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Archives & Other Resources: https://rentry.co/cyoag
AllSync: https://cyoa.allsync.com/s/owWor64yLTngDk3
Multiplayer Compilations: https://rentry.org/MCYOA_Comp_Comp
In Case of Emergency, Break Glass: https://rentry.org/mcyoagCanary
Threadslave Rentry: https://rentry.org/ThreadKeeping2
Backup Rentry: https://rentry.org/ThreadKeeping3
Yar har, fiddle de dee Edition
Previous Thread: >>97866210
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>>97882073
The Hidden Moon Village calls

>CYOA
https://imgchest.com/p/m9yxdobq64q
>RULES
https://rentry.org/6unsb3tn

>>D Ranks
>Momika, Maiden of 100 Tributes
https://rentry.org/hsviqv5p
>Mona Kyo, Doctorate in Monkey Business
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97592567
>Sumio Fuchigami, Professional Meal Ticket
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97598199
>Ayane Hasegawa, Master Splinter Giver
https://rentry.org/NarutoAcademyAyane
>Kosshi, Operator of the Orphan Crushing Machine
https://rentry.org/7wutmc5x
>Kisui Shōmi, 50% Sea 50% Weed
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97647540
>Otanashi Hibiki, Canonical Furry
https://rentry.org/5964ikmz
>Nana Kozeni, Spaghetti Spiller Supreme
https://rentry.org/mavvkh67
>Leigan, Lethargic Lightning Lasher
https://rentry.org/yx4zt937
>Taiki Nakano, Looney Tunes Doctor
https://rentry.org/TaikiNakano
>Koda Mine, The Rat King of Rat Kings
https://rentry.org/w5d2ut3n
>Kurayami, The Five Bi- The Two Million Ryo Woman
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97611857
>Aisuke Uzumaki, Obligatory Canon Clanner
https://rentry.org/g5fxrgce
>Nekomaru Kagetora, Least Hyperactive 11 Year Old
https://rentry.co/nekomaru1
>Iwao Iwaishi, Dumb as a... Uhh... Uhhh...
https://rentry.org/NarutoIwaoIwaishi
>Natsume Saimoto, Future Insulin Addict
https://rentry.org/NatsumeSaimoto
>Jin, the 7 Year Old 40 Year Old
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97654164
>Hoshigaki Kazuyuki, Fishler's Top Guy
https://rentry.org/tm2km4fp
>Zig Raiju, the Less Cute Portal Abuser
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97665302
>Nagayasu Nouka, the Real Man's Gene Stealer
https://rentry.org/NagayasuNouka
>Motomu, White Boy Protecting His Balls
https://rentry.org/zhdoatbo
>Ren, The Royal Bootlicker
https://rentry.org/vwp9ev33
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>>97882080
>>C+ Ranks
>Myorin, The Only Drunk That Beats Their Kids Legally
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97594947
>Fox, Childish Child Abuser AKA Hitomi Yūnaga
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97620911
>Dogen the Mystic, Who Left the Priest Alone With the Kids?
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97625009
>Suzaku Tokawa, DLC Character in the Works
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97659491

>Writefags
>Simple Introductions (Nana, Kosshi, a hint of Momika)
https://rentry.org/u63edrps
>How to Score a Free Meal (Koda, Sumio)
https://pastebin.com/MQFbgTFk
>Sunsets on the Rising Moon (Suzaku, Dogen, Myorin, Momika, Mona, Sumio, Ayane, Kosshi, Kisui, Hibiki, Nana, Leigan, Taiki, Koda, Kurayami, Aisuke, Nekomaru and Iwao)
https://rentry.org/esseo5pc
>Voices in the Dark (Hibiki, Dogen)
https://rentry.org/ngbdw54i
>And The Underclassmen Are Flashing Hot And Cool (Momika, Nana, Ayane, Hibiki, Kosshi)
https://rentry.org/2dpfkorh
>The Awakening (Leigan)
https://rentry.org/rcxtdxtb
>Striped Like A Tiger! My Name is Nekomaru! (Nekomaru, Momika, Nana, Suzaku, Kisui, Myorin, minor appearances from Iwao, Koda, Ayane, Kosshi and Natsume)
https://rentry.co/wp6smxor
>Prompt Story (The Mugging) (Leigan, short cameos of Momika, Nana, Sumio)
https://rentry.org/br5ne5qg
>Blood Runs Hot, Coelomic Fluid Runs Cold (Kisui, Nekomaru, Momika, Nana, Sumio)
https://rentry.org/5ovpzpgu
>Roots and Rats (Hibiki, Koda, Sumio)
https://rentry.org/mk85rdfb
>In search for Truth (Motomu, Kosshi)
https://rentry.org/obo8gige
>Ninjutsu 101 (Dogen, Nekomaru, Natsume, Hibiki, Iwao, More Soon)
https://rentry.org/teg6aic5
>Acclimation (Kosshi, Kurayami, Momika, Nana)
https://rentry.org/btku2q5w
>Shinobi Spar! Round One: Beauty vs The Beast (Momika, Mona, Nana, Suzaku and Myorin)
https://rentry.org/9isamthg
>Moon's Landing (Aisuke, Ren, Kurayami, Motomu, light mention of Leigan)
https://rentry.org/tsxbkkuh
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>>97882086
>Prompt Compilations
>[Prompt Master List]
https://rentry.org/cdgixeer
>Leigan
https://rentry.org/hv9tyzzk
>Nana
https://rentry.org/e8tnhgco
>Motomu
https://rentry.org/k9ebx8zh
>Ren
https://rentry.org/gectyz6d

>Relationship Charts
>Nagayasu
https://rentry.org/NagayasuNoukaChart
>Kosshi
https://rentry.org/kosshichart

>Misc.
>Anon's Character Summary
https://rentry.org/mp9nzxgy
>Roommate Listings
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97713964
>Build Heights
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97684456

>Tiermaker
https://tiermaker.com/create/naruto-getsugakure-run-17629646
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Rules: No Worldshakers Active

>>Emperors
>Taiyo
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97869552

>>Pirate Captains
>Ray
https://rentry.org/hnx6w2mn

>>Pirate Crewmates
>C-Eagle
https://rentry.org/idmqm3kr
>Loue
https://rentry.org/pc7vo5fn

>>Cipher Pol
>Haku
https://rentry.org/HakuOrizuru

>>Monarchs
>Tasia LeStrahd
https://rentry.org/44obg9nt

>>Bounty Hunters
>Quake
https://rentry.co/z8ubz8yw
>Tohru Mizune
https://rentry.co/extx8y8y
>Raifuru
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97880496

>>Brokers
>Willow
https://rentry.org/MarakPieceTorturechan

>>Mad Scientists
>Heracles
https://rentry.org/gz55y8uw
>Lehr
https://rentry.org/8mbek9hc

>>Writefags
>Haku's Hit List
https://rentry.org/e6wmcscq
>Festival of Pirates (Loudest Pirates)
https://rentry.co/wkcm4ubs
>A Shanty You'd Rather Not Hear (Quake Armstrong, Mad Man Jiro)
https://rentry.co/i97y7qfa
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>MHA Rentry
https://rentry.org/uhx77ys6

>RULES:
> Timeline: Just Another Story
> Location: Japan
>The Hero Students are at Shiketsu.

