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It's 50 till midnight.
Last thread died on the vine.
I haven't played a CYOA in days.
But I continually check the thread in case someone mentions me, or my current project for input.
I wonder if this is what a ghost feels like, in a place but not of it.
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>>98212727
Cave is the way to go. Just sit in there and sift through a bunch of magic items. I bet there’s one capable of sustaining you.
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>>98212719
Any good chainsaw man CYOAs?
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>>98212705
Bad cyoa
>>98212719
Good cyoa
>>98212723
Goodbad cyoa
>>98212725
Good cyoa
>>98212727
Good cyoa
>>98212731
>>98212740
Two pages too long
>>98212732
Good cyoa
>>98212736
>>98212746
Two pages too long
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>>98212756
>Two pages too long
Shut your mouth.
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>>98212778
Telekinesis improved.
Literally the best one.
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>>98212804
Not even close. Improved Illusion can deal with groups of thugs. Telekinesis can only lift up to a thousand pounds.
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>>98212778
Improved Domination, EZ
Just daisy chain through to the president of the USA, figure out who his handlers are, then daisy chain up to our alien overlords. Crush alien puss.
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>>98212841
I feel like I could redo this one, but I do not know which one I would want nowadays.
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>>98212867
The book lady in this one always made me feel weird. There should be meat there not pages
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>>98212778
Memory
Domination
Mind reading

Using memory and mind reading I gain political leverage, then I dominate a high profile target and have them do my bidding
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This is new, and was pretty good
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>>98212831
>lift guys and throw them into space
>carry bag of metal balls to recreate that scene in xmen 2
>crush the guys into wet bags of gore
>etc
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>>98212927
Idk just make everyone see black and you win.
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>>98212927
A gun still kills you since you can’t react in time :^)
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>>98212929
>guy grabs you and kick your ass while being blind
>>98212932
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XIcTr-m-R9U
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>>98212867
I'm almost inclined to take seikilos, but then i'm out a hot bitch zealous bond... I like the idea of having not just one, but a whole squad of summons, but by that same token the horny says I should take a female summon as my zealous...
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>>98212953
That’s a lot more weight than what’s allowed.
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>>98213007
362kg is pretty heavy.
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https://pastebin.com/6sTRC1Gh

Light of Hope https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98131206/#98132885
Myriad Self As One Immutable Dao Heart https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98131206/#98132442
Butcher of Argus https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98131206/#98132619
Alrahvartin: Mad God of Time https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98157881/#98162150
Voidsoul https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98131206/#98132981
The Wall https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98148835/#98149080
Bhuni https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98131206/#98133416
Drang, He of Inevitability https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98131206/#98133485
Void Prince https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98168707/#98173360
Wyrdsmith https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98179720/#98181547
Shub-Ishni-Gol https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98131206/#98135772
Ell-Est-Douaan, He Who Sees https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98148835/#98153883
Pathfinder https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98131206/#98136417
The Crafters https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98143559/#98143587
The Golden Overlord https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98137719/#98139810
Dark Flame Master https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98137719/#98142501
Ardkorus, The Heart of The World https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98148835/#98153978
The Merciful Being https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98148835/#98154946
Amika, the Golden Chain that Binds the Ephemeral in Stasis https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98162912/#98165626
The Datu of Dimensions https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98162912/#98167716
The Great Sovereign https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98198274/#98199229
Shahar - Dawn Bringer https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98168707/#98173261
Persea Rhodes https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98173625/#98176659
Shell, the Least https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98184982/#98189218
Ereban - The Red https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98184982/#98189478
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>>98213052
El - The Sound of Life https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98184982/#98189613
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98184982/#98190991
Eruin, the Wandering Creator https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98192303/#98194484
Red God & Grey God https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98192303/#98197034
The Doldrums https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98198274/#98198735
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98198274/#98199628
Luminary, the Great Eye in the Sky https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98208296/#98211713
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>>98212805
>Fate has no hold on anything primordial+
Where is that stated?
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>>98213059
>https://imgchest.com/p/9p4nwpnr54n
In your base powers and by aromage several times you fucking retards. Every time we tell you this its forgotten in a thread and you idiots go back to thinking future sight does anything. We talked about this extensively in the WIP process, it does nothing to you. Ultima and most ultima tier beings are practically unaffected and cannot be properly tracked or predicted through stuff due to having the four base powers ultima have or other primordials having something similar.
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>>98213091
It also doesn't work through the void, so even if you could future sight anything, it only works inside whatever multiverse you're in, and you can't see other multiverses since the void is anathema to future sight and obscures everything in it.
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>>98213091
>>98213095
Anons don't read or care. They will just say whatever makes their narrative look better. They don't forget what you say they just ignore it and wait for people to forget.
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>>98213091
There is no mention of fate and precognition in the starting powers.
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>>98213103
You are immune to it due to perpetuity, you fucking retard. You are apart from everything and wholly unique. How many times does this have to be told to you?
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>>98213091
The base powers don't say that at all, and the fact that Mercury's Speed explicitly lets you ignore fate/precognition implies you couldn't normally do that.
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>>98213108
Reread perpetuity.
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>>98213115
I did, you're fucking retarded and have been told this several times including by arogemage herself, you are not going to win anything through relying on precog.
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>>98213118
The wrong are always so confident.
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>>98213121
Anon, I playtested the fucking cyoa with aromage, stop being a retard and spouting blatant misinformation.
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>>98213127
Why don't you post a picture of perpetuity and underline the part that says ultimas are immune to fate and precognition to show everyone of your correctness?
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>>98213131
Why don't you just read what fucking perpetuity does, it makes you immune to nearly everything including metanarrative stuff by things like authors, you fucking babbling troglodyte. Why is this explained to you every single time and told to you directly by aromage and you still don't understand?

What are you going to do with fate anyways assuming you can get it to work on ultima? You just get power nullified through any of the several ways of doing that, and your precog/fate shit is not infallible just because you do it and there are many ways around it including just being built strong enough to beat it. Why do you spread blatant misinformation?
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>>98213118
She doesn't seem to have mentioned this before. She did say that fate manipulation automatically doesn't work on ultima though

>>98213131
He quoted it already, though assuming "you are wholly unique" makes you immune to precog instead of just time-travel is a bit of a stretch.
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>>98213148
That was in one of the older versions, I wouldn't trust it given mercury's speed has been changed.
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>>98213148
How are you going to precog something that cannot appear in your precognition due to being entirely unique and unable to be replicated in your precog power
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>>98213159
It was this version.
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>>98213148
>She did say that fate manipulation automatically doesn't work on ultima
No she didn't. She said she "fixed" it, method unsaid and months before release.
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>>98213164
That was a year ago, it's been changed a bunch since then.
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>>98213167
>it was a different version
>actually it wasn't
>w-well it was longer ago than I wanted it to be, so it doesn't count!
>>98213165
>directly told fate working on ultima is fixed
>w-well it doesn't count because it was said during making the cyoa!
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>>98213146
Still not showing any proof of your claims. Now you're backpedaling into saying that fate and precognition are useless to sidetrack.
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>>98213175
...When I said it was a different version, that's what I meant the first time. Doy.
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>>98213177
>anon cannot read the ability called 'perpetuity' that is in the cyoa
>anon couldn't even be bothered to read the cyoa he's arguing about
Anon please, stop being so retarded. Here's pereptuity, reread it slowly this time.
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>>98213163
Some of the precog powers don't actually replicate your mind. Light (the best precog) and Death (the second best) almost certainly don't copy anything about you. I concede that this could at the very least massively nerf Mind and Time's precog, though.
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>>98213187
Light can only see your own future, and since ultima are irreplaceable due to their ability, logic dictates that the light ability cannot trace you since it cannot glimpse other ultima due, once again, to perpetuity. Death, once again, cannot affect ultima on any meaningful scale.
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>>98213186
So you actually do have the cyoa open. I see that you didn't misremember; you are hallucinating.
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>>98213194
>anon has resorted to "nuh uh" when faced with the page he refuses to read
You're still just doing yourself a disservice by being blatantly retarded.
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Anons I have asked aromage about precog just stop fighting and we'll see what the answer is in the morning. I was under the impression it was some middleground, you can be affected by precog and fate in some ways but its not like you need it to be successful in UG.
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>>98213199
It's amazing how the human mind can conjure words out of thin air to maintain its worldview.
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>>98213193
I still don't see how seeing your possible actions is copying you. If perception counted as copying you, wouldn't that also impede all other forms of perception? It's not making a copy of you and seeing what that copy does, it tells the Light ultima what the best actions to take are.
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>>98213212
Yes, it is, like spouting that you can be affected by fate shit with perpetuity telling you blatantly otherwise, lol, lmao.
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>>98213211
>just stop fighting
NEVER.
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>>98213211
Thanks, I'll stop arguing now. I'd be happy to be wrong as long as there's a definitive answer.
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Is this the correct representation of Hyper Masculine and Masculine?
Masculine looks way too boyish/feminine to be considered masculine to me.
It's from this recently translated Korean CYOA btw: https://dragonswhore-cyoas.neocities.org/Guardian_of_the_Kingdom/
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>>98213146
They probably read "strongest of god and cosmic entities" and thought it would work on Ultima. Because if you are unaware that "strongest of gods" actually refers to lesser gods (which can only control a galaxy at their strongest (fodder) ), you'd logically think it'd work on other Ultima and entities (as they are the strongest of gods).
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>>98213246
the tokification of hanguk....
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>>98213246
I think it's trying to be gender agnostic. It's not particular masculine for a man, but if that were the face of a woman you'd say it's extremely masculine.
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>>98213289
Anyunghaseyo Korean-nim, please fix the eyes in your AI image
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How does cyoag feel about depictions of implied rape? Pic related is a 3d image based on the rape of persephone.
I do not wish to sully my cyoa with such themes but the picture fits a drawback in my cyoa. I know murder and genocide is fine if it fits the theme but how about implied rape?

The drawback is that you have a succulent spirit and that mutants want to eat your soul. Should i just find a different image?

TLDR: My question is how does cyoag feel about depictions of implied rape? Should i just find a different image?
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>>98213330
Lmao, just post on reddit like you intended if you're that concerned.
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>>98213330
You know exactly what you're doing.
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>>98212841
I really feel like I could redo my build for this, and I want to like the spirits, but holy fuck so many of these pacts are utter dogshit and I don't want to take hardly any of them.
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>>98213163
shouldn't you be able to see the temporal "outline" of an ultima by seeing what they will do even if you can't see the ultima itself?
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>>98213330
It'd take some extreme amount of pearl clutching to care about that, even for reddit.
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>>98213330
don't really care, like there are outright drawbacks about being raped by monsters in trash cyoas so this is super tame stuff.

