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Archives & Other Resources: https://rentry.co/cyoag
AllSync: https://cyoa.allsync.com/s/owWor64yLTngDk3
Multiplayer Compilations: https://rentry.org/MCYOA_Comp_Comp
In Case of Emergency, Break Glass: https://rentry.org/mcyoagCanary
Threadslave Rentry: https://rentry.org/ThreadKeeping2
Backup Rentry: https://rentry.org/ThreadKeeping3
Amnesiac Edition
Previous Thread: >>98028387
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>>98041600
>Full CYOA
https://imgchest.com/p/na7konjjwy8

>Overseer Elite Squad
Jakunatori
https://rentry.org/zhc4q6aw
Zanka
https://rentry.org/piutq4n4
Koban
https://rentry.org/ho6xtppv
Mika Mori
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97972851/
Arya Vat Vaisnava
https://rentry.org/scbird
Kisara Kisaragi
https://rentry.org/iz8cv5n4

>Yatsukahagi
Satya (Leader)
https://rentry.org/mxyq4iea
Senyan (Satya's Bodyguard)
https://rentry.org/tucz6vco
Niú Jìngyán "the Queen of Evernight" (Evernight Captain)
https://rentry.org/da8z7uit
Arjava (Satya's Step-brother)
https://rentry.co/safup27d
Huāshēngjiàng Wèi Shíqì (Hush)
https://rentry.org/2b8eh9fq
Hajun (Hajun)
https://rentry.org/ppmhzp9s

>Beast Hunter
Distorted Mirage
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97967892/

>Exorcist Bureau
Chitragupta Kumari "Her Holiness" (Deputy Prosecutor General)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97972953/

>Senguru Monastic Dynasty
Nagomi (Advanced Member)
https://rentry.org/xmrtmmar

>Sect Society of the Fallen Star
Logan Ace (Unknowing Founder)
https://rentry.org/3ez8umyn

>The Fist of the Almighty
Ryusei (Follower)
https://rentry.org/fbxdf4rz

>Flowing Water Sect
Hisako Amaterasu
https://rentry.org/k2phy9qa

>Former Saika Ikki
Saika Magoichi "Ronin" (Former Saika Ikki Leader)
https://rentry.org/tq9qdt23
Tsuchibashi Mozumaru
https://rentry.org/7gk4xszf

>Unaffiliated
Kei (Heiress of Lightning Bugs clan)
https://rentry.org/65yymci9
Shiki Arakawa (Serial Killer)
https://rentry.co/ShikiArakawa
Shirō (NOT a war criminal)
https://rentry.org/kwyf5wmy
Meliala (Christian Exorcist)
https://rentry.org/melialasc2
Gorra Shatterhorn (Oni Clan Exile)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/97991416/
Kuro Hitokiri (Stalker Ninokata Member)
https://rentry.co/KuroSC
Elil Harai'Ra
https://rentry.org/elilharaira

>Overpowered corner
David The "Godslayer"
https://rentry.co/vomww7o5
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>>98041603
>Writefags
Investigations of the Heiress: Hellion Mob Grunt (Nagomi, Kei)
https://rentry.org/woouyaqp
Youdu 5.0: It's Hellion Or Bust (Part 1) (Arya, Jingyan, Koban, Mika, Jakunatori, Zanka, Kisara)
https://rentry.co/he46f2ee

>Artfags
Satya LTG
https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1777/58/1777588158034.png
Youdu 5.0 Part 1
https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1778/11/1778114404506.png
Yatsukahagi VS Overseers Poster
https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1778/37/1778373593524.png

>Tiermaker Link
https://tiermaker.com/create/spirit-conscript-redux-18744126

>Card Compilation 1
https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1778/44/1778448360135.jpg
>Card Compilation 2
https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1778/53/1778534391815.jpg
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I respect it
This is all we need
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Oh this oughta be good
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>MHA Rentry
https://rentry.org/uhx77ys6

>RULES:
> Timeline: Just Another Story
> Location: Japan
>The Hero Students are at Shiketsu.

Instructions + Template for Making Cards: https://pastebin.com/NQ6JNH8r

>New Stuff:
>New Writefag:
>Operation DESPERADO (Seiryu, Karma, Honoken, The Villain Known As Stormrazor)
https://rentry.org/62g2miaz

>CHARACTER PROMPTS (feel free to answer these whenever)
Former 1-D Prompts 1-50: https://rentry.org/mhamp
Former 1-D Prompts 50+: https://rentry.org/mhamp2
Everyone else's prompts: https://rentry.org/mhamp3
Same password for all of them (mha4)
>Older Prompt Links Are in Here
https://pastebin.com/Qr3TtGa6
>Fighting Style Prompt
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/88693730/#88693888
>Smokin' Sexy's Class Questionnaire
https://rentry.org/xudhyrnr
>Former 1-D Timeline
https://rentry.org/MHATIMELINE
https://rentry.org/itmttw7n
>Classes Compilations
https://rentry.org/mcymha2D
https://rentry.org/mcymha2E
old former 1-D comp: https://rentry.org/9bf3g
>Relationship charts
https://rentry.org/MHA_Charts
>Dorms Prompt
Dorm Room Proposal v2 https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94701730
>Tiermaker:
https://tiermaker.com/create/mcymha-current-cast-16507969

>Full Version of the CYOA
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/97718092
>Older Version of the CYOA (Both the old and new versions are legal for builds.)
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/94720077

For more Characters, Writefags, Art, Memes, Tierlists, etc. check the rentry
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>>98041645
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>>98041630
this is why all mps die
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>>98041733
All MPs eventually die. Even MHA is on the cusp of having its rotting corpse finally being thrown out.
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>>98041757
If it would stop the shitposting id be ok with it dying. But it wont.
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>>98041630
>>98041641
is anyone seriously going to complain about the cut fat?
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of all the settings to build an mp out of, cultivator shit is the absolute worst
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>>98042026
SC being bad because of cultivator shit is only partly true, mainly because of the unreasonable amount of time it takes to learn legendary techniques.
Another bad part is how every legendary technique claims to be the strongest and most undefendable shit ever.
SC would be a much better setting if the legendaries were reworked into being greats and more accessible in universe.
It also needs its power level to be properly solidified. So many of the "power discussions" are just vibes based because no limits are really specified. In fact, almost nothing is specified.
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>>98041607
You missed Ronin Anon's introduction writefag.
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>>98042295
Looking for it on phone is annoying because it doesn't show replies to OP, but here:
>Investigations: Prologue (Ronin, Meliala, Shiki)
https://rentry.org/96rfez8x
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>I want to do something cool and interesting!
>Sorry that's not allowed. Your build will get instant killed because it didn't pick the meta options.
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>>98042352
>Run started with the idea being to make overpowered builds
>nobody wants to, which is fine
>But people who do are going to be punished for it
smdh
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>>98042359
>>Run started with the idea being to make overpowered builds
mental illness pushed by one guy
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>>98042352
Just do it. Embrace convoluted plans to punch up to other characters (and then job anyway, but it's the process that counts).
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>>98042426
Doesnt mean we didnt choose his run willingly
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>>98042447
Considering we dropped the only rule he imposed, it's hard to say it's the same run.
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>>98042447
>his run
>ignoring that people were already planning to do a SC run until he jumped in
So we agree that if people try to start a new run and I post it first while adding a retarded rule like "every build immediately explodes after the MP starts" or "every build is part of my builds harem" that rule is valid even if no one agrees to it and everyone ignores it?
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>>98042838
Yes if its the one that people make the builds for.
As you said they jumped the gun, have some patience.
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>>98042048
There are many reasons why the author ought to come and do a 2.0 balance patch.