Instructions + Template for Making Cards: https://pastebin.com/NQ6JNH8r

>New Stuff:
>New Writefag:
>Operation DESPERADO (Seiryu, Karma, Honoken, The Villain Known As Stormrazor)
https://rentry.org/62g2miaz

>CHARACTER PROMPTS (feel free to answer these whenever)
Former 1-D Prompts 1-50: https://rentry.org/mhamp
Former 1-D Prompts 50+: https://rentry.org/mhamp2
Everyone else's prompts: https://rentry.org/mhamp3
Same password for all of them (mha4)
>Older Prompt Links Are in Here
https://pastebin.com/Qr3TtGa6
>Fighting Style Prompt
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/88693730/#88693888
>Smokin' Sexy's Class Questionnaire
https://rentry.org/xudhyrnr
>Former 1-D Timeline
https://rentry.org/MHATIMELINE
https://rentry.org/itmttw7n
>Classes Compilations
https://rentry.org/mcymha2D
https://rentry.org/mcymha2E
old former 1-D comp: https://rentry.org/9bf3g
>Relationship charts
https://rentry.org/MHA_Charts
>Dorms Prompt
Dorm Room Proposal v2 https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94701730
>Tiermaker:
https://tiermaker.com/create/mcymha-current-cast-16507969

>Full Version of the CYOA
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/97718092
>Older Version of the CYOA (Both the old and new versions are legal for builds.)
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/94720077

For more Characters, Writefags, Art, Memes, Tierlists, etc. check the rentry
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>>97882099
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Isekai Tournament
https://imgchest.com/p/xny86ajm24b

>Cobalt
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97581231

>Sagittarius Riku
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97595535
https://rentry.co/gmn94tb3

>Saku Kirikami
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97595796

>Eugene Canseliet (under revision)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97587070

>Lucas Walker
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97587439

>Harry Higuruma
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97587677

>Six
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97607788

>Llewellyn Odyalutai
https://rentry.org/IsekinoTourneyLlOd

>Zara
https://rentry.org/foph6yni

>Jack
https://rentry.co/ugyp2t2k

>Writefags
>Harry's Intro:
https://rentry.org/er5d7kbm
>Cobalt Intro
https://rentry.org/8z873wz2
>Zara Intro
https://rentry.org/t9riaqvf
>Forgotten Reflection (Lucas)
https://rentry.org/r6fmeb2w
>Twenty Thousand Mammoths Under The Sea
https://rentry.co/ouz5ixcx

>Areas and Connections (Updated, still needs one further update)
https://rentry.org/v9ioyuz8

>Journal
https://rentry.org/vahx9iv5

>Data
https://rentry.org/IsekinoTourney2026BuildTable

Rules so far:
>Power tier is Heavyweight
>Mode is Bounty/Negotiate to encourage PvE events but PvP (other tournament player) is still possible as killing someone grants you all of their points
>Builds are 'Team X' by default, with no limit on power type or members
>All team members can get a wish
>The 'Team Handicap' exists; as the amount of team members you have is higher, your growth is slowed
>You can sever from your team at any moment, gaining the maximum growth multiplier
>You can't become a team member again after severing yourself from your team
>Setting is a multiversal arena with many sectors with their own enemies based on different fictional works, each with unique bounties
>Hunt bounties for points, and then you can use the points to purchase goodies, such as furthering your knowledge in a power system
>Teammembers spawn away from each other, and have to group up
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It's been 5 threads since my character last got named outside of compendiums
It's over
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>>97882096
lmao
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>>97882126
?
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>>97882125
so true uhhh
Kisui unc
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>>97882133
There's something wrong but I'm not gonna say what it is heheheh...
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>>97882125
RIP in pieces... Iwaobro...?
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>>97882147
That one I copied straight from notes after anon said he compiled it, so it's not my fault!
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>>97882160
Rocks are more patient than that.
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Sluts
>Taiyo
Has had many a train ran on her after a show while high on drugs and drunk.
>Willow
Serial rapist, gets nothing out of it beyond enjoying that people don't like it. Picks targets carefully.

Experience
>C-Eagle
Tried it once or twice, decided its not for her. Seamstress.
>Tasia
Would be a whore if there were enough men who met her standards.

Innocent Virgins
>Loue
Thinks ladies become mommies after kissing their husband.

Autistic Asexual
>Tohru
Doesn't know sex exists.
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>>97882294
now do the men
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>>97882312
Who gives a fuck about moids
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>>97882330
moid general albeit?
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>>97882147
What is wrong with it?
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>>97882294
Fap before posting.
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>>97882561
If that post was for me to jerk off to it would have been about some variety of bodily functions
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>>97882575
Nobody asked for your fetishes anon.
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>>97882600
Then why did we play Kaijuslop?
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>>97882605
make a wish mp for kaoru anon
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>>97882561
Anon's just saying it like it is. He's not wrong.
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>>97882618
He was wrong the moment he decided to think about it.
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>>97882618
He is
C-Eagle and Tasia are both innocent and pure
The rest is correct without a shadow of doubt though
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>>97882605
I didn't propose kaiju for that one guy's fetishes...

>>97882611
I mean, not like I forced anyone to play or anything. People showed up as shitposts, in earnest, or as kino shitposts like Ack! Ack!
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>>97882638
You should have posted a version with the giantess and fart options blanked out, you SHOULD HAVE KNOWN
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>>97882312
All the guys are virgins who shall die without scoring (they didn't join Taiyo's crew or let Willow join their's).
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>>97882637
This.
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>>97882637
Yeah, the Willow one at LEAST has to be correct. "No line she won't cross" and she also enjoys psychological torture? Definitely a rapist.
>>
now that we got that out of our systems can we have some real discussion
what are you writing anon
what would you like to write anon
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>>97882803
Still writing my One Piece Greenshell island writefag
Still working on my Naruto writefag
And I wish I could write fast
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>>97882803
I'm tossing around a few ideas but I'm kinda busy and haven't had the chance to think them out more thoroughly.
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Rolled 908, 336 = 1244 (2d1000)

>>97882803
I'll write this many words today.
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Rolled 167, 849 = 1016 (2d1000)

>>97882867
That's a good amount, anon. I'd be more than happy with myself for writing that much. As for me, I'm writing this many words today.
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>>97882096
Time for build audits! I'm assuming a 12 10 point split, since that's what pretty much all the builds are using.


>Taiyo
2 Beri over, unless there's a Mad Scientist and Monstrosity counts for 1, in which case adds up. Captain+Emperor for 3, Powers are 5(free devil fruit), 4 for Haki, 5 for perks (assuming genetic overhaul is free). 15 points available with drawbacks. 3 Vanity left.

>Ray
Adds up for Beri. 2 Vanity left.

>C-Eagle
1 Beri over, unless the racial free observation haki applies to Future Sight, in which case adds up. 2 Vanity over (Writefag tax only applies to beri or vanity, unless rules are otherwise)

>Loue
2 Beri left, 3 if counts as WG. 1 Vanity left.

>Haku
Adds up for Beri and Vanity.

>Tasia
Adds up for Beri, unless Monstrosity counts for 1, or free haki counts for Future Sight, then up to 2 left over. Vanity auto adds up.

>Quake
2 Beri left. Adds up for Vanity.

>Tohru
1 Beri over. Powers for 3, Haki for 7, Perks for 8. 17 points available with drawbacks. 2 Vanity over.

