Sing a song, improvise, share WIP, covers, stuff you made.This is a little song I've been working on and wanted to get some feedback. https://voca.ro/1dCioG38GJlt
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>>128702556That’s kinda rad dude, I dig it. If you asked directly what adjustments i would make? I would like it better if it was sped up by about 50-10 bpms. add some ripping bass and drums and you’ve got a nice little piece there. And finally, what vocals you choose to go with will give the definitive character to the song, so make that choice wisely. Again, if it were up to me, I would try and recruit an amateur female vocalist who’s got a raw, maybe raspy, definitet rugged mid rangey kinda voice. That’s my vision for it. Maybe end on a modulation?Anyway, here’s a little song I wrote, just now. Just for posterity. Thoughts? Does it have potential maybe?https://vocaroo.com/1spC5WEKrlmo
>>128702683Thanks man! Yeah my rhythm’s a bit sloppy and inconsistent lol it sounds good at times but drags an at others. I’m a bit out of practice, but felt inspired lately and was really feeling this and wanted to get some opinions from some strangers. I dig your song too! I like the lyrics and the chord progression a lot. Really the only advice I have is to keep practicing and recording yourself and it’s only natural that you’ll get better.
>>128702683I think there’s definitely potential in it though. More than anything I’d work on making your vocals cut through a bit more, if you know what I mean
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was testing shakers/hats/etchttps://vocaroo.com/1m9vYDpMPEO0
just woke up with electric six in my headhttps://voca.ro/16sQuNICEd5v
>>128703807pretty goodlove the 1:40+ mark when you introduce higher notes in your voice. Got a nice tremelo. makes me wonder what it would sound like layered.
>>128702733>>128702756https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BJLcbj80Ka8Can't blame the young folks to not know the sauce when I never grew up listening to this band as well.
Ensnaring John>BDSM bossa nova songhttps://vocaroo.com/1gVUSDNwVpXAA Secure Base>Irish jig about attachment theory having a “type”>I think the idea is funny but idkhttps://vocaroo.com/15JMBtBX5k5Ii’ll sing ongoing loss, bbb>love triangle and a bunch of augmented chords>i think the chords are cool but idk if it actually sounds any goodhttps://vocaroo.com/1luYCp5tgxRJ>>128702556the line itself is *really* cool. some of the more low-end parts like the intro sound a bit muddy, but obviously you want the distortion there - maybe double it with a another line that’s clean or up the octave? love the slow divebomb at the end too.
>>128703667Nice mix, sounds good.
>>128705180hey its the theater _____, cool stuff.
>>128705180Thank you! Yeah if I were to make a real recording of this I’d make the intro/verse cleaner so it’d be less muddy. I like your stuff too. If I were to make any sort of suggestion it would be to have stronger hooks?
I'm nearing completion of my first EP. It's all stuff that's 3-4 years old at this point, some of the earliest stuff I ever wrote. They're kind of like naked baby pictures at this point, but it's better late than never.https://voca.ro/1kRt6K1dijbiThis one is the oldest, around october 2021https://voca.ro/1BVOvX4lJq5aThis one I like a lot, but I think maybe most of it drags in a way it doesn't when I play it acoustically. Any ideas for something subtle I can add to give it some movement? I want it to still have the feel of an acoustic song>>128702556>https://voca.ro/1dCioG38GJltI like this. Guitar tone sounds a little dull, but that also could be the mic placement or something. Cool.>>128702683This song is dogshit and you're going nowhere. Give the fuck UP!!!!!>>128703667This is the music that plays in the internet tubes. Cool stuff.
https://voca.ro/1HSuVnGPx4wBI put the whole mix thru outboard comp and it sounds warm
https://vocaroo.com/15Qi0RlscOcwfuckaround session from last week mostly vocals and yamaha keyboard with a bit of guitarsome parts I like a lot and some parts are dogshit, but figure I'll post the whole thing
>>128708185Whole thing seems a little quiet, not much else to add
Made this in the middle of the night when I couldn't sleep. I don't think it's working, will probably scrap it but a bump is a bump I guess. Stays on the one harmony so long any change sounds weird. Need to either have a harmonic rhythm established earlier or not have one at all.>>128702556It's fine, musically. Maybe a bit too much distortion. It does sound like it's waiting for the rest of a band though. >>128703667Got a cool sense of space.