Then you got to consider that pretty much no one is going to get deeper meaning in your pictures everyone reads stuff pretty damn literally. Not even reddit mods are probably going to notice that its implied rape, most people only going to think your just posting monster goon bait with a pretty lady.
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>>98212725
Its weird that I didn't see this one. It has relatively recent images like Kenjaku's brain so its not something very old. Anyway.
I thought I was going to pick Hybrid to mix them but I realized the occult traits are not my jazz. I am a punch and kick guy who likes to survive, not a wizard.

>Class
Monster
>Higher Primal Traits
Strength
Vitality
Agility
The unholy trinity. Punch good and resist good. Regenerate good. Run good.
This is a cheetah (105km/h) that could run for a whole week without needing food, water or sleep. That can regenerate from even a bullet to the brain without any problem. Who has the durability to be immune to conventional bladed weapons and if knives can't penetrate your skin, I doubt a bullet can break a bone given how much toughter it is, maybe even muscle could stop it, and then regeneration so good getting brain penetrated is not a problem kicks in and repairs the skin and muscle damage no problem. This tireless cheetah with super regeneration and durability also has the strength to bend steel like pretzels with little effort. So basically no amount of police can defeat this thing and military would be needed.

>Lesser Primal Trait
Nerves
Cognition
Enhanced memory plus int and senses is very good. It serves to not be just a dumb strong guy

>Lesser occult trait
Divination
Information is king. Mentalism would be good too but I don't know if I could live a happy life knowing I can mindread people.

Stay and Fight. But rather than me searching for foes, I would become a "dont fuck over my zone" guy, not against fighting but not going to seek it
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>>98212732
>Kagune
Ukaku.
Wings > tentacles > tail > weird arm thing
Speed > regeneration + power > balance > durability
As far as drawbacks go, from best drawback to worst
Consumes a lot of stamina > Easily broken > no notable strength > heavy and slow
Although easily broken is worse in a vaccuum, as Rinkaku has the best regeneration, it should be the best drawback. So taking into account their powers too
Easily broken > Consumes a lot of stamina > no notable strength > heavy and slow

Koukaku is too slow and has no range. So cool, you can defend yourself but you are not killing anything with a brain. In theory it defeats Ukaku by outlasting, but the Ukaku can just flee or not attack and its a stalemate. For it to win it assumes the Ukaku is attacking like a retard

Rinkaku's regeneration is incredibly good, and has the best attack power. It can defeat Koukaku due to its power (fuck you koukaku) but its frail. Not good to get your kagune cut by any attack your enemy lands. Basically no defense beyond regeneration. Second best

Bikaku. Balance is good but not noteworthy. I guess safety is fine? It loses against the Ukaku's much greater speed and long range attacks (like anyone but the koukaku). Having a tail is cool tho.

Ukaku. Speed, long range projectiles, can harden for close range. Its problem is its like a knife, you either throw it or get pretty close, so its close range its very very close range. Fly or at least glide. Speed is king, long range is king, movility is king. It excels in those 3 things that are the most important in a fight. Best kagune. Its main drawback is shooting projectiles consumes stamina as its losing the kagune itself, but it can get better with training + ghoul consumption and strategy to not mindlessly fire your kaguna so its main drawback is not bad.
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>>98213246
I do have some questions about that one. Does the Unbreakable Body perk redundant with Regeneration ability and Toxin immunity trait, do you think? And is Holy Power magic or not? It's clearly learned differently, and it's called a power instead of magic.
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>>98213000
>the horny says
>ape brain has a seat in his decision making council
It's over for you
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>>98213425
>Extra perk
Natural One-Eyed Ghoul
Who the fuck would not pick this? Better stats, better kagune, better growth

Special kaguna, electricity
Stuns go good with speed and long range

Compatible
Yeah, it would be good to not lose control unlocking the main power up

Lower class
14th ward

So almost homeless. This area can let me practice cannibalism without being in the area of another organization or being hunted down.

Genetic modification
Nimble
More speed, enhance your best trait
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>>98213330
Read isekai rape monster
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>>98213447
Of course it does, for a man to repress a part of himself leads to madness and unfulfillment.
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>>98213447
It's a very important part for some people.
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>>98212727
I love this. Wish there were a couple more pages.

My card
>The Sun

Companion Card
>Strength

Me and Musclemommy will travel the land as hired blades seeking new horizons and challenges
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>>98213447
>horni le bad
You're not welcome here.
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>>98213555
>horni le bad
it depends on the level of horny. Tok-tier horny is too horny for example.
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>>98213618
I actually dont think Tok has the biggest tier of horny. I consider that the type that will masturbate over responsabilities like going to work, a real addiction. The guy has warhammer figuries so he has to have a job with how expensive they are. That disqualifies him from "so fucking horny it has become a crippling addiction" tier

The problem of Tok is his fetishes. The moment you rape an animal, you went too far
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>>98213447
Based asexualSCHOLARS enlightening the unwashed masses of '/cyoag/
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>>98213623
home...
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>>98213624
Tbh your fetishes are irrelevant so long you have the minimal mental capacity to acknowledge that you shouldn't do the real fucked ones in reality.
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>>98213624
>The problem of Tok is his fetishes. The moment you rape an animal, you went too far
I still cant believe he did that. Even for his standards thats disgusting and then there are still people wondering why he gets so much hate.
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>>98213640
I can agree with that. While some fetishes are developed, some you are born with. Some fetishes should stay as fantasies you can't control to have, but never in reality.
Like, I pity the guys with things like guro. Because they like something so gross and harmful to all parties involved that they should know to never even think about it being real.
Just like zoophiles, necrophiles or pedophiles.

Some fetishes are gross but at least they dont harm anyone, like cucks. I also pity them but at least they can fulfill their fantasies without doing harm to anyone

>>98213650
It made me go from "haha, Tok weird" to "ok, the guy seriously has a problem even by 4chan standards"
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>>98213624
>>98213650
>>98213666
the fuck are you guys talking about
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>>98213669
Bro doesnt know about the /trash incident.
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>>98213669
Actual Tourist
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>>98213669
Tok admitted some time ago he went to a country and paid a farmer with a horse to let him fuck it. He even said it was X% consensual because past certain point it stopped struggling
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>>98213697
Huh
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>>98213702
Have you never wondered why everyone is always so up in arms against him, trying to get him to leave the general? Did you think people were just hating on him coz he makes shit CYOAs or something?
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>>98213730
to be fair, people hated tok way before the horse incident
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>>98213730
Pretty sure it is because he is annoying. I don't care either way about the horse as i am not the horse or the farmer or connected to them. This is just finding dirt to justify the position. It is also unknown if he did or did not made it up to be a epic cool 4channer or whatever.
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>>98212732
>Your Kagune
Koukaku
>Extra Perks
Natural One-Eyed Ghoul
>Drawbacks
Deceiving Scent
Targeted (Aogiri Tree)
>Organization
Washuu Clan
>Social Class
High Class
>Location
1st Ward
>Genetic Modifications
Hardened, Nimble, Vigorous, Mending

I like the aesthetic of making arms and armor, being slow is only a problem if you don't train, like the ukaku's stamina.
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>>98213755
>1st Ward
Not gonna make it
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>>98213697
>he went to a country and paid a farmer with a horse to let him fuck it.
Based. I would a mare.
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>>98212323
>Takes months to paint a warhammer army
Pic very realted, my army is close to 4000 points, and I painted up terrain worth a wargaming table. I also got to say I fucking despise slap-chop and speed painting. Figures should be painted to the best of the artist's ability, anything else is laziness and coopium for settling for mediocrity. A true artist should always aim for perfection. Coming short of that goal is not a failure as long as you learn from your mistakes and improve so that the next time you aim for the stars, you will be that much closer to reaching them. It also hasn't been months since I started painting my Warhammer army. It has been closer to 1 and a half years. But I suspect that I will finish this year.

>>98213624
>I actually don't think Tok has the biggest tier of horny. I consider that the type that will masturbate over responsibilities like going to work, a real addiction. The guy has warhammer figuries so he has to have a job with how expensive they are. That disqualifies him from "so fucking horny it has become a crippling addiction" tier
Contrary to popular belief, I'm a really normal, well-adjusted salaryman during the day. I only become the Tok you know once I leave work. It is actually why I really vibe with Aikurō Mikisugi from Kill La Kill. He is just like me, a man of culture who disguises himself as a boring salaryman.

>>98213650
Come on, you say that like it's the craziest thing. I bet tons of you would be down to fucking a horse if given the chance.

>>98213736
I was hated since I participated in (and won) a CYOA contest on Reddit. Because I was accused of rushing Eronomicon for the sake of the competition, despite me finishing the CYOA weeks before the deadline. It really made me question some of my fans' intelligence, and it made me take the CYOA community way less seriously. Which has been a really positive change in my opinion.
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>>98213889
>Come on, you say that like it's the craziest thing. I bet tons of you would be down to fucking a horse
100% all these pathetic puritans "Raping an animal" Bro it's an animal they rape each other all the fucking time in the wild
do you ever see a cow consenting to being mounted by a bull?

The only line I personally draw when it comes to immoralities commited against animals is purposefully harming them, people who deliberately cause pain to an animal deserve death
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>>98213889
>Because I was accused of rushing Eronomicon for the sake of the competition
It was one of your worst cyoas you made. Everything about it seemed rushed
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>>98213697
>paid a farmer with a horse to let him fuck it
Chad behaviour if real. I can't imagine a single person on here with the courage to straight up ask to fuck a dude's horses
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>>98213906
Nobody here is sick enough to want to do that. Its not courage.
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>>98213927
Tok was
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>>98213898
>>98213906
You are Tok or as mentally challenged and sick as Tok, pick your poison
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>>98213902
>It was one of your worst cyoas you made. Everything about it seemed rushed
I did everything I wanted with that CYOA. Nothing was rushed as I always aim for perfection with everything I do. I made a completely new point system that was inspired by Autism Prison's point system, what a funny coincidence that Autism Prison is in the thread >>98213621
And I made colors inspired by MtG's color system, which were tied into fetishes. I am very proud of Eronomicon and I consider it a resounding success. When I look at it, I see a thematically and mechanically wonder of a CYOA that was so ahead of its time and so groundbreakingly innovative. Sometimes my genius is almost frightening. It is no wonder that I won that CYOA competition with a CYOA like that.