>Raifuru
2 Beri left, 3 if Future Sight is free. Adds up for Vanity by spending a Beri.

>Willow
Adds up for Beri. 2 Vanity left.

>Heracles
Adds up for Beri and Vanity.

>Lehr
Adds up for Beri and Vanity.
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>>97882680
Ray's collecting a harem and he doesn't take used goods.
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>>97882835
>Still writing my One Piece Greenshell island writefag
Willow-anon?
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>>97882899
>Adds up for Beri. 2 Vanity left.
Funnily enough I'm gonna touch my build up a bit and actually spend those last 2 Vanities. Not changing anything mechanically besides switching a skill though. Just flavor text.
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>>97882926
Yes. Almost done.
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>>97882899
>Loue
I used 10/10. I don't think Monarch counts as WG since Monarch is in large font. I wonder where I missed 1 Vanity.
3 for Island
1 Superhuman
1 Cosmetic Improvement
2 Class Equipment x2
2 Custom Weapon
1 Proper Pirate Get up
Seems to match for me.
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>>97882936
Nice. Just making sure so I didn't step on toes.
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>>97882942
Mayhaps he gave you writefag beris
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>>97882899
HUH???
I kinda had a feeling I was counting things wrong. I actually did remove a combined 2 Beri of options before posting the final build, I guess I can update the build and add them back. Once again, I’d rather be under than over
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>>97882946
Yeah, and without the writefag beri's the count would match for those, but Vanity still wouldn't.
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OOOOOOH I THINK I KNOW WHAT HAPPENED
I misunderstood the writefag tax. I thought that was a Nurgle’s Gambit sort of thing, so there’s 2 Beri I didn’t take. So is that just something I can take now?
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>>97882899
For my rankings of diffs in which my builds beat others, I felt mildly threatened by Tohru. Despite only taking Attack and Defense meaning my build mid diffs her, I couldn't shake that feeling. Thankfully, I know now that she paints her sword and is a fraud.
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>>97882976
yeash
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>>97882976
We are counting a detailed enough backstory apparently so if you have that then yes.
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>>97882988
That doesn't sound healthy- what the FUCK is that
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>>97882988
Please stop pretending you have a build.
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>>97883011
What is this easy mode? A 2k word writefag is the minimum that should be acceptable for a writing tax.
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>>97883022
If you look at some of the backstories they go over that so they count by your standards too.
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>>97882942
I just rechecked my numbers for her, made a mistake.
3 for Island, 2 for skills, 1 for Superhuman, 1 for Cosmetic Improvement, 5 for Equipment

I think I did her before I realized that the writefag only gives 2 points to EITHER Beri or Vanity. I only caught that partway through. Still a passing build though, since Beri can be spent.

BTW, I did give everyone the writefag bonus. I may be auditing, but tax fraud is fitting for a pirate setting.
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>>97882988
>not low diffing a shitter like Tohru
couldn't be me
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>>97883022
I did ask if my backstory counts and nobody said anything about it.
>>97883034
>tax fraud is fitting for a pirate setting.
As funny as this is I should probably start working on it if it doesn't. I was writing something else but I may as well switch priorities.
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Narutobros, do we still wanna do the relay race? Or do we time skip? I don’t get it
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>>97883116
Everyone wants to get to graduation.
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>>97883116
3 anons are working on the relay race, the rest is ignoring it. But that doesn't mean they want to time skip. So no to both. People want to build relationships and have SoL and training, we had none of that yet, how are we supposed to make teams later?
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>>97882899
>2 Vanity over
History, Thievery, Piloting 3
Superhuman, Cosmetic Improvement, Fortune Telling 3
Custom Weapon x2 4

I'm not sure where an extra 2 is meant to be coming from unless I got the pricing wrong
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>>97883124
How peculiar, everyone wanted the D rank run but now that we do have it everyone wants to skip it.
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>>97883130
I want to work on the relay race, I'm just kinda confused because my team is the last one so if the first team to be written about is the last one... that's gonna be kinda anticlimactic. Makes me want to just write training and SOL instead
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>>97883130
>People want to build relationships and have SoL and training, we had none of that yet, how are we supposed to make teams later?
Nothing is stopping anyone from writing that though. They might want it, but they're not willing to work for it
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>>97883143
It's fine. We'll just resolve it using Kirkbridian metaphysics.
We do a dragonbreak. Everything is canon, even if it's conflicting. All possibilities collapse into a single unified timeline.
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>>97883131
C-Eagle?
In the rentry, you have Class Equipment (Presumably upgraded) and Skypiean Dials. Each costs 1 Vanity.
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>>97883132
not me
I always thought D Rank was a dumb idea that would be filled with nothing happening
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>>97883149
Of all the MPs in the thread right now nardo is the one I like the least.
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>>97883159
Then I'm not talking about you
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>>97883152
>Skypiean Dials
Isn't she a skypiean? They get those for free.
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>>97883160
But I do want that, and I am willing to work for it, it's just low on the priority list. I will circle back to it at some point.
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>>97883164
I could say that I didn't count it as it seemed to be through genetic overhaul, but that would be a lie. I missed that.
If the class equipment is also baseline, then the vanity adds up.
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>>97883152
The Class Equipment is baseline, just listed for the purpose of having a full sheet, and like the other anon said I took the dials as freebie.
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>>97882899
What brought this on? I honestly appreciate it since I was stressing over having missed something in the last couple changes but it came out of nowhere.
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>>97883200
you weren't edged enough beforehand, you say?
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>>97883222
What is wrong with the thread today?
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>>97883227
I woke up alive.
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>>97883265
tragic...
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>>97883271
One Piece is missing some prompts.
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>>97882066
>infinite dept spiral.
Funny typo, almost works better than what was supposed to go there.
>Also makes sense to me, go for it. They might know each other from a long time ago.
Cool. I forgot to put it in the rentry but Lehr is way older than he looks, part of his experiments combined with a side effect from the fruit, so the timeframe matches.
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>>97883183
In that case, my bad, you're fine.

>>97883200
>Making my build
>Geez, what should I spend Vanity on?
>Look at others
>Also short
>Wonder how short?
>If counting Vanity, should count Beri
>Should do it for the other builds as well

in short, tism
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>>97882892
I've failed you all, I'm sorry.
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>>97883702
2 hours left chud
make it count
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Be thankful I don't post anything. You wouldn't want to read my low quality trash.
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>>97883972
You would be surprised.
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>>97883972
this is wrong every time it's posted
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Builds with this energy?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JlkBbb7SKyA
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>>97884117
For nardo, half the class. For OP we have none this time around.
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>>97883132
We didnt rank up fast enough and peple got bored of low rank
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>>97882096
Blindly assuming anon did everything right and checked all the yonko and captain stuff.

Name: Taiyo Orka
Race: Fishman
Occupation: Captain+Emperor
Ship: Battleship
Location: MP
Skill: Navigator, Piloting, Leadership, Cooking, Music
Powers: Basic Fightingx2, Fishman Karatex3 (Resonance Match), Hasshoken, Geppo, Amazing Paramecia (Sound-Sound Fruit), Logy means the study of: Sound(/Music)
Haki: Armament Hardening, Armament Emission, Conquerors Domination, Conquerors Voice of All Things
Perks: Superhuman, Genetic Freak + Genetic Enhancement + Monstrosity + Genetic Overhaul (Voice Box of the 'Gods'), Synergistic Skills, Cosmetic Improvement,
Items: High Quality Class Equipment, High Quality Cool Clothes
Drawbacks: Tragic Backstory, Forever Chained. Obsession (Music)

She doesn't speak of her past, or the marks upon her body, but she is but one of many who were saved from the clutches of the humans. Taiyo fights with vibration, shockwaves and resonance on a level never before seen - A true prodigy of Fishman Karate. Legend says she even knows the forbidden technique... Drunk Driving which allows the wielder to utilize a ship itself as a weapon.

