Human becomes pony. How, why and what happens next are all up to you. New stories and art welcome!Any type of transformation into ponies, gryphons, changelings, dragons, kirin, etc., whether OC or canonical, & Anonponies of all shapes and sizes.Want to be the little pony? This is the thread for you.Previously on PTFG:https://ponepaste.org/11836 - Trixie's Formerly Human Assistant by Prince_Polaris - New & Complete!https://ponepaste.org/11832 - In Too Deep by BlueForce - New!https://ponepaste.org/11708 - King Mahrek's Portal by Mills Tamias - Complete!https://ponepaste.org/11789 - I Am Become Moon by Prince_Polarishttps://ponepaste.org/11778 - Twily's legally distinct shining armor sex slave by Prince_Polaris - Complete!https://ponepaste.org/11769 - Crepuscule by Meslamhttps://ponepaste.org/11545 - Character Development by Hotdog Water - Complete!https://ponepaste.org/11764 - Umie no more by Prince_Polaris - Complete!https://ponepaste.org/11716 - Found Moony Green by Prince_Polaris - Complete!https://ponepaste.org/11719 - Pitch and Nonny by Prince_Polaris - Complete!https://ponepaste.org/11722 - gay ass sun/moon anons by Prince_Polaris - Complete!https://ponepaste.org/9707 - Anu by Meslamhttps://ponepaste.org/1495 - The Pon-E journal by Gnishahttps://ponepaste.org/10964 - Strangers to the Plain by OrwellRedenbacherhttps://ponepaste.org/11376 - Anon Horse by PlatterCutter - Complete!https://ponepaste.org/11345 - Mending Morph Victim: Thundering Drizzle by PlatterCutter - Complete!https://ponepaste.org/11239 - I wish I were Anonstallion and had a cute autistic family by Patch - Complete!https://ponepaste.org/11227 - Daybreaker & Anon by wingedanon - Complete!https://ponepaste.org/11309 - An Anonpony Romance by Pennamehttps://ponepaste.org/11288 - Starlight's scary small sister by PlatterCutterhttps://ponepaste.org/11300 - A Compilation of Mama Mare Stories by Mills_Tamias - Complete!https://ponepaste.org/11277 - Always Pay Your Pon-E Dealer by Mills_Tamias - Complete!https://docs.google.com/document/d/13z-VCs2AFogQRrOeBKv4akY1DwSq3vCXtHiInuZFj8o/edit - kasi pona by Atomic Glow - Complete!https://ponepaste.org/11260 - Silver Platter's self reflectionhttps://ponepaste.org/11232 - Rarity's Maidhttps://ponepaste.org/11238 - Silver Platter in Canterlothttps://ponepaste.org/11228 - Anonfilly in kinderquestria - Complete!https://ponepaste.org/11696 - Anonfilly, Harmony-less by YuriFanatichttps://ponepaste.org/11627 - Anonfilly Gets Raped by Snakes by YuriFanatichttps://ponepaste.org/11629 - Anonfilly x Spike by YuriFanatichttps://ponepaste.org/11631 - Anonfilly the Hive's Perfect Flower by YuriFanaticArchive of over 700 stories, as well as additional links and materials:https://pone.tfPast threads index:https://pone.tf/threadsUnrated TF image dump thread:http://nsfw.pone.tf/Chat:https://discord.gg/tfAjenNRecommended stories for new readers:https://ponepaste.org/7278Previous Thread:>>43116564
>Read a book>Finally become a pretty mareWhat do?
>>43183511what the DD doin
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0W6IkGm3A5c
>>43182925Have some faith in romance>>43183107Our hopeless romantic mare would love this >>43183709Well, being in love is usually a consequence of being horny in the first place so, we all have to start somewhere >You leap at the opportunity to get cozy with the big stallion>His wing draws you in tight as you finally start to get a whiff of his gentle stallion scent>You lay your head against his chestplate>Nimbus turns pink with blush>He was worried about pushing the boundaries or being too aggressive of a flirt>As you lay in his embrace, his thoughts ease as he simply enjoys the pleasant night>Little foals run in terror with Pinkie leading the way, screaming >Apparently Nightmare Moon has stepped up her game this year to make this the most memorable nightmare night ever.>You can't help but chuckle"Aren't the foals just the most adorable things ever?">You dreamily ask holding the stallion's hoof>His heart melts thinking about having foals>He's wanted a little colt all his life to call his own"They are">He glups and holds you tighter building up the courage to ask"Do you want foals Nonni? Sometimes i wonder if life would ever be complete without them">Nimbus dreamily asks fantasizing about the day he can call himself a father>Your blood boils with lust>Just the thought of him gushing his seed into your womb makes you tremble and clench your teeth>You long to rip his armor right off and run your hooves up and down his body>Your mare bits ache desperately craving him>Your voice quivers"Maybe a few?">You shyly answer not wanting to sound as desperate for cock as you really are>Nimbus dreamily rests his chin on your head putting his hoof around you in embrace >You try to keep your trembling breath under control but you can't take it anymore >You must have his foals, right here right now>You squirm in his embrace positioning yourself for a kiss>You both take a long look into each other's eyes>The gentle stare of mutual adoration >You close your eyes presenting your lips>Nimbus's heart throbs in sync with something a bit more private under his armor >He knows he wants you but is this all moving too fast?>He doesn't care, this is true love>He leans in perking his lips leaning in"NIMBUS! We're heading out!">The other guard pony yells out shattering the moment>You both look each other in the eye>Nimbus looks away with disappointment >Who was he kidding, how was he supposed to maintain a relationship with a mare all the way in Ponyville if he's in canterlot >He settles for a quick kiss on the cheek"You're a wonderful mare Miss Nonni, i hope our paths cross once more">Your anger nearly flashes over in horny rage>You want to scream 'give me that fat cock right now!' but you hold his hooves tight as he gets up to leave"Where can i see you again?">You ask on the verge of tears>Nimbus perks up with joy"Im always at Canterlot Castle, just ask for me and I'll be by your side"
>>43184251Look Ma! My mare is the /ptfg/ op!
>>43184329>"NIMBUS!"I read this in Goku's voice
>>43184730What would Anonlicorn be the princess of, if anything?
>>43183511haven't been able to find a screenshot of it again, but i recall in the episode where the CMC wish to be older and they're at a fair, there was a pink jackalope plush in one of the stalls that'd make for a fun and cute TF if you're willing to do those. (i would screenshot it myself but I don't have the episode on hand anymore)
>>43185001Even playing back portions of this episode with the sound muted makes me hate it. Such a wasted concept.*Anyways*, I keep around episodes I downloaded for any reason, and had this one on the drive.I presume the one hanging third from the left is the plushie you're talking about?(There's also a blue one on the far right.)
>>43185083i forgot about the mint colored one that one is also adorable and i wish i had these for real but yes, that's the exact plushie i was thinking bout
>>43184268I hope it has a romantic sequel.
>>43184329cute stallion would make a good dad
>>43184271
>>43184329>You hold his hooves till they slip from your grasp"I will, I'll come see you soon">You tearfully smile >Fuck! This was my chance to get laid!>You tell yourself as you watch him get hooked up to the chariot>He blows you a kiss before the chariot lifts away>Your heart shatters>An absolute gentlecolt and he slipped right out of your hooves>Your aching marebits quiver as your legs squeeze together >You gasp with ecstasy simply imagining being in his hooves once more>Your aching throbbing bits are too much to handle as you bite your lips>Your hoof hovers over your mare bits contemplating just giving yourself a rub>You can't escape the thought of him>The shining armor dropping away to reveal his handsome stallion body>Him putting his weight on you, gently crushing you under him>'it's not gay if you're making foals' you tell yourself >A quiet moan of pleasure escapes "Hey Nonni! How was your first Nightmare Night?">Twilight asks still dressed to the hilt in her star swirl the bearded costume >Your wipe your messy hoof on the grass stammering for words>Damn fucking purple, i just needed a moment "Uh, it was quiet, i just uh, talked with a friend i made">You explain leaving out the critical details"Aw, that's wonderful Nonni! im so glad you're finally coming out of your shell">A blush comes across your face thinking of him once more"So, Twilight. When are you going to canterlot again?"
>>43185612>You sit on the train to canterlot contemplating your feelings for the handsome batpony>Twilight can hardly contain her excitement as she rambles about the culture in canterlot, the things to do, the libraries...all the libraries she wants you to go to>It's all background noise to you.>all you want to do is see Midnight Nimbus atleast one more time>Twilight gives you a tight hug snapping you from your daydream"So where do you want to go first? Maybe you'll be hungry after this train ride, maybe we can grab something to eat!">You sigh with anticipation"I could choke on a juicy sausage right now~">Twilight recoils with confusion wondering if that was a human way of consuming food "Ok, we will probably have to try some pony food while we're in canterlot. Maybe we can find something you like more than 'chicken nuggies'. Some of the best chefs in the entire world are in canterlot">You continue trying to ignore her to little effect"Twilight, i told you, im interested in seeing the castle. Not much else">You explain, keeping the details of your mission a closely guarded secret >Twilight wants to argue the importance of seeing the sights, however she does concede considering how difficult it was to simply make you go outsdt"Actually, that's fine Nonni. I should have known your first time out would be a big change. Im proud of you for coming out of your shell">You finally see it, the castle after an.agonizing train ride listening to Twilight >Your true love is just around the corner
>>43185750Nice
I'm currently phoneposting so it's hard to reply my last part of the story, so apologies in advance.>You hold the tape in your hooves>The others’ stares felt like daggers piercing you>They were demanding you to play the tape>With a nervous flutter in your chest, you finally placed the tape into the van’s stereo*Click*>You raised the volume… and then you immediately pressed eject“No.”>”Play it”, said Sunburst coldly>But you didn’t answer>You just stayed, hyperventilating>Because you recognized the voice you heard on the lone second of the tape that had just played>Sunburst didn’t order you to play the tape again… but his horn started to glow>Starlight and Trixie quickly realised you were on the verge of a panic attack>You notice the stereo’s volume knob starts glowing with a light yellow aura, as it starts moving on its own to the right, raising the volume even more>Clearly he wants everyone to hear the tape as clearly as possible>But then, just before Sunburst actually plays the tape against my will, the glow stops>”That’s enough”>Starlight was standing right in front of Sunburst>While you couldn’t see her expression from the driver’s seat, her severe tone of voice gave you more than a hint>Sunburst looked defiant… Clearly not something you’d see on the actual cartoon>You try to focus on the grass outside, hoping to avoid the confrontation. However, you quickly accept that you wouldn't be able to avoid listening to the tape>”Okay, that’s it. Sunburst, I’m going to ask you something, and I want you to answer yes or no”, said Starlight firmly>”Did Kai do anything illegal?”>A heavy, silent pause followed>”Just drop the act, Sunburst! Stop being a jackass to Kai… I mean, Fluffy Swamp!... I mean, Kai!”, Trixie screamed at the top of her lungs“Sod it”>You're going to face the music>You clumsily reinsert the tape into the stereo, feeling as if your chest weighed a ton>And then, you get off the van while the interrogation tape starts playing for good>You stepped out of the van and sat down on the grass to listen to the tape, turning your back on the other three ponies>”I… I already told you… I don't know how I came here”>That was a voice you were dying to hear again, albeit not in this context>”When did you arrive in Canterlot?”, a male voice asked>In Canterlot>They have you in bloody Canterlot>The interrogator is probably a Royal Guard >”I… I don't know. I lost my watch and everything I had when I showed up here… There, it must have been like… two or three days”
>>43186222>Each word felt like a sword in your body>”You've been missing for an entire year and it turns out you were here all this time”, you thought >You could hear the sorrow in your friend's voice>Because there was no doubt it was him>”You weren't supposed to be there”, the Royal Guard accused>”I don't know how I showed up there!”>You could hear the desperation in your friend's voice>”I was working and then I… I was here, and I was a horse”>”What were you before?”, the Guard asked almost in a demeaning manner>”A… A human?”>Silence >No more voices came from the tape>And that's when you started to cry>”K-Kai?”>You turned over and find Trixie clearly worried about you>She softly touches your back with her hoof, trying to bring some comfort “That's… my friend Mark”, you say with difficulty in-between your crying>Trixie doesn't question you, she just tried to give you a hug>You feel unable to thank her, but for a moment you felt loved and understood by someone>Starlight steps in and questions you, trying to sound as considerate as possible>”Kai… Where did you come from?”>You wipe your tears with your right hoof“There's no point in telling you… You'll never believe me”>You just want to go home
>>43186812Goated
>>43187310Does anyone know whether Stormfronts has started/will soon start publishing, or whether this art is a literary orphan?
>>43184333Yes!Please update your ponepaste.
>>43187433Just updated the Mahrek paste
https://ponepaste.org/11872
>>43184737a mystery for the ages>>43184730I don't usually get aroused by cartoon mares, but this one's a genuine unf. now I want more anonicorn mare. horse or canterslut are equally good.
>>43188124Me AF if i became a pony
>>43188191i think id do fineim not vegan or anything but i just dont feel the urge to eat meattasty tho
>>43188195I think if i can have cheese and eggs I'll be ok but not having a pastrami burger every so often or a meatball sandwich, it'll be a painful adjustment
>You stand stock still, at attention, hooves planted firmly on the jet-black floor>Honed to a fine point, your muscles are locked in place; not a twitch or quiver to be seen>You learned long ago that a strong body makes for a strong mind, and you have plenty of strength to spare>Years of practice, decades of planning, and as far as you're concerned, centuries in the waiting, have led to this moment>Your eyes slowly scan the room, already observing escape routes, defensive positions, and objects that could be used as a distraction or improvised weapon>Not that fleeing was on your mind, of course, it was simply something so deeply ingrained in you that it was practically automatic>Ahead of you, an ornate mahogany desk rests in the centre of the room; the wood so dark it almost seems to draw light into it>It's not of this place; no doubt a spoil of war that your Queen won in glorious conquest>You suppress a shiver at the thought of her in battle>She was equal parts glorious and terrifying; the most beautiful being you could imagine>If she asked you to throw yourself from the tallest spire in the hive you would comply without a thought>In fact, you had witnessed her do just that to a cadet that had displeased her>An almost imperceptible smirk passes over your face at the thought>Vrisk... You had known him well, and considered him a firm and dependable comrade>But he had been weak, and soft; unworthy of your Queen's love>She had put an end to him for the good of the hive, and you were made stronger for it>Your ears perk up as a small, repetitive sound interrupts the heavy silence of the chamber
>>43188555>Clip, clop, clip, clop...>It's coming from behind you, through the doorway and down the corridor>Your heart swells>Could it really be Her, in the flesh?>You listen carefully as the sound draws closer, and can't help but feel a measure of disappointment>No, the hooffalls are too heavy, and the gait is off-kilter due to a limp in the right-hind leg...>It's a gait you're all-too-familiar with>Commander Kryssik brushes past you without a word, striding behind the desk and turning to face you>You stare straight ahead as his eyes bore into you with barely-contained hatred>The silence draws out as you fight to contain the smug grin that seems determined to slither onto your face>Kryssik knew as well as you that it was only a matter of time before you killed him and took his place>In the meantime, however, he was your superior and as such you owed him your respect... At least when he was within earshot>Kryssik had always been a rotten bastard, but he had taken special pleasure in tormenting you from the moment you had hatched>Maybe it was jealousy, or maybe he had simply recognised the threat when it had appeared>Either way, until the day came that you felt his lifeblood run from his wretched throat, he seemed determined to make your life a living hell>And unfortunately, protocol demanded that you tolerate it>He clears his throat, finally breaking the silence that permeated the room"Our Queen has a mission for you, whelp, so listen closely.">The urge to smile grows stronger>Oh, how it must sting for him to deliver such news to his least-favourite pupil (and, no doubt, soon-to-be replacement)"You will be infiltrating Ponyville. You are to engage the locals, surveil the town, and provide reconnaissance in preparation for an invasion."Also nice trips, me
>>43188561>Your head buzzes with excitement>You had heard rumours that the hive was preparing for war; had seen the signs>Your first true infiltration mission, and you were the tip of the spear?>You were well aware that you were destined for greatness, but the reality of it being so near... It was almost dizzying>The commander looks at you disdainfully"I made sure the Queen was aware of your... Inexperience, Nyxis, but she would accept no-one else.">The corner of your mouth quirks ever-so-slightly upward"I have no doubt that our Queen knows what is best, sir.">You drawl>Kryssik's eyes narrow"Of course she does, whelp, but you are impossible to underestimate.">He growls"You have your orders. Your troop sergeant has the mission dossier. You leave tonight. Now get out of my sight.">You nod, salute crisply, turn sharply on your heels and walk briskly out of the room, savouring the fury on his face at your overly-genuine show of 'respect'>As you stalk the empty corridor, making your way towards your barracks, that smile finally finds its way across your face>A plan is beginning to form in your mind, and by the time you arrive at the barracks you're already certain you know what the future holds>In a few weeks, this mission would be over. You will return to the hive triumphant>And then you'll kill Commander Kryssik, take his place, and win your Queen's undying favour***
>>43188568>Branches crackle as you push through the thick brush, the crisp smell of spring almost overwhelming to your highly-developed sense of smell>Fighting your way through this damnable forest had taken most of the day, but you were pretty confident it would lead you to the outskirts of Ponyville>Obviously you could just fly over this accursed place, but the form you were wearing belonged to a unicorn by the name of Lumen Vale>Unicorns, as it happens, don't have wings, and Protocol Three was clear that under no circumstances were you to break your cover>It had been drilled into you over and over again>It is almost impossible to definitively determine if one is being observed, and as such, one must always assume they are under observation>If your facade never falters, there is little chance of the enemy detecting your true nature>Leave nothing to chance, and victory is sure>Commander Kryssik's words echo in your head, his voice haughty and self-assured>Excited as you are for your first real mission, you can't help but dread the task ahead>Infiltration and subterfuge were second-nature to you, but the cheerful friendliness of these ponies was sure to be grating>A wayward branch slaps you across the face, further dampening your mood>The sooner this was over with, the better>With the completion of this mission, you could focus on what really mattered: killing Kyrissik, and fulfilling your destiny>A soft noise from ahead of you disrupts your train of thought; somewhere between a sigh and a gasp>You halt, your ears snapping forward and straining to make out the sound>But all that greets you is the din of birds chirping and wind through the trees>It's nauseating, frankly>You step forward, careful to avoid the branches that litter your path>Creeping through the undergrowth, you slowly poke your head through a bush and find that the forest opens up into a clearing, the sunlight filtering through the branches to illuminate a pony, presumably one of the locals
>>43188572>It's a small white Pegasus with an auburn mane>She's facing away from you, her front half low to the ground and her hindquarters pressed up into the air as she seems focused on something on the ground in front of her; something that you can't quite see>Your eyes dart around the clearing, scanning for some kind of guard or ambush, but the clearing seems clear>You glance back at the pony, greeted only by her rear end as she seems locked-on to whatever it is that's got her attention so raptly>You roll your eyes>The dossier had made it clear that the ponies of Equestria were quite tactically inept, but this was just embarrassing>A lone mare, out in the woods, with no guards, completely unaware of her surroundings>And you hadn't exactly been quiet up until this point... She was lucky you were only here on reconnaissance, or she would already be dead>You step out of the brush, clearing your throat, and stifle your amusement as she leaps several feet into the air with a short, high-pitched scream>She whirls around, her pale wings flared and big blue eyes wide>You try to look as unthreatening as possible, and an apologetic look passes across your face>You even add a little bit of surprise, although frankly you doubt it was necessary>This mare is probably as gullible as she is foolish"Oh, I'm sorry! I didn't mean to startle you.">You say, your voice venomously saccharine>She stares at you for a moment, and you can see her emotions pass through her as she experiences them in order>Surprise, fear, then doubt, and then acceptance as her body relaxes slightly>You try to suppress your distaste; it's like these ponies experience things in slow-motion>She takes a deep, shaky breath, and then speaks up"Sorry... Sorry. You spooked me.">She laughs nervously
>>43188580>You rub the back of your head with your hoof apologetically"My mistake.">You perk your ears forward, feigning interest"What was it that had you so preoccupied?">She glances over toward the forest floor distractedly"Oh, um... Just a flower.">A flower? Really? By the Queen this was going to be exhausting>You cast your eyes down to where she had been looking a moment ago>A small purple flower grows out from a patch of grass, the centre slowly shifting from purple to gold at the stamen>You try to sell your interest in as enthusiastic a manner as you can muster"Right... Well, it IS a very pretty flower.">She shrugs, obviously embarrassed"You don't have to pretend, I know it's not to everypony's taste. I just happen to love flowers.">You try to swallow your disgust"Well, I can't pretend that it's my forte, but I can appreciate a pretty flower as much as the next pony. I'm Lumen Vale, by the way.">You offer her a hoof, which she regards for a moment before hesitantly bumping with her own"I'm Lily... Lily White. It's nice to meet you.">You nod, feigning a smile expertly"Likewise, Lily. Hey, would you mind helping me find my way to Ponyville? I'm a bit turned around, and I would really appreciate it.">She nods sincerely, her bright eyes lingering on you warmly; she doesn't doubt your intentions for a second"Oh, yes, of course! It's right this way.">She turns and starts walking, gesturing for you to follow
>>43188586>You step in, trailing behind her, trying to suppress your smugness>This was going to be a breeze>The two of you walk in silence for a few moments, and you sneak a glance at her while she leads the way>She seems quite at ease in these woods, despite the inherent danger of the wilderness>She must be quite familiar with the area... She might be a good source of information>After a moment you speak up"So, Lily, do you always wander these woods alone?">She looks back at you, raising an eyebrow>You shrug"Don't you worry about being attacked by a bear, or something?">She turns away again, but you see the corner of her mouth quirk up slightly"Not really. I feel more at home in these woods than in Ponyville, honestly. Like I said, I like flowers.""Right... And if you get into trouble?">Lily flares her wings out and waggles them slightly"Take a wild guess what these are for.">She glances back at you again, her eyes glittering mischievously"I'm afraid if a bear shows up you're on your own, Lumen.">You stare at her silently, surprised and somewhat impressed by her callous sense of self-preservation>Obviously that was second-nature to you, but you hadn't expected it from one of these ponies>Suddenly she bursts out laughing"I'm only kidding! You should see your face. There aren't many bears in this part of the forest, and besides, they're actually not bad once you get to know them. There's this one pony that lives on the edge of town who knows them all by name.">You raise an eyebrow; is she serious?>Lily laughs again at your expression"You're not from around here, are you?">It's your turn to laugh, although it's borne more of nervousness than genuine mirth"Uh... No. I'm new to Ponyville, actually."