I personally dont think the legendaries need to be moved, I think that the lower tiers could do with some expanding and cheapening. Why pay for 2 6 point basics when for a little more effort, a 15 point legendary completely outclasses them? But a bunch of 2 or 3 AP basics could at least get you some fun diversity.

I do agree about reducing the vibes/edge cases/technicalities and establishing some more concrete terms for the various edge cases we've found over the time of making many builds.

But i doubt the author will do so if he hasn't done it by now unfortunately.
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>>98042048
>mainly because of the unreasonable amount of time it takes to learn legendary techniques.
This is bullshit because the author refused to tell us how long it takes to learn anything so we have no idea of the time required. It could take decades like it could take a couple months and the main limit is your affinity, we just don't know.
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>>98043089
>But i doubt the author will do so if he hasn't done it by now unfortunately.
He just straight up said he doesn't want to. SC was a shitty project made to prove a point so he doesn't care about what happens to it now that the ploy was revealed. He's also convinced to have proven his point when that isn't the case, but that's a different problem. Either way he has no intention to even look at SC again.
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>>98043119
What was the point even supposed to be?
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>>98043119
So you're saying it was purposefully made to be shit, as a joke?
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>>98043119
I mean this is 4chan so he probably did just dip, but you got something more than just your word to back any of that up?
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>>98043119
>Star Wars bitter anon-sama, I.....
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>>98043129
>So you're saying it was purposefully made to be shit, as a joke?
No, it was just made with a different mindset, the author just cared about it less.
>>98043128
>What was the point even supposed to be?
It was made by PCA to prove that people would like a cyoa made by him if they didn't know it was made by him, and something about anime art. He's convince that the only reason why his other cyoas aren't popular is because people know that he made them and they didn't use anime art. When SC is actually very different from his other stuff in so many ways that it's retarded to think that's the only reason it's more popular than the rest.
>>98043132
He made a whole thing of it over on cyoag, he kept teasing it for like 2 threads in a row and then made it a big reveal and gloated for another couple threads in a row. He even kept bringing it up for a while after. It's become a pretty big meme over there how he was so proud of having missed his own point. He used a bunch of Lex Luthor images to avatarfag during that too.
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>>98043170
So that's why SC has seen wave after wave of malicious shitposting. cyoag invaders with a hate boner for PCA.
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>>98043188
Schizo anon, I...
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First person to post danmachi gets a real and unironic waifu that also counts as a based dickgirl

None of you are based enough tho
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>>98043199
you're a faggot
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>>98043170
>When SC is actually very different from his other stuff in so many ways that it's retarded to think that's the only reason it's more popular than the rest.
>self insert power fantasy with autistic mechanics is TOTALLY different from self insert ANIME power fantasy with autistic mechanics and I'm totally NOT owned
sure, lil buddy...
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>>98043199
BUT I DONT WANT A DICKGIRL I WANT A REGULAR GIRL
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>>98043199
Not into that. Or that cyoa. Try again next time.
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>>98043188
>cyoag invaders with a hate boner for PCA.
There are cyoag invaders, it is known, but they don't care about PCA enough for this.
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>>98043247
There’s an anon over there who wants to choke on PCA’s ginormous penis tho
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>>98043220
PCA was the only one that believed this so I guess welcome back PCA.
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>>98043250
He said he works out at the gym and he’s also a Jesus fag to boot so he’s probably an unga bunga
RIP anon’s face and throat
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>>98043260
Gayest post I’ve seen in a long fucking time. Impressive. I mean this sincerely.
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I just don't know which cyoa are suited for multiplayer.
>Jedi Guardian
>Naruto
>One Piece
>Danmachi
>Fiends and Fire
>The Facility
>Harry Potter
>Slayer Vampire
>Demigod
>Stardust
>Elder Scrolls Sword Saint
>Witcher
>Gifted
>Mythic Lands
>Honor Among Thieves
>Creature of the Night
>Hero of the Wastes
>SCRAPPER
Besides all of those, I can't think of anything.
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shut the fuck up and talk spirit conscript
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>>98043428
I don't care for power level arguments about a ridiculously imbalanced throwaway project.
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>>98043422
Jedi, Naruto, One Piece, Harry Potter, Stardust, Witcher, Hero of the wastes and maybe Scrapper would in theory do ok.
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>>98043422
Have you considered My Hero Academia? I think it has potential.
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>>98043428
We have so many people picking rivals with just "Anon" specified. We need to pair them up. Any ideas?
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>>98043444
No. I think think they just wanted free points. Lets not pretend it's anything else.
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>>98043434
then talk about your character
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>>98043439
Bro I wish we could do a fresh MHA run with no connection to the previous one
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>>98043446
Who can afford techniques in this economy without them?
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>>98043446
>hoes mad lmao
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>>98043454
Not possible, 2/3rds of anons still remaining in these threads are addicted to their former builds, as it is the only time they got dopamine and felt successful. They eternally yearn for their glory days to return even though you cannot turn back time and make things fresh.
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>>98043444
Nta but Ronin I can see Senyan (they’re approaching the same niche of cutting things, but have different mechanisms and specialties, with Ronin being an ‘ideal’ that Senyan couldn’t reach in swordsmanship), Kuro (they have a shared connection to the Ninokata, Ronin killed his relative, they are both swordsmen, and work in the same field), and Shiki (he’s basically an even worse pre-amnesia Saika Magoichi, but I assume if Shiki goes for a rival it’d be with his brother).