She actually loves to cook and sing and has a broad skillset developed over the years. Just don't ask her to perform music for you without proper preparation. One building destroyed is more than enough to learn that lesson.

WG types recognize her as an escaped slave of a noble who 'employed' her as a favorite source of entertainment. She managed to grow her mastery in secret and destroyed a large chunk of their mansion and escaped alongside a large number of slaves. She leads a sort of rebellion targeting primarily the elite rather than any other ships they come across.

Every four years she hosts a grand festival for pirates from all across the seas, which quite often ends up with whatever poor island ends up being the host completely destroyed from the moshpits overflowing.
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>>97882096
Fixed Tohru
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>>97884257
writefag tax paid when
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>>97884284
NTA but just write a background big enough that it has to get a rentry and youre good.
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>>97884323
That's pretty gay dough
ruins the spirit of the retarded design
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>>97884254
>10 start
>7 occupation
>2 powers
>-1 haki
>-6 perks
>-2 drawbacks
Your build is illegal.
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>>97884381
You realize they are one of the only people to actually do a writefag right
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Honestly just remove the writefag bonus and make the base points 12/12 at this point.

Usually we count our backgrounds as the write tax for cyoas anyway so it just makes sense.

Not like it'll impact how dead the cyoa will be, its not gonna convince people to write if they werent going to in the first place
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>>97884406
>Usually we count our backgrounds as the write tax for cyoas anyway
Write taxes are dumb conceptually but it's silly to just cheat them. It's one thing if you're gonna write and don't pay the tax immediately, or ever, as long as the promise is there, but people who want to buy more stuff for their medium-effort dump just confuse me.
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>>97884425
You just gotta remember that its a CYOA by default, so you only get the points if you write about your build instead of making a shopping list.
Its just by default mcyoa fulfils the requirements to get the points because we write out builds background and stuff.

Its to encourage people in cyoag to actually engage with the cyoa beyond making a list of powers. Talk about their character, etc.
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>>97884567
yeah but I mean
pfft
c'mon
we all know what its gonna be used for
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>>97884406
>Usually we count our backgrounds as the write tax for cyoas anyway so it just makes sense.
Do we? Some cyoas have tax that says it accepts backstories or builds, but for writing taxes specifically, I don't remember us accepting stuff besides writefags.
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>>97884254
12 10
>Captain+Emperor (9 10)
>Battleship (9 9)
Navigator, Piloting, Leadership, Cooking, Music (9 5)
Basic Fightingx2, Fishman Karatex3 (Resonance Match), Hasshoken, Geppo, Amazing Paramecia (Sound-Sound Fruit), Logy means the study of: Sound(/Music) (4 5) (Devil Fruit is free from Overhaul, first fishman is free)
>Haki: Armament Hardening, Armament Emission, Conquerors Domination, Conquerors Voice of All Things (1 5) (Conq is free for yonko)
>Perks: Superhuman, Genetic Freak + Genetic Enhancement + Monstrosity + Genetic Overhaul (Voice Box of the 'Gods'), Synergistic Skills, Cosmetic Improvement, (-4, 4) (Assuming Genetic Overhaul is the free perk)
>Items: High Quality Class Equipment, High Quality Cool Clothes (-4 1)
>Drawbacks: Tragic Backstory, Forever Chained. Obsession (Music) (0 1)

Have a Vanity left over, could grab high quality equipment for another class. Could also argue that Monstrosity should only cost 1 if you're using it for musical skill. Could also argue that the Sound Sound Fruit is not Amazing, but Great or even Good. It's amazing for her, but the Hormone Hormone Fruit is Amazing for Ivankov as well, and that's considered Good.
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>>97882096
Was thinking about tightening up Raifuru's concept and differentiating him a little from our other Hakimaxxing Future Sight Gunslingers.

Considering focusing more on his weapon over supernatural powers, full Science/Skill Hybrid. Would having an electricity-based devil fruit in a canister as some kind of whack-ass power source for his railgun via Fruit Enhancement be too much of a departure or does One Piece have room for ridiculous wonderweapons as character features?
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>>97885291
I just spent a vanity on even cooler clothes and ignored the last one.

Not too worried about maximizing her other than that, I got what I wanted (All the voice/sound related things)
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>>97885604
Weird science weapons are very much possible.
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>>97882096
I decided to say fuck it and post the build first now instead of doing the gambit. There will be an intro piece at Greenshell that shows how she speaks and her personality later once I get the chance to write it between work.

>Name
OIO

>Race
???
>Occupation
Mad Scientist
>Ship
Exotic Ship
>Skills
Navigation
Shipwrighting
Piloting
>Powers
Basic Fighting
Ranged Weapon Skill
Geppo
Hypnotism
>Science
Logy Means The Study Of Space!
Cyborgization II
Advanced Armaments II
Cloning
Mecha-Robotics
>Devil Fruit
???
>Perks
Genius II
Superhuman
Cosmetic Improvement
>Equipment
Class Equipment (High Quality)
Custom-Made Weapon
Proper Pirate Get-Up
Ship Coating
>Drawbacks
Gonna Need A Compass
Down D. Stairs


CLASSIFIED:
https://rentry.org/tfv2mkec
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>>97885604
We've got a ball of dough that turns into a gun in this very run.
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>>97882096
Elizabeth Maidstone, Captain of the Lightning Justice, Captain of the Marines

Race:
Human
Occupation:
Captain

Ship:
Exotic Battleship
Exotic + Free Battleship

Location:
MP

Skills:
Leadership
Shipwrighting
Piloting

Powers:
Basic Fighting
Inhuman Fighting
Melee Weapon Skill
Geppo
Soru

Devil Fruit:
Logia (Goro-Goro no Mi)

Haki:
Armament Hardening
Armament Imbuement

Observation Intent Sensing
Observation Future Sight

Conquerors Domination
Voice of All Things

Perks:
Superhuman
Marathon
Cosmetic Improvement

Equipment:
Class Equipment
Custom Made Weapon
Proper Pirate Get Up
Den Den Mushi
Portable Den Den Mushi

Drawbacks:
Tragic Backstory

Rentry and Backstory to come, wanted to lock in the build first.
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>>97882096
Free me from the shonen cycle
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>>97885885
Remember when you had the chance to play Witcher and didn't?
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>>97885885
Just make a good cyoa made for multiplayer duh
We'll definitely maybe play it
And then probably turn it into shonen anyway
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>>97885885
why would you want to play anything but the greatest genre of fiction and also for roleplay/amateur fanfiction writing on earth?
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>>97885885
I make builds for almost every no that's suggested. It can't be helped that you lack enough conviction to go through with anything.
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>>97885885
Free yourself once something dies instead of trying to kill what is already there. There were several non shounen proposals lately, you could have joined one of those.
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>>97885859
Is the art original? Very cute, makes me want to draw her myself. Also BTW I just realised we should probably make another tiermaker. Image anon, make the images, I'll set up the tiermaker.
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>>97885859
My wife
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>>97885874
We finally have a naval presence pog.
She can hire some of our bounty hunters.

