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>>98233165>Couldn't find it a few days ago>Now it's posted in every threadWell, I hope people liked seeing a classic.
>>98233149OC?
>>98233192nah, this one's very old. just doesnt get posted often. 4plebs says last post date was 2020
>>98233165More convenient 2 pager version.
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>>98233149>You're able to see someone's distant future by looking at them.>You'll die if you see someone's death using your clairvoyance.I don't get it. Do you control what you do and do not see with your clairvoyance? If not, do you have a random chance to just die whenever you use your power? Is the clairvoyance automatic? Do you have to wear a blindfold just to get by?
>>98233207>jpgBoo!
>>98233183I had forgotten about it and meant to make a build the last two threads so figured I'd post one more time>>98233207Thanks dog
>>98233229quality sama I beg forgiveness the png file size is over 8mb
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Banana Cream Pie (Banana + Egg + Milk) is the best. Change my view.
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>>98233338That sounds like you want a mommy gf, and while I don't think I could convince you off that path, I personally seek a gf to make into a motherMilk + Maple + Tomato
>>98233338I wish my preferred ingredients made an appetizing dish. Basil+coffee beans+tomato.
>>98233338Blood, Ice Cream, Chocolate
>>98233385>I wish my preferred ingredients made an appetizing dish. Basil+coffee beans+tomato.Maybe some kind of sweet chili?
>>98233385Your girlfriend is an extremely tasty dish, take it from me.
The idea of waifus collecting anons made me think.How about a CYOA where you are chosen to be part of the narrator's husbando harem?She chooses you and gives you powers to make you cooler then you join her army of husbandos or something like that.
>>98233207I wanted to roll on all the tables, and my first one turned out to be very thematically consistent so I have to go with it despite my distaste for vampires. At least this one is a parasitic plant or some such thing>Iss'Tir>-Ethereal Taint: Mana-Starved>Ullde>-Spawn-Cult>-Warp Of The Watcher: Burning Sensation>-Mana Untethered: Prophecy Of The Divine Star>=End of Light>=Planetary>=Beyond: Moon, Crystal Caverns, Desert>Mirsoth>-Devouring Wilds>-Touch Of The Vain One: Rootblood>-Vanity Of The Awakened: Face Of A God>=Botanist>=Wildeye>=Friendly Flora>=Lush: Overgrown Ruins, Deep Forest>Bastif>-Searing Corruption>-Flesh Of The King: Vampiric>-Warrior Spirit: A Brief Lesson>=Souleater>=Unbroken>=Blood Pools>=Spire Cities>=Friend In Deep Places>=Warmth: Volcanic, Savannah>Chirrel>-Chaotic Order>-Monarch's Grace: Mistbreath>-A Chorus Inside: King Of The Hive>=Command Of Sky>=Structured Districts>=Still: Salt Plains, Tundra>Nitur>-The Twisted Delights Of Flesh: Snake Eyes>-Touch Of Whimsy: Slave To Desire>=It Shall Be Yours>=Shape Of Dreams>=My Land>=Rich: Garden, Fall Forest, Springs>Iss'Tir's Dust>And Kingdoms Shall Crumble
>>98233478A magical female knight collecting soldiers vfrom different universes sounds alright, but I don't like sharing
>>98233478Do it.
>>98233478I think that would work better as a background pieceIt would be a pretty funny drawback in a regular cyoa to join an emperesses harem, and it wouldn't require the entire premise hinge on it(Although in giving anons an escape you effectively guarantees that most of them won't)It would be amusing if it was like a joan of arc thing where everyone agrees she's too pure to be touched but I would, among many others, actually become extremely determined to impregnate her
>>98233478Go away Aro. Nobody wants you here.
>>98233165>>98233207A build inspired by the Feast of Evil perk from Entropist. I will travel the universe to hunt down and devour the forces of evil, their flesh, their very souls...ARE MINE!!!>Iss'Tir - Last of The Ones Who DreamEthereal Taint - Mana-Starved, Wisform, Fading>Ullde - The Mad Hand of Fate, The Dead WatcherSiphoning: Spawn-Cult, Twisted SunWarp of The Watcher - Eyeless Ones(Reroll), Outsider Skin, Burning Sensation(Reroll), SearingMana Untethered - Ullde's BlessingYou: Skinstep, Manifest Cosmic FireYou and Your Spawn: StarlightYour Dream-Realm: Planetary, Temple of Grandeur, The Sky Protects, Beyond, Born From Pain>Mirsoth - The Vain One, Lord of Fey, The Mist of MindSiphoning: Spawn-HuntTouch of The Vain One - Hidden Ones, Root-Blood(Reroll), Bestial ShapeVanity of The Awakened - Trickster Lord, Pride's Desire, Face of A God (Reroll), Mirsoth's BlessingYou: Shapeshift, Envious HungerYou and Your Spawn: Illusion, The Collective HerdYour Dream-Realm: Green Pools, Friendly Flora, Lush>Bastif - Lord of The Red Feast, The Gnawing KingSiphoning: Spawn-Eggs, Spawn-Seekers, A Royal FeastFlesh of The King - Blazing Within, Vampiric(Reroll), Skeletal Complexion, Leathery HideWarrior Spirit - A Brief Lesson, Aura of War, Foreboding DreadYou: Souleater, Stoke, Fleswarper, Truly DemonicYou and Your Spawn: Bodies of Steel, Unbroken, Growing KingdomYour Dream-Realm: Spire Cities, Warmth>Chirrel - The Pale Monarch, Voice HeavensSiphoning: Spawn-Band, Spawn-Order Monarch's Grace - Crypt Lessons, Social Aura, Holy GoldA Chorus Inside - Disgust of The Queen(reroll), Chirrel's Blessing, King of The Hive, Pale MantleYou: Dispel, The Hands, Light of PurityYou and Your Spawn: A Little PeckYour Dream-Realm: Structured Districts, Community, Still
>>98233537>Nitur - Child of Evening Glow, The Beast-MindSiphoning: Spawn-Den, Spawn-FlareThe Twisted Delights of Flesh - Snake Eyes, Crackling VigorTouch of Whimsy - Slave To Desire(Reroll), The Many Faces of Evening, Mad Love, Nitur's BlessingYou: Flash, Loaded DieYou and Your Spawn: Lover's Wrath, The ResetYour Dream-Realm: My Land, Shape of Dreams>Realm EnvironmentsWoods - 19%Grasslands - 15%Mountains - 15%Plains - 10%Deep Forest - 10%Fungal Forest - 5%Crystal Caverns - 5%Jungle - 5%Savannah - 5%Tundra - 5%Desert - 2.5%Glacier - 2.5%Volcanic - 0.4%Salt Plains - 0.4%Overgrown Ruins - 0.2%>ManaBlack: 8/8Purple: 5/5Green: 6/6Red: 10/10Blue: 8/8Orange: 7/7>EpilogueItem: Iss'Tur's DustChallenges: And Kingdoms Shall Crumble
have a toktastic day
Could Charlotte and her Ecemune decisively defeat and cleanse a Phyrexian infestation if it had a decade to build-up unnoticed in the north? Assuming it was released from a maximally dangerous, extradimensionally tainted dungeon into a remote, unknown valley by some foolhardy adventurers who learned nothing from the Uruk scourge. Further, the various kingdoms of the north are willing to parley and join forces against the phyrexians, including the goddesses giving their indirect support, namely, by sending 0x0 a prophetic dream of the situation, but certain factions, namely, the remnant Lichyard, select Maijin cultists, and the Pandemonium view the infestation as a chance to enact their revenge or advance their goals and will be trying to sabotage resistance efforts.
I'm so tired of outer reincarnation
>>98233478>The idea of waifus collecting anons made me think.>How about a CYOA where you are chosen to be part of the narrator's husbando harem?>She chooses you and gives you powers to make you cooler then you join her army of husbandos or something like that.That's the premise of the Juvenile Orion manga. Set in the world of the Aquarian Age card game, the female protagonist is a Mindbreaker. That is, she's someone with no direct powers of her own, but capable of drastically boosting/suppressing the powers of others. So when an enemy targets her, she has to start recruiting. One guy just wants to be the strongest. Another has a sister who needs help controlling her powers. A third is suffering from hardcore crippling PTSD, and the protagonist's abilities let her break the doom loop he's stuck in . . .