Maybe Hush, but it wouldn’t be very serious (he’s taken over several of Ronin’s favorite brothels and made all the girls BBWs).
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>>98043446
Doesn't mean we can't or shouldn't pair them up for it!
>>98043444
List of builds in need of Rivals and Nemesis (going by builds purely, if they already found them and did not update their rentries then pleas let us know).
>3 rivals and 1 nemesis faction needed
Zanka
Koban
Arya Vat Vaisnava
Kisara Kisaragi
Satya
Senyan
Niú Jìngyán
Ronin
>3 rivals
Hush (prefers Overseers)
Hajun ("would be cool, specially if they're part of any canon sect or in their own quests for immortality")
Distorted Mirage (I'm not sure tho, it just says: "Summoners, Monsterfuckers, and in general anyone who is ontologicallly evil")
Hisako Amaterasu
>2 rivals needed
Logan Ace (and has one picked already: Ryusei)
>1 rival needed
TSUCHIBASHI MOZUMARU
Kuro Ninokata Hitokiri
>1 nemesis needed
Shiki Arakawa (already has Overseer Elite Squad, The Formless Path besides that)
>People who already picked all their rivals but just to mark them
Nagomi: Shiki, Ryusei, Ronin
Ryusei: Koban, Nagomi, Logan Ace
Meliala: Hajun
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>>98043513
Wtf I love hush now
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>>98043517
I should try and make a build without any nemeses or rivals, just to see whether or not I can find a way to make it viable without those extra 15 AP or whatever.
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>>98043513
So looking at this: >>98043517
Senyan has 3 slots open, Kuro has 1 slot open, Shiki has a Nemesis slot open (but is also marked as rival by Nagomi). Hush needs 3 rivals, and prefers, but doesn't require Overseers.
Ronin is also already marked as rival by Nagomi too.
>>98043525
Those not listed either didn't pick any rivals/nemeses, or already had their slots filled with NPCs (Chitragupta has as her rival marked a build from the previous run so I'll treat it as an NPC).
Kei for example doesn't have any nemeses nor rivals.
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>>98043517
You forgot elil but im 90 percent sure hes that guy who always frauds so its whatever
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>>98043564
Ah right, it wasn't at the bottom of his build.>>98043517
>3 rivals and 3 nemeses needed
Elil Harai'Ra
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>>98043525
>15 AP or whatever.
If you are talking about the combo of Magmatic+Trouble Magnet it's 10 points purely off rivals/nemesis. Old Grudges gives 3 points from nemesis since it lets you take 3, for a total of 13 is you have both that and the combo. These are all just the side effects, if you pick them as proper Malevolents with associated points the value raises, but that's variable depending on which MA is the "real" one. It totals to 21 if you take them all as real.
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>>98043517
All of these builds are now dead
punishment for point whoring
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>>98043581
Correction, it's 12 not 13 for Old Grudges/Magmatic/Trouble Magnet, you get 1 nemesis free regardless so the gain from Old grudges is only 2.
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>>98043591
Shut up mudcorefag, we know you don't even have a build.
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>>98043591
Get over yourself mudcorebro
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>>98043422
Stardust if we go Apocalypse sounds fun, and there was a group of anons discussing a specific Scrapper run. I would like some sci fi, but Star Wars is not good for that.
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>>98043618
I like sci fi too but the shonen anons lose their shit when it starts being posted.
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>>98043592
Either way, I kinda wonder what happens if you do without them just from watching the shitflinging last thread. Probably just results in a crippled build but its academically intriguing at least.
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>>98043517
For Kisara obviously the best choices would be either outlaws/criminals or corrupt authority figures
I'll probably go with Kuro, being a stalker and all, and Shiki because he's a serial killer
As for third, maybe Chitragupta, she's quite the bitch and a relatively high ranking authority figure
For nemesis faction I might outright add Yatsukahagi, depends on how these initial writefags go really
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>>98043517
A version where all already mentioned rivalries are assumed to be reciprocated:
>3 rivals and 3 nemeses needed
Elil Harai'Ra
>3 rivals and 1 nemesis faction needed
Zanka
Arya Vat Vaisnava
Kisara Kisaragi
Satya
Senyan
Niú Jìngyán
>3 rivals
Hush (prefers Overseers)
Distorted Mirage (I'm not sure tho, it just says: "Summoners, Monsterfuckers, and in general anyone who is ontologicallly evil")
Hisako Amaterasu
>2 rivals 1 nemesis needed
Koban (2sided-Ryusei)
>2 rivals needed
Logan Ace (and has one picked already: Ryusei)
Hajun (2sided-Meliala, "would be cool, specially if they're part of any canon sect or in their own quests for immortality")
Ronin (2sided-Nagomi)
>1 rival needed
TSUCHIBASHI MOZUMARU
Kuro Ninokata Hitokiri
>1 nemesis needed
Shiki Arakawa (already has Overseer Elite Squad, The Formless Path besides that; extra rival 2sided - Nagomi)
>People who already picked all their rivals but just to mark them
Nagomi: Shiki, Ryusei, Ronin
Ryusei: Koban, Nagomi, Logan Ace
Meliala: Hajun

Not locking in the new ideas mentioned in this thread yet:
>>98043513
Ronin wants Senyan, Kuro, Shiki or Hush.
>>98043650
Kisara wants Kuro, Shiki, Chitragupta; for nemesis Yatsukahagi
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>>98043645
It depends more on the build concept. Trying to build into flow with all it's conduction/state/legend status gimmicks is harder to do well, but a straightforward core or phase build is perfectly fine. More points obviously help, but it's not as big of a difference.
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>>98043668
Absolutely fucking shameful. So desperate for points but not willing to just bite the bullet and make an overpowered build.
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>>98043668
I kinda like the idea of taking Hajun as the rival for Mozumaru. The envy over the lifespan is real.
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>>98043681
I made 1. I made 2 actually. But I didn't post them because I though the thread decided to not treat them as real so what's the point of posting them? I can post an overpowered build with no rivals if it gets treated the same but this whole thing just seems like an excuse to delete builds.
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>>98043706
well as it stands literally all of those builds are illegal so they are noncanon
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>>98043706
>this whole thing just seems like an excuse to delete builds.
Wrong, I just want to find my rival.
>>98043710
Quite a fair portion of builds have NPCs listed if they don't find a PC rival/nemesis, so even if they fail to find a PC rival they're still legal.
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>rival points for a normal build: +2
>rival points for a magmatic/trouble magnet build: +9
lmao overpoweredcels are melting down over seven points?
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>>98043517
>>98043668
Ronin actually only has 1 Rival and Nemesis slot.

>>98043540
Hmm, I kind of like the idea of a one sided rivalry with Nagomi, but I’ll see what their anon thinks when they can comment. Otherwise I can have it be mutual and that’s his rival slot.
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>>98043738
Ah shit, sorry about that then. I moved him to just nemesis needed for now.
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>>98043681
Keep seething
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>>98028464

>Dr. Dennis Shunt of the Dark Door
Age 35
From Kumogakure, will of lightning
B Rank

Through clandestine experimentation Dennis has enhanced his body. Consequently his blood has turned black and his skin has adopted an ashen tone. As another side effect his temper drastically worsened and he's gotten addicted to Ninja Weed as a way of coping.

When in a battle rage he'll indiscriminately throw out flames to the detriment of his unremarkable chakra reserves. Generally though, he prefers to make easy money with portal services or treating patients.

He has a secret compound where he continues medical experiments and grows Ninja Weed.

He likes to travel and gives free medical treatment to those in need that he meets on the way.

His current goal is to improve his swordsmanship and compete in a tournament.

