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I miss the old yandere threads so I'm making a new one.
I don't have the old links and this is my first time ever making a thread so forgive me if this is a shit.
Ponepaste Yandere Greens and Stories: https://ponepaste.org/archive?q=yandere
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>>43285080
>>>/trash/
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>>43285084
No, Yandere Pones must come back to this place.
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>>43285099
Well, good luck.
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>>43285080
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>>43285114
Yep, I figured if I could get the ball rolling we can get some people who remember the old threads and links and have a revival. Maybe even get some green writers too. Hopeful I know, but you got to start somewhere.
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>>43285156
AAAAAAH MY PP
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>>43285099
I'd piss Pinkamena off so much by letting her do anything to me just because she actually wants me to resist which turns her on.
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We need twilight pictures
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>>43285080
I love yandere alicorns like you wouldn't believe

>>43285099
>>43285227
>the brief moment of flimsy "power" as she cries and begs for forgiveness and lavishes you with love after inevitably hurting you knowing damn well she'll hurt you again if you don't accept her apology
Or in other words, the make-up/honeymoon phase.
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>>43285209
Yeah, yandere Celestia fucks hard. Or I guess it would be Molestia?
>>43285227
Good old consensual non consensual, a based kink Pinka anon.
>>43285236
There's actually quite a bit on Twibooru.
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The green in the evil twi thread is pretty yandere >>43278570
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>>43285259
Personally I prefer Yandere Pony or other creature x Anon but all forms of yandere are welcome. I will link it in the next Yandere Revival Thread #2.
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>>43285269
>The mare makes you wear a piece of clothing marking you as hers
UUNNNFFF
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>>43285269
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>>43285297
There needs to be more art of that
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>>43285269
So real honestly.
>Applejack makes you wear a cowboy hat with her cutie mark on the front.
>Rarity makes you wear a fitted suit in her colors with her cutie mark somewhere tasteful.
>Twilight is the tie as in the picture.
>Fluttershy makes you get her mark tattooed on your skin because she's a fucking freak.
>Rainbow Dash makes you wear a Wonderbolts jersey with her face on it.
>Pinkie makes you a chefs hat or apron with her mark.
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Hopefully this works out
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>>43285387
>>Pinkie makes you wear her friends.
Fixed
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Isn't a yandere fetish basically like a fetish for BPDemons? Why don't you guys hit up some 3DPDs if you like that cancer so much, it's abundantly available.
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>no yandere autumn blaze
Sigh...
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>>43285080
>3DPD thread
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>>43285490
There's different levels of yandere but that fits the more unhinged Pinkamena yandere so it checks out.
>>43285498
No, BPDemons will cheat on you at the drop of a hat. There are different yandere types but the most basic is that they hold a devotional and sick love for you. They hold you as their number one and will make you theirs through a number of different ways depending on the type of yandere.
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KILLED
AND
EATED
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>>43285585
this art only makes me want to ask what she wants to eat and if she needs a blanket
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>>43285080
Good.
You can have this bitch so she stops annoying the Flutterrape thread.
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>>43285513
Honestly, I might commission some art just for this thread at some point. So give me your recommendations
>>43285479
Getting nice traction already so I think it will.
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>>43285591
ERIIIS ERIS ERIS LOVE MEEEE PICK ME PLEEEASE
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>>43285596
>So give me your recommendations
Anon restrained to a chair by an Autumn made touch starved and lonely from living away from the other kirins for so long! With some funny dialogue I can't think of right now!
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>>43285591
Noted. Pony Yandere Gen is now the home of Eris in all her chaotic yandere glory. Flutterrape will no longer have to worry about her.
>>43285585
Hugged and held.
>>43285603
Screenshotted for eventual commission, just for you anon. We can workshop dialogue in the meantime.
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>>43285596
Anything involving fluttershy would be kino
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blessed thread, this will be my vacation home
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>>43285620
>Anything involving fluttershy would be kino
You misspelled Pinkamena
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>>43285620
You'll have to be a bit more specific anon. But may I suggest Vampire Fluttershy trapping anon in her wings while her forehead is pressed up against his and her bright red eyes are inches from his eyes? Just something I thought of on the spot.
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>>43285631
NTA but I can picture vampire Flutts tying Anon to his bed while he's asleep
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>>43285631
Apologies, I'm much too tired for this thread right now. That sounds peak though, flutterbat doesn't get enough love.
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>>43285630
That version of her is indeed a perfect yandere and could totally get away with anything she did.

