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Archives & Other Resources: https://rentry.co/cyoag
AllSync: https://cyoa.allsync.com/s/owWor64yLTngDk3
Multiplayer Compilations: https://rentry.org/MCYOA_Comp_Comp
In Case of Emergency, Break Glass: https://rentry.org/mcyoagCanary
Threadslave Rentry: https://rentry.org/ThreadKeeping2
Backup Rentry: https://rentry.org/ThreadKeeping3
Secretive Edition
Previous Thread: >>97585315
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>>97597243
>MHA Rentry
https://rentry.org/uhx77ys6

>RULES:
> Timeline: Just Another Story
> Location: Japan
>The Hero Students are at Shiketsu.

Instructions + Template for Making Cards: https://pastebin.com/NQ6JNH8r

>New Stuff:
>New Writefag:
>Operation DESPERADO (Seiryu, Karma, Honoken, The Villain Known As Stormrazor)
https://rentry.org/62g2miaz

>CHARACTER PROMPTS (feel free to answer these whenever)
Former 1-D Prompts 1-50: https://rentry.org/mhamp
Former 1-D Prompts 50+: https://rentry.org/mhamp2
Everyone else's prompts: https://rentry.org/mhamp3
Same password for all of them (mha4)
>Older Prompt Links Are in Here
https://pastebin.com/Qr3TtGa6
>Fighting Style Prompt
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/88693730/#88693888
>Smokin' Sexy's Class Questionnaire
https://rentry.org/xudhyrnr
>Former 1-D Timeline
https://rentry.org/MHATIMELINE
https://rentry.org/itmttw7n
>Classes Compilations
https://rentry.org/mcymha2D
https://rentry.org/mcymha2E
old former 1-D comp: https://rentry.org/9bf3g
>Relationship charts
https://rentry.org/MHA_Charts
>Dorms Prompt
Dorm Room Proposal v2 https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94701730
>Tiermaker:
https://tiermaker.com/create/mcymha-current-cast-16507969

>Older Version of the CYOA (Both the old and new versions are legal for builds.)
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/94720077
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>>97597245
>SHIKETSU STUDENTS
>Hero Course
>1-D
>Koroma Kajō HN The Time-Loop Hero: Reset
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94749389
>Reiji Kawano HN The Cyber Punk Hero: Red Hat
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94782573
>Ichigo Sanizawa HN Double Trouble
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94733085
>Yagami Kirako HN Southpaw
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94744059
>Yamasaki Yuudai HN Callous
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94745904
>Nowaru Kimi HN Reibai
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94755548
>Lixdite Aquila HN Teocoatl
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94756720
>Akuba Kaedabi Ohene HN Arach-Kid
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94773701
>Kotoko Takata HN Abyssal Hero: Leviathan
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94782831
>Gyoyu Kamiya HN The Delinquent Hero: Greasetrap
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94792250
>Higana Hanasaki HN Petal Protector
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94822590
>Isao Mitarai HN Pristine Start Hero: Scour
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94824050
>Ikuno Koru HN The Unbreakable Hero: Fumetsu
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94823771
>Kirisuto Hiro HN Second Son: the Redeemer Hero
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94857243
>Shinohara Katsuryoku HN Miracle
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94822093
>Romero Ketsueki HN Wampyr
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94821834
>Iwata Yasu HN The Observant Hero: Farsight
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94821410
>Fukuchi Arai HN Musō-ka
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94832805
>Atsuko Mitarai HN Splash
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94833925
>Yun Jae-Seong HN Bonjwa
https://rentry.org/kr7hhe5w
>Maborineko Sankai HN Cheshire
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94848176
>Taiho Kiko HN Swarm Storm Shooter
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94849244
>Tsuyoi Agnelli
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94849559
>Sophia Papadopoulou HN Pegasi
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94862089

>1-E
>Freya Frigid HN Fridge Girl
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94832729
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>>97597250
>2-D
https://rentry.org/mcymha2D
>Atsushi Orochi HN Hard to Destroy Lizard Hero: Yamata
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94700337
>Christopher Cain HN Mirror Devil
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94725769
>Hailey Chang HN Recoil
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95339903
>Faith Kang HN Drone
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826774
>Minerva Kim HN Spark
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826766
>Kyoda Hiro HN Overdose (Held Back)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94711094
>Edith Lee HN Arena
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826782
>Sally McCathy HN Last Rite
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699995
>Kaga Mirokazu HN Fight Man (NPC)
https://rentry.org/p6dwm#k-mirokazu
>Chihiro Mitsurugi HN Ascetic Sword Hero: Yako
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94700909
>Inigo Myoga HN Dragon Hero: Ryu-kishi
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94726305
>Maxine Nguyen HN Radius
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826778
>Nyoro Hoge HN Maru(maru)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94679624
>Runt HN Dust Devil
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94720560
>Yui Sagara HN Binding Hero: Capture Cloth (Held Back)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88383012
>Bobby Samson HN Sunlight Man
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94716611
>Kaylee Suzuki HN Flying Force
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94703986
>Junichi Takagi VN Marrow
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88435130
>Hifumi Takeda HN Warp Blade Hero: Challenger (Class rep)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94863765
>Ian Takenaka HN Rush
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93095991
>Takara Tame HN Android
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699336
>Deckard Thorpe HN Kid Question
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94721085
>Rob Williams HN Velvet Worm
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94704394
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>>97597256
>2-E
https://rentry.org/mcymha2E
>Noah Abrams HN Archangel
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88205041
>Higa Umeko HN Slip-N'-Slideasaurus
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91833690
>Azuma Hisa HN Beach Day
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91809104
>Soujyuuro Imai HN Wise Eye Hero: Mahoudeva
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88194077
>Ashleigh Katsuragi HN Blackout
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88268251
>Nijimura Mahoko HN Cool Boost
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91685518 + https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91685973
>Nayuki Kyoko
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91834965
>Igarashi Ryosuke HN Araken
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91807240
>Shinkan Sen HN Crazy Train
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88194200
>Victor Sigurd HN Hydra
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88209661
>Sora Tanaka HN Area Denial Hero: Orbit
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88191735
>Daigo Ulmeyda HN Fly 1 Million
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91814363
>Suki Yamada HN Sukeban
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93511713
>??? HN Meteoric Hero: Cube
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91890433
>Other NPCs
https://rentry.org/mcymha2E

>3-D
>Suzuki Nene HN Ghostly Cat Hero: Bakeneneko
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699068
>Amahagene Takako HN Signing Blade Hero 'Fukukiri'
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699401
>Masayoshi Keito HN Cricket
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94788742
>Mochi Uranus HN: Smelly Hero, Stink Rat
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94698518
>Chizuru Hagihara HN The Tarot Hero, Arcana
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95149432
>Tsuruya Megumi HN The Hard-Hitting Hero, Knockdown
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95191617
>Higashi Kota HN Nut Knight AKA Knut
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95418659

>General Course
>2-A
>Satoru Tani
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94719217

>Support Course
>3-B
>Aura Curie
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88231609
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>>97597261
>SHIKETSU STAFF
>Pro Hero teachers
>Anzu Nishima HN Karaburan (Principal)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88189414
>Ryusei Sugiyama HN Smokin' Sexy (1-D's homeroom teacher & Combat)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94709034
>Aiko Aimi HN Motivational Hero: Rosethorn (2-D's homeroom teacher & Quirk Ethics)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699564
>Riku Washizawa HN The Steel Talon Hero: Skycarver (2-E's homeroom teacher)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91719484
>Amahagene Himekō HN: The Iron Storm Hero: Princess Blade (3-D's homeroom teacher & PR Management)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94704250
>Yasashi Koibito HN The Laser Hero - Majestic (Heroics)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88231509
>Michelson Tyler HN The Mole Hero: Tunnel Rat (Economics)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94733353
>Jade Makura HN Flickfang (Arts)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94723972
>Junko Hongo HN The Overly-Enthusiastic Tokusatsu Hero: LocaLoca (NPC, Rescue)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88745486
>Ramona Castillo Escobar Siachoque: HN Xpresso (Spanish)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94627644
>Takahashi Mako HN Ersatz (TA)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/92011019
>Felicity Takahashi HN Cat Call (TA)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94872485

>Support Staff
>Just "The Doctor" (Doctor)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88721597
>Emilia Busujima (Nurse)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94715416
>Caprice Marjorie Teel (Dorm Manager, NPC)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94750288
>Hayasaka Takahiro (Evacuation and Investigation teacher)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94782135
>Ishizawa Sentaro VN The Fraudulent Master Villain: Nine Lives (Support Course)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94881666
>Dr. Mizuki Takahashi HN The Dental Hygiene Hero: Tooth & Justice (Dentist)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95418431
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>>97597267
>PRO HEROES
>TOP #1
Endeavour
>TOP #2 Taichi Kyoryu HN Cretaceous King: Saurus
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89508780
>TOP #3 Ikume Sujin HN Lord Charybdis
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94794384
>TOP #4
Wash
>TOP #5 Jiasu Maxi HN The Brilliant Hero: Yunikon
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/90998494
>TOP #6 Akagi Sanpatchi HN Popsy
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88204632
>TOP #7 Kurogane Keisho HN Yoshizumi
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89507063
>TOP #8 Shokushuko Ama HN Ensnaring Hero: Akkoro
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94810847
>TOP #9
Rosethorn
>TOP #10
Yamamoto
>Kenji Shako HN Strongest Shrimp Hero: Magnum Shrimp (and Water Fowl Hero: Flamingal)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88425908
>Yuusei Atsushi HN Spring Dragon Hero: Seiryu
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88194386
>Kalianne Sato HN Flame Strike Hero: Honoken
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88568039
>Ernst Hennig HN Impakt
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88616848
>Junpei Ozu HN The Standstill Hero: Floor
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88820563
>Tosuke Jinai HN Compound
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91016593
>Yosuke Shirai HN The Lustrous Hero: Wavelength
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91032513
>Renji Kurokawa HN Mash
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93005848
>Oscar Blaine HN Nightwatch
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94790219
>Juro Watanabe HN The Hypodermic Hero: Vaccine
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94797536
>Jonathan Tanaka HN The Rising Star Hero - Skyward
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94871835

>SUPPORTERS
>Rika Eichi
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94859766
>Endless Horizons Ltd.
https://rentry.org/iptpr
>Holden Deckard
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/90913931
>Brightly
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91006966
>Mizuki Fuzukawa SN Crystal Clear
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94786294
>Chikara Fuma SN: White Rooster Chikon
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95490686
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>>97597273
>VILLAIN ORGANIZATIONS
>Horrific 5
>Samuel Wilson VN Desolator
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88917340
>On Giết Năng VN Tether
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88921198
>Erika Murakami VN Nox
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88923183
>Maddie Griffiths VN Maddox
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88930575
>Edmund Muller VN Mercury
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88923191

>Night Parade
>Cammy Link VN Karma
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699967
>Haruka Pulch VN Tatarimokke
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88205909
>Sebastian Needle VN Greenfinger
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88214481
>Okane King VN Midas
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88190217 + 94702250
> ??? VN Maw
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88250272
> ??? VN Bogey
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88277889
> Tomi
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88387913
>Luccione
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/90146415
>Recino R. Percutio
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88191385

>Wild Hunt
>Sandatsu Owari
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94872222
>Mio Katsuragi HN Forget-Me-Not
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89250569
>Hiromi Hitomi VN Feral
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88856089
>Dr. Isaac Ivanov VN Drekus
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88666462
>Ookami Shizuka
https://rentry.org/OokamiShizuka
>Ivan Trup VN The Prophet
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91702348

>VIGILANTES
>Helene Lysingen VN Noctiluca
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88197005
>Takigawa Shion VN Shapeless Blade: Aquarius
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88209069
>Toru Imaishi VN Kampai
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88630353
>Rebecca Weber
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88722750
>Yushi Taneka VN Blazing Bright
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89012707
>Sasha Azanami
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91080404
>Rui
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91197187
>Kaori Kaoru
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91229075
>Noriko Oki VN Queen Carnivore
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94863658
>Ken Fuma HN Imposter Syndrome
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94864356
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>>97597278
>CULTISTS
>The Red Finger
>Imamu Belmitope VN Ten-ton Scorpion
https://rentry.org/k7zxfzm3
>Zyra Mein VN Braindrain/Zombie
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94928988
>Mochi Uranus VN Decaying Villain: Dark Weasel
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94698518
>Reiji Kawano HN The Cyber Punk Hero: Red Hat
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94782573

>REVOLUTIONARIES
>Legion
>Momotaro Tachibana VN Nebulous Storm
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88376954