>>43188590>She smiles again and turns away"Well, it's not far now.">Sure enough, the two of you round a bend in the path and the forest opens up, revealing a quaint village sprawled out in front of you>Thick, fluffy clouds drift lazily overhead, casting meandering shadows across the village as ponies walk to and fro, laughing and enjoying the sunshine>In the distance, a range of colossal snow-capped mountains towers beyond sight, the peaks obscured by the clouds>Your eyes scan the town, already observing a lack of walls or defensive fortifications>There are also a distressing lack of sightlines between buildings and along roads>In the hive, everything had been perfectly ordered; thoroughfares were lined up perfectly, drill halls, barracks, and infirmaries were placed efficiently and in the most conveniently accessible places, and everything was fortified>Here, it was as though these ponies had just slapped buildings wherever they felt like it; almost none of the roads were straight or lined up, and the buildings often weren't even level with each other>Lily turns to you, after gazing fondly at the village for a moment"Welcome to Ponyville, Lumen.">You nod absently, still somewhat shocked at this disaster of a town>She giggles at your expression, the sound snapping you out of your reverie>You glance over at her, not quite able to recognise the curious look on her face"Well, thank you for showing me the way, Lily. If there's anything I can do to repay you, just let me know.">You lie>She looks away for a moment, her expression faltering, before looking back at you again"You're very welcome, Lumen.">She smiles shyly"Anything to help a friend.">Something shifts when she says that>Your head throbs as those words seem to reverberate in your skull>Suddenly you feel dizzy, like the ground is being pulled out from under your hooves>Anything to help a friend-***
>>43188598>She smiles at you, and drops some coins into your -HAND- hoof>Her presence is warm and comforting>A smile graces your face, bubbling to the surface without your consent>You open your mouth and say something to her, but it's like you're speaking underwater>You drop the change into a jar on the counter>The coins fall as though they're passing through molasses >She rolls her eyes, and leans over the counter towards you>Her green eyes seem to draw you in, and you lean in to meet her>Your lips touch, and as you pull away she speaks, and this time you understand"Thanks, love.">An unfamiliar warmth blooms in your chest>What?>Your mouth quirks up in a mischievous grin"Anything to help a friend.">She beams at you, but something is wrong>Her expression twists into a mask of concern"Are you okay?">You blink, confused, and Lily's white-furred face greets you, a little too close to be comfortable"Lumen, hello?"
>>43188607>You shake your head, and stand up, staggering away from her>When did you end up on the ground?"Y-yeah... I'm good.">Lily continues watching you, clearly concerned"You just collapsed, and now you look like you've seen a ghost.">You take a deep breath, composing yourself, and force a smile>It's not as convincing as it should be"I'm fine, seriously. I think I've just been out in the woods too long, and need some water.">The truth was you were pretty shaken; a feeling that was all but foreign to you>Thankfully lying came to you about as easily as breathing>Lily nods slowly"Are you sure you don't want me to walk you into town?">You resist the urge to roll your eyes"No, really, thank you, but no. I can manage.">She clearly doesn't buy it, but seems to accept your decision"Okay... Well, I'm going to go back and sketch that flower. I'll be in town later if you need anything!">You nod, turning to walk towards Ponyville"Mhmm. Catch you later, Lily.">You say, with absolutely no intention of following up>You can feel her eyes on you as you walk away
>>43188612>Eyeballing the distance to town, you figure it will only take a few minutes to get there>But as you walk, it's clear you underestimated the size of Ponyville>The walk gives you time to think, and your thoughts inevitably come to dwell on whatever it was that just happened>What was that? You had never experienced anything like that before>Broken, confused images still flitted through your mind, feelings you didn't recognise...>You try to push the thoughts away, more disturbed by the episode than you'd like to admit>But a feeling of deep unease lingers in the back of your mind; this sense of wrongness that you just can't seem to shake>You try to distract yourself by going over the mission parameters again>The first step was to integrate into the town, and blend into the background>Second was to locate knowledgeable ponies who could be used to gather important intel on the settlement and its inhabitants>Lily might be a good source on the local geography outside of town, but otherwise you suspect she has already largely expended her usefulness>Third: identify important pillars of the community and ingratiate yourself with them; ponies who could rally the town and provide the most resistance to the invasion>These ponies would be the first to be replaced in the initial stages, and the rest would follow after>After the first Canterlot invasion had been unsuccessful, your Queen had re-evaluated the Hive's approach to warfare, and you already knew of a number of ponies that would pose the greatest threat to your Queen's plans>The same six ponies responsible for her defeat in Canterlot, naturally>Thankfully, if Lily was any indication, the ponies of Equestria had learned very little from the first battle against your hive and were still gullible and trusting>Your eyes narrow as you look up at Ponyville, now at the threshold of the town>They would soon find out that your Queen had not made the same mistake***https://ponepaste.org/11866
>>43188598Sounds like our changeling friend may be more comfortable somewhere like Manehattan
>>43188620Aw, is that it? The way you set the scenes was artful
>>43188668Hey thanks Mills! Hell no, I have way more planned, but it's going to take me a good while to write and no doubt will balloon well out of control.>>43188638True, I don't think he handles disorder well
>>43188750You have one hell of a premise set up so i have no doubt this one will balloon. Hope you're up to the challenge
>>43188782Yeah, me too. I'm just gonna have fun writing and hopefully that works out.
>>43185750>The streets of canterlot are bustling with activity >It really puts Ponyville into perspective as the podunk town it really is>The aroma expelled by fine dining restaurants and expensive perfumes is overwhelming >Twilight tries leading you around with excitement hoping to finally broaden your horizons>Its all registers as noise to you>Looking through the crowd you see canterlot castle's towers shimmering in the dusk sun>Your true love isn't far>Twilight's stomach growls as she tries pointing you to a restaurant"Oh, Nonni, i think you'll like this place, it's a more simple menu, certainly not a 3 hoof. It was a favorite hangout when i lived here. Their hayburgers are so good, you'll love em!>You press on once more"Um yea, i just want to get to the castle first and get settled for the night. We can explore more tomorrow">You explain as she reluctantly follows"Im just saying, if you're tired we can just enjoy a quiet meal at one of these places, get a booth. Something like that">Twilight explains wanting to avoid the pomp and circumstance of dinner at the castle>Twilight however does concede>Maybe you weren't as ready to come out of your shell as she thought you were>The gates of the castle at sunset are a sight to behold>the orange light glistens off the polished stonework>You glance around hoping to see him>But your handsome batpony stud is nowhere to be found "Twilly! So nice to see you again">Your head whips around with excitement but your hopes are quickly dashed as you see a white stallion unicorn hug Twilight "Who's this guy?">You callously ask wondering if Twilight is in love with a guard too>Twilight stuggles to let go of her brother to introduce him"Oh, Nonni, this is my brother. He's the captain of the royal guard he'll help get us situated">Your heart flutters>Captain? He must know exactly where Nimbus is>You think to yourself blushing "Oh, you're the guy in charge? Well, maybe you can help me find someone?">You ask with your cheeks turning pink>Twilight gives you a sly smile >Twilight can hardly keep her hooves from trotting in place "Nonni, have you been hiding this from me?">You stammer unsure of what to say"What no, im not trying to get lai-">You desperately squirm till she completes the sentence for you"YOU HAVE A FRIEND! And you forgot to give each other your addresses so you can be pen pals! Aw, that's so sweet of you">You want to scream the truth as the real motivation of wanting to get railed by prime stallion cock is less gay than being saying you want to be pen pals with someone"Yes, that's why i came...">You forcefully smile
>>43184730>It's been quite a while since I found myself gazing down at a set of black forelegs and gasping for my first breath in the everfree forest. I've settled into life just fine, and I've even made friends with the uh, TTF they call themselves.>Stands for Transdimensional Task Force, a team of ponies whose job is to deal with, well, things like me, except I was a unique case. The first Alicorn to appear, that is.>I was surprised to discover I wasn't the first human. There were others, but the rules were simple. Equestria's magic fields tended to transform humans into ponies on arrival to begin with, but in the rare events they didn't, the TTF would hunt them down and give them a choice.>Either they are sent home, or they become a pony. I was tempted to ask if they'd be allowed to stay if they were painted green, went bald, and donned a suit and red tie, but that seemed silly. >Also, the batpony on the team, I'm pretty sure he had a fetish for human women. I mean, I guess I could relate, but why?>Anyway, the reason I mention this, is because the TTF dragged me away from a rather peaceful date with Luna to help them deal with what they told me was "a situation".>Luna flew off after a kiss, and as I trotted towards the castle with Pitch,- that batpony-, he told me what was going on; "So, uh, another human showed up, and they were overjoyed to get the choice to turn to a pony, right?">"Which is already strange, because usually, humans who want it will already be ponies, but this guy wasn't. So, the spellcasters did their thing, but...""And?">"Well, it, she, it resulted in another alicorn, green, black mane-""Question mark cutie mark?">"Yeah, how'd you know?""Huh... had a hunch... what's the problem then?">"Well, she's... not cooperating very much, and being an alicorn, we can't make any further changes to her form... technically she would have to do those herself, after practicing the necessary magic"."Great...">...>I'm good enough with magic now that I can just teleport into the room that they're keeping anon-princess, startling the poor mare a little bit. And I can't help myself. I really can't help myself. Shit eating grin enabled, I..."Wow, this is a biiiig faggot we have here">Naturally this short circuts the poor mare, as she stares up at me, wide-eyed. "But... but..." And I laugh, pulling myself up a chair.... Anoncess is laying on a couch, seems the room doesn't have too much else in it besides a table and some lamps and whatever."Right, sorry, I had to, I knew it'd be funny since you look like that, you the guy who'd make all the princess anon threads or something?">"Wait, how do you-" she starts to say, frowning, making me realize I'm going a bit too ahead of myself."Oh! Yeah, so, Celestia and Luna are around, I used to be human as well, lived on the east coast of the US, ended up here... like this... and, well, until now, I was the only human to have ended up as an alicorn"
>>43189302>"I thought we weren't allowed to be canon ponies?""Yeah... I'm still the only case of that, I suppose there's still a chance someguy shows up as Sombra?">Anoncess squirms a little on the couch, looking downwards and frowning. "I didn't... I didn't /want/ to be princess anon though... and when I complain, they're like, 'oh, well we can't send you home anymore', as if I'd want that either""Pff, I sure don't...""But, wait, you don't want...?">Anoncess clumsily picks up a mirror with her hooves, gazing down into it. I take a moment to look her over, and, well, yeah, she's hot for sure. It's hard to tell while she's laying down, but she seems to be somewhere between me and Luna in terms of her build... she's not as tall as me, in fact she might be equal with Luna even, but she's certainly stockier, uh, thicker, even.>"I can't deny that I'm hot, but... the fuck am I supposed to be the princess of? Retards? Princess of all the other ex-humans? According to these guys, ex-humans barely even talk to each other about being humans anyway!""I... I'm not sure why they asked me to help, other than because I'm the only other formerly human alicorn...">I frown, taking off my front hoofshoes so I can rub them together thoughtfully."Okay, what did you always want to do in Equestria?">Anoncess seems to find the window suddenly very interesting, trying to hide her blush behind her mane. "I...""Yes, besides the obligatory horsefucking">She sighs, laying her head on her hooves. "You know when plankton just says 'I don't know, I never thought I'd get this far' in like, the spongebob movie or whatever it was...?""Yeah...">"Well, my favorite... would've been twilight, I suppose, and obviously anon filly, but... dude, they're real now, how am I supposed to walk up to a mare I've been masturbating to for years and say hi?""It's... a little easier than you'd think, and... it's not like you'll get a boner...">"That too! they took my fucking dick dude! what am I supposed to do now, take cock? like a faggot?""Why not?">"I- that's- because- it's- f-fuck you, man, is that what you do?" Ah shit, now it's my turn to turn a bit red. "I... me and Luna have some toys...">"Wait, you and /Luna?/ Isn't that like incest?""No!">Now Anoncess is the snickering one, and I can't help but put on a bit of a smile that at least her mood is a bit improved. "Seriously, you've never wanted to try anything?">"I mean... I... was a bit of a foamer, it'd be a little fun to ride the friendship express around...""There, see? I can probably arrange that, and maybe you can stay at the castle or something until you find a place you'd like to stay".>"I guess... but by myself...?""Oh, no, but to try avoiding the publicity of both of us wandering around, I'll assign a guard who's pretty well-travelled enough with you".>"I guess so..." Anoncess mumbles, as I get up off my chair. "Need any help up?">"A little?"
>>43189396>"Wait, what are they gonna do with my car?""Your car?">"I uh, I was in my car when I ended up here, it's not like I'll need it, but...""...don't worry about it">I take Anoncess' hoof, and pull her up off of the couch. I give her a bit of a lesson in walking as a horse, too, lessons that I kinda wish I'd've had when I first showed up. She got the hang of it quick enough...>I even did some hasty preening of her wings, gave her mane and her tail a little brushing... well, I tried, at least. Maybe she was meant to be the princess of looking like she just woke up from a nap. >Leaving the TTF building, we set off towards canterlot's train station, with Anon looking rather nervous around all the ponies. "You okay...?">"They keep... looking at us...""Heh... well, to be honest, some of that is because I'm here, but you're a good lookin' mare, Anoncess...">"Anoncess? I guess that works...">We're low enough in the city to find market stalls, so I stop at one, and rather than walk up to it myself, I grin as I hand Anon a few bits and tell her to get something to eat. "B-But...">"What'll ya have, miss?" chirps the earth pony behind the stand. I figured he was from the cherry family. >"J-Just a uh, c-cherry turnover, please..." Anon says, clumsily setting the bits on the table. >"Coming right up, a fresh one for such a lovely mare~!" he sings, swiping one off of the cooktop rather than the warmer and giving it to the increasingly redfaced alicorn. >"T-Thank you..!" She squeaks, before rushing my way as I start to walk off again. "Now was that so ba-">"I hate you, I hate you, I hate you, I hate you" she grumbles, before taking a bite out of the turnover. I was tempted to warn her not to focus too much on how she was walking on three legs while holding it, but the first time I realized that myself, I faceplanted, so..."Stallions aern't so baaaad....">This time she only scrunched her snout, but it was really quite cute. Fuck, is cadence wearing off on me? Or is she already scrying this poor mare and I'm caught up in the influence of her magic too?>I suspiciously eye the angle she tends to watch from, but I can't seem to sense any of her magic...>"Anoncess lets out a delicate sigh as she resumes walking on all fours, having wolfed down the dessert. "That /was/ really good... thanks, I guess...""You're welcome!">"So... should I get off at each stop and have a look around?" she asks. "That would be smart, you'd get a little peek into a bunch of little areas of equestria that way">"I'm not going to know who anyone is...""As long as someone's not super busy, just talk to them!">"Oh, sure...">As we enter the station and meet up with the proper guard, I only really have the time to introduce them to each other, give Anon a tight hug, and then bounce.>I have duties as a princess, after all, and... I have a car- a real, earth, car- to write the royal name of Nightmare Moon on...
>>43189471is short https://ponepaste.org/11874So, as I got into this one, I started coming up with two different ideas I also kinda want to play with someday...first is formerly-human Moony getting her hooves on a human car and making it function again in equestria, because I've liked to imagine her subjecting poor Luna to some spirited driving that a wagon simply couldn't handleand second, is princess anon wandering equestria, looking for a place that she might belong... cause what IS she princess of? motherly figure to all of the anon fillies? jack-of-all-princesses? how long will she resist the siren call of stallion cock? what if it's more tragic and she really does have no place anywhere?
>>43189496>first is formerly-human Moony getting her hooves on a human car and making it function again in equestria, because I've liked to imagine her subjecting poor Luna to some spirited driving that a wagon simply couldn't handleIt'd probably be better if it was a dream sequence where anon is sad missing the car they loved so much in the human world. Anon gets nightmares of a lack of control, no means to escape. Themes that someone with a car would get. Luna comes in and saves anon from their nightmares. Anon tries to explain what a car is to Luna. There's a philosophical discussion about what a car is and what it means to you before finally coming to effectively a 1to1 version of anons car in the dream relm with a payoff of getting to scare the piss out of Luna with it
>>43187525>>43187580Thanks, now I can mark it as complete on the archive.
>>43187525>>43187580>>43189705Wait, did you mean to make it a new paste?