As OP of the Yandere thread, I decree that the first commissions this year will go as follows
1. Flutterbat
2. Pinkamena (Details to be decided by the anon)
3. Applejack (My personal favorite)

>>43285634
Even better.

>>43285641
Understandable, I hope you sleep well Flutter Anon
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Octavia would be an awesome yandere, we need more stories of her being obsessive and poisoning drinks of mares who dare to even look at Anon
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>>43285721
I agree. I think it'd be cool if the more in love she became with Anon the more deranged her music and serenading becomes.
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>>43285387
>Be a beautiful summer day InnEquestrias
>Just you, a cask of fresh cider, your grill and your 6 platonic mare besties.
>All enjoying a good ol' fashioned cookout.
>Flipping a hay burger you can hear past the sizzling that they're brimming with laughter at some joke you didn't catch.
>You didn't need to catch it, this was the life.
>NOTHING could spoil this evening!
"Alright gals, hay burgers are done come and get 'em!"
>Each of them give a characteristically fitting cheer and line up.
>AJ's first and silently tips her hat in thanks.
>You do the same with the one she gifted you and she blushes as she moseys back to her seat and cider mug.
>"Alright! I haven't had a good hay burger in ages! How's the, uh, 'sportswear' treating ya?" she holds out a hoof.
>You bump it and give her a nod.
"Pretty comfortable so far, thanks Dash."
>This makes HER blush despite it being something she brought up and you both knew were referring to the AMAZING underwear and undershirt you were sporting.
>As she flies over to her Pinkie replaces her and adds,
>"And my apron?" smiling so wide it looks like it'd hurt!
>'I like my butt rubbed and my pork pulled' it said in white on a pink background.
>And some balloons on the side for good measure.
"The funniest thing I've seen all month, Pinks."
>She squees as she takes her plate and hops away.
>"Darling, I'm starting to notice a trend and I'm not sure I like it..."
>Something to sour the mood? You won't stand for that!
"What's up, Rares? If you want yours different just let me know and I'll start up another right away."
>Your potato would have to wait but if it meant serving the best grilled hay burgers in your friend group it was a small price to pay.
>"No, not that. I think each of us aren't as special to you as we may think."
>huh
>Reflexively you quietly serve Fluttershy as she skips ahead of Rarity who holds up the line.
>And being the last Twilight stands beside her as a cautious look starts to grow on her face.
>"I think I'm starting to see it too. That's the tie I gave you."
>"And the custom tailored suit I *made* for you." she sneaks an odd look at Twilight who ignores her.
>One by one the girls start to look back at you from where they're eating then start giving each other quick glances.
"I'm not following."
>"Dear, the things I-"
>"WE." Twilight emphasized.
>"gave you were something special, to be a important centerpiece to announce to the world our dedication to each other." she sets down her plate and trots up to you.
>"a promise to give your-" she rears up and holds herself up against you.
>"UNDIVIDED attention."
>Rares looks pretty pissed...
>Seems like you hurt their feelings by accepting so many gifts.
>Maybe just being honest will get you out of this and back into the warm embrace of a good afternoon with friends?
"I- I didn't know that's what these meant. Honest. I'm sorry for-
>"WaitWaitWait! You're saying you spent three days at my place and didn't think there was more to it?"
(1/2)
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>>43285793
"You told me if I stopped holding you I'd fall through the clouds and die?"
>She facehoof'd with a groan "You WOULD have but you were supposed to leave with a feeling that you'd die without me!"
>They all scowl at their friend but stop when the next brings up their experience,
>"Anon, you're saying all those experiments together you... You didn't feel a thing?"
"I mean some of them were agonizingly painful, yeah, but you told me you just needed help with a-"
>Loving-Mind control spell.
>Huh.
>You're starting to see the pattern too.
>"ME! ME! ME!"
>You throw your hands up.
"I just figured you tied folks up in your basement for fun, Pinkie. That that was just something you did."
>A few of her friends nod with looks of understanding, except Twilight (who looks unimpressed) and Fluttershy (who looks confused).
>Her hair straigtens as she deflates onto the plastic outdoor table.
>"Oohh... I thought it felt more than that."
>"Well, at least there's no misinterpreting what we did, Anonymous."
>They turn to Fluttershy, surprised, but then back to you knowingly.
>Rubbing the back of your head, you feel a little silly.
>And just a little stupid.
"I thought we got drunk together. And that we got matching...Ones."
>"I only roofied you and I didn't even drink. Why would we get matching tattoos?"
>"TATTOOS?!" the rest yell.
"That's just something friends do where I'm from."
>You turn around and full of shame...
>Lift the lower part of your suit and shirt.
>"OH DEAR!"
>"Shoooot, why didn't I think of that? It's basically a brand."
>"Fluttershy wins. Yaaay."
>Damn, Pinkie's pretty bummed out.
>"I don't see how she wins when I'VE had sex with him."
>You quickly raise an accusatory finger.
"You know I can't pay for these fuckin' clothes at your prices, essentially one-night stands don't constitute a relationship."
>Okay maybe some friendships were sexual and not entirely platonic but there were ZERO romantic feelings.
>On your part, at least.
>"Anon, you SERIOUSLY took her prices to heart?"
>Fuckin' damn it you knew 'a bajillion bits' wasn't a real fucking number.
>Even IF you were on another planet.
>The group turns to AJ who you all now notice has just finished her hay burger.
>She chews with wide eyes for a moment, then swallows.
>"I just chased 'im around the acre every once in a while to try and rape 'im." she shrugs. "Ain't got time for schemein'."
>Oh.
>You just thought she was gonna make you work more.
>"Well it would seem we're in quite the conundrum."
>"Actually Rarity, I think I've got just the solution..."
>They all turn to Twilight, who gives you an evil smile.
>"Though we'll need a few... Parts to make it work."
>If there were any a time herbivores looked carniverous it was now.
>And you also realize the knife near your grill is gone and Pinkie is slowly smiling as your eyes connect.
>Oh shit...

