sup /tg/, thought I'd try something a little different round herehttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ifDFF7c_mSY
The chapters are fairly lengthy, so I'm just going to post one a day for now.
Will Shal and her rad horse Cerulean find Ranthor's killer, or will she just continue to have a crashout now that she's swole?Find out tomorrow!
>>97834610>switches scenes three times within as many paragraphs>clunky sentence structure>sweaty breasts on the first pageNice idea OP, but I'm good.
>>97834651I get that they couldn't just let her have three Wish spells at the ready, but come on...
>>97834677>sweaty breasts on the first pageAnd that's a problem because...?