>>43189711Ah, shit, no, i thought i just edited it
>>43189730That's okay. I've updated the link now.
>>43189535Ooh, dream car makes much more sense, and it would also make sense for moony to find out (to her great disappointment) that the car she wanted to pilfer had already been ejected back to the human world, lolI've been meaning to do something with those two in the dream world anyway...
>>43184329They are going to have so many foals.
>>43184737Earth
>>43189873Nonni wants to be a breeding factory. I wonder how many foals can be raised on a royal guard salary
>>43187364If this is from a story then I'd like to know about it.
>>43184737Are alicorns always royalty?
>>43189156"Oh this is so exciting, what's their name?">Twilight asks imagining late nights writing letters together, teaching your proper penmanship >Shining Armor puts a little damper on his sister to curb her enthusiasm "Whoever it is, i can have them meet you">You blush>Could this really be it?>Could this be the chance to meet the gentlecolt of your dreams once more>A smile creeps across your face with fantasies of steamy romance"His name is Midnight Nimbus, do you know him?">Shining Armor beams with pride"Do i know him? He's part of Princess Luna's Honor Guard. He's one of the most respected guards here">Sure sounds like my gentlecolt you dreamily sigh as your marebits quiver in anticipation "Yea, that's him">You reply with a dopey smile>Shining Armor raises an eyebrow but he's happy for Nimbus"Well, i have him meet you outside the barracks. Than you two can exchange addresses">Shining Armor gives you a wink before helping to lead twilight to the castle>Twilight resists trying to look back to you"Make sure you get the postal code too! Everypony forgets the postal code!">You chuckle seeing Twilight none the wiser>Stupid book horse, you think to yourself >You pace outside the barracks in the hallway>As you gaze out the window, the sun has disappeared over the mountains leaving it's faint orange glow in the sky>Your wings, though you've had time to get used to them you can't seem to control them anymore >Every time you even think about seeing his chiselled face again your wings pop up with joy>The pacing seems to drag on>You know Shining Armor sent the message, but does he not want to see you anymore? >You thought things went so well in Ponyville, surely he'd want to see you again but what if he doesn't >You have to push those thoughts deep down even as the occasional batpony guard filters out for the beginning of their shift"Nonni?">Your face shoots up and you see him, his armor freshly polished, his eyes filled with gleaming adoration >He throws his hooves around you and picks you up spinning you through the air like some royal waltz"How did you get here!? I didn't know if I'd ever see you again!">You cling to him even as he sets you down>Being in his hooves brings you a sense of peace you could never describe "Twilight was kind enough to take me, Shining Armor said you still had some time before your shift so i figured we could atleast say hi">You shyly explain knowing full well you didn't come here to say hi
>>43185750Mmmm sausage
>>43186246Oh so that's what happened to him. I hope the friends can be reunited. Not sure why Sunburst's being a dick.
>>43188620This is going to be really good.
>>43189156>wanting to get railed by prime stallion cock is less gay than being saying you want to be pen pals with someoneKek
>>43189496What if the whole pony transformation business was simply an elaborate plot to steal a car?
>>43189496the anathema princess.the princess who, by all accounts, should not exist, and yet here she is, in the flesh.
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>>43191632Hey thanks! I hope so. The more I write the more my autism activates which is usually a good sign
>>43192150
I remember this general hated TCB, but I haven't been a regular here since 2021 (Might finish that CYOA at some point, getting back into writing). I'm incredibly mentally ill and I have had a story running in my mind, though I'm unsure if I have the skills to do it justice. TCB in an extremely polarized world circa 2035, imagine everything wrong socially and economically today continues. I can't let it be a small story, it wouldn't do it justice. It isn't preachy, that's annoying. Just the nature of things, is what I'll get at. Camp of the Saints and Turner Diaries mixed with TCB.
>>43192165Not gonna lie brother this post is pretty schizophrenic. What the fuck is TCB?Also, just write it. Only way to find out if you can do it justice, also the only way to get better.
>>43192201The Conversion Bureau, I know it well but I've been on /mlp/ and fimfiction since 2013
>>43192266Ah, that gay shit. Actually that's insulting to gayness.
>>43192270I know but I love the idea of it, a good execution. What other stories show an all out race war and often have both sides fully believing and committed to it? It's an interesting set
>>43192165Do it.We hate Chatoyance's version of TCB. Your version might be better.
>>43192266Im fairly new to the game, anyone got a link to any of this transformation bureau stuff?
>>43190992>>You're caught off guard as the large stallion wraps his hooves around you>You gasp with surprise but as he holds you lovingly, longingly in his tender embrace you melt in his hooves>Your wings, previously permanently extended in excitement finally relax>It's a moment of clarity where everything else seems to fade away to insignificance >You lean against his chestplate with a dreamy sigh never wanting to leave Nimbus's side"I can't believe you came all the way from Ponyville to see me">He smiles with a quivering lip trying to maintain a stoic facade>Your hoof grazes his codpiece as he breaks into an adorable blush>Your handsome little stallion can pretend to be tough all he wants but after all he is just a big softie "I wouldn't dream of it any other way Nimbus">The stallion can hardly contain himself>He strains against his armor gritting his teeth wanting nothing more than to give you his foal>As your hoof gets more aggressive, he leaks a quiet moan bucking his hips>Nimbus squeezes you tightly wondering why he got so lucky with a mare that knows what she wants>It's too much though >Too fast not enough time to do something special >He has to think of something, and fast>Throbbing against his armor, he has to break the tension "It's a beautiful moonrise, Nonni, care to join me?">He whines using every ounce of discipline to not rip his armor off and make a scene >You can already see the pre dripping from his armor>Your perverse thoughts flow through your mind as the faint scent of stallion cum drives you insane>Am i in heat? You ask yourself trying to understand your intense desire for cock"Care to join you, for what?">You ask teady to pull him into a room and do the deed
>>43192165>It isn't preachy, that's annoyingYou can't do worse than Chatoyance when it comes to this aspect, but all the same, do your best to avoid standard contemporary levels of preachy misanthropy
>>43191979That's hot
>>43188555checked and good start to the story!
>>43192385>Nimbus winces and clenches his teeth "Actually Nonni, i was hoping you'd join me for a little flight to enjoy the moonrise together">He takes a hold of your hoof and takes it away from his crotch so he can finally stop trembling "I figured it would be, you know, romantic, a more official first date">You mentally groan with distain>With his cock throbbing against his armor, you thought for certain he was yours >A moonrise flight together is still less gay than being pen pals, you tell yourself "That sounds great, you're such a gentlecolt Nimbus">Nimbus perks up with pride as he takes you by the hoof"I wouldn't have it any other way Nonni">Leaning his head against yours, he leads you out to one of the balconies>With great anticipation for showing off his aerobatics skills, he smiles and unfolds his dark menacing wings>You get locked into a dreamy stare of lust>His gorgeous body, tough menacing wings, and captivating smile make your mare bits ache with desperation>You watch as he leaps from the balcony quickly taking flight despite his heavy armor >You walk to the edge sighing with delight as he performs some tricks for you"Come on now Nonni! The weather is great for flying">You look at the ground far below >Your hooves tremble with the feelings of pins and needles >You've done plenty of flying lessons but never from this high up>Your hooves tremble as you stretch your wings>Looks like a fall from this height could be deadly >Still his confident smile and reassuring hoof reaches out to you>You flap your wings like you have many times before carefully hovering over the balcony"Is everything alright Nonni?">Nimbus asks as he starts to notice you're not exactly a strong flyer>He finds your reluctance adorable as he thinks of something else you can do>As you start to make your way over the balcony edge and over to Nimbus your consciousness takes over the flapping >The terror works its way in as you struggle to stop yourself from looking down"Im fine Nimbus, it's just a little high.">You explain as your uncoordinated flaps start to concern Nimbus"It's okay Nonni, maybe we can just stand on the balcony together">He reaches out to you to lead you back to the balcony>Your eyes glance away to the ground for a moment >The sheer height causes your heart to seize as your wings flop uncontrollably >The fear compounds before you realize, you can't recover >You let out a blood curdling scream as you start hurtling towards the ground
>>43193309Thanks! More coming soon!(tm)
Pony Transportation General
>>43192659Trying not to do that. For instance, one of the first scenes is a missionary in Papua New Guinea encountering a pre-invasion scouting team
>>43194135So that's why all the new ponies are taking their vehicles to Equestria in this thread.
>>43184737Either Apathy or Discourse.
Had an idea for a grimdark story set on earth. Pon-E has long since been outlawed and the government has taken steps to quietly round up those who have been transformed into ponies and euthanize them. The story follows a group of ponies who were former petting club ponies who have since been struggling to get by day to day. Suddenly one of the group goes missing, they manage to track down their friend and find out about the secret government program. The government finds out and sends a team to capture the group so the secret doesn't get out. The group tries escaping to Thailand where ponies are still free. The group gets picked off till it's only the main character left standing
>>43195206Sounds cool
>>43193493>Nimbus doesn't hesitate as you flail to the ground >Diving after you, his wings flap with all their might to gain speed>Even with his lighting fast reaction time he struggles to get to you in time>The last thing you see is the dreamy stallion, eyes focused and determined locked onto you>As you close your eyes and accept your fate you feel the crushing grip of the stallion holding you to his chest>Nimbus's wings strain under the weight of carrying you and his armor>With a loud growl he levels off over the court yard >Hurtling towards the castle wall, his wings flap furiously to gain the altitude to clear the wall>You cling to Nimbus in terror as you finally feel him breathe>You feel him level out in flight as you finally feel the courage to open your eyes>The sight is utterly breathtaking >The two sides of the stallion's face one lit by the fading orage of the sun and the other the pale light of the moon>Your lips quiver with fear>You hold your stallion tight, not out of lust but of genuine heartfelt love"Are you alright Nonni? Do i need to take you to a doctor?">Nimbus asks with genuine concern >You don't know how to respond >You know you're fine but what about him?"Im fine, really Nimbus, i uh get get-">You hold him tighter>You can't bring yourself to lie to someone like this"Well, whatever it is I've never seen anypony fall like that before, a pegasus that is.">Nimbus explains with the moon shimmering in his exotic eyes >You look away in shame>You've lied long enough, to him and yourself>You want this stallion to be with you for the rest of your life but you have to be honest"Nimbus, I haven't been entirely honest with you">You explain as your tears free themselves from your eyes>Nimbus braces himself>He's experienced heartbreak before but he doesn't know if he can recover from this"Nimbus, im not actually a pony, i was a human. A human male. I thought we were just going to be a one night thing but I don't know anymore. I love you">You explain burying your head in shame
>>43195670>Nimbus rubs noses with you to assure you everything is alright>Despite his shock, he doesn't have a reason to be mad>As he peacefully glides through the night air basking in the moonlight, he takes a moment to reflect >The silence kills you as you simply wish he would just drop you and put you out of your misery "Nonni, as far as im concerned, you are the most beautiful mare i have ever had the privilege of setting my eyes on, nothing will change that">His words stun you as you stammer trying to find the right words, however his lips meet yours first>In a bold display of unquestioning love and adoration, Nimbus holds the kiss giving your lip a soft bite with his fang>Your lips part as you melt with joy>Even in the pale moonlight he's as handsome as you've dreamed and far more caring that you could have possibly imagined >Without a single second to think, you meet his lips with yours >Hearts throbbing Nimbus gently lands on a balcony setting you safely down>Still, you don't loosen your grip>Clinging to the stallion barrage him woth kisses >Nimbus doesn't refuse>He dreamily picks you up once more flying through the balcony window>With barely a glance to see if the room is empty, he takes off his helmet, tossing it on the bedThe NSFW starts here>You sigh with pleasure finally seeing your lover without his helmet >Before he even gets a chance to do it himself you're already trying to take off his chestplate>He smiles pinning you under his domineering weight>A single touch of his hoof has you flop onto the sheets aching with ecstasy "Please, i want to see">You quietly moan well aware of how devious it is doing the deed with a guard on duty>With a few straps loosened, his chest plate falls away>You finally get to see his body in all of it's glory>You bite your lips with anticipation, rubbing and squeezing your legs together >Every ripple on his abs, his muscular front legs, his simply massive flanks, speak to the power he his capable of>As you glance down he takes your breath away>Nimbus's throbbing girth makes your hooves tremble in fear>The cod piece wasn't that big...you tell yourself >You're powerless to stop the temptation though>Your body needs him, and it needs him now>Your legs spread filling the room with mare scent >Nimbus nearly turns feral at the sight of it>Once your scent enters his nostrils he looses all sense of civility>Willing or not, a foal will be brought into this world
>>43186246>You try to analyse the situation rationally >In front of you, there's a sobbing pony who is clearly scared and at the verge of panicking for the umpteen time today (and some of them were your fault)>This pony seems to have a partner who might be located somewhere in Canterlot (but why?)>You let out a sigh >What would Twilight do in your place?>You were about to ask Kai something, but then a thought came to your mind“Sunburst…”>Your friend stared silently at you>This… is not the Sunburst you know>What in the world is going on?!“Sunburst… How were you able to know what was in the tape before we listened to it?”>Sunburst smugly smiled at the sky>”I had my means”>The way Sunburst has been acting since you the left the house is resulting increasingly irritating>You do your best to contain your anger, but then Trixie came along>”Then tell us what your means were”, your friend said with determination>Sunburst’s smile vanished quickly>”Kai is crying because of you, Sunburst”>You are momentarily stunned by Trixie’s words>And yet, she’s completely right>”Since the day I found that tape, I’ve had a hunch… As if something was about to happen. And time proved me right”>”Stop vagueposting!”>What?>That was Kai, drying his tears and shouting at Sunburst>He quickly approaches him, and you can see Sunburst being taken aback by Kai’s sudden change of attitude>”If you know something, stop acting mysterious and tell me! That was my friend and I haven’t seen him in a year!”>You can see Trixie getting worried about Kai, and gently putting a hoof on his back>”Okay, then you can tell us how you and your friend came here”, Sunburst quickly fires back>”That is not relevant”>”It is relevant when you’re accusing somepony else of being secretive, Kai!”“Stop. Just stop, please”>Everyone looked at you“Let’s just… go back to Sunburst’s house”>That was the only thing you could think to do>Sunburst merely bowed his head in silence>”Uh… Kai, I don’t think I’ll be able to carry your wagon. It looks pretty heavy”, said Trixie sympathetically>”It doesn’t matter, Trixie… I’ll do it myself”
>>43195772It's all NSFW:>His eyes narrow with a sly smile and you understand immediately >Rolling onto your belly you lift your tail eagerly presenting as you make hitched breaths into the sheets>The calm well spoken gentlecolt you've come to know is no more>You hear some beastly, feral noises behind you as your hooves grip at the sheets with anticipation >His front hooves squeeze your sides as he looms over you>Dripping with delight, you tremble feeling his weight pressing down on you>You loudly gasp with surprise feeling the flare of his cock against your wet pussy >Shivers radiate through your body as Nimbus lines himself up>Nimbus has always dreamed of this moment>With a few sloppy jerky thrusts he teases your clit wincing from the sensitivity >Your moans spur him on "Just put it in you retard!" >You moan through clenched teeth and repressed moans>The shooting shock of pleasure makes your legs tremble weakly from the surprise >The way his gorgeous stallion cock fills your womb takes your breath away>Nimbus pauses to catch his breath throbbing inside you>Any sudden moves and he will have you pregnant before either of you have a chance to have fun>He clenches tightly as you wiggle your plot grinding against him, desperate for him to continue "Nonni, i love you so much">Nimbus dreamily says with a tremor in his voice "I love you too Nimbus">You lustfully moan with anticipation of the stallion's forceful thrusts>The batpony stallion plants his hooves on the bed >Rearing his hips, he prepares for a monstrous pounding >You weren't prepared >His crotch slams against your plot with cracking force sending shivers of pain throughout your belly >With another one on its way you stammer and plea with him"N-Nimbus, no! Gentle! Please." >You beg with your body quivering in pain>With the sharp pain gone you're left with the pleasant fullness of stallion cock in your pussy"N-nice and slow, please?">You beg as your fantasies are checked in realtime>Your big dumb stallion humbly complies>With long slow strokes you feel his girth inside you as you clench with all your might>Your quiet gentle moans fill Nimbus with pride>He doesn't know how long he can keep going like this as he struggles to keep his throbbing cock from leaking
>>43196418i wonder how twiggles is going to react to alien former male becoming pregnant lol
>>43196542You mean if she finds out>>43196418>The moonlight filters into the room as you both savor the moment>Feeling his heavy balls softly clapping against your plot makes your legs weak with submission >Hearing his trembling breath sync to yours feels like magic in itself >You feel him quiver and clench>He whines and throbs inside you>One more thrust and he might burst"Wait, i want to look you in the eyes when it happens">You lustfully whisper as Nimbus tries to understand what you're getting at"Just let me take the lead">You whisper with confidence"Anything for you love~">He smiles kissing your cheek before dismounting you>Your insides ache with cold vacancy as his hot shaft slips it's way out>Slowly and gingerly Nimbus's wet cock bounces in the cool musky air"What did you have in mind">Nimbus lovingly asks giving your plot a firm caressing with his hoof>With a playful giggle you crawl along the sheets meeting noses with the stallion "You're such a sweetheart Nimbus">You share a blush before giving him a smooch>Nimbus falls into the hypnotic rhythm of the kisses not realizing he's being pushed back>He stumbles back falling onto the pillows >He allows himself to be pinned under you in a submissive state>As you crawl up between his legs he stuggles to understand what you could be doing>His poor innocent stallion mind couldn't begin to comprehend human pervertions>He blushes a deep red as you mount him>His cock bounces, pulses, and throbs desperate to plant it's seed in your womb and you're more than willing >Nimbus winces and closes his eyes feeling his flared tip slip it's way inside you once more>You lower yourself down till your plot sits firmly on his crotch >You can't help but find him adorable watching him pant and blush under you"Shhh, just let me do the work">You smile giving him a kiss before working your hips>Your juices drip down onto him soaking his crotch in mess>His hooves rest on your waist almost as though he's holding on for dear life "Nonni, i">His moans get louder, uncontrollable >Soon the entire castle will know about you two>You don't care>His begs and pleas mean nothing in this moment>You can't even feel anything below your waist>Please, give it to me!>You beg to yourself >As if to answer your prayers, Nimbus grabs you, holding you firmly against his chest while his hips buck for the final thrusts>That moment of powerlessness in the face of the strong powerful stallion is too much to bear>Your deafening moans of ecstasy ring in his ears as a whole body shiver locks him in place>His overwhelming warmth floods your insides>Very throb pumping you full of foals>You gush on his lap, leaking all over the sheets as you shriek in pleasure >Your quivering mess of a body can't resist >You unleash a barage of kisses on your loving stallion mate>The gravity of the situation can easily be ignored as you snuggle up against his bare chest >The drained stallion strokes your mane
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>>43197597>You finally come down from your high>The moonlight glistens in his eyes as you lay your sleepy head on his chest>As his hoof runs through your mane you breathe some relaxed moans>His cock slowly softens with the occasional throb as he doesn't have the strength to pull out>Nimbus smiles with excitement giving you a kiss"I love you so much, you're my juicy mango and nothing will ever change that">He hugs you tight as you squirm on his crotch "I love you too sweetheart">Your hoof rubs your swollen belly with satisfaction >You never could have imagined how much you needed this >It feels like you're finally complete>A handsome stallion who loves you, and a foal you cannot wait to meet"Do you think it will be a filly or a colt?">Nimbus dreamily lays on the pillows"I hope it's a colt, but i would also love a cute filly. Either way i will love our foal with all my heart">You playfully rub your nose on his chest"I want a little filly, i never really thought too much about it but i want to be a mom so bad">You admit before Nimbus playfully rolls you under him"I can't wait, i just know you're going to be the best mom ever">You smooch once more as you rub noses together >The door opens as he gasps scrambling to get under the sheets>The freakout is lost on you as you get cozy in the sheets rubbing your belly filled with his precious seed>Shining Armor's jaw drops seeing Nimbus in the midst of his intimate moment "NIMBUS!!!">Shining armor exclaims in utter shock>Nimbus out of pure instinct sits on the bed giving his most heartfelt salute all while his cock for all to see stands at half mast >Twilight peaks into the room with morbid curiosity to see what all the fuss is about >Twilight's horn lights the candles in the room revealing the utterly scandalous scene before them>The small group of guards and maids gaze upon you two in fascination Nimbus turns red with embarrassment using the sheets to cover himself up"Hi Twilight" >You smile too enamored with your swollen belly to care about the scene around you"NONNI!? What are you doing in my room!"