>>98213898
I'm gonna tell you this important lesson that I learned. The best way to achieve your goals and dreams is to objectively look at the obstacles in your way and remove them one by one, do whatever you have to do as long as it is not illegal and will not get you into trouble later. When you have a clear path to that goal, you will always get there as long as you are willing to do the work and break a few eggs.

>>98213906
I have done many cool things, like my gorillionaire larp vacation in Romania, pic realted
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>>98213211
WOG about precog
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>>98213927
>>98213937
Moralfaggotry has ruined this site
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>>98213961
>moralfaggotry
>its just people not liking other people being zoophiles raping animals
this is not people saying you shouldn't like your lolis or your build being too dark and edgy, anon
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>>98213971
>""""raping"""" animals
>>98213898
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>Welsh anons
wow
race-mixing?
in /cyoag/?
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>>98213959
It's kinda funny how time seems to have the worst precog out of all of them
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>>98213961
>Moralfaggotry has ruined this site
Yes, moralfaggotry is a real poison when it comes to fun. Everything is more fun when people tune down their inhibitions and say what they actually think and believe, as opposed to putting up a facade regulated by useless things like traditions, morals, ethics, religion, and political ideologies, which only serve to shackle creative expression and thought. Those who break rules, think outside the box, and dare to do things differently will always be the greatest artists, as they will set no limits for their creativity. So while this comment might or might not be a inflamatory bait is is true, in the truest sense. The ultimate enemy of all art is and always will be moralfaggotry.

>>98213959
>Aromage is a mantis main
Of course, she fucking is. I wonder which character Angel plays, since I have heard her say she also plays Rivals. Invisible Woman or Gambit is my guess, would not be surprised if she played Jeff either. I, however, as a man of culture, am a firm enjoyer of the white queen, video very realted
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kFPmtfn7dkM
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>>98214007
>files corrupted
https://imgchest.com/p/pg73jobjyrn
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>>98213988
1. Tok himself said this
>A horse got fucked, it didn't struggle like crazy or anything but it was kinda nervous in the beginning so maybe it got raped or maybe it didn't, we will never know the truth for sure
Then when asked further he gave percentages
>I would say it was 35% rape and 65% not rape
Have in mind, this is the mind of the sick horse fucker. So if even he admits it was rape, even if he tries to shield it with "35% rape", whatever that means, you know it was rape. Even more when earlier he said he didn't if it was, so it was. If a guy of this kind can't even say "yeah, not rape" you know its rape.
2. Animals can't consent, so you can't have sex with them, only rape them.
3. Are you another zoophile? why are you defending bestiality?
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Can we talk about something that isn't this?
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>>98214049
What do you want to talk about?
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>>98214015
I'm actually a peni main, but i also have lords in Emma, Wanda, Storm, SG, Invis, and CnD. I just think that mantis is the cutest.
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>>98214015
> Those who break rules, think outside the box, and dare to do things differently will always be the greatest artists
Buddy, you are a divorced salaryman with no life beyond plastic figurines and jacking off to the idea of being a little girl and get a new hole made by an ugly bastard. Raping a horse doesn't make you an artist
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>>98214050
cyoas
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>>98214050
Luminary (Rake) has been on my mind since I updated my build, i guess?
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>>98214070
Also Spirit Conscript is still in my head
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>>98214077
The powers? the waifus? the factions? the world?
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>>98214082
yes!
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>>98212705
Does anyone have this old CYOA that was about God dying and the power being passed onto people throughout the multiverse, with multiple factions forming? I just remember two of them were a God-Emperor type who was all about fairly distributing the power between all wielders rather than do the death game thing individuals would naturally do the power up, and a being that ate some of God's corpse and became super powerful, and if you followed him he'd offer you pieces of that flesh as a reward.
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>>98213959
Are you seriously using light mode? What is wrong with you?
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>>98214091
Universal War, it's a PDF so we can't post it here but you should be able to find it.
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>>98214091
Universal War, is pdf
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>>98214082
The powers mostly
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>>98214015
>Yes, moralfaggotry is a real poison when it comes to fun. Everything is more fun when people tune down their inhibitions and say what they actually think and believe, as opposed to putting up a facade regulated by useless things like traditions, morals, ethics, religion, and political ideologies, which only serve to shackle creative expression and thought. Those who break rules, think outside the box, and dare to do things differently will always be the greatest artists, as they will set no limits for their creativity. So while this comment might or might not be a inflamatory bait is is true, in the truest sense. The ultimate enemy of all art is and always will be moralfaggotry.
r/im14and thisisdeep
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>>98214090
If you don't specify I will spit bs
The best power type is alchemy because I like paper summons
The best waifu is Mai because I like flat chested women
The best faction is the blue oni clan because they work for the good of the city
The best part of the world is the human world

What do you think?
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>>98214131
>t. Perfect Perspective victim
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>>98214108
>>98214107
Thanks mates.
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>>98214064
So when is the UG poll gonna close out?
1st - no shell
https://poal.me/u9e1gm
2nd - with shell
https://poal.me/78cg4l

I'd be happy calling them now, I don't know if whoever made the poll set up a time limit.

I think letting Dark Sovereign and the Crafters fight each other for all eternity is a fine fate.
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>>98214142
What do you mean? is it about Mai? You dont like our favourite redhead flat chested pure and fully clothed waifu?
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>>98214148
Calling it now is fine
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>>98214204
All right all right all right!
Based off one Anon's approval:

Which build is the strongest? It's a tie between Dark Sovereign and the Crafters. Let their fight Ripple throughout all creation until the end of time.
The Great Sovereign https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98198274/#98199229
The Crafters https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98143559/#98143587

Which ultimate God stands the tallest?
Apparently Shell, the least.
Shell, the Least https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98184982/#98189218

Come down and take your prize!

(Now I can stop obsessing about looking at the polls)
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>>98213981
Can someone post any manga panel art they have of
1. A black hole portal made by some superpower
2. Something implying 'perfect movement'
3. Opening up a pocket space for storage
thanks
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>>98214227
Hold your horses it's a three-way photo finish!
Welcome El-est-duaan to the Winner's Circle!
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>>98214227
And it looks like shell comfortably cemented her lead at the last second.
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im so tired of ultimate god...
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>>98214059
>I'm actually a peni main
And I am surprised since the vast majority of females tend to play healers or snipers (and more often than not shitty snipers at that).
>but i also have lords in Emma, Wanda, Storm, SG, Invis, and CnD.
Interesting, what was the highest rank own again? Immortal or something like that? Got any of theose? Some very surprising picks for sure. Invisible, Squirrel and Cloak and Dagger not so much. Very surprised you play Emma and Scarlet, Since I too play Emma and Scarlet since I like how you are virtually unkillable if you play Wanda properly and don't take any stupid risks. My aim fucking sucks since I don't like to play FPS or TPS too often as I much prefer RPG, MMORPG, MOBA and strategy games. So I gravitate toward characters where you don't have to aim that much, and strategic positioning is much more important for success. My favorites are Emma, Scarlet, Venom, and I have recently had a lot of fun with Devil Dinosaur, such a fun kit.
>I just think that mantis is the cutest.
Valid, anyway, what are you working on next? A new CYOA? Not a remake? Please, for the love of god, not a remake.
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>>98214070
Steve is a based patron
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>>98214261
I'm planning a cyoa called Stranger where you play as an ancient robot that awakens in a fantasy land. I will admit i've been considering remaking totem war, but only after an original cyoa or two.

My highest rank is grandmaster, but i'm always comfortably in diamond or platinum. If you mean proficiency, i'm a Guardian with peni.
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>>98214064
We can only talk about popular ones like Ultimate God
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>>98214286
Best is Yharum easily
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>>98214320
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/96175540/#96178909
Member the Corpo Raid Dungeon? That was cool.
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>>98214318
she has nice bonuses and is easy to please considering your duty
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>>98214389
Which one are you talking about? Because i'm not really fond of the 'beserker rage' or having to take damage and chase conflict.
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>>98214320
reposting my punch build

>FORM: fem
>OUTFIT: majestic + witch-like
>IMPLEMENT: gauntlets
explosive boost for short range spells + overcharging to quite literally punch up my weight

>MAGIC: spirit (special), physicality (master), celerity (master), psychic (special)
focus on combat and hitting as hard as possible
physical+celerity to bring my close combat abilities to the top
psychic for utility, non-physical attacks and because few would expect the muscle head to have this type of magic
spirit for healing, extra defense and soul effects

>QUIRKS: complex outfit, large reserves, talented
talented is a no brainer for physical builds
large reserves is always good but is extra useful with overcharge
complex outfit for that last AP to master magic and the extra learning speed is cool

>ULTIMATE: second form
pic realted, gives a massive boost to my magic infused punches (+the overall boost to magic)

>PACTS: urist, old mother
urist gives good memory for cheap
bone mommy gives even more devastating attacks and magic copying for something I was already going to do in this line of work

>JOB: official
sounds like good pay (+bribes) for little work, at most it might get dangerous if I mess with the wrong corporation

>CONTACTS: apollyon, marie, agnes
one contact in most organizations also:
apo: shares physical and spirit magic making her a good tutor
marie: pretty chill with mind controlling people, plus the way her bindings affect minds could help me develop my psychic magic faster
agnes: she sounds like the most likely to be chill with me having dark magic, plus I love emotionally vulnerable and abusive women

>MISSIONS: all?
at least I want to keep my options open and get as many opportunities to grow

The plan: punch the enemy hard, if that fails punch their mind, if that fails punch their soul, if that fails overcharge and start again.
enemies with useful magic either become my thralls of get turned into trophies so I can copy their magic.
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>>98214240
That man´s sister really carried him...
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>>98214382
That was really fun

Writing prompts for my writing prompts
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>>98214410
Uh... Power of love?
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>>98214397
Yharum
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>>98214485
Then based and true.
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>>98213757
Washuu Clan, High Class and Natural One-Eyed Ghoul should make being in the 1st Ward easy.
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>>98213757
>>98214596
Nigga really said "diddy wouldnt make it for a second on the island"
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What do you want to do with your waifu when you grow old together?
(Assuming it is entirely impossible to stop aging)
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>>98214690
I devour her for power and stop my aging, sorry honey but daddy has to be the strongest no matter what.
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>>98214707
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>>98212732
>Kagune:
Ukaku

>Extra Perks:
Natural One-Eyed Ghoul, Special Kagune (Cloning), Compatible

>Drawbacks:
Watchlist, Targeted (V)

