Previous Thread (#142) >>42956764https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/42956764Good girl edition.>What is this thread about?This thread is dedicated to stories that have clear dominate and submissive roles; both with and without consent.>What exactly is welcome in this thread?A wide variety of stories are welcomed here; from non-consent and sexual slavery, to abusive manipulation and psychological domination, to maids and extortion, and even healthy consensual relationships with BDSM role-play elements.Other variations are welcome as well, so long as they are complementary to the domination/submission focus of the thread.Up to date archives:Thread story list: https://ponepaste.org/7575Thread list: https://ponepaste.org/7446Unsorted oneshots/prompts/unfinished greens: https://ponepaste.org/7672Outdated archives:https://poneb.in/f8f09HB4https://poneb.in/778zgnJ5https://mulpwiki.batpony.party/index.php/SiM——————Historical Note:This thread was originally founded to support the “Submission is Mandatory” story by MrNameless. While the story has gone on hiatus, it’s content is referred to by a number of stories in this thread.Submission is Mandatory by MrNameless (Recommended)Nightmare Moon summons Anon to defeat the EoH. In return, she grants him ownership of the Mane 6.https://poneb.in/ycY3zrvA(Non-Canon SiM Expanded Universe Stories)Octavia POV (Recommended) https://poneb.in/Y2AahdQpOther Stories - https://poneb.in/3AFdqxvs——————Remember not to save anything of value on pastebin. Use ponepaste.orgHave a broken pastebin link? Replace pastebin.com with poneb.in——————Active stories:Last updated in #142:>The Carat and Stick by RapeApe !bwwXn5Gx.oCadance forces Rarity onto medifag Anon.https://ponepaste.org/733 https://ponepaste.org/4327 https://ponepaste.org/9692Non canon spin-off https://ponepaste.org/9701End of the last update: >>42968146Last updated in #141:>The Culture of Rubber Ponies by ManicQuilPonies covered in latex.https://ponepaste.org/7692End of the last update: >>42930353>UntitledStories about an underground club for humans and mares who want an outlet from the herd lifestyle. Written by AT.Starts here >>42676952Last update here >>42843494Ponepaste collection with "stable au" tags: https://ponepaste.org/user/AT_123Last updated in #138/138.1:>Oneshot with Twilight and Luna>>42427087Last updated (completed) in #135:>Pink Haze by GlimbrainAnon is bullied by three pink mares, but what goes around comes around.https://ponepaste.org/10656, https://ponepaste.org/10809, https://ponepaste.org/10866, https://ponepaste.org/11063Final update: >>42233797Last updated in #133.1:>Shadowbolt storyA shadowbolt operative going on an infiltration mission.https://ponepaste.org/10844( temporary ponepaste)https://ponepaste.org/10852 ( unlisted backup of the above)WIP of the setting used for the story:https://ponepaste.org/10675
>>43019151Last updated in thread #132:>How to train a ScootalooScootaloo receives a special kind of Wonderbolts training.https://ponepaste.org/10804 ( Temporary paste )https://ponepaste.org/10827 ( Unlisted backup of the above paste)WIP of the setting used for the story:https://ponepaste.org/10675Last updated in threads #127 and #127.1:>UntitledThe perfect Accessory to own.Starts here: >>41365586Last updated in #126:>Harsh is The Night by ManicQuilEQG story with a sub Rainbow Dash and her mistress Luna.Starts here: >>40261868Last update here: >>41332381Last updated in #124:>Thralls of Twilight by ManicQuilThe retired princesses show Twilight a new hidden side in their relationship.Starts here: >>41137667Last updated here: >>41137667Last updated in #121:>Short EQG christmas story with Dom Celestia and sub Dazzlings by ManicQuilStarts here: >>40663996Ends here: >>40670457Last updated in #118:>UntitledApplebloom trying out a special outfit for Nightmare NightStarts here: >>40211580Last update here: >>40241892
Its been a while since the last thread. Sorry for letting it die but everyone had apparently left after RapeApe posted his update, and it ended up being just me bumping it.
AT in case you are there, Im really interested in how that Diamond story is coming along.
For that one anon who enjoys ticking stuff.
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>>43019704hot.>>43019175When was the last update? I have not checked the thread in a good while, focusing on pink haze, and I am wondering if I missed anything
>>43020378You probably missed a few stuff, like Coco having an incident with her chastity belt, and a bit about Anon's past was told, with more to be revealed soon according to RapeApe.
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>>43019354Willing submissive wife.>>43019976Blackmailed trophy wife.>>43020770Blackmailed pet. Trophy wife is responsible for any of her misbehaviors.
Thoughts on ear biting ?https://derpibooru.org/images/3745784
How long until the other anons find out that the thread is back ? I thought the weekend would have been a good time to revive it.
>>43019151
>Ponified Dressage would basically be a BDSM event.
>>43022635Do they get bonus points with genital piercings ?
>>43022635Its hard to find examples where the tail holder is part of the tack.
>>43022759Probably not. It's all about control.
>>43022635If you're trying to make me gay, it's working.
>>42968146>I’ve been with my mistress?Anon might be in bigger trouble now!>I have lost four patientsUmm, he did not loose any recently as far as I know.>I'm phenomenalMaybe this is why Luna sends her wounded to him.>She visibly bites her tongueAt least she did not forget their arrangement.>possibly from swellingDid she really bitten her tongue that hard?>you were cryingMaybe he is not totally inhuman yet.>Thank you for opening up to me.He opened up about the wrong topic, but it's something I guess.>and the two of you retired for the nightDammit.>I think I hit it…Hopefully he did not hit anything else what we don't yet know about.>I think he’s being extorted.Shining sure went from one problem to another.>He heavily implied it wasn’tBut there are a few things which hints that changelings might be involved. Even if the patients are not changelings.>if we know how Anon got in the messTime to extort him with something!>Was that even the right term?I bet she gets off on anything and everything.>shockingly few medical workersOdd. But also having to equip them initially is not cheap.>I looked into it.Hm, maybe whomever approved him needed someone local to fix up ponies secretly? If it is truly Luna, she could be behind this. It makes sense, she needs a doctor to fix her soldiers in secret. Transporting them to earth would raise suspicion and would get into the records.>he only spent a few months in jailAnd why didn't Shining know about this? Or snoop around why he did what he did. I'm sure Shining is not that dumb to think that a senator just accidentally beat someone up.>I’ll never say no to thatHeh.>We’re safe for now.If there was no one spying on them right now.Thanks for the update!
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Is Manic going to continue his rubber story ?
Gotta go, have some Appleslave for the night.https://derpibooru.org/images/3649277https://derpibooru.org/images/3192222
>>43024758huh, I did not know maren drew anything similar
Bump
Don't try to make this one submit.
>>43025949She already has someone she wants to submit to.
>>43019151She's going to love and tolerate the shit out of (You).
>>43025979Any story where Cadence acts as a relationship counselour to her aunts ?
>>43025748
AI anon tried out an idea for prisoner transportation.https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/81106307/#81107725
I didn't know that the post was back.Sorry, work had me from the balls, so there's no enough time to finish part one. I was hoping to upload the three parts, first Apple Bloom, second with Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo and the Las one an breeding end.But work is skyrocking... And it is killing all my free time, so sorry to all.
>>43026995No problem AT, the idea was just too good to not ask about the progress.
>>43026995Hey, aside from Diamond AU, have you been cooking up any other ideas ?
>>43027525Nope, sorry.The last Idea was another one from the stable, but using the idea of latex suit, you know that they look like pigs.Eating form the ground and dirt, and other things, this was gonna be something outside of the normal.Was thinking of use somo unicorns like Minuette or Moon Dancer for that one.There is only some ideas and an small part form the POV of Minuette, degrading herself and why she love that.But it'sn finish because of work.