>>128711428Helps if I paste the link.https://voca.ro/1gLY3X1uEzvj
https://vocaroo.com/1goEvLiR62FY
>>128711428Thanks for the advice! I'm definitely going to add bass, vocals, and drums this weekend and I know what i want to do. I was just excited that i wrote a song for the first time in awhile and wanted to see what people thought of what I had so far.
>>128707479You can say “faggot” on the internet, it’s okay.>>128707848Yeah, none of these are very hook-y songs tbf.>>128708114>1kRt6K1dijbi, “I’m the Asshole” or whateverThe underlying song idea here is really good. The love some of weird little chords in the mix.If you wanted advice:Nix the vocal harmonies. One tuneless voice works with the vibe you’re going for. Four of them makes it sound worse, not better.Something about the rhythm guitar sound here doesn’t quite click: maybe the tone is too trebly/twangy.The solo is very good obviously but it’s a bit too forward in the mix, given the lax sound of the rest of it. This sound paradoxical but I think I’d be more impactful if it was dialed back a little.>1BVOvX4lJq5aThe good news is that that you’re right to like it, I think: the song is good. The guitar playing and the overall sound and evening the mixing in the final section absolutely kicks ass. The bad news is that you’re also absolutely right: as it stands, it absolutely drags. We have to sit through a pretty repetitive 4 and a half minute song before we get any of that dynamism at all. I see what you’re trying to do with the slower section bursting into the later thing, but the first part is just way too static and repetitive to get the payoff from the last part.Despite how nicely written the instrumental parts in the main sections are, they don’t have much impact because a) they’re all the same energy and sound as the guitar parts on the verse, and b) we hear them quite a few times. If you really want to keep the structure, you might want to rethink how the guitar sounds are used, or in general make the sound contrast with the verses. (eg. you mentioned liking how it sounds with acoustic guitar - why not just… use acoustic guitar for some of it?)Also, vocals might a bit too low energy here for me imo, because fuck there’s a really good song here and I want you to sell it to me.
>>128711428>>128711441>ambient nu-age-y thingno, a harmonic shift here works I think. just approach it as sections a, b, c, etc each playing with different chords, and think of them more like key changes than a progression.>>128702683> Does it have potential maybe?dig the half-assed buzzy acoustic guitar strumming but unfortunately the song is atrociously written and couldn’t be so much as a minor underground hit no matter how many pedals you decide to slap over it
>>128713765>just approach it as sections a, b, c, etc each playing with different chords, and think of them more like key changes than a progression.Yeah my initial plan was to basically drag out 1 more or less traditional harmonic progression over several minutes in sections of fluctuating rhythmic complexity. Which I think is exactly what you suggested.Still trying to decide if it should also turn in to a drum and bass track.
>>128709195How's this in comparison?https://vocaroo.com/1fNpIg6nejsp
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>>128702556ok so i’ve been writing this record for like 10 yearsall the scratch tracks are done, we’re going in to do final drums next week, at which point we’ll start building final bass, final guitars etchere’s some selected songs:https://vocaroo.com/13yRbbevTMUXhttps://vocaroo.com/15KsYucdq08Lhttps://vocaroo.com/15Fvtbsc2L1h https://vocaroo.com/1nwm7rdykDzV https://vocaroo.com/129G6Q8Ex4tF https://vocaroo.com/1mYFHa1usxPshttps://vocaroo.com/1mnzBbhxcHST so obviously like there’s this rustic thing going on for a lot of tracks… so like… idk, do you guys envision that as the ideal sound for this record?like a kind of roomy, intimate, bright eyes ‘i’m wide awake it’s morning’-but-with-modern-mixing kinda thing? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2ETCo4sl_90 cos if so i can totally get an SM7B to do some intimate vocals, and record upright bass instead of electric bass for most songs, put a tea towel on the snare and toms, etc etc etcunless you guys are thinking like, maybe it should sound a bit more like the most recent wednesday album? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CAoz3ykn2t4 like idk, more poppy, less room, etc etci guess both of those things sound mostly the same once you mix both of them moderni guess it’s more just a question of, idk do you see this as a rustic folky album with like mandolins and mostly acoustic guitar-driven, or do you see this as a folk-rock record like wednesday/wilcoidk.any direction would be appreciated, obviously we’ve been writing this for a long time (music's changed a lot since we began) and now that the final drum sessions are finally booked in i’m getting a bit nervous
>>128722038>same alienoh I remember this! been a while anon I think it was back in 2020-2021 when I first heard it. Will reply later with more thoughts just wanted to say that I remember the tune.