(2/2)
Just a little silly to start the thread off because reading all the gifts at once made me think of having them well, all at once.
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>>43285793
>>43285799
Excellent work anon! This is flutterrape and yandere tied into one. Though more flutterrape than yandere. Still appreciated for the revival's first green.
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>>43285799
Can’t wait to check this out next break
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>>43285721
>>43285785
>taking a late night stroll
>suddenly, donk
wat do?
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>>43285936
sex
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>>43285936
>Going on a late night stroll after working all day at Sweet Apple Acre's because the air feels good and the stars are pretty.
>Octavia comes out of a bush in front of me and I definitely don't scream like a girl. It was a manly scream.
Ahhhhhhh! Oh Jesus Christ Octavia what the hell? I say, breathing hard and holding my chest.
>Octavia doesn't move, just sits there and watches me with her big eyes locked on me with a manic expression.
>I look around nervously.
So umm, what do you need? You're kinda freaking me out.
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>>43286052
>Octavia takes a step forward and finally responds, letting out a little giggle that turns into laughter. But it's wrong almost.
Oh Anon, I just came to invite you to a show. A show just for you and I. Where none of those other silly ponies can get in the way. Especially that hick boss of yours.
>She takes another step towards me and then another. The smile on her unblinking face growing larger. My fight or flight instincts activate and the hairs on the back of my neck rise up and I start taking a step back.
Oh umm, that's really nice of you Octavia but I'm totally swamped with work, Applejack really drives me into the ground. Maybe another time? I say nervously.
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>>43286076
>Applejack really drives me into the ground
ANON NOOOOOOOO
YOU JUST KILLED AJ
WHY, WHY DID YOU HAVE TO MENTION HER
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>>43286101
It's ok, I'm doing it on purpose to create conflict. Octavia isn't the only yandere in this version of Equestria. Also forgive me is these are really short and choppy, kinda tired and I don't really write greens ever.