>Perks
Bloodline Limit
Unique Power
Enhanced Body

>Drawbacks
Bad Habit
Rage

>Chakra Nature
Fire + Yin

>Kekkei Genkai
Blaze Element
Space-Time Rift (Evolved)

>Basic
Unarmed Combat
Subterfuge
Book Smarts
Utility Jutsu
Weapon Art: Sword
Body Flicker
Chakra Flow
>Advanced
Advanced Taijutsu
Medical Arts ++
Barrier Arts
>Hidden
Chakra Mode
[Blaze] Weapon
[Blaze] Field
>Special
[Blaze] Chakra Cloak +
>Secret Special
Mad Science

>Items
Katana
Tanto
Storage Sealing Scrolls
Bing Book
Ration Pills
Cold Hard Cash
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Prepare to get fucked in the face
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>>98043786
What was the goal here?
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>>98043752
Edited Senyan's rentry, for rivals he has Ronin, Kuro and Shiki, so basically all swordfags
As for nemesis, either Fist of the Almighty or a canon one like the Trigram cult
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>>98043422
Hero of the Wastes update when
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>>98043801
to post my build wdym
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Danmachi would be a fantastic multiplayer if people didn’t keep choosing THE SAME FUCKING CHOICES EVERY FUCKING TIME AAAFHEBWYAVDBW

And that is why I hate it
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>>98043668
For Jingyan... It largely comes down to who gets in the way of killing spirits. Fully corrupt Overseers like Zanka (will protect sp*rits for her paycheck and loicense to kill), spirit lovers pushing forward their patron's agenda like maybe Ryuusei (mystery patron is probably a spirit), or people that are too good of an influence on Satya and might threaten the spirit killing agenda like Hajun or maybe Arjava.

So basically if you'll aid spirits but also won't help kill them, you're probably on her shit list. Exorcists and similar groups like the senguru are people Jingyan would rather like, maybe even enough to be supporting them in secret. Although that'd probably be a one-sided appreciation.

The weird edge case is Meliala. She's a religious fanatic, and that should be support for a spirit, but it's also weird that none of the major mortal world religions have produced a giga-spirit like the trigram. In that sense, Meliala might just be stealing away faith from the spirits and pouring it into the void... And that would make Jingyan really quite like Meliala and her church regardless of how much the latter might want to shoot her with a water cannon full of acid. Point being that I could go either way for how Jingyan feels about Meliala, and it partly depends on how that Ronin plotline needs to go.

For Nemesis sects... Uh... Really just NPC factions like the trigram cult or maybe Ryuusei's sect. The rest I can't see her taking issue with.
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>>98043842
Fucking never ever sadly
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Seeing this >>98041175 and this discussion, can Saika Ikki be taken as the a nemesis?
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>>98043885
If your character is autistic enough and has a narrative reason to go hunting down and killing their remnants, I say it's fair game.
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>>98043853
>Danmachi would be a fantastic multiplayer if people didn’t keep choosing THE SAME FUCKING CHOICES
The world is already a giant fucking video game (of course the setting’s inhabitants are too stupid and used to the status quo to ever realize it) and the gods are already highly invasive so it wouldn’t be too much of a stretch to have a bunch of insane “otherworlders” coming out of butt fuck nowhere. A new breed of mage (“metamage”) will be born and Bell won’t be unique anymore. In fact the one eyed black dragon is probably fucked and the dungeon will have to be more creative in its fun with the gods.
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>>98043894
Anons would side with the dungeon which is canonically female and end up waifu’ing the thing anyway……. B
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>>98043885
I don't think so. They are not a real sect, they don't have the power and resources to endanger your character. A couple of scattered guys with not unity left barely clinging on to life are not nemesis material, they are victims waiting to die, you can't get points for that.
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>>98043960
What I find weird is, rather than taking them as nemesis, you could take one of them as a rival, and it not only would give you more points, but rivalries also aren't as deadly as nemesis relationships.
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>>98043969
It is a bit strange how the cyoa treats nemesis and rivals, but I can kinda see the logic behind it. It's true that having a nemesis faction means that faction wants to kill you on sight, but the assumption is that the members of the factions are individually much weaker than the average player so it's less dangerous. Players are instead more dangerous individually. But usually the faction isn't composed entirely by 2 dudes on the run, one of which doesn't even remember he's supposed to be the leader of said faction.
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>>98044005
>one of which doesn't even remember he's supposed to be the leader of said faction.
They both have memory issues...
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>>98044008
The leader not remembering being so is more impactful than just a member so I didn't feel like pointing it out.
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>>98044028
True, but the fact that combined it gives "none of the faction members remember belonging to said faction" makes it funnier.
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>>98044048
Which also means that taking the faction as a nemesis does nothing since the only 2 people that are vaguely dangerous wouldn't recognize you.
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>>98044078
Key relationships can survive memory tampering, so I guess if you pissed them off enough...
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>>98044078
Don't we normally flip things around so that you're the one going after them? That at least ensures danger since they gotta fight back. Otherwise the build or faction you pick can just decide they don't care that you think they hate you.
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>>98044084
I guess, but it would have to be a personal connection, and at that point rival still fits better. The only way I can see someone being remembered withoit it being personal would be the actual perpetrator that singlehandedly destroyed the clan. That level would be enough to stick even if it's not a personal offense, but who would even get to that point?
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>>98044092
Only for rivals. Factions are a different thing, and separate from the players too.
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>>98044098
I guess if we got a Ninokata character? Or if one of the Stalkers was a merc hired by them during the Saika eradication or something?
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>>98044092
Personally I take it as the faction hating my character, and not always in a reciprocal way. I picked things that would make sense but the characters themselves wouldn't hate each other. I'm talking about foes tho, which are significantly less intense.
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>>98043668
>>98043752
For Logan I honestly have no idea. I fell behind in keeping up with the builds but from what I see not much fits other than Ryusei. I'm in the middle of restructuring the build and got slighly sick in the meantime, then I see the discussion about accepting overpowered builds or not so there's that. Honestly this SC run has been a mess for me and I don't know if I can fix it but I will try. I can try making a list of compatibilities and I wanted to put motivations in the rentry for the foes choices.
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Point whore bros, am I allowed to take all the PC factions as foes for 9 free AP?
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>>98044193
Yes, if you are ready for the consequences and have a narrative reason for it there is no problem with that.
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>>98044193
>9 free AP
They are not free, you are enemies with all factions like that. But do we even have 9 factions?
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>>98044193
You can only take 3 nemeses and that only gives 3 points.
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what compels people to relentlessly point whore even when the cyoa generously gives you outrageous amounts of points and countless god tier instant win abilities that you can easily afford multiple of?
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>>98044224
>the cyoa generously gives you outrageous amounts of points
mudcorefag, we know you don't like the cyoa but we can tell it's too easy like this
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>>98044224
What compels shitposters to just make random statments that make it clear they didn't even read the cyoa?
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>>98044206
It's basically free if you squint. You also get just as many allies and most of the NPC factions are probably more powerful overall. I get what you mean though.
Don't think we have 9. Might not even be 3 if you're strict enough. Most of the anon factions didn't have a sect creation section, so they might not count.