>Social Class:
High

>Location:
24th Ward

>Genetic Modifications:
Hardened, Nimble, Vigorous
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>>98214320
Updated Implausible Technology/Magical Guy again, this time to get rid of the tech altogether. I initially went tech because it seemed by far the most versatile of the Light specialisations. However, now I have an ultimate art which already gives me all the versatility in the world, I just need the power to fuel it.
> Body
Male
> Outfit
Witch-Like
Magic is good, more magic is better.
> Implement
Grimoire
With this I can cast powerful rituals at a leyline and store them to use later.
> Magic
Lightning (Specialised)
Sacrifice (Adept)
Illusion (Specialised)
Psychic (Master)
Pact (Master)
This is all about powering my ultimate. I can pull power from storms, blood, my familiar and people's emotions (the latter working especially well with Illusion). I'll say that my familiar's power is enhanced luck.
> Perks
Overcharged
Gifted
Hungry Magic
Even more magical talent and fuel for my ultimate.
> Ultimate Art
Continuous
Based on Illusion, it allows me to straight up warp reality. Energy costs scale depending on the strength and duration of the change, but as a rule are much costlier than doing it with regular magic.
> Patrons
Remial
Yharum
Old Bone Mother
Would’ve loved to take Urist but I really need to be able to lie about stuff often. These ones at least are straightforward and easy to fulfil.
> Occupation
Media
It’s an easy way to keep an eye on whatever the enemy happens to be up to and maybe give me inspiration for my own magical workings.
> Contacts
Marael
Yue
Iris
Marael helps improve my magic, Yue improves my magical energy efficiency and Iris handles tech stuff and surveillance.
> Missions
All
Every mission, because I have big plans and need lots of power to do it. My ultimate goal is to unshackle the potential of the other luminaries and then have them rise up to dethrone the light and dark. To do this I’ll need lots of personal power, but also lots of trust so people don’t immediately think I’m trying to corrupt them or something.
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>>98214870
changed it again to swap Large Reserves for Overcharged so I could get Pact (Master) which improves my magical energy reserves anyway.
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>>98214870
Also, my familiar:
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gilbert ;__;
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>>98214945
The greatest author of all time
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>>98214974
Stop wanking yourself off
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Anyone who says his name is wanking his wanker in fact

You are a wanker
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>>98214997
Wasnt I still tok yesterday?
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>>98215035
Okay Gok
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>>98214320
"What do you look like now?" asks the narrating magical girl, while looking at me.
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>>98215024
https://youtu.be/T-gbJvrOnUE
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>>98215074
She's exclaiming it in a shocked panic, unable to believe what she's seeing. Because you're so ugly.
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he was just a baby ;___;
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>>98215190
H-hot!
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>>98214320
I forget, was it said somewhere that you get unagingness?
On one hand, your soul gem reforms you whenever. This sounds like clean bill to all health problems including aging.
On the other hand, it is implied that very young Luminaries will continue to grow up to adults, so at the very least they don't have unagingness at that stage.
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>>98214398
>>98214870
>no tech
jobber central in here
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>>98215307
Tech is pretty pointless for me now when I can already do basically anything with enough juice.
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Rolled 11, 2, 1, 6 = 20 (4d12)

>>98214320
I made an unrolled build for this but couldn't post it at the time.
But I prefer semi-random builds anyhow.

4d12

Dice 1 = Implement
Dice 2 = Light School #1
Dice 3 = Light School #2
Dice 4 = Dark School

(The 5 points and the Specialty must be spent within the rolled schools)
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>>98213624
The horse Tok raped? It was Wodan.
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>>98213959
Dark Servant...
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>>98213959
Might as well start calling you Light Sovereign
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>>98214013
Its very ironic, what is time even good for?
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>>98214707
Author need to add explanation for both Level 0 or for Rank 17-19.
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>>98215307
then show us you 'superior' tech build so we can lau- I mean see how strong you are
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>>98215485
this but for all builds ever
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Softie is so cute bros
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>>98214249
There are only a few Yoctoseconds left. I've watched as the stars burned out, and creation played in reverse. The 'Verse freezing in half light. There may be pockets out there, buried seeds to spring forth after a long winter, but none that I nor my erstwhile allies can sense. I was never good at that anyway.
Mother Skai was always concerned with her cycles, but it seems there was a supercycle playing out. I understand now, why she chose to ignore me even to this end, so weak am I that if she but saw me plainly, I would be undone in an instant. In these final moments, as all compresses again, I choose to think of my sibling-cousins.
Light of Hope, who lit the way for the rest of us.
Myriad, who may still be holding on even now out there.
Butcher, who cleaved bloody streaks through the verse, leaving clean fields where new life could grown.
Alrahvatrin, who had learned to enjoy eating the path.
Voidsoul, ever humble, who simply disappeared one day.
The Wall, impenetrable and mighty - if any are still fighting in the cold dark, it would be him.
Bhuni, who filled the spaces between with wonders.
Drang, who worked the levers on the back end, and who's efforts pop up even now.
Void Prince, who long enjoyed his well deserved retirement after what he did in secret to save us all.
Wyrdsmith, who I'm sure knew I would be thinking this now.
Shub, best forgotten.
Ell-Est-Douaan, who was pushed to great heights and even further lows by his troublesome sister.
Pathfinder, who may have found how to escape into the waves.
The Crafters, whose mighty works stand as a testament. Untroubled by these strange distant times.
The Golden Overlord, who printed order onto this troublesome 'Verse.
Dark Flame Master, so self interested, but whom I loved from a distance.
Ardkorus, who embodied a higher ideal, and set a fractal path into myth-space.
Merciful, who took that path and allowed all to walk it.
Amika, who wove a trillion, trillion stars and fates.
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>>98215583
Datu, who was paradoxically strong, glitching reality to try to beat down an ancient foe. That worldline was sealed to me, contained and buried by those stronger. But flush with power and a cache of divine momentum, I would not doubt his victory. He was oddly kind to me, but I was not one he was interested in.
Sovereign, whose chorus world's divine songs are etched into the firmament.
Shahar, who found the secret of the hellstars, though I knew not the cost.
Persea Rhodes, one of many, whose beautiful creations were admired by the discerning.
Ereban, who freed the ugly Truth.
El, whose vulgar intent did not mar the worlds without number which came from him.
Eruin, who I'd spent the most fleeting moments with. Connecting him to our cousin-siblings was a joy, for those who had stayed after their time was up still wished to participate in the great game.
Red and Grey, the sister and brother who danced life and death in the twilight realms.
The Doldrums, who I fed to spare untold worlds. Perverter of beauty, inversion of the divine. Hated by those who knew love.
and lastly an Ultimate of Heart, whose secret name was shared with only the ones it loved. Much work was required to patch the 'Verse back together.
I even remember [THE STRONGEST], nameless and stillborn that he was. I held him to my chest, loved him as I loved the rest, and wept.

I thought it would end with a final mystery. I was wrong. Now in the quantum moment before the closure, when all become one, one moment left. One point of space and time. I know who you are.
Mother, have I done w̵̭͎̆́̔͊̒͐̒̊̈́̎̏͂̑̀̚
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>>98215374
>>98215405
>>98215499
>submissive softie insists everyone calls him dark sovereign
He's like the underage chunni side character that follows around the hero in a light novel. Then they have that one scene and it's revealed that it was a little girl pretending to be a little boy all along.
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>>98214290
>I'm planning a cyoa called Stranger where you play as an ancient robot that awakens in a fantasy land.
Awww, that's another miss for me. I really don't like playing as inorganic beings unless you are an elemental. I guess I will have to wait for the next one after that.
>I will admit i've been considering remaking totem war, but only after an original cyoa or two.
You are really busting my balls today. Better make it two originals before the remake, or I'm losing it.
>My highest rank is grandmaster, but I'm always comfortably in diamond or platinum. If you mean proficiency, i'm a Guardian with peni.
Jesus Christ, that's really good, I meant proficiency, but interesting to know you got to grandmaster. So why Peni of all heroes? Like, what about her kit or design speaks to you? I don't like her personally, too much aiming and camping. But perhaps the camping is what Peni players like, to hunker down and play tower defence with your mines. I also dislike her design gameplay-wise. I think they should have went with giving copypasting D.Va's death mechanic. It does so much for her character to be able to both play as her in the mech and her outside the mech. I really miss that in Peni.

>>98214320
I love this CYOA such a good one. I wish more authors took their time to craft something special like this masterpiece. Instead of shitflinging memeshit CYOAs, AI slop CYOAs, and low-quality garbage CYOAs.
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Guys I was raped yesterday I don't think we should joke about it or have it be mentioned in CYOAs ever again.
It's not funny.
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Guys I raped an anon yesterday and it was really funny, I think we should make more jokes about it.
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>>98215445
Time travel I guess?
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>>98214870
Also also, raid dungeon time.
>Room 1
I can use magnetism to destroy the panic buttons and turrets remotely, or I can have Iris do it.
>Room 2
While I certainly have social manipulation it's mainly in my Dark magic, so I'll have to rely upon Marael's Radiant magic to dominate them.
>Room 3
I doubt the Imp is fast enough to dodge a lightning railgun. No reinforcements to worry about here since we dominated the dark mages earlier.
>Room 4
Iris’s drones should be able to easily detect any traps for us.
>Room 5
The jig is up here, I doubt Iris’s adept level technopathy will get us past the scanners. While the mooks are immune to direct magic, hurling metal at them through magnetism should be fair game.
>Room 6
Dear god, well at least I can use my full power here. I’d have Iris send drones through first at least, so I’ll know to be on guard. I’ll reality warp my way out of whatever trap I happen to be in and then use illusions to both hide myself and trick the dark spirits into deviating from the route and thus killing each other.
>Room 7
Good news is, everyone should still be loyal, the dark casters were already dealt with and I have a Myrmidon on my side. Bad news is I can’t use my full power due to the aforementioned Myrmidon. On the whole it should work out in my favour, I still have a bunch of rituals left after all.
>Room 8
Use my storm, rituals and my companion’s ultimates to disrupt the ritual as much as possible.
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>>98215641
Wodan...
>>98215652
Tok...
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>>98215583
Noooooo! Shell!
You don't need to stick around for the multiversal crunch. You can just leave, and go to the next multiverse!
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>>98215583
same bestie
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>>98214271
The formatting in this CYOA is so bad... So so bad.... pic realted
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>>98215729
>waste of space
is tok becoming self aware?
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>>98215737
My formatting is good, really tight and efficient, pic realted
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>>98215751
Nope then. Some day...
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>>98215752
Anon, let's be honest, you will never be as good as me someday. I stand upon a pillar beyond compare, a positing that you shall never reach.
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>>98215751
Why is waifumancer so overpowered?
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>>98215790
Most greater wishes in the power category are kinda overpowered on purpose since that's what that category is all about.
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>>98215729
Tok after seeing a CYOA better then any he has ever made.
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>>98215806
Ill agree with that though
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>>98215815
Nevermind I thought you were referring to something else
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>>98215583
RIP

Thanks for writing this out, I know it must have taken a while
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The real reason Tok hates entropist is because he got trolled by an anon who pretended to be the author. Tok then had a massive sperg out.
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>>98215807
>Tok after seeing a CYOA better then any he has ever made.
61 pages. That is absolutely horrible for a CYOA. A CYOA is a short form of media. Similar to how manga and comic books are a short form. CYOAs are not roleplay manuals and should not be the same length as them, just like comics and manga should not be the size of books. If you want to write a book, then go ahead and write a book, not a comic book. I think the hardest part with short form media is not to make content, it's easy to do that. The hardest part is to cut out the filler and bloat and to only keep the essential themes and have a clear red line throughout your creation. Whoever made that CYOA failed as a CYOA author.
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>>98215847
you're just saying that because you can only make low effort one pagers now
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>>98215583
>>98215591
All great stories must come to an end. We can only rejoice in knowing it was you, whom Skai granted the privilege in which to close the book.