>>128722038just got 20 seconds into the first track and holy shit you weren’t joking about going for a bright eyes sound. be prepared for very direct comparisons if you get reviewed, because your voice sounds identical. (not a bad thing, just very striking.)also holy fuck it’s all just extremely good. honestly I’m not sure how much input you really need on this because these tracks are perfect for what they are. congrats with the last few sessions man. (I know this isn’t a shill thread, but do you’ve a name for your act, so I can know when the record comes out?)
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Took until my 30s to get diagnosed with adhd, was kind of a surprise but looking at the like 10 ongoing music projects in completely different genres I've got like 20% finished each I guess it shouldn't have come as a surprise. Anyway here's something from a thing that won't get finished, featuring a slightly too loud ocarina.https://voca.ro/1kO7lnSju1P3
>>128713653Thanks for all the feedback. A lot of it is stuff that I already knew I had to do, but it can be good to hear it from someone else, as opposed to friends who say it sounds fine. For the second song, I think I might track acoustics for the whole thing and have the electric cleans come in after the first chorus. Then I'll slowly add small, subtle overdubs so that things are always changing, but not so much as to detract from the rockout at the end. I want to redo the last chorus at some point, I think it should be done louder and up an octave, but in general I thought my pass at the vocal was one of my better takes.
This song is called Pizza, because I recorded the parts quickly for this thread while it was cookinghttps://vocaroo.com/1fi0CgrVzKY5>just4fun.jpg>>128722038God Speed Anon, this kind of music is my Jam
don't have anything to contribute right now. but the last thread was really fun. i'm glad to see anons being creative and making music. even if i suck. it's cool that some of you are really good.
>>128702556https://voca.ro/11WVgsf6OujJDumb 2 second thing because it popped into my head when I watched the Walkers poppadum advert from 1989. Never to be played or thought about again
I tried to make an entire track in a single synth ages ago, think I give up. I just can't make this free emulation of a Roland Juno 6 produce good drum sounds. That's not even something I can manage on a modern synth. It's just been sitting on my hard drive for ages but I don't think its happening.https://voca.ro/1lzYNljrJ9nQI'm not imagining it right? This would be listenable if I just swapped the drum sounds for literally any others.
>>128722038>>128724048>>128723581you are 2 kind and also i will not shill the name here for the sake of honouring all that vocaroo general does that it is good and holy but ty ty i've mulled over your words all day>>128727523you WILL write in some high hat articulation (whether it's foot closing or otherwise) in the intro sectionyou WILL compose whisper distorted deftone vocals for thisyou WILL add dynamics by having a quiet or staccato section---****ALRIGHT EVERYONE HERE I NEED YOUR HELP****drummer for these two fairly large artists enjoy our work and are happy to track drums for us instead of our current choice:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YR9w_CfrH1chttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IAoPryBArwcmy thoughts on drummer 1 vs drummer 2:- drummer 1 is my literal hero, and it would bring me great joy to listen to this record when it's done and always go "wow, i'm just like w1lc0", or feel like m0dest m0use when j0hnny m4rr joined them. my concern is the problem that this fella brought up >>128724048 which is that we sound a bit too much like 2000s bright eyes, and tracking with a 2000s drummer (with his touch and tone) would compound that problem and probably hinder the success of this record on streaming- drummer 2 i am also a big fan of, and he's obviously played on many big hits with tea towels on his snare, so he knows how to get the tone without any guesswork. SO GUYS, ARE WE HAPPY TO HIRE DRUMMER 2? we'd probably end up sounding a bit bedroom 2020s indie pop like this https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y3IrW-Hbb4w&t=89s^ that's also himidk i think it would make us sound a bit more original, a bit more modern, a bit more subdued in a way that's accessible to normies -- would still sound like bright eyes in performance, just wouldn't have that 2000s trebly, higher energy kinda soundwould ideally sound like the sequel to bright eyes rather than the ripoff
>>128730030Honestly the main thing I was underscoring with the Bright Eyes comparison is literally that your singing voice sounds very very similar to Conor Oberst - and well, there’s presumably not a whole lot you can/should do about that right now.I don’t think the choice of drummer should be guided by the comparison worry; do what you actually feel is best to bring what you want out of the songs.