Ironically i was gonna use Ishmael before I went for a katana.
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>>97885796
>>97885862
Fair. The budget is very generous, I'm just struggling to figure out which routes to take. The vibe is simple; Good With Gun, Biggest Gun, but there's a surprisingly large number of ways to do that.
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>>97885942
*clicks search image on google*
I'm gonna go out on a limb and say no.
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>>97885859
I forgot to switch Geppo for Kami-E. Flying kicks aren't that useful when you can just put rockets in your feet.

>>97885942
Nah I just made the gif.
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>>97885972
>>97885874
Would she pay Quake to go after anyone? I may be interested in this for a plot, might be better than obsessing over crews and honestly I was never a bad guy in an MP so it might be cool to try for once
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>>97882096
>>97885874
OK, Rentry with accounting done.
https://rentry.org/sszuw5qz

Relationship chart next. Pirate scum on watch.

>>97886420
Bounty Hunters are a paper's width from pirates, but that width is their license to operate. Elizabeth does not like them, but I didn't give her Obsession (Justice) for a reason. She's prepared to work with them, but only insofar as they are legitimate. If intending to commit crimes while seeking a bounty from her, it would be prudent to keep it under wraps.
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>>97886420
Nta, but if the money's good, does he also do bodyguard work?
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>>97886648
Quake: Guards for money
Tohru: Guards if your enemys are strong
Raifuru: Guards for a shredded pork sandwich
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>>97886648
Sure, of course. I left Quake's role and purpose open-ended to compensate for my lack of One Piece knowledge. Who would need a bodyguard, though?
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>>97886699
Raifuru isn't THAT cheap.

It'd still be like half of what he could ask for because he's desperate and an idiot with money but STILL.
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>>97886932
Looking at people who specified their bounties, is he aiming for Taiyo or Loue?
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>>97886883
It's going to be part of a small one time gag during OIO's intro writefag.
Only sort of a bodyguard position, more of a "please keep that guy away from me" job.
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>>97887010
Despite his great need for cash, he's been in the business for so long precisely because he doesn't gung-ho focus on once-in-a-lifetime weirdo superhumans and prefers to go one or two bands lower for his targets.

The MP will be a very interesting target-rich environment for him where his caution will be fighting against his obsession. If a particular build pushes him in one direction he'll probably fall for it, but otherwise Loue would be interesting, particularly since he can measure his skills directly with what he'd perceive to be an extraordinarily talented upstart.

A big part of his character now that I'm fleshing him out is just how old he is. He's baffled by how many weirdo enhanced nightmare snipers are turning up with the current generation and feels like it's his job to go out with some pride rather than just letting it happen.
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>>97887051
That makes sense. I'm all up for it, can't wait to see what you come up with
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When we get the tierlistmaker we can rate the builds on their stats like

AOE Destructiveness
Single Target DPS
Endurance
Mindfuckery
Support
Lift Mountains
Outrun a speeding bullet
Sniper Supreme
Melee Master
and Paper Tiger
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>>97887362
>AOE Destructiveness
Taiyo (Island-Wiping soundwaves)
>Single Target DPS
Tohru (Black Blade with a Fruit to skip time)
>Endurance
Ray (Just won't die)
>Mindfuckery
Willow (Torture till mindbreak)
>Support
Haku (Almost all Haki with mastered Six Powers and good use of versatile Devil Fruit)
>Lift Mountains
Heracles (Ancient Giant, Mythical Zoan, all the perks)
>Outrun a speeding bullet
Elizabeth (2nd fastest Devil Fruit in the verse, literal lightning speed)
>Sniper Supreme
Raifuru (All the powers, haki, logy, and perks)
>Melee Master
Willow/Tohru tie (Only ones with a Black Blade)
>and Paper Tiger
Loue (Crossdresser)
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>>97887479
>lightning speed
lol
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>>97887479
I can't believe my build wasn't in this...
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>>97887479
I think Melee Master has to go to the person who took Melee Weapon Skill perks.
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>>97887653
realistically it should go to the amount of points spent on being a melee master and thinking about what applies to it
and how can you be a melee master genetically lmao, do you have a computer telling you what to do?
both have Melee III and imbuement but in terms of "skill" Willow has Synergestic Skill, another fighting style, a combat applicable Logy, and more Six Powers, which comes down to 4 points spent + vanities for Synergestic Skill
Tohru has 4 points from genetic perks spent
if you want to go by how much "focus" each one has, then Overhaul gives you an entire fucking devil fruit while costing the same as one so not sure how big of a bonus that is