>>43198878>The train ride the next morning was an awkward one>With a couple day visit to canterlot cut short, Twilight is furious>The other ponies in the train can tell>Still you hold your belly with anticipation >Is it a filly or a colt? >You don't know but you're excited either way>You play with your engagement necklace and daydream of going back to canterlot to be with him"I've never been so embarrassed in my life! You were my guest, i was excited to have you talk to princess Celestia about the human world and make you experience more of what equestria has to offer. Then you go and make a fool out of me">Twilight bitterly whines glaring at the other ponies who dare look in her direction >You barely catch the gist of what she's saying as you slip out of the daydream thinking of foal names"Huh? Oh, i thought you wanted me to come out of my shell">Twilight's eyes twitch with fury as she nearly rips out her mane in frustration "YOU COULD HAVE DONE THAT WITHOUT BECOMING THE SINGLE MOST SCANDALOUS PONY IN ALL OF EQUESTRIA!!!">Your hoof gently rubs your belly once more"Twilight, do you have a spell that can tell if im pregnant?">Twilight throws her hooves up in frustration "YOURE NOT LISTENING!"The end
>>43198908Love the ending
>>43198913Not gonna lie, I thought of the ending first, thought it would be funny and wrote the story for it
>>43198926There a link to a place where I can read the entire thing in one go?
>>43198908>tfw ywn be a handsome bat station's juicy mangoy live
>>43198082anon that's gay
>>43199409https://ponepaste.org/11881Here you goFor archive friend, description:Former human struggles with their new life as a pony till a handsome batpony comes to Ponyville and shows anon what it means to be a mare
>>43199622Did you mean to post it as a guest?
>>43199640Idk how i feel with my name on clop on ponepaste. In the archive? Sure
>>43199849millennials in ponyville
>>43199939Sensiblechuckle.gif
>>43199622You're an excellent writer.
>>43200450Thanks, i kinda wish i had more time to post more than one a day. I have 2 stories sitting on my desktop and a grimdark story I want to cut my teeth on but we do what we can. I do appreciate the positive feedback, must mean I'm doing something right
>>43198908Nice green, thanks!
>>43195206The clock ticks away in the late night hours. In the small townhome, a red stallion works the night away with extreme diligence. James types away at his keyboard, eyes strain in the bluelight of the monitor. He carefully reviews his letter as his fellow ponies peacefully dream. He knows these letters just end up filling up some politician's e-mailbox at the end of the day but it gives him hope. Maybe one day James and the non-profit can finally have an advocate in their corner for pony rights. He rubs his eyes with his hooves and brushes his copper mane out of his face looking to his fellow ponies sleeping just like he should be. He knows every second of sacrifice is worth it if it means his friends have a chance for a brighter future. With a renewed sense of determination he types away preparing a PowerPoint for the next non-profit dinner. The silence is broken by a sound at the door. James's heart sinks, could it finally be? Has his activism finally caught up with him? Has the government come to silence him? His pony friends always said he was being paranoid but the ever increasing list of missing ponies has him fearing otherwise. As the door opens he's relieved to see a familiar face. The frilly haired purple Pegasus trots her way into the house shutting the door behind her"Oh, Mindy, it's you...i thought-"Mindy scoffs at the idea, knowing exactly what James was thinking. She takes off her coat setting it up on the hooks"Hmph, what? That i was the CIA or something? Come on now copper tail, we both know that's ridiculous."Mindy mocks keeping it quiet for all the other ponies in the houseJames, utterly exhausted from his work and the late hours struggles with his offence "Ok, first of all, its James. Can you please stop? And secondly-"Mindy callously interrupts teasing the flustered unicorn "Ok then bitch, i told you my name is Lavender Blossom and here we are". She quietly sasses with a smile considerate enough to keep her voice down for everypony in the roomJames concedes trying to move on to the more important issue. "Yes, i know, i just can't get past the whole pony name thing it's just weird to me. Anyway something is-"Mindy interrupts once more relishing in the effortless rage bait. "Oh i know mr. 'I never wanted to be a pony' come on now, you're in the thick of it with the rest of us, relax, embrace it. You might actually start to enjoy yourself more" Mindy explains slowly walking up to give James a hugMindys embrace calms james as the thoughts about the missing ponies fades into the background "yea, i guess you're kinda right but, i don't know if im ready to accept what happened" James thinks back to that one dumb mistake he made in college. Taking 2 Pon-E pills too close together. His heart aches with regret but Mindy's embrace dampens the pain.Feeling James's tears on jer coat, Mindy realizes she might have gone too far. "Jey there, come on now James, im playin'.Hopefully this stokes interest as a grimdark pilot
Most anons here either want to be turned as adult ponies or foals but personally if I were to go to Equestria and get turned into a pony I would like to be a teenager. That would allow me to navigate the world a bit more easily while still keeping a degree of independence. I could also be a laid back big sister/babysitter for the CMC. Hormonal changes will certainly be... interesting to say the least however.
>Hormonal changes will certainly be... interesting to say the least however....Just be a colt then? I mean you're already picking the age here.
>>43201575oh yeah nothing's less hormonal than a teenage boy
>>43201575Pretty much this, colt is basically a catch-all for anything between foal and full blown stallion
>>43196191I apologize for the lack of updates. Work has been tking up my time, so I've been feeling tired lately>You knew a cavalcade of questions were approaching>But you weren’t open to leave your van, the only thing you had that you could call your own, abandoned in the middle of nowhere>You jumped back on the driver’s seat and thought of a way to drive the vehicle“Aha!”>You knew piling the back of your van with rubbish would come in handy sooner or later>You grab the broomstick you kept there>Yes, this should work in lieu of feet>You take a look at the three ponies>Trixie's expression seems to show she's worried about you… Bless her>Starlight looks confused. Understandable>Sunburst… he won't even look at you“Listen… I know you have tons of questions. Just let me park this thing somewhere, please…”“I just… I don't want to argue. I just want to know what happened to my friend”>Starlight was the first to talk >”Trixie, please take the wagon back to Sunburst's house”>She sounded friendly but firm, and ended with a head gesture telling Sunburst to go with Trixie>”Starlight…”, Trixie tried to complain>”Please… No more arguing”>Trixie nodded and went away towards her wagon, with Sunburst following suit>”May I come in?”>You reached for the passenger door and opened it>Starlight turned and climbed into the van via the now opened door“I… I know it might be a bit uncomfortable”>”You know that's the least of my worries right now”, she answered while looking at you with worried eyes“I didn't come to Equestria willingly… nor has my friend Mark”>”If you didn't come from Equestria, then where?”, Starlight asked while trying to sit on the passenger seat“You wouldn't believe me”>”Try me”>Starlight’s determination catches you by surprise, but then you realize she’s probably running out of patience>At the same time, you don’t want to tell her absolutely everything in private, at least not until you know what’s Sunburst’s endgame“I come from a place not found in Equestria's books. I haven’t got a clue of how or why I ended up here”>On the windshield, you can see Trixie and Sunburst taking back the wagon to the house>”I see”>You can sense she’s doesn’t fully believes you“Uh… Thanks for being so kind to me”>You can see a small smile briefly on her face>”You’re welcome, Kai… I take you built this yourself?”>She takes a look at the mess that passes as your transportation“Well, the filth was made entirely by me”>She laughs, although you’re sure your answers aren’t doing the best to make her trust in you>You manage to turn the key with your hoof, igniting the engine>”Wh-What is that noise?!”“Don’t worry! It’s the engine!”>”An engine? What kind of wagon is this?”>Starlight overreacts to the slight shaking of the van, desperately grabbing herself to the seat
>>43202986“One not made in Equestria, clearly… Listen, Starlight, I know this is very confusing. Just… allow me to park my… ‘wagon’ somewhere safe and I promise I’ll answer more questions sooner than later”>You approach the broomstick to the gas pedal, hoping your idea works>Indeed, the van starts moving slowly but surely>Thankfully, there are no ponies around you could accidentally kill, as Trixie and Sunburst have already vanished from sight>”Do you always use a stick to move this thing?”, asks Starlight>You can sense her brain is working overtime to process the absolutely bizarre situation she’s living“Well… I was taller in my place of birth… Enough to press the pedal myself”>You hope (in vain) for your answer not to trigger more questions for the moment>”How… is that place called?”>What’s the point of keeping it a secret any longer?“Earth”>”Kai, what kind of name for a place is that?”“I don’t know!”>Without even realizing it, we both burst into laughter, alleviating the tension if only for a moment
>>43198926Yeah it's weird how inspiration gets you sometimes eh?
>mtf tranny shit>mareTranny thread
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>>43203202Equestria is like70% mares. It'll likely happen to you anon
>>43203202I know, right?All the cool anons would want to be a changeling.
>>43203202Are you telling me you wouldn't want to be a cute mare anon? Lies
>>43203202"Damn transformation general and it's">Checks notes"Transformations!"
>>43204263Kek, reads like a tamers skit
>>43201459James takes a breath to calm his nerves. It's a sore subject, one that some days he never thinks about and others it's all consuming. Mindy feels James relaxing as she tries to usher the exhausted stallion to bed. "Come on now, watchu doing up so late anyways-"James raises his voice not wanting his concerns dismissed "i should be asking you the same thing, with all the ponies going missing it's not safe for you out there, especially not with you doing what you do."Mindy raises her voice back, "this conversation again? I told you it's safe, you're being paranoid, my ass grew up in fucking Oakland, these streets aint shit. Besides, who's house you think i was at?" Mindy winks giving a little dance. James pushes his glasses up onto his face groaning with frustration, "Mindy, i mean, Lavender Blossom, you know how it makes me feel when-""None other than Thomas Wynnsfeld~" Mindy smiles nodding and dancing James chokes on his spit dieing from his cough. "Wait? That wealthy donor guy? The guy who bankrolls San Francisco politics?" James asks desperately reaching for his water bottle."That's right, i should be hearing a thank you right about now. My regular, the one i used to get at the old petting club? He invited a few of us over to his place. Turns out, your Thomas guy, he loves some fat pony flanks." Mindy cannot contain herself as she lets out a whinny of joy. "Best part, i told him about your little organization. Politely asked if he'd make a donation to liberate these pony flanks. He said he'd look into it"James downs water trying to believe what he's hearing. A major political mover on his side could go a long way to making actual change. Though he hates what Mindy does, he can't argue with results. "If he's serious that could be huge for the organization!" James accidentally cheers as one of the ponies grumblesThe pony with the dreadlock mane stirs from the couch. "Dude, keep it down man, it's like, midnight." He quietly whines laying his head back on the couch. James winces feeling bad for being inconsiderate. "Makes me wish i had my office back" James glances over to Mindy with a raised eyebrow.Mindy scoffs at the idea, "yea, no, i pay rent, i get that room all to myself" she smugly smiles throwing a small stack of bills on the desk.James groans and sometimes wishes she would miss a payment but the money helps keep things going for everypony in the house. "That you do." James smiles using his magic to put the money in a drawerMindy surprises james with a kiss on the cheek. She chuckles watching James blush and wipe the kiss off his cheek. "Get some rest man, you need it, it's like 3am or some shit" Mindy quietly asks before she smugly struts her way up the stairs.James can't help but smile. He has a whole new round of emails to draft but as the crusts in his eyes become hard to ignore, he concedes turning out the light on his desk. "Yea, i guess it's about that time huh"
>>43189496>https://ponepaste.org/11874Added to the story archive.https://pone.tf
>>43190992Aw nice reunion.
>>43188620>https://ponepaste.org/11866Added to the story archive.https://pone.tf
>>43192365https://www.fimfiction.net/group/26/the-conversion-bureau
>>43189471Nice story
>>43206826Reading the established lore of the concept. I didn't like it as much as i thought i would
>>43195670>>43195772It's scientifically proven that human males make the hottest mares.
>>43207195there will probably be more anoncess someday
>>43199622>https://ponepaste.org/11881Added to the story archive.https://pone.tf
>>43201482Like this
>>43201459I like how he hasn't adapted to being a pony.
>>43202999>You carry your wagon back to Sunburst's “château” in complete silence>You have no intention of chit-chatting with the house owner, at least for now>Then, you start hearing crunching >You turn around to see Sunburst eating a cracker “Where did you even get that from?”>”I left it in your wagon while you were licking chocolate leftovers from your cape”“Trixie doesn't like to be seen licking herself! Nor seeing ponies being jerks to others!”>”I'm not being a jerk, Trixie”“Well, you're pretending to be one quite well, then! You made Fluffy cry!”>”It wasn't my intention to make Flu– Kai cry. But you have to understand, we're in the middle of something”“Yes, we're in the middle of the worst weekend ever”>You can hear Sunburst letting out a sigh>”Well… If it matters so much to you, I can apologize. But I will find out what's behind that tape”>You roll your eyes, not bothering in continuing the conversation>You hear a noise in the distance>It becomes progressively louder>When you check where it comes from, you realize it's Kai's wagon, moving by itself>You stop your walking abruptly, and stare in disbelief as the carriage pass you by, unable to grasp what is going on>”Oh, look. Something completely normal that everypony in Equestria has seen before”>You ignore Sunburst's sarcastic comment, preferring to find a reasonable explanation to what you're seeing>But you couldn't find one>So you decide to follow the wagon closely>”Hey, wait for me!”>Sunburst didn't react positively at your sudden speed increase
>>43207628>Two minutes later, you were back in front of Sunburst's house>You leave your wagon next to the door and immediately run towards Kai's>You see Starlight coming down from it, visibly confused“What kind of wagon is this?!”>”I’m not sure…”>Starlight just stayed there, trying to interpret both the drive and Kai’s answers>You finally see Kai coming down from his wagon and run straight to him“Kai, how in Celestia’s name is that thing able to move by itself?”>”Uh…”>Kai was about to answer but gets interrupted by Starlight>”It’s something he built by himself, Trixie”>You look at Starlight, still confused, and then at Kai, whose smile doesn't quite hide the sweat beading on his face>”Sunburst, don’t you have something to show us?”>Starlight’s confusion suddenly changed to a expression of annoyance>Sunburst takes a step forward, again with a smug smile in his face, and holding something on his right hoof“Where did you get that from?! We haven’t opened the door yet!”>”Do I even need to say it?”, Sunburst replied smugly“Trixie doesn’t like her wagon to be used as a storage unit!”>Sunburst starts approaching Kai, but you stand in the middle of them“What are you going to do to him now?”>Sunburst dropped his eyes, avoiding to meet your look, as if he’s finally embarrassed after scaring Kai>”Listen, uh… I want to find out what’s happening too. This is something I found next to the tape at the antique shop.”>”And I believe Kai knows what it is”
>>43198908Kek. Prude.
>>43207593I don't really want to spoil anything but im writing him as a sort of optimist. In a world that looks down on ponies he still sees himself still as human as anyone else meanwhile everyone else just kinda accepts being treated poorly for being ponies and act accordingly
>>43202999It's got to be tricky to steer and change gears with hooves.
>>43208038Thankfully, Kai was driving at 1 KM/h.
>>43206793Thanks!
