Archives & Other Resources: https://rentry.co/cyoagAllsync: https://cyoa.allsync.com/s/owWor64yLTngDk3Previous thread: >>98494697
male companions > female companions
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I can't tell why, but I've got a good feeling about this thread.
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I got some good responses in the last general so I'll repost.I have a week before school starts again and am making a fantasy cyoa. I want to include as many interesting powers, races, and builds as possible.What is your general philosophy when making a build in a fantasy cyoa? For example, I prioritize intel-gathering abilities, so I choose skills that let me scry or see the future.
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>>98504260I want to be a badass ninja, so I choose options that let me sneak about and be fast while having some combat abilities.
I like gil
>>98504260Depends on setting. I lean martial but in many fantasy settings there is the implication that further study of magic can lead to even greater heights which can convert me as martials are usually stunted in comparison. I mention this because "intel-gathering" is a classic mage potential maxing skill which already tells me you will be favoring magic. If you truly "want to include as many interesting powers, races, and builds as possible" then be aware of your own bias.Note for other anons: For the love of God I am not trying to start another caster vs martial debate, but an aspiring author is asking how to get good build diversity and that means there shouldn't be an op build type that crowd's out other play styles.
>>98504260If possible i try to be the little girl, if not possible i just don't.But that is just a minor detail of the build.In general i tend to be balanced in terms of magical and physical might, with a small bias towards healing/regeneration general resilience and holy/light magics.Stuff like that.
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https://imgchest.com/p/ljyq8pmdy25Lori T'Nara https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98397662/#98398332Force Navigator https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98440304/#98442102Surviving Padawan https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98397662/#98398639Mando Knight https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98397662/#98400830Mar Darik https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98408197/#98411551Ghost in the Droid https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98419432/#98420728Clever Guardian https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98440304/#98441601Solari https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98463295/#98466179Ph'rt'hly https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98419432/#98421577Master Byraan https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98427790/#98432584Lunath Vocasta https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98427790/#98433237Lala the Hutt https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98427790/#98434902Kyber Bomber https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98440304/#98440895Teronas https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98440304/#98441911Imperial Bastard https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98440304/#98443385Gigachad https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98471380/#98474788Young Jedi Padawan https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98488207/#98491595Soldier of The Force https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98494697/#98498345Cree'v'aak https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98494697/#98501212
>>98504374One thing I haven't seen anyone talk about is the gender ratio of Youdo. I don't mean the social ramifications of there being roughly four women for every man, but the implication of it. It is the City Between life and death, and the vast majority of souls there are so because they're unable or unwilling to move on in the Buddhist reincarnating conception of moving on. Does that mean, broadly-speaking, that women cling more fiercely to the desires of life than men?
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Cyoas for helplessness?
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>>98504206is there any downside to completely ignoring any form of adventure in this one and living life as a risk avoidant npc?
>>98504446The vast majority of souls there are not dead from our world.The souls of the dead from both worlds, Youdo (the world in between) and our world, go to the river of souls first, where Kofuko took our soul.Souls destination is then based on karma, with bad karma meaning a lot of punishment before reincarnation.The people that die and don't go there, become undead. A case like our reincarnation with all memories, in a specific body we make and not karma based is artificial and made by someone like Kofuko altering the natural course.Undeads are usually still people from Youdo that died, as undeads usually become one due to practices related to the supernatural but some come from our world.The rest of people living in Youdo are humans, usually descendants of the mages/sorcerers that discovered the City and went there a long time ago, and in the rest of cases people that discover the city (very rare) on their own and coming from our world.Yokais are a species that also usually just are born and live in the city and they were never humans, just descendants of them mixed with their spirit leader.The Shapeshifters are like the humans, they are the descendants of the humans sorcerers/alchemist that discovered the city AND also practiced an art of splitting their souls into their human body and a Familiar animal, trying to escape true death. Once their human body died they practiced shifting the Familiar animal body into a humanoid form, and then breeded between other people in the same situationSo, broadly speaking, the majority of people there are not unable or unwilling to move on to the next life. They are simply the living descendants of humans (and variations of humans like yokai and spaheshifters) that found the City in between that is a place between the living world and the spirit (dead) world. But anybody living can live there and reach that play if they know how, without having to die, and breed there. Its just a place at the end of the day
>>98504534Why is this constantly reposted? Is this a spambot?