>>43019175Thanks for maintaining things for us. It's appreciated.>>43023616Point of order, it was Anon that was in prison for a while, not Howlite.>It's late in the afternoon when you wake up.>Good thing it's your day off.>Rarity had already gotten up before you somehow, you must have forgotten to bind her before bed.>She'll be tired, she doesn't sleep well without light bondage.>You briefly consider going back to sleep, but think better of it.>Getting up on time tomorrow is already going to be bad enough.>You emerge from the bedroom, likely looking a complete disheveled mess, to find Rarity sipping a cup of tea and reading a book at the kitchen table.>She sets her affairs down and fetches you a few scones before preparing your morning coffee.>”How are you feeling?”“Exhausted. Whatcha reading?”>You pick up the book.“Psychotherapy for the mentally deficient? I'm not insane, Rarity, and you’re not mentally deficient.”>”You're clearly in a great deal of pain, and I wish to help you. Though I must confess, that book hasn't been particularly useful.”“What does it recommend?”>”That you talk through your traumatic encounters several times until you get used to them, while reframing events and constructing a narrative such that they don't seem so bad.”“Huh.”>She must have been looking for a quick fix.“Whatever. I'll be okay.”>”I highly doubt that! What I saw last night was nothing short of agony, and yet you say that it wasn't even the worst of it? What could possibly be worse than having somebody PERISH, and then seeing the tears of those left behind?”………>”And what does it have to do with you coming home so late anyway?”…>”You’re hiding something from me. If this is because I called you monstrous, I do apologize.”“It's not that.”>Though it didn't help.>She had hit a bit close to home.>”Whatever it is, I assure you. I love you dearly, and there are few atrocities that could change that.”>Not none.>So it was conditional.>Did that mean it was fragile, or that Rarity was creative enough to think of the REALLY bad stuff?…>Artist.>She's creative.“I'm an illegal alien.”>She drops your coffee, spilling it all over the table.“Bad timing on my part.”>You fetch a rag and begin cleaning up as she stands dumbstruck.“I only found out around half a year ago. Celestia had a bunch of questions for me about a medication I gave Twilight. She'd apparently learned how dificid works, probably from Twilight herself, and was pretty shaken.”>”Is there something chilling or immoral about that drug?”“Not if it’s just used on bacteria. She wanted to know if the same principle could be applied to ponies. Clever girl, I can see why her kingdom has done so well. Anyway, she told me my visa application had been denied.”>”How is it you came to be here?”
>>43027920“Someone forged her signature, and copied her seal. The paperwork all says I'm approved.”>Come to think of it, that's exactly how Chrysalis had tried to ruin everything a while ago.“Celestia has apparently decided to allow me to stay because Twilight pulled through. I guess I'm no longer illegal.”>”Who would be so bold and capable as to forge that? Was it- was it Chrysalis?”“It's not safe for me to tell you. They're still interested in me.”>”Are you in danger?”“No. They brought me here for a reason. As long as I do what they want and keep my mouth shut, I'm safe.”>”And how can you be certain?”>Because she might have more wounded in the future.“I probably shouldn't answer that.”>”Well! I don't see what the problem is. You have your visa, go tell Shining Armor straight away and he'll have you protected!”“No.”>”And why not?”>Because he'll start asking questions.>”And why was your visa declined in the first place? It seems as though Princess Celestia would want to attract talent such as yourself.”>Questions like that.…“Well… it was about a month after I'd lost my 4th patient…”>It was late at night, nearing the morning shift.>You’d had a mercifully easy day.>There had been a few patients, some minor sutures and the like, but nothing serious.>Somebody had to ruin it, of course.>Somebody had to go and get themselves hurt.>You were already in the operating theater, preparing for work.>Your assistant, a waifish blond man, was already arranging the wrapped tools.>You couldn’t help but notice he was shaking a bit.>He’s a good guy, but painfully green.“Calm down, Don.”>”Y-yeah.”“What’s wrong?”>”Didn’t you hear what they’re bringing in?”>You had, of course.“Shotgun to the face.”>”How are you so calm?”“Practice. You’ll get used to it after a few years.”>”But what if they die?”“They won’t. Simple.”>Truth was, you weren’t so confident.>The patient was unidentified, and was in really rough shape.>Matthew had been the one to collect the patient, and he was a phenomenal paramedic.>If it had been anyone else, you expect they’d be DOA.>The door burst open, and a scruffy, chubby guy came in with the patient on a gurney.>There’s not much face to see.>But you can’t help but notice he’s underweight, and covered in sores.>Something’s wrong with this guy aside from the buckshot.“Talk to me, Matt.”>”We restarted his heart and pumped him full of fluids, but he’ll need blood products. Type unknown.”“Vasopressors?”>”No, perfusion was WAY too low. They got TXA, oxygen, and we’re counting on permissive hypotension.”
>>43027922>The patient had been moved to the table.“Don, drop what you’re doing and get us CT. No contrast agent.”>It would be too risky without their medical history.>”Uh-““Now.”>It’ll take a few minutes to get that image.>Until then, you’re just guessing at what’s going on.>No sense in wasting this time, you set to wiring the patient up to the good monitoring equipment.“Matt?”>”Got their temperature up, the wounds are packed, and there’s no external bleeding left.”>Anesthesia is being applied.“Drugs?”>”Ketamine to intubate, midazolam for cerebral activity, phenytoin for seizures.”“Hypertonic saline?”>”Not part of my kit.”>You should have known that.>Matt shows himself out as you hook the patient up to your monitoring equipment.>Pulse is low but steady, blood perfusion is in the gutter, temperature and blood oxygen are surprisinglygood.>”CT’s ready, Anon.”>The instant you step behind the lead wall, you can hear the machine begin humming.>The machine works agonizingly slowly.>You can do little other than look at the monitoring equipment, hoping that things remain steady.>The early, low resolution imaging tells you plenty.>It’s ridiculously swollen, and he’s got a nasty epidural hematoma that has to be depressurizedimmediately.>And there are a couple of pellets in his brain for good measure.>You’re not touching that part, though.“Cut the CT, get them a bolus of hypertonic saline, 25%.”>”We don’t know his medical history. Isn’t that dangerous?”“I’m not worried about his kidneys right now.”>”R-right.”>The sodium would leech water out of the brain, shrinking it, keeping it from mashing against the skull.>Then you fetch the hair clippers.>It’s not often you use those.>Thankfully!>It’s annoying, and slows things down.>You’d probably go MAD if they were the norm.“Get their head locked in the Mayfield.”>”On it.”>They’ve got an epidural hemorrhage.>It’ll be a long time before you have a chance to deal with the missing face.“And get the robot in position once the clamp’s on. It’s going to be delicate.”>You sanitize the patient’s scalp and isolate your target with a rubber dam as Don puts the final screw in.>Then you slice a flap of skin off, revealing the skull.>You’re forced to wait a moment as the robotic arm calibrates.>Then you step behind the control panel.>It’s a simple setup, just an optical system to measure your hand’s movements and a display giving you a closer view of the patient and your tools.>Simple, but effective and reliable.>The arm pressed the saw against your patient’s skull, moving exactly one twentieth as far as your hand with every movement.>You’re able to extract a square centimeter of skull with shocking ease.>You still haven’t really gotten used to how good the new model is.>”We’ve got the patient’s ID.”“Anything interesting?”
>>43027926>You continue working as you talk, not willing to waste any time on such a delicate case.>You set to work on repairing the leaky artery.>”Stage 3 kidney disease-““Damn it!”>”History of amphetamine abuse, one heart attack on record…”“How old is this guy?”>”28.”“A heart attack at 28?”>”Actually, he was 26 at the time.”“Just how much meth did this guy do?”>More importantly, how much was in his system?>A blood test wouldn’t give you accurate results given how much fluid had been swapped out.>Still…“I should have known he was a junkie from the sores. Stupid… What’s perfusion at?”>”0.7”“Low. We’ll have to be careful with how much we take... Send 5 CCs to the lab, find out what he’s on when you’re done reading that to me. Anything else?”>”Right! Uh... drug seeking tendencies- I guess you don’t care about that right now- he’s been revived a few times after overdose- ooh. He’s DNR.”“Oh.”>That’s scary.>So there you were, your patient- who was likely high- was laying on the table. He had a history of heart disease, his blood pressure was perilously low, he was bleeding all over his brain which was so swollen it was crushing itself, his skull was open, there was lead lodged in his frontal lobe, and he’d already gone into cardiac arrest once that day.>And to top it all off, you’re legally prohibited from resuscitating him.>They needed a wizard, not a surgeon.>Damn shame magic wasn’t real…“Why’s a guy in his 20s DNR?”>”I don’t know, but it was signed when he was here after his previous OD.”“Well… I guess we’ll just have to make sure his heart doesn’t stop. Easy.”>The worst of it’s over.>Probably.>You’ve managed to depressurize the brain and stop the bleeding by the time the drug panel finallycomes in.>It’s not as bad as you’d been expecting.>Sure, odds are that he’s just had so many fluids replaced that the bulk of it was flushed from hissystem, but you’ll take it.>Things went unexpectedly well for a while.>The brain’s swelling was down to tolerable levels, he was hemostatic somehow, temperature was fine, oxygen was GOOD despite all common sense.>You were just about ready to move on and try to salvage some of his face.>He’d be horribly disfigured no matter what you did, but with luck the plastic surgeons would at leasthave something to work with.>When suddenly, SpO2 plummets.>You barely have time to do anything before he flatlines.>You don’t know why his heart stopped.>There are a thousand and one possible causes.>Maybe it was the pellets in the brain.>It could be a small clot getting in an unfortunate place.>Maybe it’s a result of heart damage, or an interaction with some trace substance that slipped through the panel, or maybe-.>It doesn’t matter right now.>Hopefully they’ll do an autopsy so you know what happened.>It would be nice to avoid repeating this trouble.