>UNAFFILIATED VILLAINS
>Bruno Garcia VN Mauler
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88206714
>Karuga Ito
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88192478
>Nakata Yumiko VN Walpurgis
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88191796 + https://pastebin.com/nMZq81Jt
>Miki Ginrei VN Fluegel
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88209242
>Ginji Gō VN Desperaido
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88278735
>Kazuma Oomori VN Charlatan
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88669394
>Hattori Ume VN Broad Daylight
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88926931
>Blank
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91050726
>Kōkishin Yuuki VN Shoggoth
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91050987
>Mammogar
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91051410
>Tomie
https://rentry.org/ddom6m82
>Suslik
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91699413
>Paul Crémieux VN De Jais
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91841242
>Joe Dumpkin VN The Big Man
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94755400
>Akka Nigawarai HN Kodoku
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94750241
>KJ-007, Gashadokuro, the Fleshless God
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94905436
>Mr. Therapist
https://rentry.org/638neg63
>Rescue Ray
https://rentry.org/yxsbmtxp
>Yamada Hanako VN Buried Dagger
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94949719
>Doctor Ivon Kintobor
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94948140
>Saki Fuma VN Replicant
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95487061
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>>97597286
>WRITEFAGS
>Blastscar II (Yamata, Blast Burn)
https://rentry.org/ak4dozbo
>Blast Scar III (Yamata, Karaburan)
https://rentry.org/gqgst77f
>Parent-Teacher Conference (Yamamoto, Flickfang)
https://rentry.org/chdorkto
>Tardy Slip (Greasetrap, Fumetsu, Tunnel Rat, Scour, Takata, Smokin’ Sexy Sensei, Blast Burn)
https://rentry.org/8cbcgpz5
>Internship Gossip 3 (Clique):
https://rentry.org/gzimb4m9
>Talking to a Bat (Flickfang, Doraku):
https://rentry.org/7evesekv
>The Spice of Life. (featuring Southpaw, Arach-kid, Wampyr, Teocoatl, Runt, Second Son, Scour, Callous and Fumetsu).
https://rentry.org/7mvc7xsi
>Karen-Teacher Conference (Farsight, Smokin' Sexy)
https://rentry.org/qqhxk757
>Making a Splash II (featuring Impakt, Sunlight Man, Tiddy Mun, Tod Lowerie, Dead Hand and Imamu Belmitope)
https://rentry.org/s9h9g53i
>Clown Days 2 (Smokin' Sexy, Popsy, Tatarimokke, The Scumbag, Impakt, Saurus, Recino, Desperado, Three-Sixty)
https://rentry.org/rusiv6te
>Internship Gossip 4 (Spark, Recoil, Drone, Radius, Arena)
https://rentry.org/vmn4sc9h
>tournament fallout 2 (Recoil, Drone, Radius, Arena)
https://rentry.org/xy8x4uze
>Visa Enquiry
https://rentry.org/yvwhhh98
>Internship Gossip 5 (Spark, Recoil, Drone, Radius, Arena)
https://rentry.org/t3fb32wt
>For the Content 1 (Chat, Recoil, Drone, Spark, Arena, Radius, Karaburan, mention of Rosethorn)
https://rentry.org/hvct5iab
>Operation GEMINI (Seiryu, Honoken, Yamata, Mahoudeva, Lady Astoria Belmont, Various Gemini)
https://rentry.org/kq7n5dde
>Shiketsu Outdoors Club, Reforestation Project (Nut Knight, Pegasi, Cheshire, Flickfang, Blast Burn, Tunnel Rat, Tall Man, Dreamer, Swarm Storm Shooter, Petal Protector, Second Son, Yako, other Outdoors Club members, Greenfinger, Duck o War, mention of Buried Dagger and the Argonauts)
https://rentry.org/iifohf9f
>Operation HEARTBREAK (Seiryu, Honoken, Yamata, Mahoudeva, Blackout)
https://rentry.org/v4agq7kb
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>>97597288
>WRITEFAGS (Final)
>An Eventful Move (Mirror Devil, Ryu-Kishi, Mahoudeva, Drone, Rush):
https://rentry.org/a8um8793
>Red Finger Finds Out (Imamu Belmitope, Tiddy Mun, Tod Lowerie, Dead Hand, Gnash, Mochi Uranus, Teocoatl, Sandatsu, Feral, Drekus, Rosethorn, Endeavor)
https://rentry.org/f47uhqdu
>Jolly Cooperation(Last Rite, Maru-Maru, Spark, Rosethorn, Smokin' Sexy, Archangel, Satoru, Android)
https://rentry.org/o4mageo6
>Operation DESPERADO (Seiryu, Karma, Honoken, The Villain Known As Stormrazor)
https://rentry.org/62g2miaz

For more Characters, Writefags, Art, Memes, Tierlists, etc. check the rentry
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Rules/info/CYOA
https://rentry.org/uam5mkhv


>Egawa Taro/Rip Vandernail
https://rentry.org/mthziyxk
https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97060082/#q97060437
>Arthur Wode
https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97060082/#q97061682
>Necrolord Sephidrach
https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97060082/#q97062008
>Kimiko Yuki/Yaofan
https://rentry.co/hsinf97u
https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97060082/#q97062514
>Fathoms(Fifi)
https://rentry.co/rdkoz3rh
https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97060082/#q97063149
>Liam Cooke/Lovxl(Not a Support 3)
https://rentry.org/r3git2rc
https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97060082/#q97063756
>Ueto Mio/strawberrycake0923
https://rentry.org/5iiayh42
https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97087609/#q97089806
>Nagisa Ito/Good Things Come
https://rentry.co/btk9ko6w
https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97087609/#q97098741

>Writefags

>Mountain Wendigo Chain, Part 1! (Taro, Yulit, Sephidrac, Fathoms, Arthur, Yaofan)
https://rentry.org/7abfinx5
>Setup (Liam, Yaofan, References to others)
https://rentry.co/2u2ucyys
>Yaofan Intro? (Yaofan/Kimiko,Moth Thot)
https://rentry.co/wnwek6x9
>Hunting Lessons (Taro, Peredolia, Yaofan)
https://rentry.org/yv2vaygr
>Wendigo Chain Part 2 (Liam, Sephidrac, Taro, Yaofan.)
https://rentry.co/f4d6fwu8
>The Magic Of Learning (Liam, Sephidrac, Fathoms, Mio, Arthur cameo)
https://rentry.org/wmxx9tik
>Wendigo Chain, Part 3 (Egawa Taro, Arthur Wode, Yaofan, Liam Cooke, Necrolord Sephidrac, Fathoms, Ueto Mio, Nagisa Ito)
https://rentry.org/gdzox35y
>Every Branch on the way Down
https://rentry.co/gm9soi3x

>Relationships Charts

>Taro
https://rentry.org/v4ygpeib
>Liam
https://rentry.co/ruszvrz4
>Mio (End of the profile)
https://rentry.org/5iiayh42
>Nagisa
https://rentry.co/spxq5cnb
>Yaofan
https://rentry.co/vwn7fy9p
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>>97597302
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https://rentry.org/martialartsheromcyoag

>Nao Sato, 'Smoke', stinky smoker hag (cute)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97491382
>Larry Newgate, 'Hold Bailey', I get the pun
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97491448
>Kasumi, 'Deadend', I wish she splattered MY head...
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97495030
>Lionel Henry "Leo" Buckingham the IIIrd, 'Lionheart', the man with a name I missed
https://rentry.org/ip55skmf
>King Laiota Drazil, HOLY SHIT DRACULA
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97495867
>Timm Danger, 'Belfry', where's da gabagool?
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97497021
>Kiera Hailey, 'Comet', I ain't saying she's a gold digger
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97497506
>Octocampus, experiment with daddy issues
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97500215
>Afterburner Model 03, 'Afty', leaden oil drinker
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97506787
>Vivian Irving and V, a girl and her cog
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97507133
>Glenn Atwater, 'Sword of Light', where he at? water
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97508128
>Kaya Stowst, 'Feldspar', I'm ROCKHARD!!!
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97509701
>Henry Powers, 'Portal Man', get a real job unc
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97513091
>Meg the Shark, 'Jaws', calamari enjoyer
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97513166
>Leif Ether, 'Phantom', In The End (Linkin Park)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97513845
>Oinu Nuoi, experiment with daddy issues if he cute
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97515443
>Alois Emmerich Stenger, the Last Man Standing, "Gentlemen? Ve... are Nazis!"
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97518503
>Adam, pumping iron
https://rentry.org/uuqehema
>Gadzhimurad "бyйвoл" Magomedov
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97596181

>Writefags
I wake up in the morning feeling like P Diddy
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>>97597311
>Relationship Charts
Leo chart 1
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97499420
Leo quotes
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97516193
Feldspar quotes
https://rentry.org/e2b9k36k
Meg quotes
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97521339
Kasumi quote chart
https://rentry.org/zb3ossbk

>tiermaker
https://tiermaker.com/create/ultimate-question-hero-association-run-17629646

>Artfags
Leo's really tall in this one.
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97512917
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97513134
MORTAL KOMBAT!!! (+ Belfry and Laiota quotes)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97515477
GODfry is so FUARKING cool
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97542127
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>>97597243
Can we have a mha melty now im tired of isekai and nart
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>>97597280
Reminder from the other thread.
Could we get a definitive location list? I don't know if I wanna decide that entirely by myself in the map
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>>97597375
I kinda missed the whole location discussion, but I think a list of the smaller areas would be nice to have.
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>>97597387
TL;DR an anon made a Rentry with a list of location ideas and places where they might bleed over. But there's been further discussion since, I'm trying to come up with a definitive list so I can make the map
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>>97597375
I think downgrading Sonic to a mini-zone somewhere and substituting it with FMA works. Also adding a MH mini-zone somewhere, maybe in Isekai Land since that shares some of the vibes.
Alternatively we put MH in the Dragon Ball zone and open up the Pandora's box that is FroniterZZ
Of the remaining big zones Pokemon is the only one with no system. We also talked about Platformer land, but I can't really think of a zone to downgrade for it, unless we merge a couple of similar systems like Nen and JJK Cursed Energy.
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>>97597311
>I wake up in the morning feeling like P Diddy
lmfao why is this still here
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>>97597437
>FMA
First time I've seen anyone mention it. Do we have any other FMA defenders? Any other proposals?
>Platformer Land
Mario and Sonic are a given, I heard mentions of Kirby. Do we want to throw anything else in there?
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>>97597462
Probably because whoever posted it just copy pasted the old one.
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>>97597437
>unless we merge a couple of similar systems like Nen and JJK Cursed Energy.
Do they have enough unique things to justify being separate?
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>>97597472
>First time I've seen anyone mention it.
Someone said we were missing a crafter system, the proposed solution was FMA because of Alchemy. I am not too attached to it personally but it was worth considering. I don't think anyone had other proposals for a more crafting based system.
>Do we want to throw anything else in there?
Nothing big comes to mind, only minor or meme stuff like Balan Wonderworld. I just got the idea for Metroidvania Land, but I'm not sure how it would be integrated. Also the very dumb idea to just base the map on the World Of Light and World of Darkness from smash, but that kinda defats the point of making a map.
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>>97597476
JJK has Black Flash, Simple Domain, RCT. All of those are generally really useful tools.
Nen has... uh... Post-Mortem Nen, Binding Vows but less bullshit, and doing that bloodlust suppression aura thing? Overall Nen is just CE but kinda shit though.
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>>97597486
>spoiler
Dracula's castle was mentioned, we could just have Castlevania as a little section of the Fate worlds crossing over with Platformer Land. Metroid could be a crossover with the alien sections, I know someone wanted to see Tyranids and other aliens somewhere
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>>97597476
>>97597490
Nen has a few advanced applications that are basically aura sense counters that CE can't really do, like In.
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>>97597503
I see, so it would be Platformer+Namek for Metroid and Platformer+Fate for Castelvania. That also helps with positioning.
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>>97597472
I think FMA could work, since Alchemy is a learned skill that'd fit in a good niche compared to other Power Systems. Not really sure what enemies it could provide besides criminal alchemists unless we toss some possible chimeras or homoculi in the mix, but it could work.

>>97597476
They both have similar rules such as being emotion based and restrictions/binding vows being nearly identical, but what they offer widely vary. Curse Energy doesn't give a lot of generic techniques that are unique to it, as something like Cursed Reinforcement can be replicated with one of Nen's main principles/techniques. It does allow access to barrier techniques and by extension Domains, RCT, and Black Flash, but besides Barrier techniques the rest are much higher level than most people achieve and you can end up not ever unlocking them. Most of the power for a Sorcerer comes from the Innate Techniques they fuel with Curse Energy, but those can't really be learned.

Nen is much wider variety as anyone can technically learn any technique, but people have specialties due to being in different categories like Enhancer or Specialist. You can technically fully replicate anyone elses Nen technique if you're some freak genius but depending on how far away it is from your natural type the effort and output will suffer accordingly.