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>>98233783In a different direction, there was Pretear , sort of a magical girl take on Snow White and Cinderella. Basically the guys had elemental powers, while the protagonist had none of her own. But they could channel their powers into her, unlocking various magical girl transformations: ice, music/sound, flame, plants . . .The show just gave her the bishonen magical boy harem though. She didn't have to go and track them down herself.https://youtu.be/GCxpMYg9JQU?si=KyOkJOHwl4RUTXsO
>>98233775Since Charlotte is more-or-less the Outer Reincarnation equivalent to Urza . . .I'd guess it would depend on how much time she had to prepare.(Phyrexians being biomechanical horrors that are basically a Magic the Gathering hybrid of xenomorphs and the Borg.)
https://accuratevariety.github.io/Invoker_2/Interactive horrorish edgekino.
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Kinda finished my meme build in Seinaru, that takes Cheissilith's bargain and then cheats it by spamming milgrath seals.
>>98233809Is she really that weak?
I'm waiting....
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Which do you prefer?>CYOA that explicitly names most of it's groups, companions have names and their own at least semi-detailed backstories, the CYOA is explicitly trying to frame itself in it's own world/canon and usually includes lore pages to help establish the reader in an already structured world >CYOA that leaves most things vague, companions are more roles/individuals whose histories are simple and allow you to headcanon, more focused on letting the reader build their own assumptions and world in their head to compliment their buildObviously not counting CYOA based on existing media. Please extrapolate on your opinion as it's useful to authors and will help them write CYOA you enjoy playing.
>>982340701. If I wanted to just headcanon stuff I wouldn't be playing a cyoa.
>>98234070I prefer option one. It provides a clearer structure while still allowing speculation on the finer details.
>>98234070>includes lore pages to help establish the reader in an already structured worldI'm gonna explain something to you people like Italics don't realise. You will NEVER write lore compelling enough for me to give a shit about. You are not talented at that sort of thing at all.I'd much rather play a franchise cyoa because the lore is easier to digest in anime, game or book form, and typically more interesting than anything an anon comes up with, if I want to read a book I will read a real book.
>>98234125they realisethey just don't care about you in particular
>>98234146I'm all the posters iit
>>98234070option 1.
>>98234070First one. The second option makes the CYOA meaningless.
>>98234070Both have their charms but i like the first option better since you have more material to work with. I like to think that i my audience wishes to explore the world that i created and a detailed companion section helps with that since you can add some lore in the companions backstory.
>>98233778Then make Inner Incarnation
>>98233778I could eat Outer Reincarnation until you die.
>>98233778I wish I could force myself to like OR.
>>98234272This but for Ultimate God. Seeing everyone but me having fun makes me feel isolated.
>>98233775Phyrexia are narratively jobbers, so they would simply lose like they literally always do. In terms of "hard powerscaling"? Who knows, if the ecumene are relying on actual technology and science theyre probably fucked, because the phyrexians are weird magic borg zombies who like infesting technology and are (once again) literally magic.
>>98234315>are (once again) literally magicSo, mathemagician fodder.
>>98234323In the same way "mathemagicians" are literally magic (or kryptonian biology is "literally magic"). In universe the phyrexians are the products of artifice, theyre the borg. Their abilities are simply entirely untethered from what technology actually is and can do (so like the borg).
>>98234323Mathemagic is worthless compared to real magic/Godscript.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH
>>98234374>t. forced to play tokslop for all eternity
I am so fucking GAR for fate/stay night cyoas
>>98234427>franchiseslop>fateslopSo that's the kind of posters we have...
>>98234323Deconstruction of meaning when construction of meaning shows up
Garcher?
>>98234427Fate is only useful for porn.
>>98234447gay porn…
Now I’m not gay or anything but I would let Gil step on me
>>98234459>Now I’m not gay or anything but-
>>98234459Gilfags are all pedos, they became fans of gil once they knew he was underage. As expected of discorders
>>98234473Aro was such a pedo yea :/
>>98234473>>98234486where is the oneeshota with aro and gil
Gilslut practically sat on peoples laps
>>98234492Never made unfortunately.>>98234504Wagging his cat tail.
New OC. Mother of Learning CYOA.I'll do build ratings after a few threads.
>>98234520…time travel?IM NOT DOING THAT
I wonder if that's the terminal stage of authorfagging. Barely related to their works and cringe beyond relief, enacting barely veiled fantasies.
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>>98234520's cool and all but without the mandatory spider companion I'm not playing.
>>98234520You are a breeder of rats. I dont like you very much. I bet you smell of elderberry.
>>98234520>Mother of LearningI lost interest in this novel after he got some maguffin from the spiders and never ended up finishing it.
Spooder?
>>98234520>MultiplayerGod I'm so sick of outer reincarnation's influence on new cyoas now
>>98234538A support spider, if you will.
>>98234554An emotional support spooder?
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>>98234520I don't know this series and it seems boring as fuck, pass.
>>98234554good times good times.
Danmachi?
>>98234551>OR invented multiplayer
>>98234520MoL is pretty much similar to LoTM in story complexity to the point that I genuinally can't imagine myself entering into either world and succeeding in anything, the deck is just too stacked against me to win without a fictional story's plot armor.Nice try, but I'm not interested
>>98234570It popularised it if you want your cyoa to be successful you need to make it multiplayer
>>98234563>passyou will never
>>98234551this anon thinks of outer reincarnation more than its fans lol
>>98234594Uh oh someone got mad.
>>98234599Of course. The fan will be very enthusiastic once the subject come up; the hater will see the subject everywhere and blame everyone else for their projections.As such, multiplayer being popular is OR.
>>98234520>>98234530>>98234537Goyslop
>>98234537>Abyss of Time>drags all of cyoag into a neverending timeloopYou will have sex with me one day.
>>98233831>Oldmarket>Lazari 2, Willend 1, Lenora 2>Tarragon, Alikalani, Noravenna Shash, Belsik>An Effigy of Bone, A Vial of Null>Kasynti Avenian & the Council of Aven, Simira Pelar & the Court of Dalin JannishrieBetween Lazari's rhetoric, Willend's grounding and Lenora's presence I'm a statesman of sorts which is just as well given most of the Futures before us are beyond the capability of a man alone.>The Visitor, The SignalMost important will be redirecting the Vespus-Jannishrie war. Despite their aims neither Aven nor Dalin will repair the Engine of the World while wasting their efforts on status games. The Visitors must be intercepted and folded into a conspiracy with the Signal Synu. Vespus' treasures would be ruined by siege and wasted on petty empire, Tarragon's lineage may provide a pretext for shoving to the forefront among the Councils and the Null a bribe to secure consent.>The MigrationShould the Engine be restored the Stickwalkers can return to renewed homes and if here on crusade the Effigy means I'll at least have a notion of who (and who they can be turned against).>The Cascade, The MerchantThe same applies to Oldmarket as besides repairing the Engine with minimal damage to Vespus' tech the trick is to neuter the Councils in doing so. Blood stagnates when it fails to circulate, so too does knowledge.>GoddessThe Blue Army can be swayed to join Vespus as backers of Tarragon's party. The Jannishries, oft first to betray, could be blindsided by their kidnapping of the Visitor. All the spared lives may be needed for a bloodier war against Catchkeep anyway. I'll talk with her of course in the hopes that "practice" with Belsik unmasked will delay my death.
>>98234520Cool, now give me a second to read the entirety of this book series
>>98234658>flashback to LOTMfag needing to read 3000 chapters just to play OC
>>98234520So if i pick child the second page is completely unusable?
>>98234679No? Just the magic disciplines
>>98234703But the spells require discipline levels
>>98234711You can buy them for when your skills are good enough
>>98234731Oh right i somehow skipped that bit sorry.
CYOAs for this feel?
>>98234537>You can trap any other players into a forever timeloop as long as they pick multiplayer and don't have incompatible au modifiersSo multiplayer is a trap?
>>98234750Thanks OR...
>>98234750You can build an abyss of time loop that creates copies of another multiplayer. The 'real' players would never meet.
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>>98234746Wandering Jew? Unironically Black Magic.
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>>98234520so if you don't know anything about the setting / plot, how screwed are you?
>>98234924100% cyoaggers aren't intelligent enough to figure what you need to do in time they'll just spend every loop fucking fellow students/their sister
>>98234924Doomed, like this anon is >>98234920
>>98234929>cyoaggers aren't intelligent enough to figure what you need to do in timeBut there is at least 10 years of loop time, according to the book. Surely Anon might intuit something...?
>>98234947Even if they do they won't have the intelligence to know exactly what they need to do or the courage to put their soul on the line in the moments that matter.