>>43027928>You step away from the patient with a defeated sigh.>Don steps back, eyes wide.>Poor guy.>He’s taking this pretty hard.>Can’t even look straight at the corpse.“Chin up, it was a good attempt.”>”You okay? You sound terrible.”“What do you mean? I’m fine!”>“You’re shouting.”>He’s clearly projecting.>It’s a terrible waste.>You’d very nearly pulled it off.>Sure, recovery was going to be agonizing and there was definitely some brain damage, but he could have lived.>”Aren’t you going to call time of death?”>It didn’t make sense.>While there were plenty of things that COULD have caused this, none of them SHOULD have.>It was sudden weirdly sudden.>You’re still detecting electrical activity, there’s just no detectable pulse, and-“Oooh.”>The meth!>He probably had undiagnosed vascular disease brought on by that stuff.>The kidney disease backed that up, and made it worse.>And with the insane fluctuation in pressures and swelling…“Obstructive shock. We’ve got a MASSIVE pulmonary embolism!”>You push Don aside and begin administering chest compressions.>”Whoa, what are you doing?”“Saving his life.”>”He’s DNR!”>You ignore the protests and keep pumping away.>It’s not working.>Of course it’s not working.>The blockage is still there.“Get me ECMO!”>”They’re not going to do that, he’s DNR!”>Of course.>Extracorporeal membrane oxygenation is torture from what you’ve heard.>Simple in practice, abhorrently difficult in execution, and shockingly risky.>You work a pick into the patient’s jugular, hooking their bloodstream up to a pump, which rapidlybegins to bleed them dry.>After passing through a gas permeable membrane in an oxygen rich environment, you pump the blood back in.>Working through both a major vein and artery, you can effectively circulate and oxygenate blood,bypassing the heart entirely.>It’s disruptive.>The infection risks are high.>It worsens the blood pressure problems you’ve been fighting, risks moving clots like the one thatstarted this mess, threatens to restart all the bleeds you’d arduously stopped, and far more.>But he’s alive.>He doesn’t need a heart, at least, not for now.>”We aren’t trained to use that thing!”“Then get the people who are!”>”I told you, he’s DNR!”>You were aware.“I want an image of the clot.”>Don freezes up for a moment.>Then he simply leaves the room, leaving you to illegally revive the patient, operating all the machineryyourself.>It’s arduous.>It’s mentally taxing.>And you’re trembling a bit with both excitement and fear.>But slowly, piece by piece, you put the wretch back together.>You stop the bleeding that the ECMO restarted.>You try and fail to break up the clot before opening up his chest cavity and manually extracting it, pulling a huge chunk of blood, tar, plaque, and what you assume in intravenous drug impurities.
>>43027931>When his coronary arteries are opened, you set to ending the procedure.>And over the course of hours, you eventually finish working, closing the guy up.>As the adrenaline slowly leaves your system, a terrible sense of malaise begins to set in.>You work mechanically, dispassionately, unable to focus.>You feel more like an observer than an inhabitant of your own body, mind occupied, knowing you’dmade a huge mistake.>You return to the present, flashback concluded, eyes watering up.*Sniff*“I’m sorry. I just… I REALLY miss that robot.”>”Well, I can’t pretend to have any idea what you just said, but it clearly weighs upon you heavily.”“What’s not to understand?”>”All the medical jargon, for started. What’s ECMO?”“Temporary external heart and lungs.”>”You have such devices?”“Not here.”>”Oh. Well, what’s DNR?”“Do not resuscitate. Standing orders to let a patient die if they’d need certain lifesaving measures.”>”Who would EVER sign such a thing?”“People who have no hope of recovery.”>”How grim! What’s shotgun?”“That’s not a medical term, it’s a weapon.”>”Oh! One of those firearms? To the face? Can you cure that?”“Cure probably isn’t the right word, but you can survive them. Sometimes.”>”And you revived that person after such a grievous injury? That’s astounding!”>Her flattery doesn’t do much to cheer you up.“I did something very, VERY bad.”>”You healed him.”“It was immoral, illegal, and short-sighted. I shouldn’t have done it.”>”Your heart was too big to stand by and do nothing.”>That’s the nice way to spin it.>But truth is, given how things played out, that wasn’t empathy.>It was cruelty.>You just weren’t mature enough to control yourself.>You still aren’t.>”Does such a thing happen often, where patients refuse treatment? It seems like- Applejack’s cousin!”“It was very hard on me to let her go. Had circumstances been different, maybe if she wassedated or too weak to protect herself, I wouldn’t have. The prince was mad at me for letting her go, I was upset with myself for thinking of detaining her. I’m glad he tracked her down.”>You could really go for a drink.…>How much can you take before it affects your performance?>And what would Luna do if she found out her surgeon was drunk?>Best not to find out.“Sufficed to say, I got fired.”>”For saving a life.”“For torturing a man, breaking several laws, operating expensive and dangerous equipment I wasn’t trained on- flawlessly, mind you- and opening the hospital up to legal action.”>”I’m so terribly sorry you had to go through all that.”“I’m not. I’d still be on Earth otherwise, wouldn’t have met you.”>She averts her gaze slightly, offering a demure smile and a blush.”
>>43027933>”That’s sweet of you to say.”“Like I said last night, or this morning or whatever, the hard part isn't failing to save them, Rarity. The hard part is allowing them to die. I can't do it. I just can’t.”>”What became of this poor wretch?”“He wound up throwing himself out a window. All the pain he'd endured during that time was pointless. All the work done was a waste. I spent a bit of time in jail because of it. I did the wrong thing… and somehow, I know I'd do it again.”>”Incarcerated? Well, I suppose you did strike your friend.”“Shouldn't have done that either, but that's not why. The guy had refused treatment. He was not my patient. All the work I did on him was assault and battery.”>”That seems quite harsh! What are you meant to do, stand by idly as a man perishes?”“Yes.”>She’s dumbfounded.“I was supposed to just declare him dead and go home. It was the legally and morally correct thing to do. He wound up dead anyway, but he got to experience some of the worst pain imaginable first.”>”Oh... Still, it seems unlike Celestia to deny entry because of such a show of compassion. Surely you knew you were going to be punished for that, and you simply couldn't tolerate it, especially since your punishment has concluded.”“I think you misunderstand, Rarity. It wasn’t compassion, it was- it was MANIA! I couldn’t help myself! And, well… my punishment hasn’t entirely concluded. Have you ever wondered why I came here to work in this run down clinic where half the patients don't pay and most of the equipment is defective?”>“No.”“Or why I was allowed to leave when there's a shortage of medical workers?”>”You need permission to leave?”“The courts went easy on me, but the medical association certainly didn’t. It was an egregious violation, and they knew I was likely to do it again.”>”What did they do?”“Well…”>It’s hard to come clean.>To admit that your life is a lie.>That you’re a fraud.>But Rarity has stuck with you so far.…>You’re scared.>But somehow, you feel like you can trust her.>Whether that’s just because you need to vent or because of her devotion is hard to say, but you’re confident.>That she’s willing to accept you.>Despite your shortcomings. “They revoked my license. Legally, I'm not a doctor.”Hopefully that doesn't feel like too much of a rugpull. I've tried to establish that he's willing to put up with a lot over the course of this green, and not so subtly hinted that there's a reason for that, but I don't know if it worked.Once upon a time I asked myself why Anon would abandon his life on Earth and go to a place where he had no support network, defective equipment, and low pay. For a little while the answer was some kind of sex crime, but that was predictable and boring. This was a way to tie together his profession with a pattern of violating consent.
Bumping to read this tomorrow.
>>43027935OK, I was not expecting that his licence was removed.Passing of that, ouch, a shotgun...Damn, the Doctor Screw it, even if he save a life.
>>43027935>For a little while the answer was some kind of sex crime, but that was predictable and boring. You did the right call, and this would really be something that really throws a wrench in his reputation and career, a lot more than just the assault charge.
>>43027892I was holding off on replying until I read RapeApe's update.>pig suits>self degradingI really like that. Would it also have mane and tail shaving for the long stays ?>Minuette or Moon Dancer for that one.I could definitely see Moon Dancer being into self degradation. Maybe even self hate with her always going for the the heavier treatment between the two of them.