>>98044222
nta, but check the sect creation part of the CYOA. You get points for foes if they're run by PCs. Doesn't need to be a nemesis.
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>>98044224
Why are you still seething?
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>>98044224
legendaries cost like a third of your entire point budget just to get one

bro out here going into debt like a college grad
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>>98044242
>Most of the anon factions didn't have a sect creation section, so they might not count.
The ones with proper sects are 6, with 1 that was pretty much treated as existing but the anon in question hasn't updated the rentry yet and 1 more on the way according to another anon, for a total of 8.
To be clear, I'm talking about Koban saying he would make the proper Overseer Elite Squad faction, and Hush saying that he was going to make his own branch of the bigger faction like the spy branch.
There are quite a lot of sects but to be enemies with all of them you would need to be some kind of psycopath since they are very varied. One specifically was made to accept everyone, I don't know how you fuck that one up.
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>>98044193
Guys stop being mean, maybe anons only played it with Overpowered
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Point whores sure get mad when they're called out.
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>>98044316
We know it's just you mudcorefag.
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>>98044341
Hey, it's not my fault you all can't understand this setting is barely above street tier.
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>>98044355
the only canon we have suggests dudes with pipes can kill the highest tier fighters if they outnumber them
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>>98044355
And it's not our fault that you can't read.
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>>98044394
I'm pretty sure it is, actually. Bad writefags have permanently damaged my ability to read. Take some responsibility for your actions, anon.
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>>98044408
As if you ever read anything made by us, you didn't even read the cyoa.
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>>98044408
D-do we get married now?
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if you don't care about a character just post the writefag into AI and ask it to summarize
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>>98044421
What are you talking about? I read everything, even the ones that don't get posted. The Overseers are getting into a fight with the mob, Ronin is getting swindled by the christian church to do its bidding, Satya is gonna start swinging around a pipe on her path to total Youdu domination screaming "it's mudcore-ing time" before she mudcores all over the place, Jaku's going on a very fancy date with a tsundere seagull where he confesses his undying love atop the tallest tree in the city (he even promises to give the seagull all of his meat from then on!), Shiki is gonna star in a musical about two star-crossed lovers, only to find out that the other leading actor is the masamune wielder he's been looking for all along, etc.

This mps been a real wild ride, let me tell you.

>>98044480
Sadly anon already pulled that trick on me before, you'd have to fight him to the death first... After you figure out which anon is that anon. It's harder when we're all anon.
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>>98041600
Enter the Eight Grasping Limbs (Satya, Jingyan, Senyan, Arjava, Kei, Hajun, Kisara, Koban)
https://rentry.org/a69bhxew
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>>98044551
We're so back lads...!
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>>98043668
Looking at options for nemesis for Satya, the Trigram Cult fits well, as do the Majushin given the anti-Spirit position of the Yatsukahagi. From the PC sect side, this mean that the Fist of the Almighty works as well.
As for rivals, that's a bit harder to decide. There's Chitragupta, for sure, and I could add Meliala since her constant barking of Yatsukahagi having to do with Andrew's disappearance makes for a pretty bad first impression.
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>>98044601
Chitragupta, Meliala, Nagomi, the Overseers, etc. The Yatsu are pretty much as bad the Hellion Mob, so anyone that would oppose the mob would desu..
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>>98044551
A nice thing to wake up to.
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>>98044364
Bro doesn't know about the ancient martial art of Debtor Pipe Kneebreaking.
Kinda like Dog Beating Staff but more focused on beating up other martial artists.
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>>98044914
Every time an anon complains about the pipes I get closer to making a Overpowered pipe build, or just a pipe build in general who likes to goonmax and finds great enjoyment in their work. "You got it boss" "Right away boss" "Dats a good idea boss"
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>>98044262
I'll get to updating Koban's rentry with the proper sect stuff once I get home
>>98044551
Niiiiiice, it was a fun read anon, stellar performance of my boy Koban, no complaints on that front
The action was cool, and the scariest part was definetly Jingyan's thwarted assassination attempt. Plus nice to see Satya really is a cutie deep down
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I'm working on a new CYOA. This time I will try to finish it.
>The monkey paw curls
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>>98045119
Does this mean you've never finished a CYOA?
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>>98043738
When I added Ronin, I imagined it being case of Nagomi pressuring him to be better, at least in her view. She likely despised him before, but sees his failing memory as a chance to get him on better path that help heal Youdu rather than continue feed his own vices and end up where he was before.
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>>98045456
... >>98038090 yeah, you were right.
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>>98045502
So when's the marriage writefag?
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>>98045510
Have we ever had one?
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>>98044551
I really liked how Hajun was introduced and managed to drag along a bunch of overseers into the mix. I've got no complaints for Kei, having the fireflies interact and even act like her subconscious was a neat touch.
>>98043668
I don't really need the points yet, but I am looking for rivals and nemesis factions. It's just that I'm not sure if anyone would feel strongly enough about Kei to take her as a rival.
>>98030845
Good intro. It's a bit late, but I still have to pay my (You) tax.
>>98033886
When you put it that way, it does seem more romantic than her romance section
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>>98045858
Any targets that seem interesting to you?
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>>98045910
Off the top of my head Kuro and Shiki seem like interesting rivals to encounter while she meets other characters. Ronin could have an interesting connection to the queens assassination, though that wouldn't directly lead to a rivalry.
I can't really think of much else. What would you suggest?
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>>98043668
honestly i had too many points thats why i picked scholarship legend
if needed i can drop that but thinking about rivalries could be fun
>>98044551
beheaded twice in one day seems like part of the course for him

anyway here's jaku mid transformation into his war form
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>>98044601
Peak, the first section had me chuckling out loud, and the latter sections were a nice taste of everyone's cool powers. No complaints for Jingyan either. You handled her perfectly.