>>98234520>Time LoopAccidental Looper +90>ModifierMultiplayer>OriginSenior (50)>BoonsCriminalWealthy>Magnitude35>SkillsCharmMemoryStableSleuthParanoiaPlanningProfessional (Thief)>Shifter ClanDragon Shifter>PerksSoul SightMana Frame>Magical DisciplinesSoul Magic 3Blood Magic 3>BloodlinesBiomancerGhost Eyes>SpellsGoodberryCloneSo I have 10 years left in the loop, hopefully this is worth it. The idea is to get really good at stealing/creating bloodlines and improving my soul, since this seems to persist throughout loops.edited to add Memory, it's worth it in the long run.
>>98234952>Anon only succeed at cyoas because he has training wheelsIt's a funny mental image at least.Well, less if you think of all the worlds with Protagonist-Anon that fumble the nanosecond things aren't following a safe script.
>>98234520>Time LoopAccidental Looper +90>ModifierMultiplayer>OriginSenior (50)>BoonsCriminalWealthy>Magnitude35>SkillsCharmMemoryStableSleuthParanoiaPlanningProfessional (Thief)>Shifter ClanDragon Shifter>PerksSoul SightMana Frame>Magical DisciplinesSoul Magic 3Blood Magic 3>BloodlinesBiomancerGhost Eyes>SpellsGoodberryCloneSo I have 10 years left in the loop, hopefully this is worth it. The idea is to get really good at stealing/creating bloodlines and improving my soul, since this seems to persist throughout loops.please help me! I think I'm trapped in a loop! I don't know how to get out.
>>98234924That's why you just let the protagonist solve it(take accident prone)while you potential max and don't get ganked
>>98235055this
>>98234965>>982349761 point over budget lol
>>98234520>a timeloop CYOA comes out>when I was working on a timeloop CYOA too
>>98235073two cakes is real?!
>>98235073Woah, dejavu...
>>98235064We should rebel against the Build Police...
>>98235064Are you counting soul sight? Because that's free with Ghost eyes.
>>98235103Oh I am my bad
>>98234976sus imposter
>>98235110Amungus
>>98234520>Accidental looper (17 years later) +57I don't quite like skipping some years of the loop but i was greedy and wanted the mana frame>AU?If it comes up it might be fun but i don't know enough to mess with it.>Multiplayer?I am up for it i guess.>ChildWanted to be the little girl>Mage fashionFaintly glowing tattoo markings and yellow eyes i think would be cool>Noble>Wealthy>MansionThese three are the easy life package. I can simply relax and focus my time on learning. Very nice.>LibraryAnd this will make getting the foot on the door of magic trivial. I should get a solid well rounded foundation from this.>Magnitude 35Once again i am greedy and i went all in on mana capacity. I am going to assume that any subtlety has gone out the window.>FitnessSurprisingly fit little girl>CombatantIf push comes to shove knowing right of the window how to fight is gonna be very handy. I predict that i might ruffle some feathers.>StableIt's a loop to begin with that might strain my mind to begin with but a solid mind is pretty important nontheless. Specially in life or death situations.>DexterityFaster casting is good. Also pairs well with Fitness.>PassionIf i am going to dive deep into magic it is better that i actually enjoy doing so. And well be motivated in general.>Dragon shifterIt increases my magnitude further and allows me to access dragon magic... Whatever that looks like. Ah, i also get to turn into a dragon if push comes to shove. Very very handy. Shame about the mental changes but hopefully i can try to keep it together and not be an absolute bastard?>ImmortalTechnically achiveable but why wait? Besides no point in becoming the little girl if you turn into a hag later.>Mana frame -12Magnitude 90 of starting mana capacity sounds nuts. Running out should barely be a problem.>Crystalized -10Specially if i can just hoard (heh) my mana like this. >Soul shield -1It's pretty simple and i would like to keep my soul nice and safe
>>98234976>Starting out with 356 magnitude worth of manaDamn bro, what are you even going to use all that for?
>>98235190imagine the pressure of that first nut
>>98235190that's an imposteralso, Bloodlines since they tie up your mana permanently
>>98235197What's this about an imposter?
>>98235190It'd be 358, mana frame doesn't double enhancement ritual costs.
>>98235206As in, I made the build >>98234965, that's a different person who joined in as a joke
>>98235212>deviating the blamekinda sus
>>98235208Every bloodline permanently ties up 2 magnitude points each and he has 360 before we take bloodlines into account
>>98234520Oh shit, I''ve read this oneVery cool anonBuild later
>>98235220Also doesn't dragon shifter just give you +10 mag and not x10?
>>98235227Where are you getting x10? Your mana pool can naturally grow by about x4 and mana frame effectively doubles your natural magnitudeI've been counting the +10 as part of your natural magnitude since nothing says not to
>>98235241Also having any rank purchases in the magical disciplines page automatically makes your mana pool grow to its max size
>>98235241Okay yeah I see it now.
>>98234520Surely siding with Panaxeth can't be that bad, right?
>>98235329I would had taken it but Panacotta is referred as ''an ancient and terrifying primordial being'' so i would rather not.
>>98235329>Siding with the eldritch horror can't be that bad, right?
>>98235329Tbh it looks like it's only worth it if you think you can dissolve or trick the contract without the ancient and terrifying primordial being finding out and punishing you while also getting to keep the gift(probably trapped desu)
Tbh the main reason I don't trust the deal is because evilmaxing with that cyoa is too easy and obviously OP if you're amoral enough, you already know Zach is the original looper so can just find him them hit him with the Time Stop into Manifold Resonance + Geas combo to stop any possibility of Panaxeth not being freedYou can even do this with the non-looper option so you can join the loop anyway by soul melding himNo way it's this easy
>>98235463It IS that easy. Trust 4chan for once.
>>98235463Divine countermeasures will be activated, no one wants that, seriously. You are forever on the angelic shit-list, and they will be allowed to interact with the world to deal with all this mess. You are right, it's a trap option.
>>98235463You're making it more complex than it is.Look, you're going to another world where you can live out your fantasy of "achieving your true potential". Why are you getting cold feet?
>>98234520PNG version? In imgchest if it's too big?
>>98235503>if it's too bigcyoa massive girths...
>>98235503https://imgchest.com/p/vj4jz25k278
>>98235502Except the world is completely contingient on defeating an incomprehensible enemy that is only beaten in the fiction thanks to incredible plot armor and fate literally being written by the author at every step, any ordinary person would have no chance whatsoever.
>>98235463Maybe the cyoa just understands wizards
>>98235513Nah, I'd win.
>>98235513All you have to do is stop the invasion. You can do it in less than five years of looping.
>>98235513Zorian was meandering, and that's without getting in his post-traumatic road trip and excursion to another land. If you're really determined, it's still hard but possible.
>>98235512Um, it still has image artifact. You need to export the images in PNG form from your image editor instead of converting JPGs.
>>98235530boo
>>98235513Skill issue on your part.
>>98235485Okay but what's so bad about Panaxeth anyway? Does he want to make the world a microcosm of mumbai and the ganges, or is he just the standard obliterator? We talking a Tharizdun, Rovagug level threat, or is he more of a disaster to the status quo?
So I'm not wrong in thinking that Zach is a huge bum right?
>>98235591Everyone but you is a jobber.
>>98235591How would I know? I haven't read it.
>>98235591Oh c'mon, cut him some slack. If the average anon was stuck in a timeloop he'd spend at least a decade committing sexual crimes. Zorian meanwhile is just a weenie.
>>98235600Zach, I don't know why I said Zorian.
>>98235560Hmm. Try now?
>>98235600I paid to enjoy learning magic though. Magic is probably better than sex
>>98235600>If the average anon was stuck in a timeloop he'd spend at least a decade committing sexual crimesWhy are you pretending the average anon is some sub-70 IQ NEET coomer
>>98235591>Took a 100% combat build and ultimately fucked everything upZach is an honorary member of /cyoag/
>>98235613>no mind enhancement>no sex perk>no waifu>can have friendship with males>actually saves the world in spite of his personal issuesHe's not one of us.
>>98235613>Took a 100% combat build and ultimately fucked everything upesplain
>>98235621>>98234965>>98234976
>>98235329According to the lich most actively trying to free him, he is a jobber that will instantly be killed when he steps out of containmentThe main actual cost of this is that the angels will be set to defcon 6 and forced to engage in "Extreme precautions" that they don't want to doGood fucking luck avoiding the angels after that
>>98235626oops meant to add >>98235179 also
>>98235627Why was that guy even trying? It's been a few years since I've read the book, but he seemed like a noble warrior despite being antagonistic. What's his reasoning there?