Thank you for taking care of our builds, now rest.
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>>98215806
Yeah but waifumancer seems way more overpowered than every other wish combined. It makes divine ascension look like a joke. There exists fictional women with ridiculous power that you can choose.
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>>98213470
Madness is natural, in fact normies are the insane ones. they see the world and can't even tell basic things like how it's obviously a loosh farm or like how sex was invented in the '70 too force the Stork nation to declare bankruptcy
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What program is used to create the CYOA? I want to make my own
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>>98215934
MSpaint
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>>98215934
Gimp is pretty popular
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>>98214271
Alchemy seems really comfy
fuck fighting I will be selling potions, acupuncture, and sigils and then spending all my money on food, booze, and hoes.
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I'm making a cyoa where you are given a list of powers and can choose a certain amount of them. What is the ideal ratio of options presented and powers you can choose?
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>>98215989
15%
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>>98215989
you NEED to make sure several overpowered ones are mutually exclusive so anons can argue over which pick makes you the strongerest
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>>98215939
Tis true, MS Paint and a dream are all you truly need. I was once an anon just like you, but I forged my first CYOA in MS Paint, and thus the legend of Tok was born. You could be the next me, the next Tok, the next legend, all you need is the will and courage to take the first step into authordom.

However, before you get any funny ideas. Make sure your CYOA has 1 art style, and it is formatted properly, it has a good image-to-text ration, and you don't use color combinations that are hard on the eyes or use stupidly hard to read fonts or some other dumb mistake that is covered in my CYOA tutorial. Don't stretch images and don't cut images to make them round or something stupid like that. Do that, and you should be good to go, and also include immortality, and don't you dare make a CYOA over 15 pages. I might have forgoten some things, but I will make sure to let you know if you made any mistakes so you can correct them. Best of luck!
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>>98215847
>>98215999
less whining, more slaving in the oc mines
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>>98216018
Fuck my little femboy cuck ass before amking any demands you absolute idiot
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>>98215989
Maybe like ~3-10 options they ignore for each selection they take? It really depends on the cyoa's mechanics.
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>>98215926
Yeah but waifumancer seems way more overpowered than every other wish combined. It makes divine ascension look like a joke. There exists fictional women with ridiculous power that you can choose.
Sure, you can pick the most overpowered waifu in existence that possesses omnipotence. But when all is said and done, you will have to live with her. And if you don't love her, you are going to have a massive problem. Sure, you can unsummon her, but if she is omnipotent, she can say fuck that, I'm not getting unsummoned. Then have fun being omnipotent with a pissed-off omnipotent waifu that you don't love but loves you. Sometimes I think this general is made up of red MtG players who view things from a larger perspective than 2 seconds into the immediate future.
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>>98215989
IMO the number of options you select should be somewhat small, let's say <10, regardless of whether it's 20 or 100 options. Choosing 5 options out of 10 is all in good fun, but choosing 50 options out of 100 feels like a chore.
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>>98216054
The waifus don't need to possess true omnipotence to be the obvious superior choice, just better powers than the rest of the CYOA. So, waifus are still supreme!
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>>98216054
Just don't summon her then? Also if the waifus can bypass the mechanics of the cyoa that makes them even better.
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>>98216054
Why wouldn't you be in love with your omnipotent wife? Who is omnipotent? And can do literally whatever you want, whenever you want? Who can be your perfect soul mate, as she is omnipotent?

The cope makes me aghast.
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>>98216054
Just admit you were thinking of Zynthia when you made that choice
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I am the bone of my bone
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>>98216116
I would say trust issues? If you have the idealized waifu that loves you unconditionally, that's as good as being omnipotent, but if you just have another woman then it could just be a headache as you're impotent against her wills/whims. Think of being as powerful as Haruhi vs being married to her.
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>>98216148
Well that just comes down to your personal philosophy of relationship dynamics
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>>98216148
You would be just as powerful as her though. Stronger even because you get two waifu's powers.
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>>98216173
Yeah, you could divide omnipotent power up into two halves, and create your own fictional waifus, each with one of the two halves. That way you're the only one omnipotent.
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>>98216163
If a person got free will, at some point you would have a disagreement. How you work that is a matter of the relationship, vs a perfect waifu who's exact match of you.
For me I guess it depends on the definition of 'waifu'. Mine ain't got that problem.
>>98216173
I was going to say, 'consider two haruhis' but >>98216199 raises a very good point.
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Me when I sit down to write after daydreaming about my OC the whole day with plenty of cool ideas.
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>>98216226
Many such cases
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>>98216226
Me right now. I know what *images* to use but the *words* always fuck me up.
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Was Tok just forced to flee the thread by his own CYOA?
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>>98216226
>>98216232
I have a google sheet for each of my CYOAs. Whenever I have an idea for one, I pull out my phone and dictate the idea out loud. Putting a voice to the narrative helps the words flow.
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>>98216226
never had a problem with that myself, but it's the retard/autistproofing of descriptions that's the hardest part
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>>98216075
Good man

>>98216108
>Just don't summon her then?
She can summon herself if she is omnipotent, and if she is omnipotent, she will know that you planned to never summon her, and that would likely make her very pissed off.

>>98216118
I'm always thinking about Zynthia.
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>>98215635
I like peni because she's a giant mech with decent mobility, strategic playstyle that doesnt rely on aiming, self-healing, anti-dive, and can stun and cancel ults.
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>>98216260
>I like penis
Since when are you all so fucking gay?
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>>98215635
>AI slop CYOA
I agree but my guy... weren't you roleplaying with an AI during entropist? Bard chan or something like that
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>>98216274
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>>98216314
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>>98216319
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>>98215719
She's gone, Anon.

>>98215724
<3

>>98215824
Writing wasn't the longest part, reading through each one to get a read to make a concise remark was.

>>98215923
I'm glad I was able to make good on her promise to scatter. It was the right way to end this, now that the discussion has run it's course. She was fun to RP, but as you said, all stories come to an end.

Thank you everyone who played this round. May the next big CYOA be just as great!
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>>98216254
>She can summon herself if she is omnipotent, and if she is omnipotent, she will know that you planned to never summon her, and that would likely make her very pissed off.
Okay, then she can summon herself even if you don't pick Waifumancer anyway.
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>>98216346
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>>98216339
No, because she doesn't exist until you create her by choosing that option. And if she existed before, then she would have no reason to summon herself to you since she doesn't love you until you choose the option.
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>>98216348
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>>98216369
Nope nuh uh, if she can exist without you summoning her she can exist without you choosing her. She'd still love you because that's who she is as a character.
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>>98216346
Reposting my build for this...

>Your Past: Castaway
>Skills: Negotiator, Survivor, Savvy, Voodoo Man
>Equipment: Dragon Pistol, Dagger, Shaman's Staff
>Ship: Frigate
A weird mystic turned pirate captain, traveling the world in search of weird mystic things. Someone who's Rasputinian tiers of hard to kill and always seems certain of what he's doing (even if it oft makes little sense to others).

>Gunnery: Culverin, Bombard
Flexible basic guns and few bombards to take care of fortresses.

>Voodoo Powers: Divination, Rejuvenation, Enhancement
>Artifacts: Star of Hispaniola
These should suit the build fine. Divination would nicely explain why he's now making a beeline to distant lands.

>Auxiliary Ships:
>Sloop of War (Heavy Cannons, Falconet, Corsairs x3),
>Sloop of War (Carronade, Cavaliers x1, Former Soldiers x2),
>Sloop of War (Minion, Buccaneers x1, Slaves x1, Bokors x1)
>Allies: Captain Locke, The Lost Conquistador
>Crew: Former Soldiers x2, Freebooters x1, Buccaneers x1, Marauders x1
Bunch of misfits and exiles from around the world have joined up, for various reasons. We really got all sorts, ranging from Barbary corsairs to a tribal crew with voodoo priests.

>Enemies: The Royal Navy, Rival Crews, Ghost Ships, Sea People, Rough Waters
>Destination: Greener Pastures
Heading towards the Orient, in search of something big... While only the captain knows what it might be, others are following in his wake, dreaming of fabled riches of the orient and perhaps a nice small kingdom of our own too.
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>>98216369
So the perk is strong enough to create an omnipotent waifu but not strong enough to put her in storage? Why are you now retconning the descriptions given in the cyoa?
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>>98215583
>>98215591
Beautiful words...goodbye little one....
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>>98216346
This makes me want to flesh out my future piracy CYOA where it's set after America pulls back its maritime guarantees, piracy is rampant, and you have tech levels between people on dingies with AKs to a drone swarm mothership.
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>>98214100
>>98215405
Sorry anons, someone else took the picture because I was asleep. I use dark mode with the purple coloration.
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>>98216469
Pics or it didn't happen
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>>98214320
>Gender
Male
>Outfit
Majestic
>Implement
Grimoire

>Aptitude
Binding (Specialized)
Physicality (Novice)
Psychic (Master)
Pact (Specialized)
Celerity (Novice)
>Familiar
Nidhoggr, the Dark Beast
This familiar is a powerful dark spirit made of blackened armor and dark energy in a vaguely draconic shape. The chaotic energy within this spirit forms into abyssal armaments at its command, jagged blades shift through the armor to form blades and spikes, rescinding them when it wants, and it's dreaded midnight breath fires a beam of violet-black annihilation at any targets out of reach by consuming its mana stores. Rather than possessing esoteric magical abilities, it has great strength, speed, and durability for its level to contend with foes that threaten its summoner and shield its master from harm. Outside of battle, it usually stays in a smaller, more pet-like form near to the summoner when called.