Between the two Nen has more versatility as it has the ability to strengthen senses, expand area of awareness, and even the ability to shut it off which differs from JJK where people can't exactly fully shut off their CE and it's usually extremely obvious when a big player enters the field and people can usually keep track of your energy levels without much effort. In the basics that they do overlap I think CE is much more potent, but Nen can go much further when you craft your own Nen ability. Personally, I like both, although I prefer CE because the nature of it lends to Curse Spirits for the sake of opponents, although Nen users work just as well.
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>>97597520
Yeah, you see the vision. Although I'll make sure Platformer Land isn't a very big place so it doesn't feel like it's on the same level as the places that actually have power systems, it's just a small nation that other nations are bordering with. Kinda like Switzerland. It's still me just spitballing so maybe other stuff can come up

>>97597526
I don't mind doing FMA, I just don't know it very well so I'd need to at least know which location to add from there. I wanted to know if more people were into it just to make sure it wasn't one guy by himself
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>>97597375
Alright, I'm here. So FMA replacing Sonic. then? Chimera work as enemies, location could be Central City. We have a lot of Cities but doesn't FMA have a lot of underground catacombs? That could differentiate it. The "Resident Evil" thing still works as the border between it and Midgar.
If I had to say for the Platformer Border since we may as well use those for fitting something like that in, Mario for Hunter Hunter and One Piece, and Sonic for Dragon Ball and Hunter Hunter or One Piece?
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>>97597565
I’m still in favour of a conglomerate Platformer Land that includes levels from several platformers. Makes things easier to border with, instead of needing to combine two things for ONE platformer we can just have Mario, Sonic and Kirby in one place (maybe others?) and then border with Namek for Metroid and border with Fate for Castlevania. Or if you mean which platformers would be closer to which bordering nations, uuuh I guess you’re onto something. Do you mind keeping track of all this in your doc as a little change log sort of thing? You’d be doing me a huge favour.
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If you have both elemental chakra cloak and dark element special techniques, along with some regular elemental technique of choice, can you then create a dark elemental chakra cloak?
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>>97597590
Yes.
>>97597577
https://rentry.org/69o9c799 (funny url lol)
Here's a proposition if we keep the "each location has only two borders" set up but platformer land is a good idea too.
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>>97597611
>>97597577
Ok, I updated the "main rentry" (https://rentry.org/v9ioyuz8) with some ideas I saw. What are we thinking?
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>>97597611
>>97597675
Monster Hunter instead of Black Clover maybe? Nothing against Black Clover, just doesn't have very many enemies I can think of off the top of my head.
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>naruto not posted
another one smothered in the crib by isekino
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>>97597680
my favorite part was when black clovered all over that guy and saiys 'this has been a black cloverin time" and then everybody clovered.
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>>97597681
I think the guy taking care of it is either not around or is stuck compiling/fixing the rules and coming up with funny nicknames.
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>>97597684
blacked all over my screen!

...oh wait ew
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>>97597681
I'll post it with the imgchest and builds compiled in an hour or so if he doesn't.
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>>97597611
>>97597675
Kingdom Hearts becoming a border between Final Fantasy and somewhere sounds good. I like the idea of Etrian Odyssey and we could GO ONE ON ONE WITH UR DEVIL PLAYA l but maybe it would be good for cutting since it's a bit niche. Alternatively Resident Evil could be moved between JJK and Pokemon?
DMC has a lot of enemy variety too, so that could go somewhere if we're blanking.
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>>97597675
I think a unified Platormer Land with connections fits a bit more than putting the platformers into connections, unless we want them to be like islands to the side or something. I do think the combination of OP and Bleach to make Mario Galaxy is very creative and cool tho, a void+Islands makes space.
Cultivator land is probably better not being there at all, it's a bit out of place in the whole thing. MHA also seems redundant, it doesn't really offer anything new, and has no really unique/interesting enemies to fight.
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Something that hasn't been mentioned but could be included funnily enough is Star Wars.
Droids would be good cannon fodder and there's the rancor, bigger droids, and even Sith for big bosses.
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>>97597730
Yfw I speedblitz you with my perfectly built kotr character with maxxed force speed
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>>97597719
>Cultivator land is probably better not being there at all, it's a bit out of place in the whole thing.
Cultivation as a power system is better off as a context out, yeah. Can't think of any good enemies that are ubiqitous to cultivationslop either.
>MHA also seems redundant, it doesn't really offer anything new, and has no really unique/interesting enemies to fight.
Agreed, AFO and Gigantomachia would make cool raid bosses/events but the land wouldn't have much to do. Are we going continents or "sectors" like in the image? I'm okay with either, since both have their perks and drawbacks, mainly the ton of extra borders for a landmass and the awkwardness of fitting in platformer land for sectors.
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Its cute to see anons passionate about their crayons, It reminds me of early fantasy village. I can't join this one I hate the start at 0 points take horrible drawbacks for points thing
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>>97597828
>horrible drawbacks
A couple are pretty much free and the rest isn't that bad. Which ones do you consider horrible?
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>>97597853
forced appearance and stuff is a dealbreaker for me p much personally.
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>>97597828
Going into a heavyweight setting, you can rack up a lot of points simply by going for a middleweight or lightweight power. Heck even if you go for a Heavywweight that costs a point, its still easily gained by choosing Drop-In and just not starting with a local powersystem if you want to be carried. Going solely into one power is perfectly valid, people just want to stack up as much as they can for stuff like 2 powers and monster talent, but you can get by with much less.
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Would "You are a living weapon/experiment/modified human some high ranking ninja created and he wants to take back his carefully eugenicized escaped lab rat very very badly" be the right sort of narrative justification for the Unwanted Attraction drawback?
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>>97597900
As long as you understnd we arent nakama and i will sell you out rather than fight him
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>>97597913
Something tells me I won't actually understand, because you probably wouldn't tell me in-character haha.
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>>97597900
That sounds like it fits, but don't companion drawbacks have to include player builds this time around?. Or it fits a combination of Tragic Backstory and Most Wanted if it's an entire organization, which is what I was going for instead. I just got done with the mechanical part of the build, just the fluff to write.
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>>97597934
I actually don't know as far as player builds go, now that you mention it. Doesn't Most Wanted make you the enemy of the entire world though, not just a specific group?
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>>97597924
i don't know if this is intended but it gives me you wouldn't say this to my face in real life vibes
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>>97597946
I'm pretty sure he's saying his character is gonna be a smoothbrain who won't understand his standing with other characters unless they spell it out.
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>>97597942
>Doesn't Most Wanted make you the enemy of the entire world though, not just a specific group?
It specifically makes you a wanted criminal in your home country, and a few other maybe, not the whole world. Which fits if said organization is decently powerful and has a somehwat legal facade to hide the bad shit, so they can label any escapee as a criminal and let the nation handle them. It would be a problem because they can send people to you even in another nation, but this is a good setting for it because the moon village is a melting pot of culture.
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>>97597949
Who would tell the mentally ill bioweapon they arent a frie-
Wait they are all like 12 or something, they all would.
Kids are cruel Jack.
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>>97597946
>>97597949

No, I meant that my character wouldn't have the meta knowledge you've conveyed to me that your character might play him falsely.
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>>97597971
That isn't meta knowledge, it's theory of mind.
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>>97597969
>mentally ill
Maybe they aren't mentally ill? It's rude to assume all escaped experiments must have some mental illness.
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is prodigious the same thing as picking talented thre times?
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>>97597949
Yeah that's what I assumed what the intent was, it's just very funny to think of someone genuinely saying that their build is gonna be so badass and cool that someone else's wouldn't DARE say anything to them lmfao
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>>97597983
Ooh boy, here we go again. Last time it was a lesser boost to all 3, so if you want to be a specialist Talented is better. As far as I remember.
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>>97597983
if you're the JUDGE OF THE UNDERWORLD then yes
if you ain't Himothy then no and >>97597997 is correct
>>97597988
this is my build btw
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>>97597969
AND I LOVE TOUCHING MY INNER CHILD
>he didn't say that
Yes he did, don't try to gaslight me, I played the game
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>>97597988
Nta but there is a 3rd option between smoothbrain and "you wouldn't dare". The reasonable assumption that the average person doesn't go out of their way to antagonize someone else for no reason by essentially saying "I will sell you out at the slightest inconvenience." But that's less funny.
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>>97598010
We have a fellow Maxor fan here. I don't remember what the original line was, but what I do remember is that it's not that far from it.
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>>97598026
It was I LOVE MINORS specifically
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>>97597988
>>97598016
If I was planning on taking the Overconfidence drawback, I would unironically do the more extreme version of that lol. But all I was getting at is that my guy wouldn't necessarily suspect someone wasn't going to back him up when the chips were down, nothing big.
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>>97598026
The original like is "And I'm very in touch with my inner child."
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>>97598016
No one said the person selling him out would tell him that he's selling him out?
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>>97598041
>because you probably wouldn't tell me in-character
That's what the implication here was. The alternative to "not telling him in-character" is telling it to his face.
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>>97598049
what if he told him out of character
imagine waking up one day and instinctually knowing this guy will betray you
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>>97598039
You didnt convey the inflection really. It had a tilde at the end cause he had a shit eating grin.
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Im gonna be honest, the price would be like...A piece of candy tops.
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I just finished making 6 versions of the same build, as a progression all the way from D to Z rank. Ignoring any potential changes due to connections, like rivals and "admireres". But now I need to sleep, maybe by the time I wake up the cyoa will be posted.
>>97598055
That would be either really freaky or strangely normal. If the character has something like 6th sense or future sight it's just another day. Otherwise it may cause some kind of existential breakdown.
>>97598038
He sounds very trusting. Which I guess is a good parallel to my experiment/bioweapon, who is going to be paranoid and slow to have faith in people in general.
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>>97598049
But someone not telling him to his face is practically a given. The fact that he brought up that scenario is why people assumed his build was retardmaxxing, since most people would understand that someone who's not your friend has no obligation to keep your secrets.
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>>97598082
oh shit, I said I would post it, didn't I? yeah, let me compile and post the imgchest at least
is isekai posted already?
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>>97598094
>is isekai posted already?
It isn't. I didn't even notice because the discussion was happening anyway.
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>>97597959
I thought I might eventually take Unwanted Attraction for Kosshi's situation, but this made me realize that Most Wanted fits it a bit better. Not really relevant now of course.
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>>97598093
Tbf, I think obligation to the village would still be relevant than personal relations in such a situation. In theory, it's supposed to take priority, and selling out one the village's assets isn't exactly good look.
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>>97598121
Nta, this can go both ways. If the "asset" is more trouble than it's worth then getting rid of it with the least amount of trouble for the village is the more logical course of action.
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>>97598121
Maybe in a village that doesn't recruit people from all over.
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Remind me, we're assumed to have level 1 in all basic techniques, and our 5 free ones are effectively level 2?
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The Hidden Moon Village calls

>CYOA
https://imgchest.com/p/m9yxdobq64q
>RULES
https://rentry.org/batiq4pc

>Momika, Momi with the Mikas
https://rentry.org/hsviqv5p
>Mona Kyo, put those grippers away
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97592567
>Sumio Fuchigami, damn blud have you tried adderall
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97593776
>Ayane Hasegawa, HAHA CRIPPLE
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97594061
>Myorin, they see me Myorin, they hatin'
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97594947
>Kosshi, I see London, I see France
https://rentry.org/7wutmc5x
>Kisui Shōmi, THE (INVISIBLE) JUDGE OF THE UNDERWORLD
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97596444
>Otanashi Hibiki, do you think he buys a lot of penut butter
https://rentry.org/5964ikmz

>Relationship Charts
Momika did something but I'm too lazy to link it, go find it, she replied to the builds
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>>97598156
You get a level 0 basic competency at Unarmed Combat, Stealth, Subterfuge, Ninja Tools, Espionage, Clone, Transformation, Substitution, and Utility Jutsus. Your free ones raise them to level 1.
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>>97598156
There are lots of ways it's been put, but basically. The upicked listed basics are at an average level. The ones taken are above average.
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>>97598163
WHO THE FUCK IS THAT
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>>97598156
Not all of them, only the ones listed here>>97598168
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>>97598168
>>97598169
>>97598176
Gotcha.
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>>97598174
that's what Kisui looks like
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>>97598174
It's Anonymous when he makes the worst nicknames ever.
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>>97598163
>Name
Sumio Fuchigami
>Origin
Uzushiogakure, Land of Whirlpools (Will of the Hero)
>Rank
D
>Perks
Talented (Ninjutsu)
>Drawbacks
Bad Habit: lazy/naps everywhere
>Chakra Nature
Water
Yin
Yang
>Basics
Subterfuge x2
Utility Jutsu x2
Body Flicker
Unarmed Combat
Chakra Flow x2
>Advanced
Barrier Arts
>Hidden
{Elemental} Ball x3
{Elemental} Barrier x2
{Elemental} Wall x2

"Sumio, you're so talented, imagine what you could do if you put in some effort!"
"Sumio, you're too lazy. You'll never amount to anything if you neglect your training!"
"Sumio stop napping, we're in the public square!"

