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>"Now where do you think you're going? Trying to gut a creature whose soft innards can handle diamond shards was comedically stupid, but it was also still an attempt to kill me and I can't just let that slide. Mommy Molestia raised no wimp... she raised a WARRIOR."
>>43187244Time for Spike to go on some rampaging mode again (sexually)
>>43187244This will end in creampies
Someone said a recap for Alanamous would be wise and while I don't see it may as well. I hope to have an update by tonight(Monday) so here is a very abridged version:Original Story:>Anon dates SciTwi.>Anon cheats on SciTwi with Rainbow Dash.>Anon fugs SciTwi.>Gets exposed as a cheater.>Anon an heores.>Bad EndMain story:>SciTwi is pregnant.>Despite heavy pressure from her family, SciTwi gives up baby to Anon's parents.>Alanamous is SciTwi's and Anon's daughter.>Alanamous grows up without SciTwi present.>Alanamous is bitter.>Alanamous enters high school.>Sunset Shimmer and Rainbow Dash are school staff.>Both discover Alanamous as SciTwi's daughter.>Sunset Shimmer pushes them to reunite.>Doesn't go well at first.>Then SciTwi and Alanamous slowly, but surley, gets a little closer together.>Then SciTwi fucks it up.>Alanamous is furious.>Voices that aren't hers is telling her to kill SciTwi.>Everyone is gathering at a dance to try and nip a possible magical quagmire in the bud.
>>43187913Sometimes key details in a long story could be misremembered, so a recap is pretty helpful when that happens.
>>43187629EQG Stream this Sunday!We'll be watching "Magical Movie Night" and playing Haxball, SRB2 Kart and Gartic Phone!>Countdownhttps://www.tickcounter.com/countdown/10061160/eqg-streamHoping to see you there!
>>43188177Oh that’s neat, another one.
Dat alicorn 2nd puberty...
>>43188396Based Goddess Growth
>>43185037was not expecting the plot to be kick-started by a couple of CHS randos, but they do a good job of explaining everything to Anon. and they're right, Sunset is hot as hellthe post before this one had a typo, in case you want to fix it for a future pastebin>Catchign the bus at the last second.>>43185041lmao. the second I read there was a green kid on the bus I knew who it was, which is why Pinkie works so well here. I usually really enjoy your Pinkie, and your other favorite green of mine is that one where she works at the pogo stick diner.>"Learn anything new you didn't get to see on the Discovery Channel?"kek>>43185049>"I'll find out if she's feeling anything herself too." Sunset gives you the answerMama Sunset is definitely going to be feeling herself later, don't you worry Sunset.In the next post, I laughed out loud when Mama Sunset swiped the screwdriver out of his hand.The part where she jumped him in bed was hot as hell, especially how you described some of the handjob stuff (wrist rolling, her thumb caressing his tip.) I loved it when the whipped cream thing came back while she was blowing him too, how she was using her tongue to get his cock to erupt more and more.The awkward date at the end was good too and makes me want to read more, even if I did feel bad for Sunset. yeah, i'm really enjoying this one Grey, thanks for writing the prompt
>>43187097>>43187098I love tomboy abs
>Ember: "HEEEY THORAX! THERE YOU ARE!">Smolder: "COME ON, OCELLUS! THE LAVA IS NICE AND WARM!">Thorax: *whisper* "Would it be akward to tell them we can't swim?">Ocellus: *whisper* "I think it would be more akward if get turned into sculptures, your majesty."
>>43189114>THE LAVA IS NICE AND WARM!"My sides.
>>43189114I love dragon girls
>>43189849Already the best pic of this new trend I've seen so far.