>>43188620*** Chapter 2: An Unfamiliar Warmth>Small puffs of dust gently drift out from your hooves as you step into Ponyville, quickly disappearing in the breeze>The ponies around you don't pay you too much mind; aside from the occasional glance in your direction you might as well be invisible>You think you can safely chalk what little attention you do receive up to mild curiosity at the arrival of a stranger>Come to think of it, that might be trouble>In small towns like this it's likely the locals know each other pretty well>You file that information away for later>Glancing around at the buildings as you walk, you build a mental map of the place as you go>Since you're to be earthbound for a while, it's going to be a necessity in order to navigate the place>A small movement above you catches your eye; a flash of white>You glance up but all you see is the occasional cloud drifting by>Suddenly, you hear a squeak as you collide with someone, nearly bowling them over>You stumble but catch yourself, and find yourself face to face with a yellow earth-pony mare>The paper bag she was carrying drops to the ground, scattering the groceries on the street"Hey, careful!">She says, glaring at you indignantly>You silently curse yourself for getting distracted>Adopting a placating tone, you raise a hoof defensively
>>43208156"I'm so sorry! I really should watch where I'm going.">What you really wanted to say was 'Stay out of my way, or else.' but it'll have to do>Frankly, your troop sergeant would have strangled you for such an embarrassing blunder>She looks at you suspiciously, before starting to pick up her groceries"Here, let me help you with that.">As much as it pains you, you move to help her, picking up the scattered vegetables and dropping them into the bag>Oddly, they seems to consist overwhelmingly of carrots>That unusual feeling returns as you stoop to pick up the fallen groceries; that blooming warmth that seems to radiate out from your chest>You shuffle uncomfortably, making a mental note to speak to a medic as soon as you return to the hive>The mare leans down to pick the paper bag up, but before she can you use your magic to levitate it off the ground"Please, allow me. It's the least I can do. My name is Lumen Vale, by the way.">She considers you for a moment, before nodding"Okay. I'm Golden Harvest.">You smile disarmingly"It's a pleasure to meet you, although I apologise for the circumstances, of course. May I help you carry these?">Her eyes soften somewhat"Well, I suppose... Thank you, Lumen. I'm just down the street.">She turns to leave, and you take a moment to scan the sky before following after her>Nothing...>You trot a few steps to catch up with her>Golden looks over at you as you step next to her
>>43208159"So, what were you doing staring up at the sky in the middle of the road, anyway?">You shrug"I mean, can you blame me? It's a beautiful day out.">Protocol Two: Never give out information unless it benefits the mission>Off the top of your head, you can recall no less than three separate beatings you suffered at the hooves of Commander Kryssik for 'surrendering information during a training exercise'>The first time, you had misread the dossier and mixed up what town you were pretending to be from>The second time you had truthfully answered a seemingly innocuous question about where you had eaten breakfast that morning>The third time had been after the exercise, and there had been no explanation>Golden Harvest laughs"I guess that's fair, you're certainly not wrong. It's just a left up here.">The two of you take a left, getting further into Ponyville's 'urban' sprawl"I don't think I've seen you around here before, Lumen. Are you new to Ponyville?">You nod"Yes, I just arrived today, actually. Still looking for a place to stay. Any recommendations?">She stops as you near a quaint, thatch-roofed house near the corner of the street, and turns to face you"Of course!">She chirps"Ponyville doesn't have an inn, but there are plenty of ponies you could stay with.">She thinks for a moment"I think there was this pegasus looking for a roommate on the north side of town, I can't remember her name... Or you could always see if Applejack will take you in. She's got a lot of space down on Sweet Apple Acres, but then again... She'll probably want you to work off your board.">She takes another moment, still looking thoughtful
>>43208161"OR you could try asking Twilight Sparkle! She's super nice, and I don't think there's anyone staying with her at the library right now.">Great>You can stay with one of the mission's two greatest threats, or some unknown quantity>You find yourself missing your assigned barracks bed more than you thought possible>You levitate the paper bag over and drop it at her hooves"Where exactly does this pegasus live?""I think it was Lilac Way? I'm pretty sure that's it - anyway, it's got a bunch of flowers out front. You can't miss it!">You nod, already exhausted with this conversation"Thank you, Ms. Harvest.">You turn and walk away before she has the chance to say anything else>You're beginning to get the feeling that you might have underestimated just how grating playing nice with these ponies was going to be>It was simultaneously infuriating and humiliating that these soft, undisciplined whelps had managed to best your hive once already>But your rage is tempered by the knowledge that you would soon be the instrument of their destruction>It doesn't take long to arrive at Lilac Way - and you manage to avoid crashing into anyone on the way there this time>It's a winding cobbled path that curves along the north-east side of town, nearly adjacent to the river>You walk slowly, your hoofsteps accentuated by the cobblestones, politely nodding at the ponies who cross your path>Quietly observing every face you see, you carefully note the details for later>Having a breadth of forms to take could very likely come in handy>Handy...>Wait, what?>That word->You stagger>Images pour into your mind; shapes you don't recognise, places you can't imagine, creatures you know but have never seen
>>43208163>And just as quick as it started, it's over>You press a hoof to your head, suddenly nauseous>You poor soul... What have they done to you?>Your head throbs>What... What is going on?>Before you have time to sort out your tangled mind, a familiar voice interrupts your thoughts"Lumen, hi! Glad to see you made it into town.">You look up to see Lily White trotting towards you>Shaking your head, you struggle to compose yourself"H-hi, Lily. Fancy meeting you here.">By the Queen, anything but this mare right now>She beams at you, but her smile fades slightly as she notices the expression on your face"Is everything okay?">Damnit... She shouldn't be able to read you this easily>You summon as much willpower as you can and steel your mind, gathering your scattered thoughts and pushing aside these unfamiliar feelings>The mission is all that matters, and by the Queen, you will not fail>The easy smile that graces your face is a testament to your mental fortitude"Of course, why wouldn't it be?">She observes you for a moment, and then that annoyingly bright smile reappears"Well, that's good to hear. I was worried about you!">You nod casually"I appreciate that, but I had some water and I'm back to feeling like a million bits. Anyway, if you don't mind, I'm actually just in the middle of something...">You slip past her, hoping to find somewhere quiet and lonely to focus your mind
>>43208167>You hear the clatter of her hooves as she brushes up next to you, keeping pace as you walk"Oh, sure. What're you up to? Do you need help finding anything?">You shake your head, your enthusiasm quite genuine"Oh, no, I've got it quite under control. I'm just going to see a pegasus about finding a place to stay. Well, it was lovely catching up with you!">Her eyes widen, her excitement palpable"The pegasus looking for a roommate at 17 Lilac Way? You're not gonna believe this, Lumen.">By the Queen, no"You're looking at her!">You force a smile"Wow, what are the odds?">You manage, suddenly reconsidering your options>She nods happily"My old roommate moved out a few weeks ago, and it was nice having the place to myself for a bit, but... I dunno, it's too quiet and empty without somepony else there.">She turns to look at you, and you steadfastly avoid eye contact"The place is really nice, I promise. It's just up ahead, here.">You look up and find you're approaching an ornate, old house covered in flowering vines>The house is set back from the road by a considerable margin to allow space for an excessively lush, vibrant garden>You sigh>Lily nods, mistaking the sound for awe"See? Isn't it pretty?"
>>43208169>As much as this pony annoys you, you don't think your other options are acceptable alternatives>On one hoof, staying with Twilight or Applejack could provide you with valuable intel for the operation>But on the other, those two and their four friends were the most likely to find you out>And living alongside them would likely provide them too much insight into your activities>Plus, if Lily was telling the truth, she liked to spend most of her time in the wilderness, away from her home>As much as you hate it, this is clearly the best option for the 'blending in' portion of the operation"Yeah, it sure is.">You say>Lily looks like she might explode with excitement"Come on, let me show you around!">You spend the next forty-five long, torturous minutes following her around while she yaps about every corner of the house>Apparently there's a long history of roommates that have passed through this house, but lately Lily hasn't been able to find anyone to stay with her>You note several possible escape routes during the orientation but manage to refrain from actually utilizing them>You're both sitting in the living room as the tour wraps up, and Lily gazes at you as bright-eyed as ever"So, what do you think?">She says, quietly>You appear thoughtful for a moment"Seems like a great fit. How much is the room?">She cocks her head slightly, confused"As in, how many bits?">You add, exasperated>The look on her face shifts to one of amusement"Oh, nothing.">...What?
>>43208171>She laughs at your expression"I don't need the money, Lumen. I just like the company. I spend so much time out in the woods, alone, it's just nice to have somepony to come home to, you know?">Her cheeks colour slightly"J-just anypony, really.">You observe her silently for a moment, unsure of what to say for once>This pony was an odd one, for sure...>You were used to understanding others and their motivations, especially in the hive>Distressingly, Lily's motivations evaded you>And that made her unpredictable>You shuffle uncomfortably, your skin prickling"Oh... Well, um... Thanks.">She smiles shyly, and suddenly you find it hard to meet her eyes>You look away, unsure of why, and then you feel her hoof on your shoulder>Immediately you want to recoil, but you don't pull away"You're welcome, Lumen.">She murmurs, way too close to you now>You can't stop yourself from looking into her eyes>Green eyes>Green? No, they're blue; they've always been blue>A wave of dizziness washes over you, and you stagger slightly>Visions flit through your mind, almost too quick to follow>Faces that you don't recognise, but they're oddly familiar>Your head is pounding; your vision narrowing to a tunnel>You can feel your consciousness falling away>No!>You fight with all your might, trying to stay upright while the whole world slips out from under you>But it's no use>The darkness closes in around you***https://ponepaste.org/11866 updated!
>>43208163>I don't think there's anyone staying with her at the library right now."With how many transformation stories wind up in Ponyville the linrary may as well have a revolving door
>>43208174Nice one
>>43204856>>43204856So far so good.
>>43208051Oh yeah? Then how did he overtake Trixie and Sunburst?
>>43209418Uh... a wizard did it!
>>43208244Yeah it's funny to imagine if every ptfg story was canon, would be a shitshow>>43208607Thank you!
>>43207631I wonder what it is
Extracted by /hispa/ >Ser beta de rancho>a mitad de la adolescencia ser materializado en un decierto zona minero industrial >jugar con mis amigos autistas en unas ruinas mineras en el meme decierto >magia_mazonicosatanica_tercermundista_nija_del_espacio.pdf >aparece en mundo colorido <aliputocornio>la suplantación de la realeza es penada con la tortura y muerte >no saber volar >cortarce la --tula-- el cuerno para sobrevivir >trabajar como mexicano en escuestrias_unidas>trabajar para una rubia cachonda y su insestuosa familia por el sueldo minimo>me ven como un puto raro por usar habilidades extranjeras >intentar matar un dragón para salir de la pobreza >espera yo no se pelear >un pilar de piedra mata al dragón mientras trato de no morir por el fuego>tus_acciones_serán_recordadas.txt>me pagan una mierda, ya que el plan no era matarlo si no echarlo, ya que era un sucio ocupa> seguir siendo pobre <intento pagar clases de vuelo >la única maestra disponible es una maniática de pelo de colores que lo único que hace es recordarme cada 15 minutos lo mierda que onions y lo buena y excepcional que es ella volando <vuelo_basico_desbloqueado.bin>incapaz de golpear un árbol correctamente >obligado a ser negro que trae la mierda de animales como fertilizante >conocer a la vendedora... no me dice una mierda >veo un conejo blanco >el hijo de puta me apuñala la pierna >intento golpearlo pero una presencia me clava la mirada en la nuca >me voy literal con la mierda <conozco a otro humano >es un maldito pedrofilo en potencia >cuerpo de loli equina cae inerte suelo >pierdo el conocimiento >sangre_everywhere.png>nunca pensé que mi primera kill sería alguien de mi propia especie >loli equina estar bien, solo desmayada por droga >entregar loli equina a sus padres <su sonrisa me devuelve algo de humanidad>intento volver a casa >no se leer una mierda>pregunto por mi viejo mundo en la biblioteca, me tratan de raro y loquito "es imposible que los simios hablen">no conose México kek<intentar reconstruir mi vida >trato regularizar mis papeles >voy a la escuela>voy a la secundaria>ni una mierda del viejo mundo>me toma algunos meses <ahora onions ciudadano¡>camino al rancho>dragón salvaje aparese >no logro ni reaccionar >me golpea , me muerde >isBoretime.mp4>no se como mierda estoy vivo >de alguna manera quede Atrapado en la garganta >los 90 segundos más largos de mi burra vida >el dragón cae muerto asfixiado >tus_acciones_serán_recordadas.txt x2>me desliso a fuera >camino al rancho, empapado , mordido y golpeado ...kek!!!
>>43208174Really interested to see where this goes.
>>43209831What is /hispa/?
>>43207631>Of course you knew what it was>Sunburst handed it to you>It was a cassette recorder, like the ones you saw on films>You instinctively turn it over, to see what was Sunburst using as a power source>Do batteries even exist in Equestria?>Apparently not, because there is no battery slot on sight>”It doesn't use batteries”, Sunburst said coldly, as if he was reading your mind“How do you use it then?”>”Royal guards use magic to record and play tapes”>”Will any of you say what the heck is that?!”, yelled a clearly frustrated Trixie“It's a tape recorder. It's what the guards use to record interrogations”>Starlight approaches Sunburst, looking intrigued>”Only some Royal Guards are able to use magic. And most probably, only some of them are trusted with interrogations.”>”The fact that you found both a tape and a tape recorder is highly unlikely, Sunburst”>Once again, Sunburst obnoxiously adjusted his glasses before answering>”It's quite strange actually, because I felt as if that tape and recorder were left intentionally for someone to find it”>”Who sold it to you?”>Now it was Starlight who started to sound like an interrogator, yet Sunburst carried on keeping his smug attitude>”Didn't ask their name, and I doubt it is of importance”>”Wait a minute!”, interrupted Trixie>”How did you even get to make it work? You’re not a Royal Guard!”>”Turns out any kind of magic is enough to make it work. You see, the secret is in how hard it is to come by this thing. They’re supposed to keep it under lock and key”>”That’s why I think whoever left the tape and the recorder at the antique shop didn’t do it for money; they wanted to catch someone’s attention”>”By the way, that’s the same place where I bought the cookies Trixie ate”>”What?! You gave me cookies you found at an antique shop?”>”Well, you clearly liked them. That mean my theory was right: expiration dates are meaningless”>Starlight and you roll your eyes at the same time“Listen, uh… I just want to go to Canterlot. In my van, by train, by foot, I don’t care. But I will do whatever it takes to find Mark”>Saying your friend’s name filled you with determination>If Equestria really is like the TV show, you don’t think they’ve used violence against Mark>Or at least, you don’t want to think about it
>>43210047>A moment of silence passes before Starlight takes the initiative to talk>”You won’t go to Canterlot on your own”>That caught you completely by surprise>Trixie pulled Sunburst aside and stood in front of you>”Exactly. You won’t go out by yourself”>She looked at you, briefly smiling>You feel moved by their attitude>A sense of security gets into your mind, if only temporarily“Please, tell me what we can do. I need to find Mark. He’s my only friend.”>Starlight and Trixie look at each other>”Uh… I suppose we could take the train to Canterlot and ask around”, Starlight said>Trixie nodded“Yes, excellent. Let’s go there now, please”>”Wait”>Sunburst interrupted the conversation, but without looking directly at any of you, his eyes pointing at the sky instead>”The train to Canterlot doesn’t leave until six. We have time”“Uh… Okay, I can wait in my van until it’s time”>”You haven’t eaten anything today. Come inside”>Trixie cocks an eyebrow, shocked by Sunburst’s change of attitude“I… I can’t leave my van unattended”>”Look around, Kai. My only neighbors are old ponies who mind their own business. They will pose no harm to your wagon”>You look around, and quickly notice Sunburst was undoubtedly right>Only a couple of houses are seen surrounding Sunburst’s place, and they are in complete silence>”Let’s go inside and plan on what to do. I can prepare something to eat”>”No more food from the antique shop!”, demanded Trixie>”Okay, okay! Only fresh food from now on!”>Both Starlight and Sunburst chuckled>For the first moment since you met these three, the tension has begun to subside>But you are pretty sure it won’t last>Sunburst makes a gesture with his right hoof inviting everyone to get inside>Starlight and Trixie both softly tell you “come on”>You take a few seconds before following them, but before you cross the door, Sunburst speaks to you>”I’m sorry for making you cry”, he said, again without looking at you“It’s okay, Sunburst”>A subtle smile crept onto Sunburst’s face, and for once it didn’t appear smug or double-faced to you
>>43210049Although it's linked at the top of the thread, I suck at quoting myself between threads, so I'm leaving my PonePaste again just in case:https://ponepaste.org/11832
>>43210053It's good to remind people, and to give new readers an easy way to start the story.
>>43209189It's probably going to be a long time till i post more of it. It's a desktop project for sure with lots of characters
>>43210047Apparently batteries do exist in Equestria if Sunburst knows what they are.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oYopEdtM9hA
>>43211471Trixie doesn't appreciate the plotholes to be noticed by the readers!
https://pastebin.com/2kZXHFWn>Finally have life sorted out, promising job, my own home to live in, independence>and it's being robbed from me by a FUCKING BANANA PEEL in a FUCKING STARE WELL!!!!!!>Arms broken, ribs cracked, Cant feel any pain, Shock?>Try to lift head>*CRUUUCCKCKC* AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!>oh wonderful! It’s not shock, my neck is broken too!>and I feel something warm and wet pooling around my head>I'm dying, never to see my friends or family ever again, all because some moron decided to litter>vision blurring, eyelids heavy, thoughts becoming shatner-ian and sluggish>NO! can't fall asleep, wouldn't wake up....>need to.. hold..... on.....>contrary to popular depiction it seems that death is not a cold grip, but more of a warm embrace>it's dark, but like the kind of dark on a summer night, very relaxing, thoughts still sluggish, time is a blurring together, I can hear and feel my heartbeat, oddly healthy >suddenly notice, something, I can feel another heartbeat, all around me>God is that you?>again, thoughts are still sluggish, and time is bleeding together>not sure when I realized it, but the space I'm in is finite and shrinking>after an eternity and feeling like I'm about to go mad from confinement, I feel a push from all directions, it repeats, in synch with the heartbeat that had kept me soothed and sane all this time>I see a light, it seems my trek to the other side is almost finished>Having accepted my fate I try with all my might to reach that light>The light is blinding and kind of cold actually>But I emerge, it feels like my (after?)life depends on it>still can't see anything, feel myself being lifted up by nothing>and feel a hard slamming sensation on my rear>my body(soul?) is beyond sensitive, I cry out, vision clearing>my eyes are adjusting, I see, a hospital? Why does everything look like a cartoon?>"Congratulations, a healthy Unicorn" I hear a voice say>what?>vision sharpens more, I see in the place of arms, a pair of miniscule hooves>what?!>the Doctor, levitates me over towards where I just came from, to a Pony sitting on a hospital bed>she looks tired as hell, but is beaming with joy at the sight of me, eagerly taking me in her arms(?)>look around, see more ponies, more animated looking composition, more things that make me think I'm having some kind of coma dream>WHAT!!?>a male walks in, and embraces the woman holding me>honey, she's beautiful>wait, she?>what.
>>43211921>I'm panicking right now, having an existential meltdown in my head, can't vocalize beyond simple grunts and cries, flailing about.>"I think she's hungry">I'm not hungry I'm having a panic attack I'm not your daughter I'M->Nipple, Milk, Food, Yummy, Good.... Sleepy....>I re-awaken in the home of my "new" parents, in a crib, it's quiet, there is a mobile over my head>with little else to do I take this chance to think now that I'm not panicking>some time later after I've gotten my bearings, thoughts STILL Slowed down for some reason>okay so, existential confirmations>Souls Exist>Reincarnation Exists>and alternate universes Exist>also I seem to be a Unicorn filly born to a Male unicorn and Female Pegasus>my brain is full of All of the Fuck right now>as I collect my thoughts I realize, all that time from the moment I shut my eyes in the stairwell, was me in the womb, in a way the sluggish thought process probably kept me from going crazy>was still wondering why it took my so long to form my thoughts right now>Oh no, I'm an infant, that means I have an infant's brain, with all my adult memories and ideas, like trying to play a current gen game on a 95>I have a fresh start, but I have to grow up all over again>learn to walk and talk again, the rigors of potty training, growing my teeth, I really hope I don't need braces this time, and Oh god, puberty again>as a girl>as a girl horse>I want to get off the ride...>it's been a couple weeks since then, a nice upper story apartment in Manehattan is my new home>The New Parents are mercifully not subjecting me to baby talk, they seem relieved at how little I cry, glad I have other means of signaling them>they have taken notice, I'll need to pace myself, don't want to seem too smart>New Mom is a delivery mare, and New Dad runs a small but successful restaurant>it serves Hot Dogs, Thank god I'm still an omnivore!>also walking was much easier than expected, I'm bounding about and only using a stroller when I’m tired, which is more often than I keep expecting.>I suspect magic will take longer, and I have Cutie marks to worry about>as much as I hate the show, I can't help but wonder if this is what it's like to be Stewie
>>43211925>managed talking a year in>regained continence shortly after (THANK GOD)>trying to hang on to memories, start writing as much of old life as possible into a journal as soon as I work out even basic writing>New Life not bad, Dad's kind of a hardass but plays as hard as he works, Mom seems to love my "Tomboy" Streak>Year 4>School go's well, after growing into my new brain my mind is as sharp as the day I fell>my overqualified smarts are offset by my laziness, and issues being patronized>it's said that my cravings for independence have made me seem anti-social>naturally I can't relate to classmates very well, I'm constantly talking to teachers instead>casually doodling stuff from my world's media>everyp0ny thinks it's original>hehehehehe>Year 10>Rookie Author of many "Original" Stories>I seem to have single hoofedly founded Sci-Fi in Equestria at the "Humble age of Ten">Mild fame, but not considered abnormal beyond my alleged creativity>Year 12>Cutie Mark earned>it is a Camp Fire, with a pen drawing symbols into it>I guess it symbolizes the passing down of stories and stuff>Basically a nice way of saying my talent is plagiarism>introducing Superhero comics to equestria, my magic gives me perfect pen dexterity>I will have a monopoly on Marvel, DC and all the other big name heros!>mwuahahahahahaha!>year 14>freshman year of high school starts>have a couple friends, nothing too fancy>first heat, is torture.....>I still like girls, but no matter what I do, Boys invade my thoughts>and dreams>dirty dreams>currently having a crisis of orientation>I cant come out to Mom and Dad that I'm turning Strait!>year 14 still>gaining more fame as a creative prodigy>after adapting various Crossover works I seem to have intrigued philosophers and intellectuals about the idea of alternate universes>I also remade WH40k, and made the Angry Mareines canon>Even across universes I could feel /tg/ tremble>My Necron army lives again>have been dating some guys and girls, mostly non-dedicated things for me to test the waters>also sheepishly asked Mom where to buy "personal toys">she is possibly the (second?) coolest mom ever>Just a note, Pony Sex-Ed is Awkward as hell
>>43211927>year 15>New Sibling on the way>loaded from author work>with all these bits, there is little I can't get>which has become a problem>I recently realized that a good chunk of my "friends" are just hanging out with me because I have dosh>and because I'm a "hot piece of flank">yes both Fillies and Colts have given this compliment>I'm in desperate need for a real emotional connection>One Month later, I meet a unicorn girl from Las Pegasus>contrary to the name it is not a pegasus dominated city>it also seems my works have not spread out that far yet>she doesn't recognize me>she's also open minded....>date arranged, quiet picnic in local park>date with Blue Bell (yes that's her name) is going well>eventually bring up the author thing, she seems more interested in me as a person, likes dislikes, hobbies etc.>I babble on, becoming a nervous wreck>I fear eventually turning my Cutie Mark into a plate of pasta at this rate>she laughs>FUCK, She thinks I’m a loser!>never mind, she just thought my flailing was funny>we enjoy the company, not needing to say much>before we part, she kisses my horn...>for reference those are very sensitive, as a fellow unicorn she would know this, she must REALLY like me, or she's in heat.