He's heard it all before. A real ninja works hard until he hates his life, can never take a day off or someone will surpass him, blah, blah, blah. He's tired of hearing it. The only reason Sumio wants to be a ninja is because it's fun. Watching his opponent slip in a puddle is fun. Taijutsu requires lots of exercise and drills, so that's a lot less fun. He'd rather not move at all in a fight if he can avoid it. His plan is to simply master water style until he can push all his enemies around at will. They can put in as much effort as they want to while fighting against his waves, and he'll relax to the soothing sound of his perfect sea. Just the thought has him craving a good nap.

Sumio is a pretty lazy kid, but his talent is undeniable. No matter what ninjutsu lessons his instructors throw at him, he aces them as if it's second nature. But they fear this won't last long as the challenges ramp up. They've tried to light a fire under him, but to no avail. When he really enjoys something, he's all in. But if it turns out to be more work than expected, he often moves on to something else. It's not that he's arrogant or rebellious, he's just...energy efficient. He never puts in more effort than he wants to. At least not yet. His instructors hope that forming close bonds with teammates who possess a strong work ethic will push him to change his mindset and reach his full potential.
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>>97598199
changelog?
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>>97598163
When did nicknames even start? Overlord or something? They're not something the threadslaves do at all.
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>>97598208
nicknames can only be forged by anons with the most whimsical spirits
aka the fucking retarded
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>>97598199
Oh, I forgot to ask if we're actually tracking basic items/weapons. I'd probably just give him a couple short range radios with the item points since he's not especially good with ninja tools anyways, but I was curious since we mostly ignored the basic stuff last time.
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>>97598222
I think we're mostly ignoring it, but it never hurts.
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>>97598203
I had my free basics all at lvl 2 due to confusion on the free point amounts. So some of those are down to level 2, and I also dropped Substitution and Clone. Also no longer has summoning (yet), but {Elemental} Ball went up to lvl 3.
>>97598208
Since pre-split. It's been a thing for long enough that I've even done some before.
>>97598213
True
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>>97598247
>>97598203
Sorry, I meant some of the basics are now down to lvl 1.
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>>97598247
>Since pre-split
It's that old? Maybe it made sense since builds weren't really characters. I really don't like nicknames as they are now since most of them kinda suck because they feel forced and they don't really relate much to the build. I like the idea of nicknames but they have to be earned rather forcing each new build with nothing established yet to have one.
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>>97598293
I think you might be taking them too seriously. It's just meant to be a silly thing.
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>>97598293
I take for granted that some of your are genuinely autistic.
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>>97598163
Minoru Kanzaki, Rank D

Village: Kirigakure, Will of Water

Perk: Deep Reserves, +5

Drawbacks: Rage & Instability. +20

Yin & Yang: (Both), -7

Chakra Nature: (1 free +4), -16

Basic Jutsu:

Subterfuge
Weapon Art
Chakra Flow
Body Flicker
Utility Jutsu

Advanced Jutsu:

Advanced Taijutsu, -3
Illusory Arts, -3
Sensory Arts (Chakra), -3

Hidden Techniques:

Element Ball, -3
Element Bullet, -3

Element Weapon, -3
Element Armor, -3

Element Flicker, -3
Element Illusion, -3

Equipment:

Kunai, -1
Shuriken, -1
Bo Staff, -2
Training weights, -1
Ration Pills, -3
Blood Pills, -4

Understanding the elements and the world around oneself is usually thought of as something bringing unity and harmony. Something to aspire to. People forget that the individual elements tend to clash badly if not *carefully* managed, and "The Avatar" only exists in fiction for a reason.

Minoru's a young ninja student best described as an overloaded boiler. If he's just using one or two of his elemental talents, things are generally fine. The deeper he taps into his energies the more erratic and unstable he becomes.

The boy very badly needs some assistance, or by the time he's fully grown his chakra will be useless; permanently fractured and distorted as his affinities fight for dominance. He's had a broad but shallow education from his family, at least enough to get him started, and there's tremendous potential here *if* it can actually be realized.

He's angry at himself, resentful towards the world that gave him these affinities, frustrated at his inability to be everything he should be and burdened by the weight of his family's expectations that he become Kirigakure's shining star. Deep down, he's also scared of his own chakra.

That said, his flexibility in battle *is* extraordinary within his generation. Minoru can combat and confound his foes in several different ways, each of which can then be altered by different elemental combinations, fueled by huge chakra reserves.
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Rolled 1 (1d2)

1:make yet another taijutsumaxxer
2:make an actual "ninja" this time
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>>97598472
nothing wrong with being strong
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>>97598472
The truth of the world is written in well trained muscles. Atlas doesn't support the globe with his mind. See the abortion of a build above you, who will inevitably just explode and die out of control like a little bitch before accomplishing anything.

Go forth, swolechad, and prosper.
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Questions about isekai:

How are we treating our builds knowledge of their team? Do they all spawn in at once (either way I imagine we'll be splitting up at least a little with usual regrouping, and teaming up for raids)? Was there a lobby "familiarization" period?

How are we treating learning systems? I saw an idea of spending points we earn via bounties to unlock and for some progression and that could be fun, but just taking on specific "unlock" bounties could be fun too.

How are we treating actual canon characters as bosses, like Frieza? Should they be "evil personalityless flesh automatons" or should it actually be a simulucrum of the guy in question? We know Gilgamesh is somewhere based on GoB. Personally I lean towards the personality variation, even if it seems corny.

Finally, how's the map progress going, map anon? Need any help?
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>>97598163
Thank you for posting this anon! Here are the updated rules: https://rentry.org/6unsb3tn

Also wanted to give a big welcome to all the new players!! Thanks for joining in and I will be starting the narrative after a couple more days to let anons finish their builds.
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>>97598540
>looks at the rage and instability and also restriction curse in my build
oh uhhh yeah i'll prosper alright I will explode even brighter than him
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>>97598556
Same guy who posted this, but replying with my own thoughts for the sake of discussion.

>How are we treating our builds knowledge of their team? Do they all spawn in at once (either way I imagine we'll be splitting up at least a little with usual regrouping, and teaming up for raids)?
I personally like the idea of everyone spawning in seperately and being given a "meet up" beacon on their bounty screen or whatever. Could be fun for everyone getting together.
>Was there a lobby "familiarization" period?
I also personally like the idea of a lobby. Maybe a 1-3 day period where the builds got to know each other a little? My first thought was just teammembers, but setting up other rivals could maybe be fun...? Writing wise I'd probably start at drop in though. For Cobalt and Jewel at least, I'd like the idea that they at minimum are familiarized enough. I could also go for Cobalt being an isekaijin himself from the Pokemon world, though if anons think the lobby is lame.
>How are we treating learning systems? I saw an idea of spending points we earn via bounties to unlock and for some progression and that could be fun
I like this idea simply because I think it would be streamlined and incentivize risky maneuvers, but other anons might find it lame.
>Personally I lean towards the personality variation, even if it seems corny.
Unchanged. Sephiroth and Madara dropping in would be kino. For 'good guy' raid bosses evil clones would work though.
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>>97598345
We really need that ninjutsu teacher. Fuck is Myorin gonna teach him about elemental stuff?
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Finally done with the mechanical part of the build and all faceclaim hunting. I just need to get the fluff done after some sleep
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>>97598556
>Finally, how's the map progress going, map anon? Need any help?
Someone asked if we wanted sectors or landmasses. I was gonna go for landmasses. Are we cool with that?
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>>97599301
You guys could at least post even 1 page of the cyoa
Yeah the full thing is too long to post but you can't even post the first page?
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Isekai Tournament
https://imgchest.com/p/xny86ajm24b


>Cobalt
https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97569605/#q97581231

>Sagittarius Riku
https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97585315/#q97595535
https://rentry.co/gmn94tb3

>Saku Kirikami
https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97585315/#q97595796

Eugene Canseliet
https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97585315/#q97587070

Lucas Walker
https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97585315/#q97587439

Harry Higuruma
https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/97585315/#q97587677


>Areas and Connections
https://rentry.org/v9ioyuz8

Rules so far:
>Power tier is Heavyweight
>Mode is Bounty/Negotiate to encourage PvE events but PvP is still possible as killing someone grants you all of their points
>Builds are 'Team X' by default, with no limit on power type or members
>All team members can get a wish
>The 'Team Handicap' exists; as the amount of team members you have is higher, your growth is slowed
>You can sever from your team at any moment, gaining the maximum growth multiplier
>You can't become a team member again after severing yourself from your team
>Setting is a multiversal arena with many sectors with their own enemies based on different fictional works, each with unique bounties (Mushroom Kingdom sector with Goombas, Hueco Mundo sector with Hollows, Namek sector with Frieza Force soldiers)
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>>97598624
Are we planning to actually make a teacher roster? And if so do they need to be actual players or just NPCs we can reference?
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>>97598565
>turns out the whole class is just a bunch of shitters
>facepalming_kages.exe
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>>97599471
Well duh, obviously the other villages won't hand out their best to another academy
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>>97599073
I'm good with landmasses. Personally I prefer the big circles and their bridges but not by much. Are you planning on having every area be equalish size except for the mini area(s?)? Maybe it would be a good idea to post a draft, but obviously the fact you're already drawing anything at all is more than enough lmao.
Have we decided all of the areas yet? I know cultivation land and MHA land has people say they should be replaced.
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>>97599471
They're Academy Students. Unless you're Himothy Uchiha or Kakashi Himake they're not expecting you to have anything on lock at that age.
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>>97599599
>MHA Land
Oh so that’s the new plan? Playing MHA in another MP? You’ve stooped too low this time, threadslaves.

Jokes aside, what would the power system even be in MHA? Everyone has an entirely different Quirk in that world, right? Would everyone roll a random power or something? I think we could just have a non-descript Tokyo area that fuses several anime enemy spawns, like the Shibuya incident or I guess in this case MHA bad guys. Godzilla raid boss too, why not.
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>>97597243
The moon is right

Its time to try out our NEW multiplayer CYOA
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>>97599703
Is that the whole thing?
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>>97599727
yeah
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>>97599073
Just woke up. Landmasses is ok, even if it's harder to do logistically. It does however get rid of the limit on combo zones.
>>97599672
MHA land was already shot down because of those reasons, Quirks are an unreliable system that is honestly just a worse version of other things we already have, and the enemies are nothing special either.
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>>97599672
>Jokes aside, what would the power system even be in MHA?
That was the main complaint I believe, as well as a lack of enemies. It definitely should be replaced. I think it was mostly that we just didn't have a capeslop area.
>area that fuses several anime enemy spawns, like the Shibuya incident or I guess in this case MHA bad guys. Godzilla raid boss too, why not.
We already have a Tokyo in both JJK AND SMT. I also disagree with the notion that everything needs it's own area to show up.
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>>97599738
Yeah, how about we fuse those then? We can have a Tokyo area where you have JJK stuff AND SMT stuff, and maybe kaiju too, why not. It’s also better if we fuse similar territories so I can have less landmasses

>>97599734
Yeah I figured that was the case.
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>>97599703
NTRslop coded cyoa
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>>97599759
Damn, looking closer at it, you're right... I almost diden't even notice...
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>>97599703
It's not even new, and not multiplayer. Back to trash.
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>>97599747
Probably because Blasted Tokyo looks absolutely nothing like any semblance of an actual city and is instead an unforging barren wasteland from Fallout. CE and Skills don't merge very gracefully either.
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>>97599759
>coded
IT'S RIGHT FUCKING THERE
>>97599747
If landmassses are an issue, isn't it better to just go for circles instead? I feel like setting function should come first and foremost.
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I wonder if replacing Blasted Tokyo with something like the Tower of Kagatsuchi and the Vortex World would be better.
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>>97599645
Whose performing above their rank the most right now?
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>>97599965
John five elements
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>>97599972
>drawback nerd
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>>97599972
A castle built on unstable supports will crumble at the lightest of touch.
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>>97599325
is an Uma xeno or superior
probably won't make one but just to see
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>>97599982
"Who's strong"
"The guy who's up 20 points on the rest"
"This cannot be..."
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>>97599982
>>97599993
If it's a problem I can ditch the build and try again. I just thought it'd be fun to explore the idea of "what if the elements *dont* live in happy harmony like in most stories".
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>>97599965
momika but i suspect we're talking about different performances
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>>97599965
Let me rephrase since yeah people who took drawbacks are stronger right now