>>98045858
nta, but Kei and Jingyan as rivals could be a thing if all else fails, Kei's got alchemy legend status and Jingyan's a big spirit hater. Though that'd be mighty awkward when Satya's playing nice with Kei, so maybe not? It's an odd situation.
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>>98045948
I can't help but think about it a bit in the context of rivals to lovers trope now, but what about Mozumaru?
You can have the same connection as with Ronin for the base, but there are other points that can expand on it. They are both "died but came back in an altered form" type, and one of the Oblative Gesture's spirits is a beetle named Hotaru, so I could see it fluffed as Mozumaru took part in the assassination of Kei's past life, but also bound a small part of the queen's spirit to form that, and in a way Kei is trying to get it back?
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>>98043668
Hush anon here. For rivals, how do Zanka, Arya, and Kisara anons feel? I think he's also evil/assholish and possibly monsterfucker enough that Distorted Mirage could hate him. They'd have cool fights if they were rivals.
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>>98044551
Nice writefag anon
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>>98045981
I like the idea, but it does get in the way of the current path that Kei has with Yatsukahagi. I'd reserve it as a future rivalry once the plot progresses further since it's ripe with things to think about. Actually, how does her fleshsculpting interact with Kei's swarm body?
>>98045999
That was one of the ships suggested. Honestly, they do have a lot of intersection with each other and the Oblative Gesture part could lead to the swarm wanting to go after him, but not Kei herself. An interesting thing to add is that Kei's original name was Hotaru, so him using the technique is a double whammy reveal that shows why she'd want to hunt him down but not kill him yet.
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>>98046097
>Tries to summon Hotaru using his technique
>The Queen shows up instead thinking he called her
They are two youngest characters in the MP too, right?
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>>98046097
>could lead to the swarm wanting to go after him, but not Kei herself
The timeline might be iffy and it would ruin the ship, but maybe rather than kill the queen, he killed the girl's parents? When did she become an orphan? If it was very young, maybe that could also be used as a basis for rivalry with someone else?
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Questions about how we should treat this technique:
Is it a two-way street in terms of contact; ie just touching something the user manipulates lets you aura drain the user? Or can the user selectively allow what counts as contact, or make it so only they can initiate contact-based techniques?
Is ALL matter the user manipulates counted as their body, or can it be selective? Ie one energy tendril counts as their body but not another.
What about techniques that boost the body? Do they affect the extension when active?
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>>98045456
>>98046097
The Saika Rizzi
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>>98046124
I'd say it affects the whole body/extension, but you can also simply not use this technique if you want to avoid contact.
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>>98046127
It's a student-student and teacher-teacher pair too...
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>>98046137
It seems like they taught them well.
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>>98046097
>I'd reserve it as a future rivalry once the plot progresses further since it's ripe with things to think about.
Yeah, that sounds like a good idea.
>Actually, how does her fleshsculpting interact with Kei's swarm body?
Honestly a good question. Could go either way. Could argue that Kei still counts as one body, at least while in the shape of a person, could argue that Jingyan would need to somehow spend 1 aura per beetle and thus Kei would be functionally immune... Hmm... I guess I'd lean towards the latter. If we're keeping the door open for a latter down the line rivalry, I think Kei being mostly transfigure immune is for the best.
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>>98046107
I think Satya is slightly younger, but that's only because her age is explicitly listed and some time has passed since they were both revived.
>>98046122
That detail was left vague, but I originally imagined her being abandoned very early on. Not sure why someone would go into the mundane world to kill her patents.
>>98046157
To keep it a bit fair, I think she could manipulate as much her shadow could reach, so that could mean a big chunk but not the whole body. She's still scary to face against even without that.
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>>98046185
Do we have any smugglers? They tend to go into mortal world, right? The parent murder might have been almost accidental to them, but that doesn't change for it'd affect Hotaru.
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>>98046185
Even without that, Jingyan has the route of using Celestial alignment through her shadows to gape holes in people without spending aura, so I'd imagine she still wouldn't use transfiguration in that context... Though maybe she'd find some other creative method, like transfiguring beetles in some subtle way, like turning them into little beetle bombs that'll blow up on command and stuff like that. Imagine the shock of having half her hive suddenly explode mid-fight after successfully 'resisting' her opponent's techniques over and over again. In that sense, being able to transfigure a big chunk is more relevant.
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>>98046185
Looki at https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/98003859/#98006354
Satya seems to be the youngest female at 21 from what I see, while Kei seems second youngest in her early twenties.
Mozumaru is the youngest male at 18 (15 alive+3 undead). Shiki's second youngest guy at 19, and Arjava third at 20.
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>>98046235
Shame the only age chart we got was a bit shitposty.
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>>98046200
Not that I know of, but that could be a good promt to make. What'd they'd do when visiting the Mundane World and why.
>>98046210
>having half her hive suddenly explode
They're already going extinct…

Jingyan does have a conceptual advantage over Kei due to how flexible transfiguring can be compared to how straight forward Kei's conduction is. Jingyan would already know Kei's limits while Kei would still be fighting in the dark.
>>98046235
I could lock in her age to being a bit younger to match him. It would imply that she was such a girl failure that she died quickly after she was kicked out of the orphanage for being too old.
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>>98046280
It is kinda funny. They're both flow/alchemy hybrid builds, but Kei is spiritually a flow build (straight forward combatant meant to fight head-on with raw numbers) and Jingyan is spiritually an alchemy build (absolute bastard meant to scheme people to death instead of fighting them.)
And otherwise... The experience gap will do that, yeah. I'm sure with more time and experience, Kei will figure out some more interesting ways of leveraging her techniques to surprise opponents. Maybe this eventually fight will be a good wake-up call to point her in that direction.

>They're already going extinct…
Jingyan's already out to genocide spiritkind, what's a race of cool beetles added to the pile...?
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>>98045962
That's pretty cool, anon nice work
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>>98045962
For some reason this makes me think of the man-spider transformation from Spiderman's animated adventures. Got some of that same vibe. Also the six arms.
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>>98043668
What' are our expectations for how long a rivalry should last for the purposes of the cyoa option? I think Kuro could be in conflict with a number of people, but those conflicts could also resolve themselves in time. We workshopped a bit last thread about a potential connection to Ronin, but that potential could include conflict or alliance, perhaps even going from one to the other. This probably applies somewhat to Mozumaru as well.

Due to him being a Stalker, he may take jobs to infiltrate and/or impede the actions of major factions in the MP. Someone from from within the faction working to uncover and put a stop to him could end up being a rival.

For the Yatsukahagi, that may be Jìngyán, since she serves as the faction's spymaster. Or perhaps Senyan if Kuro is tasked with assassinating Satya herself.

Pretty much any of the Overseers could fit the bill, since Kuro is wanted dead or alive. Perhaps one with an extreme adherence to law and order who becomes obsessed with tracking him down after discovering that more corrupt Overseers actually employ his services from time to time.

Ryusei is also an option due to our previous discussion about his Patron having beef with a previous incarnation of Kuro.
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>>98046371
Raises the question of it conflicts resulting purely from your conscription are really the same as having a rivalry with them. Feels more like it's just part of the job and isn't personal enough.
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>>98045158
I did. It is just that I abandoned a lot of recent projects. I lost steam and passion, but I'm regaining it, slowly as it is.
Arguably, it is just another No!City setting, but still.
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>>98045962
As someone else said it reminds of the Man-Spider form of Spiderman. Cool piece, I somehow keep forgetting that transformed Jaku has 6 arms and not 4.
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>>98041603
Question, is the last SC mp still canon or is this like a new cycle or NG+?
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>>98046737
My understanding is that it is completely new and returning builds have just been repurposed to fit this run instead of the old one
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>>98046737
Full reset. Some reposts were changed a lot, but in general we are taking this as a new start even if some characters are the same.
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>>98043885
They're not really a sect so probably not - it's literally just two guys that barely know they were in the Saika Ikki in the first place. Taking Ronin and/or Mozumaru as a rival makes more sense for a grudge against their past lives.