>>98504534It depends. You may not like the consequences of doing it as a looper.It's also extremely lame.
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>>98504560I'm just poking fun at the anon from last thread.
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>>98504558>>98504446Needing another comment for my autism rant.So the people you are talking about are the Undead. But as I said the Undead are not usually dead people from our world but from the city.Another thing that could be problematic are Spirits. There are 2 types of Spirits broadly speaking. The ones created by a lot of people believing in an idea. It could be a Sect preaching to a non existent God forming a Spirit with said name. It could be a lot of people dreading a plague forming a spirit that simbolizes it.And the second type is human unfinished business making them unable to move on upon their death. Someone dying but wanting a lot of revenge upong someone, for example, could create a Spirit that simbolizes that revenge and wants to fulfill it. But that Spirit is not the dead person. The dead person created it with his grudge. His soul will still go to the river (unless he becomes an Undead) of souls like the rest. The Spirit is a new soul, a new being.Having said this. I think (lore wise) there are more womens in Youdo merely by genetic problems. Like the Ninokata clan. The sorcerers that went there at first must have been not that big of a group. There must have been some genetic problem in some members that made having male offspring harder. It circulated through the generations and they were never able to remove it. They are not necesarily inbreeding, think of it like the Blond gene coming from 1 guy in the past and how much it spreaded without people having to inbreed. The ninokata with their ibbreeding tho, makes it more notoriousWith enough people from our world going there it could be diluted.
>>98504374So how exactly is anyone supposed to use the Fairy Star?
>>98504619As its intended. The end of time is approaching. If the Fairy Star is not used, everything ends.You just need a pure wish to stop that. Not someone "I want the world to not end to continue being a rapist murderer killing babies machine!" but someone with a pure wish to not see existence reset with a good heart is enough.The rest of wishes are either impossible to do with a pure heart, or useless if the end of times will come anyway.I like to think the Golden Centennial Avatar if saved from her fate, and given proper guidance, its the best bet to do that wish. As they have a spotless karmic balance.
>>98504206Senior - Being a cool old guy will help answer why I have so many magical skillsNon looperMultiplayerMage fashion - Fash'nableWealthy - Money talksNoble - Status talksMansion - Big mansion gets babesList - Connections are useful, and I can get help for anything I don't know, or send loopers to do it for mePriest - Legal soul magicCriminal - Illegal soul magicMagnitude 16 (14) - Should be a good balanceConnected - More boonsCharm - I'm not the best socially, so this should help the other loopers talk to me.Combatant - Self defence, fooPlanning - To help me come up with a good plan to help the loopers, and fully take advantage of having them as my helpers. For our mutual benefit.Sleuth - Helps with planning and all sorts of thingsMemory - If I'm going to be getting a large amount of new research from previous loops, a good memory will help me with that.Passion - Passion for learning, since I'm lazy.Professional (Teacher) - Teaching others my awesome skills so they can figure stuff out themselvesProjection 3Negation 2Dimensionalism 3 + MathemagicSoul magic 3 + Ghost eyesMind Magic 2Warding 2Spell formula 3Hopefully these skills will let me figure out that demiplane soul fuckery, or whatever it is.My build will try and help all the accidental loopers so they don't get their soul destroyed. I'm sure we can figure something out with all my connections and skills, and they can give me research that I can progress throughout loops.
>>98504678I will also look and dress exactly like this.
>>98504575This cyoa is full of worms
sup bros made this oc lol haha
>>98504696Green button
>>98504696I'm in a not so great mood tonight
>>98504619>>98504635Noriko is the cannon Fairy Star user IMO, who saves the universe at the climax of a specific version of the anime.
>>98504843Canon*
>>98504619You aren't, just don't choose that age.
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>>98504260I like passive buffs that enhance my mind, body, and soul.Also I like when races have their average size listed. It gives you a better idea how different they are.
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Can all fantasy powers and abilities be categorized as martial or magical? Is there a third category?
I like the idea of a rogue type classification that gets all of it’s power from items and connections with other humans(And extreme skill in using these things)
>>98505182No, not unless you use retardedly broad definitions.
>>98505205Give me of an example of an ability that is neither magical or martial. The only example I can think of is psionics, which is really just sci-fi magic.
>>98505223Divine and demonic.>just sci-fi magicYeah, retardedly broad definitions. A setting easily can have both magic and psionics.