>>98235580Think you could win in the WH40k universe?
>>98235606Definitely, yeah. Sex only appeals to the human psyche because our brains are wired for it. If we transcend base humanity, the allure of benis in bagina is lost, buried beneath yet grander wonders.>>98235610The average anon is a +105 IQ hedonist at the tip-top of midwit mountain. He thinks too deep into what doesn't need thinking and ignores what does. His desires are threefold: eternal youth, godlike power, and sexual indulgence, in that order, and any failure by his benefactor to provide him with this will provoke a tantrum.
>>98235588The flesh of beings like him makes up the world, and they would really rather it goes back to being flesh againThey also hate all humans and want them extinct
>>98234520I know nothing about this series >Time-LoopNon Looper (100)>ModifiersMultiplayer>OriginSeniorMage FashionNobleCultistLibraryFamousWealthyMansionList>Magnitude19-35 (95)>SkillsConnected, Fitness, Charm, Combatant, Memory (80)Polyglot, Stable, Sleuth, Intuition (69)Dexterity, Planning (63)>Shifter ClansDragon (56)>Magical PerksDrake Familiar (53)Soul Sight (52)Divine Stash (49)Mana Frame (37)>Magical Abilities Magic Resistance Bloodline (27)Soul Magic 3 (18)Spell Formula 3 (9)Alchemy 3 (0)>AUsAccident ProneSince I keep knowledge from before insertion, I know who the main character is. I'm wealthy, well-positioned, personally strong and capable, and very knowledgeable, so I'm in a perfect position to aid him in beating the bad guys and getting out of the loop. I just have to approach him quietly ASAP and let him know that I know and I'm here to help. My Familiar gives me a method to maintain some knowledge through loops, even if I have to rely on animal intelligence. Soul Magic also gives me a garunteed way to kill Red Robe, who I'm figuring is the bad guy here? Regardless, I'll wait for the MC to tell me who the big bad is before I eat their Soul. In the meantime I'll support them with wealth, Alchemy, magical theory, and prowess.Oh, and since I have MP any and all good guy anons are invited to live comfortably in luxury in my mansion while they deal with the time loop. Its the least I can do.
>>98235638Seems mostly reasonable. Usually there's more esoteric logic but ur-biological revanchism is understandable. How strong are these angels everyone keeps talking about? I suspect the biggest trick is avoiding detection, but they're likely extremely aware of what is going on and where and when.
>>98235637>a +105 IQ hedonist at the tip-top of midwit mountain. He thinks too deep into what doesn't need thinking and ignores what does. His desires are threefold: eternal youth, godlike power, and sexual indulgence, in that order, and any failure by his benefactor to provide him with this will provoke a tantrum.Call me idealistic, but what you describe is too miserable and pathetic for me to believe you. Anon HAS to have higher goals, wishes and dreams than "hurr sex god having sex forever in sex dimension". At worst they're pretending to be retarded as shitposts.
>>98235632I think there was some geo-political reason he wanted to nuke the area, so that his island of necromancers could return to their homeland or somethingI also havn't reread
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>>98235620He did spend multiple loops fucking highschool girls after using time travel to learn their preferencesOther then his disgusting lack of mind magic and prep-time paranoia bullshit, he is basically accurate
>>98235605It's good now. Thanks!
>>98235667>He did spend multiple loops fucking highschool girls after using time travel to learn their preferenceshe's literall me
>>98235638They don't want humans extinct they're just indifferent to them. And they're offshoots from the original world dragon but its not confirmed that they want to revert everything.
>>98235654I think the angels are arbitrarily strong but limited in what they will do
>>98235655I wonder. If I could have anything, eternal bliss or perfect happiness would be my picks. Lower in the ideal scale it would be being a god being playing with mortal toys or commanding a civilization. Even lower would be living different realities.Endless sex dimension sounds rather... Boring when you could have anything.
>>98235655I am sorry anon, but you are idealistic. The average anon is a paranoid lecher driven solely by his impulses. This is because the average anon is autistic, and has spent a lifetime in de-facto isolation by what is to him a byzantine society beyond his comprehension. This has had an immense impact on his personality and priorities, most of which are kept buried as he lacks the power to act on them. If a random anon gained the Supreme Body superpower from that one pager he's guaranteed to declare himself global emperor, destroy any government that doesn't immediately submit, and amass a harem consisting of hundreds of random sub-20 year old virgins. A superpowered anon is a dangerous threat to everyone else around him.
>>98235687Anon can't do higher thinking, please understand.
>>98235667>disgusting lack of mind magicThe cyoa doesn't tell you, but there are some additional restrictions for Original Loopers. Can't learn some forms of mental and soul magic. For ethical reasons purely, you see. It's not like the angels are competent and want to prevent any chances of circumventing their contract, surely.
>>98234520>Time loop: Non-Looper>AU Scenario: Accident Prone>Origin: Teen, Mage Fashion, Outsider (another continent), Master (Soul Magic), Master (Blood Magic)Blissfully ignorant of any plots and time loops, both in & out of character. Someone else can deal with all that, I'm on an entirely different continent (preferably one where people aren't brown) doing my own thing. I also got the phone numbers of two master mages who I'm sure are very nice and moral people.>Magnitude: 19-35>Skills: Fitness, Dexterity, Paranoia, Memory, Intuition>Shifter Clans: ->Magic Perks: Soul Sight, Pocket Dimension, Bakora Gates, Immortal, Mana FrameSurvival! Growth! Big batteries!>Magical Abilities: Projection 1, Animation 1, Conjuration 1, Warding 1, Mind Magic 1, Soul Magic 2, Blood Magic 2>Bloodlines: Twin Souls>Spells: Magic Missile, Mirror Image, Soul Shield, Ransack, Simulacrum, CloneAside from dipping into attack & defense, the theme here is duplication. I have a hivemind of two, both of me have simulacrums, and simulacrums have mirror images... that's a whole lot of me considering that I have lots of mana too! Aside from that the goal is to get to the level I can do premium cloning to make the immortality less mortal. Then maybe travel the world for fun & profit.
>>98235655You know the truth in your heart.
>>98234520>Non-Looper, Timeless 100>Child, Wealthy, Mansion, Partner x2 100>Magnitude 5-10, Mana Frame 93>Charm, Memory, Stable, Sleuth, Paranoia, Intuition, Dexterity, Planning, Passion 60>Hijack, Tulpa, Mathemagic, Silent Casting, Ghost Eyes, Crystallized 0Absent time-loop shenanigans I imagine that 100 points' worth of upgrades make me a once a generation menace at least. I only have 8 Magnitude to work with but then the plan is to exploit doubled mana regen to constantly Crystallize a buffer to spam in combat or rituals. Hijack should teach me how to get even more out of that and maybe inspire pseudo-natural processes to further "condense" the stuff I'm manifesting. If I get real lucky with Ghost Eyes staring into the Frame might hint at what exactly is behind that all-important regen rate in the first place.Tulpa, Mathemagic and Silent Casting are all united by a convoluted Ithkuil-like notation. Makes the encryption of Spell Formulae a matter of course for the most part and means that should I have a crystal horde on hand (in a Dimensional pocket) I can fire away at ludicrous speeds.
>>98235690I'm exactly what you describe and I've thought about this exact situation. I would proceed to fuck off from this universe or at least from earth lest some higher being smite me down.This byzantine society taught me that there's always a higher up.
>>98235637>His desires are threefold: eternal youth, godlike power, and sexual indulgenceMany emperors of china have implied this is a natural state of the human mind>will provoke a tantrum.No it won't, although it will provoke him to seek out those things
>>98235699It's not that the cyoa doesn't tell you, you just get a more lenient contract as a cyoa looper. Though loops still reset if you target yourself with mind/soul magic which can be restrictive.
So the meta is 'don't bother with the time loop at all'?
>>98235721First you say that anons are spiritually women, then you compare them to bugmen...
>>98235726No, if you take the black room the time loop gives a max of 2650 years of trainingThe meta is to take all of the patience perks and Soul magic 3, then simply give yourself everything once you leave the loop
>>98235726It's a common strategy for franchise CYOA. Let the protagonist do the hard work he was destined for, amass riches/magic/power/waifus and enjoy life. Don't fix what's not broken.