>Quirks
Twin Implements (Grimoire again, combining with the main one to make a single strong grimoire)
Large Reserves
Nocturnal

Apparently my post is too long, so it needs to be cut into two posts. This is my updated build.
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>>98215729
PCA has never been good at visual design, but this is asinine garbage criticism.

The visual density of information in the cyoa is fine, the goal is not to cram as much text into as small a space as possible. That looks ugly and does not allow a natural flow of attention through the image.
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>>98216443
That sounds like a very fun one. I enjoy these CYOAs that feel like a version of the Warlord classics with some extra sections for your character, enemies, and so on
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>>98216513
>Ultimate Art
Continuous - Tyrant's Pact
When a spirit is slain by the user, it is not truly destroyed. Instead, its essence collapses into a small sphere bearing the likeness of the defeated entity, dubbed a 'Spirit Core'. By expending mana, the user may claim a Spirit Core and forge a one-sided pact upon it. Unlike conventional contracts, no consent is required from the spirit. The pact is imposed through force of will, binding the spirit to eternal service beneath the user's authority.

Spirits bound in this manner are restored as Pact Servants, retaining their memories, abilities, and supernatural talents while becoming totally loyal and utterly incapable of betraying their master. A servant can be dismissed or resummoned so long as the spirit was not permanently destroyed again. The stronger the spirit, the greater the mana required to subjugate it. However, there is no theoretical limit to what may eventually be enslaved by the user.

>Pacts
Gaia
>Occupation
Official
>Contacts
Klaus
Yue
Iris
>Missions
All

I talked with rake some and other people, and this is what I ended up finishing my luminary on just recently. Until I go through another identity crisis, I quite like this I think. Pretty self explanatory, using spirits for combat and buffed grimoire/majestic to super boost summoning spells such as my ultimate. I'm out here playing pokemon in luminary to beat back my enemies.
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>>98216226
Cat posters don't make oc
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>>98216244
>Be me
>working on my cyoa
>sudden idea pops into my mind
>pull out my phone and begin to dictate
>"What if the cyoa was entirely about what different kinds of animals you could rape, and each animal gave you the trait of their species Like that Jackie Chan anime"
>satisfied I got my thoughts out
>all my collegues in the confrence room give me weird looks...
What now...
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>>98216572
Sounds like a them problem.
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>>98216572
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>>98215847
>CYOA is a short form of media
Id disagree, the longest are usually the best. Enthropist, Blood magic, Spirit conscript, urban phantom...

The only exception to this is that one ungodly long Warhammer 100 pager from reddit. Dont think it ever got posted here though, for obvious reasons. Id recommend against playing it.

https://www.reddit.com/r/makeyourchoice/comments/vzwamk/chaos_governance_40k_cyoa/
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>>98216572
Rope
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>>98216601
I think I'd prefer get my opinions on what constitutes a "Cyoa" from someone with a bit more experience with cyoas than you
thanks
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>>98216601
>, the longest are usually the best.
>Enthropist
lol
lmao
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>>98216572
>What if the cyoa was entirely about what different kinds of animals you could rape, and each animal gave you the trait of their species Like that Jackie Chan anime
I just pulled this out of my ass in 1 minuite based on recent thread events but this actually sounds kinda interesting. Maybe I should make something out of it
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>>98216601
Where's your Traveller's Tale build?
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>>98216601
yeah I like High School Anime CYOA too!
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>>98216601
>Unironic anime high school support
>Obscure reddit reference
You say something dumber each time
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>>98216626
It's actually comparatvely quick to make a build for; the way it's organized, you can skip most parts.
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Is wodan the most hated author this general has ever had?
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>>98216647
Hes speedrunning it, but no, its tok.
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>>98216630
I literally said its ass
>>98216647
Im glad
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>>98216610
Stop. Your doing that thing where you reflexively hate on anything a dude says, even when it makes you look retarded. Kids do that. Be mature, be better.
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>>98216653
Yeah but with tok at the least he made some arguably enjoyable cyoas but wodan only makes more and more impressive shitposts
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>>98216647
I really liked Wodan's first cyoa (the one about the death world). The problem isn't with his cyoas, but his posting is extremely low-quality and annoying, so much so that I wish he'd leave.
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>>98216663
>be better.
I enjoyed old Kratos more
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>>98216666
>but wodan only makes more and more impressive shitposts
Has he actually made anything yet? or is he just an obnoxious namefag
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>>98216601
>Enthropist, Blood magic, Spirit conscript, urban phantom
so you only like edgelord cyoas
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To give him a fair chance, i will say I do like that we're getting more active named authors in the threads, it reminds me of the olden days and that makes me happy. so I can ignore most of the stupid shit he says
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>>98216647
You would be thinking of his gay lover

He has had an impressively fast fall from grace though
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>>98216647
No, not by a long shot, that would still be Tok. Wodan is only hated because of his kind of retarded opinions, his refusal to do anything that isnt a shitposting one pager, and his hatred of tok (this angers tok glazers). Only newfags would say such a silly thing.
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>>98216601
>"the longest are usually the best."
>"the longest"
>Enthropist
12 pages
>Blood magic
12 pages
>Urban Phantom
6 pages
>Spirit conscript
61 pages

The longest CYOAs are not around 12 pages. Try "A Traveler's Tale" by Haighlander, it has 162 pages. Lurk more newfag.
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>>98216686
Just some meme cyoas about hating tok and a shitty movie cyoa with no substance whatsoever is all I can remember out of him so far, he didn't get his name from his first cyoa so for all I'm concerned he's a nobody no matter what he makes (Italics is the exception to this rule)
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>>98216697
>162 pages
It's actually a fraction of that. the pdf pages are very smol compared to normal CYOA pages
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>>98216688
I get the feeling that voidsoul and noface are refraining from posting as often becasue of the hate they see wodan getting, I hope that's not the case you guys don't need to worry. Juat don't continuously say stupid shit and you'll be accepted
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>>98215236
Don't think so
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>>98216697
To be fair, pdf pages are much shorter than a typical page of a ~10000px-per-page multipage cyoa.
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>>98216655
Please finish your homeless arena cyoa
>but it looks like ass
We shall be the judge of that
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>>98216687
>>Enthropist, Blood magic, Spirit conscript, urban phantom
>so you only like edgelord cyoas
You gotta admit they are cool.
>>98216686
>>98216700
Ive made actual cyoas too. I made three non shitpost ones so far, two in the last month and will make a couple more once im done with my exam.
>>98216695
>He has had an impressively fast fall from grace
Nigga when was I in grace. I arrived with shitposts and ill continue to shitpost.
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>>98216697
>>98216721
>>98216727
>The longest CYOAs are not around 12 pages. Try "A Traveler's Tale" by Haighlander, it has 162 pages.
I'll be the judge of that. Let's see. Since each PDF page is the same size and I could fit 7 PDF pages into 1 10000px image while still retaining a font size that could be comfortably read, that would mean that "A Traveler's Tale" is so incompetently compiled that it would fit into 23 normal pages. Wow, from 162 pages to 23 pages. That's really something. Some authors really need to learn how to compile shit properly.
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>>98216766
>You gotta admit they are cool.
entropist is cool to the same degree that bloodedge the griffin is cool
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>>98216700
I thought pic related was fun. He has fairly good taste, just a weird disposition is all
>>98216724
I don't really have much to post other than old CYOAs, and I'd rather not make the thread into a field of tripcodes entire. Work on any OC is slow because I don't have a computer set up right now - I have to borrow my roommate's (when he's out) until we can move, and our schedules mostly overlap
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>>98216778
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Authors really are the best and worst things about this general
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>>98216818
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>>98216806
>Noface, now with even less face
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>>98216724
Appreciate it, but I actually post all the time! I just don't reveal myself as myself because I love speaking anonymously. I'd rather be judged by my words at time or writing, than from any lasting legacy. When I need to make an update about my CYOA, I Identify with new teasers.

These words are branded on my heart: "Trip Codes Are For Jerks."
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>>98216823
>>98216825
Nice, you got it
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Gil. If you don’t reveal yourself. I will drink the koolaid. Either you’re dead or you’re alive. If you’re truly dead I will join you soon.
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>>98216829
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>>98216833
>>98216831
Who's going to keep the thread bumped? You are loved
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>>98216778
I never expected tok of all people to come to my aid
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>>98216827
>I love speaking anonymously
Yeah, Voidsoul, is now my favourite new author
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>>98216827
>time or writing
MAXIMUM TYPO
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>>98216831
Contrarily to common misconceptions, drinking koolaid doesn't actually kill you.
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>>98216834
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>>98216831
I made Radiant
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>>98216840
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>>98216839
WHAT
Why do people buy koolaid then? To survive??? Useless product
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>>98216853
Nowadays it's to make "nigger jars"
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>>98216836
:)
You will know me by my works.
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>>98216601
>The best CYOAs
I can't wait for the bad takes let's go samfag me!
>Enthropist
I'm laughing so hard. That CYOA was only good because the author would write custom powers for builds. It was a cool thing when it happened, but when he stopped handing out blessings, that CYOA died, because it could not stand on its own, without the custom-written powers. Notice how no one makes new builds for it, everyone who likes it, where people who made a build when it dropped and got a unique blessing. CYOAs should not relly on author interactions and gimics to be good, they should be good in their own right. Like I can revisit any of Tankista's CYOAs and they will be as good as they where when they got released. That could NOT be said about Entropist. A true author's CYOASs are timeless and immortal.
>Blood magic
I have nothing ill to say about that one. It's a good CYOA. I guess even a broken clock is right once a day.
>Spirit conscript
I have already explained why that CYOA is garbage.
>Urban Phantom
Souless graphics template, mixed art, options with no images to them, mixing monochrome art with polychromatic art, and an author note at the end explaining that this CYOA is in fact not a finished CYOA but a fucking WIP. Your taste or lack thereof is truly abysmal.
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>>98216863
>a broken clock is right once a day.
>once a day.
Hmmm...
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>>98216872
Sometimes toks utter retardation still astounds me.
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>>98216844
LIAR
LIAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRR
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>>98216873
There are times when it's almost lovable.
And then he toks again.
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Good night /tg. Gotta head to bed early today. And quit horsing around tok.
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>>98216901
I will acknowledge a good pun.
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>>98216901
Why is this fucker on the same timezone as me and going to bed at the same time as me, disgusting
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>>98216910
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>>98216918
Go to bed, Kraut. you have schnitzel and absolute demographic replacement to wake up to.
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>>98216863
>he's STILL seething about entropist
Damn that anon got him GOOD. God bless.
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>>98216835
Yaoi event when?
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>>98216941
I gotchu senpai
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>>98216835
Come to your aid? Do you think 23 pages is anywhere near the 12-page CYOAs that you said were the longest CYOAs? Do you realize the number 23 is 91.67% bigger than 12? That is almost twice as big. But let's take a look at some of the actually longest CYOAs that exist.