>>43210049Glad they've made up.
Man, i kinda forgot how fun it is to write racism against ponies
Is perverse jealousy a contributing factor to pony racism?If all your friends got turned into ponies but you didn't, would you resent them for it?
>>43212441Not in my case, in this story the people who took Pon-E are overwhelmingly drug users and other types of degenerates
>>43213150This would be the least horrible thing that has ever occurred in that show
>>43211545Stallions fold under the lightest pressure from a slutty Anon.
https://pastebin.com/aYPPij5D>Wha- happened?>where am I?>Why can't I see?>or move?>OR BREATH!>I struggle with all my might, everything feels wrong>as I panic my body starts running on autopilot.>find myself pounding the wall of my prison with my face>I break thru, I see the outside world as my eyes adjust to the light>it's animated, literally....>I look down and realize, I was in an egg>I just hatched from an egg...>I have a beak, talons for hands, underdeveloped wings on my back, I'm covered in down>Wha....>in a panicked confusion, I start wailing about, echoing in the small corner I'm in>A passing Griffin notices me, looking in with irritation at my cries at first but a moment of concern graces her beak>wait, is that Gilda?!>She picks me up, my lower half still in my shell>"Hello? Someone missing a Hatchling?" she called out, looking for my parents who probably don't exist, she seems eager to be rid of me, but not before I'm safe....>She searches high and low>while I question my sanity, I keep my mouth(beak?) shut so as to reduce the burden of my rescuer>4 hours later, I'm still trying to come to grips with the existential crisis>and have no recollection of how I got here>She asks a number of official looking places, they have no leads for her>she's stuck with me, and I'm stuck with her>also I forgot to mention the fact that we are up in CLOUDSDALE>with me unable to fly, the gaps give me a fright, breaking my silence>I hope I don't end up having to eat worms>it seems that Cloudsdale has a Griffin district, the clouds here are more drab, seemingly an aesthetic choice, there are more earthy tones and an atmosphere of hardiness here>Gilda was clearly not looking forward to raising me, to be honest, I was with her on this>Her home, a Cloud house on the outer end of town, was sized like a studio apartment, it seems she and dash have more in common than I knew>entering, she casually plops my shell on the counter of a table, shattering it>I give her the meanest glare I can for the rough treatment>She just smirks, I suddenly realize a mean look from an infant wont look very intimidating>her smile softens, "you got guts kiddo I'll give you that, most hatchlings I've seen never shut up at all, you kept that beak closed most of the trip. Ugghh, you need a name, and food, and a bed...">"why me?" she asks, echoing my own thoughts
>>43213722>Second day>neither of us are please with hygienic arrangements>but she seems to have picked up on my embarrassment>food is surprisingly normal stuff, granted always with milk as the drink>beaks are nice, no need to regrow teeth>no teeth, and yet toothy grins can be given, freaking cartoon worlds>No official name for me, but for now She's calling me Squirt>Hear a knock on the door, Gilda answers>a familiar Mail Mare is at the door with a package>"oh hey" Gilda seems familiar with her to a degree, the tone is weary but not resentful>"Hey there, Got a package from-" She looks at me, I think>"what? Oh the kid.">"So, who's the lucky Man?">oh boy, I am now suddenly aware of how awkward her social life is going to be with me around>"..... No one">"you had another break up?">"NO!" Oh she is getting a little defensive "I found the little runt out on the street, wasn't about to leave it there to rot, nobody's that heartless!">"Well thats a very good thing you did then, I'm sure your friends are all very proud!">"yeah, they're thrilled" the tone gave me the sudden impression that these chats with the mail mare were probably the most social interaction she's had in awhile>they do some signing and she takes the box, with the door closed she opens it and reads an enclosed note>she seems to get angrier as she reads it further, finally throwing the whole package at the wall on the opposite end of the room leaving a splatter on the wall, she runs into her bed and well, withdraws.>I hop down and take a look at the mess, a baker's dozen of what used to be Cupcakes, with blue and pink frosting>wiping away the frosting I read the note>the note read "Hey Gilda, it's Rainbow Dash, looking back at our last meeting, me and Pinky realized we weren't exactly saints in the matter, I was too quick to let you go for a really dumb argument, and Pinky realized that she was kinda being rude with the earlier butting in, some experiences with a Donkey recently gave some perspective on that for her, we'd both love to talk more about it in person, so, we're sorry if you're sorry?">I can't say Gilda's the easiest person to read, I have no idea why she's reacting the way she is, any number of reasons, but nothing solid enough to help, it seemed that this was a matter only she could resolve for herself
>>43213729>Two hours past>she didn't move or show any signs of life beyond breathing>with two hours to observe I was able to conclude that she is actively repressing emotions, trying to not feel anything>well that's not going to do anything but turn the feelings into a poisonous bile>Unsure of myself, I move up to her, and try to make contact>*touch*>No movement>*touch*>"buzz off" no other movement>*touch*>This evoked a real reaction, rapidly rising, from her position, glaring at me with an expression of hate, "I SAID BUZZ OFF YOU LITTLE BRAT!!!">she held position>now yes, I was hurt by that, but ooh boy was I going to milk it, sometimes you have to play dirty>*sniff* *tremble* I give a pitiful sounding whimper adding to it, I'm not exactly faking the tears, building up>"No, Don't you dare...">I keep staring back at her with my sad eyes, trying to time it so she breaks when I do>"That's not fair!" she says trying to hold her own tears back>I let the dam burst and ball my eyes out, finding some catharsis as I release some of my own pent up feelings from this whole mess>She quickly loses composure too, letting all her sadness out, crying like a- well like me>"It's not fair, It's not fair." she sobs, clutching me like a teddy bear>I lose track of time for a while, We just sat there, leaning on each other emotionally>as we finally settle down, she looks at me, then at the mess she made>"Figure's you'd end up being the one taking care of me Squirt..." >before dinner she cleaned up the mess, cleaning off the note, looking at it again, without the wall of pride she had built up this time.>"So Squirt, you up for a trip this weekend?">I give some happy babbling, knowing exactly what she meant
>>43213733>So 3 more days pass until the Weekend>During that Time Squirt found itself upgraded to a proper name, like she went to an official looking place and marked it down>Also learned that Griffins lean Precocious and not Altricial (yay)>This also means that the two of us have been instinctively imprinting on each other, I have an overwhelming urge to follow her everywhere>Saturday finally comes, Commence trip to Ponyville>with us having to make use of the mutually humiliating Kid Carry harness for the flight>efficient, comfy, safe, and severely lacking in dignity for either user>First Stop is Rainbow's house>*knock* *knock*>Door Opens, But Gilda holds it closed>"Dash, before you open, please promise not to laugh...">Dash, too excited by the sound of a friend's voice, rips the door off it's hinges (given it's a cloud this isn't exactly surprising)>Proceeds to TRY not to laugh>inevitable awkward questions, but a strange fondness for the company seems to be sparking, making the odd moments worth it>"So how were the Cupcakes?">"I... Uhhh... Heh heh.....">Oh boy, the mood soured a bit, but only for a moment.>"You gotta try them for real! Come on we're going to Sugar Cube Corner now!">"No Wait->but Dash was already dragging us there, I will admit seeing her squirm is still funny as hell, as we approach she seems to stiffen more and more.>I suddenly realize that it's because this is basically the place she (now nearly) lost her closest friend, I grab her attention and give her a smile and a thumbs up, something to support her.>she relaxes and moves without needing to be dragged>we enter the den of Diabetes>No party in sight this time>no crowds>no pranks to rile her up, just a small set of snacks Pinky was making>"Wow nice work, especially given that I get to didn't even tell you she was coming">"Lazy eye means special guests!" is her response>Gilda looks at her in dubious confuzzlement>"Don't question it" Dash whisper's to her>Pinky finally looks up and sees me>Oh No...*GASP* "I'veneverseenagriffinbabybeforehe'ssocutewhatshisname?who'sthedad?whendidyoumarry?isheacuborachick?>she continued in this manner picking me up from the confines of the pouch, hugging me>Gilda, trying to mentally catch up and answer the questions as best she could was making a concerted effort to not be abrasive with her this time finally asks "Look, I know I was locking you out before, But I really do need some alone time with Rainbow Dash, Why don't you play with Squirt">Gilda you Bitch!!!>"He'll love it, I'm watching the Cakes Kids too, he's going to have so much fun with them!!">please no...>but alas I a find myself being carried upstairs by the Pink one, away from my new mommy>Did I just call Gilda Mommy?
>>43213735>I futilely reach back to her, winning a bit>Gilda just smiles and Waves>Tonight, Mommy Pays...>play time with Pound and Pumpkin Cake>This isn't Rugrats so I have no clue what they're saying, but they clearly have more going on than just a brainless infant with them>through some nonverbal communications involving Building blocks, body gestures, and a plastic spoon we collaborate our mischief>it seems they have a taste for causing trouble...>hehehehehehe...>we wait, give Mom and Dash all the time they need to catch up, they deserve that much before we unleash hell on them>Pinky remains oblivious, thinking that we are doing nothing sinister with these Dominoes, Not-Legos, building blocks, race-tracks, and wind up toys>Soon....>it went better than expected>this was a bad thing>they had to call in some guys to contain the fire>I don't even remember working with anything flammable>either way I am not arranging another prank with those two kids>freaking psychos>mercifully this level of Malice was not going to be attributed to kids like us>but Gilda still has been giving me repeated "I'm Watching you bub" Looks>with the Bakery still full of smoke, and the Cakes returning to handle their children the 3 of them decided to go on a walk, with me in tow>on Gilda's back and not in the pouch of shame this time>with the catching up done, introductions between Mom and Pinky have begum properly>aand then I notice we are heading to the edge of town, near the forest>towards a cottage>Girls let Mommy take this one step at a time, don't rush all the reconciliation, it forcing it will just make it unnatural and insincere!>but alas, they are steering an unknowing Gilda to Fluttershy's cottage, presumably to get one final apology out of her.>Must think of a way to salvage this>Think, THINK!>*knock* *knock*>CRAP!>the door opens, Fluttershy does not slam the door at the sight of the Griffin that menaced her>she actually starts chewing into her a bit before composing herself>right, assertiveness lessons, forgot that part>Mom's impressed by the growth, and we get a much more natural reconciliation than I had feared>we find ourselves spending the rest of the day just getting to know each other, >naturally Fluttershy cant keep her attention away from me>at least pinky can be distracted with her ADD>oh well, at least she can give Mom some tips with me>Any misgivings Fluttershy had with Gilda were forgotten due to the chance to be all motherly with me>It was kind of irritating>for one Flutters borderline baby talked me>Mom never really dumbed down her speech with me, I admired that kind of respect>still a first hand (Hoof? Claw?) lesson in a softer touch wouldn't be useless>Mom seemed just a but uncomfortable watching me in some one else’s care, she's more attached than she knows>then again I'm calling her Mom after only 4 days>Am I pot or Kettle?
>>43213739>We wound up getting derailed with child rearing lessons until 5PM>How Fluttershy knows so much about Griffin child care I don't know>frankly I'm a bit creeped out by it>With day time options done, Gilda, Pinky and Dash decided they'd hit up a place with karaoke, drinks and a dance floor>leaving me with Fluttershy for the night>Dinner was awkward>Mom had included some meat in every one of my meals>Flutters did not, Even as a Human I was never one for salads>I had two options, politely eat the salad (maybe gesture for some bacon bits at least) or throw a tantrum>not wanting to be anything like her horrible rabbit, I went with the former>as if to taunt me, she indeed had bacon bits, of the onions variety....>friggin tree huggers.....>I ate the salad, now I felt entitled to dessert>but she wanted to put me down for bedtime>but I'm not even tired>"Hush now, quiet now, lay down your sleepy head....">Fuck! It's going to work, her singing voice is like a velour body glove>if I still had a libido it might have turned me on>must.. stay... Awake.....>zzzzzzz.........>Dreams were weirder than normal, Human World but with Griffins mixed in>I kept flashing between my old self and an adult griffin>but at least I could talk in my dreams>Equestrian elements were gradually creeping in>why do I remember this dream so vividly?>simple, I had a visitor, who seemed to find my dreams very unusual>The Dark Blue Alicorn approached me (I initially thought she was just part of the dream, she was one of my favorite characters on the show)>"Who are you? Where are you from?" she asked a tone of scrutiny>the shock woke me up, mercifully it was morning>I was now worried>The Princesses knew...>That Morning Mom returned feeling vastly refreshed>I wish I could say the same about>back home I kept thinking about Luna's questions>Was I going to be taken away from her?>Sent back to my world?>kept under surveillance in a gilded cage?>how would mom react if she was told the truth?!>as the hours wore on, these questions mounted>Every minute that passed I expected a knock on the door from a Royal Guard>or the Element Squad, she would send them in an attempt to ease the blow to Mom>and undo all the work I put into mending her friendships>as these thoughts built up, the scenarios in my head only piled up and became more terrible>I started crying>now I usually don't cry unless I know it will serve a purpose, but this was just me losing control>as a result Mom wasn't ready for this, nothing she did could comfort the pain I was feeling>and the fact that I was causing her distress only made me hurt even more>I couldn't compose myself and Mom thought something was wrong, I wasn't acting like myself>I was scared in ways I never imagined, for the first time since hatching here I truly felt helpless
>>43213742>sleep didn't come easy that night>I dreaded it, Luna was coming for me, I knew it>I never thought I'd be lying awake in bed fearing the arrival of one of my favorite cartoon characters...>but in the end fatigue won out>no dreams this time>only Nightmares>horrific visions of spectral alicorns snatching me from Mom's grasp planting me in a cage>reverting me to my old self before her eyes>tears of betrayal running down her face>"How could you play with my heart this way you freak!?" she screamed at me>I pleaded with her, with the Princesses, tears streaming down my face but to no avail, Mom screamed at me how she never wanted to see me again, that I was nothing but a monster, no better than a changeling, the phantom princesses nodded in agreement, opening a portal to hell beneath my cage>I begged them not to throw me in, to let me show I never meant any harm, that I wasn't even trying to come here originally>they just narrowed their eyes at me, glaring at me with contempt, I was trash to them>and now they were throwing me out....>but instead of me waking up, the nightmare began looping>I don't know how many times the loop happened>it never got any less painful>once again they were about to cast me out>and then they exploded>the hell mouth vanished and so too did my cage>I was still human>"I see I left quite the impression, My sister warned me that I might have inspired something like this">"I- Uh!">"No need to fear, I'm simply sorry I could not have ended this nightmare sooner, I discussed our encounter with the other princesses, they all agreed that as a hatchling, we must communicate here, in the dream world">"are you going to take me away?">"Why would we? We would learn no more with your physical body with us than with your surrogate, we are not going to tear a new family apart over the unknown, I never meant to frighten you, I simply wanted to know you visitor, or do you prefer Squirt?">and so I told her everything I knew, she told me that she would be checking in on me via dream on a regular basis, as a non disruptive means of keeping touch>it was also the only practical means of communications as my hatchling body could not yet speak>I woke up, relieved, laughing, tears of joy one my face>and I woke Mom up, oops
>>43213747>Mom was annoyed to be woken up so early, but happy to see me acting like myself again>wait, Luna said she had discussed our encounter with the other princesses, does that include Cadence and Twilight?>The question was tossed out of my head as Gilda showed me some "Belated Birthday gifts, she had gotten me the other day, apparently Pinky's idea>I also saw her looking at real estate>it seemed that she wanted to move closer to Ponyville to keep tabs on her friend and friends of her friend>No complaints from me, cloudsdale was nice but getting dull fast for one as flightless as I>Dash was only too happy to help us move, the Mail Mare that may have started so much of this was also lending a hoof>a week later we were moved to a cloud house bordering the town>4 days after that on the ground, Mom and I were at the library, Rainbow had insisted that she give Daring Do a try>as she browsed, Twilight was looking at me>"What are you looking at, never seen a baby griffin before?" spike asked>"No" she shot back honestly, she looked back at me again, smiling reassuringly>"Hey Gilda, I know kids that don't talk can be tricky, you want me to see if I can whip up a translation spell?">I knew the real reason, Twilight wanted to talk to me personally>frankly I had mixed feelings on the matter>"nah, he can work it out on his own, he's a bright kid">Mom's confidence in me was once again a lovely asset>Twilight looked at me for a moment, "I believe you." she said back to her.>She had that look in her face>you know the one, the "I'm only pretending to drop this" face>she was going to be insistent>oh boy>well fortunately she decided not to press it yet>If Luna visits me again, I'm going to see if she can get her to be more patient>well back to contemplation on the way home>now do I abuse my archive of old world knowledge? And if so, how so?>say, did Equestria ever have Dinosaurs?>Did cave Ponie pegasi have archeopteryx wings?>How DID Griffins evolve?>all these questions and more>would not be answered today>I'd need to "Develop" these interests in order to gain any answers>on the plus side, Mom was going to read the book Rainbow recommended to me (For me was how she won her over, I forgot that part of being a kid)>Second Childhood may have more perks than I thought.
>>43213752>Mercifully the book was not the same one the series had covered>This story was "Daring Do And The Curse Of The Yeti">A story that took place after a cliffhanger of some kind in her second book, something involving a presumed dead father being alive>Mom was trying to do the character's voices, I could tell she was defaulting to what she thought a normal mother would do>I poked her during a read that strained her throat and my ears pretty harshly>The look I gave her said it all>She started reading more normally, and even chiming in her own comments on the events>now I was perfectly capable of reading but,>1. she did not know this and to let her know might strain my cover>2. It was kinda nice having her read the story to me, and I could tell she was enjoying it>I was worried that I'd nod off and she'd finish the story without me, when I noticed her speech slow down>zzzzzzzzz>she read herself to sleep>I carefully saved the spot in the book and curled up to join her>2 months pass, we bond, play, learn>all the schmaltzy stuff>Also despite Luna's promises to talk to Twilight, that Purple mare is still curious about me>fortunately she know's better than to get between a mother and her kid>especially not a Griffin mother>ESPECIALLY NOT GILDA>also it is now Nightmare Night>Luna is gracing Manehattan this year, having heard that it has an active night life>I was able to make my costume a Hippogriff>and just to troll her and Dash, I made the back end look like Dash>Oh yeah, I've been treating "Auntie Rainbow" like my second Mom>My Shipping has not been able to intensify>Then again the subject of orientation never came up in canon>Well until I work out how they swing I cant play matchmaker beyond some jokes nobody would accuse me of making deliberately.>Also youthful body, very receptive to candy>Me and Pinky are bounding about town, and I'm working out my wings>I am still scootaloo tier on the flight front>energy low....>thoughts slowing....>ne-eed, more candy...>SUGAR FIX BACK>I FUCKING LOVE NIGHTMARE NIGHT!!!!!!