>Octavia keeps moving towards me, faster now and her smile widens impossibly.
>I walk backwards into a tree and stumble onto my ass. Unable to move. Nowhere to run.
Oh my darling human. I'll take care of Applejack for you. She won't be a problem for us anymore.
>She presses her forehead to mine and stares deeply into my eyes. Hers unblinking and focused. Her voice goes sickly sweet and low.
In fact, no one will bother you or us ever again my love.
>My eyes widen and my breathe grows shaky.
Wha.....what do you mean? What is this all abo-.
>I'm unable to complete my question as Octavia turns around and knocks me out with a kick. Smiling down at my unconscious body.
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>>43286138
>Octavia isn't the only yandere in this version of Equestria
Oh jesus. Multiple yanderes means Anon's in for a world of trouble.
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>>43286138
>forgive me is these are really short and choppy, kinda tired and I don't really write greens ever.
It's all good anon, I'm interested in where your story's headed
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This is now the rapist donkey thread
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>>43286158
Hell yes
God how I wish she would knock me out, rape me all day all night in her basement and make me raise dozens of foals with her
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>>43285799
Oh poor oblivious Anon. Never stood a chance.
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My sister made this with css.
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>>43286153
Oh yeah, I always wanted to write a yandere Equestria but it won't be this green. It's going to have multiple yanderes but no more than three, maybe four.
>>43286155
Thank you Anon, I think I'll write in microsoft word and then transfer it so my train of thought is better.
>>43286158
Perhaps. Also Jesus there's a lot of Octavia fans here. I hope I can write her character well for you guys.
>>43286175
Funnily enough, this is not far from her plans.
>>43286179
When yanderes ponies are after you, no one can stand a chance. Poor poor Anon.

>As Anon sits there unconscious against the tree, Octavia looks down at him with love that borders on devotion. If one could see her, one could swear there were hearts in her eyes. She then bends down and nuzzles his face, planting a kiss on his cheek.
Oh Anon, we’re going to be together forever. No one will be able to get in the way of our love, my human. My muse.
>Her normally proper and kind tone turns venomous.
Not any of those little whorses of harmony and especially not that hick Applejack. She’s no good for you. I’ve seen the way she looks at you when you work. Licking her lips when you take your shirt off in the hot sun. She only wants your body. Not your mind, not your kind soul.
>She closes her eyes and breathes in and out. Her anger receding and the calm and loving demeanor coming back.
No, Octavia. Save the rest for when you get him back to the house. I’ll tell him how I feel, why I love him so. Come here my muse, it’s time to go home.
>Octavia grabs Anon by the leg of his jeans and pulls him towards her home in Ponyville. Not sensing a figure watching her pull him away. A very angry figure.
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>>43286208
Anon's really going to drive ponies to extinction by making all the mares kill each other for him huh
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>>43286240
Like I said, no more than three to four yanderes in this green. Gonna think on it in the shower. And I'm not sure whether to have real murder in this green or not. But there WILL be fighting. Gonna be her SPOILERS Applejack and Vinyl
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>>43286248
>spoiler
Ehhh those pones don't feel like they'd make good yanderes to me but I am interested for what you've got in store nevertheless
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>>43286261
which ponies do you think would make for good yanderes?
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>>43286261
Nah I disagree. Applejack is super underrated yandere material. She already has whole episodes where she acts mildly yandere, I'd say she's one of the best candidates.
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>>43286270
Well besides Octy, obviously Pinkie but also Marble and maybe Sunset Shimmer but she's usually a human so she wouldn't really fit here, Rarity is also a nice contender
>>43286275
Idk I just never got that "cold and calculated maniac" feeling from her, she always seemed like the humble, hardworking mare who mostly focuses on her work
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>>43285080
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>>43285596
Chryssi is the one character the yandere thing doesn't work for because bugfags are already hopelessly attracted to toxic relationships with evil mares.
t.bugfag
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>>43286261
Country girls can get crazy. I speak from personal experience living in the south. And don't worry, I will be giving a "why" all of them are obsessed with anon. I won't be doing a "just because". Btw, I literally had to look up a map of ponyville because I wanted to put in some accurate locations. But Octavia moved to Canterlot after the movie so I said fuck it. She stays in Canterlot because of anon.

>>43286369
What can I say, Anon gives the best love.