>>43028989Thanks for the interest, now, I used a little of free time to only do the introduction or part one:https://ponepaste.org/11725
>>43029268>marked with subtle collars or enchanted bands pulsing in time with their "owners'" hearts.Do the bands also prevent them from uttering anything but pig squeals ? >the delicate demographic balance tipping toward indulgence over salvation.>But Photo Finish held veto as founderInteresting, so a rift is starting to happen. Or at least the society is getting new sections.
>>43026879Celestia parading the conquered dragon lord.https://files.catbox.moe/lafucz.png
>>43029312The bands are for the humans, are anti-conceptives, spells that block and negate the impregnation of the mares.At the same time this are key for the entrance to the Piggery. Only few humans are allowed to enter.And yep, Canterlot it's becoming ground zero for this kind of situation.It's fault of Photo Finish, she has an Vendetta with the so called elite of Canterlot...Let say her wishes of exposing them and ruin their reputation... back fire on sun level of burn.
>>43029400>back fireOne way trip to live in the mud and filth of her own creation ?
>>43029443Nope, Photo Finish destroy them, but they loved every second of it.Now they created this section on the Stables. And are hoarding both mares and humans on their prime for themselves.At least that's part of the concept of this section.
>>43029500What about the non-elite unicorns like those two you mentioned? Do they go in a dirtier public pen, hoping to be picked by a passing human ?
Just dealing with work and using a little of free time because of an emergency.I writted the second part of the green, but because of the work, this one is not completely Polished. So sorry in advance:https://ponepaste.org/11726
>>43029938>No longer will you be a mere mud-sow of the lowest rung. Now, you may become a broodmare in service to the herd."So the piggies have a ranking even among themselves. And they go as far as using a real branding iron.Do they have a magical branding version like in that Diamond/Sweetie fic I showed you ? You know, that only shows itself glowing on the body at night, for the ones at the bottom who are still only half commited to the idea.>thick, viscous latex solution shimmering in iridescent pink, enchanted to bond like a second skin.Is this something only the Canterlot branch has ?
>>43030241Their are sadist and Masochist, so the old way of branding is better.It's about to inflict pain and see how they crave it.At the moment this trouble is only happening on Canterlot.The Ponyville’s Branch would not tolerate a section like this, the public stables and the punishment of the mares that try to steal, kidnap the semental of another are only the more extremist punishment.Working on part three, was more faster with the notes and using the AU of the Stables.
>>43027935I loved the backstory explanation, personally. I think it was the opposite of a rugpull. It fleshes out the backstory of why Anon is here in the first place, it fits with the way Anon has been acting since the beginning of the story, and it was a nice half-twist that goes beyond just the "careless error" explanation that is typical of setups like this. Anon's own obsession got him into trouble, and yet they are also sort of his best asset now that he is in Equestria. Lowkey brilliant IMO. Love this story my man! Now... methinks there is a silly little white unicorn mare who desperately needs a dominant deep-dicking in her pussy and ponut! And maybe even a good hard spanking for good measure for all of the accumulated naughtiness over these past few updates... Rarity needs to be reminded of her place, after all!
What kind of slave would she be ?
>>43030834Im not into dragons.
>>43030834One that clearly needs to be humiliated.
>>43031536Humiliated and claimed as a fat bastard's toy.https://derpibooru.org/images/2221162https://derpibooru.org/images/2764122
>>43030518>inflict painDo the cloven shoes come with something for that purpose ?
Part Three:https://ponepaste.org/11747I don't know if this is good or not. Still working on the CMCs and Diamond Tiara, had to redo it because instead of SiM become an NTR with Diamond Screwing Apple Bloom on front of her ex-fiancee...Need to write it better
>>43032564It caught me by surprise at first but I liked how rough the hazing process was in this. The face shovings into the mud were great.>SiM become an NTR with Diamond Screwing Apple Bloom on front of her ex-fiancee.Im really curious on how this story will turn out.
>>43027935Did the Crystal Empire authorities never bother to do a background check ? Or is it usually Equestria that handles these things and the Empire just gets the scraps that emigrate from there ?
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>>43032564I know she's already settled with a stallion, but does Twilight's mother ever visit that place? Mostly asking cause I think could be fun for a milf like her to have this kind of secret, degrading hobby.
>>43033727To be honest.I never consider the milfs. Could be a good option, but I don't really like NTR too much.But it kind be a really twisted way of love. Thanks for the idea.
>>43027935Twilight isn't a teacher.Now, working that into the story means creating a set of circumstances where the school has existed for long enough that it doesn't require rarity any longer, or most of the m6, most of the time. That implies that Rarity already franchised in canterlot and manehattan, which I think is consistent with what you've got going. We don't know when she expanded out into yakyakistan, exactly, but it seems clear at a glance that she spends the timeskip working herself to the bone at a business that doesn't quite give her what she wants out of life and doing monthly governmental counsels.So, if rarity can empathize with his situation so much that she doesn't even see a problem because she also has experience as an unaccredited teacher at an unaccredited university, and rarity/the m6 ALSO aren't needed at that university, then twilight sparkle is, legally speaking, the singular royal authority of the equestrian kingdom, and rarity is an oligarch, or perhaps THEE oligarch, given that only AJ and her are real business owners.And that's the version of her who would most realistically fold when chained in a basement. Younger rarity was stubborn and tenacious beyond control, though also weak and easily taken with romantic ideals. S4e8: Rarity Takes Manehattan: Rarity has one business location and meets coco, so the story has to take place after this.S4e18 simple ways: Rarity got over that putz, and also AJ had to help snap her out of it. Now, you've got AJ doing that again, which makes more sense if she's done it before. s4e19 for whome the sweetie bell toils: Rarity is well known enough to work for a star, and also gets a significant amount of cash and/or fame from this event.s5e14 canterlot boutique: rarity opens her canterlot location. Nothing significant has happened to her career since the above episode, though she did get possessed by a book in inspiration manifestation.s5e16 made in manehattan: rarity and AJ help restore community value by helping Coco put on a play at a park.s6e1, flurry is born, which strongly implies the story takes place after this point.s6e6 no second prances: trixie is stapled to Starlight's side, where she will forever remain.s6e7 newbie dash: rainbow is an official wonderbolt with associated responsibilities and completely undefined rights and privileges. So, your RD is likely a military trained rookie who has already realized how to unlock her retarded perfect memory. She KNOWS the laws, but will always be stupid and unwise. It's also not possible to say how much combat experience she's seen outside of heroics with twilight.s6e9 saddle row review: rarity opens her manhattan location, with a bunch of helps6e26: changelings kidnap an entire country before anyone notices. Anti-magic anthil is made canon. s7e6 forever filly: rarity gets a wake up call on the ever marching flow of time, and how much of her sister's development she missed.
>>43034238s7e11 Not Asking for Trouble: Not important to rarity herself, but the m6 conspire to influence the yak civilization and rarity helps. Just a marker of her importance, that she's basically doing CIA shit AS the government. All she actually does is sew.s8e1: school startss8e4 fake it till you make it: rarity needs to recruit fluttershy to handle her responsibilities in manehattan.> Rarity: Yes, well, I don't need help making clothes. Sassy Saddles is pitching in. Plus, I'll be pulling all three of my Manehattan assistants.And this is why she needed fluttershy. At this point, she has three different people running the manehattan location.s9e19 draggon dropped: rarity/spike finally get over their "thing/not thing", sort of.end: twilight's a queen now.>your point?Well, your story doesn't have to fit neatly into one place here. Starlight, for instance, doesn't have to exist. Neither does spike, unless you've already mentioned him. Discord's inconsistent enough that you can actually believe he would just do nothing, unless fluttershy dies. His knowledge is also limited, though expanded beyond our own. I also don't remember the details enough to say the current status of "Rarity 4 U".However, if we're claiming that rarity for you exists, but rarity ISN'T yet literally unofficially more important than cadance, then we're between the series finale and s6e9, assuming we're staying on the show's timeline.There's also nothing stopping the sisters from maintaining their power network and doing part of their duties while "officially" pushing the title onto twilight, but I don't think that's what you were going for. Just, rarity's response here narrows the timeline down a little, whatever she says.Then again, there's nothing stopping her from just being a hypocrite, instead.
>>43027935bumping to read this update
>>43033826I meant her being there more for the treatment rather than the sex. Heck, maybe she even wears a modified version of the suit that punishes her for being unfaithful. Something that enhances her heat and denies any kind of release with a zap, with an anal only access while her marital hole is sealed and constantly stuffed by a replica of her husband's cock, to really make her crave going back to him when she eventually gets out of the sty.
Rarity has an imgaination
>>43034761Where did you find a colored version ?