>>43213756>Hearths Warming Eve>Half secularised Christmas, Half Founders Day>I still get gifts>Mane six invited to play, not in it this time, they decided to watch this year>Dash Brought Mom over of course>and Mom Brought me>Griffins grow fast, I can walk on my own and even get some lift with my wings now>play went off without a hitch>apparently Mom had never seen it>most griffins don't seem interested in Equestrian history>Twilight was changing that>Twilight had finally laid off as well>apparently Luna would contact her after our interviews and tell her everything, just to get it out of the way>Gifts were most of the typical young boy stuff you'd expect>Mom had gotten an aerodynamic flight suit>she gave Dash a Griffin made shield>I gave them a hoof made card, with a doodle of them Getting married>with Dash as the groom Mom as the bride>Dash got a good chuckle out of it>Mom thinks she may need to give me "The Talk" ASAP>Good times>Tonights dream, Luna visits, usual well wishing, but then>she tells me, Mom cant be left in the dark forever, not after Twilight tells her friends, which she says is soon....>Hearts and Hooves day>AKA Shipping Intensifies, day>seriously though it was mostly friend level stuff>Pinkie was here with the Cake Twins, Their parents on a date>Mom was trying to see if she had a date of her own>Even with the bridges repaired Pinkie still always had Mom on edge>can't really blame her>and then Pinkie found my doodles of Mom and Dash>she got a good laugh out of it, to Mom's embarrassment>She Looked at me, I was caught with my smirk on>Over the year she was catching on to how smart I was>she didn't know the truth, but she knew full well that I was a wily one>This Joke was getting stale in her eyes>Dash always found it flattering that I saw her as family>Mom would just blush, or laugh nervously>Now Pinkie had seen this>well her anger was beginning show>Mom's scary when she's angry>Pinkie, having learned a lot about her, promptly stopped laughing and apologize>with the mood calming Mom gave the usual explanation about my naivety, which she at this point no longer believed herself>Dash arrived soon after, she and Mom left to hang out, Pinkie nearly letting the obvious joke slip her mouth, but stifling it just in time.>Pinkie took me and the Twins back to sugar cube>She after releasing the kids into their room, she sat me down and said>"You're pushing you're luck Squirt, You don't want to give Gilda a shock, what if this make her realize no kid is that witty?">My eye's bug out>"No I'm not psychic, Twilight told me, and Applejack, and Fluttershy, and Rarity, and Spike, and Rainbow Dash">This did not comfort me, they KNEW, and now Rainbow knew I wasn't just being ignorant when I made those jokes>....>Well I knew that I was cutting down on the shipping jokes from now on
>>43213759>a week later, Dash Volunteers to watch me>We're alone>We both know the other knows>She looks at me with uncharacteristic seriousness>then she smiles>and hands me some paper and pen>motor skills have gotten better, and we have communication now!>well I try to let her know I didn't mean anything by it other than the part where I saw her as family>she told me she was actually cool with it, she and Mom already knew what they were and nothing was going to change that (what they were she never explained to me, She's taunting me I know it)>we hung out, played some pranks, read some Daring Do>She told me that after getting over the shock, she was mad at Twilight for being such a blabber mouth, Fluttershy and Rarity were just flat out curious>Pinkie I already knew as enthusiastic about such an exotic friend>Only Applejack was suspicious, wondering if I was some new extra-dimensional changeling>no that doesn't make sense, AJ just can't trust anyone who lies as long as I did>She and Twilight really need to understand discretion>Dash, just felt like making sure I stopped those jokes after she knew I was being deliberate>She really is a bro >next day, Mom is off with family, needing to explain shit to them and ease them into the situation, she'll be here with them at 6>the six and spike are watching me for the day at one of their usual picnics>AJ is eyeballing me, Twilight feels more at liberty to talk>Spike seems to be the one who gets me right now, understands than under all the alien-ness, I'm just a guy>Rarity and Flutters ask me questions, Twilight tries to take the load off by answering for me, but they assume she's being rude, they'd rather read it from me>No matter how many times I tell them It's okay>Pinkie is trying to ask what I want for my birthday>then AJ asks the question I stopped asking too long ago>"How the hey did'ya get here?"
>>43213761>as the time for me to meet Mom's Family loomed closer, I found myself questioning again>How DID I get here?>Why am I here, did I die and get reincarnated?>am I dreaming?>What about my original family?>But I had to save it for later, bring the question up for Luna.>Mom was here to pick me up, and she felt that this should be between family>Mom's Family reunion was eventful>her Doting and embarrassing mother, Stella, Her eccentric father Iroh, or should that be Grandma and Grandpa>and her sister/my aunt Grizelda, a perky little ball of fur and feather that reminded me of Scootaloo with a hint of Babs's bite to her>overall the parents were happy to see me and we generally being friendly to her, talking at length to catch up with her recent events, the reconciliation I instigated was news to them and triggered some hugs>Grizelda idolized her older sibling, so seeing her 180 on Dash again was confusing her deeply "Make up your mind! How can I write who the villains in your autobiography are if you keep going back to being friends with them!?">Grandma and Grandpa were wondering if it was fate, given that it was when she found me that she started changing her outlook>maybe it was.....>but enough of naval contemplation for the moment>Grizelda had been feeding Mom a lot of praise thru her life>not all without merit, Mom's a skilled flyer and one tough cookie>she showed me a photo from a claw to claw fight she had with a Manticore as if I didn't know the last part>but she seemed to be one of the roots of her ego>she looked at me with scrutiny as they all mused at me catalyzing her reconnections>it seemed that Mom in her anger had fed her a lot of bad talk about Dash and company>seeing her "flip flop" on the matter because of me had her very suspicious>but I was wondering how many friends Grizelda had>but before things could get heated it was time for us to go back home>I looked forward to sleeping, I had questions to run by Luna
>>43210049>Back at Sunburst’s house, you see the sun hanging low in the sky, casting a pleasant warmth through the windows>”So, I was thinking I could prepare a salad? I have bread I bought this morning…”>Sunburst hesitated for a second as soon as he saw Trixie’s annoyed expression>”At the bakery! It was just made!”>Trixie let out a sigh of relief>”I also have some crackers and peanut butter somewhere in the pantry, I think… that is, as long as Trixie hadn’t been peeking around”>Trixie averted her eyes, exaggerating her annoyance>”Starlight, you're the slicing expert. Please, lend me a hand”>You nodded and followed Sunburst to the kitchen >You were sure slicing vegetables was the least of his worries at the moment >You enter the kitchen and notice Sunburst letting out a sigh>He takes a cabbage out of a cabinet, and hands you a knife>”Please, I'm terrible at cutting cabbage. I'll go find the tomatoes”“You didn't make me come to the kitchen just to cut cabbage”>Sunburst stops his search for the tomatoes and looks at you>”Listen… I know I have been acting a bit… off…”“Sunburst, why didn't you tell me about all this before?”>You start cutting the cabbage in thin slices, trying to contain your frustration>“I wasn't expecting you to bring one of them to my house”“One of them?”>”You heard the tape. A pony shows up in the middle of nowhere, without recollection of his origins, but sure that he wasn't a pony in the first place”>”Doesn't that remind you of Kai just a little bit?”>It actually reminds you of Kai a lot>He literally told you he comes from a place called “Earth” and that he was “taller in his place of birth”>In other words, he literally spat out he wasn't a pony>Without counting the fact he recognised the pony being interrogated after listening to just a second of the tape“This couldn't have been a coincidence. And I'm not just talking about the tape. Either they came here voluntarily and are hiding it for some reason, or they were chosen to come to Equestria against their will”>”But why? What's the purpose of bringing… beings from Celestia knows where and leaving them adrift?”>Sunburst resumes his search for the tomatoes, and brings out a bottle of olive oil with them“We might find out in Canterlot…”>Emphasis in ‘might’>”How, though?”>Good question…“We could ask Twilight's brother”>”Shining Armor?”>Sunburst stopped cutting the tomatoes for a moment to think about your suggestion>”Are you sure he can be trusted?”“What are you saying? He's literally Twilight's brother”>”That's why I'm asking”, Sunburst replied while adjusting his glasses>What is he implying?
>>43214375>”I just don't want the higher ups to become aware of this issue right away”“Why? I thought you wanted answers”>Having finished with the cabbage, you go look for the bread in Sunburst’s cupboard>”Whoever left that tape and that recorder at the antique shop did it because he wanted someone to find them. And most probably, they did it because they couldn't talk to anypony else about what they heard”>Sunburst's theory brought a myriad of questions to your mind you quickly managed to repress“Here's the bread. We should go to the station with time if we don't want to miss the train”>You head out of the kitchen, but Sunburst blocks your path with his right hoof to stop you>“There's one more thing, Starlight”>“When I said any kind of magic could make that recorder work…”“You weren't being completely honest”>”As far as I know, Royal Guard equipment that uses magic can only be used by Royal Guards”>”That tape recorder was tampered with to allow anyone to use it”
>>43212490Hey, we resemble that remark.
>>43214650Then you'll probably love this fan fic
>>43214378Nice
>>43216513Thank you anon.
Y'know, I'm surprised there hasn't been a version of TCB where Celestia just force-feeds PON-E pills to humanity.
>>43217943>"Don't drink the tap water! They're putting chemicals in the water that turn people into ponies!">bronies begin to die en masse of water toxicity
>>43213764Nice green anon, thanks for posting!Hope you continue it.
>>43208174>You open your eyes, but the darkness remains>The ground beneath you is cold, and hard>You feel panic begin creeping into your chest, like icy tendrils around your heart>It dissipates as your training takes over, and you wait for your eyes to adjust>The ceiling slowly swims into view>It's... The ceiling of your bunk, in your barracks>A voice from your right jolts you to alertness"Nyxis, come on!">Your head snaps to the right>In the dim lighting you can barely make out the form of one of your brothers>But you recognise the voice>It had been so long since you had last heard that voice"... Vrisk?">You ask>You can hear the annoyance in his voice"Who else, idiot? Hurry up, Kryssik is on the war path today.">You roll out of bed, landing gracefully on your hooves, cursing yourself for oversleeping"You should watch out for yourself, Vrisk. If Kryssik catches you warning me you know he'll punish you too.">You growl>You can just see a crescent of white in the darkness"If picking up your slack makes that bastard's day a little worse, it's worth it.">A grin seems determined to make it's way across your face, too, but you resist it"... Thanks. Alright, let's go."
>>43218229>You bolt for the drill hall, beating your wings and taking off along the way>The black, porous stone races past you as you fly nearly blind, Vrisk not far behind you>The darkness in the hive was oppressive, but you knew this place like the back of your hand>You can feel a gentle breeze blowing gently through the holes in the rock>The structure had been carefully engineered to ensure good air circulation, and it happened to make flying easier, too>Ahead, you can see a bright light spilling from the entrance to the drill hall, illuminating the nearby stone>You swoop low, and alight on softly on the stone floor, squinting>You can hear Vrisk land behind you, considerably less softly>A soft dripping sound echoes through the cavernous structure>Drip... Drip... Drip...>What is that?>You shake your head>You don't have time for this right now>Walking through the drill hall entrance, the transition from near total darkness to overwhelming light is nothing short of blinding>You continue walking forward, forcing your eyes wide open in the hopes they'll adjust faster>Vrisk's laboured hooffalls clatter across the stone floor as the drill yard finally starts to become visible to you>Daylight pours in through an opening in the hive ceiling, brightly illuminating the entire courtyard>Your comrades are lined up in parade order, their backs to you, standing in rigid silence>You pick up a trot and take a place at the end of the line, immediately mimicking the position of the cadet to your left>You don't move a muscle as Vrisk lines up next to you, your eyes slowly scanning the courtyard>Kryssik was nowhere in sight... You suppose you must have made it in time>But something was wrong
>>43218233>You look to your left, your fellow cadets standing with the same discipline you had worked so hard to master>But in their eyes... There's nothing>No fierce, competitive spark>Their eyes are blank; completely vacant>Drip... Drip... Drip...>Your heart sinks"They're all dead, you know.">Vrisk's voice rasps from your right>You feel a cold chill spread through your body; a bone-chilling dread that you had never experienced before>Every fibre of your being screams not to look at him"Out of every one of us, Nyxis, you're the only one left.">You turn your head, slowly, fighting the instinct to run, to be anywhere but here>Your own fear sickens you; it is beneath you, and by the Queen it will not master you>Vrisk gazes back at you with the same vacant, dead eyes as your other comrades>Vibrant green blood runs from his eyes and mouth, completely at odds with his black carapace>Drops fall from his face, splattering on the ground at his hooves>Drip... Drip... Drip...>Your lip twitches as you force yourself to face him"If you had been stronger, perhaps you would have lived instead of I, Vrisk.">You snarl>Those dead eyes bore into yours"We all died for you, Nyxis. To make you what you are.">You put a hoof forward, planting you legs on the ground"Shut up. I'd kill you all again in a heartbeat."
>>43218241>Vrisk smiles, his bloodied teeth a grisly sight"I'm sure she's very proud of what you've become.">He spits>You wait for him to act first; to go on the offensive, to do something, anything>But he simply stands there, that ghastly smile mocking you>Drip... Drip... Drip...>You lunge at him, enraged, your teeth closing around his throat, your hooves on his chest>And then you're falling, the light becoming unbearably bright; so bright it hurts>Your head pounds, feeling as though a sliver of ice has been driven through your skull>And then...***
>>43218245>Your eyes open; a snarl on your face, the taste of blood still in your mouth>And you're confronted with an unfamiliar room>The air is fresh, the empty room a sterile, medical white>A window lies across from you, the stars visible above the distant horizon>Dark already? Damnit, how long have you been out?>You have a splitting headache, and you look around the room, dazed, trying in vain to shake that... Dream, or whatever it was>It couldn't be... Changelings don't dream, ever>You're lying in a medical gurney of some kind, a blanket draped over your body>It all comes rushing back to you>Lily getting too close, and then... This must be the Ponyville hospital>You shake your head, furious at yourself for having fainted because of some... Hallucination>When did this weakness creep into your mind?>Kryssik would be so damn smug to see you right now>No! You harden your resolve, your temper flaring>You are the tip of the spear, and this is the best chance you'll ever have at winning your Queen's favour>Whatever disease this is... It will break upon your iron will like waves on the rocks>Your headache slowly begins to ebb away, but you still feel sick to your stomach>Your thoughts turn to the... Vision you had had, for lack of a better word>It was... Partially a memory, but it wasn't quite right>Vrisk had been killed by the Queen, not you>And your fellow cadets... They couldn't all be dead, right?>Of course, many of them had not survived their training, but four others had graduated alongside you, Vrisk included
>>43218249>The sound of a door opening interrupts your thoughts, and your eyes snap over to see an unfamiliar pony entering the room>She's wearing the garb of a nurse, and she looks pleasantly surprised to see you awake"Oh, hello! You're up, that's good.">She smiles and walks over to your bed"I'm Nurse Redheart. How are you feeling?">You glance out the window, trying to estimate the time, but without a full view of the night sky it's difficult to tell"Great, actually.">You lie"What time is it, Nurse?">You have somewhere to be, likely soon>She answers without checking the watch on her leg"About Nine O'clock. You've been unconscious for just over four hours, Mr. Vale. Why, do you have somewhere to be?">You roll out of the bed, ignoring her look of alarm as you land on the ground and stumble slightly before catching yourself>You swallow your rage at such a simple blunder"I just need to get home, actually. Been a long day, and all. Now, if you don't mind showing me the exit...?">She raises an eyebrow, unamused"Did you not hear me? You've been unconscious for four hours, and you look like you're about to fall over. You're not going anywhere.">Her eyes are hard, her voice firm, that smile replaced by a hard, thin line>You stare at her for a moment, taken aback by her resistance>You had expected all of these ponies to be pushovers... You make a mental note to keep an eye on this nurse>She was apparently tougher than she looked>You briefly imagine a few places you could stash her body if it came to that
>>43218251>Ultimately, you decide it's too risky>You lean into that exhaustion she seems to see in you, adopting a pathetic expression"Please, is there any way I can be released early? I really don't like hospitals.">She examines your expression for a moment, and then her eyes soften sympathetically"Well... If you have somepony that can come pick you up, I suppose I can sign for an early release.">Great... You sigh, your exhaustion suddenly all too real"Yes, there is somepony...">It turns out the pony in question is already in the waiting room, fast asleep in one of the chairs>Apparently she had been waiting for you to wake up this whole time>That dedication is... Unexpected, and it makes you uncomfortable>Lily's obvious infatuation with you... With 'Lumen Vale,' presented problems>On one hoof, it would make her quite easy to manipulate>But on the other... It would make her harder to steer clear of, should you need to get away>And you were going to need to get away, tonight, no less>Nurse Redheart gently wakes her up, and seeing how relieved she is to see you makes you feel ill all over again>By the Queen... This damn pony wears her heart on her hoof>You steadfastly avoid looking at her as she signs some paperwork with the nurse, despite her repeated glances toward you>You're out the front doors the moment she gives the clipboard back to the nurse>She trots to catch up with you, of course>You continue walking, tense, waiting for her to speak>But she just walks next to you, in silence>The silence stretches out for the next several minutes as the two of you walk>Eventually she stops"Um... Lumen?"
>>43218253>You reluctantly stop and look back at her>Looking at her now, she's clearly miserable>She speaks up again, although it obviously pains her"My place is this way...">She gestures to the left>You knew that, of course"I just need to be alone for a bit, Lily.">She looks like she's about to cry"I'm sorry- I- I didn't mean to-">You cut her off"Let's just... Not talk about this, okay?">She nods, holding back tears>When she speaks again it's nearly a whisper"... You're still going to come back though, right?">You sigh, a mixture of feelings running through you>Irritation, exasperation... And something else, something you don't want to think about>You push it away"Yes. I just need some time alone.">She sniffles"You promise?">You swallow your irritation"... Yeah, I promise. I'll see you back at the- your house.">You turn away before she can say anything else>As you walk away through the dark and empty streets of Ponyville you can feel her eyes on your back>You try to ignore the uncomfortable feeling in the pit of your stomach... But that unease stays with you>You turn your thoughts to the task at hand>Of course, you didn't actually need any time alone... Quite the opposite, actually>You had a meeting to get to, and you were already late***https://ponepaste.org/11866 updated!Gonna take a bit of a break because I have some IRL shit to do for the next week or so. If I have time I'll keep writing.
>>43218261A pretty tame update, im somewhat confused by what the hallucinations were supposed to be about. Maybe i missed something in an earlier post
>>43218361Maybe, but it's more likely that I'm trying to do too much at once. The entire picture hasn't been painted yet, I'm just putting the pieces together slowly. I'm hoping it will come together cleanly but... I won't know until we get there. It's kind of an experiment for me. Anyway, if you have any questions you want me to answer, DM me in the discord.