>>98235721The coercive hierarchies agriculture enables are way different from the human hunter-gatherer default. We go haywire with absolute power because it's not something out evolutionary psychology covers. Also the Chinese were comically fucked even with that in mind.
>>98235717It takes one to know one, anon. I'm no different.
>>982357392650 years?
>>9823583230x85 yearsIf you have access to the blackroom at all times
>>98235841"can be activated once a month"
>>98235847Does it end after a day?I read this series quite some time ago, but I thought it was just only turned on at certain times
>>98235813About making an one world government and an harem or fucking off from the universe? Honestly being in command or god-king of humanity sounds so bothersome, everyone hates you, everyone thinks you're a tyrant, endless problems.Let humanity sort that shit out themselves, Imma see Mount Olympus.
>>98235865It does. The protagonists found a government black room that was scheduled to be activated and stole the slot from another group.
>>98235739>I sat in the black room for 2650 years and now I'm the strongest?
>>98235869About being an isolated autist. Personally I wouldn't bother with trying to take over anything. I'd just delete some of the systems that have wronged me, specifically, then bounce and leave humanity to pick up the pieces. Most of those are commercial in nature but it'd be off-topic to get into detail, so I'll leave it at that. Conquering when you're already multiple orders of magnitude stronger than any mundane military ever could be seems like a vanity project. Even so, many anons are fixated on it because they don't have any control while powerless, so there's a significant impetus to overcorrect when they are empowered. It's understandable desu but not for me, I don't think.
>>98235911I see your point now. Makes sense.
>>98234048Sorry, I resetted it.Will try to remake it.
Elden Ring Devlog 6-20-2026I only get to put 30 minutes to an hour into this each day. I Wake, Work, Get home, make dinner for the family, take care of baby, sleep. When I take care of baby, I get to work on the CYOA since the baby is sleepy at times. These are not complaints, merely an explanation of limited time. Luckily, on the weekends the mother in law comes over to watch the baby and I can dump ~3 hours into the project. The project moves at a glacier's pace, but as a glacier, it is inevitable.Limgrave is done. The boss page is done.This next week: Liurnia of the Lakes - At least one location in that area per day.
>>98235939This looks very nice
>>98233831>The Southern Frosts>Neolai Querus: Three Years>Cernamev: One Year>Sebrosa: One Year>Neolai Querus>Jaule of Festin>Blain in White>Belsik>Three Years with Neolai Querus - The Brightness>The Lineage of Ekendra>An Effigy of Bone>Joelle in Green & The Polytheon>Jacobin Melisse & The New Society>The Goddess
>>98236004>>Panaxeth's Gift:>Also soul kill loopers who took Panaxeth's Deal.???
>>98236015Fuck, forgot to delete details of an old build.
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>>98234520>Time Loop:Original Looper>Modifiers:Multiplayer>Origin:Age: Senior (50)Boons: Library, List>Magnitude:10>Skills:Professional Scientist>Magical Perks:Soul Sight>Magical Abilities:Negation 2, Divination 3, Mind Magic 3, Soul Magic 3In every loop, secretly gather mind/soul slaves to serve as spell platforms and knowledge dispensers and snowball into controlling stronger and stronger mages.Also soul kill loopers who took Panaxeth's Deal.
>>98234070Option two. CYOAs are supposed to be daydreaming prompts and the more self-indulgent writefaggotry is involved the less freedom you have. This is why short CYOAs are better than long ones.
>>98235939Damn, and I thought Ranni's cyoa was going slow, I've been putting several hours in per day.Thankfuly I'm not foolish enough to think a real flesh and blood woman could ever satify me never mind forcing a child to be born in this hellscape world ruled by the demiurge for his soul prison. Some people are just genuinely insane I guess.
>>98236036I think having children sounds nice, and I hope voidsoul has a happy marriage
>>98236040I will NEVER fuck
I CAN'T BREED
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>>98234070Top for all except the companions. I personally prefer simple reliable companions over seeing the same quirky anime chicks with a troubled past over and over again. My favorite type of companions/followers are those that are basically just an archetype you can purchase multiple times.
>>98236056Interesting quest idea. Finding a mate for an endangered magical being. This could even be considered a wholesome deed.
>>98236056If you recognize how bad your genes are you are actually contributing to nature by not contributing to nature.
>>98236076I already found one. It's me
>>98236025What if the loopers are better magicians than you?
>>98235939Voidsoul is toxic, just think about it. He has a wife and a kid, yet he wishes to deprave us of the same thing with Lady Ranni. Worse yet, cucking us with a woman that ends up burning the world, which just so happens to prevent new life from being made.Just think about it.
>>98236094He absolutely regrets having a kid
>>98234520I know nothing about the series so anons can tell me how fucked my build is>POSITION: non-looperI want many points and it's not as if I would make the best use of the loops and I feel that once the loop ends that's it, no more benefits.>MODS: multiplayerI will let the other anons deal with the story, meanwhile I'm going to be potential man and let a looper recruit me and level me up fire emblem style>ORIGIN: teen, mage fashion, library, wealth, mansion>MANA POOL: magnitude 35I feel like more mana is always better and control can be learned later, but I could be wrong. meh I will just spam basic magic if it comes down to it>SKILLS:>fitness, combatant, paranoia, dexterityfor my combat skills>memory, polyglot, sleuth, intuition, passionto learn magic better>stable, charmcheap and honestly useful overall>PERKS: soul sight (free), immortal, mana framedo I need to explain why agelessness and more mana with no drawback is a good thing?>MAGIC SKILLS: >magic resistance (bloodline)I do love some protection against mind and soul fuckery>biomancer (bloodline)I would like to get into biomancy, with an ageless body and combat skills having a stronger body is going to syngergize well>mathemagic (bloodline)with dimensionalism being so difficult to learn, I would like to have some advantage in it>ghost eyes (bloodline)my mana frame is made from divine magic so maybe I can somewhat cheese it to learn divine magic or something? this +charm, +intuition +sleuth is going to help me figure out if a looper is trying to screw me over>final magnitude: 62I didn't have enough to specialize in a field but bloodlines seem coolerso yeah I leave the loop business to the others who know more about the story while I become the recruitable companion with shit starting stats but very high potential, loads of money and a nice mansion.
>>98236087I doubt that situation will happen, but cooperation with other players, who are majority against Panaxeth, should be able to handle them.
>>98236104Your build is fucked. Fucked by my build, that is.
>>98236086You will never find a female Tok. She doesn’t exist.
>Having sex is....LE BAD
>Having sex is... LE GOOD
Sex is so gross. Semen is so gross. Vaginas are so gross. We should all just learn to breed by budding.
>>98236155>a female TokIsn't that just any random whore on the street?
>>98236104>I feel like more mana is always better and control can be learned later,It's a little bit like having bigger handsIt's not debilitating, but you won't be able to reach the dexterity ceiling of those with smaller handsSort of>>final magnitude: 62Training in magic brings it up 4x, and this doesn't get lowered by bloodlines, so you should be looking at 272 casts of "Magic missile". A very nice numberNice build,would recruit.
>>98236143hell yeah! this is the type of feedback I love for my builds
>>98236179Saya... my love...
>>98236189I'm glad. Since i also dont know anything about the setting I cant speak on your chances of success. Only your chances of sex-cess. Which, naturally, are high. With me.
>>98236184oh yeah I forgot that you can train to increase the mana pool. honestly I feel like a companion looping build with hijack and magnitude 5 would be an unbeatable combo, I bring the mana and money, he brings the control and knowledge.
>>98236215Anyone who cant defend themselves at the start of loop 1 is bound to die to/become enslaved by a soul/mind mage.