>>43286208
>As Octavia pulls anon away, the very same “hick” that Octavia loathes is watching. Having secretly followed Anon on his walk just as she did every night after he left her farm. Her jaw is clenched so tight normal human teeth would have cracked and a fire of deep hatred and resentment burning in her eyes.
>Everything is screaming inside her to charge and bring Octavia down for insulting her, her friends, and taking HER man, HER human, HER sugarcube. Even if said man doesn’t know her feelings yet. The man she’s grown so fond of since he popped into Equestria that one fateful day six months ago. But she steels herself and waits. Her love for Anon outweighing her murderous rage.
Inside Applejacks thoughts: Just wait sugarcube. Your best pal and best girl Applejack will get you out of this. And then when you’re in mah hooves back at mah farm, I’ll confess to you and we’ll be together. Me and you. Only me and you. Even if somepony needs to be taught a lesson first
>She follows along silently. Obsessive determination moving her muscular Earth Pony body along. Still clenching her jaw and wishing damnation on the grey musician mare. Moving out of the surroundings of Ponyville and closer towards Octavia and Vinyl’s home.
>Everypony is asleep at this time of night except for possibly the drunks at the local bar and Twilight. But Octavia moves on all the same. Dragging Anon like he weighs nothing.
>Octavia approaches her and Vinyl’s house and drags him up to the door, opens it and gets him inside. Applejack looks around and runs to the window. A plan already forming in her mind.
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Any yan stuff that doesn't have anon or humans in it?
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>>43286422
I'm going to be honest brother. Most of the greens are anon x pony and so is most of the art besides solo yandere. I managed to find a pic though. I'm sure we could get some non-anon or non-human greens at some point.
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>>43286422
There's >>43285259
I think an anonpone moondancer yan green was also posted in the last thread we had
Yandere without anon or humans is a tough sell since the only straight option left is some gayass stallion oc or yuri, both of which are somewhat niche.
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>>43285080
Can we have some twilight stories?
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>>43286441
>gayass stallion oc
There are show stallions, like >>43286430
Sunburst is frankly the ideal since Starlight basically yans him in the show and has a whole schizo ntr episode over him.
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>>43286467
Yeah but sunburst is lame
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>>43286485
Exactly, the perfect victim. Literally built to serve the main character Mare who chose him, and running away to Canterlot and becoming a messy disaster just reinforces that he needs her to add stability to his life.
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It's so hard to write yandere without it devolving into melodrama...
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>>43285517
“Celly, I am late because I was getting you a gift, for a special coming up. And I thought I left a note saying that I would be a little late.”
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>>43285269
Same yandere pony on human is hot, and is so much more interesting than a human yandere that’s just creepy, and weird
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>>43286261
Anypony would make a good yandere if you're brave enough
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>>43285799
I liked it but it was really hard to tell who was talking towards the end there.

Also, leave it to Rarity to make things all about her, about her and her dumbass suits, and turn what would have otherwise been a perfectly normal day of chilling and grilling with rapey ponies into what is now a big fucking friendship problem instead.
Fuck Rarity.
Fluttershy wins.
Applerape is kino too.
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>>43286383
Wait so is Vinyl yandere for Anon or Octavia? I'm not sure Octy would want to have Anon in any dwelling with another mare if it's the former
And if it's the latter, is she gonna get revenge on AJ after she hurts Octy or something?
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Yan Cadance using her love powers on a reluctant Shining Armor sporadically to manufacture romantic moments that he'll remember in order to fall in love with her naturally
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>>43286594
>You walk through the castle doors to see her in full Daybreaker form just waiting for you to come back.
Oh fugg.

>>43286596
Yandere pony on human is indeed a personal preference of mine.

>>43286867
Calm thyself good anon. All shall be reveled in due time! I want to be realistic to the franchise so I had to do something with Vinyl. Also didn't want to do the whole, hurr durr she's not home right now. Because she would come home eventually and Octavia is a smart pone and thinks 2 steps ahead. Every yandere pone in this green will be yandere towards anon. But for actual reasons.

Also, good morning Yandere enjoyers, it is I, OP. Finally able to write more greenslop after my military duty is over for the day.
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>>43286946
It's just odd that Octy would trust Vinyl the party animal of all ponies not to try and steal Anon from her, being smort and all. Well, even if she doesn't necessarily trust her she'd still want to keep Anon as far away from any mare as possible
>after my military duty is over for the day.
Based mareknight trained killing machine
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>>43286946
>Finally able to write more greenslop
pic related
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>>43286383
Rooting for Applejack
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>>43287078
applejack and octavia should just make out and fuck off to rape some stallion, they're probably blood related anyway
vinyl should get anon, she's the only one who won't force herself on him and genuinely give him a good time
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>>43287095
Vinyl would probably spike my drink or blackmail me, she’s no angel
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>>43287095
>they're probably blood related
No, the only canon blood relative of Octy looks nothing like an apple
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>>43287114
Symphonia isn’t canonically related to her (and that’s retarded)
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>>43287112
>spike my drink or blackmail me
Vinyl would make you addicted to party drugs and keep you that way
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>>43287001
Let me know what you think. This is the first part where I got real writers block.