I've been going back and forth with this. I hope it comes off as well as it did in my head.Anyways, here's more Alanamous>You are Sunset Shimmer.>And you are pretty proud of yourself.>You stand over on a stage overlooking the large ballroom full of students.>Mingling.>Dancing.>And generally having a good time.>Not bad for your first Spring Formal as Principal.>All with help from some good friends of course.>After a few minutes of overlooking the large gathering of students, you now make your way off stage to walk the grounds and leave the DJ to their duties.>And to continue to admire the work that was put in to make this year's Spring Formal spectacular.>Adorned all over the walls and draped over the ceiling were a brilliant diamond coated drapes.>The bright sparkly gleam from the diamonds shining in the lights made the hall all the more beautiful.>You pass through a small group of students and see the one who was responsible for the diamond studded hall.>One of the chaperone's for this dance.>Her deep blue trench coat with white fur collars and cuffs flowed down to near her feet.>Her skin still a silky smooth white just like when she was younger.>Granted, she adorned almost as much makeup as Cadence to keep her youthful appearance.>But this one let her hair naturally age as she has a sizable silver streak in her long flowing purple hair.>She seemed to be in deep conversation with some students when she notices you.>Her face lights up brighter than the gleaming diamonds she made for the event and turns to you.>”Sunset, darling!”>She calls out to you with her arms wide open.>You approach her and right into her embrace.“Good to see you too, Rarity.”>You greet your longtime friend arms wrapped around Rarity.“You've done an incredible job in jazzing up the hall for the dance.”>You complement the work she has done in decorating the room.>With a little help from her powers.“And..., thank you for coming and being a chaperone for tonight.”>You then thank her.>To which she lightly waves you off.>”Oh it's no big deal.” She easily brushes off the complement. “Though I must ask”>She adds while looking around the hall.>”What is this..., Magical issue that you speak of?”>You just nod and rub her shoulder.“I'll explain once I've confirmed the others are here. For the time being enjoy the dance.”>You reassure her.>”Oooh, it'll be marvelous to see Twilight Sparkle again! It's been so long.”>She coos and pats you on the shoulder and you move on.>You already know most of the girls are here.>It's Twilight you're not sure if she is here or not since she is, even to this day, notoriously bad at keeping track of time.
>>43190128>Even when this possible dire situation involves her daughter.>Speaking of which.>You haven't seen Alanamous or her friends anywhere in the convention center yet.>And you know she's going to be here as her name appears student guest list.>You may want to intercept either her or Twilight Sparkle before they have a chance to run into each other.>You don't know what could happen if they meet again and cooler heads don't prevail.>The thought of it puts a pep in your step.>As you move along, you are now passing by a line of vendor stands that were set up along the sides of the ballroom.>Various stands were set up and provided various snacks, sweets and drinks.>Much of the food is from local vendors who were generous enough to donate some of their service and time.>You stop in front of one of said vendors.>Their booth was filled with various snacks and pastries.>All revolving around a single item.>Apple slices>Apple pies.>Apple fritters.>Applesauce.>A punch bowl with paper cups littered around it filled with a light brown liquid.>You assume apple juice.>You smile and look up to the vendor manning the booth and see a familiar face.“How are things going so far AppleJack?”>AppleJack>Another one of your friends.>And another element of harmony.>She hasn't changed much since the last time you saw her a few months ago.>Orange skin.>Long blonde hair with small silver streaks done into a messy pony tail.>Her signature cowboy hat now withered and wrinkled from years of use.>She wore a tattered two tone brown checkered pattern flannel shirt over he white t shirt.>Faded jeans with small pockets of tears along the sides.>She wore a simple white apron with an apple imprinted with it over her outfit.>Her bright green eyes are now accompanied with dark bags underneath them.>Despite that, she still had a bright smile at the sight of you.>”Thing's are lookin' pretty good so far shug.”>She happily replied.>She took a moment and came from around her set up to give you a quick hug.“I really do appreciate you helping out tonight and getting all this ready in such a short amount of time.” You thank your friend. “Especially with how busy you usually are with your work at the farm.”>AppleJack casually waves you off.>”D'aww shucks, ain't no thing, Ah got Mac'n his kin and Applebloom working just for tonight.”>She easily reassures you.>”Besides, this'll be a prime opportunity to promote Sweet Apple Acres' products to the new kids.”>She adds and you pat her on the shoulder.“Well, I'm going to do a walk around to see if everyone is here and we can all regroup.”>AppleJack smiles.>”Can't wait to see Twilight! It's been too long!”>You nod again.“Take care and see you in a minute.”>You finally take your leave to see if everyone else is present.>As you navigate your way through the crowd of students you run into Rainbow Dash.