>>98504575I just woke up and I'm already tired
>>98505182Basically. The only exceptions I know of are things that are 100% supernatural but aren't magic for BS reasons in the setting. Usually to appeal to people who want abilities but don't like magic for some reason like certain people who like Monk or Paladin classes.
>>98505182Tech can sort of be a third type in some settings
Anyone have any of those island cyoas or old school battle royale with power type cyoas Bonus if not in the allsync
OC from last thread
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>>98505291>ruining pngsin
>>98505182If your definitions for those are: things that are physically possible / Things that aren’t physically possible then yes, they include everythingThe issue with these catagories is that they suck and it makes no sense in setting why anyone would choose only one
>>98505182Definition of Martial>Pertaining to combat.Definition of Magical>Pertaining to supernatural forcesYes and easily, non-violent skills, fields of knowledge, crafting, survivalism, social connections, basically you're asking if the "Rogue" archetype exists.
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>>98504977>Divine Weapon: Artisanal Handgun>Martial Prowess: "">Reincarnation>Divine Speed>Divine Engineer>Ascended>God's Eyes>Sixth Sense>Ancient Mysteries>Defender of the InnocentLove this one forever
>>98505291>>98505348"Mister Popular">Modules: MIND.libGOLEMS.libENTITIES.libSPIRITS.lib>Core: M.E.D.U.S.A.>Familiar: SLURMThe magical equivalant of having a homephone, yellowpages, and no worries about long international calls.
>>98505182Overlord has a bunch of different power systems like Martial Arts, Mana, Ki, Runecrafting, etc.
>>98504260Unless nerfed or not included, I go for abilities that let me steal power. Not necessarily just plain power copying, but things like gaining portion of stats on kill or copying skills by reading memories. If not viable, then some other way to permanently accumulate power even if it's slow.
>>98504260I always go for commander classes and generally gravitate towards mind-control or similar mental powers.
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>>98505631Yiff in hell, furfag newcancer.
>>98504260Similar to the previous anon I always go for charisma or commander stuff, but that's usually just perks and stuff and not a powerset, so as far as actual powers go recently i've been gravitating more towards summoning. I like my evil dark lord aesthetics, but I prefer to let others do the fighting for me, and summoning gives a lot of options, need healing? Summon an angel or phoenix or something, need a tank summon earth elementals or something, damage summon demons, etc etc. I also bounce around biomancy and mind control stuff but my buddies keep telling me to not do mind control, and druidic stuff doesn't fit my evil-larping aesthetics.
>>98505259I rarely see anyone talk about Soul Graft Battle Royale, which is both island & battle royale.https://imgchest.com/p/9249jozqv7nAdmittedly it's fuck off humongous which is probably why its never posted. But I've always liked it; it does a good job of seeming surprisingly comfy for a battle to the death. The way its set up makes PvP and PvE both valid, and balanced so that you'd still be cautious of others but not so paranoid that everyone would need to lone wolf it. Instead people would probably gather into groups, probably with enforced safe zone neutral grounds between different ones or armies. There's even a dedicated healer/support option in the Mandrake.But eventually everyone gets a unique immortality and so things would probably devolve into buddies happily killing even their buddies for the grand prize, because who cares? You're immortal already, the grand prize is just a happy bonus.Nice variation in powersets too. Some are just extreme physical powerhouses, some get weird magics, some are obvious early game kings and some are weak as shit until suddenly some crucial upgrade makes them actually good.
>>98502133What do you guys prefer? A spacemarine crashlands on a fantasy planet alongside his endentured servant elf slave who's sole purpose is to pilot him to his next battle and help maintain his armor and weapons, he's the only man shes ever known and after thousands of years together she feels a sense of comfort by his side he still doesn't reciprocate.OrA spacemarine crashlands on a fantasy planet and is nursed to health by an ancient and incredibly lonely demigodess elf who teaches him how to speak their language, regales him with tales of the history and geography of the land and gradually lusts after him, awakening her deeply locked away feminine instincts.
>>98504351Realism for martials and Fantasy for casters? Always love to see it
>>98505798I dont care
>>98505766Best grand prize?
>>98505798It sounds like you are a woman, and I would rather the elf be old/lonely and the guy be horny
>>98505830Factually, probably the magic book. Realistically since everyone is gonna be going for that? I'll take the snilf in the mysterious vase. Being a interdimensional trader I'm sure she can get you ersatz versions of a lot of whats on offer anyway eventually. Also getting some of that snussy given you're her saviour.