>>43287078
We'll see. Not sure how I'm going to end it yet. I have to say I'm having a lot of fun writing my first green.

>>43287095
Jesus Anon.

>>43287216
I went with spiking drinks as her preferred choice here but party drugs could have worked if I was writing a darker story.

>>43286383
>Inside the house Octavia passes the living room and kitchen, heading towards the steps to the basement. She carefully puts Anon down and opens the door. Smiling at the quadruple layer of locks and bolts to keep her love safe and secure. Her ears prick up at the sound of hooves coming up behind her. Her body tensing and turning around to the noise, jaw clenched and a growl forming in her throat.
>And slowly coming out of the darkness is Vinyl Scratch with a knowing and wide smile on her face.
So you decided to do it without me. And here I thought we had a plan.
>Octavia’s tension recedes and she looks at her co-conspirator breathing harder than before.
Oh, deary me Vinyl, I thought someone followed me. You nearly made my fragile heart jump out of my chest. I thought you’d be asleep by now. Surprise you with it in the morning.
>Vinyl chuckles and shakes her head.
Dude you as so impatient, nopony goes out at 11PM for no reason. At least he looks peaceful. I just hope you didn’t hit the poor guy too hard. We need him conscious to confess our undying love for him, you dweeb. I still think we should have invited him for drinks and knocked him out that way. We know he already loves our music. Comes to all our shows. But someone had to pull the trigger early.
>Octavia blushes and looks away, rubbing her neck.
I had to Vinyl; I can’t take it anymore. I need him, WE need him. We’re the only mares who love him and want him for more than him just being a tall exotic alien. No, a stallion like him who enjoys music with all his heart needs us. Deserves us. If we didn’t act soon, he’d get taken away by that damn hick whose idea of music is playing a dingy banjo.
>Vinyl walks forward and hugs her.
Shh, Tia. I know. That girl looks at him like we do. Needs him like we do. Has been since he started working for her. But it won’t matter anymore. He’s ours.
They both break the hug and smile at Anon, that wide devoted and sickening smile looking strange and terrifying on the faces of the normally happy go lucky DJ and calm and collected Cello player.
You are very right love. Help me get him into the basement. I don’t want to hurt him anymore than I already have.
Ok guys, little nervous about this part. I agonized over how to continue and wrote and rewrote like 3 times.
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>>43287226
Damn, Anon's really getting kidnapped by whole gangs of yandere mares out here
>Let me know what you think. This is the first part where I got real writers block.
Going pretty well so far, personally any of the yandere mares dying sounds a bit too dark since it'd be sad to see somepony so devoted to loving you pass away.
>Not sure how I'm going to end it yet
I say take your time thinking it through, some anons can spend weeks planning and writing an enjoyable ending along with how the story will go in general. Never rush your greens or you'll risk significantly fucking everything up
I'm rooting for Octy because getting raped and mindbroken by her sounds hot as fuck
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>>43287226
Turns out the entire town is yandere for you. They keep kidnapping you so you wake up in a new house every morning.
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>>43287258
>Yandere mares dying
No no, none of that.
>I say take your time thinking it through, some anons can spend weeks planning and writing an enjoyable ending along with how the story will go in general. Never rush your greens or you'll risk significantly fucking everything up
Isn't that God's honest truth? I've seen lots of fics just crash and burn with either no ending or a shit ending.
>I'm rooting for Octy because getting raped and mindbroken by her sounds hot as fuck
I figured that's who you were rooting for lol.