>>98236215I Have been making one of those for the past few hours
>>98234520Mostly Blind, I've only ready the first two options.I am Voidsoul, devourer of time.Accidental Looper, advanced 60 years. I get 5 Loops to do this. The fewer loops, the better. I want my enemy to have his final plan of execution prepare, because:PANAXETH'S DEAL. - Anyone with red glowing text is gonna be fun to hang out with.I have never read the books, I can figure this out!Senior - I need Power now. +2 Boons.Wealthy - easily convertible power.Cultist - Need connections to get big P into the world.High mana reserves - 5 points (95 Remain)High impact magic, I .Connected x3 - 3 points (92 Remain) - I pick up every boon. I am very, very well connected.Intuition, Stable, polyglot, Charm, Fitness, Memory, Combatant, sleuth, dexterity, planning, and paranoid - 35 points (67 remain) A basic survival package to come in like a wrecking ball.Dragon Shifter - Inherited - 7 Points (60 Remains)Soul Sight, Bakora Gates, Black Room, Immortal (free), Mana Frame, Mana Gem. 38 Points (22 remains)I need every ounce of power, sense, and travel I can get.Negation 3Mind Magic 3Mind Blank, Manifold resonance, RansackAnd that's all the points folks!The plan is: Check in on how the timeline progresses the first four loops, while using the Black Room to train. Then, when I know what the main character's plan is, bogart it at the last second, since he wouldn't anticipate one of the NPCs going haywire. I am sure that his is somehow relevant to my Patron's release conditions.I will take my Inner realm and then expand my power from there, until I grow a green sun for a heart and become as Malfeas.
>>98236103No, she is my world.I will defend her to the death.
>>98236283>her*Smokes pipe*
>>98236286Do... Do I have to repost the CYOA that I made specifically to work through those feeling?
>>98234520This one is pretty good, Thank you 5anonBuild:Original looper (+30)>I don't really want to have to risk everything to escape the loop, and it apparently wasn't that hard to stop the invasion before [Mistake], so I should be fine as long as I don't [Spoilers]Multiplayer>Come along, we'll fight, it'll be greatOrigin:Adult (+2 boons)[21 years old]>I'd like to be near my max capacity for most of the loop, but just young enough that I can growBody: Male, tall and well built.Mage fashion>Seven fingers on each hand, HeritableMaster x3 (Dimensionalism, Divination,Transformation)>Dimensionalism is the strongest movement, divination is info gathering, Transformation seems like something that becomes much better at the highest levelMentor x3 (Blood magic, divination, Negation)>Divination is something I want from the start, Negation to use my bloodline, blood magic should not be learned from someone at level 3Library card >To round things outMagnitude: 10 (+5)>Use others peoples mana for the flashy stuffSkills:Connected (-1)Stable (-2)>I think I already am pretty mentally stable but it never hurts to be surePerks:Black room (-6)>Apparently this only lasts a day, meaning I'll need as many of them as I can get>Once it's been used I can disassemble it and fuck with the internalsMagical abilities:Hijack (-10)>With enough planning, this means unlimited manaSilent casting (-10)>With enough training, this means instant castingMind magic x2 (-6)>I need the mental enhancements and I don't want to learn from others>Given that I will be specialised in mental enhancement and have less mind reading, I would hope that this is "Enough" mental enhancement by itself>Unlimited mana, instant casting, and the mental enhancements to control it allModifiers:None
>>98236324Plans:>Find a familiar to use as a mana battery>Resolve the whole panaxeth thing by just killing all of the leaders involved with dimensionally teleported bombs on day one>Then send a letter of apology to Quatach-ichl and hope he doesn't hold a grudge>Given that manifold resonance allows one to bypass mindblank, the only way to actual defend yourself is to control the flow of mana around you and not allow people to cast spells in that area>The magic in this setting seems really fun to learn, so my most likely end goal will be trying to fully understand it, on a divine level>For the inevitable multiplayer combat, hijack means I can break other peoples mind control and soul fuckery>I don't really want to be king, but I would like to have a strong noble house with a large eugenic wealth
>>98235939Ery nice
>>98235702Just noticed I forgot to pick Famous boon to get those rank 2 magics. I'll swap the blood magic master to it.
>>98236279Your Exaltation is in another hell, Green Sun Prince.
>>98236377Nice
>>98236377Holy bsed, wish i made a build.
>>98236302You shouldn't
>>98236377This is awesome, but>not includedI'm gonna FUCKING kill myself
>>98236377this is amazing, thank you anon
>>98236377beautiful
>>98236349I have consumed the scorpion. I am as the Primordials now.
>>98236377Wonderful. Also my moon butterfly is gonna fuck the other two up, just watch.
>>98236377Pure distilled sovl.
>>98233831>Faulkner>Velka DoNedera: Three Years>Lemora: One Year>Jaule of Festin: One Year>Cernamev>Lemora>The Kadiz>Noravenna Shash>Three Years with Velka DoNederra - Tainted Blood>The Binding Blood>A Voltage Gun>Clea Morish & The Blue Army>Trelivas & Nolad's Initiative>The Merchant>The CascadeRide the bear using Ferric Nigredo arm, animal empathy, and blood binding via his food. Cernamev and Noravenna ensure an ample supply of meat. Take territory in western Kalavast using Norevenna and Lemora's contacts, knowledge of geography. Serve as protection for Nolad's Initiative, contribute nanoblood to research, practice binding control on animals until I can master a pack of dogs. Supercharge voltage gun with custom fit arm crank + jolts of ferric nigredo. Raid Jannishrie convoys, send Cernamev with a small team to assassinate rival warlords in Kalavast, then distribute stolen goods to their men in a bid to recruit. At a certain size, approach The Blue Army with an alternative to Jannishrie control using the Initiative's work as a carrot, lead a combined force to the town the Merchant will be in, occupy, box in and kill him. His Daedalisms are split between myself and trusted allies or lieutenants. Use this town as a staging ground to invade Oldmarket, relying on Lemora and Norevenna again to sow dissent and riots, then laying siege. This is a great CYOA, has to be in my top 20
>>98236377stealth sniper, being a gunGOD, wins
>>98236377Which Luminary CYOA are these builds for again?
Playing Elden Ring for the first time and I just got to Farum Azula. Also what’s the most annoying type of caster to fight in PvP and why is it the comet spamming asshole who seemingly has infinite mana? Also when is that ER cyoa ready?
>>98236588The CYOA author is very busy and has a newborn child. I would say check in around eight months from now.
>>98236595Gil had a baby?
>>98236602I hope not.
>>98236588Roll bitch roll
>>98236608To be fair, castercucks with 80 mind and multiple damage multipliers (and green and blue hidden tears) are a real nuisance.
Elden Ring is too convoluted for the CYOA medium.
>>98236646Bambishart……
>>98236646FROMslop so damn sloppy
>>98236646I’m pretty sure Miyazaki has seen this image because there’s like five people in the dlc that say “…forgive me…” and it would be incredible if this was merely a coincidence
If you ever have the misfortune of becoming a fromsoft npc be sure to sound and act as mysterious and as enigmatic as possible, and always end your sentences with “hehehehehe….”
>>98236686Nonsense, I'm going to say as many untrue things about the lore as possible and then the youtube lore channels will uncritically accept all of it as either a writing mistake or a retcon
>>98236588>Also when is that ER cyoa ready?>>98235939Based on my progress, I still have 7 areas to make, then the fort, then the final boss fights. And a few misc pages (Remembrance pages, probably some other dogshit idea I come up with that expands the scope again).
>>98236727Shit I'm tired, forgot what I was saying.If I can make a page a week, it'll be done in... uhh..September?
>>98236646Adding it to the CYOAWhere was the other greentext about dudes saying I'm sorry, I'll throw that in too.
>>98236583Rake's magical girl one
>>98236747Worst Luminary. It's too girly.
>>98234654>>98236533Naisu Builderu's>>98233831One of my favourites. Hali was a King.I need to do less daydreaming about it and actually finish the write-upOrigin: The Northern Frosts>'My siblings had become numerous and food was becoming scarce. It was not long after I came of age that the Caravan crossed paths with my clan's Petrospectre. It was decided that I would be leaving with them.'Mentors:- Sebrosa, 3 Years>'I felt the loss of all I had known for a long time but Sebrosa taking me under her wing had helped. She a Mentor, a friend and then more.'- Velka DoNedera, 2 Years>'It wasn't long after I joined that Velka called me over to ask questions of the Petrospectre I grew up on. After that she had me regularly taken from my duties around the caravan to assist her.'Companions:- Sebrosa>'She found me amidst the carnage when she realized the fight was lost. We gathered who we could as we made for the deeper woods.'- Velka>'It was a miracle we were able to pry her from her wagon.'- Aliklani>'Possibly the only reason Velka agreed to abandon a lifetime of knowledge and fortune in Diabolisms that night. Since then we've managed to get back on her feet by following up on Alikalani's contacts and leads.'- Tarragon>'A kindred spirit of a sort, we often talk late in to the night. I know what it was like to leave behind everything you had known. She hasn't told me why but I know Sebrosa has been keeping an eye on him.'Consequences: A Traitorous BodyWonders:- A Rusted Egg- An OkaAssociates:- Kasynti Avenian & The Council of Aven- Trelivas & Nolad's Initiative
>>98233829Here is some tok kinohttps://godling-of-aliot.neocities.org/Cyoa/Dungeons_and_Deviants_Remastered/
>>98236377Maybe I should actually finish my build.