>open cyoa>get to companions>wizards are all 20-something stop doing this, magic was never meant to be used by kids. wizards should always be grown men at the very least and ideally old geezers. it's the same with witches, stop making them sexy they should be ugly old women (although using charms to make themselves look young and hot to trick people is acceptable).
>>98505853No.
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>>98505853All wizards should be atleast 1000 years old and with the appearance of a little girl
>>98505830If you take the fountain of youth it should be pretty easy to take over the world by using it to recruit soldiers (As in start a cult and then give it to the higher initiates, never tell the press it exists)And once you control earth it should be trivial to get more magical stuff
>>98505766>I rarely see anyone talk about Soul Graft Battle RoyaleBecause it's a garbage CYOA
>>98505894It’s one of the best, although it comes from a simpler time
>>98505853>All wizards need to look like old fucks so I can cope with being a bum that couldn't figure out an actually good Immortality option
>>98504374This masterpiece needs an interactive desperately
>>98505975Go tell reddit that then
>>98504929I love night ride!!!I'd love to be in night ride if there was a financial reward at the end
>>98505862it feels like subliminal messaging, like the words "i was made by a retard" are buried onto every level of its creation, obvious even from the most superficial skim
>>98505862Tok, I've got an important question. What do you do when your cock starts to hurt from edging to your builds too much? It's starting to get concerning
>>98505862Tok what would you do if you had a padawan other than the one you wanted to fuck
>>98506044>Tok what would you do if you had a padawan other than the one you wanted to fuckThere are several padawans I would want to fuck, but let's say I didn't get a fuckable padawan. Then I would ask for a new padawan and if my request was denied for whatever reason, I would try my best to rage-bait the padawan into demanding a new master or quitting the jedi order. >>98506036>What do you do when your cock starts to hurt from edging to your builds too much? It's starting to get concerningThe thing about edging is that you should not edge for too long. 1-2 hours is fine, but 3+ hours is where you should draw the line because if you keep edging yourself past that point your cock will get kinda numb to the stimulation and whever you cum it won't feel as good.>>98506014All low IQ people can do is throw insults. But your insults have no substance since they are not backed up by anything. For example, I could say your build is retarded. That is just empty words. But if someone where to say: Your build is retarded and here is why and then present point after point why my build is bad then I would actually feel bad about my build. However, that would never happen as my builds are flawless and there is nothing retarded about them.
>>98505853Based
>>98506092>rage-bait the padawan into demanding a new master or quitting the jedi order.Sith behaviorDisgusting What if you got one of the padawans from this thread?
>>98506092i said it was subliminal, retard
>>98506092>begging for acceptance>delusional gloating
>>98505862Hot, but for some reason I don't like the name.Would study the force under.
>>98505853This. I want to fuck old men.
>>98505975>masterpiecelol>interactiveLMAO
Can someone explain to me why tankista put so much time and effort,far above and beyond what's reasonable, for cyoa so complex and impossible to "win" that barely anyone even played it?It's such a beautiful work of art but it's quite literally unplayable
>>98506190I think some people make CYOAs to exise ideas from their minds, or realize their vision. How many replies it gets is irrelevant for those guys.
>>98506190>cyoa so complex and impossible to "win" that barely anyone even played it?>barely anyone even played it?Wut?
>>98506225Compare it with Entropist real quick.
>>98506231As someone that loves Entropist, who cares? Both dominated the threads by a long time. They both good. They both have a lot of builds.
>>98506231It is more winnable.I like it better.I'm not sure how big the difference in number of players is, if any. Because I don't give a fuck about thing like that. But OR is objectively a threadbuster and occupied the thread for months.
>>98506231i'm sorry but i don't want to compare shit cyoas to shit cyoas, that seems like a complete waste of time
>>98506262agreed, let's discuss Tok's masterpieces instead! I'm so excited for hentai heroine
>>98506262Pillfag...
>>98506225I assumed he meant the Magocracy update
>>98506270I'm more of a Wodan enjoyer myself...
>>98506282They're one and the same
>>98506299wowan ;___;
>whining then shitpostinggood thread y'all
Suddenly realised my WIP isn't fun...What am I supposed to do now
>>98506402Join the failures that gave up.