yoi cut my foot, ill write lyrics about it
>>128732269As I’ve said to many lovers: make it short but good.
>>128728455It's largely your poor sound selection across the board that makes this unlistenable. Literally no sound you use compliments any of the others. Sounds like a clusterfuck of poorly chosen presets.
>page 10https://voca.ro/11SUiEyWkbalWake up. You dozed off a little while ago.What were you dreaming about? The flute again?
>>128735844The flute sound here is awful sorry. Especially given this melody and the sort of little runs you’re doing.Literally just go out and buy a flute, you can get cheap bamboo ones on eBay/Ali/Temu/whatever for a few dollars.The warped stuff in the background is cool though. The piece could actually work if you finished it though.
>>128735844>>128736077Sorry if that was a bit mean. I meant the substance of what I was saying but I wasn’t trying to shit on you
did a version of an Irish traditional song with a little pinch of spice by raising the 4thhttps://vocaroo.com/1c8vHm0orS7b
>>128736077>>128736287Haha. Its fine anon. Its a one and done live play in to a split patch I made just for the purpose of learning to make my own split patch using patcher in FL. It was just there and I wanted to bump the thread. I do have more realistic flutes I could use.But thanks for the feedback because I do actually like what's going on with the pad and might reuse it.
https://vocaroo.com/1domGEMsqA1vthoughts? already got a singing melody in my head so prolly finishing this tomorrow, just gonna change the drums a bit
This the night vibehttps://vocaroo.com/19NDMxrRKdhf
>>128713653Ok, update. Haven't gotten to the second song, but I just finished a load of work on the first. I got a better tone for the rhythm track, took forever to record. Hope most people don't notice the punch ins. Added a subtle parallel chorus effect. Then I added some panned twinkly bits on the last head, just a spontaneous idea.https://voca.ro/1nVz8TvmRs6NI'll try to get work done on the latter song tomorrow.>>128726511I enjoy this composition. Not so much when the ocarina plays solo, I like the full part.>>128727523Kind of reminds me of Treepeople. Cool stuff!>>128737819This is mega. I like how blown out it is, bass work is top. Reminds me of Last Dinosaur.
>>128736394holy shit anon
Sheeeit
>>128740068very soundtrack-y, excellent ambient neoclassical darkwave vibes
frens i tried to do a vocaloid song for the first time (or synthv), but i feel a few notes in the singing are off, but i cant tell exactly what it is that feels off. what do you think? also first time i wrote lyrics in englishhttps://vocaroo.com/1hr9ultUU1aI>>128740068reminds me of a short vn i played that played in an empty soviet town, makes me feel like i dissociate in a good way>>128737819sounds blown out but i guess its intentional, thought what do you want to change about the drums? felt like theyre a good fit, maybe just the hat a bit louder
imma review yalls later
>>128745514>frens i tried to do a vocaloid songcool, nice. it sounds proper song-y, id use some other preset, ir recall there were like 80 diff mikus, miku suft, miku indie, raspy, etc. that one sounds strained need to be more carefree, ya feel
>>128727716this is actually really nice anon, love the sweet relaxed bass voice
Spoken wordhttps://voca.ro/15O62iD4W28F
A dusk vibehttps://vocaroo.com/195hRHIQu3BH
its only 40 seconds, I cant sing.My apologies.https://voca.ro/1ordhEgOvUqs
>>128745514I like the bass guitar, whole song isnt for me but its neat.