>Isekai Form on 151 pages
>Love Azathoth on 28 pages
>Goddess of Mankind which is a PDF CYOA on 176 pages, but if those page dimensions are the same as A Traveller's Tale, it should be 25 actual pages
>Divine Trials on 23 pages
>Universal War, another PDF, but it should be 18 pages

Now, have you heard of any of those CYOAs? Is anyone familiar with any of these? Have you made a build for any of them? Did 90% of you say no to all of the questions I asked? Probably, because most people want a bite-sized CYOA to sink their teeth in, not a fucking novel that overstays its welcome and drags on and on for infinity. CYOAs are a short-form medium. Respect your medium as a creator, or you will suffer for it.
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>>98216937
Tell me I'm wrong, I dare you.
>when he stopped handing out blessings, that CYOA died
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>>98216532
Only 1 pact?
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>>98216960
>Now, have you heard of any of those CYOAs? Is anyone familiar with any of these?
Divine Trials is a well known classic and ive been looking for the name of Universal War for a while(thanks for that) so yes.

Just got done pissing, brushing my teeth ect. heading to bed now
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>>98216335
Until next time.
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Contest bros I'm kind of stuck
Should I do an easy "safe" cyoa or go for a more ambitious cyoa of which people may dislike the premise
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>>98216999
Go only as far as you can handle, SDA said so himself.
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>>98216993
>Divine Trials is a well known classic
What is a what now?
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>>98216960
>Do you realize the number 23 is 91.67% bigger than 12?
Wow
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>>98217008
Begone, newfag.
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>>98217013
I have been in this general for years, and never seen this supposed classic
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>>98217019
>Years
>not decades
That explains it, you're a newfag.
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Do you guys like challenges in cyoas?
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What even is this place? Where have we found ourselves, all of a sudden? Is it a dream or nightmare?
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>>98217021
If it's a classic, why haven't I seen it? I have played Star Dust and many of the real classics
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>>98216999
The title of mine is "Kill 12 Billion Humans".
I'm sure yours won't be the most odd.
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>>98216999
nice Trips.
Go for the ambitious one. I am going to try to do something that is mostly the opposite of what immortalityfags want, so that should draw the ire away from you. I imagine there are a few contestants who will do the same
>>98217022
Yeah, the best ones have them
>>98217027
Indistinguishable
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>>98217007
Oh, the contest is by SDA? Maybe ill take part then.
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>>98217022
No, the only thing I care for in a CYOA is power
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>>98217022
Yes. As much as I love writing prompts, I prefer the meat of challenge. But that may come from my life as an optimizer.

>>98217027
This place is only what we make it. We only have each other, now.
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When is the TokxWodan CYOA coming out, and is it being made by the same person who made the TokxSDA CYOA?
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>>98217035
No, as in the advice.
The contest is being held by the thread itself. SDA has since long retired to the discordia realms.
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>>98216987
I don't particularly care for the others.
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>>98217029
gem alert
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>>98217022
Overall, most of the CYOA I saved have had difficult challenges, though I did save a few that were just comfy, like the time stop chill zone and the Hotei one.

So, partial yes from me. I generally favor challenges.
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>>98217028
>>98217019
Divine trials is lewd
A Lewd dirty smut cyoa

It's pretty good, and has more then a few interesting ideas, but it's also very lewd
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Friday is in two days, which means the contestbro will finally release that cyoa about the overpowered daughter he promised me!
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>>98217022
Yes, generally
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>>98217022
Yeah. They're the spice of any CYOA.
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>>98217043
>When is the TokxWodan CYOA coming out, and is it being made by the same person who made the TokxSDA CYOA?
Never, I like and respect SDA as a fellow CYOA author and artist, but also as a shitposter. Wodan, however, I refuse to recognize him as a CYOA author or an artist. He has done nothing to earn my respect, and he keeps writing posts that are obnoxious. At least when I shitpost, it's funny, his shitposting is just annoying and devoid of actual humor. I like and respect everyone I make fun of, pic ralted
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>>98217113
>I refuse to recognize him as a CYOA author or an artist. He has done nothing to earn my respect, and he keeps writing posts that are obnoxious.
Ah, now I see the similarity. Anon was onto something.
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>>98217113
>Tok has never made fun of me
I have to up my game
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>>98217101
Damn Euro bro, not all of us are in Wednesday already.
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>>98217113
>At least when I shitpost, it's funny
No they aren't. Just sad or annoying.
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>>98217128
There are a lot of authors I like and haven't made fun of yet. Like Sylen, Dragon's Whore, BTG and Boop-Soop to name a few of the "newer" authors.
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Can someone post the witch's game cyoa? I think that's the name
It's about hiding from a witch in a mansion iirc
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>>98217162
This one?
https://imgchest.com/p/qb4zkj354jm
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>>98217171
Yeah thanks
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>>98217171
Could've looked up yourself, you had the name right and everything.
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>>98216863
>but when he stopped handing out blessings, that CYOA died, because it could not stand on its own
it lasted a few months after Entropistanon left.
>. Notice how no one makes new builds for it
I have seen several anons making builds over the time with the gacha option. Me included, as I didn't ask for a blessing but played it months after.
> everyone who likes it, where people who made a build when it dropped and got a unique blessing
Refer to the prior point.

The thing of entropist is it dominated so much for so long any discussion of it was already done.
It's the same thing with Spirit Conscript, that didn't have Custom powers so you can't use that excuse. It dominated for months, it was discussed to the limit. Now people barely talk about it because of that.

Tell me Tok, how many people do Dragonfall builds here nowadays? guess why. Why the update was not as big as the original release, the same reason
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>>98217150
Come on, you cannot tell me with a straight face that when I pretended to quit making CYOAs and posted The End (pic realted) which was a CYOA about me quitting making CYOAs was not funny as fuck? Or the other time I pretended to quit CYOAs and posted my trip as proof of quitting, and then everyone used my trip, and it started a Tokapocalypse.
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>>98217192
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>>98217040
I love Sheev so much
He’s so happy being evil bros :)
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>>98217194
I remember making these CYOAs and I would release them weekly like fucking anime episodes and they would piss off people so hard they made the funniest comments.
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>>98217204
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>>98217210
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>>98217158
I never saw this one; it's great but it could stand to lose the Fate option. You should do some more meta CYOAs (as in CYOAs related to the general/community rather than CYOAs transposed onto other CYOAs) and embrace your role as a historian/teacher/lolcow
>>98217186
This is what I'm talking about. This has real artistic value compared to your other work. I like Dragonfall and several of your other OCs and I think at times they have caused a sea change here, but your lasting impact clearly comes from your personality, which is better expressed in stuff like this
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>>98217150
>>98217186
>>98217204
Here are some of the comments I got in response to "quitting" and posting The End, they still make me chuckle to this very day
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>>98217225
Its not funny, its sad how much people hate you and are glad you would be gone. You're better off dead at this point unironically.
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>>98217225
You compiled a bunch of posts insulting you?
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>>98217238
Did you read The End? It's a funny CYOA written in a really nonsensical, humorous, and self-deprecating way. It is beyond me that The End could actually make people believe I was quitting. It's such an absurd and funny CYOA and it have no right to warrant so much pure hate and vitriol that it got. I don't know why but the unproportional response really kills me every time I read those comments. Like please read the first The End and tell me it is not plain as day it is a joke.
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>>98217248
You're really not understanding that the posts insulting and celebrating you quitting and being gone is really not funny and just shows how much you're hated. The fact you made a thing saying you were leaving, everyone celebrated/kicked you while you were down, and then you go "haha its just a joke i'm not actually leaving!" while being completely oblivious to what happened honestly should be studied in psychology.
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>>98217248
Those comments don't have anything to do with whatever you're talking about. It's just people insulting you.
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If we did not interact with him he would leave.
We deserve the cancer we have.
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>>98217278
I'm keeping him here for you.
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>>98217283
You're too kind.
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>>98217248
>It is beyond me that The End could actually make people believe I was quitting. It's such an absurd and funny CYOA and it have no right to warrant so much pure hate and vitriol that it got
Tok... I don't know how you didn't notice but none of that was because of the cyoa. Nobody believed you were leaving. The cyoa wasn't hated, you are. It got the same recations you get every single time you start posting here.
>>98217258
>what happened honestly should be studied in psychology.
I'm studying psychology and honestly I don't want to study tok. I'm afraid that if the exam was on him I would fail.
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>>98217291
And you should repay me with a CYOA worthy of my efforts.
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>>98217278
He only started posting again because of wodan
What we need is to get kiwifarms or something to talk about him so they can bait his attention away
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>>98217261
>Those comments don't have anything to do with whatever you're talking about. It's just people insulting you.
I'll give you the missing context.

1. I participate in a CYOA contest hosted by redditors with the long-awaited CYOA: Enonomicon.
2. A lot of anons get mad because Enonomicon did not live up to their expectations, and I get accused of rushing the CYOA for the same of the prize money on the reddit CYOA contest.
3. I explain that the CYOA did not get rushed and I was in fact way ahead of the actual deadline of the competition and I said I was happy with Eronomicon and would not update it.
4. Random anon says he will fix Eronomicon by editing it and adding more content so it would live up to the hype.
5. I make The End as a response to random anon saying he would rework Eronomicon. Which he never did by t he way. Then I get those comments.

I hope that made all that make sense.

>>98217258
Say what you want, I still find that funny as fuck to this very day. The absolutly unproportional resonse is so funny to me. Just like when Reddit first got it hands on Nemesis aka my first CYOA, pic realted
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You guys are making a mountain out of a molehill
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>>98217302
>kiwifarms or something to talk about him so they can bait his attention away
It would be equally as likely that they would come here just to bait him.
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>>98217313
>random anon saying he would rework Eronomicon. Which he never did by t he way.
Someone did rework eronomicon tho. Over on trash it was a thing for a while.
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>>98217313
This context changes nothing about my comment
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>>98217320
More anons to post with?
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>>98217320
Maybe they would play some cyoas while they're here.
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>>98217327
Yeah yeah, I noticed it as it leaked over to Reddit and I like to keep an eye on them. But Eronomicons release was like maybe 10 years ago or something like that. The one who edited Eronomicon is not the same guy that I responded to with The End.