>>98236808Don't let FOMO control you. Remember that every build you make is one more reincarnation in CYOA Heaven.
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>>98236788this one is kinda ass, didnt he make a better version of this?
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>>98234658It's actually pretty good, and the whole thing was published for free on royal road
>>98234520I dont like time travel stuff so imma just instantly stop the loop on the first run, let panaxeth win and become a minor primordial with Inner Real. Doing this will kill me due to my contract but since I have the Clone ability, that shouldn't be an issue as I will just revive.>Original looper +30>Paraxeths deal>Adult: Cultist and Library>Magnitude 35 (-5)>Stable (-2)>Blood magic 3 (-9)>Soul magic 3 (-9)>Clone (-5)>Panaxeths gift: Inner realm
Magic cyoa that isn't just "elements"?
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>>98236889I don't know that setting
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>>98236901Finally, a good urban fantasy setting
>>98234520Oh hey I read those books They were pretty good but I don't remember much about it to be honest. >Original Looper (30)Mostly because I want to be able to have the knowledge I can commit all sorts of fun crimes. I'm mostly just interested in rape, I suppose, but I wouldn't mind torturing people too. Always wondered if its possible to skin someone but keep them alive during it. That'd mostly just be a side hobby however. Lolis are my priority.>Origin15-years-old (Teen). Boons without having to be a child. Also, you're usually under a lot less scrutiny as a kid.>Boons (28 total)Must admit, I don't know how most of these stack. What if I just put 25 points into Noble? Am I just the God-emperor?Noble x5, (Nothing quite as important as having Royal status to protect you, and at 5x, am I like, a direct relative to whatever king exists?)Criminal x5, (Obviously. These connections would be pretty important. I'm sure I'll become the Joker of Gotham City or something at this level)Wealthy x5, (Sure, I could just steal money every loop, but this cuts out that annoyance, and I assume this would mean fabulous levels of wealth).Mansion x5, (If it comes with good wards and space, I assume I'm basically invincible here? Must be massive too.)Battlemages x8. (Respawnable buddies at my beck and call. I'll assume 96 loyal wizards living in my giant mansion would provide some good security.)>Magnitude11-18. No point cost and middle of the road. Nice.>SkillsFitness (2/30)Memory (7/30)Polyglot (8/30)Paranoia (12/30)Intuition (17/30)Passion (22/30)Charm (25/30)Connected (30/30)Spent all of my points here. All would be handy. I'm really just in it "For the fun" anyways.>Shifter ClansNo.>Magical AbilitiesNah I don't need any.I'll be in my giant mansion with my loli harems, my dungeons of loli prisoners and my torture rooms full of any gay people I get my hands on. No multiplayer, of course, so none of you can stop me. Ahahahaha.
>>98236944None of those boons stack
>>98236944Edgiest and most retarded anon quite possibly of all time, ever.
>>98236944I honestly doubt you read the booksYou are going to be mindraped so hard
>>98234520>time loopnon-looper(100)-I am not going to even get involved in that bullshit >modifiermultiplayer>bodyAdult(19)>BoonsNobleOutsider(Falkrinea)FamousWealthyMansionBattlemagePeer>Magnitude19 >SkillsConnected(99)Charm(96)Combatant(92)Sleuth(89)Paranoia(85)Intuition(80)Ecologist(77)Planning(73)>Magical PerksMana Frame(61)Soul Sight(60)>Magic AbilitiesBiomancer(50)Taste Tester (40)Alteration 3(31)Conjuration 3(22)True Creation(17)Alchemy 3(8)Soul magic 1(5)Ward magic 1(2)Soul shield 1(1)2nd connected(0)Master x2Peer x1Partner x2I have decided to fuck off from Eldmaria, the timeloop is gonna degrade from the accumulated soul killings anyways losing its predictive value and its just not worth it for research purposes when you can just unlock tier 3 skills for the cost of only 9 points, your not reaching tier 3 magic in only 9 years, unless you got a bloodline for it. So I am just going to chill in a foreign country where I don’t need to care if Panaxeth is getting released or not, its Eldmarias problem let them deal with all of that timelooper factionalism. Instead I will just focus on my alchemy, earn a ton of money trough that alchemy and true creation, also brew my own immortality potion. Because why spend 7 points on it when I can just craft it myself. I can soul kill an animal and check if they are dead each loop to know if I am in a timeloop or not, if no dead animal then its either the 1st loop or reality. Might as well just laze around in my mansion for the first month so not to draw attention.
>>98236985>>98236944Mindrape victims. Don't you know what the strong options are?
>>98236876ughh... the problem is the contract kills your soul, if you have no soul there is nothing for the clone spell to revive.
>>98236880Magi Case but unironically.
>>98237007I already won at Magi Case
>>98234520>Non Looper>Adult (32 Years Old)WealthyFamous>Magnitude 355/100>Fitness 7/100>Combatant11/100>Stable13/100>Intuition18/100>Professional (Scientist)19/100>Memory24/100>Shifter (Dragon)31/100>Soul Sight32/100>Pocket Dimension34/100>Black Room40/100>Immortal47/100>Mana Frame 59/100>DisciplineProjection 3, Dimensionalism 3, Warding80/100>BloodlineMagic Resistance 90/100>SpellsSoul ShieldMagic MissileFar StepTime Stop 98/100figure I'll chill as a super powerful immortal (who can turn into a dragon) and wait for these time loop shenanigans to end or whatever.might've fudged my points somewhere, idk.
>>98237007>no spellsKEKAROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
>>98236999Ahh, shit. I guess ill make a proper build tomorrow then.Also what makes panaxeth so bad in the first place? is he just another god or is the gonna destroy the world or somethin?
>>98237032>what makes [the bad guy] so bad...?bro its a narrative. Narratively its being presented as the BAD GUY. if youre a GOOD GUY, you'll be against him. It's that simple.
>>98234520On a reread of the cyoa, I realized that Original Looper + The First Ikosian Emperor has less risk and more benefits than any other scenario. This is the build I would truly go with, but for fun, allow >>98236025 to remain—consider the two to be different people, if you will.>Time Loop:Original Looper>Modifiers:The First Ikosian Emperor>Origin:Age: Senior (50)Boons: Noble, List>Magnitude:5>Skills:Professional Merchant>Magical Perks:Bakora Gates, Mana Frame>Magical Abilities:Divination 3, Mind Magic 3In every loop, secretly gather mind slaves to serve as spell platforms and knowledge dispensers and snowball into controlling stronger and stronger mages.
>>98237032Panaxeth probably won't be able to do much of anything on its own, the bigger problem is going to be the angels, who will just go full scorch earth to contain it, there is problem not going to be a lot of eldmaria left after they are done with it and considering the MCs friends and relatives live there they don't really want that to happen.
>>98236998ehh... went to a different country to avoid them, besides I am a rich alchemist I can just make anti-mindrape potions.
>>98237068You get mind or soulraped without any defense no matter where you are if you're not both a looper and a mind/soulmage.
>>98237058If you cast a bunch of stealth spells and teleport to the other side of the world after releasing Panaxeth, will the angels still hunt you down?
>>98237080Yes
>>98237080Definitely don't be there at all when he gets released.
>>98237079You don't necessarily need to be a looper, but if you have massive amounts of wealth and influence and no defenses you are basically fucked
>>98237089The problem is you have the same start as the loopers, so unless your defenses are instantaneous and totally Indomitable the loopers WILL find a way to get you before you can get them up or will find a way around them
>>98237080As far as mortal mages are concerned the angels are nigh-omnipotent and nigh-omniscient. They're separate from the time loop and watching you 24/7. You would need to be smart enough to hide from what are basically godly robots that exist specifically to hunt people like you, while drawing as much magical attention to yourself as possible. Trying to break Panaxeth out of its box is the magic equivalent of shouting from a bullhorn and makes you their #1 priority.
>>98237088Ok, what if you have some slaves or some such release Panaxeth while you are under a bunch of stealth spells and as far away as possible?
>>98237079I Don't really care for what happens in the timeloop worse case scenario you can just kill yourself before you get mindraped or soulkilled. Which doesn't even matter if they can't find you. If you are just a random guy why would anyone bother with you? What are they going to soulkill millions of people?