>>43028185That scene had a few iterations. It started as a car crash since those are the bulk of the serious injuries that happen day to day, moving on to a stab wound to mirror Twilight's injury. I ended up with this one because I wanted to show that the patient wouldn't have much of a life left. The point is meant to be that Anon can't help himself, not that he was rebelling or making a bad choice, so I wanted somebody who wouldn't have much of a life left afterward. No face, massive brain damage etc.>>43028955Glad to hear you approve.>>43030547I agree on Rarity, currently working on it. And thank you for your kind words.>>43033083Yeah, Equestria is in control here. The Empire is its a state in name only, and Shining and Cadence are basically there to ensure they don't cause trouble. It's a big part of why they face so much resistance with the ruling class.>>43034253You've clearly put a lot of thought into this, and you also know the timeline better than I do. Maybe you can help.This story happens a few year after the end since Flurry's a child instead of a babby, but I never really nailed down when it deviated from canon.My criteria are that Celestia and Luna still matter, so it probably happens before the end. Chrysalis, Tirek, and Cozy aren't petrified as well. I've implied Chrysalis has some knowledge of Tartarus, but she doesn't have to have gone there to know that given her nature.Coco was previously working for Rarity, so some time after Saddle Row Review, though that could hypothetically happen after things went non-canon.My version of Rarity has a successful career that doesn't fulfill her much like what you observed from the timeskip, but I see no reason why that can't happen if things deviate before then, and I expect something like Forever Filly to be inevitable which would make her accept she won't be young forever.
>>43035553So Sweetie Belle would be a pre-teen or teenager at that point ?
AT_123 I bulk added all of your stories to the archive, and I was wondering if any one of them aren't sim related? I don't have the time to read em atm.Also can more of them be grouped together? Like "The Piggery Part1, Part2, Part3" Any other ones that are continuations? I'm suspecting "Fluttershy Initiation" and "Fluttershy Rise". Same story?Tyty for help.
>>43037788In the same vein, if anyone wants too give me story names and tags for any of the "xxx" placeholders. Just drop them here and I'll fill them out. To better complete the archive. Thanks for any assistance.
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>>43029938>Mirror Charm watched, expression unreadable, the briefest shadow of something almost like envy crossing her features before vanishing.I dont get that part. Envious because of the first time experience that they would have ? Envious because she cant be part of it due to some rule imposed on the staff ?
>>43037788I'm gonna try to add the AU titles, The Stables and the Piggery.Both are SiM but are of consensual Bondage or rough/Hardcore sex.The other are for the portal an AU of Humans reaching Equestria and the shenanigans that comes with them on love and other things.I will try to edit all today or tomorrow.
>>43038153They still have the choice of leave.She is too deep, too addicted to leave that place.
>>43035553>which would make her accept she won't be young foreverIs she going to have an age worrying phase and start wearing uncomfortably tight clothing to keep her shape?>>43037740
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>>43038405All good, so no changes to the archive? No stories to be grouped together or removed?
>>43035553The story is formed by the story.Like, the sweetie example is demonstrative. How attached are you, exactly, to the most negative interpretation of what anon suggested to rarity and then backed out on? If we raise her age, we change what kind of thing rarity was agreeing to. If we DO move forward on the timeline, it now somewhat wastes a bit of the characterization work you did. For a hypothetical new reader, they would also assume the worst version of that scene, and then maybe later figure out that they were incorrect, which becomes an instance of bad communication. The show itself used the principal I'm hinting at. The cmc are, by the end of the show, business owners and important public figures who could totally go to university if they wanted. Twilight refuses them on the grounds that they don't need friendship lessons. They travel across the country on their own and twilight lets them do whatever they want in a foreign country unsupervised. So, how old are they?The cuteceanera in season one is inspired by a quinceanera, which is for 15 year olds. The cutiemark is, explicitly, representative of coming of age, but what age? The schoolhouse is partially based on old American small town schooling, clearly handles advanced topics by our standards on occasion, and is attended for multiple consecutive years, so the "grade" system as we understand it is not in action. Spike, in season 1, has to take nappies like a toddler. Actually, it was nighttime after a hard day of listening to twilight yap, but the scene still framed spike as a sleepy baby. In episode 1, twilight uses babytalk in order to frame spike as a needy child and get fluttershy to fuck off, and it works, but she then has to apologize for it. At the end of the show, spike's basically dating a grif and went through the "molt" thing, but it's (likely) only been like 3 years or a few more(the baby cakes are still babies, which limits the time that may have passed). So, did spike go from 6 to 18 in three years? Do we blame "dragon biology"?The show writes the story it wants to write, and we connect the paragraphs and sentences and scenes in a way which is comprehensible. We're rationalization machines. It's only an issue when rationalization becomes ACTUALLY impossible, and so we have no idea what it is we're meant to interpret from the text.
>>43040244So, these unanswered age questions are mostly fine, with the exception that we don't know what to make of Rarity being a tease to a young boy for years and then actually pursuing him the moment he moved on. It's quite difficult to say by what metric we should be judging her, due to this ambiguity. In one scene I half recall, we see a rarity PoV on the situation, I think, and the implication is that she's not thinking about spike's feelings or the long term repercussions of them like at all, which is to say she's vein enough to be blinded by affection, and her relevant sin here is simply not paying attention or having any wisdom at all. So, that somewhat helps. The writers didn't intend to write a grown woman pulling a young boy around by his dick, but instead a careless woman and the troubles of a young boy misplacing his heart. As we now know what kind of story this is supposed to be, and consequently who the characters are supposed to be, the technical ambiguities no longer matter to our narrative construction, and may be corrected at our whim without creating unresolveable conflict.>Celestia and luna still matterEven after she gives up the throne, I could see luna maintaining a loyal and/or enthralled network of metaphysical and... "oneiric" warriors. The dreams of the world will always need tending. Depending on the cosmology you're going for, the border between reality and dreams may also need maintaining.While celestia's signature needs to hold weight, it's not only a princess who's signature holds weight. Maybe she simply gave herself a position 1 step down from princess which has all the powers and none of the responsibilities.This is not to say that they have actually done these things. Only that it's actually very hard to create an unresolvable conflict. That's what I'm demonstrating when I say that you could make twilight the queen of everything next chapter and it, technically, wouldn't even be a twist to anyone other than anon. So, if you present celestia as still possessing both divine and bureaucratic authority of the throne, then she does. For the last time before I begin making nerdy suggestions which actually answer your question: none of what I'm about to say matters, and the task of pinning this down explicitly in your story IS the thing which may generate unresolvable conflicts later, if you should choose to do it.
>>43040273Tirec and cozy are basically completely irrelevant. They could never be mentioned or they could show up next chapter. Both options would imply things about the world and timeline, but I see no potential issues. All that matters, then, is that discord isn't currently forcing queen bug to work with them, as that would imply he's spying on 10% of what chrysalis is doing and giving her orders of some kind, which would be a problem for the story.Rarity encountered the conflict between her career as a fashion shop owner and her passion as a fashion creating pony as early as "canterlot botique", so that's accounted for.There is nothing which could be an issue up until saddle row review, and so there is little point in creating a massive deviation before then. Immediately after that, the changeling race gets power scaled through the roof. You don't have to change what happens in s6e26. You could have everything we're currently seeing be in direct response to this massive escalation in warfare. The ponies, which previously were allowed to just exist, now have to present a serious defensive front against an army of lies and lairs.As warfare continued, that implies that the changeling's are not currently ruled by thorax, and did not become gay colored. If the changelings aren't ruled by thorax, that implies that thorax did not learn the lessons he needed in order to overturn the culture of his colony. This implies he didn't have help from starlight/discord/trixie, or that he did not learn about friendship from spike the dragon. So, you can say that everything we're seeing was caused by the deletion of spike the dragon from your story, at some point. Or starlight. Or trixie. Or discord.Or, you can just have humanity emerge right before this, and so introduce guns, and so thorax can be someplace under the tundra with a .22 in his neck instead of ever meeting spike... or I mean spike could be packing when they meet, I guess.s6e16 was the introduction of thorax, which was shortly after saddle row review. You could also place the introduction of humanity a short time before saddle row review, and so the story of the failure of the m6 when opening this shop could be overshadowed by the discovery of interdimensional physics-monkeys. That would potentially give you an excuse to give that context in a flashback, either coco's or rarara's.So, introduce humanity right as rainbow joins the wonderbolts. A bullet is thrown from an experimental crystal empire patrolstallion into a random changeling in the snow. Now everything sucks.Otherwise you could give thorax the gat and put a cap in spike. Could also cap a random guard earlier that day and so have twilight refuse to let spike go outside alone.