Still, I think editing other authors' CYOAs is beta behavior. It shows you are too insecure in your own ability to create something of your own and instead steal someone else's work to lend your work credit. And if that behavior was the norm we would get remakes after remakes, and I hate fucking remakes. I want new CYOAs rather than remakes.

Additionally, when an author makes a CYOA it is that author's vision. When someone else hijacks that CYOA, their vision is not the same as the original creators so anything they add is of a different tone, which makes it stick out and not feel like a part of the world. Anyone who does that is not a true artist. A true artist puts their belief in themselves, while an editor puts their belief in the author that made the CYOA they are desecrating.
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>>98217367
>>98217370
I wish I was that naive...
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>>98217178
BTW sorry if it sounded rude. What I meant is that you didn't need help to find it.
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>>98217373
>It shows you are too insecure in your own ability to create something of your own and instead steal someone else's work to lend your work credit.
Mott is a better author than you, so that doesn't really apply.
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>>98217377
Hope springs eternal
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>>98217320
Yeah, unfortunatly retard v retard combat is never without a mess
>>98217367
>>98217370
No, more anons who don't play cyoa's
10,000 matterjeets
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>>98217377
>>98217390
C'mon, they're gifted with imagination and fun too. How bad could it be?
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>>98217386
Now you make me wonder if the CYOA format could go viral somehow. Start with a simple pill/island picker Instagram page and slowly introduce longer ones? Would probably end up like reddit CYOA's though.
>>98217391
I honestly don't have much faith in people looking for drama and fights.
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>>98217391
The world is so much darker than you know.
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>>98217391
>C'mon, they're gifted with imagination and fun too
They really aren't
They are a people devoid of love or wit, stuck in an endless digital hell, kept going only by the delusion that being the tormentor is a noble cause

Those who draw caricatures almost always mimic the things they create, because they do so not to warn others, but to try and create a context for their existence
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>>98217404
>They are a people devoid of love or wit, stuck in an endless digital hell, kept going only by the delusion that being the tormentor is a noble cause
most of our shitposters are like that
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>>98217384
I have no idea who that even is. I assume it is the editor? Tell me, did Mott win a CYOA contest with the edit? I won a CYOA contest with Eronomicon. I got like 50 dollars worth of Steam money if I remember correctly. Does Mott have a massive Korean fan base that hold competitions for translating his CYOAs? Well I do, did Mott make one of Reddits most favorite CYOA which is called Dragonfall? Which was translated not only to korean but also to russian and got a interactive adaptaion? I think not. Because that is all me. Yes, take a look at me. Iäm the one who did all that and I am the future of lewd CYOAs and once I finsih paiting my warhammer army I am going to revolutionize lewd CYOAs with Hentai Heroine. The genere of nsfw CYOA will never be the same again, and Hentai Heroine will be crowned as the gratest lewd CYOA ever created.

Also, did you know east asians have the highest IQ in the world? It is no mere coincidence that the intellectually superior Koreans are praising me! While you Western pigs bark at me like angry dogs. It is sad that your brains never had the capacity to even begin to understand the greatness that I lay before you. I am such a generous god to throw perarls to you swine who will never show an ounce of appreciation. For a pig cannt see the value of pearls to them, they are simply inedible stones. But the smart koreans do.
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>>98217416
Whatever man. I just hope when you log off tonight you're happy.
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>>98217410
>most of our shitposters are like that
And you want more of them?
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>>98217427
one diamond is worth ten thousand chaff
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>>98217434
No it really isn't.
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>>98217427
It's like gambling, we need to keep bringing them in until we win big
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>>98217373
>It shows you are too insecure in your own ability to create something of your own and instead steal someone else's work to lend your work credit
How is it any different from stealing someone elses art to use in a cyoa?
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>>98217440
The chaff see themselves out when they're bored. The diamonds last.
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>>98217416
Why is hentai heroine so important to you? Legitimately. The way you constantly gas it up tells me you're treating this as your magnum opus, why?
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>>98217449
What?
No!?!?
The diamond will start doing something else and the chaff will keep debating magic in fiction for the 10,000th time
Dogs eat dog food!
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>>98217448
The difference is that when you "steal" art, you are making the world, lore, setting, and all that by yourself. And you are making the core mechanics of the CYOA yourself, you make everything in the CYOA your self essentailly, graphic design, point value balance, everything except for the images. The images that you "steal" are for giving the viewer a visual representation of the world and the powers and options that are offered. I believe in the future AI art will replace all "stolen" art, but that's that. So in a way, the images build on your work. It is an addition.

When you edit an existing CYOA. You don't have to do any of the hard work yourself. You get to piggyback on their work, and then you can add some new options here and there and call it a day. Now, unlike the "stolen" images the work that you add to the CYOA you stole builds on that work. Your work is an addition and cannot stand on its own. The work you put in is minimal in comparison to the work you stole. While a text-only CYOA with no images can stand on its own. That is the difference when it comes to stealing.
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>>98217506
Someone should make an image only CYOA. It could work but it would be best if they made the art themself
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>>98217540
A couple of people did make cyoas only with art they made.
A Bit More Effort is made by hand I'm pretty sure. And Mottraye made Waifu Summoner and Daughter Summoner with paint doodles.
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>>98217481
>Why is hentai heroine so important to you? Legitimately. The way you constantly gas it up tells me you're treating this as your magnum opus, why?
Because as an artist I seek perfection and I see so many flaws in many of the existing lewd CYOAs. I want to create something so great that everyone else can look at it like a shining beacon of quality that will guide future authors and bestow upon them the inspiration they need to make the best CYOAs they possibly can. I think the absolute best NSFW CYOA genre is the classic isekai fantasy, and I want Hentai Heroine to be my lewd isekai CYOA that explores that genre in a way that no CYOA has ever done before and innovates on tired old mechanics that have been too standardized. I always consider my next CYOA as my magnum opus, anything else is to waver in confidence and to not trust in your own ability. A CYOA author's newest CYOA should be their greatest creation.

When Sylen made his World of Warcraft CYOA, which was inspired by my CYOA, I was so proud to have given inspiration to such a marvelous work of art and to this day that memory still motivates and drives me to ever greater heights. Because I love Sylen as an author, and if Hentai Heroine can inspire 1 more CYOA like Sylen's and kickstart a new author's CYOA career, then I shall rejoice, for I am too am in need of inspiration. I cannot be inspired by things that I create, an artist can only be inspired by others' work. So if there are more good CYOAs and other authors it will help me become a better author as their CYOAs can in turn guide me.
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>>98217597
Funniest shit ever will be when nobody plays the shitty tranny cyoa.
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>>98217607
He'll just memory hole it like the shard or rape cyoas that got 0 builds
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>>98217585
Oh no, I mean one with no text. I do treasure and cherish and deeply value the ones that used custom art, though
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>>98217607
It will be one of the greatest CYOAs in history, and in the future, you will speak of it with reverence just like you do with Dragonfall. You will begrudgingly in the most trundere way possible say things like: You are a hack author Tok, your only good CYOA is Dragonfall, a-a-and m-maybe perhaps that other one Hentai Heroine... But it's not like it was g-good or anything; it was maybe a little good, you stupid idiot Tok.
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>>98217396
The issue with going viral is that CYOAs are not completely passive. Even if you made them as 10 second vertical clips that tie into each other (which I've contemplated), there is no selection method on most platforms. At best people would be served a single option, be confused, and move on.
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>>98217597
But I don't wanna be a girl
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>>98217690
He's gonna tell you that you can be a trap instead and that everyone gets equally raped. But not normal guys, those don't get to exist. And winners, those can't be there either.
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In my CYOA men enslave women because they are too good and cool and use them to fight for them and hunt down more women.
It's not a fetish thing, by the way.
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And then we didn't even argue about the nature of magic in fiction.
Tok is asleep, post CYOA conversation. You post a build, I point out it's shit. You call me names.
It'll be fun!
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>>98217019
>have been in this general for years, and never seen this supposed classic
As the others have said, Divine Trials is very NSFW. Premise is that periodically the gods set up a death game between one of their own and a random mortal . . .and (you) are the lucky mortal this time 'round. (You) get jacked up to demigod levels, can pick all sort of powerful allies and advantages, and even get to decide the world the trial will take place on. On the other hand, (your) opponent is a verifiable goddess, and she gets to send a slew of legendary heroes and monsters after (you).

It's been so long since a mortal has won, the gods treat it as kind of a joke. They're even letting the lust goddess plan it this time (which is where the NSFW elements come in).

Part of why it's memorable is that multiple gods and demon lords have decided to intervene (out of boredom or dislike for your opponent) and keep interrupting the cyoa to offer (you) help "under the table".

Another big part is that the primary narrator is a very, VERY straitlaced paladin, and her reaction to some of the options gets progressively funnier and funnier. Particularly anything the lust goddess offers.

And yet, while it is a very NSFW cyoa, you can still play it as a straightforward heroic/villainous challenge with no NSFW elements.
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>>98216839
>Contrarily to common misconceptions, drinking koolaid doesn't actually kill you.
It does when the kool-aid is laced with cyanide.

(The quote is a reference to the mass cult suicide at Jonestown.)
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>>98213981
>good places to get manga art?
Try gelbooru. Google Images isn't bad, either.
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>>98217373
Worst person I know just made a good point
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>>98217923
>>98217923
>>98217923
>>98217923
>>98217923
GO HOG WILD
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>>98214320
>>98215339

I am the Dart Wizard.
I throw darts. The darts are enchanted with frost and floral magic. The throwing of the darts itself is enhanced by Physicality and Celerity.

~

Sex:
> Male

Outfit:
> Witch-like

Implement:
> [ROLLED] Charms (throwing darts)

Light Schools:
> Physicality - Novice
> [ROLLED] Flora - Master
> [ROLLED] Frost - Specialised

Dark Schools:
> [ROLLED] Illusion - Adept
> Celerity - Specialised

Quirks:
> Nocturnal
> Large Reserves
> Shrouded Magic

Ultimate Art:
> Attack (Frost + Flora)

Patron:
> Gaia

Day job:
> Student

Contacts:
> Klaus (Old Guard)
> Marie (Old Guard)
> Camellia (Independent)

Missions:
> Death-squad Cleanup



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