>>128740568Reminds me of Shane Macgowan
>>128737819sounds like one of the songs from the Tony Hawk pro skater 2 Soundtrack
Skibbereen - https://voca.ro/1fSpsEUt7Vd8>>128736394you should try this one, I nearly cried singing it lol
>>128702556https://voca.ro/1iSR2TzJPuHdAm I a good singer?
>>128702556Neat tone.>>128702683Meme>>128703667Modern keygen music if that existed>>128703807Not feeling vocal delivery im sorry>>128708114Firat track i like. Pretty weird and unique, sp the layered vocals.>>128708185Are the vocals that important? They drown the guitar, which was cool and had this buzzy quality, would hard pan the vocals idk>>128708254Wtf skimmed through it ill def go back and review it, pretty interesting, every bit i heard
>>128711428>>128711441This for a game? Its neat as ambience>>128722038Enjoyed your vibe and tone. Pretty neat tremolo, its fragile and intimate, believable, good shit>>128726511Comfy, made me think of an old organ piece but deconstructed for ensemble>>128727523Really liked the intro, wish it stayed in that direction>>128727716Pretty good to be made on the fly>>128728455Yeah the drums kinda ass. Maybe its a programming thing, its always the same sound same "boxy" pitched resonance>>128735844Crummy soundfont vibes, i loved *.sf2 so much
My latest sloppy noodling drafts. I would appreciate your opinion on structuring. This version goes from bedroom elevator muzak intro/verse to a bluesy riff at 1:44 after the chorus, however it feels more disjointedhttps://voca.ro/1mZSa73Cd5sKThis one has a bluesy thing integrated as a part of verse before a chorus, which I feel as a better introduction of the riff, however it makes overall structure too repetitivehttps://voca.ro/1lbpj29ea9NF
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https://voca.ro/1daIckBR0nNB
https://voca.ro/19EpdEY4RL95New one to show off. This is song number 2, 3? I can't remember. It screams "track 1." The lyrics are indeed bad, but I have a weird thing about whether words are kept or not. In my estimation, I was a terrible lyricist back then, but if I was able to vomit up this stuff, which isn't terribly offensive, it can stay. I also don't want to sound like I'm deteriorating as a lyricist on my later work.>>128747990Pvre sovl>>128748007Wow, thanks>>128748587Like a cartman shaped angel>>128749421This stuff is cool, the tracks feel out of sync though. I like the first one better, nothing wrong with a hard transition.>>128750358Best post ITT
>>128749106>This for a game? It's to kill time making something to put in my ear holes. >Its neat as ambienceThanks. I'm (slowly) working on an ambient new age album but I don't think this fits the sound.Here it is after a bit more work anyway. https://voca.ro/1fYaCcSOjjQcDon't know if I'll do more to it. Kind of feels like it could go on forever.
>>128702556I made a few mistakes on this https://voca.ro/1gmXFN72WPGk
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lazyfagging for now. little track i made because i was feeling awful and needed to make something to distract myself. i don't play guitar really but when i do i play thru a roland keyboard amp and i think it sounds nice https://vocaroo.com/1lygjl0N5tfW
>>128748000thank you fren>>128745689thank you ill check out the presets, didnt know about them
>>128702556https://voca.ro/1owAfr7DvsRvsong I'm working on inspired by waiting by lever fall. I think the cymbal sounds ass but can't tell, any advice? and other advice? I've never made a song before
>>128757056What cymbal? There was no cymbal. Only snare and kick drum. It sounds like indie/post punk video game music. Maybe the drum sound could phase into a real drum sound or you can keep it that way. Needs better production or you can keep it intentionally low fi.
>>128757477>what cymbal the crash thing I panned left that plays on the first 2 beats>needs better productionhow
>>128748140God I loved this. Thank you so much. I’m living in England atm and I’m starting to have feels here myself :’)I wish I could sing a trad song like this properly. I can barely sing in my natural accent at all, and my voice is so fucking melodramatic the only one’s I can pull off are the haunting laments about wanting to throw yourself into your lover’s grave. (I mean, that’s no small repertoire, but still.)
