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Magi Case was unfiltered chuuni kino.
How much immortality is enough?
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>>97244689at least 4.
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How do you guys feel about selecting a power, but it has has some techniques and feats already written to give you an idea of what it can do and a base to work off of as you make your own later whwn writing your adventure?Or is it better just to.make those example techniques and feats stuff you have to buy for some reason?
>>97244625>monstergirl>Urban storefront -14pI want to be a shopkeeper in a magical setting. Selling (cursed) items, selling potions.>kitgirl - 8p>two-tailed - 4p
>>97244785Sounds way too abstract. Depends on a CYOA's main focus.I want to raise skeletons and give them weapons made of bone. It means I want a "necromancy" power of some sort. If the CYOA is not overly detailed it will have "fire magic - nature magic - necromancy" as selectable "powers" and then I'll just have improv from there. If the CYOA is detailed, like that one necromancy CYOA where you have to learn to manipulate the souls somehow, and it had dedicated ways to 1. morph tissue into something 2. put soul in a corpse as a container 3. allow a soul in the container to manipulate the corpse 4. control the soul etc., then of course it's a necromancy-focused CYOA and it should have more selections to add to the general one. Which is more interesting is up to the reader but I like autistic stuff like power tech trees and such.
>>97244785>How do you guys feel about selecting a power, but it has has some techniques and feats already written to give you an idea of what it can do and a base to work off of as you make your own later whwn writing your adventure?I quite like it.
Gil is a born again Christian
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CYOAs should be one page long.
CYOAs should let me be a cute girl.
CYOAs should have immortality.
>>97244699Four years seems like not enough
>>97244689TroyX levels of
>>97244689At least agelessness, that's the minimum required for me to play the cyoa.
>>97244814You could jist say you like the second option if you like tech trees.
>>97244966Hey is that Jefrey
>>97244988I say this and look like this.
>>97244689extended lifespan
>>97245096nta but i am suddenly possessed by the idea of making a cyoa where the abilities are all in tech trees and you dont buy them you have to train and develop/unlock bits of the tech tree as you adventure or study or smth but you can buy access to the tech trees and maybe multipliers for training speed in each one
>>97244966That's like claiming that games should always be short arcade slop.Only a fool could have an opinion like that.
>>97245132Choked on a chicken bone ass post
>>97245142i mean, i can see why some people might think that, what with how most studios keep pumping out actual slop filled with dlc's and micro transactions and whatnot, so i can see why some might want to go back to a simpler time of gaming, bangers like helldivers and expedition 33 notwithstanding of course
>>97244689It's enough for it to attainable. It doesn't need to be directly offered as an option, but ideally there are multiple paths to gain it later.
>>97244689none is needed
>>97244689You're asking the wrong question.The correct question is: How do I use this to turn men into cute girls?
>>97245158nta but one could argue that it is folly to make oneself too invulnerable in the event that they may one day desire to die after having accomplished all they wished or not wanting their existence to burden the things they have created or loved (like if they got infected with something turning them evil or into a plague vector or a natural disaster or whatever else) etc etc etcim not saying one has to think like that, im saying one could think like that and still be just as correct as the guy who wants to live for all time so they can continue to do stuff or smthalso i realize the original responder saying agelessness was saying that was the absolute baseline not what they actually think one should go for, like saying a boat should float when its supposed to at baseline and not saying theyre perfectly fine with nothing but rafts made by tying logs together as their navy
FUCK YOU RAKE CHRISTMAS IS OVER GIVE ME MY HORSE OC
>>97245193My money is on the possum. Normal possoms turn trash into food. A magic possom must be even more broken.
>CYOA based on a franchise anime.>Author does not include ANY canon characters to be companion characters you can meet or recruit or even romance.>Author does not make canon events quests that you have to help complete OR in a challenege change the outcome of.>If the CYOA is interactice prepare to have a bunch of choices not connected to the setting at all and are directly taken from another series.>If the CYOA does feature companions they are all a bunch of original characters, several who don't even share an art style close enough to the series.>If the CYOA does feature canon characters, the author removes them all in the next update.>Authir inserts tons of curse words randomly into the CYOA in several of the choice options.Why are manga turned CYOAs so fucking cursed? What causes this?
>>97245219Using Capital Letters Would Make Your Posts Much More Pleasant To Read
>>97245247>>Author does not include ANY canon characters to be companion characters you can meet or recruit or even romance.>>Author does not make canon events quests that you have to help complete OR in a challenege change the outcome of.Based
>>97244966Mine will be multiple pages long.>>97244971You have to be male to play mine.>>97244988Immortality is attainable with enough training.
>>97245262The point of a franchise CYOA is for the ability to self-insert into their world and participate in the events and interactions. What do you mean based?This is like being transported to My Hero Academia world but instead of interacting with Class 1A, 1B, Vigilantes, League of Villains, or Pro-Heroes.You instead end up a nobody who gets randomly stabbed to death in the Final War.