>>43040359>___At any point prior to C&L handing power to twilight, they matter completely.At any point prior to the stoning, C&T&C would be free, though discord started fucking with them at the start of season 9.Forever filly would, as an overreaction, explain why Rarity saw less issue with the suggestion that she invite her sister to bang her man. While an event like that was basically inevitable, and you could change where and when it happens, there's no need. It's early s7.School starts in S8. After that, the only relevant events are Draggon dropped" and "fake it till you make it"The personal growth in dragon dropped isn't actually needed, as the underlying emotions are there either way. She would still have that same insecurity, and would still not take spike seriously as a romantic option, either before or after. While fake it till you make it is the first and last we see of rarity actually acting as an artistically empty business pony excited to push her project onto others so she can go do art, that general consept can be assumed in the absence of an episode showing it, at your convenience.Given this, you can rip the school out of the story completely without issue. You could also leave it, but that would imply cozy glow which would imply grogar which would imply discord just made chrysy stab twilight to near death and hurt flutters.Those implications are weak, but they would be there.As you've decided to age flurry a few years, your timeline should be after the canon end of the show, but obviously that episode simply did not happen in this world where equestria cannot afford a new and young monarch. Given that you've now got like 4 years of time to work with, just about any event you can imagine could have happened between s8e27 and now. That's enough time that you could totally keep the school if you wanted without it presenting an issue, just as long as Discord never does his grogar shit.But the cmc should be either adults or within a year of growing physically. Lucky you that ponies spend so many years as fillies, potentially
>>43040017No, that is fine.It's appreciated what you did.
>>43040364Also, starlight made a bunch of timelines at the end of season 5, and the suggested split occurs around s6 e7.While most of the timelines are clearly not close enough to equestria as we know it, there are options here.You could just imagine up another timeline not shown.You could say this is the original timeline, which is not quite what we follow in the show. In the show, after S5, we follow the timeline where starlight and twilight had a mostly unimportant conversation in the past and starlight surrendered. The original timeline doesn't have that. This implies the existence of the twilight sparkle from the new timeline, who we never see. That is solved by having the tree use it's vacuum-thing to rip that twilight out of her timeline and then drop her in the original timeline.The process of timeline creation also might be more granular than what we see. While twilight only sees the futures she's sent to, the time-vacuum also sucks up a bunch of air, meaning that it makes a near infinite set of exceedingly marginal differences during time travel, instead of just one. A difference that small wouldn't really require explanations for how it altered future events. Just, given enough time, things might start to play out differently. It's not generally reasonable to explain your decision making in terms of the air pressure above cloudsdale 7 months ago.However, poking time travel with a stick is a bit dangerous to narratives, so use discretion.
>>43033826Speaking of NTR, did Vinyl think up a solution to her mate sharing issue regarding Tavi ?
>>43041194Stuck with that one.Like I said, work is really a headache, now, a little less but is still a lot to do.
>>43040941I definitely intend to avoid time travel. It gets too messy too fast. You've given me a few ideas, so thank you for the effortposting. I'm probably going to end up saying the school didn't exist since I don't like it and it doesn’t seem useful. I'm not going to kill Thorax since I kinda like the guy, but he doesn't have to be a gay stag beetle. And I don't think I can reasonably have Cozy or Tirek know Chrysalis, not that I was using them anyway. They could hypothetically make appearances when I'm done with Chrysalis, but they'd be working on their own.I've implied that Chrysalis has some knowledge about Tartarus, but I think that's okay even if she hasn't been there. She's an infiltrator with a massive spy network. She should know things.Starlight... probably exists? I don't know. It would be convenient in that she's tied to the escalation with the bugs, but I haven't really used her at all. Something for me to think about.>>43038487I don't want to make her actually old, but we could do something with that.>>43037484This is one of the questions I've been trying to dodge. I don't want to make foalcon a major part of the story since it would narrow the appeal of something that's already a tiny niche, and I don't much care for it anyway. I'm okay with establishing that it happens in the Empire, and I actually intend to make that canon later on for narrative reasons, but giving Anon a filly as a toy would be troublesome. I don't want to make Sweetie an adult since I assume most of the people that like her like her as a filly, but I don't want her as a filly since we can't >rape her that way. My solution so far has been to just not talk about it. All that said, I see Flurry as being the equivalent of 5 or 6, and she would have been nearly verbal when the show ended so some time between 1 and 2. This lines up reasonably well with how long I figure Anon has been there, namely 2.5 years in the beginning and 3.5 years now. That's a bit of a recon since she wouldn't have had colic, but horses don't get that anyway. I might cheat and give her a different condition when he first arrived.Logically, Sweetie Belle should be firmly in jailbait territory given that timeline. But ponies aren't humans and don't have to develop at the same rate, so we can be flexible with it. If anybody has any suggestions for how to handle that other than continuing to dodge the question, please speak up.
>>43027935>doesn't sleep well without light bondageTime for Anon to learn to hug/spoon her in a way that she can't escape without waking up Anon. This way she is mentally restrained as waking up Anon would mean punishment.>and you’re not mentally deficientHeh.>I assure you. I love you dearlyLove? Rarity does not get butterflies in her stomach when thinking about Anon.>So it was conditional.Well obviously... if Anon suddenly started dismembering her, I doubt she would look at him the same.>I'm an illegal alien.Still not the topic I was expecting. Why does he keep deflecting away from the reason why he stays late? Rarity will see through it quickly.>They brought me here for a reason.But why did they wait this long then? If we are talking about Anon's new night job.>Because he'll start asking questionsAnd he will have even more in the future plus will think that Anon is not trustworthy if he does not tell Shining soon(ish).>They won’t. Simple.Overconfident.>Something’s wrong with this guyLet me guess, suicide attempt.>You’re not touching that part, though(Let's assume he survives.) Sooner than later it needs to be removed. Lead in the brain is probably toxic.>Damn it!Dialysis is a thing.>revived a few times after overdoseAnd who paid his medical expenses?>despite all common senseMaybe half of his body (including the brain) is already dead, thus not taking up oxygen.>suddenly, SpO2 plummetsSeems like something did take up the oxygen.>autopsy so you know what happenedThey won't find the blood cloth with that if it is too small.>definitely some brain damageYou mean more brain damage. A junkie with multiple OD and being dead for a few minutes previously has a high chance of already existing brain damage.>Saving his life.And ruining his own.>knowing you’d made a huge mistakeSo did the guy die?>I REALLY miss that robotRarity will see through this lie. Also, she probably understood about a tenth of what Anon just said.Cont.
>>43041626>upset with myself for thinking of detaining herBut he was not when he kept Rarity in the basement.>what would Luna doTalking about Luna, Anon should extort her a bit. Set up a meeting, travel to Canterlot and make sure that it is actually Luna asking to fix these ponies.>I spent a bit of time in jail because of it.So this was the jail time Shining mentioned in the previous chapter? This is not beating someone up.>Well, I suppose you did strike your friend.I will re-read this chapter. Probably. I don't remember it.>why I came here to workThis is one reason for sure.>They revoked my license.Huh. Odd choice.>Point of order, it was Anon that was in prison for a while, not Howlite.Before I read this chapter: I'm confused now. In Equestria Anon spent a day in jail or something like that as far as I recall. Or was that Rarity? I vaguely remember some scheme to portray Anon as a hero or something in the eyes of Rarity.After I read this chapter: Ok this explains Anon. And after re-reading the relevant few lines from the previous chapter, I don't know why I though Howlite is the one who spent a few months in jail.>why Anon would abandon his life on EarthMy previous assumption was boredom. While saving Flurry (I assume on earth), he noticed that surgery on ponies are uncharted territory and he wanted to be one of the first to do it and to write articles about it.Thanks for the update!
It mirrors that scene with Coco and Rarity but...Link:https://x.com/i/status/2023208444120211538
>>43034238You know when I read this I thought twilight would appear in the update, I when I got to the end I was very confused.>>43027935Honestly it makes sense given the information you have given us, I will say I did think the crime would be a lot worse than this though.
>>43034761Honestly i can’t remember maybe reddit, I remember having trouble uploading it to 4chan
>>43041586Oh yeah not actually old, just a fun play with her usual overreactions. And maybe some projection of those onto what Coco would wear underneath her dresses.>>43042007There needs to be a stocking or panty gag scene for Coco in the future.
My last bump for the night.
>>43026281You mean trying to them to hook up/dat eachother or someone else?
>>43043244With eachother but not as a first time hookup, instead she would be trying to mend the rift that kept the two former lovers apart since the NMM event. And in a /sim/ context she would push for a different type of relationship for them to try out.