>>98504189You've got to have a good mix of both. If you only have female companions then my suspension of disbelief breaks because it's too obvious the CYOA is trying to pander to my cock. I don't need CYOAs to do that for me. Plus, any good adventuring party needs bros too.
>>98506402post it here; if it gets mocked that just validates your realization, but you might also get feedback that'd fix it
>>98506484>If you only have female companions then my suspension of disbelief breaks because it's too obvious the CYOA is trying to pander to my cock. I don't need CYOAs to do that for me. Plus, any good adventuring party needs bros too.Imagine being this gay
>>98506402I found the same thing. I was writing stuff just because I felt like it fit the WIP rather than because it was actually fun. I reset back to the part of my WIP I knew was fun and started again, but this time I gave myself no pressure to write stuff just for the sake of it. I let myself be motivated purely by shit which seemed cool and fun. I found that a lot of my cut writing could be reused once I'd found a legitimately fun framework.The one downside is I've been working on my WIP since like 2022.>>98506489Not enjoying cock is a skill issue on your part
>>98506488I don't want to post it cuz that'll just make me lose all interest in ever working on it againI need to see more cyoas, see what they do and if I can copy the better parts
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>>98504826congrats you got isekai's into the warhammer 40k universe as a regular human, and no you don't get any cool powers to help you survive :)
>>98504445If Tok is your master, you have to take the Bad Influence
>>98506402Restart. Same as video games. Current run sucks but the game is good? Restart.This time, start with options that amp up the feelings.
>>98506550Interesting challenge if I was a normal human in Warhammer 40k then I would choose to be a human on earth during the 20th millenium
Tok is gayGil is gayCelt is gayWodan is gayRake is gayPca is gaySda is gayYou’re gay
>>98506688;(
>>98506688Oho, not me of course. I am superstraight
>>98506729You are the super gay I’m afraid
>>98506402add fun
>>98506748why are you afraid
>>98506506>I reset back to the part of my WIP I knew was fun and started again>>98506593>Restart.Thanks guys, actually great advice. I've gotten back into the wip again
>>98506688when was the last time we saw gil or celt
>>98506958when we saw wodan
>>98506991I don't even know who that is
>>98505182I say martial powers come from the body and what it interacts with, and sometimes that stuff is magical.
Magic is magicMartialism is martialism They can overlapSorcery isn’t necessarily about combatCombat isn’t necessarily about sorcery Sometimes magic can remove the need for combat altogether>>98413872
>>98507197I like when minor magics, like speaking to animals, are “easily done” but come with grim implications. Maybe mommy fucked a bear and the resultant child could talk to bears. The kid is also semi-retarded. Is that a good cost/consequence?
>>98505853That's the problem with gooner authors/authors listening to gooners. They want all the companions to be fuckable, which is just retarded. All the best stories have characters that the protagonist wouldn't want to fuck. Personally I want more classic adventures like Lord of the Rings. All your companions are bros, fucking isn't on your mind, and you settle down with your waifu after the adventure is over. And if you can't make it to the end of the adventure without fucking, well, that's what female civilians are for.
“Hey Mr. Wizard. If you can suck out the moisture from a tree to give us fresh water, surely you can suck the moisture out of a man to kill them outright? And then drink their water right after of course.”“Huh… I never thought about that…”
>>98507247You are clearly uneducated in the ways of magic. Don't you know that every being is immersed in their own mana field making spells that effect the internals of a creature exorbitantly expensive to cast as you need to overpower a creatures innate magic resistance. While plants on the other hand barely posses any will and by extension have little capability of defending themselves against direct applications of magic making them easy targets to drain.
Post Danmachi
>>98507247The innate godhood within every man would prevent that, foolish apprentice
>>98507247>drinking another man’s fluidsgayyyyNo wonder everyone thinks spellcasters are fags.
Reminder that Norse wizards, including Odin, drank semen for magic powers. Anyone who thinks this isn’t true will just accuse the Jews of re-writing history to make the white man look gay. Even if this were true, it would be a 10/10 joke.
>>98507454>drank semen for magic powersanons will happily do that too
>>98507477Dragons are animalistic, so it's okay to consume their fluids.
>>98507488She isn’t posting as much latelyI wonder if she found a hobby
>>98507477I didn't
>>98507584Sorry guys, she found a hobby in sucking my dick
>>98507543>>98507477Do I have a medieval quote just for you!