neither of them probably are the melee masters though, it's probably someone else
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>>97887764
>how can you be a melee master genetically
Lineage factor
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>>97887764
Genetic Enhancement, at least to me, seems to be a bunch of small augmentations that are focused around one aspect. Genetic (Melee) isn't literally having a Melee gene, but might be a mixture of increased flexibility, strength, reflexes, the brain's spatial reasoning, human scale and the like. The result is being a little better overall but really focused in things that help with one area.
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>>97887768
LEND ME SOME HAKI SWORD MASTER GENES, THIS IS BASE FODDER VILLAIN WE'RE UP AGAINST!
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>>97887764
Genetic Overhaul is such a fraudly perk holy fuck it sucks so much
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>>97887768
>>how can you be a melee master genetically
>Lineage factor
You just gave me an idea.
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>>97887800
Genetic Overchuds lose all fights, it's trve
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>>97887479
>Crossdresser
While it's technically correct, using that term for a reverse trap sounds wrong somehow.
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>>97887800
Sorry hard work faggot, we're in nepo piece
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>>97887863
it's directly leeching off of someones hard work, conqshittery and monstrosity are the nepo perks
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>>97887818
Heracles now has synergistic skills. That enormous investment in history now has combat applications! And here I thought it would just be flavor text for his backstory.
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Genuine question, does Quake do anything especially cool? I feel like I gave him like 3 directions and he doesn’t spec into anything, and Taiyo is also a fish sound user
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>>97887914
he has vibrations rokuogan right or am I thinking of another guy
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>>97887919
Yeah he has all six powers and Rokuogan
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>>97887951
oh but I checked and he doesn't really have any vibrations
oh well a fishman karate powered rokuogan is still cool
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On the subject of powers I was heavily considering changing Willow's Logy. I think her deploying mustard gas is a funny pun and I was already changing what her "Food Fighting" entails but I wonder if making chemical weaponry just off of Synergestic Skill (Medicine, Cooking) + Food Fighting + just a Logy is fine for making chemical weapons or if I should change her Logy to Chemical Weaponry like I was thinking? I was thinking along the lines of how Queen in One Piece can develop viral weapons and that doesn't seem to be an option, so he'd have a Virus Logy I think.
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>>97888044
Depends on if you think she gets enough milage out of torture skills applied in combat I guess
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>>97887988
What about Genetic Freak + Monstrosity in regards to vocal chords?
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>>97888081
I guess that should do something yeah
I have a hard time envisioning how it's used though or how he could combine it with Rokuogan, does he use it as an AoE by grabbing someone and breaking their eardrums or does he shoot sound lasers and use Hyper Voice from Pokemon
does he tonguepunch people?
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>>97888131
Nah I’ve been doing it Hyper Voice style, where he can use Rokuogan and shout/sing at the same time to amplify everything more. Plus his special weapon is a microphone
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>>97888134
I get it, makes sense
I don't think your build has to be the best in a "category" though really, just having a unique enough identity should be fine, and I think he has one from Six Powers mastery
Taiyo is the fish that screams really loud, he's the fish that screams loud and has more bite to him
and he technically was posted for this run first so he's not the ripoff
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>>97885942
>Image anon, make the images, I'll set up the tiermaker.
Aye aye, captain!
https://imgur.com/a/pXfk6v5
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>>97888592
Could you do IMGChest? It lets me download everything on a single folder.
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>>97888675
Scratch that, Imgur lets me do that too. Tiermaker, ETA 15 minutes.
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I actually need one more thing: when I make a tiermaker, I give it a subtitle when the CYOA has been run before. For Martial Path it was the Xun Clan run, for Naruto it was the Getsugakure run, what do I call this One Piece run?
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>>97888749
It's One Piecin' Time
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>>97888749
Marak One Piece V3 No Worldshakers is the technical description of this run
so something like Marak Piece 3
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>>97888749
We don't really have a theme for this run going in, unlike those 2 runs before that started with a concept in mind, it's just a normal run because we had an update. Just call it the Update run. The accidental theme is that everyone wants to join the undead captain this time around, but that's changing with the last couple additions.
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>>97888749
"Unshaken" because of no worldshakers.
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Which builds are most crippled by drawbacks?
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>>97888888
The one that has literally all of them. Other than that it's situational.
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>>97888888
holy fucking digits
anyway Chivalry (auto lose against half the world) > Minority Hunter (probably auto lose against non-targets) > Split-Soul (full power likely restricted for the start of a fight and can alienate you) > Smile (no devil fruit) > rest are free points
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>>97888888
You don't need an excuse to write my build jobbing, anon. They're always intentional jobbers.
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>>97888908
>rest are free points
Not free points, but they don't apply in combat.
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>>97888950
aka free points in almost every situation
forever chained being 2 points is dumb as fuck lmao
in fact, the out of combat drawbacks should only give vanity
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>>97888955
This is retarded and you know it. Combat is not the only thing that matters.
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>>97888967
>oh noooo my build can't navigate (fixed by the simplest of things like one guy, most people won't even acknowledge it)
>oh noooo my build can't do [INSERT MENIAL TASK] (unless it's their skill) and looks really silly
>oh noooo my build was sad once :(
fuck off
unrivaled obsession is the only one that may actually matter since your build should be baited into doing dumbshit for their flanderized personality trait
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>>97888955
we should be mocking chainedfags both for being ic onaholes for celestial dragons and ooc point whores
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>>97889005
"Should"? I already am, and shall continue to do so.
Mostly for the pointwhore aspect though
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>>97889014
That won't stop me from writing about my build get trained by a GILF.
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>>97888982
>>97889005
>>97889014
This bait is getting stale. Narrative drawbacks have always been a thing and will keep being a thing.
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>>97889005
Very true

>>97882294
Move every Forever Chained build up several tiers!
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>>97889024
>appeal to tradition
it's always been a thing and it's always been shit!!!!
it's a relic of cyoag for self inserters who don't want to add flaws or hardship into their fantasy
here in mcyoag you should not be rewarded for the bare minimum of having a narrative or flaws in your character
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>>97888888
>Backstory
Almost obligatory, a requirement to go to sea. Gets writefagging going ig
>Swimmer
Eat a DF
>SS
First bad one. Your other self will not do what you want, can seriously fuck you up
>Compass
Have a friend to pull you around
>Stairs
Messed up before fists start flying. Wonder of U
>Chivalry
Half the world neg diffs you. Worst one.
>No Mirrors
U Ugly. That's it. Could even be weaponized.
>SMILE
You're crippled and will never reach the top tiers. 3rd bad one.
>Chained
Originally I thought this meant you still had the explosive collar on you, which seemed OK. You're crippled in some way, mentally and physically, CDs aren't careful with their toys. Bad if so, but easy to be points whored.
>Hunter
Forever limited from using full power unless against your racist target. Bad, but easy points whoring.
>Obsession
Have fun being blown up by an apple. Auto jobbing against anyone who takes advantage of it
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>>97889045
The way you expressed it feels needlessly abrasive, but I overall agree.
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>>97889045
It will not become true no matter how much you keep repeating it. Only shitposters argue that drawbacks are free points.
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>>97882096
THE TIERMAKER IS REEEAAAAAAL!!!
I went with Unshaken Seas for the name.
https://tiermaker.com/create/one-piece-unshaken-seas-run-17629646
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>>97889045
TRVTH BVSTER CALL
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Just like always the shitposters show up when a run starts going well. That's more proof than you'll ever need.
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>>97889045
>it's a relic of cyoag for self inserters who don't want to add flaws or hardship into their fantasy
What if it actually helps me come up with flaws for my character? If people didn't write the drawbacks as part of the character I'd understand, but since people usually do, I don't see the issue
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>>97889045
I agree, but I also think the concept of taking drawbacks for points at all is bad design for a multiplayer cyoa, combat or no
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>>97889024
Me making fun of narrative drawback pointwhores will always be a thing and will continue to always be a thing.
Fuck you and fuck your shitty build. It's not bait, your build sucks if you took Forever Chained.
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>>97889055
>You're crippled and will never reach the top tiers.
Devil Fruit merchant forgot that Haki clears all
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>>97889066
She run. I want my seas shaken, not stirred.
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>>97889103
>quoting a coping devil fruit merchant
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>>97889094
Of course it will be, you are a shitposter with no build.
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>>97889103
Good luck having the willpower for haki when your head is coming out of a rhino's butt.
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well if u think my drawbacks are so damn bad, then tell me some reasonably One Piece-themed drawbacks that somehow don't involve narrative.
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>>97889117
You decide how it manifests.
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>>97889123
Please don't fall for the shitty bait anon, the drawbacks are fine. It's just a couple of autists backed by the shitposters.
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>>97889125
In a way that it's 2 Beri of shit
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>>97889134
Being forever locked out of a devil fruit by itself is already worth 2 beri of shit.
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>>97889134
>looks at the only SMILE fruit build
>generic catgirl
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>>97889111
>Roger has no Devil Fruit
>Shanks has no Devil Fruit
>Rocks has no Devil Fruit
>Mihawk has no Devil Fruit
>Rayleigh has no Devil Fruit
>Scopper has no Devil Fruit
>Garp has no Devil Fruit
>Bepo the Chad, destroyer of Fraudbeard, has no Devil Fruit
Beyond Goofy, Pillow Fist Kaido, the Jobosei, and soon-to-be Clearedmu, Devil Fruit jobbers are jobbers. And those four are 2 or 3 jobbers alone.
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>>97889134
>>97889142
Take cosmetic improvement to solo the freak issue.
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>>97889143
Anon, the protagonist has a devil fruit.
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>>97889143
>Gol. D. Luffy
>Rat-haired Sneaks
>Limu victim
>World's Strongest Painter
>YC1
>YC1
>Kuzan victim
These really your goats?
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>>97889141
I'd argue Stone Swimmer is worse because not only do you not get a Devil Fruit but you still get the drawbacks
At least with the SMILE fruit you still get Zoan abilities.
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>>97889167
we're not in canon so it doesn't matter
you don't need to have the chosen sun god of liberation fruit to be the only one in the world who can find the one piece
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>>97889130
ik lol

