/r9k/ - Tell me if you can tell whats going on in this sequence - ROBOT9001

Anonymous

Tell me if you can tell whats (...) 10/30/25(Thu)04:16:02 No.82958804

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Tell me if you can tell whats going on in this sequence Anonymous 10/30/25(Thu)04:16:02 No.82958804 Archived

Making a comic, thats a critique of modernity, and this sequence is meant to be confusing in the sense that I want people to be just as confused as the characters with what the fuck is going on and where the hell are they, but to actually understand what the characters are doing, if that makes sense

If your interested, the full WIP for the first chapter is here
https://imgur.com/a/wealth-toil-work-progress-first-chapter-9ucpQ1J#

Anonymous
10/30/25(Thu)04:17:13 No.82958809

Anonymous 10/30/25(Thu)04:17:13 No.82958809

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Textless posts are not allowed webrwehfbsdhbfadvgdfjv

Anonymous
10/30/25(Thu)04:18:26 No.82958816

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Anonymous
10/30/25(Thu)04:19:06 No.82958822

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Anonymous
10/30/25(Thu)04:19:55 No.82958825

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ill add that the fat girl on the left posts here, and is a femcel (currently)

Anonymous
10/30/25(Thu)04:21:22 No.82958831

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10/30/25(Thu)04:22:23 No.82958838

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Anonymous
10/30/25(Thu)04:22:59 No.82958841

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just a few more to go, probably just shoulda put these in an Imgur

Anonymous
10/30/25(Thu)04:23:36 No.82958845

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Anonymous
10/30/25(Thu)04:24:13 No.82958848

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Anonymous
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and there it is, doing the next page now, but Im hoping the rest of the storys interesting, its gonna split between the girlfriend whos gonna drown to death, but be revived as an undead ghoul wanting to live the life she never got to, and the boyfriend whos gonna be forced to control another women to keep them in the media spotlight so that secret service agents dont get a chance to kill them for finding out about this conspiracy

Anonymous
10/30/25(Thu)07:22:39 No.82959682

Anonymous 10/30/25(Thu)07:22:39 No.82959682

>>82958804
I read your imgur dump and the posts here.
I don't like your drawing style, but the story is interesting enough.
I can make out the action at the end, so it isn't too confusing.
I encourage you to continue.
Wouldn't you have got better quality feedback if you had posted in /co/?

Anonymous
10/30/25(Thu)08:30:07 No.82960120

Anonymous 10/30/25(Thu)08:30:07 No.82960120

>>82959682
thanks for the feedback, and yeah I post on co and ic every so often but i saw a few people here a bit ago posting there art and people giving good critique so I thought Id try my hand. Drawing style I do gotta work on, Ive been trying to emulate some european artists and Hirohiki Araki for a while, but cant seem to do it properly

Anonymous
10/30/25(Thu)10:40:44 No.82961110

Anonymous 10/30/25(Thu)10:40:44 No.82961110

Yeah i can tell, pretty good