>>43042040Could an edit anon in here add those greyed out mane strips she had post timeskip ?
I need the opinion of all about this one:https://ponepaste.org/11765It's gonna be porn with a plot, I need to know if the idea is good and, like the Tags, is gonna be heavy on humiliation play and rough.The others green are stopped, The one with Velvet I need to polish the scene of sex-torture and semi cucking of her husband.If I can correct some parts maybe tomorrow or this week, I can upload the full green.So thanks in advanced if you can leave a comment on this one.
>>43044054I like what the tags are promising, and the plot seems like an interesting way to bring a clash between the influential herding families and the stables.Although I dont get how all that heavy and yet consensual stuff will be brought in because of it.>To keep your daughters from competing? To play goddess over a crisis you helped create by clinging to outdated traditions?This plot could bring a good reason to showcase how courting and relationships work in those traditional herd structures. So far we've only seen how things work with the stables.
>>43044447Thank for the comment.Yeah, working to explain that part and justify the human presence...It is funny on his own way.
How Cadence plans to restrain Chrysalis when she's captured.https://derpibooru.org/images/3765614
>>43044054>The one with Velvet I need to polish the scene of sex-torture and semi cucking of her husband.Do the stables have a ranking reserved for cases like her ? A humiliating, maybe even more degrading one than the mud sow position initiates start with?
>>43041626He's deflecting because he's scared of crossing Luna. They waited because they didn't need him earlier.And legally, what he did would have been considered an act of violence. The specifics depend on where you live, of course, but broadly speaking assault and battery is the correct label. Since they were refusing treatment, none of the stuff he did after finding out would be considered medical treatment. Now he's digging around inside the guts and skull of some guy for- according to the law- no reason. And yes, you can lose your license for stuff like that.>Striking his friendThis one IS an error on my part. An earlier draft had him getting more physical with his assistant trying to get in his way.>>43045094Luckily for Chrysalis, changelings don't need to breathe. >>43042040>Panty gagSecond.
>>43045122>changelings don't need to breatheDo they still use their mouths to suck in the love/lust in the air that comes from ponies around them ?Cause it would be a fun outcome if she had get her feed directly as a cum dump to Cadence's guards because of the locked gag.
>>43044054Where's Luna in all of this ?
>>43046438The next chapter the princes appear.And receive an explanation of what is happening with the fall of births and the new troubles with the humans.
What Octavia worships every night.https://derpibooru.org/images/3761007
SPG died, again...
>>43047443They usually take longer breaks.
>>43047517AWF is the only one keeping that general alive.
>>43048050The writer of that Mayor mare green ?
Page 10 again
>>43048493Among others, yes.
>>43044754Hey AT have you ever read this one ?https://www.fimfiction.net/story/568700/the-pearl-kingdoms-legacyI dont know if it would be too much of a step up for your stories to have a cruel chastity device like that.
>>43049652Nope, but the chastity belt is a good idea.Now, thin is incomplete, work had me by the balls, and free time is a luxury right now, T_T:https://ponepaste.org/11773
>>43050264Nice prologue. Makes sense that a widowed friend would have been the one to introduce her to the place, and I guess you picked a relatable reason using work to keep him away from his wife.
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>>43050264So even Ice Pebble would see an use for the pens in this case ?
>>43051451Can you gen a gagged Zecora ?
>>43051306Nope, the Piggery is another thing, punishment for Mares that violate the code of the Stables is something normal.Like what happened to Rarity.Saying that, I finished the rest of the the green or text of Velvet:https://ponepaste.org/11773Thanks for the idea of the chastity belt
>>43051629Oh, I thought she was going to be a special case in the piggery as part of the lesson. It was still a good story, somewhat wholesome, but kinda quick on its resolution. >Thanks for the idea of the chastity beltYou're welcome. I liked the clit cap addition, it reminded me somewhat of what RapeApe did with Coco's belt.
>>43051629>>43051778Speaking of clits, did you know that there's a pocket underneath it ?https://derpibooru.org/images/3629081Maybe it could house a tiny vibrator for other belt setups in case you want to keep playing with that chastity idea.Or go with something heavier using piercings on it to hold the cap in place. It probably stings way less with punctures compared to the clit, with the downside that the cap would rub against the clit whenever the lips moved.
>>43051507I'm not the prompter, I just found this on civitai
Which one is the best setup ?https://derpibooru.org/images/3754492
>>43047851I'm surprised no one's made an edit of this yet with Rarity in a gimp suit.
>>43052729At best she had a nun edit for that scene, with her goddess even raising her hoof closer to those lips to spare her of the grovelling.
https://derpibooru.org/images/3130661What if instead of Aryanne it was a shapeshifted Chrysalis ?
We'd better not go the way of /spg/ and die.
Anyone got any latex suit edit ideas? Can be hazmat, drone, maybe even animal-themed (there is a latex pig suit idea going around, could be interesting).
>>43053591Diamond Tiara pulling a leashed, pig suited Applebloom ?https://derpibooru.org/images/1037708https://derpibooru.org/images/1037767https://derpibooru.org/images/283276Or Silver Spoon ?https://derpibooru.org/images/999160Twilight and Trixie dressed as pigs and tied to a post like in this image ?https://derpibooru.org/images/3019885Although I cant find any good vectors for that right now.
>>43053591Vinyl rewarding her gimp.https://derpibooru.org/images/3587552
>>43053591Seahorse suit
>>43053940Yes pls.
>>43053591Ember sealed in a changeling breeding designated outfit after a forced treaty with chrysalis, with a chastity belt keeping her reserved for future eggings, https://derpibooru.org/images/3749206
>>43053591Encase the heat stricken filly.
>>43053591https://derpibooru.org/images/2317938Nun dressed Ember with a blind mask from pic related getting pounded by her goddess and conqueror.
>>43053591Rainbow Dash https://derpibooru.org/images/3724959?q=rainbow+dash%2C+pony%2C+vectorbegging Rarity https://derpibooru.org/images/3669753?q=rarity%2C+pony%2C+vector to let her out of her rather tight new stealth suit which covers her wings and leaves her gagged in a hood similar to the storm shadow costume's mask https://derpibooru.org/images/3733853?q=rainbow+dash%2C+pony%2C+vector
>>43053591Can you edit this kind of drawing with a pig outfit ?https://derpibooru.org/images/2709989
>>43055367Oops, I forgot I had that Fluttershy one embedded. Consider it an option too.
>>43052878Yeah but the rubber nuns aren't the same, you know?
>>43053591Hazmat dressed Dash doing some shaky pushups with a crop holding Spitfire sitting on her back.
I know Manic will like this one.https://twibooru.org/3713173
>>43053591Scootaloo inside a Dashy suit. Maybe as part of an self-obsessed Rainbow Dash wanting 'herself' as a pet or bodypillow.
>>43055016What if she was also wearing locked pointy shoes ?
>>43056755... I'll allow it
https://derpibooru.org/images/2776735Does she come with any games ?
>>43054520Got any gagged Moondancer images ?
Good night, working on the greens and dealing with work. Passing of that, passing a small part of one Green with Fluttershy:Be Fluttershy.The door to Sugarcube Corner closes softly behind me with a gentle jingle. Rarity lingers for a moment on the threshold, cradling her tiny filly against her chest. The little one—barely a year old—has her mother’s pristine white coat and a shock of deep purple mane already curling at the tips. Rarity’s eyes are tired but luminous, the way only a new mother’s can be. She smiles at me—small, grateful, a little sheepish.
“Thank you again, darling,” she murmurs. “I never thought… well. I never thought I’d understand why this place exists. But I do now.”I nod once, wings shifting uncomfortably against my sides. “It’s all right,” I whisper. “You’re happy. That’s what matters.”She leans in and presses her cheek to mine for a heartbeat. The filly coos softly between us. Then Rarity turns and trots away toward the train station, humming a lullaby under her breath.I watch her go until she disappears around the corner.Then I let out a long, slow breath.Twilight still looks at me sometimes like I’ve betrayed something sacred. Applejack avoids the subject entirely. Pinkie throws parties and pretends nothing’s changed.
Rainbow Dash… Rainbow just glares at any stallion who lingers too long near the entrance.They don’t understand.They don’t have to.I turn toward home.The path winds through quiet streets. Ponyville is peaceful tonight—lamps glowing in windows, foals already asleep, the faint scent of night-blooming jasmine drifting on the breeze.My wings ache from carrying supplies earlier. My hooves feel heavy.But the thought of what waits at home lightens them.My twins are two now. My filly already tries to hover—tiny wings buzzing furiously, lifting her an inch off the ground before she tumbles into giggles. My colt watches her with wide eyes, then flaps once and lands on his father’s head like it’s a perch.I can still hear his delighted squeal from this morning when he thought he’d fall from the ceiling beam. My husband—my human—had caught him midair, heart in his throat, only for the little traitor to laugh and nuzzle into his neck.