>>128759082Just go for it.This weekend when you have a few pints, when you get home put on rebel songs or a ballad and bellow a few lines.The thing I found is to sing within your "range" basically your normal speaking voice but drawing out the vowels without going to high or low.aaaaoooouuuuiiiieeeeyyyyYou can warm up like with vowels and dont forget to record yourself so you can get over the cringe.And when you reckon you got a song you can sing sort of try and project it to a fake audience in your room.I have weeks that I sing and then nothing for months and then I sing for weeks and so on.I started cause its good for stamina.US army cadences are hilarious and good to do when doing push ups or burpies>My old granny>I used to have a cadillac>We are number one / go army>Yellow ribbon>down by the riverSome of these are funny as fuckbtw when you find them on youtube you will hear some of the singers sound hoarse or off key and its just fun dude, gotta have fun with it.
https://voca.ro/1ahtcQgrqISw "hypersomniac"
>>128757540Yes, it sounds a little warbled and washy. >How Pay someone or get better at your craft. We all suck in the beginning. Nobody was particularly good in the early stages of their craft. It is up to you. Being not good is a necessary step in artistic evolution. Plenty of bands and artists who had not so great debuts or early eps that eventually got better with time and with familiarity with the process
>>128759996>OpeningThought buckethead>song is greatI cant remember the guy you sound like but it sounds british I think.I might be wrong, I am not that well versed in music/bands/singers etc.Heard something like this a lot in movies, maybe RockNRolla or Lock Stock and three smoking barrels.I'd say you could go pro
Wish I knew some rappers to work with. This is a WIP beat.https://voca.ro/12oSE9OnFQIf
https://voca.ro/11tffDLVECXk i like nirvana lol
niggas sleepy
>>128759996Brilliant! Goes on a little long, but fucking brilliant.
ending section of a song im working onhttps://vocaroo.com/1hF2GGa2Xskn>>128760576this is so sick, love ur vocals and the style of ur production!>>128750506i LOVE the slacker tone on this so much, i see what ur going for here and id rlly like to hear more. this really reminds me of what id be listening to when i was first getting into all the 90s pavement/malkmus stuff, if i heard this during that time period itd definitely be on rotation. the screams toward the end also r so raw.>>128745514the production/beat on this is really nice, but seconding the other anon that suggested a diff miku preset or just adding more effects on her vocals to give it a more unique feel
>>128768289Thanks! Pavement is not what I'd expect... I think the original idea was if Behind The Lines by Genesis was on Weezer's Blue Album. The song was never finished until we went in to record, so I quickly figured out that bridge section, which by my estimation is shameless Dinosaur Jr plagiarism. It feels to me a little bit like a song that was never strangled into it's proper form, but it's so old that I don't care. Never came up with a proper title, so it's just called Yellow cause that's the color it sounds like to me.
i wish i could sing so i could partake in these threads.
https://vocaroo.com/13CNsHXpmfpLRough little whiny emo bedroom demo of a song about my old truck that caught fire. First attempt on the vocals, need to re-record them and mix the track better. I'm recording with a 4track and mixing to a older tape deck."I just put it in againIt's been a long timeMotor spinning but the belt is slippingThe laser eye can't shine The metal teeth from the apparition hit the cylinder and biteIt tried to turn over again but just wined and wined and I just shaved my head again instead of putting memories in itand I don't remember whenI wanted to be in themI just stuck it in againTo see if it would start my heart was clicking rapidly like spokes with trading cards the platter spun a couple times and then it started smokingI ran behind a joshua tree and watched the commotion black soot in the air and in my lungsI know that's what I'm made ofIn the airAnd my lungsTires stuck in snowon a desert roadfeeling dead-end commotion Think I'm stuck in limbo Stuck in limbo"
>>128770241vocals are almost unintelligble.No idea how you can change that
>>128770241just remembered, you can upload MP3s to Vocaroo so no need to record live.Get a free audio editing program and slap the vocals together with the track and upload it and boom we can hear your voice better :D
>>128768289this is pretty cool but like these ones >>128760576 >>128770241 it is hard to hear the vocals
>>128760373The track made me think of Ice JJ fish, no idea why xDsounds good tho
>>128770317I'll just re-record the vocals and mix my shit better when I get over this flu I've got going. I lurk this board a lot so ill repost when ive got this cleaned up eventually.