>>43190130>She was in her usual getup of a white shirt and navy blue over shirt and black leggings.>You nod to Dash and she walks up to you.>”Hey.”>She simply greets you and you nod in response.“How are things looking so far?”>You ask.>”So far so good.” She responds. “I haven't seen Alanamous or her friends yet.”>You take a quick scan of the area to see if you can notice her.>And of course you don't see her or the others.>”Is Twilight around?”>Rainbow Dash then asks and you shake your head.“No, and I hope to catch her before she tries to confront Alanamous before we've all gathered at least.”>You explain to Dash.>”What about the others?”>She then asks.“Rarity and AppleJack are here, I know Pinkie Pie is here but haven't seen her yet. Same with Fluttershy.”>You explain, still looking around in the hopes of spotting either Alana or Twilight.>Still nothing.>You nod to Dash and continue on your patrol of the grounds.>as you make your way through the crowds of students you can't help of be nostalgic for when you were a student attending gatherings such as this.>Though some of them you would much rather forget.>There were still more good memories than bad ones at least.>You then hear a large and loud ovation not too far from you which caught your attention.>You decide to investigate the noise to make sure it wasn't a fight or anything nefarious.>As you approach the origin of the ovation you notice a few familiar faces.>First was Pinkie Pie.>Years of consumption of sweets hasn't been too kind to her figure but she still seems her comfortable in her skin regardless.>She was accompanied by her husband, Cheese Sandwich.>Together, they run a party planning and events show.>It was a no brainier to have them come and set up a performance for the Spring Formal.>They were in the middle of a bit that involved several animals.>After it all the crowd once again cheered for them as they took a bow.>Pinkie then noticed you and you meekly waves from the background.>She whispers something to her husband and then makes her way towards you.>”Thank you so much Canterlot High! We are gonna take a short break but we'll be back real soon!”>Cheese announced to the students which caused the crowd to thin out a bit so Pinkie had a straight shot to you.>As she got closer she held her arms out for an embrace.>You then step up and wrap your arms around your friend.>”Sunset!”>Pinkie exclaims as she squeezes you tight.>Causing some minor discomfort.“Good to see you too, Pinkie.”>You breathe out as you continue to lose oxygen from you friends tight grip around you.>Despite her size she still has impressive strength>She finally lets you go and you can breathe freely again“Thanks for agreeing to come and participate on such short notice”>You thank her and she giggles>”Oh it's no biggie! Anything for a friend!”>She loudly exclaims in her eternal optimistic tone>”Besides! It's thanks to you that we are able to try out our new routine!”