Who has a good foundation to improve over time?
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>>97599993
My build would beat him up because he has drawbacks that can be exploited.
>>97600010
The build's fine and cool anon, I'm just saying my build would beat them up.
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>>97600010
It's not a problem just some old fashioned ribbing
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>>97600010
Its fine nobody really cares about taking every nature with them. If you had gone like Tengan Toppan Gurren Sharigan Ex Hyper V2 with the points thats another issue that would get you mocked.
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>>97600019
>Who has a good foundation
Personally I'd say that Shrine and Judgeman are some of the strongest foundations.
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>>97600027
Im not sure what that would even look like given we're capped on points but I'm intrigued lol
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>>97599772
The circles would be weird to explain in-universe. What are they, even? Portals? Platforms on the ocean, or floating in space? I think landmasses just make more sense narratively
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>>97600035
Nta but if it's just taking the Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan you can get it for relatively cheap with this ruleset. Take the Unique Power perk, 20 points of drawbacks, and that's it. If you take NSWF you can even squeeze a Bloodline Limit in there and get the whole thing for just 20 points, which leaves the base budget untouched.
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>>97600047
Well considering the power scale is so high it's probably more like some type of nightmarish chaos realm.
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>>97600047
>>97600060
I don't think they're actual abstract circles, they could just be circular shaped landmasses, like artificial islands.
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>>97599989
You mean horse girls? Probably xeno, they have higher baseline abilities but they don't have a multiplier and they come from a world were humans are normal. That one guy will probably say they are superior because they have no drawbacks.
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>>97600027
Why do people hate the sharingan?
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>>97600076
Jealous of the uchigga swag
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>>97600076
Because he was right about literally everything.
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>>97600083
>only hokage to identify the real problem of the Leaf
>provides an answer to the Uchiha Question
>invents the most powerful gamebreaker jutsu to ever exist
>sexiest kage by far
How can one man be so based?
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I only like half of the sharingan, but it's the best eye of the ones offered. I kinda wanted just the base sharingan, but the genjutsu shit is useless for what I wanted. The problem is that all other eyes have what I want, plus some uselsess ability.
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>>97600076
The Sharingan was introduced as Sasuke's main power early on. Because of this Kishimoto was under pressure to keep introducing new abilities through Itachi that Sasuke could aspire to, and then once Itachi died the same in a sense for Madara and Obito.

Because of this it essentially 'scales' like Naruto's progression with Kurama, but unlike being a Jinchuriki it's implied to all come from the eye itself. Other than the Rinnegan this eventually makes it the single most stupid-ass busted ability in the setting that apparently 99.999% of Uchiha just don't pursue for relatively reasonable reasons.

It's actually a cool ability, people hate it because people wank it and people wank it because people hate it.
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>>97600056
Spicy. And then if you do that you're cracked as hell or something?
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>>97600111
You have some cracked abilities but are essentially a mental or physical cripple that doesn't know how to fight at all so honestly it might even be a decent concept.
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>>97600114
No wait I re-read the previous post, yeah that's some spice.
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>>97600111
Kinda? The base sharingan is cool and all, but how strong the evolutions are depend on the abilities you put on them. It can be busted like it can be just kinda useful. It also takes time to master and even buying the evlution doesn't technically give you mastery.
>>97600108
I like the seeing chakra bit, and the seeing past illusion bit. Being able to copy shit at a glance is also neat but not necessary. Honestly, how much would it cost for me to make a KKG that does just those 2 things? No evolutions, not bullshit, just good sight, maybe night vision?
>>97600114
>>97600120
Once again, depends on what you put on there, but it's surprisingly cheap. You need 2 perks for it without being a cripple at our rank tho.
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>>97600135
That's the Byakugan, it lacks some of the Sharingan's abilities in order to further max out sight and chakra senses.
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>>97600145
That's slightly better, but still has stuff I don't really want or need. 360 and telescopic sight, and it's really ugly.
The Jougan and Tenseigan are cooler than the sharingan evolutions tho, at least to me.
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>>97600135
>>97600145
This, if you want a lesser Byakugan-like eye you could take it for 10 or something.
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>>97600175
Kaguyachads, destroy him
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I honestly only like Susanoo. The orher Sharingan stuff doesn't do it for me.
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>>97599400
I don't think this is something that needs to be planned. If you want to make a teacher, you can.
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>>97600195
To be clear, I have a different sense of style for different kinds of characters. For example I think the Byakugan is really ugly on a guy, but would look better on a girl, Hinata is cute. I don't know why, I just feel like that.
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>>97600219
Neji bros, crash his tenketsu!
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>>97600203
Which is kinda funny because it's the least eye based of all the sharingan abilities. You could probably just get a fake Susanoo as a standalone KKG for cheap. Having said that, in the cyoa you get to choose some of the abilities so you can substitute them with stuff you like.
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>>97600219
Just build a girl then, lorus chud
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>>97600237
I could say that Neji looks like a girl so it looks good on him but I will not. I have no rebuttal to this.
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>>97598163
>Name
Ayane Hasegawa

>Land
Land of the Moon / Will of the Sky

>Chakra Nature
Lightning

>Perks
Genius

>Drawbacks
Old Wounds (Born Cripple)

>Basic Techniques
Book Smarts (Artistry) 3
Chakra Flow 2
Espionage 2
Puppet Arts 3
Stealth 2
Subterfuge 2
Tool Arts 3
Unarmed Combat 2
Weapon Arts (Assassin/Hidden) 2

>Advanced Techniques
Elemental Flow 2

>Equipment
Shinobi Puppet (Prosthetic Body)
- Cultist Spike
- Flash Bombs
- Kunai
- Makibishi
- Needlegun / Senbon
- Smoke Bombs
- Steel Wire

###Concept
Daughter to a noble merchant and born a near-limbless and frail cripple, Ayane Hasegawa has used the considerable resources and reach of her family to have an array of wood-and-metal prosthetics fitted over her feeble body, manipulated by a branch of Puppet Arts that almost allows her to control it as if it were her own.

Prodigy of artistry and craftsmanship, she uses an array of tools, weapons and devices to practice an obsessively trained blend of ninjutsu and taijutsu. At her level of experience, this is little more than an relatively impressive grasp of fundamental martial arts, ninja weaponry and a decently advanced application of Chakra Flow, but has been enough to mark her as a keen student.

She has entered the Hidden Moon Academy at an advanced age and the protest of her parents. Physically hobbled for most of her life and less familiar in the shinobi arts than most of her classmates, she is undoubtedly a few years behind those of her own age-bracket and has been assigned to a lower year while she masters the fundamentals.

>Rentry
https://rentry.org/NarutoAcademyAyane
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>>97600264
>Relationship Chart
You almost had me fainting
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>>97600264
>Changelog
- Charming replaced with Genius
- -1 to Charka Flow, Espionage, Stealth, Subterfuge, Unarmed Combat and Weapon Arts
- Gained Book Smarts (Artistry) 3
- Gained Elemental Flow 2
- Shuffled Equipment

Took Genius as recommended last thread, required actually taking an Advanced Technique. Took Elemental Flow as an upgrade to Chakra Flow adjacent to Rupture Slash/Reaver Claw that lets her put Lightning into her Chakra Flow without being able to shoot bullets or make barriers or anything. Reduced a number of 3's to really emphasize what she's a prodigy at vs what she's good at.
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>>97600279
Soon.
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>>97599972
Gets wrecked by nugget girl
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QUESTION
Which worlds should be bordering Isekai Land? I decided Fate should be one, but what else? I can change things as requested of me
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>>97600264
>She has entered the Hidden Moon Academy at an advanced age
>she is undoubtedly a few years behind those of her own age-bracket
First Momika now this? Is Moon Academy running some special program for retards?
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>>97600341
Both of the older girls weren't being trained from the age of 5 to be Shinobi and have been put on the rapid advancement course to catch up.
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>>97600321
My guy gets wrecked by a lot of people judging by the responses haha
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>>97600341
Momika is only 15 so if Ayane is that or younger, she's not a crazy amount older than the other kids. It's just at an age where each year is a big difference.
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>>97600338
>Fate should be one
What's your reasoning for that? I thought Fate was gonna be next to SMT and JJK.
>>97600392
I thought they were all supposed to be connected. Victory Road is also really small for being supposedly a main area.
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>>97600425
I still don't fuckin' know if JJK was gonna be the size of a city or even combined with SMT or something. Also, have you seen Victory Road in the games? It's usually a cave stretch. In my mind the territory goes a little beyond the "main" place in all of these but still. Also I just thought Fate would crossover into a lot of things or it might be a good first place of interest.

Regardless, this is a good time to decide things and get feedback
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>>97600264
I AM considering Scroll Arts 3 instead of Book Smarts 3 because it seems like the ability to do artsy/craftsy stuff is baked into Scrolls/Tools/Puppets, reading it again. I think I missed that last time, ack. I'll update the rentry from now on to not spam the thread regardless and don't expect any other changes.
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>>97600438
>I still don't fuckin' know if JJK was gonna be the size of a city or even combined with SMT or something
I don't see why it can't just be a continent-sized stretch of buildings.
>Also, have you seen Victory Road in the games? It's usually a cave stretch. In my mind the territory goes a little beyond the "main" place in all of these but still.
I'm pretty sure they're ALL supposed to be a LOT beyond the main place. Each territory is probably infinite in size because of how high the power level is.

Also, wasn't there supposed to be a melting pot in the center which is just where every single area bleeds in?
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>>97600392
I don't know if a continent really works. I also agree that I think it should be that the main 12 areas we have should be the biggest, of equal sizes.
Maybe we should just ditch the idea of a congruous entity and go for something more abstract? Like they're all seperate dimensions that bleed out through portals or something.
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>>97600371
Memes aside, I think he does have the strongest foundation due to all the elements, but he's spread really thin since they're such a huge investment so early on. Taijutsuchads will blitz him, and other ninjutsunerds will outskill him. Not saying he's the weakest or anything, but it's not like the drawback points weren't abused. Plus there are the negatives of the drawbacks themselves to consider.
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>>97600454
It's cool.
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>>97598163
I know Momika anon gave some thoughts on potential combat synergy, but I'm curious what others think about it. Out of the builds so far, which ones would work well together and which would struggle to get along or have styles that would get in each other's way?
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>>97598163
https://rentry.org/tm2km4fp
It isn't finished, but I wanted to post it as is for feedback.
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>>97600392
I think it's important to focus on the "big things" first.
So, the locations with important power systems and a variety of good enemies.
The anime half
>Naruto
>One Piece
>Bleach
>JJK
>Dragon Ball
>HxH
and then the RPG half
>Pokemon
>FF (I propose KH should be broken away, we have borders now so that takes its functionality)
>SMT
>Fate
>Isekai Land

These are the biggest and most important ones, so they should all be the main focus. Everything else should be smaller than them. My vote is we just accept them as 11 and give up on a 12th main sector.
Honestly, although 12 is nice number, it's being too difficult to reliably attain. Platformer Land being the 12th makes the most sense at this rate, but it's power system still sucks ass and makes more sense as a "treasures spread about thing". FMA works technically so we could do that, but I mean Alchemy is just awkward.
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>>97600574
Y'all really underestimate the importance of faceclaims.
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>>97600580
>Bloodline Limit (KG: Shark Physiology 2)
The perk would give only the first tier, no?
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>>97600589
I paid for the second tier.
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Honestly I don't care about the map at this point and just want to play the isekaislop and write about us fighting Super Saiyan Freddy Fazbear instead of edging. Someone take the first napkin.
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>FIRST NAPKIN
>MUDCORE
>ZFJ
>BMW
>SOVL
>[WORD or WORDS]SLOP
MAKE IT STOOOOOOOOOOP
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>>97600574
>Rage
>Crybaby
Water Style: Shark Tears!
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>>97600628
this slowcore Z-unc-J can't handle a sovlenhanced lexicon
>he took the last napkinslop
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>>97600574
This again?
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>>97600029
Harry’s so strong that he gets glazed even across MP’s… that’s good progress.
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OKAY THEN

Do I drop landmasses and make the circle thingies? If so, what even is the point of bleeding the sections over? But if you guys would rather have the circles I can do that
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>>97600392
Alright, here's my idea:
>Isekai Badlands
Endless stretch of green plains, ominous rpg towers, and other generic fantasy features, such as the random desert, volcano, or ice mountain. Surrounds the Main Sector Walls.
>Main Sectors
10 dimensional arenas, each for a different franchise. Encloses the Melting Pot, a land of numerous different franchises but no power systems, such as the Mario Sphere of Influence, Sonic Sphere of Influence, or Resident Evil Sphere of Influence.
>Bridges
Insane borders between areas, mixing them together in a more synergestic way compared to what is found in the melting pot.
Thoughts?
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>>97600701
He's actually pic related. I don't know why he didn't just use the obvious choice.
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>>97600782
I think we should wait for more input from the anons that show up in a couple hours. If anons like >>97600797 and the circles we can go with that.
Honestly, I kinda dig it.
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>>97600828
>>97600582
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>isekaislop is just 3 guys who can't even decide on what crayons they want to eat
grim
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>>97600860
what did you expect would happen in a kitchen sink setting? theres way too many directions to go in so it all goes nowhere
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>>97600837
I'm gonna wait a bit longer, but honestly I was looking forward to a Battleworld-esque tapestry. Oh well, we can decide eventually

>>97600899
I didn't expect people to want to do it after I brought it up, honestly, but here we are
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>>97600899
>theres way too many directions to go in so it all goes nowhere
Every MP ever out of NOWHERE
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>>97600797
I do like the sphere idea more even though visually the continents are more appealing due to being bigger actual lands to traverse through, the gateways and roads make much more sense to travel quickly between the zones. If you started at Namek and had to make your way to Racoon City, it's going to take you ages even if you learned how to fly with Ki. With the Bridges it doesn't matter as much because you can always cut through the Melting Pot, although this is assuming these areas aren't as large as continents.