>>98507625Bro medieval people were so retarded, they needed to make up these stupid stories just to force the peasants to burn rotting corpses so they didn't catch the plague because apparently they were too dumb to do that on their own
>>98507724That sounds so angry towards them. I think cultures that are a bit silly are all the more adorable for it.
>>98507488You will always be btfo’d by their presence and it’s fucking hilarious to see
>>98507767Coddle the people who make up civilization and treat their retardation as "silly" and you get the civilizations of today. More concerned about pronouns than actually building a life worth living.
>>98507839Wow, your stern yet prudent raising of the little civilizations of the distant past sure is improving our present day lives a lot retroactively.
>>98507724>Bonfire made with the bones of animals>Rotting corpsesanon they would had been eaten instead of being left to rot.you absolute buffoon
>>98507845t.
>>98507870Anon. You cannot improve the societies of the distant past without a time machine. You do not have a time machine.
>>98506402What about it do you think is unfun?
>>98507907Don't worry I fixed it now. It was a franchise cyoa and all the missions were just rips from the franchise with no differences or anything interesting about them at all
>>98504687>>98505240We will post OR every thread until you like it
>>98508105This poster is full of worms
>>98508105>we
>>98505853Counterpoint, if they're all geezers then that makes the wrinkly old Gandalf/Dumbledore-style great sage/master magician/sorcerer supreme all the less impactful. Having a broad range of wizards of differing power levels, and different ages, means that your personal Elminster isn't lost amongst the sea of wizards.
>>98506178This but unironicallyGive me old gay monster men companions
>>98508368He meant the worms obviously. Its always been the worms.
>>98505862>gender swapper AsariI guess it makes sense. In my headcanon they're like the Harpies from Tales of Androgyny.More likely they are oldschool futanari without balls. Doubt we'll ever get a look at a nude one in canon projects.
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Why don't we post CYOAs like this anymore
>>98509120Too simple and samey.
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>>98509120This is sooo easy>ComputerNecessary. I can have all the fun I want.>InternetNecessary. I can have all the shows, games, books, music, e.t.c that I need.>WindowsI like sunlight.>Modern Luxury FurnitureWould be great compared to basic stuff.>Two plates of ANY food I wantDelicious and I only eat like twice a day anyways.>Training RoomGotta stay /fit/>DrugLSD. I'll microdose it.>DrinksI don't like alcohol much but it does say DRINKS. So I can get, like, Chocolate Milk, Dr. Pepper and...I'll figure out the third one.>Best Doctors In The WorldThis is great since I actually have some health issues.>Fuck uhhh...uhhhh....Man I don't know, I guess give me the woman even if I don't care for sex. I'll just talk to her.
>>98509120>supposed to a challenge >is actually way better than waging for 10 yearsReally activated my almonds
>>98508320>>98508491How could you all be so mean to Sakura? Look, she's crying! Apologize immediately! Or better yet, give me your OR builds, that works too. What I lose happiness seeing Sakura sad will be more than made up by your builds after all.>>98509120Computer, window, furniture, internet, groceries, 2 plates, gym, drinks, doctors, sexy woman.
>>9850912010 choices is way too much when you only got 20 options. It doesn’t take much to choose every other option. Like who is going to need to quadruple up on entertainment? Getting internet access makes the isolation a bit less damning, especially if its not garbage.Don’t get me wrong, still a good chance you end up crazy being stuck in an enclosed space regardless of choices, but it’s going to be a pretty nice room regardless.
>>98506099>What if you got one of the padawans from this thread?Depends on which one I get. I would be fine with any girl padawan, but if I get a boy anon, I'm going to act as provocatively as possible and make sure he is hard as diamonds 24/7 under my watch. I'm gonna blue ball him until he cannot take it anymore and masturbates furiously to find release. I will catch him doing it with my invisibility and holographically record it. Then I'm gonna bully and tease him so hard, calling him a pervert padawan or pervawan and other creative nicknames, and make sure he never lives it down, all while making sexual innuendos, and if he says anything about it I'll shame him and say that of course I didn't mean anything sexual. It is his corrputed pervert mind that makes everything sexual. Gonna gaslight the shit out of him. He will either emerge as a dark side fallen jedi or as the jedi with the strongest willpower and discipline in history. Either way, it's going to be so much fun messing with him.
