An amish girl walks home on a beautiful autumn day She is set upon by a blue haired creature >why hello beautiful, do you mind if i speak to you a whilei must get home, my husband is expecting me and the harvest approaches >husband ? oh dear, and i suppose your at his beck and call. you know dear...your being exploited exploited ? i know not these words, i do my duty as my love does his>oh yea, but have considered that he is benefits from your subjugation. you see dear, there is a little thing called the patriarchy, and you are a victim...oh yes patriarch, i know this word, it for man and his stewardship of the earth yes ?>ehh..no dear, you dont understand. the men are evil because they have more power strange you call them evil, doth nature not have power over man, and yet we call it not evil, such is the way of things >no dear. they are evil. and they are exploitors, predators. oh look at you, barely a child, and i suppose you where married off against your wishes nay mam, i am a woman and was betrothed in full agreement >no, you where sold like cattle by your father no doubtwhat strange words you speak madam, is it not right for a man to make provision for his beloved >UGH ! YOUR LANGUAGE IS ANTIQUATED ! YOU DO NOT UNDERSTAND THE NEW WAY OF THINGS. YOU ARE BEING OPPRESSED, NOW SAY IT !nay mam i shall not, i sense upon ye a spirit most foul, now i shalt return to my beloved >YOU WILL NOT YOU ARE BUT A CHILD AND YOU ARE BEING PREDATED UPON BY A BACKWARD CULT ! YOUR COMING WITH ME Nay Jew, look upon this cross !>HISSSSSS HISSSS (SHRIEKS AND DISSAPEARS INTO THE SHADOWS)
Liked. I would have made it shorter: An amish girl walks home on a beautiful autumn day. She is set upon by a blue haired creature>why hello beautiful, do you mind if i speak to you a whileTf away from me DYKEWhole village stabs blue to death with pitchforks and burns her cadaver in effigy
Make it an opera instead considering all they do is talk. Rewrite it as a duet.
>>521026784I like it. Good dialogue and most importantly confirms my biases and makes me feel good inside with humble innocence yet passionate belief.