>>43057478Finally there's general view of the mane 6 of this.>Pinkie throws parties and pretends nothing’s changed.What is she hiding ?
>>43056755>ballet_boots_by_s410.pngThat's fucking based, but source? It's not on any boorusI'm always seething when fetish artists have high quality ideas and then just never post them because "the art isn't good enough" when even the rough sketch has more originality and value than dozens of random samey bondage pics uploaded every day
>>43057746Its something he sketched and posted in a private chat when that idea got brought up. It was mostly to come up with a lock that would work on those types of shoes.https://derpibooru.org/images/1440696
>>43053591This would look amazing with a gimp edit.
Any stories where an enslaved Celestia is forced to breed with a normal horse ?
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>>43058532>>43058537Hot. Looks comfy if made to measure.These days I unironically find autistic bondage contraptions more arousing than just pretty well rendered tied up ponies. The more detail the more it fires up the imagination and the hotter it is.
>>43058562It would be even better with some shaped on lifeless eyes and mouth, to really go for the imposing metal horse look.
>>43058593>bondage artist I've been seeing post sketches once every 10 years on a booru actually has a treasure trove of secret concept artI'm gonna cum>It would be even better with some shaped on lifeless eyes and mouth, to really go for the imposing metal horse look.Both are good, I also like the idea of just completely featureless metal locking away the pony inside with no hint of life. I do find flat faceless looks aesthetic in general though, be it metal, latex or anything like that.Being locked in a princess-themed metal shell would also be cool though especially if the princesses are swapped
>>43058604Its not a guarded trove, just some things he sketched along the talk.He also sketched a couple of concepts for gryphons too, including a funny idea for a tail plug.https://files.catbox.moe/y2d8n1.pnghttps://files.catbox.moe/ndzywi.pnghttps://files.catbox.moe/yfj3qw.pnghttps://files.catbox.moe/fyu6nq.png>spoilerThey would have to color the mane buns in that case.
>>43058642Lmao that's pretty cool. I can imagine how humiliating it must be (on top of messing with its balance).
>>43058657They get to pick the size the tail bundle before having it sealed in the dildo cover. The bigger the length of the bundle the less painful it is for the squeezed tail, but it comes with a bigger plug size.Depending on how stuck the plug gets, it can work as a nice bondage hook.>messing with its balanceBecause of the tail? I guess they would have to rely more on the painful shoes for balance, and spread their legs more too I guess.
>>43058732>Because of the tail?Yeah, I'd imagine they use it for balance. I know cats do, perhaps lions less so due to the difference in body mass, but since gryphons are half-bird maybe they're not that heavy.>rely more on the shoesOh even better, yeah. I can imagine a gryphon wearing all that mis-stepping, instinctively trying to lash out with its tail to help right itself, and only tugging on its plug while continuing to lose balance.Any more secret mare tech?
>>43058739>more secret mare tech?https://files.catbox.moe/h4aoew.pngA forced deepthroat muzzle, with a spring loaded spool that pulls the mare back to the hilt case she tries taking the dildo out.It replicates what this chrysalis piece was trying do >>43052915 but with a more coherent setup.
>>43058739>>43058760Wait wrong link, meant this onehttps://derpibooru.org/images/3765614
Hey, good afternoon.One small doubt, a way to rebreak a Mare, could it be to return her flesh to a virgin time, like a small spell to restore her first time?
>>43058760>>43058766Oh that's nice. I like the detachable hook, looks like something that'd just be part of the daily attire for a mare and when needed she can just get clipped on to a dildo and have it forced in.
>>43058768Maybe if it came with an extra dose of sensitivity, or perceived sensitivity. The kind that would make her barely handle any small insertion, and only the strong push from a stallion could help her body win over that fear again.
>>43058657You know those plugs that come with a ring on their base ? You could tie a pony's tail to it.
>>43057478Why is Twilight mad?
>>43053591Two gas masked drones enjoying a moment.
It's been almost two weeks since Rapeape's last update.
>>43060207Wait two or four more before complaining!
Extremely self obsessed Rainbow Dash has a weird idea about a certain pony not unlike herself... https://ponepaste.org/11780
>>43059491Twilight believes on love between a Mare and Stallion.She doesn't see human males as a romantic partner. She had a little bias thanks to her teacher.
>>43060798Interesting idea.
Last bump for tonight.
https://derpibooru.org/images/2052315
>>43058773"Magic messes with humans' things."Ponies are magical creatures and a lot of things they do result in magic being emitted. Unicorns' using magic, pegasi flying or just emotion-rich group activities can produce fields strong enough to fry a TV, for example. That's why ponies are generally not permitted to use magic, fly or form groups of more than 2 or 3 ponies within human cities.But even a single pony humming a melody or a quietly chit-chatting couple can produce a magic field strong enough to interfere with some sensitive electronics.That's why ponies are not allowed to be near some facilities (human hospitals, most commonly) or on public transport.However, reducing sensory stimulation and preventing interaction of ponies between each other reduced magic output significantly. If there is a need for a pony to visit a region with restriction on magic, that pony must be equipped with magic suppressing gear."
>>43062207That's one sexy Luna.
>>43063315Ooo, I like that
https://lyrabooru.org/post/view/5564https://lyrabooru.org/post/view/5000
>>43060840But I thought that Celestia enjoyed the humans.
>>43064264Yep, but doesn't want her star pupil in a relationship with a human.She want her to push the herd role. But the popularity of the Stables are complicating this.And Celestia, don't like this solution, but is the one that's working at the moment.
>>43063919At least link the one with the fishnets and leash
>>43065792Would you let yourself dominated by Miss Rainbow Dash?
>>43065931No. I would bend that naughty filly over the bed and whip her bare little bottom until it's redder than a raspberry. Bad girl.
>>43065931She wants you to use that whip.
>>43066440You can whip yourself too.
>>43064436So you're saying that I might not have a chance. Darn
>>43019704>>43066119https://derpibooru.org/images/777795Would Rarity be devious enough to do this to a farmer pony's hooves ?
>>43067131God I love that comic and that's kinda why I fell in love with Ponies in gimp suits. The idea of Twilight's mind getting so fried by pleasure she just becomes a living toy stripped of everything but her tail and cutie mark revealing who she is, that's hawt
>>43067346>she just becomes a living toy stripped of everything but her tail and cutie mark revealingI like imagining that being a legal sentencing done in Equestria. Magically sealed in an outfit, and a monochrome aura cast on the condemned as well.
>>43067690Wrong image.
Trying my hand at latex edits. I dunno if I did good or not. How’d I do?
>>43067837The shading looks good, and the edit seems to match what a shiny outfit would have looked like in that art style.
Delivering page 10 spanking.
>>43067346What about a reverse situation, where a mare is always put through a degrading and pleasure induced experience whenever she's let out of the suit, with the anonymity and impersonal treatment that comes with the outfit being her only escape from the shame that comes after the ordeal ?
>>43053591Give her socks ?
>>43068666Nah
>>43068202Harder!
>>43066892Does anyone know of any other hoof worshipping image with these two ? Its oddly hard to find anything with that particular act considering there's so much bdsm princest art out there.
>>43053591You won't do shit.
https://tantabus.ai/images/56181Which character would you curse with a sizequeen affliction ?
If only slop anon were here.
Anything coming up this weekend ?
>>43061886Love the colored collar ideas.
>>43056387Here you go>>43070307Not a lot of time lately, can't be helped
>>43056387Does she make her sleep in a bird cage ?>>43071640Nice
>>43058642Now this is some very good ideas.
>>43072525Something for Gilda to wear in your story?
>>43072623For sure, nothing says subjugated former leader like having their own anatomy used against them in utter humiluation displays like that. Couple that with a wing binder and those talon/paw covers and she would wabble everywhere drunkenly unable to fully right herself.Im picturing a leash and tail collar applied to the length of tail that connects to her base and just the bit that sticks out before going inside herself.Welp I better get to writing.
>>43053591Gilda and Greta dressed in pony suits >>43058642, with their tail hoops intertwined, or maybe tied together with a red ribbon like a forced valentines setup, trying hard to pull away from eachother.Or Pinkie happily dragging both of the suited gryphons back to Ponyville using a leash attached to those hoops.
>>43072723That tail ring could have so many bondage uses. Maybe something stiff for her neck would be warranted as well, to keep her beak from reaching the tail ?