>>97245273>a nobody who gets randomly stabbed to deathskill issue
>>97245228Oh shidde are we getting an Uma Musume cyoa? I call dibs on my wife.
>>97245228>>97245309>>97245302Remove yourselves from life and this general, Tok.
>>97245273>The point of a franchise CYOA is for the ability to self-insert into their worldYes>and participate in the events and interactionsNo. Not really. The powers and setting are enough for a lot of people. I like the Harry Potter world, but I don't want to have anything to do with Harry and the gang, in fact it would be better if they didn't exist.>You instead end up a nobody who gets randomly stabbed to death in the Final War.A cyoa is supposed to give you a level of power comparable to or higher than that of the protagonist, so that would never happen regardless of the presence of canon characters in a good cyoa. If the cyoa doesn't give you that power then it's just a shit cyoa.
>>97245311That can't be tok, not enough bimbos.
>>97245311Don't insult me.
>>97244689Ideally not only do I never die or have a chance of dying, but I never get bored and don't have to worry about Humanity being destroyed or the sun going out.That's just my preference tho I'll play any cyoa that's fun.
I want to FUCK the Light Indomitable.
Honse
>>97245383what does she look like
>>97245262agreed
>>97245273insert into the setting yes, but not everyone wants to interfere in the events and interactions of the series, the series already is going to figure itself out eventually (most of the time) based on specific circumstances, so like any interference you run could very well just make it not happen, after all imagine if a hero is unable to win in a fight they were supposed to because they werent able to grow enough cause you kept kill stealing or smth idk, even trying to help or fix certain things could end up causing the whole setting to fall apart, its lie being a time traveller while trying to avoid causing any butterfly effects or paradoxes, better to air on the side of caution in my books
>>97245324agree with the first two, do not agree with the third, cyoa's can give any level of power the author wishes to give the player, if they specifically dont want you to be the strongest thing in the verse thats their prerogative, but it doesnt instantly make it a shit cyoa, thats like saying that a warlock cyoa should give you more power than even your patron has, etc etc
>>97245414NTA but Lighty could be:>-a geyser of light raising forevermore in the sky>-a woman-shaped concentration of light (varying sizes)>-the True Sun that ours is a pale echo of>-a warrior queen reigning over her heavenly kindgom>-no conceptualized form because higher beings don't need them>-whatever individual (You) will light up your heart, real or idealized >-motes of lights floating around like fireflies Since "Light Indomitable" is a higher being, I wager it can pick and choose all or none of these based on its whims.
>>97245465>>-a warrior queen reigning over her heavenly kindgomHot. Can she beat The Father though? I dont want to waifu a weakling.
>>97245324>but I don't want to have anything to do with Harry and the gang, in fact it would be better if they didn't exist.>A cyoa is supposed to give you a level of power comparable to or higher than that of the protagonist,Retard.
What's more disgusting than power level slop and multiverse slop? Them slops combined.
>>97245442>if they specifically dont want you to be the strongest thing in the verse thats their prerogative, but it doesnt instantly make it a shit cyoa,Wrong, it does make it shit. And the author that does it is a shit author.
>>97245480>RetardYes you are.
>>97245485Time travel slop, multiverse slop, power level Goku slop, etc, is all slop
>>97245473>my mommy can beat up the Father
>>97245473pretty sure the father doesnt exist in this verse, the light indomitable is not the mother from that verse so far as i know, just a different higher being reffered to in a motherly way, i thinkregardless of that, if you dont wanna waifu a weakling, just make them stronger, not that you can given your powers in this cyoa come from the light indomitable so you are infact weaker than them
>>97245311You really think that's me? Pathetic.
>>97245414She looks like a cute and funny loli.
>>97245503but who would win though
Gil could beat up Celt
>>97245545corpses spread disease, so probably
>>97245546Gil is NOT dead
Gil coming back for Christmas was a lie.
>>97245545>>97245550>>97245551Arocorders please go
I wish Aro would cord me
>>97245228>>97245309i hope rake will add orfevre...
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>>97245575She's my discord kitty back off.
>>97245465I'd add "perception trick on the corner of your eye" but that's just mommy JNPL again
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>>97245473Take the Oath of Chastity NOW
>>97245643But Anon, I already...
>>97245643...What happens if we had sex prior to the vow? It doesn't count? We're barred from taking it?
>>97245607Good taste.
Please do NOT the horse
the other day i ate/tasted a onions sauce egg, it was awful
>>97245685>onionsho that's right i forgot s-o-y
>>97245699>>97245685I don't see how this makes me a cute girl.