>>98044551
Really good introduction for Hajun, shows his main niche of being a punching bag that won't stay down! Didn't expect for him to have at one point been a glorified babysitter for some of the Yatsukahagi, but it's cool and fits in line with him being by far the oldest build - its pretty easy to slot him in a lot of background stuff since he doesn't need to worry about the timeline as much. Koban's characterization is particularly fun, and Satya being able to stop the fight basically instantly was a good show of her power.

>>98045456
Sounds about right - I like it! Ronin almost certainly would never manage to reach her standard, but just losing his memory alone has brought him a lot higher than he used to be and I can see a few fun writefag ideas of her trying to curb Ronin's addictions.

Think she met or interacted with him at some point when he was Saika Magoichi, or just heard about the heinous shit he got up to before his amnesia?

>>98046107
Oblative Gesture users can make new gestures with new spirits they make pacts with, and Kei has Universal Sovereign so she counts as a Spirit. Would be cool to expand on in a future writefag. Though assuming Hotaru is just a fragment of the Queen, I don't know if Mozumaru could form another contract/gesture with her.
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>>98041600
Prompt: what's your build's fighting style
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>>98047180
Why does my build have to fight? Maybe I cultivate so I can increase crop yields and enhance the economy. Did you ever think of that?
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>>98047329
Alright then. As you wish. Prompt: What's your build's crop rotation strategy and marketing plans?
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>>98047386
I intend to buy cultivator corpses wholesale from the peasants who have to clean up the roads after the thousands of duels to the death each day. I then plan to compost the corpses and use them as fertilizer for the wheat and rice fields because apparently the only thing anyone eats out here are noodles and onigiri.
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>>98047462
So what's your fighting style when I fight you for those corpses or for your crops?

>Why does my build have to fight?
It doesn't have to, it can always just surrender instead :^)
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>>98047485
I'm going to hire 2 cultivators that have your exact same build and far more experience than you to kill you.
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>>98047489
The cultivators seeing as you can't defend yourself join the looters side and split your paddies with Anon.
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>>98047542
By that logic everyone just kills everyone until there's only one person left.
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>>98047595
Not really. Everyone kills the weaklings who do not want to obey until they reach the state where the cost of conquest outweighs the gains.
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>>98047180
Meliala tries to maintain her distance from her enemy as much as possible, concentrating on delivering suprressive fire from afar. She is not the best melee combatant but has some training. Her main tool is her acidic flow conduction which she uses to melt her enemies into slime before they can reach her.
Meliala likes a good fight and her angel summon is only used as a desperate last resort if she thinks that there is no other way to end the battle or if she is severely outmatched.

>>98044551
Revelation 17:4 says "The woman was dressed in purple and scarlet, and was glittering with gold, precious stones and pearls. She held a golden cup in her hand, filled with abominations and filthiness of her fornications."
Perhaps i have been too rough with poor hajun, Ronin and i must rescue him from this oppressive babylon whore!

Miss kei, please do not join Satya. There are better religions to join. Do not be deceived by her honeyed words for they are poison

Miss kisara, let us team up and take out this great whore of Babylon! Deus vult! I am willing to be a friendly rival to you if you wish
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>>98047612
That's caveman shit.
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>>98047624
That's how you get from caveman to civilization. Civilization is that relatively stable state where the power of violence becomes balanced and the social structure emerges.
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>>98047632
Civilization is when the state has a monopoly on force and people specialize their professions to maximize productivity. What you're suggesting is African tribal warlords just looting whatever they can because nobody has real control.
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>>98047636
What is a state if not a group of people with power who decided that continuing to fight is not cost-effective? What are citizens if not those who obey the governmental power? The force is required for stability.
Anon just having paddies and hiring mercenaries won't work because with his zero combat ability, there is no added cost for opposing him. The only question for the mercenaries is whether it's better to take what he has directly or establish a longer-term relationship. Anon is unwilling for the second (since he's opposing the combat Anon), so the increase in productivity from keeping him around doesn't outweigh the profit gained from taking all he has instead of part of it. The conflict then moves to the level of people with power that is the mercenaries and combat Anon. Due to threat/risk a combat could incur, at this stage the situation can stabilise, and they can just split farmer Anon's lands between themselves and then keep it stable. At that stage, they can work towards maximizing productivity using more obedient workers.
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>>98047684
i'm not reading all that shit
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>>98047739
Now that's some caveman shit.
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>>98041600
Between busy work days and my indecision, this took way too fucking long. Sorry about that, Hisako-anon. I hope I didn't run out of too much steam by the end of this.

>Name
Yuusha

>Race
Human

>Potential
Challenged (15AP, 4EP, 1 Mal, 1 Ben)

>Conscription
Street Vendor (7EP)

>Beneficial Alterations
Pure Pool (Free)
Heavenly Instrument: Kyoketsu-shoge

>Malignant Alterations
Trouble Magnet (20AP)

>Ambivalent Alterations
Signature Technique: Martial Art - Eightfold Manacle
Magmatic: Youdu's Finest (Former)

>Aura System
Shallow Generalist (25AP)

>Recovery Dispositions
Pain
Sleep

>Aura Reserves
19

>Affinities
Core G2 (24AP)
Phase G2 (23AP)
Flow G0 (24AP)
Alchemy G0 (25AP)

>Trainings
Weaponry Master: Kyoketsu-shoge (21AP)
Acrobatics Initiate (19AP)
Athletics Initiate (17AP)

>Basic Techniques
Sense Aura
Body Enhancement
Afterimage (12AP)

>Great Technique
Martial Art - Eightfold Manacle (5AP)

>Equipment
Heavenly Instrument: Kyoketsu-shoge
Burn (4AP)
Reflection (3AP)
Grappler (2AP)
Ouroboros Chain (1AP)
Twin (0AP)

Lockpicks (5EP)
Spider Shots (2EP)

>Campaigns
Night of Lantern Bugs

>Sect
Flowing Water Sect

>Rentry
https://rentry.org/kxgsbwrb
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>>98047827
>Challenged
Based
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>>98047827
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2Cs4sjO7GRw
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>>98047827
I'm baseding bros
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>>98047827
I hereby award you 50 points for the rivalry you now have with every other build.
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>>98047892
Wh-
Why does everyone hate Yuusha!?
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>>98047905
They are a bit tsun.
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>>98047905
ugly faceclaim
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>>98043854
Meliala has the sense karma ability and can see that Jingyan was once a noble soul but is now twisted by the horrors done to her. Perhaps Meliala can soften up and try to help Jingyan find some peace in her life while she helps her find Andrew

>>98044601
Revelation 17:5 says "And upon her forehead was a name written, MYSTERY: Babylon the great, the mother of harlots and abominations of the world"

Come at me Babylon whore, I KNOW YOU ARE HIDING ANDREW FROM ME. God told me that you are hiding andrew! I shall tell the townsfolk of Youdo about all the scam that you do and besmirch your reputation! I know there are people that are angry at you and I shall find them!