Another tune for the prospective EP. I remember listening to that dog. and trying to write a song like Long Island. I think this needs a few touch ups in some places, I don't really like the way the last note of the guitar solo dies. The different guitar takes also get so slightly out of sync at the start in a way that drives me nutty. Maybe I'm losing perspective, who knows.
>>128770638Whoops, forgot the link!https://voca.ro/1bMzgRyvJePd
>>128769839I'm pretty insecure about singing but posting itt actually really helps, even if anons shit on you
>>128770389Lurking is good, eat some soup any soup.
>>128769839ill take an honest voice before some "singer" type fake voice any day. record some shit, faget, its fun.
>>128769839Just do it, no one cares if you're good. Threads like these are the last good things on this board.
Im so backhttps://vocaroo.com/17HO4dhAPo1b
https://voca.ro/1khaDOisnCX5What is this song? It's a female singer, guitar backing track I think, kind of like beabadoobee
Spent an afternoon channeling my inner Trent Reznor.Heavily auto-tuned vocals because I'm not gud at the in-tune sings.> -16 lufs. Maybe drop the volume a bithttps://voca.ro/1hxMW1hoTZGG
>>128777334Yeah, very very much has that late NIN vibes. I like the little details like that rattly texture in the beat. Not that keen on the strings sound, though that might just be me; maybe experiment with some other sounds, different synths/patches etc? Vocal delivery could maybe be better (not in the sense of like, singing ability or whatever - moreso just there’s a kind of affectation to it that doesn’t quite fit imo).Really good start.
>>128776960>https://voca.ro/1khaDOisnCX5https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9HtHEgINHO0?
>>128780052No, it's more like new soul by yael naim or that coffee song by beabadoobee. It most likely has millions of views on youtube. The song is not very samba at all, the backing track guitar is just bedroom pop stuff, but the vocal melody maybe has a bit of a samba rhythm, maybe
>>128702556Please someone help me find this song. The robots have failed me and BRAIN-FM can only satisfy me for so long. Some kind of folksy or sea shanty song. Old. Attached is the tune in my head in da's: https://voca.ro/18ecbJOV0xjc
>>128776882Pleasant mumbling from you and your guitar, but mumbling can only be so good. One of you needs to straighten out.>>128777334Not a fan of the bass sound, personally.
>>128782562>needs to straighten out.aight aight will work on it, ty.
please let lme know hwta you think of my vocal song (ioamgine the voices are isnturmnnets)_ https://voca.ro/1oSoyMmIVPnc
>>128782540Honestly sounds like too generic a melody to tell from this. Hope you remember it bro
>>128786501i miss when schizophrenics used to make cool music
>>128776882there’s something about this that’s really compelling. the musical ideas on the guitar and in the vocals are beautiful, and the overall atmosphere is there. I can see this becoming really really special (and I’m not just gassing you up - develop your sound a bit, and I could easily imagine your work being the kind of off-kilter folk I absolutely love to listen to).*but* I also largely agree with the other anon. the complete lack of articulation in the vocals, to the point that to the listener it just wordless groaning, is jarring, especially when the guitar is also a little messy (even if it’s very well-composed).Thom Yorke gets away with singing like that because he’s got Radiohead behind him and nobody actually wants to hear what he has to say anyway. Quirky indie Lo-fi folk people get away with playing the guitar like that usually because they articulate their lyrics clearly enough that the whole thing comes together anyway.you don’t need to change anything drastic or start enunciating like a theatre kid like >>128705180 but even just a smidge more control over the sound would tip this from a great idea to a little masterpiece.
>>128702556this is my first post here, hello from /x/>breakbeat, edm, schizophrenia https://voca.ro/13UEbpxS1z4U
>>128788260Is this a generic AI generated pop song about God?Don’t like it man. That shit’s Satanic, sorry.
Came up with this blues-ish acoustic guitar riff that goes into some weird modal stuff.Is it worth developing/working into a song?Mostly wondering because I find singing while playing this kind of riff really hard so I want to know if the riff is actually interesting enough to be worth trying.https://voca.ro/1jTblGffbc5w