>>97245633>Upbringing:Paradise World (High Class)>Polity of Origin:Horsehead Federation>History:Old Nobility>A New Life:Hope>Sponsor:Order of Sacred Ascension (Holy Mission)>Specialization:Artifact Acquisition>General Traits:Left For Dead, Psi-Sensitive (-psychological effects)>Skills:VR Assisted Training (Biology, Cybernetics), Combat Training, Psionics Mastery, Tactics, Athletics Mastery>Cyberware:Logic Processor Assistant, Memory Assistant, Psionic Implant>Gene Mods:Rejuvenation Treatment, Third Eye Treatment, Neural Bridge>Psi Abilities:Psychic Scream, Psi Infusion, Focus Awareness, Intrusive Hallucination>Weapon Preference:Handguns>Equipment:Psi-Enhancers>Artifact:CompassThe artifact that leads to other artifacts.>Ship:Type: Military Patrol CraftWeaponry: Thermic BasedUpgrades: Upgraded Point Defense, Small Med Bay, Basic Fabricator, Simple Laboratory, Targeting Assistant>Homebase:No HomebaseUse Order property as temporary bases.>Connections and Favors:Apex Psychotronics: Psi-tech are the most valuable items below artifacts, and psi abilities are the peak of personal power.Mase Ho, Priest of the Order: Direct Order status upgrade is the greatest benefit in this section.>Pets:2 Cheerful SAR Drones>Companions:Lone WolfUse Order subordinates as crew.>Priority Contracts:The Monolith: Lead Order personnel to retrieve this artifact.Industrial Blunder: What a treasure trove. Lead Order personnel to excavate the ruins.Containment: How can this marvelous artifact be destroyed? Report Zhu Kao's violation and lead Order personnel to recapture this artifact.Party Nights: Negotiate a deal on favorable artifact prices.
>>97245247>Author does not include ANY canon characters to be companion characters you can meet or recruit or even romance.Do you need the author to wipe your ass too? Just go meet/recruit/romance them.
>>97245677Bronies waited for this day, anon. Might as well lay down our arms.
>>97245761I thought bronies were into beastiality.
>>97245793is it still bestiality if its two horses but one of thems human shaped, kekalso that whole thing is kinda too broad of a generalization not all bronies are into fucking horses so far as i know, being horses doe is a different matter
>>97245793Uma are canonically race horses given another lfie in the game you dumb fucker. Fuck off if you don't even like Umamusume and neck yoruself.
>>97245793UMA!>no horsewife
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>>97245821Do you really think 90% of the anons agitating for horsegirl cyoa care outside of the art?
>>97245912I don't know, maybe they're in it for the concept of betting or the lore. Assuming they're terminal gooners is crass, but I don't care enough about gachas to search deeper.
What are the major upcoming CYOA projects to look forward to?
>>97246025Italics' elf-fucking and psychic-based WIPs, the paladin cyoa "Radiant", Ultimate God, Conquest, Rake's Umamusume cyoa
>>97246041Why do we still pretend that Italics doesn't make slop?
>>97246041>italics slop>miseryporn drawbackslop>never ever aroslop>never ever coming>never ever gachaslop
>>97246061Aww, a new cutie acting dumb.
>>97245912>>97245987i heard cinderella gray is really good, but is in my ever increasing backlog of anime that i need to watch, and i still need to watch all the episodes of Legend of the Galactic Heroes so it might take a while>>97246025what the other anon said also night rider said that he planned to work on an elemental fusion CYOA and PCA is working on Psychosomaalso tankista is making a lord of the mysteries cyoa if you like his cyoas (i dont)>>97246061some anons mysteriously like his work
>>97246061>slopItalics doesn't make low quality mass-produced content though. Do you even know what the word slop means?
>>97246093>some anons mysteriously like his workIs the brain cancer curable?
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>>97246107anons here use slop as a synonym for low quality, it does not matter if its shat out slowly or not, or even the amount of effort being put>>97246125depends on a case to case basis
>>97246152Pretty sure it's just a few repeated anons and them being haters.
tok thread
>>97246172pretty sure it's just a few repeated anons and them loving his slop, he only made a good cyoa after all
>>97246185I hope tok drops OC for new years.
>>97246085>he didn't call Exalted Conquest slopVery telling
>>97246231lol.lmao.even.
>>97246240those other cyoa are just pathetic Entropist wannabes, derivative trash. But when EA drops his next masterpiece? Thats going to be good, if it ever comes.
>>97246262Italics elf-fucking and psychic cyoas are Entropist wannabes? Do go on.
>>97246240Conquest is potential slop. When it releases it'll be minion slop as if we haven't had like a million minion builders between Entropist and Conquest he's late to the fad.
>>97246324>minion builderswtf are you even walking about? we already know the minion format will be similar to dawn of the demon lord
If your post says slop I don't read it (including my own post, I didn't read what I typed, either)