>>98045063
Do not be deceived! Satya is evil to the core! Come with me sister and let us end her reign before it even starts! I can grant you the lord's tranquility and vanquish thine foes!

>>98045962
You look like a fearsome angel, mister Jaku!

>>98046027
OOC: NTA, but you should try to just stake your claim or update your build already to have them as rivals. Your character is of villainous origin and can be good drive for a writefag. worst comes to worst then it is a one way rivalry
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We should make that graphical relationship chart. Anyone got a good program for it?
What's the state of alliances/rivals/romances?
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>>98048144
I think you could just tell an AI you want an infographic relationship chart and then explain all the relationships and it'll be done in seconds.
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>>98048196
Oh fuck off.
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>>98048208
It worked, didn't it?
People don't seem to realize just how far AI has come.
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>>98048144
Depends on where you're making it. There are plenty of free mind mapping apps or programs. From the writefags, Nagomi is teaching Kei, Arya and Jingyan seem to know each other, Meliala hired Ronin to search for someone, Satya wants to befriend Kei, and Hajun took care of Satya, Senyan and Arjava when they were little. There's also these >>98046097 >>98045456 as special rivalries in addition to everyone's own rival list.
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>>98048280
It didn't the last time (>>98044568) and I don't feel like trying again with this.
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>>98048144
Nagomi and Meliala are going to fix Ronin and make him a better man. It is a love triangle. The nun leads ronin on adventures about finding andrew and thereby giving him the thrill of adventure and then nagomi will just be chill scenes where ronin and nagomi just hang out and meditate together.
Meliala doesnt accept it at first and even denies it.
"I am saving myself for that special man. The perfect man for me. By god's grace i shall find him"

Meliala hates Satya and wishes to kill her and with how annoying meliala is becoming for satya, i think the feeling is mutual. Meliala thinks that Satya was the one who kidnapped Andrew.
"That babylon whore better count her days. For i shall be her executioner! I know she was the one who took my andrew! God told me so!"

Meliala will try to befriend jingyan, seeing a troubled, tortured soul within her. Meliala has cured people from their bad deeds before and changed them for the better. Maybe Meliala can try to give jingyan some peace.
"Jingyan, yours is a troubled soul. I know what it is like to be forsaken and abandoned. I was once an orphan and brought to the church. I know some ways to find some sort of closure and peace in life. What is that you say? Well we couls enact revenge on your captors!"

Meliala is rivals with hajun and wishes to settle their duel score since their last spar was a draw. She doesnt know yet how horrible hajun's life is under Satya

Meliala knows jaku and mika mori. She considers them her friends and a target for friendly rivalries

Meliala hates chitragupta and believes that she leads souls astray with her religion

Ooc: as for good programs, i do not know. Gimp i guess but that is like using a hammer and a chisel instead of using an electric drill
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I started working on the graphical relationship chart using (former) drawio and it seems alright for this. I'm gonna start applying relationships now, but I wanted to check in on sects/groups, which I took based on the threadslave list. I tried to mark the sect leader with a golden border. Please tell me if I missed anything and how/if I any of the unaffiliated should be in a group of some kind.
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What's interesting about spirit conscript?
I don't see the appeal at all, and I've really tried.
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>>98048490
David in the Retired Old Monster corner
or just 'Some guy' since nobody thinks he has Aura due to pure body right?

Who even has been in the city since the last centennial to have an idea hes anything but some random priest?
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>>98048538
Shonen and high power.
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>>98048542
You're going to have to explain it better than that.
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>>98048490
A small update with first relationships added and marked NPC factions because I thought that "enemy of my enemy" might be a useful information. Also, I thickened the borders of the factions a bit and used the border color from the cyoa. Also #2, since Jakunotori had Overseer faction listed as a member, I gave him a border with the member color.
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>>98048549
It feels good to fantasize about. What more do you need?
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>>98048540
He's in the "Overpowered Corner" if you look closely.
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>>98048593
Very good anon, You have a kindergarten reading level. Now how 'bout exercising some of that creativity instead of being pedantic.
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>>98048490
>>98048591
This is really cool, and it's shaping up well, just one thing to note is that it doesn't have sub factions now. Yatsukahagi already has one sect inside a sect, and is probably get more in the future, it's supposed to have 8, so some way to distinguish that Jingyan has her own sect would be useful.
It's really good otherwise and I particularly appreciate how the "fake" sects have a different border.
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>>98048894
I can just put a group within a group. It's just a rectangle with text.
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>>98048923
This is getting confusing, and I'm not even through the relationships that were marked in rentries, much less those discussed in the thread. Nice. Just as a proper relationship chart should be.
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>>98048923
That works well. The arrows are the same color as the cyoa right? So red for Foe and purple for Nemesis. I'm seeing some strange connections there but I may just need to check the builds better.
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>>98048997
I feel very sorry for what I'm about to do after seeing all the effort put into this. If it helps at least it's intuitive to look at.
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>>98049016
Yes, at least I tried to, these are my working colors. There were some cases where someone used the term "enemy" instead of "foe" or "nemesis", I think I treated it as foe then. But of course, there may have been some fuck ups, so if anyone spots anything I'll try to correct it.
The colors I used.
Border
#DBCDB4


Faction

Member
#6FA8DC

Ally
#93C47D

Foe
#E06666

Nemesis
#8E7CC3


Person

Companion
#93C47D

Romance
#C27BA0

Rival
#F6B26B


AP
#FFD966
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>>98048997
Seems like a good way to figure out whos a dump and whos not. Dont have some color linked to your name? Gtfo.
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>>98049050
Not everyone had to purchase allies/companions/rivals/etc to interact with others
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>>98049050
You can have colors linked to your name by picking exclusively NPC factions so not really. Also you don't have to make half of the world hate you to make a build.
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>>98049050
A better check would be if a character link has an error and their anon doesn't point it out after.
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What is there to care about in SC?
I'm still not seeing the vision here. It just feels so empty.
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>>98049040
>there may have been some fuck ups
For now I'm cheking the connections you have and they seem fine. I just missed that some people had Old Grudges as an Ambivalent Alteration so they could take more Nemesis. This is actually helping me to visualize the situation and pick rivals and stuff so thanks, and also sorry for any changes that will result from this.
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>>98049098
It's fine. Luckily drawio is rather easily editable.
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Okay, unless I missed something (and there is a high probability I did, please check), those are all from the rentries/buildposts. I'm gonna take a break and then start filling out those from the thread, but it'd be nice if someone could compile them, especially since some of those were more like propositions rather than confirmed stuff.
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>>98049146
honestly this should have just been a rentry compilation
this image is going to be outdated in a week
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>>98049184
Rentry just ain't the same, it's about the vibe.



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