for those that may be wondering, I am indeed building, in fact I'm cooking up a duo.
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>>97889123
>Make the narrative ones give Vanity instead
>Don't have them besides the few that make sense
>Luffy-esque stamina issue drawback
>"Bad Devil Fruit user" drawback that makes you extremely uncreative with your Fruit
>Broken Dream, severely harming your willpower (and making you ugly)
>Old As Fuck, meaning you're out of your prime and washed up (possibly due to irreversible injury for younger builds)
>Evil Weapon that sucks your haki (custom-made weapon exclusive) and leaves you exhausted all the time but maybe that's just a perk because you can be a trainingcel
>Retard Handicap, preventing you from using your hands like Sanji or some other similar handicap
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>>97889177
You don't really get full zoan, you get normal animal power at most. You also don't get the zoan general power boost. And still get the weakness.
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>>97889143
>Roger
Simp, disregarded
>Shanks
Haki knot spammer, disregarded
>Rocks
Penetrated by CHADmu, disregarded
>Mihawk
Black Paint, disregarded
>Rayleigh
Chad, no argument
>Scopper
Giantess enthusiast, no argument
>Garp
Cuckold who sits by, disregarded
>Bepo
Steroids, disregarded

Meanwhile GODfy, CHADmu, the CHADosei, GODki, Buggy D. GOAT, all Devil Fruit CHADS
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>>97889195
Stop. Just stop.
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>>97889169
>ducking Chadpo
Just because Big Business Borsalino and Greenbvll clears the verse doesn't mean all Devil Fruitkeks are strong, he's just goated
Chadhawk also is top 1 due to my scaling chain
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>>97889215
>Chadhawk also is top 1
Buggy victim
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>>97889215
>Chadhawk also is top 1
Vista victim
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>>97889196
The drawback doesn't say any of that.
But not to argue in bad faith
SMILE:
>Minimal animal abilities
>DF drawbacks
Stone Swimmer:
>DF drawbacks

The latter is still worse.
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>>97889225
Stone Swimmers can get DFs later (at least narratively)
SMILEs are fucked
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>>97889225
Stone Swimmer lets you eat a good Devil Fruit later if you find one, you just can't take it at character creation. SMILE eats your slot. SMILES also can get tamed by Tama's fruit.
I overall agree with you though.
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>>97889220
>>97889224
Both have shadows. Moria victims.
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>see SMILE users on the wiki
>half the women are hot/cute with not-intrusive animal features
Willow is extremely accurate
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>>97889237
Can a SMILE eater with Multifruit eat another devil fruit or are they extra fucked?
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>>97889262
They can
but SMILE is 2 points and Multifruit is 2 points so what's the point lol
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>>97889213
What's wrong with those drawbacks beyond you having an inability to think of a way to cheat them for more points
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>>97889268
Free zoan?
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>>97889283
I'd rather eat a fruit I find later desu
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if you "find" a fruit later via writefagging, you should have to roll in the thread a D-however many the fuck there are.
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Tier lists?
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>>97889335
Oh I got one alright
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>>97889348
based
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>>97889348
>Ray and Willow laughing at the chainies
kek
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>>97889348
Lehr doesn't have Forever Chained.
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>>97889367
I apologize for slandering you goat
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>>97889394
Lmao why is Quake in sluts? He's too ugly in-universe to get other fishmen
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>>97889394
chainedsluts are the opposite of pure and innocent
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>>97889403
Just because nobody wants him doesn't mean he isn't a slut at heart, I mean look at how he's dressed
>>97889407
They don't remember being touched in their nono area by Celestial Bastards
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>>97889407
eye guess
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>>97889422
Willow is a real hard worker. A true slut without even needing to be contractually obligated
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>>97889407
Of those 3, according to the backstories, 1 escaped before anyone did anything to her, and 1 never was a slave and is instead treating the drawback as Pacifista Programming. The last one was a fight slave. So I don't see how that's relevant.
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And now I'm losing interest in OP.
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>>97889464
malding Chaincel
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>>97889464
Of course you are, the fetish posters and shitposters teamed up. Nobody is going to treat any of this as canon.
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Not every MP has to capitulate to the people who keep crying about drawbacks. Naruto was a rare anomaly and people STILL whined about the power levels. If you don’t like the fucking CYOA then don’t play, retard
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>>97889468
>>97889478
Holy shit stop malding because you're being bullied for your sovless choices. Calm down. No one's gonna shit on your build itself, just bully them for being pvp jobbers since they took free points.
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>>97889488
>sovlless choices
Anon I didn’t even fucking pick Forever Chained. You’re just shitposting for no reason because people play differently from you
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>>97889460
>um actually my build escaped before they did anything
do chainfags REALLY?
new low holy fuark
the drawback even talks about being branded btw
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>>97889488
I took none of those drawbacks, and wasn't even talking about the drawbacks. The fact you felt called out proves you're a shitposter.
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>>97889492
>You’re just shitposting for no reason
The reason is because they took free points and its funny to make fun of them
Again, no one's going "haha chainy!" and is gonna exclude them from writefags
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>>97889504
>no one’s going “haha chainy!”
Everyone has been going “haha chainy!” for 20 minutes anon are you even listening to yourself?
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>>97889497
Same build who has "Minority Hunter against nobility or rich privileged people"
(not a race award)
(completely missed the spirit of the option award)
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>>97889504
>they took free points and its funny to make fun of them
It's not because free points don't exist.
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>>97889500
>called out
Called out on what?
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>>97889508
>They have you fighting a race war to prevent you fighting a class war!
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>>97889507
>and is gonna exclude them from writefags
>>97889509
Explain in detail how they aren't free points because their buid was sad once
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>>97889515
It's a narrative draback and has narrative implication. Tragic backstory isn't "your build was sad once" it's "your life sucked and gave you all sorts of issues that you can't get over easily".
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>anons having harmless fun
>incessant crying
that's the real shitpost
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>>97889515
Okay, but you *are* still unnecessarily making fun of these people for taking a drawback that gives, hold on, a whopping TWO BERI
HOLY FUARK THAT’S MASSIVE!!!! That’s like… TWO THINGS I can buy! Shut yo goofy ass up man
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>>97882096
you know now that I think about it, having limited amounts of Den Den Mushi per purchase is retarded and literally nobody has multi-bought it.