>>43190131>She adds as she now points in the direction of a small gathering of animals.>Kneeling and attending to the animals was yet another old friend.>After she was finished with her work she then stands and turns to you.>Fluttershy.>If all the others looked a little heftier, Fluttershy looks thinner than she did back in high school.>Well, Rainbow Dash looks as fit as she did back in high school.>Fluttershy's pink hair a little paler than it was all those years ago.>And little more messier.>She wore a pale green one piece dress.>She puts on a tired smile and she comes up to embrace you.“Hey Fluttershy.”>You greet her.“Are you a part of the show with Pinkie now?”>You ask.>Fluttershy shakes her head.>”Oh no, She just wanted me to help with some animals for tonight.”>She explains.>That's right, she works over at the shelter.>Also helps that she can talk to the animals for better cooperation.“Thank you again for doing this, Fluttershy.”>You thank another friend.>And that leaves everyone except for Twilight Sparkle.“Well, everyone is here except for Twilight.”>You announce to Pinkie and Fluttershy.>”Is she okay?”>Fluttershy asks about Twilight.>Which caught you a little off guard.“O-oh, she's fine!” You quickly answer. “She just always has a million things going on, you know how it is.”>Fluttershy looks concerned.>”Will she really show up tonight to just be a chaperone?” She questions. “Is this magic issue you briefly spoke of really that big a deal?”>You slowly nod.“It kinda is.” You respond “But I want to make sure everyone is gathered so she can tell you all what is really going on.”>After you tell them you notice someone in your peripheral.>Alanamous has arrived with her friends.>It doesn't look like she and Twilight ran into each other.>Perfect.>Even more so now that they are unknowingly approaching you.>You turn to face the students and call out to them.“Welcome to the Spring Formal.”>You greet the students and they notice you.>”Principal Shimmer!”>Sunny Starscout was the one who called out to you.>They all gathered around you.>With Alanamous hanging in the back.>Before anyone says anything, Alanamous then turns to leave the group.>You try to step away to follow her but then the others get in your way.>”Sorry but, do you have a minute?”>Sunny then asks you.>Shit.>You want to speak to Alanamous.>But as Principal, it's not a good look to just blow off students who want your attention.>You dart your eyes from Sunny to Alanamous several times.“S-sure!”>You awkwardly say.“Is it important?”>You then add, equally as awkward as your last line.>”It kind of is.” Sunny answers. “It's about that time at Twilight's lab.”>That immediately got your attention.>”And Alanamous.”>Okay.>Now you are focused on them.>You just hope this won't further complicate things.
>>43190133>Be Twilight Sparkle.>Sitting in your car.>Outside the Canterlot Convention Center.>Site of this years Canterlot High Spring Formal.>You are trying to mentally prepare yourself.>You need to confront your daughter.>But she is avoiding you.>And from some accounts, there seems to be a voice in her head telling her to kill you.>Working theory is she inherited something else from you besides your bad eyesight and brains.>But a magical monster that you thought you sealed away in you.>You were afraid that if you ever had any children that this could be a possibility.>So now you had to resort to this.>Confronting her.>In a large crowd.>This will be interesting regardless.>Your plan was to have the other elements present in the case things go south.>You haven't seen many of your friends for years.>And now all of a sudden everyone is together.>To perhaps zap a monster.>A monster that happens to be your own flesh and blood.>Even more than your flesh and blood, but your very own child.>It happened to you in the past.>It wasn't so bad so perhaps it won't hurt your daughter.>You take a deep breath.>You've stalled enough.>And you've hid yourself from this for too long.>It's time you take care of this once and for all.>To take care of Midnight Sparkle once and for all, if at all possible.>And.>If possible.>Reconcile with Alanamous.>You finally exit your car.>Chaperone badge in hand.>And you enter the convention center.>You were in awe at the décor of the large hall.>Shining diamonds littered along the ceiling of the hall with lights highlighting the brilliance of them.>No doubt the work or Rarity.>Many of the students were dancing and socializing with each other and most importantly, not noticing you.>You were able to navigate through the bundle of students freely in the hopes of trying to locate Sunset Shimmer.>But then you see her.>Alanamous.>She was by herself.>Making her way out of the hall.>A golden opportunity.>But then you remember.>The strategy was to confront her with Sunset Shimmer.>You should stick to the plan.>Considering she is avoiding you.>But...>You are going to have to corner her sooner or later.>Regardless if Sunset, Dash or the others are with you.>Also she isn't with her group.>So you have her alone.>You have decided to go and confront her.>It's better to take care of this as soon as possible.>The situation shouldn't be that bad.>You now proceed in her direction.>And pass through the door she went through.>Through the door you are now in a room that was similar to the main hall.>Just a bit smaller.>And not as bright as the room was lit by the standard florescent lighting of the building.>There you saw her.>Alanamous.>Sitting by herself on an office chair.>Away from everyone.>As you slowly creep closer to your daughter you have a better look at her dolled up appearance.>Your heart flutters a bit at how beautiful she looks right now.
