I want to make an imperfect primarch, a prototype that the emperor was so digusted with he exile him and his gene sons in the early imperium.The main feature of his primach would be almost identical appearance to the emperor but failure would be all over his body, half of his body would be young while the other half is withered away with extreme age.>This primachs sons.I'm thinking, they would either share this gift or either be young or extremely old, regression a space marine begins to get extremely old over a period as organs fail from the ravages of old age, some never get this fault leading to youthful examples while others suffer regression as they are argument.I want to say their background is they exited the warp, after being exile and crash landed on a planet with admech, imperial army elements and gene sons and this primach littering the planet of this now abandon planet with humans, space marines and their primach in the 10,000 years since then. when rediscovered they were intergarted into the greater imperium, the forges the admech elements had build and the space marine and the miltian human population that has muitplied since the crash landing.Anyway. That's all i have.PLEASE FUCKING DECIMATE IT AND HELP ME WRITE SOMETHING GOOD FROM THIS.
>>96574570>make a primarch>it's a girl>Emps goes "EWWWWWWWWWWWWW" and blasts it into space before all the other ones>"I hope we never find that one"But one day soon, GW will be walking on the beach and they'll find a strange pod, a pod labelled "Female Space Marine Sprues" and they'll start to hear the drums from Jumanji.
>>96574570Fix your typos, you lazy fuck.
Are you just trying to make BL authors look good?
>>96574793>Here ChatGPT did what you can't.Concept: The Imperfect PrimarchI want to create a unique Primarch, a prototype that the Emperor found so flawed and imperfect that he exiled both the Primarch and his gene-sons during the early days of the Imperium.Appearance of the Primarch:This Primarch’s most striking feature would be his appearance, which mirrors the Emperor’s in many ways but with noticeable signs of failure. Half of his body would look youthful and vibrant, while the other half would be withered and decayed with the extreme age that marks a deep, unhealable flaw in his genetic structure. His very existence would be a contradiction—an embodiment of both youth and ruin.The Sons of the Imperfect Primarch:The gene-sons of this Primarch would either inherit his flawed nature or remain unaffected by it. Some would be afflicted with rapid aging, suffering from the decay of their organs and minds over time, while others would retain their youth and vigor, unaffected by the curse that defines their father. Over time, the Space Marines would experience the effects of aging in different ways, leading to a mix of ancient warriors and youthful ones.
>>96574993Background and Crash Landing:After being exiled, the Primarch and his sons would have entered the Warp, only to crash-land on a remote planet. There, they would have found remnants of the Adeptus Mechanicus, Imperial Army elements, and other survivors. For 10,000 years, the Primarch and his gene-sons would have remained isolated on this forgotten world, surrounded by humans, Space Marines, and the remnants of the Adeptus Mechanicus. The planet would become a mixture of these various factions, with the Adeptus Mechanicus building forges and the human and Space Marine populations gradually growing.Rediscovery and Integration:When the Imperium eventually rediscovered the planet, they would integrate these survivors back into the greater Imperium. The Adeptus Mechanicus would have advanced technologies, some based on the forges built long ago. The Space Marine chapter would have either aged or retained their youthful strength, depending on their genetic fate. Over time, the Imperium would bring them into the fold, though the memories of their exile would linger.
>>96574570Technically The Angel is/was an "imperfect" primarch. It was by far the strongest primarch, but also a complete omnicidal death machine that Big E had to trick into being sealed into a coffin because it was going to kill all of mankind to stop chaos.
>>96574570Why is sheep evil?
