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what should I improve? 03/13/26(Fri)14:48:35 No.4500652

File: IMG_20260313_124055.jpg (121 KB, 854x466)

what should I improve? Anonymous 03/13/26(Fri)14:48:35 No.4500652

I took this photo with my phone, then edited with Lightroom Mobile. Is good? Or should I improve something? Im newbie

Anonymous
03/13/26(Fri)15:00:04 No.4500655

Anonymous 03/13/26(Fri)15:00:04 No.4500655

>>4500652
proof that even with an eye for composition phones are bad

it looks crispy, blotchy and harsh. kinda sad ngl. ive shot with nicer phones and went to a cheap shit iphone se because even the best phone cameras look like ken rockwell grabbed a sony PNS and edited his jpegs in luminar neo and perfectly cleaner.

Anonymous
03/13/26(Fri)15:23:09 No.4500659

Anonymous 03/13/26(Fri)15:23:09 No.4500659

>>4500652
Congratulations, it looks better than 99% of photos on this basket weaving board. No need to improve anything unless you have some specific concept for the photo.

Anonymous
03/15/26(Sun)06:41:43 No.4500826

Anonymous 03/15/26(Sun)06:41:43 No.4500826

>>4500652
the turn of the road is too centered, should be a bit off to the left I think (rule of third type offset)

the lower elevation area on the left of the road is too visually dominant while being too close to the edge of the picture

the camera is too low (too close to the road, because you were standing at a place that was lower than the road)

Anonymous
03/15/26(Sun)09:10:32 No.4500840

Anonymous 03/15/26(Sun)09:10:32 No.4500840

>>4500655
>it looks crispy, blotchy and harsh.
it's 800x600

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