>>43190136>Her face glowing in the pale artificial lighting of the room along with her hair.>Smoothed, neatly done and shined in the same lighting.>You got close enough that she noticed someone was in the room with her and looked in your direction.“Hey.”>You meekly wave to her.>Alana's initial reaction was one of shock but then quickly turns to annoyance.>She then starts to get up from her seat.>”Oh, yeah, now that there is nobody around you want to talk to me.”>She bitterly spits out as she now storms away from you.“Wait!” You call out. “I'm sorry for what happened at the Sifu test!”>You try to apologize for what happened the last time you two were together while trying to catch up to her.“We need to talk!”>You raise your voice which makes Alana turn to face you.>”You had your chance!”>She yells at you which stops you in your tracks.>”And after months of doing things together and just when I start feeling like maybe I finally have a mother; You STILL wouldn't tell a friend that I was your daughter!” >There was a sting in her glare that pierced you as bad as her words.>You try to keep your composure.“Will you PLEASE listen to me!?”>You further raise your voice an octave.>Which doesn't help in deescalating the situation.>”What the fuck for!? You had seventeen years to at least send a postcard or SOMETHING showing that you at least cared even a little bit like you claim, but no!”>She steps towards you.>And you step up as well.“Alanamous PLEASE!”>Your voice raises again>She isn't intimidated.>”And when we are finally in the same room with each other you just try to play dumb until I say some shit that makes you just casually spill it out like it's some fucking accident!”>Your pendant is starting to react.>Not good.>You need to stay calm. >Even if Alanamous isn't listening to you.>”And then you give me some bullshit spiel about how if dad were still alive I could have been aborted and you tried to play the hero and save me because he's dead so he can't defend himself!”>That came out of nowhere.>Again with Anon?>Where the fuck did she get that from?>Is that how she felt about your explanation?>You are starting to feel hot at that.>You never insinuated that.>But now Alanamous is right up on you.“I NEVER TRIED TO 'PLAY THE FUCKING HERO' ABOUT WANTING YOU ABORTED!”>You scream in her face.>You're blowing up on her.>Which caught her off guard.>You are tired of her having this perfect picture of Anon in her head.>You tried to hold your tongue about it.>You tried to preserve it.>No more.>But now if she wants the truth, she's getting it.“YOU WANT TO KNOW WHAT REALLY HAPPENED AND WHY HE DIED?”>You ask.>Alana stays silent.“HE WAS FUCKING RAINBOW DASH BEHIND MY BACK!”>Still yelling at the top of your lungs.“ALL THE WHILE WE WERE TRYING TO SAVE OUR RELATIONSHIP, HE WAS FUCKING YOUR SOCCER COACH IN MY OWN HOUSE!”>Alana's face was no longer angry..
>>43190138>Now it was blank, almost shocked look.“AND AFTER HE TOOK MY VIRGINITY AFTER HE WAS BETRAYING MY TRUST, PRINCIPAL SHIMMER EXPOSED HIM AS THE DIRTY PIECE OF SHIT CHEATER AS HE WAS, AND WHAT DID HE DO AFTER HE WAS CAUGHT? HE PUNCHED AND KNOCKED OUT RAINBOW DASH AND RAN INTO THE FOREST AND JUMPED OFF A CLIFF!”>Your voice is starting to hurt from yelling at the top of your lungs.>The noise you were making started to attract a small crowd.>Despite the noise in the other in the main hall.>You didn't care anymore.“HE KILLED HIMSELF AND TOOK THE COWARDS WAY OUT BECAUSE HE COULDN'T COPE WITH HIS FUCK UPS AND I DAMN WELL GARANTEE YOU THAT HE WOULDN'T HAVE BEEN MAN ENOUGH TO FIX OUR MISTAKE-”>You stopped dead in your tracks.>But it was too late.>You said the 'M' word.>To Alanamous.You were mortified with yourself now.“Oh no!”>You said out loud to Alana.>Who just continue to stand there.>Staring blankly into the void.>No sheen or light in her eyes.>”I-I'm a..”>Then her eyes started to gloss over.“No!”>You tried to run up to her and she easily pushed you away and started to run away.>She was quick but you used your telekinesis to stop her in her tracks in a panic.>She then stood frozen in place.>You quickly ran up to her and she actually broke free of your magical grip.>Alana then turned and squared herself up.>She squatted and drove her elbow into your midsection.