>>98237110That works. Might even be overkill
>>98237110You could but they could easily interrogate the slaves and work backwards from there.
>>98237105But there are multiple loopers, and they aren't omniscientAdditionally, you know about the time loop, so you can just check a spiritual plane to see if you are in it and then kill yourself if you are
>>98237125They self destruct.
>>98237135The angels are detached from worldly time. It would be trivial for them to observe when the self-destruct spell was placed on them. From there, it is a process of deduction.
>>98237144They themselves placed their self destruct spell.
>>98237114>What are they going to soulkill millions of people?Yes unironically. Mind and soul mages are evil.
>>98237110They will know that you took the deal because we'll you will be made of Panaxeths flesh its what grants the free immortality then it isn't really hard to deduce from there.
>>98237170Couldn't they observe their entire lifespan to find everyone they encountered and deduce who could've conditioned them? You'd basically need to subvert them so subtly they never knew you existed and multiple outside observers with +500 IQ, endless time, and limitless focus couldn't tell who did it. On top of that, you either have to coordinate them or have them coordinate themselves, again without a trace. You would need to have Rhucupre-From-Maeve's skillset the attosecond you emerge to have a snowball's chance in hell of getting away with this.
>>98237194Yeah this is one of the reasons why having so many timeloopers isn't a good idea the bastards who soul kill willy nilly will create a butterfly effect due to all the soulkilled people just dropping dead at the start of the loop creating mass panic and throwing the whole tineline out of whack and completely different from the real timeline
>>98235939Based fellow Dad.>>98236727>probably some other dogshit idea I come up with that expands the scope againBasedJust like the in-game mapEver expanding beyond belief>>98234520Going in blind. Don't know the setting. I wonder if it'll encourage me to read the source material like the Pact Dabbler cyoa (up to part 4) or LotM (I couldn't get through the first chapter. I can only read the name Zhou Mingrui so many times).Time Loop: >Accidental Looper +40Seems like a good balanceModifiers:>MultiplayerWhy not?OriginAge:>Teen +3 BoonsBoons:>Library>Peer (Alteration)>Mentor (Mind)Magnitude:>11-18Skills:>Connected, 1>Fitness, 2>Sleuth, 3>Paranoia, 4>Intuition, 5>Dexterity, 2>Professional (artist), 1>Professional (scientist), 1Magical Perks:>Dire Familiar (Dire Ferret), 2Magical Disciplines:>Mind Magic Rank 1, 3>Transformation Rank 1, 3>Warding Rank 1, 3>Negation Rank 1, 3Spells:>Ransack>Manifold ResonanceI'm just going to live a cozy little life.Will revise on feedback. Don't think I'm interested in the source material at all.
>>98236377Why the fuck am I not in this? pic realted
>>98236836Only image builds counts tho
>>98237310Nonsense. Heaven welcomes all.
>>98237203You would be under stealth spells and far away though. Can they find you despite that just because you have its flesh? And is its flesh really necessary for immortality? Seems terribly counter-intuitive considering that would make the free immortality a trap option.Anyway, if its flesh is necessary for immortality and would fuck you over, then forgo immortality and don't take its flesh.>>98237208>You would need to have Rhucupre-From-Maeve's skillset the attosecond you emerge to have a snowball's chance in hell of getting away with this.A Timeless build can have up to 11 rank 3 disciplines. Alternatively, you can be a regular Non-Looper and fuck with Zach's soul to become an "accidental" looper during the first loop. Pretty Rhucupre-From-Maeve like.
>>98237306....come on. you know why.
>>98237331>Craft a genius plan to turn yourself into an accidental looper.>Within seconds of getting isekai'd a copy of you leaves the loop and steals your body, killing you
>>98237306All of the luminary builds featured are very recent, while yours is very many months old. Old and expired! Witch Tok has an empty egg carton!
>>98237331>fuck with Zach's soul to become an "accidental" looperThat has a one in a million chance of actually working
>>98237393Quatach-Ichl did it with a spell that isn't even intended to transfer the marker.
>>98236377I love to see it
>>98237331I didn't say it was impossible, just that it would be an absolute B I T C H to get away with. I don't think any of the current Panaxeth builds could get away with it consistently.
>>98237423YesAnd if the only recorded success is from "Slam the souls together and get lucky" (And said success did significant soul damage) it will probably be pretty hard to do that intentionallyRank 3 does not allow you to understand or modify divine magic. Even in the abyss of time zorian can't create divine artefacts
>>98237446Agree to disagree. If an unintentional spell can do it, I believe an intentional one surely can.
>>98237475Opening the gate was unintentionalActually, if you were consistant enough technically you could spawncamp the looper and just pray that one of your attempts made itand then they would be soul-damaged for a few loops afterwards, allowing you to study it in detail before making an attemptNow that I think of it, as long as the looper is zach and not anon, and you can find him on his first loop, you could probably do itHaving more then one try turns in from a pipe dream into a plausible planIt would still be better to just use his soul to send packets of information though. And you might trigger a failsafe if you get the marker placed on you incorrectly
>>98234520How bad is it if Paxaneth is freed?
>>98237548Angels will instantly solve the problem. Helping stop it is just saving the jannies some work
>>98237548Permanent global consequences, and the city gets nuked
>CYOA set in a world dominated by the strong, where the weak respect the strong, and the weak fulfill other roles for them to make up society.>World is primarily dominated by those capable of using paranormal arts; Feng Shui, Shamanism, Thaumaturgy, Vampirism, etc.>Those who achieve mastery in certain aspects of the paranormal arts have the very nature of the art engraved into their DNA Factor by the World, making it exclusive to them and natural to those with their genetic factor. These types of people make up family dynasties that are the elite and upper-class of the public and underworld.>You flop down into the largest megalopolis dominated by practitioners of the arts and their rising tension as they prepare for an open-war against each other and get to decided which family you feel most comfortable with.>One power set series you can claim as your paranormal art comes with a free century old lolibaba that's been waiting on you to spawn back in and belongs to one of the dynasties of the megalopolis. This all I got for a CYOA. I'm cooked.
>>98236985>I can soul kill an animal and check if they are dead each loop to know if I am in a timeloop or notYou can't just soul kill some random to check for a loop. Only those with a loop marker go to the next loop. Everything else is obliterated.
>>98236985Soul killing is immpossible, you need a divine artefact to remove things from the loopYou can just check the spirit realm though
I'm angry and violent because the franchises I like will never get proper full-fledged CYOAs.
>>98237867Name them, nigga; besides, you can always make them.
>>98237867JumpChain already exists for Franchise slop.
>>98234520>Time-Loop: Accidental Looper [+100]>Modifiers: Paxaneth’s Deal>Origin: Teen [+3 Boons]>Boons:Mage Fashion [Free]NobleWealthyMansion>Magnitude: Magnitude 19-35 [-5]>Skills:Fitness [-2]Charm [-3]Combatant [-4]Stable [-2]Paranoia [-4]Dexterity [-2]>Magical Perks:Immortal [Free]Soul Sight [Free]Magic Frame [-12]>Shifter Clan: Dragon [-7]>Magical Abilities:Negation Rank 3 [-9]Hijack [-10]Powerhouse [-10]Silent Casting [-10]Ghost Eyes [-10]Magic Resistance [-10]>Paxaneth’s Gift: Flowing Flesh>Alternate Universe Scenario: The First Ikosian EmperorNo idea what this is about, and none of the magic appealed to me, so I will just turn into a dragon and try freeing the primordial guy I suppose.
>mother of redditoh how this place has fallen
>>98236377Awesome anon, appreciate being in it, very cool.
>>98237875>Name themNo.>you can always make themNo.>>98237878I want more than jumpchain. It's not enough. I deserve more.
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Wait wtf Rake made Radiant Paladin???: https://cyoa.allsync.com/s/owWor64yLTngDk3?dir=/CYOA%20Creators%2C%20Authors/Rake%27s%20aka%20pog_irl%27s%20CYOAs/Radiant%20%28A%20Paladin%20CYOA%29%20CYOAWhy the fuck did he not reveal himself? I insulted him for no reason thinking he was somebody else.
>>98238010He didn'tThe allsync guy wasn't paying attention and he uploaded the imgchest, so he attributed it to rakeIt might be fixed one day, or it might not
>>98238010>I insulted him for no reasonretard
>>98238010I did not. Idk why it was attributed to me. I thought it would have been fixed by now.