I do really prefer the globe map but since it's going to keep anons separated unless they have some Innate power to move far distances, it's going to be too much of a pain to navigate.
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>>97600912
With the exception of my 1d academia of course
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How old do you think each of the ninja look, no-playby-losers excluded?

Iunno what age to say mine is so this will help me decide
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>>97600905
>>97600927
>but honestly I was looking forward to a Battleworld-esque tapestry
What if they were fused together? Instead of circles they're territories, they're just in arranged in that general formation.
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>>97600954
It's mostly just a size thing, because then the Melting Pot would just become One Piece in the other map in that it's still a giant ass piece of the world you have to go over, and it wouldn't change the amount of time it takes to move across.
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>>97600938
what is a no play by loser
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>>97600971
any virgin loser who doesn't show up to Momika's private tutor sessions
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>>97600938
>no-playby-losers
wtf does this even mean
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>>97600557
>>97598199
>>97600574
water nigga and shark nigga seem obvious
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>>97600996
Kisui uses a sea animal too. Fish Konbi.
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>>97600996
>>97601021
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>>97600797
Honestly this seems like the best way to go about it, I vote for this.
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>>97599703
repulsive, traitorous, veteran hobo with a body double. -8/+2
probably going to survive. probably sold out everyone in the first place.
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Where did my nardo bros go...
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>>97601473
Here, sup?
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>>97601473
It's been getting about as much attention as Isekai this thread, both are pretty even in discussion
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>>97601473
I've been typing up a response to anon's compatibility while also working on some stuff.
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>>97601473
Weekend activity is usually pretty slow, so this actually isn't too bad. Things will pick up.

As for myself, I am thinking up some stuff for Naruto, but I unfortunately have irl things I have to finish up today keeping me from doing much more than check the thread every so often.
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>>97600797
>Nam
who has the best matchup against the Vietcong?
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>>97601692
Conceptually weak to fire, so Saku and Riku cook them.
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>>97599325
>look over this slop
>taking a featherweight main power gives 4 points
>costs 4 points total to buy another main power (even heavyweight, as long as it isn't a -1 version)
???
why is the author such a fucking retard
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>>97601784
The more full powers you have the weaker they will be apparently so that's the limiting factor
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>>97601796
But taking half a power cripples it, so there's never any reason only take the ability.
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>>97599325
Is Eugene on the team? Also, how are we treating Saku? RAW we're supposed to feel an existential hatred towards her, but we're presumably teammembers with her. Harry has I Did What too, so does that mean we're gonna be more swarmed with enemies because of their drawbacks? Should we all get I Did What points, or will the extra enemies be more of their own issue?
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>>97601907
The better question is when are the Soulboundfags gonna get raped and power stolen so their drawback comes up
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>>97601907
>or will the extra enemies be more of their own issue?
Dis unless you volunteer to carry their burdens, like a simp
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>>97601919
The powers that be don't want you to know this, but you can write smut whenever you want, anon.
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>>97601919
Wait hear me out, we clarify the rules to state even deceased/disqualified members get their wish so we can have them disqualified and later ressurected after a lengthy soulrape to ensure they have enough trauma and didn't just get free points.
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>>97601960
I call Aizen
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>>97601978
you're getting molested by ballsack man
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>>97601987
>file name
vgh... builds from other MPs appearing as raid bosses in the arena... kino... truly, isekai tournament is ART
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>>97600240
I can't write girls. And my character doesn't even have any eye stuff this time around.
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>>97601907
>Is Eugene on the team?
Eugene is an illegal build, he said he would rework the build then disappeared. So he either lost interest or doesn't have time yet.
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>>97601919
That wouldn't be making the drawbacks activate either, it's just pointless.
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>>97600971
>>97600983
Play by aka Avatar aka Image
Its part of RP stuff usually.
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>>97602068
literally never heard of it, and what does that actually mean
like what context are you using that in
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>>97601919
Just don’t die, simple as. Unless you’re someone like Lucas with Prime Soul, it’s pretty much already the game plan. Harry’s already been learning CE so he can eventually access RCT just so he can have more survivability.

>>97601960
Nah those who die should still lose out. Already entering in means you’re willing to accept the terms, and we even have stuff like negotiation as a way out without bloodshed. If you die you die and go to turbo hell.
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>>97602097
Nta but if I had to guess, it means people who have vs don't have face claims for their builds
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>>97602100
>Prime Soul
That is the 1 ability that gives you a free shot at this, so he can die and revive once. Only once, even if he unlocks the balance breaker that gives him infinite resurrections only the first one is free. Unless special rules apply like becoming a Hollow or Shinigami. All this is stated in the player section of the cyoa.
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I don't think the anons asking for drawbacks to happen even read the drawbacks in question, or the cyoa in general.
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>>97602146
We should have banned soulbound for just being free points.
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>>97602179
>Mad he didn't bet it all on winning
SAD, be more daring next time
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>>97602179
It's not that different from Bloodline Limit, is it?
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>>97602131
That’s why I mentioned it. The plan for every contestant is already not to die, unless you have the one ability that gives you a second chance. Soulbound is pretty much free but its the same thing as selling your soul to eternal damnation, but with the upside that there is a way to get rid of it simply by winning.

Just win, it’s not that hard.
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>>97602097
>>97602104
Playby is the image you play by. Its not complicafted. The rest was saying to ignore the people without it since they dont 'look' like anything.
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>>97602189
>>97602266
There's a high chance you're gonna get Geas'd by a pervert if you lose anyway.
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>>97602195
>Bloodline Limit
>a perk in a different cyoa
>Soulbound
>a drawback that never applies unless you die and gives a fuckton of points
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>>97602284
bro, you didn’t learn an anti-Geas technique? What are you, an amateur? He doesn’t even have Domain Amplification to surround his mind with, this guy is cooked…
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>>97602334
Ah shit. I got confused. Updated Naruto has a Soupbound perk too.
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>>97602349
I think the omnipotent tournament organizers are gonna enforce their rewards.
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>>97602284
>free marriage
Sounds good to me.
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>>97602179
Just write the soulbound fags as extra weak to compensate for their 3 free points. Simply means their abilities are spread out thinner and are less potent to compensate.
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people are complaining about free points in fucking crayons now
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>>97602350
>Soupbound
I don't know if that would be better or worse. The implications of being bound to soup is surprisingly scary.
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>>97602404
>pick the make fun of me because I'm a fag who wants free points option
>be annoyed that you got bullied for it
??? what was the expected outcome? it's all in good jest
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>>97602404
The war between miseryfags and drawbackchads is never ending and will be fought in every frontier
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>>97602426
all the drawbacks in the isekai mess cyoa are free points anyway so why does that matter
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>>97602446
truke... only foundationless is a real setback
no ability issue isn't a setback either, foundations with monster talent probably scale higher than most abilities, and you're probably going to take monster talent with a superior race anyway
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>>97602460
You’ll miss out on Balance Breakers which is pretty devastating. Even the smallest ones are huge powerups and they don’t require massive undertakings to get it so it’s only possible near the endgame. The hax they can provide can even sometimes just bypass pure physical stats or defenses so its pretty big loss to not have some up your sleeve.
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>>97594300
Hey, Vivian anon. I'm really sorry to say that I'm dropping out from this thread altogether. I am no longer working on anything for Feldspar or any of the mp running right now.
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>>97602480
>saw the isekai nonsense and dipped
b-based
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>>97602467
You can get hax from the power systems too
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>>97602480
You could join nardo. The vibes have been good so far
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>>97602588
Were you looking for cyoag?
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>>97602598
Nah, this is the superior thread do with that as you will
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>>97602588
pretty cool but not really suited for multiplayer
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>>97602622
With a custom star system where all players start and choose a planet to colonize it could work
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>>97602588
>nation builder
how about no
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>>97602638
How about yes?
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>>97602638
btnbros
we are rightly forgotten
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>>97602588
Honestly pretty cool, wouldn’t have thought that there’d be a multiplayer option but giving us a free “whatever you spell it” drive to get around is nice. I don’t really understand why someone wouldn’t take the Planetary destruction missile compared to the antimatter torpedos though. Sure its 50% more expensive and only comes with the single one, but the size of destruction is just way too huge. The antimatter torpedos seem like such a pain in the ass to even use so while it is an actual combat weapon that will work in space and whatnot, having the capability to wipe out someone’s entire planet if they decide to fuck with you just seems way too good.
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>>97602588
I enjoy your weird OCs Charlemagneanon, but it's really only good in an arena format, which I doubt anyone will ref for nowadays.
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>>97602638
There is one guy here that really wants to make one of those work.
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>>97602655
I read this a bnbbros.
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>>97602665
Has one of them ever started properly?
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>>97602460
>>97602467
depends on the ability in question tbdesu
some of them are goated
some of them are Bifrost (read: dookie)
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>>97602666
the best you can do is one anon, satan?
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>>97602684
Charlemagne's? No. Other arenas? A bunch have started properly before but not recently. Actually ending? No with a one exception.
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>>97602638
I'm not in the mood for an arena currently, but I'm sure I will be some day in the future.
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>>97602588
Seems cool, and I do like nation builders, but sci-fi has a pretty poor track record here save for star wars.
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>>97602690
I wasn't trying to defend it, I'm just pointing out that one guy brings it up from time to time even if it's known that it doesn't work.
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>>97602701
>star wars has a better track record
>the game that literally just started a few days ago
>and died instantly
what did anon mean by this
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>>97602699
>Charlemagne's?
That's what I meant, I am aware of arena's track record and the controversial opinions they bring. Despite never working anons keep wanting to do them.
>>97602701
You must be our resident nation builder fan then.
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>>97602711
It worked exactly one time like 2 or 3 years ago, but that is still better than any other sci-fi cyoa as far as I can remember.
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>>97602588
I looked at it, sadly it has exactly 1 build that I find even remotely fun. I also have a feeling that if it ever starts there are going to be at least like 5 of them.
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>>97602731
What's the build?
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>>97602720
CRAPPERbros....
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>>97602751
Ultra crafter man with all crafting perks and all research and development. I feel like everyone would go that direction.
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>>97602770
I mean... I would
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>>97602770
well you can also build for a powerful early game military almost on par with the Pirates drawback
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Rolled 1 (1d2)

>>97598163
1:speedmaxxing vergil larper
2:burning battle junkie
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>>97602785
>speedmaxxing vergil larper
The return of Vix.
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>>97602789
I forgot who that was and had to go into the archives for him. But nah, the larp only goes as far as Judgement Cut and I guess being cocky and overconfident.
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>>97602833
I only remember that because it was made at the end of the run, and was half made by the thread instead of one anon.
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So have you all agreed on the Balls. TM instead of the landmasses? Fine by me, but let's decide on a spread. I'm okay with still making the map
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>>97598163
Can we make custom items or just custom jutsu/KKG?
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>>97602854
I'm pretty sure have already bought custom items.
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>>97602480
Sorry to hear, anon. Thanks for the heads up, though. Hope you enjoy whatever you do next.
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>>97598557
>I will be starting the narrative after a couple more days
What does this mean? Do we want to repeat the Senanon disaster?
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>>97600557
Personality wise I can see Hibiki working well with Momika (he's happy to share his wealth, but might get upset when she lies or cheats since he's kind of a moralfag), and he and Mona are both pretty ignorant about life and society so they might bond over learning basic shit. Ayane would be the easiest to sympathize with since they're both cripples.