“OOF!”>The force of her strike was enough to send you flying back several feet and you tumble onto the ground.>Good god that felt like getting hit full force by a battering ram.>You try to get back up but the pain from the strike was too much and you fall over coughing violently.>You moan in pain as you try to look over to Alanamous.>She was still in her pose. >Hyperventilating.>You saw the hatred in her eyes.>Along with tears streaming out from both.>”You.” She began. “Fucking piece of shit!”>She roared.>It was then she started to glow.>”I FUCKING HATE YOU!!”>She let out this otherworldly wail.>Then you saw cracks in her face.>It seemed like Alanamous was aware of them as she now had this worried look on her face.>The cracks began to spread across her face and down her neck and shoulders.>Alana's face look like she was in pain at the fissures across her body.>The cracks then started to glow neon green and Alana knelt down.>She starting to grunt and scream as if there were an internal struggle.“A-lana..”>You tried to talk but it hurt to even breathe.>Perhaps thanks to a broken rib.>Alana continued to struggle until she started to float in the air.>The Dark aura that surrounded her started to intensify as the fissures emitting the neon green energy all over her body begin to shine brighter.>”AHHHHHHHH!!!”>Another shriek into the sky as she was engulfed by a black energy ball.>An explosion of violet and green energy erupts and blinds you.
>>43190140>You try to shield your eyes from the blinding light but the force from the explosion pushes several feet away.>Finally several moments it was safe to look.>Where Alanamous stood is now someone floating in the air.>Her jet black hair flowed up like a large black flame.>A long violet unicorn horn in the middle of her forehead along with white energy rings around her eyes that were currently shut.>Her gigantic black angels wings had patterns of green and violet across the wingspan.>She wore a black strapless one piece dress with green outline and violet streaks along the lower half and matching pattern boots.>Her hands were larger and fingers were more like claws.>Finally she opened her eyes.>Her eyes were still moderate violet like your own.>However, there was definite fear in them.>Then her pupils started to constrict.>Once they reached the center of her all white eyes, then the whites began to constrict until there was nothing but pure darkness and a single tiny white dot in the center of a void.>”AH HAHAHAHA!”>Alana.>No.>It's not her.>Midnight Sparkle began cackling like a wild animal.>”FINALLY!! AFTER MANY LONG YEARS, I'M FREE!!”She screamed and let out a massive energy blast that once again sent you flying back.>You tumbled along the floor until you were closer to the entrance to the main hall.>You then watch in horror as the energy blast rips apart the large room you were in and you were greeted with the moonlit night.>”Twilight!?”>A familiar voice screams out to you.>You slowly try to look over to who shouted at you.>But you were still weak from Alanamous' strike.>It was then you felt someone try to lift you from the ground only for you to yelp out in pain.>”Are you okay!?”>You weakly turn to look at your friend.“Sunset.”>You weakly call out.“I'm sorry, I screwed up again.”>You apologize to your friend.>Sunset Shimmer now beside you.>”What happened!?”>She yells.>You both then look at the creature who now is starting back at you.>A look of anger and a hunger.>A hunger for violence.>What have you done?and that's the update, updated paste here:https://ponepaste.org/10863Well, I hope I can get out of this. I was torn on if I should use the 'mistake' line as that is a very big thing. Which is why she didn't say 'she was a mistake' but there is insinuation. I did say things would go to shit real fast and now we have the infamous Midnight Sparkle spawn: Zero Hour AlanamousAs always, questions, comments, concerns, complaints, critiques, any and all (You)'s welcome
>>43190145Really based update!
https://derpibooru.org/tags/ruby%27s+house+of+love
>>43190532Didn’t realize how old this was until I checked the link
>>43190145Damn. What a troubling note to end this on. I’ll be looking forward to what comes next.
>>43190411>”M’sugarcube.”