034x1023)

623 KB PNG

>>42888070
Come on anon, what's your take on any of those topics ?

>>42891322
Well of course unicorn's are mostly going to be in a position of power, magical ponies in a magical world are going to thrive after all.
I see it being similar to modern man going to a pre-electric and industrial society. Thanks to being able to harness magic efficiently they can put more time and effort into building, improving, learning, and educating their society.

>>42891797
>Thanks to being able to harness magic efficiently
Why focus on things made to be used by physical hooves ?
With magic they could have complex mechanisms with tiny or even fully encased switches that only unicorns would be able to manipulate.

>>42891322
Damn, that's one sexy Ponk.

Anybody wants to talk about clit teasing/torture ?
https://derpibooru.org/images/2487637

File: 2033473__suggestive_artis(...).png (992 KB, 2448x3264)

992 KB PNG

>>42892508

>>42881948
Anyone got any requests for hazmat-themed stuff (like the image here)? Might take a few if any interesting ideas come up.

File: 3037780__safe_artist-colo(...).png (597 KB, 2000x2000)

597 KB PNG

>>42893417
Not much of an idea, but Gabby putting on the final pieces of her suit ?

File: 2857420__safe_artist-colo(...).png (360 KB, 2000x1816)

360 KB PNG

>>42893417
Rider and mount, both encased and using the same rebreather bag connected to their masks.

Breathplay training
https://derpibooru.org/images/3732700

>>42891322
I really like mind control, so maybe unicorns could maintain their power, with very subtle mind control spells.

things that make other ponies need their guidance more, or find unicorns more sexy. imagine a earth pony leader who is calling out how many unicorns there are in positions of power, normally tripping up, and humiliating themselves, and then being found to have a massive fetish for unicorns.

File: 302457239057239057.jpg (172 KB, 1593x1221)

172 KB JPG

>>42893458
Here you go.
Any other requests?

>>42894066
Thanks anon !
>Any other request
I got another request on that one, could you give her a big-ish internal ballgag to keep that beak open, with the air filters coming from the ball's sides ?

File: 3636844__suggestive_artis(...).png (695 KB, 1000x1000)

695 KB PNG

>>42894066
Give Ember's suit a nun color scheme and look, with a hanging censer for her to breath and expel smoke from.
>>42881948

>>42881358
I love the hypno visor

>>42876405
hot

>>42890778
Where is the rest of the series, like I can't find the stuff with Rarity and Fluttershy?

>>42843494
where can i find this and the rest.

>>42894511
Check the previous thread or the one before. He had some stories with Trixie and Rarity that still arent archived on poneb.

So... Does anyone care about the Culture of Rubber Ponies or is a good riddance type of deal?

>>42894825
I like it a lot but the author vanished months ago.

>>42887603
That shit watermark really ruins every single piece he makes

File: 43941__suggestive_ai+gene(...).png (1.22 MB, 1024x1024)

1.22 MB PNG

>>42894825
>>42894845
Might as well mention that I still want to see it updated someday.

File: 1405079__safe_artist-colo(...).png (372 KB, 3234x3001)

372 KB PNG

>>42894066
Pinkie hugging her pink encased birb.

>>42894905
That latex does look much better compared to his usual stuff though.