Ability wise, Hibiki and Kosshi would cover each other's weak points well. He's a genjutsu/stealth specialist with really good hearing, while she's a taijutsu specialist with really good sight. He could act as support and debuff opponents with illusions or sound blasts while she beats their ass. Sound travels better in water, so maybe after they train together for a bit Sumio and Hibiki could pair up for combo attacks?
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>>97602848
I guess so. Is >>97600797 good and we just put all the non-main power system stuff (platformer, resident evil) in the center? I'll update the rentry.
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What's naruto land called? The Land of Iron? Or is that just the kingdom?
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Anyone care about the danmachi update?
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>>97603077
Lmao no
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>>97603015
If you mean where we are, it's Getsugakure in the Land of the Moon.
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>>97603015
No clue what the continent/world is called. Might not have a name. Land of Iron is a nation, yeah.
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>>97603128
I meant the continent I guess. On the other side of the sea there is Arcadia, so the naruto continent must have a name too right?
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>>97603141
Isn't Arcadia just a nation too?
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>>97603149
I guess it could be. It seems the name of the continent but it could be one of those situations where the nation conquered most of the landmass so everyone starts calling the place like the nation. I think that's part of the description, how overseas is more unified instead of having a bunch of smaller kingdoms.
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>>97603141
Arcadia is just a fanon thing as far as I'm aware. In canon there's only the separate nations, but no name.
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>>97603161
>>97603149
I just checked, Arcadia is the capital of the empire. But it is implied that it conquered the whole continent so it's the only nation there.
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>>97603141
The continent's never named, in canon it's the only one so I guess they never bothered
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>>97603162
The continent is in one the OVA's but it's never given a name or detailed description of how it's organized IIRC. It's just an unnamed continent that the baddies dressed as knights come from.
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>>97603141
They usually just say stuff like "The Ninja World"
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I finished the fluff for my build, and found some good faceclaim, but right at the end of it I had an idea for 2 different builds. I wanted to work on it more but at this point I may end up making even more builds if I keep thinking about it.
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>>97603316
You can always hold onto builds for future runs or to cannibalize the main concepts from for a future cyoa.
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>>97598163
https://rentry.org/mavvkh67

Nana Kozeni and the Jū Ni no Akutō

I haven't started on the bio blurbs for each summon, but I really wanted to finish getting this out before the end of the day. I went on the assumption that 1 ryo = 10 yen. Let me know your opinion of if I should change the prices at all, I was kind of going off vibes.
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>>97603359
Probably better that way. I'm going to sleep soon because I'm getting too tired but I guess I can post the build in a bit.
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>>97598163
>Name
Leigan

>Village
MP Moon: Will of The Conqueror

>Scenario: MP
>Rank: D

>Perks
Deep Reserves
Enhanced Body

>Drawbacks
Tragic Backstory
Rage
Most Wanted (Perk)

>Chakra Affinity
Lightning


>Basics
Unarmed Combat (free)
Utility Jutsu 3 (free)
Weapon Art 3 (Chains) (free)
Body Flicker 3 (free)
Chakra Flow 3 (free)

>Advanced
Advanced Taijutsu 2
Rupture Slash 2

>Hidden
Chakra Mode 1

>KKG
Abyssal Chains (Awakened)

>Item
Short Range Radio
Book of Gelel
Culture books of two continents

Full build and info here.
https://rentry.org/yx4zt937

Escaped experiment from Arcadia, bearer of a mutated KKG resulted from strange experiments, the only success of his batch. Paranoid and slow to trust, tends to misunderstand even genuine attempts at kindness. Taken in by the academy because of his rare power. Knows almost nothing of his home country but tends to use terms derived from there because the researchers used them all the time. Stole part of the research in his escape.

Branded as a criminal under false accusations, some countries have a bounty out for him.

Took longer than I would like. It should be fine even if I'm not completely happy with it. I was told to post it first and avoid the gambit so here it is, feel free to consider it a schrodinger's build until then I guess. Backstory writeup for the drawback(s) soon.

The Arcadia part of his backstory isn't really necessary, I just liked the will of the conqueror and didn't feel like Konha would have secret underground labs. If people really hate it I can rework it, but even now he's still supposed to become a ninjia in time.
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>>97602923
I left halfway through the Chunin exams, what happened exactly with Senanon? I mostly wanted to follow how we played last time by giving scenarios for the PCs to play in like the First and Second Exams.
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>>97603514
The run died because everyone was waiting for some big plot developments from Senanon about the tournament and what was supposed to happen after but since he kept frauding nobody was able to progress. The shitposting overtook the discussion and interest shifted to other runs that were starting at the time. There was other stuff too but the serial frauding after taking up so much responsibility was a big part of it.
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>>97603482
Anon, your pictures are missing in your rentry
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>>97603540
Thanks for reminding me. I'm about to go to sleep but at least one of them is fixed now, I took it from the thread. I wanted to post the other one with the backstory and take the link from there because it's easier, but tomorrow when I wake up I will add it in another way otherwise it will take too long. I have more than one image for once, it feels like a waste not using them.
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>>97600557
Sumio's water style is very versatile, allowing him to fill the role of backline or mid-range damage dealer, support, and/or battlefield control. This means he likely synergizes with most anyone if we're just talking combat.

Frontliners like Hoshigaki, Mona, Kosshi, and Leigan would make it easy for him to fight the way he enjoys, which would consequently make it dramatically easier for them to do their jobs.

Builds that rely on stealth or illusions like Momika, Ayane, and Hibiki would make great use of his water, fog, and rain barriers which hide ally movement while slowing down and disorienting enemies. This approach also tends to result in less strenuous activity for him, which Sumio considers to be a big plus.

Other ranged fighters and summoners like Kisui, Minoru, and Nana would still make for some dangerous combos. Sumio's adaptability and skill in limiting his opponents' options paired with an ally who brings many options themselves, means they'd likely have more versatility and win conditions between them than whoever they're up against.

In terms of personality compatibility, I think certain types would take issue with his laziness before he'd take issue with them. Ironically, his style has actually made him accustomed to taking the lead in combat, though he has no issue adopting someone else's plan. Extremely loud and energetic people can get exhausting, but it only actually becomes a problem when they disrupt his naps. He likes quiet types for obvious reasons. He'll act exhausted regardless of how much sleep he gets, but even if he doesn't always seem it, he is rather easygoing and thoughtful. He'll just grumble whenever he has to put in serious effort.

When doing something he really enjoys, such as performing ninjutsu, he does so with an enthusiasm that seems almost energetic. And for reasons he won't share, he does have a secret chivalrous side that may potentially help or hurt in combat depending on the situation.
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>>97603535
This is exactly why I wanted to start at the Academy, this scenario is supposed to be a lot more open ended so even when I'm not posting prompts for the class the players can stay engaged by interacting with other builds, doing things around the village and fleshing out their characters. At some point I'd like to have all the players graduate and form squads and take the bell test. Then the main focus as Genin would be going on actual ninja missions for a while, fleshing out the squad dynamics and sometimes teaming up with the other squads. The main idea would be divide and conquer and not doing major events that hold up every player so we don't repeat last time. But I'd be lying if I said I didn't want to try my hand at the Chunin Exams again, but we can cross that bridge when we get there.
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>>97603702
>But I'd be lying if I said I didn't want to try my hand at the Chunin Exams again
It (genuinely) wasn't your fault, but you have to let it go.
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>>97603535
I really don't think it was because he frauded. Anons could have discussed and written about non-tournament stuff in the meantime or decided to figure out the tournament without him if they really cared enough. No one was preventing them from doing things. I know I just got busy with irl stuff around that time. If everyone else was relying on one guy to keep the MP alive, then it deserved to die.
>>97603702
I like starting this way, so we get some time to spend with the builds and watch them develop. There's also nothing stopping the chunin exams from working when we get to that point. If anons have grown attached to the characters, they'll make things happen.
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>>97600557
I actually envision Kisui mostly as a tank fighting style wise, difference being he's more of a dodge/'regen' tank hybrid instead of a typical defensive tank. Using Kan'oke in suicidal maneuvers because it can always regenerate its mass via fluid and reproduction, and then combine that with the kelp wings its layered on, that are ideally on fire. Not getting hit himself hopefully with a mixture of paper style and substitution - I'd give him Shikigami Dance when he hits C rank and he only doesn't have it now because I was a point short I also imagine he uses Kan'oke as a net for crowd control; covering his opponent in psuedo-napalm via sticky bryozoan mass.
So he goes together well with a good dps to take advantage of his defense and cc.
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>>97600557
Kosshi is going to struggle at first, but this rough ordering for how well she I imagine she'd mesh:

Mona > Hibiki Leigan > Ayane > Minoru > Nana > Kayukuzi > Sumio > Momika > Kisui > Myorin

It's not entirely accurate in the sense that this is more representative of initial interactions She may currently find Sumio easy to deal with, but in the long run she'd be fonder Myorin and so on.
Hibiki, Momika, and Sumio seem like they'd work well with her ability wise. With Hibiki or Sumio, can support Kosshi with genjustus/elemental justus while she get up close. Momika is similar, but I imagine it'd be even more of someone being too distracted with Kosshi to keep track of what she's doing.
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>>97600557
Ayana's reliance on her limited ammunition and strained chakra reserves from moving her puppet body means she has a very low amount of active combat stamina, especially at her current level of experience. She's very much an ambusher type who uses every advantage to get her opponents to be vulnerable - smoke, stealth, flashbangs, misdirection, deception, etc. before going all out for the 'kill.'

She excels with others who have high stamina who can make her an opening because she's bad at covering for others. Particularly tough, evasive or aggressive Taijutsu fighters like Mona, Leigan or Kosshi who can handle themselves in creating an opening would be best, being the Fighters to her Rogue.

She works a little less well with Ninjutsu or Genjutsu specialists in a straight fight because she currently lacks the experience to capitalize on their more chaotic/subtle styles, respectively. As much as Sumio can help her disappear, he's also going to be doing a lot of loud/collateral damage jutsu that's hard for her to set up with using wire/senbon and other tools. Minoru might be a little more doable since he seems to be low power, high versatility, high stamina at the moment.

Obviously stealth teamups like with Momika help when they get the drop on someone else but it means they'd both lack a real plan when brought out into the open.
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>>97600557
Theoretically Minoru can work with anyone. If you need battlefield advantage, he can make a variety of illusions. If you need ranged support he can be your wizard. If you need a tank, he has elemental armor, and he can also buff his weapon and yours with elemental energy.

The biggest things holding Minoru back are more personal. His abilities mesh well with anyone, his personality probably doesn't, at least for now as a raw newbie. As long as the fight goes well he's probably OK but as soon as things start going wrong he'll be looking for someone to blame. Which at least somewhat to his credit does include himself, he doesn't generally pass the buck to others.

Minoru wants to learn and get better, but at the same time has an uphill battle when it comes to taking direction and being instructed.

>basically hes the "prodigy, but grew up with circumstances/on the wrong side of the tracks" archetype

Or maybe im just talking out my ass, ive never been amazing at writing characters.
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team compatibility ratings... part 2!
>>97598345
Momika would either give Minoru a wide berth or be cloyingly sweet in an attempt to keep him calm. It mostly depends on how their interactions in the academy go, and if she gets to see him have a true rage/instability melty. If she only saw him at his regular brooding, she would see it as an opening to create an attachment and manage him throughout their missions, but if she saw him blowing up to the point of not differentiating friend or foe, she'd be under no illusions in dealing with something coming from his very own chakra network. On the surface, she would still be friendly, but the internal directive would shift from "get to know him enough to he doesn't snap at her" to "get to know him enough so she knows when he'll snap and get out of the way first". He's self sufficient in most ranges and avenues, but she can make combination moves with his Fire or Wind style.

6/10
>>97600574
I will wait until it's finished before giving a full rating
>>97603383
Nana-chan! The most loyal and adorable teammate Momika could ask for! I've already spoken of how Momika would actually do her best to be caring and set a good example for her (even if her definition of good example is off), so I'll add that it would also lead to their mutual growth as shinobi. Momika is normally someone who is satisfied with being "good enough", but by being put in the position of a sensei, she would strive to be a level ahead so she can impart more knowledge onto the other girl, and since Nana defaults to following her lead, she would further benefit from a less indolent Momika. Also, I imagine that due to their miser ways, they're sharing the same apartment in Getsuga to split the cost of necessities. Combat wise, I believe Momika has the best chemistry with Genzo, Hichiru, Atoimoi, and Yamasha, but even without dumping her precious ryo in summons, Nana offers a decent amount of taijutsu to Momika's combination of ninjutsu and genjutsu.

11/10!
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>>97603482
Momika walks a tight rope with her criminal activity, enough to get a few annoyed merchants putting up D-rank missions for her capture, but not enough to make her wanted by several villages, so having Leigan stuck on her team as a big walking target which requires her to be extra wary and suspicious of her surroundings would leave her a tad annoyed. As if that was not enough, he's also the paranoid type, so her attempts to drill her superior (for their bracket) knowledge of stealth and subterfuge into his head would be an uphill battle, enough that she might eventually give up and decide to just avoid dealing with him outside of missions. Combat-wise, there's a slight overlap with their win conditions of making the enemy helpless to resist (physically through chakra draining chains or mentally through genjutsu), thus less synergy.