>>43287386
That sounds like an actual fun green. Might be a fun write after I'm done with this one. Bunch of yandere mares that don't do any killing, they just actively kidnap anon every night and get into cat fights.
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>>43287406
>I've seen lots of fics just crash and burn with either no ending or a shit ending.
No ending is better than a shit ending IMO, if a writer can't think of a proper way to finish their story then they might as well leave it up to the reader's imagination
>I figured that's who you were rooting for lol.
...Maybe I should stop letting my rapist donkey fantasy thoughts slip out of me so easily, sincerest apologies
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>>43287482
No no. You're fine. I linked this in RGRE and Flutterrape after all.
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>>43287406
The green ends with all of them agreeing to let Anon take some dips in the mirror pool so they all can have an Anon.
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>>43287637
>one of the anons comes out a little short
>like, midget sized
>they all start fighting over which one of them gets to have the "cute" Anon
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>>43287642
5'6 hands typed this
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>>43287637
That's certainly an option, but I want there to be drama and using the mirror pool would be kind of a cop out everyone lives happily ever after. Besides one of the Anon's might come out fucked up and evil.
>Inb4 the usual anon is fucked up and evil in every green
>>43287642
This feels like you just want a teenager anon to get cuddled by yandere ponies.
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>>43287867
The mirror pool would just make a bunch of retards wouldn’t it?
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>>43288225
>The mirror pool would just make a bunch of retards wouldn’t it?
I'm sorry I just envisioned every kind of Anon pouring out of it like some cursed plague from Human to Pony, oh there goes a gryphon..

My mind aside I'm glad this thread got revived!
>>43287482
>...Maybe I should stop letting my rapist donkey fantasy thoughts slip out of me so easily, sincerest apologies
No friend, it's better when it comes from the heart! Loving it so far as well.
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bump
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Salvation
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>>43286512
At some point Startlight would fall into old ways again and use her favorite mind control spells. Classic Starlight.
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>>43288225
Oh it absolutely would. Especially the really edgy retarded Anons
>>43288275
>>I'm glad the thread got revived.
Yep, I intend to keep it going. First thread and first green for me. Im happy with the traction Ive gotten from it so far.
>>43289039
Glimmy is a purpose built pone for yandere greens desu.
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>>43289256
>Be Anon, and you know shenanigans happened.
"Twilight, someone did something again. I know it. Was it you?"
>Princess Twilight looks up from her book of schedules.
>A book for booking schedules.
>Pretty pedantic if you say so.
>"No, Anon. Why do you have to come to me for everything that bothers you?"
"Hey, that rash last time was a problem."
>Twilight folds over, hooves on face, and sighs.
>"Is it more than a hunch?"
"Hey, my hunches are just as good as Pinkie Pie's."
>"Her's works!"
>Starlight walks into the room.
>"Hey you two! What's going on?"
>She's basically hoping in the room full of joy and giddiness.
>"Anon's being Anon."
"I am not! Something's changed. I know it. I feel it in my bones."
>Starlight's grin doesn't leave her face as she tilts her head.
>"Ok? So what a stomach bug? You ate something?"
>"He probably did."
"Thanks Twilight. I would say that."
>You stop.
>Walking past the room, you see Sunburst.
>Tired, but also happy.
"What's he doing here?"
>Twilight looks behind her and sees the stallion walking past.
>"Sunburst? He lives here with Starlight. Because that's what married ponies do."
"Married? No they're not, Sta--"
>Immediately, Starlight slaps a hoof over your mouth.
>Fake laughing.
>"Oh silly Anon. Why don't we go and figure out your problem and stop bothering Princess Twilight."
>Twilight smiles gratefully.
>Get pulled away from the room, until Starlight lets you go.
"What did you do?"
>"Nothing! And if you want to keep your guts inside it will stay that way."
>Fold your arms.
>She's growling at you.
"Did you Back to the Future your relationship?"
>She sputters.
>"How!? That was your first guess!"
"Well it wasn't mind control, but you do have other bad habits."
>Starlight rubs the bridge of her muzzle.
>"I hate how magic repellent you are."
"Yeah whatever, look I'm not going to get in the way of this. I won't tell if you do me a favor."
>"What?"
>Take out a whoopee cushion.
"Next time you do it again, put this under Twilight's throne when she's ruling Canterlot say 100 years are so in the future."
>"I'm not doing it again."
"I'll believe it when pigs fly."
>You'll never see the prank, but you know it was funny.
>Hopefully yandere Starlight doesn't kill you anyway.
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>>43289509
>Blackmailing Glimmer to prank ponies with her time-travel spells.
Based
I hope Twi sat on it during an important meeting.
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>>43289509
Nice to see green
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>>43285382
Who is the artist behind this?
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>>43290097
Maremagnet
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>>43287226
I decided to do something fun and wanted to leave it up to you anons.
Do I have Applejack try to bust in and save Anon and claim him for herself. Or do I have Applejack slink away to plan now that she sees she's competing with two yandere ponies like herself?
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>>43290210
She gets help, got an entire Apple family. Not without warnings of course. Don't need to escalate if they know what's the threat.



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