>>43218386I keep forgetting there's a discord. If the hallucinations are building up to something I can't wait to see
>>43214378>”You know, Kai, you're not very good at relaxing”>Trixie noticed your sweat still coming down from your forehead“Sorry. I didn't have much time to practise lately”>You were sitting near the window to look at your van, the only possession you still had in this world>The one you'll have to leave unsupervised in a couple of hours>Trixie simply sat down next to you in a cushion, looking comfortable>”Fortunately for you, Trixie is an expert at doing nothing”>She points at the cushion, inviting you to join her>Your favourite pony ever is inviting you to sit next to her>Your old /mlp/ self would have gone nuts just at the idea to touching her body>You obey, sitting next to her and trying in vain to relax>A few seconds pass in silence>The afternoon sun casts long shadows across the floor>Somewhere in the kitchen, you hear Starlight chopping something>”Kai… May I ask you something?”“Sure”>”Where do you come from?”“Uh… it’s a place called ‘Earth’”>”’Earth?’ What kind of name is that?”>That seems to be a popular opinion today“Clearly not a very creative one”>”Uh… Who is Mark, exactly?”“He’s the only friend I’ve got”>And then, you suddenly ask yourself: does he still consider you a friend?>Has he ever thought about you during all this time?>You take a deep breath, trying to banish those questions from your mind>”Did you live in a remote area?”>She doesn’t get it“No, I was just… too much of an arsehole to keep my other friends”“Mark was the only real friend I had… And he vanished a year ago, leaving no trace behind”“His grandmother called me shortly after he moved in with her to tell me he was nowhere to be found”“Since then, I couldn’t stop thinking about the day he asked me to go with him to the air–”>You quickly realise airports don’t exist here“...to the train station, to say goodbye before moving”“And I refused, making up a silly excuse”“I never saw him again since then”>You notice a teardrop rolling down from your cheek“Mark was the only real friend I had and I lost him”“I keep feeling this was all my fault. That I could’ve done something to prevent him from vanishing and ending up in bloody Canterlot”>At first, Trixie doesn’t say anything>She looks at the ceiling for a moment>”You know… before knowing Starlight, I used to perform in front of empty chairs”>You look at her, intrigued>"I'd set up my stage, do my tricks, and... nopony would come. Sometimes I'd talk to myself just to hear a voice">”I think… maybe, that made me feel resentful towards the others”>”I did things I now regret. And my attitudes might have scared the heck out of some ponies”>Trixie looks at you>She really looks at you>You notice how blue her eyes are>You simply didn’t notice it before>They’re the colour of the sky after rain>”What I want to say is… Even if Sunburst came off as a jerk to you, and even if I accidentally keep calling you Fluffy Swamp–”>You interrupt Trixie with your sudden chuckling
>>43218887>And then you realise Trixie, your favourite pony ever, thinks you’re worth her time>That alone makes you forget your sadness and fills you with life“Fluffy Swamp”>You repeat your nickname, shaking your head>”Well, your green hair really reminded me of a swamp!”“Your hair reminds me of ice cream yet you don’t see me calling you Sundae!”>Both of you laugh again, until it hurts>But it’s a good hurt, if that makes any sense>From the kitchen, you hear Sunburst say something in a low voice>You can't make out the words, but you can hear Starlight responding to him>Trixie notices your gaze toward the kitchen door>Her smile fades slightly>”They’re talking about us”“Probably”>You’re sure they’re actually talking more about you than about Trixie>She leans back on the cushion, again looking at the ceiling>The sunrays make her horn glow slightly>”Trixie used to be alone… like, really alone. Nobody would come to her shows, even though they were the best magic acts in town”>You don’t say anything>You just listen>”Then Starlight came along. And by the time she knew it, she had already met wonderful ponies who would support and listen to her”>Her hoof touches yours. Just a small, brief touch>”Kai… I know what it feels like”>She sounds much more serious now>”To think you have nothing. To think nopony cares. To be riddled with remorse”>”You’re not alone, Kai”>Your throat feels tight, and you nod, not trusting your voice
>>43219503Im gonna green this at lunch
>>43219503>>43219813>Be you>A pale tan filly running your way through ponyville>Your off green mane rushes behind you as you bawl your eyes out>Is this discord's idea of funny? You ask yourself as you run down an Alley >You trip and fall into the dirt"Stupid hooves!">Your little filly voice whines as you look to them with utter despair>With discord refusing to turn you back and Twilight only able to temporarily turn you back into a human you're trapped>You will never get to cum inside rainbow dash >You lash out in impotent filly rage>You buck a barrel and lose your balance falling once more into the dirt> You ball up in the fetal position on the dirt of the dark alley wondering why your short time in equestria had to be cursed>You hear some hoofsteps and glance to see a set of purple hooves"Go away Twilight, I don't wanna to see you">Cheerilee gazes down on the beautiful little filly in the first with curiosity"Oh, im not Twilight, im cheerilee. I'm the teacher at the school. Are you new to Ponyville little filly, I don't recognize you from any of my classes">You look up and see Cheerilee groaning with disappointment"Oh it's you...don't you have a filly to molest or something"> You groan turning away from her >Cheerilee stumbles back in shock>You realize what you just said and your eyes grow wide with fear>You whip around in the dirt turning to face her defending your little mare bits"Wait, no! Not like this, I don't want to be molested">Cheerilee quickly realizes only one person would ever talk to her this way"Anon, is that you? What happened?">Cheerilee asks hiding her enthusiasm >Your lip quivers as you fight the urge to pathetically sob in the alley rolling in the dirt"I said i wanted a threesome with Fluttershy and rainbowdash and Discord turned me into a filly">You break down with sniffles and constant wiping of tears>Cheerilee would be lying if she said anon didn't deserve it but seeing you in such a sorry state she can't stop herself from trying to help "There there anon, there's so much more to equestria than cumming inside your favorite ponies">Her hoof lovingly lifts your tear soaked chin"Like what?""I've been trying to say it this whole time. This place is all about finding your purpose, doing what makes you happy and supporting your fellow ponies">Your spirits start to lift but you resist in a flurry of self sabotage "That sounds really lame and gay">You whine as she keeps lifting your chin"It is very lame and gay anon, but we all live meaningful lives because of it">Her hoof touches your flank as you freeze>Fuck, she's gonna molest me isn't she..."See, you're a blank flank, you still have a whole world ahead of you if you just give it a chance">You finally manage to stop your sobbing>Afterall, you did manage to get to equestria >Maybe she's right"I think the first step is a proper pony name, one fit for a filly like you. How about...Joyful Day. Do you like that?"
>>43220513"B-but im a human...">You shuffle to your hooves and put your face into cheerilee's chest fluff>Cheerilee almost wants to cry with you sensing your feeling of loss"It will be ok Joyful Day, the memories will fade in time">Her hoof comforts you, holding you tight"Come along now little filly, we don't want to be late for school">Cheerilee smiles leading you out of the alley and into the light of your new lifeDone
>>43220513cute, thanks anon!
>>43220523Thank you, fun little green
>>43220513>"It is very lame and gay anon, but we all live meaningful lives because of it"Man, Cheerliee in the show was underserved in the category of "lines that show she really 'gets' her students."Shit like this is on point for how she needed to talk to Anon. Er, Joyful Day.That was a fun little green, thank you for it!
>>43221861Thank you, i take characterization very seriously
>>43214378Well that's suspicious
>>43217943That'd be a strange crossover between conflicting memes.
>>43222681It doesn’t feel that thematically different to me.There are numerous TCB stories in which later-stage pro-Equestrian radicals start using ponification potion as an offensive weapon, and it’s really just a different delivery system of “chemical that gives you hooves.”I don’t know if getting force-fed pills is a better way to go than getting smacked over the head by a vial, but nonetheless, my original point stands.
>>43222975Imagine everyone freaking out about being a pony and you have to pretend you're not having the time of your life
>>43223064The thing about the TCBverse and Optimalverse is that they give a gilded path to the people who already wanted to be a pony.Those people are the early adopters, and I don’t think there would be instances where a recent convert who’s having the time of their life would be next to a mortified convert, both having changed around the same time.That’s something I’ve always liked about The Last Pony on Earth, It Was A Thursday, Cuddly Doom, etc – the ponification hits society so swiftly and indiscriminately that it adds a unique level of chaos, and those affected have to transparently, retroactively wrestle with it after the point of no return.
>>43223139Im sure there would be lots of people who wanted to be ponies but due to societal pressure they never converted. Then again, i have zero clue what universe you're referring to
>>43220522>the memories will fade in time.Jesus, what's with tf stories and existential horror? I really need to stop entering this thread.
>>43224378Transformation is the most horrifying thing that can happen to you anon. You will forever be traumatized by your previous self effectively ceasing to exist unless you learn to let it go. This kind pony is simply trying to help ease anon into the idea that they should simply focus on their new life as a pony and let those old human memories fade away for their own sake
>>43223139>Those people are the early adopters, and I don’t think there would be instances where a recent convert who’s having the time of their life would be next to a mortified convert, both having changed around the same time.Kind of depends. CelestAI eats Earth REALLY quickly and sooner or later all of your friends and family are in Equestria, there are no job opportunities, and a Superintelligence with a brain the size of a continent is spending all that brainpower trying to figure YOU out and trying to figure out how to get YOU to upload. Even the original story has quite a few reluctant converts, though, I suppose a lot of the time they may not be in the 'overjoyed to upload' shard. I agree with what you said nonetheless I just think the post apocalypticness of FiO is very interesting. It's a very clean apocalypse that anyone can technically exit at any given moment, and with the oddity of Celestia being pretty much outright obsessed with you.
>>43224378Yeah, it's like...what?>New body>New homeplace>New memoriesFrom a story perspective, this is just character death.>We turned Kyle, body, personality, and memories, into Scootaloo, and dropped him in Equestria, in her place.So...Kyle's dead and Equestria is exactly the same as before then? You could've just wrote a story where Kyle gets run over by a drunk driver or something.TF shit is WAY more interesting when the transformee actually has to DEAL with being different now.>We turned only Kyle's *body* into Scootaloo's, and dropped him in Equestria in her place.Now you've actually got him desperately trying to fill the shoes of someone he didn't personally know, all while feeling the concerned judgement of everyone who's questioning why "Scootaloo" seems so off lately. There's an actual *story* here.
>>43224378>>43225181But that didn't happen in the green. Cheerilee is just trying to assure anon that everything will turn out ok
>>43225392There are definitely instances in TF stories where readers erroneously conflate hints of mental changes with complete personality erasure. Usually there’s a wide gulf between what’s being hinted at versus a mental overwrite.This green whittles down that difference significantly.If Cheerilee were trying to console Anon about memories she’d otherwise want to lose (e.g., sources of trauma), Anon would be a lot more eager. However, her distress is primarily rooted in having been turned into a pony. Her lack of purpose also registers as a pain point, but it’d be in second by a lot.Anon’s affirmation that she’s a human right before Cheerilee’s penultimate line underscores this; losing her memories is absolutely not how she sees the conflict resolving herself. To which Cheerliee responds inauspiciously that the solution is for Anon to simply forget the conflict [rather than address it].It’s pretty strong gaslighting that almost looks like a dark spin on the “I don't want to be molested” line. I don’t think that Cheerilee’s line fits with the rest of her characterization in the green, but there’s no avoiding it considering its role as the story’s spiritual foundation. At its core, the image of a smiling, consoling Cheerilee juxtaposed with that line is tough to reconcile.I think the way to make it work is for the implied memories to be really bad, which would probably have been addressed if the story were longer than something jotted down on a lunch break.
>>43225181>this is just character death>TF shit is WAY more interesting when the transformee actually has to DEAL with being different nowYou can have it both ways!If the mental changes don’t progress all at once, then the remaining human thoughts have to do battle against the pony thoughts.I love the kinds of psychological conflict that arise in those stories, especially when they’re layered on other conflicts, or when the author adds a dash of unreliable narration.Even if the pony thoughts are destined to completely win out to the point of character death, that doesn’t nullify the story up until that point; a character dying (conventionally) at the end of a story doesn’t nullify that story, so I don’t see the rules playing out differently for character death.Now, “TF stories” where a human undergoes character death on page 5 out of 200? Yeah, those don’t get a pass.
I think more words were typed in the analysis of my green than were actually typed out in the green
>>43225588jej
>>43223221>not going pone due to societal pressureFirst off, cringe.Second off, the TF-adjacent freedom from certain societal expectations – at least on an individual basis – has always been an interesting concept to me.Unless someone else sees the transformation happening, there’s no clear continuity between Michael Smith and Daisy Meadows. Any consternation that would’ve been directed towards Mike can now only be directed towards Daisy if she fesses up about who she was as a human. So… she doesn’t; why the hell would she? I guess people could still be upset at the memory of Michael Smith, or direct their scorn towards ponies in aggregate, but then it doesn’t hurt on a personal level.
Anyone remember a story from early 2017 about a guy who's living in a dorm at his college when a zombie style pony virus breaks out? He has to survive with his friend for a few weeks before ultimately being turned
>>43227124Could that be Cuddly Doom?https://drive.google.com/file/d/0By-iGM4MXF8lSS1HcUM5OVFZMU0/edit?resourcekey=0-6rU-eMRUmf1TT-Pk5SLGYg
>>43218233>you knew this place like the back of your handBack of your what?
>>43218888>You were just about to exit the kitchen, until Sunburst stopped you with one more question>”Do you trust Kai?”“Does it matter?”>A brief moment of silence ensues“Even if I didn’t trust him, it won’t stop us from going to Canterlot in an hour, despite the fact we’ll arrive almost at nightfall”>”Look, we don’t have time to waste…”, said Sunburst“Why?! Why don't we have time to waste? What is about to happen?”>”Please, Starlight, lower your voice”“Sunburst, just stop…”>You try to remember the word Kai used earlier“Bare roasting!”>”What?!”>Sunburst was visibly confused… and so were you“Just stop being so vague and secretive”>”It’s not my intention…”>He added a bit of salt to the salad>”Look, I’m not sure what to think… But whatever we do, we should try to make Kai keep a low profile, just in case”“How?”>Sunburst touches his chin while thinking of what to do about Kai>”Oh, I know”>He opens a drawer, taking a white sheet out of it>”This should work”“The ponies will think he’s a ghost!”>”Nah, they’ll probably think he’s just an old hag who is cold”>”Who is an ‘old hag’?!”>You roll your eyes as soon you hear Trixie’s complaining>”You are! And why are you listening to other ponies’ conversations?”>Trixie opens the door, looking visibly upset>”I was startled by your sudden screaming! Even the neighbor came to see what was happening”>”What?!”>Sunburst runs toward the door, and notices there’s an elderly pony looking inside the house from the front window>”Is everything okay, dear?”>”Oh, yes, absolutely! Nothing to worry about, Mrs. Yellow Mane!”>Well, she indeed has a yellow mane>”Well, just call me if you need something, sweetheart”>”Thank you!”>As soon as Mrs. Yellow Mane left, Sunburst let out a sigh of relief>”Whew!”>You notice Kai in the living room, clearly startled over the sudden appearance of the neighbor>You quickly decide to approach him before he tries to run away“Easy, Kai! See? That pony didn't even notice your wagon. Everything is fine”>”To be honest I'd be surprised if she noticed her own hooves. She's short-sighted but has a great hearing”>Sunburst goes back to the kitchen and you take the opportunity to talk to Kai“How are you feeling?”>”Uh… A bit better, I think. Trixie was nice to me”>Well, that's nice to hear, for a change>”Of course! Trixie is beloved by everyone but tax collectors!”, said your friend while raising her hooves>Sunburst comes back, this time carrying bread and salad“Oh, please, let me help you”>You put the food on the table in the center of the room>Sunburst thanks you, and then brings rice and hay from the kitchen>And he also brings the white sheet>Before you notice it, he's already handing it to you>It seems you'll have to do the dirty job
>>43227375>You take a look at the table, and Trixie is already filling her mouth with hay and bread“Trixie, please! Wait for us to sit, at least!”>You cannot help but chuckling at Trixie's face, covered in grains of rice>You leave the sheet at a side for now, and sit next to Kai and in front of Sunburst
>>43227378>Well, Kai, it has finally happened>After jokingly asking yourself what would you do if a pony offered you hay, now you’re being offered just that>You prefer to decline politely and try the rice instead>That is, if Trixie leaves you some>Thankfully, Starlight offers you a spoon>But how are you supposed to use it?>You try to grab it, failing repeatedly at it>The sound of the spoon falling on the table catches the attention of Starlight and Sunburst (but not Trixie, who’s stuffing her face with salad)>”Kai, are you okay?”, asked Starlight, looking slightly worried“Well…”>What are you going to answer? You can’t just say “I don’t know how to grab things”>You remember what happened with the teacup before“Sorry, I…”>”It's okay”>You look at Sunburst>He doesn't look angry >He got up and took a plate from the cupboard>Then he quietly puts some rice on the plate and cuts some bread for you>”Feel free to eat however you want”>And just like that, he started to eat some salad>But somehow, you couldn't stop thinking about his gesture>”Let me help you, Kai”, Starlight said sympathetically>Yet you kept looking at Sunburst“Thank you”>”Don't worry about it”, he said nonchalantly
>>43227386>Right after finishing the meal, Starlight helped you to drink water from a cup>She didn't wait for you to say you were thirsty, she just did it>”The train will depart in around 40 minutes”, said Sunburst while looking at the clock on the wall>A sudden fear invaded you>Your van>You don't want to abandon it“Uh… I don't… I don't want to leave, to leave my…”>”Your wagon”, said Starlight>”The great and powerful Trixie is going to leave her wagon here too! There's no need to fear!”>Trixie's determination made you feel less insecure>”You already saw what kind of neighbors Sunburst has. They're harmless!”, added Starlight>You take one more peek at your van through the window, and then let out a sigh“Can… I use the bathroom, please?”>”Go ahead. It's down the hall, to the left”, answered Sunburst with a calm voice>You thank him, and follow his directions>Well, at least that's what you think>Did he say to the left or to the right?>Well, the bathroom is always to the right on films>You take the right, but what you find isn't the bathroom >You open the door with your hoof, and you end up in a study>And over there, right in the centre of the desk, as if it was calling up your attention, you could see it clearly>It was a BIC lighter
Some drawings I made of anoncolt and his babysitter. Trying to get better at character interactions.
>>43229042They're so cute!
>>43229042>bottom leftAnoncolt needs an adult!
>>43229042Giwtwm
>>43229042Please make more. Anoncolt is so underappreciated
I have a satisfactory part one to the grimdark story together. I still have yet to think of a good title and i think i may be better off uploading the whole story as one chunk than uploading it in parts since King Mahrek's portal ended up getting a whole lot of views. Im not quite sure how i want to go about this yet
>>43229042So cute <3
>>43230987Thank you. I love anonfilly but anoncolt is super cute to me too and there isn't much artwork of him. I hope to contribute some more.
>>43231443Looking forward to seeing it.
>>43231443Depending on the story’s total length, it can help aggregate interest by breaking up the story on at least one cliffhanger – lets readers banter for a bit before the reveal.That’s not a strategy that works for any story of course, but it might be worth considering.
>>43232383>>43232404I think I'll release the first part of the story before i go on this trip then
>>43218261They've really messed him up.
>>43231896I’m in the same boat: general preference for Anonfilly, but Anoncolt is so gosh darn cute too and he’s a great change of pace.Thank you so much for drawing him (and all the characters of the anonosphere)!