5/10
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>>97603482
Why isn't he horribly disfigured?
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>>97605244
because nothing says he should be?
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>>97605315
I wish this were true, but tragic backstory says you need to have at least half your body(including your face) be horribly disfigured
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>>97605315
Your tragic backstory?
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>>97605315
No, tragic backstory earns its 10 points by putting heavy restrictions on your faceclaim. Genius design really.
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>>97605244
Because that's not a requirement. He just needs to be distinctive and unnatural in some way. It's a bit hard to see in that image but one of his eyes glows a different color. Also some of the chains are permamently coming out of his body and regrow when destroyed, mostly on his back and shoulders almost like wings, but it's hard to find an image for that.
The text of the perks gives some examples, and unnatural eyes are one of them, you don't need all of them.
His unstable genome has a few dormant KKGs in it but nothing eye related is planned for now.
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>>97605340
Why'd you make me do this to you?
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>>97605340
It seems you've confused distinct look with tragic backstory
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>>97605324
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>>97605335
Wait what? Did it change at some point? I was sure it could be only mental scars rather that phisical. Reading it again I guess you're right, A shame really because the small clause of wanting to take over the world really fits with a plot point for later.
I guess I will switch it over for Emotional Weakness, it's more fitting for the idea I had in mind.
As a side note, who decided these perk and drawbacks names? They make no sense holf of the time.
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>>97605340
One eye glowing is not a tragic disfigurement.
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>>97605358
>Did it change at some point?
Even going back to the old version where the background was white, it still has that requirement.
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>>97605347
I read it now. I think the name makes no sense and I could swear it was different at some point but I can't argue with the text.
>>97605350
I actually was talking about Enhanced Body, that one also has a requirement of being distinctive. Taking both of them would mean finding a very strange faceclaim and I didn't feel like it.
>>97605360
It really isn't, it wasn't meant to be. Would the chains count? Probably not because they are not on his face. I guess I will post the updated version next thread, in the meantime I will update the renty.
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>>97605383
Basically to use that drawback, your faceclaim needs to be in Two Face territory, not slightly colorful manga character territory.

Unironically I think Crybaby should also be 10 points, because anons hate nothing more than being uncool or genuinely ugly.
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>>97605449
Then why do they keep making genuinely uncool builds with ugly faceclaims?
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>>97605449
>anons hate nothing more than being uncool or genuinely ugly.
Leaning into those can wrap around to being based depending on how you do it
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>>97605472
Uncool is bad writing. Ugly faceclaims is in the eye of the beholder. Both are subjective.
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>>97605473
This is true. A good writer can make anything work. You don't find those very often though. I know I'm not one.
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>>97605383
It's also ok to write your character having problems without taking a drawback for it.
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>>97605531
This. Drawbacks are for serious issues that are actively detrimental. You can still have all sorts of less problematic problems without them. The difference between really not wanting to lose your family's sword vs. Sentimental Item is big.
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>>97605449
Well, it's not what I had in mind anyway, Emotional Weakness fits much better, I wanted to add Sentimental Item too even going over cap but I just couldn't think of an appropiate item to get attached to in a lab, maybe the book?
Anyway, the rentry is updated with the rights drawbacks, and some additional information about his age, it's a mess, and I wrote down the distinctive traits at the end. Also fixed the second image.
My other 2 ideas would have been easier to give strange traits to, but harder to find a faceclaim for.
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>>97605531
But if the drawback fits what I had in mind then why shouldn't I take it?
>>97605545
>You can still have all sorts of less problematic problems without them.
He has those too, but they wouldn't come up in dangerous situations.
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>>97605593
>He has those too but they don't come up when it matters
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>>97605545
I do wonder why is it naruto in particular that brings out this kind of discussion. I have seen the complaints about drawbacks being free points in other cyoas too, but only in this case both sides are really adamant to defend the respective stances.
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>>97605614
And they aren't drawbacks, so what's the problem with that? That's the main difference between a drawback and just a personality flaw.
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>>97605347
On the topic, I'm thinking of going with Tragic Backstory for an Uzumaki but instead of half my body being disfigured, I'd have his entire torso and upper arms covered in bite marks like Karin. Would that be okay?
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>>97605623
I don't have a dog in this fight, but that post didn't seem to be adamantly taking a stance. As for why it comes up in naruto, I think because the drawbacks are actually pretty rough with pretty big gains. When everyone takes the same easy drawbacks that just give you a couple points in a cyoa, there's not much to argue about.
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>>97605672
Going by the description the face would be the problem. Looking at it Tragic Backstory is one of the more limited and unforgiving drawbacks. Most of the drawbacks are "you have a problem, here are some guidelines" while Tragic Backstory is "you have exactly this one specific problem, in maybe 2 different flavours".
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>>97605623
Naruto, especially with the rules we're operating under, has some real issues with the drawbacks. For one thing, there's no 1 point drawback to help round off a stray point total. For another, there should be more drawbacks in the 3 to 8 point range or so. The cyoa is built off of 2 and 3 point skills and upgrades for the most part, but the drawbacks are mostly on 5s and 10s which makes dividing awkward. You really want some 6 and 12 point drawbacks.

It's also very odd why the narrative drawbacks, which are the most ignorable to a minmaxing build, are the most rewarding with points and extra perks. Shit like crybaby which genuinely fucks with how your build works and how you write seems more deserving of a free perk than having a stalker or something in my opinion.

Also given how many drawbacks we're banning, its very hard not to gravitate towards rage, emotional weakness and instability every time. I'd prefer a more diverse set of flavor options, but the odds of getting an expansion to the cyoa are zero I'm sure, so it's whatever.

Just some idle thoughts while in the bathroom.
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>>97605672
Those are supposed to be bite marks? What bit her, a lamprey or leech? Not many creatures have a mouth that is perfectly circular like that.
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>>97605672
You gotta fuck up the face. Anything else can be easily covered up and made irrelevant. You can wear a mask too if you really want to be gay and negate the drawback, but thats a bitch move and we all know it.

Real men wear their scars openly. Don't be a coward. That drawback means children vomit at the sight of you, that's why it gives as many points as insanity, and MORE points than a goddam lost body part despite leaving you physically and mentally completely intact.
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>>97605749
>Also given how many drawbacks we're banning,
The answer to this is to stop banning drawbacks.
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>>97605761
>and mentally completely intact.
It doesn't leave you intact, it also gives mental trauma and world destroyin/dominating tendencies. After reading it properly it should give more.
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>>97605774
You're not wrong but I also wouldn't want to give too many more points or it really does become the most optimal drawback. I considered it many times for my builds and had to exercise much restraint to not take it even at 10. Just wear a mask and robe and it never applies in practical terms, you just get free points.
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>>97605315
To be different I'll point out that Enhanced Body also requires you to be visibly altered in some way.
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>>97605790
That was already addressed. Glowing eye and chain wings.
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>>97605749
>there's no 1 point drawback to help round off a stray point total.
Why are you lying? Man of Mystery is right there
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>>97605763
I agree in principle, but not with the rules as written. Giving free perks is a very easy way to do loops through the point system and make some truly psychotic "Rank D" ninjas in name only. I'm a points whore and min maxer to the core, but even I would feel that's a bit silly to allow an open field.
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>>97605623
Weve had this since Worm anon.
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>>97605797
I guess but then you have to wear a mask which interferes with faceclaims. Given how important those are I'd call man of mystery more like a 2 or 3 point drawback, especially when people in universe figure out they can blue screen you by ripping it off your face.

A 1 pointer feels like it should be more trivial. You are right though I did forget about that drawback.
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>>97605806
1 point should be like 'Sweet tooth' or 'Ramen Fanatic' where you can be bribed by a specific type of food or whatever but it doesn't gurantee you'll do anything that would be outside youir moral scope in the first place.
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>>97605804
And they had the right sentiment by saying "if you take wde x3 and humble beginnings your build gets slimed out"
We should do that with nart too
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>>97605804
Humble beginnings, my beloved
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>>97605821
Makes sense to me.
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>>97605804
But did it derail whole threads with discussion and shitposting about it? Because it happened last run with nardo.
>>97605826
The cyoa doesn't have the kind of drawbacks that makes that happen. And with the point cap nobody would take the combinations that would make it happen either.
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>>97605727
Took me a while to find a different faceclaim but I think I can work with this

>>97605750
In Naruto, Uzumaki have a unique vitality to their chakra, but once their village is destroyed and they become refuges other battlewounded shinobi would chomp on their skin to suck this vital chakra out of them, healing their wounds
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>>97605883
>other battlewounded shinobi would chomp on their skin
There is no way those are human bite marks. I can understand the lore but the representation looks like someone drew circles in paint. Human bite marks look very different. I had to study that.
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>>97606039
>anon studied forensics
Fedchan...spare me
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>>97606039
Maybe they're snake ninjas who can unhinge their jaws
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>>97606111
Medicine, which does have parts of it.
>>97606163
I don't even want to get into that, but considering the setting that wouldn't surprise me.
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>>97605774
It already gives a fuckton
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>>97606163
Karin DID work for Orochimaru
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What would be a suitable bounty on my build's head to justify Most Wanted? I was thinking 10 million ryo, but don't know if that's too high or too low.
Would still post writefag as well.
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>>97606203
I would say that it's probably different in each nation, as they would consider different crimes as worth differently. But it does seem enough, maybe even too much depending on the crime.
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Slaves????????
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>>97606315
I was debating if I wanted to give Nart an early OP. Leaning yes, so I'll probably just do that.
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>>97606327
Can you redo the nicknames if you do? Those are awful.
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>>97606346
theyre all kino
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>>97606346
Sadly I have no sense for nicknames. Also I'm not really in the mp or following conversations so I don't know the characters that well. I'm afraid you'll be stuck with them for the next thread. I'd suggest getting together with anons to suggest better ones.
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Bruh why are there so many bounties on D rank genin? Just make them jonin level enemies whose backstories we can cry about like Kimimaro
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If no one has any objections to the previously posted balls map, I can redraw it so it looks a little nicer
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>>97606371
Anon needs that extra perk
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>>97606378
Legitimate question, do you think we'd see less drawbacks if builds got a free perk like last time?
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>>97606371
L anon's build is the only one dogshit enough to take most wanted, tho
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>>97606388
I think the people who need two perks will think they need three
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>>97606388
NTA, but Anons drawbackmaxxed last time too.
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>>97606388
No, the only thing that's proven to stop these animals is to put limits on them
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>>97606371
The ones that were discussed are fake because they are escaped experiments. They are not as dangerous as the bounty would make you think, which is actually worse for them.
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>>97606402
So what you're saying is that they need to be leashed and collared?
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>>97606392
There 2-3 more in the works with it going by the discussion.
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>>97606412
So is their role to die to the bad guys to make us hate the bad guys more?
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Small family emergency came up which curbed a bit of my activity, but should be fine for posting now.

>>97598556
I'm fine with playing it as separate spawns and meeting eachother to display the differences between Drop-In and Extras. Knowing that there's players but not exactly who they may be could be interesting, or just as another anon was suggested where we get a task to meet up works just as well. Also to the people who took I Did What or any other similar drawbacks, it'll put us in a worse situation so that there's further incentive to meet with the rest of the group and actually make it into a proper drawback.

Learning different power systems through bounties is good too, I think there's plenty of ways to progress without purely going for bounties so there's freedom of choice there. I personally also vote for simulacrum because if we're going crayons we should be able to fight Frieza or Sukuna in their full manifestations.
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>>97606440
No, it's to seek revenge until they understand that the friends they made along the way are more important.
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>>97598598
>For 'good guy' raid bosses evil clones would work though.
Cowardice, kill your childhood with your own two hands like a man
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>>97606371
It's not particularly hard to get a bounty albeit. Abandoning the village can already make you a missing-nin. Defecting to another is even worse.
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>>97606454
But they aren't dangerous enough to survive. They will die so we cri
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>>97606440
Those bounties remaining unclaimed would be a great waste.
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>>97606456
Aren't most of the builds missing nin since they were switched to the moon village from somewhere else?
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>>97606471
We don't know the bounty on one of them. It could be low.
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>>97606486
I don't think they're technically ninja if they haven't graduated from the academy yet.
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>>97606486
Free perk for everyone then.
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>>97606486
>Village of missing nin
Looks like we sniped sen-anons premise
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>>97606507
I'm pretty sure it was on purpouse, and senanon contributed quite a lot to the current setup.
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>>97606372
Sounds good to me.
>>97606449
Glad to see you're posting again, anon.
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>>97600557
Nana's defensive preference would shine better when she has a ninjutsu or genjutsu specialist to pair with, distracting and fending off enemies to give them opportunities to land big hits. Conversely, I feel this would also make her more of a hindrance when paired with a taijutsumaxxer. If she were to try her usual stuff, she might just end up getting in the way.

If you take her summons into account, then as loathe as she is to use them, it would give her the flexibility to fill almost any role in a group.
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>>97606386
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>>97606386
Hogs, you know the drill. New thread is this way, so rollllll on out!



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