So if you need multiple Camekos, Prokos, and especially theri Surveilance variants, in your writefag, just treat it as if you have as many as you need.
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>>97889534
my 900 snail build... ruined...
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>>97889515
But they're REALLY sad anon (except for the one who got enslaved "for all of five minutes")
And they're branded anon (except for the one who isn't a actually a slave)
Plus lil timmy and celestial dragon NPCs are totally coming after them anon (except for the one already working at the government)
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>>97889530
The ones calling drawbacks free points are the ones that can't let others have fun. And would you look at that, they always appear when things start going well and the anons involved in the mp are having fun.
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>>97889509
I got 10 beri and 10 vanity for free though
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>>97889542
those are not free, you pay for them with effort
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>>97889529
None of that should equate to having Beris. It's free points because it doesn't have a real downside or equally weigh against the advantage the Beris give. Ergo, it's free points.
>>97889531
>unnecessarily
People should have shit design choices called out.
>making fun of these people
Their builds.
You really do need to grow some thicker skin.
Yes, I WILL have fun by making fun of you on the playground. Shouldn't have worn a Hazbin Hotel shirt. Cry about it.
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>>97889552
You are proving all the points against you right now.
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>>97889540
>the ones that can't let others have fun
>people making fun of chainies
tier lists, discussion about the MP, and effort
>people malding about chainies and drawbackfags being made fun of
AHHHHH STOP SHITPOSTING I'M GOING INSAAAAAAAAAAANE
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>>97889552
>None of that should equate to having Beris.
Why? Because you said so? You don't make the rules here.
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>>97889552
Anon holy fuck you’re being this obtuse over TWO POINTS. Who cares? Not that it gave five or anything, you’re just obsessing over this because you don’t like how someone else plays. If you don’t like the One Piece CYOA, why are you playing? In fact, if you’re just shitposting to kill discussion, what MP do you even want to do? You’ll cry about that one when someone picks a 2 point drawback there too

Just make more tier lists and ignore these guys.
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>>97889557
>tier lists, discussion about the MP, and effort
>non canon shit lists, fake shitpost discussion about irrelevant shit, wasted effort
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>>97889555
>s-stop being a meaniehead man that's SO not cool
I'm gonna go work on my writefag treating the chainies like any other build now
>>97889563
I do actually
>>97889567
>Anon holy fuck you’re being this obtuse over TWO POINTS. Who cares?
>Anon holy fuck you're being obtuse over LIGHT RIBBING. Who cares?
>If you don’t like the One Piece CYOA, why are you playing?
I like playing with anons (and making fun of their builds when they're lame), and the CYOA's fine enough, doesn't mean it can't be designed better
>In fact, if you’re just shitposting to kill discussion,
Where the fuck is your discussion lmao
Keep crying bozo
>>97889569
See above, fun content is fun content
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>>97889569
as opposed to literally just crying
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2 points in a cyoa with a base budget of 10. It's a 20% increase. That shit can buy you:
>an ancient zoan
>future sight
>super COC
>vegapunk level genius (500 years ahead of everyone else)

It's double the amount of tragic backstory, because being a former slave is the worst kind of tragic backstory, right? Then you look at a build with it and it stays "lasted all of five minutes"

KEKAROOOOOOO
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based on in-character vibes
this is also a prompt: respond on how your build feels about the plight of slaves
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>>97889607
You can pay Quake to free slaves or you can pay him to protect your slaves. He accepts slavery as a fact of life, but he doesn’t really care much of it, and he also wouldn’t have a slave. They cost a lot of money he doesn’t want to part with, and slaves might not like his singing. Unlike his friend Roger, who’s a deaf Sea King.
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>>97889607
>trying to dox the arguers of the Great Drawback War
ANON'S TRYING TO TRICK YOU
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>>97889617
I have to deal with anon's constant faggotry on a daily basis, nothing will ever break my love for him, not even knowing he has shit taste
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>>97889607
Unsurprisingly Willow thinks slavery is fucking hilarious. She would use it against someone if she could as well.
Also as for her being a rapist I guess that's technically true as it would be in-character but I really don't want to write her doing that to anyone and will stick to non-sexual or gross ultraviolence (just melting and stabbing people is fine), so I will pretend sex doesn't exist in all my writefags.
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>>97889617
How is the build's opinion going to matter for that? It's not the same as the anon's opinion.
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>>97889636
COWARD
GIVE US THE RAPECUT
>>97889643
knowing who's in thread at the time and then make assumptions duh
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>>97889636
>anon won't make any cbtkino
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>>97889648
>>97889674
I don't have the Whitebeard "please grow as a person" image but I wish I did
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>>97889648
>knowing who's in thread at the time and then make assumptions duh
What if they just got here? What if they where lurking the whole time and only post now because it's a prompt?
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>>97889694
you are overthinking an obvious joke
anyone attempting to post a prompt so they can hold grudges against specific characters is insane, no one would do that and no one would seriously think someone would do that
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>>97889701
...Except me, [BUILD I DON'T LIKE] anon of course.
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>>97889607
Just popped into threads and saw people were talking about the Forever Chained drawback. It is pretty much a free perk, especially if you take it as a pirate because its a perfect springboard for your Tragic Backstory and why you're out on the high seas.

For Haku though his Forever Chained has warped his entire view on freedom. There is no true freedom to be had, merely extensions on one's cage. It's why he's such a loyal agent as this is the closest to freedom he thinks he'll ever get, even if he's still under the Celestial Dragon's thumbs. He's become their little "how high?", only caring about completing missions so that he can keep the lifestyle that he has and prove his usefulness so that he can continue to rise, but no matter how far he rises he knows he'll still be a tool for them to use. He just buries the thought deep down with all the bodies of the targets he's put under for his superiors' continued rule and keep himself thinking that he'll be alright as long as he's under the WG' wing. It's also why he's alright bringing others into the fold of being a slave if they get marked for capture as really it's just a natural conclusion, their "freedom" running out as they simply walked into the bars of the cage that's been around them the whole time.

Also, I think you can use narrative drawbacks as genuine drawbacks without saying it just nerfs your build in strength. I was thinking about Haku's strategy around his different targets and one main plan being to attack their psychological weakpoints. He's a smooth talker, but if he can't convince them to give up easily, he might be able to knock them off balance to give himself the advantage. Its exceptionally strong against Observation users if he can manage to pierce deep enough as its harder to use the techniques under its purview if you are undergoing extreme stress or emotional turmoil. He's not going to know right off the bat but it's not going to be too hard if its something related to CD's.
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Rolled 2 (1d3)

>>97882096
1. Pirate
2. Bounty Hunter
3. Marine
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>>97882096
>Name
Saint Onyx Noelle Andros

>Race
Human

>Occupation
Holy Knight

>Ship
Basic Ship

>Location
The Red Line

>Skills
Medicine
Stealth

>Powers
Inhuman Fighting
Soru
Shigan
Depths Covenant
The Abyss
Ancient Zoan, Ryu Ryu No Mi Model: Therizinosaurus
Armament, Hardening
Armament, Emission
Armament, Internal Destruction
Observation, Presence Sensing
Conquerors, Domination


>Perks
Superhuman
Battle Junky
Cosmetic Improvement

>Equipment
Class Equipment
Proper Holy-Knight Getup
Ship Coating
Den Den Mushi
Black Den Den Mushi
Horned/White Den Den Mushi

>Drawbacks
Tragic Backstory
Unrivaled Obsession: Sadism/Torture/General Bloodlust
Split Soul


First, The Son. I really hope I got the math (and the art lol) good and right. I’m doing his great-great, however many more greats grandpappy next.

Full Rentry with Bio/Fighting Style:
https://rentry.co/7s4chmd7
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>>97890389
I have no idea what's going on in that image.
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>>97890389
>Tragic Backstory
>A kid threw a rock at me once
Come on!
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>>97889539
To be fair forever chained is fine for being part of the WG. You got out by being more useful to their masters than to them.
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>>97889771
>How high

SO HIIIIGH
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>>97890389
Willows husbando.


Also we don't generally like double build builds.
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The finale for the pirate festival will be Quake vs Taiyo in 'Loudest noise' contest.
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>>97890476
>Also we don't generally like double build builds.
Kichona and Osamu from Chuninruto were cool
although the latter may as well have been an NPC



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