>>98509659>forwarded to the Jedi Council>fallen status confirmed>permission to kill granted
>>98509120Fine, I made my own since nobody posts these. Someone enjoy this 15-minute MSPaint tragedy. Curious which choice would be more popular. "OC" if you can call this actual content.
>>98509673btw incase people are retarded you choose either red or blue not which ones you want from each
>>98509200is this the best one-page cyoa?
>>98509673RedBlue food is death.
>>985096731 is best but it annoys me that the alcohol and coffee are useless to me
>>98509671If you snitch on me, I'm gonna make sure that secret holo recording of you jerking off doesn't stay secret, you little rat. Everyone in the Jedi Order, including the younglings, will see how much of a fucking freak you are. Your shame will stalk you like a shadow. So you better shut your naughty little pervawan mouth, or it won't just be me who calls you a horny good-for-nothing pervert. You don't want that, right? No, so be a good boy and bend over~
>>985096731 is better, but I wouldn't talk to the UMA for fear I would accidentally fall in love with her out of loneliness
>>98509767Imagine not waifuing the (proper) AIcouldn't be me
>>98509762Nobody cares about people jerking off in the jedi order. You're just reinforcing that you would never make it as one.
>>98509782This is not how it's supposed to go. I said all the lines, in all the doujins I read, this is not how sexual blackmailing suppose to go...
>>98509673How is 2 even a choice?
>>98509730>>98509741>>98509767>>98509801Turns out I'm shit at designing choicesthank you for the input
>>98509200Style: Gothic ParishClimate: TemperateGeographical Features:>Mountains>Rolling Hills>Woodlands>Rivers>WaterfallsAccommodations: Tower LodgeResidence Location: Village BorderSpecial Artifacts:>Shiny Marble>Fur Mantle>Yellowed BookVillage Border: All Roads LeadOccupation: ShepardVillage Highlights:>Fairy Grove>Galaxy Lake>Siren Overlook>The Old CastleVillage Guide: Lonely Monster>Christmas Cake>Dapper Gentleman>Smug Little GirlUneasy Peculiarities:>Nighttime Shades>Mystery Festival>The Old Guard>Nature Sprite>Wandering God>Decay City RuinsCozy Shephard life. Stay inside with my friends when spooky stuff is going on.>>98509721Possibly.
>>98509807You tried at least.
>>98509673>1If McDonald's CEO looks like he is in physical pain trying to take the tiniest bites of a McDonald's hamburger and then proceeds to spit it out, I'm sure as hell won't eat that shit either.
>>98509816thanksI thought actual sex, a gym, b-ball and a futuristic console with cool games was enough to tap into the inner jocks mind, but I forgot where we were (I'd choose left too)>>98509825Good point.
>>98509673>one yearSo this is free isnt it? Just nolife skyrim or something and get a load of money
>>98509859don't feel too bad. UMA won me over
>>98509866>oh but you dont understand, social isolation and shitYou have the internet, you can literally talk to your family and loved ones whenever you want. You just cant physically meet them (for a year).
>>98509859>gymExercise doesn't do much without decent food.
>>98509659>>98509762Ahh finally irrefutable evidence that Toks anger at princess anons beating the blackmail system was personal.
>>98509673The food choice alone makes me pick red. I can work out on my own without a gym. Besides, I prefer computers to consoles.Zero interest in drugs or alcohol, so that's a moot point. I do have wine sometime though.
>>98509866>>98509872yeah nobody wants to spend 10 years locked away>>98509905Good point
>>98509859I would go for 2 if it weren't for the literally poisoned burgershttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W6QFxgS8fSA
>>98509881true
>>98509673The reason this fails is that its "too free". Yes, it has all the trappings of that old style of cyoa, but what made those cyoa is that while often poorly balanced theres still a choice there to be made. "You are trapped in a room for 10 years, do you want an unlimited supply of hard drugs, or medical care" has a logical answer, but in both cases you understand the opportunity cost, 10 years is an implicitly hard time to be isolated and something to help you cope (drugs) is valuable. If you take the computer or some other "luxury" you are sacrificing utility and health, and vice versa when you pick the doctors youre eating into your "make this less miserable" choices. Here you have everything. Oh sure, one year in a room very hard much suffering (can leave any time), but theres no feeling of "tradeoff", its all largely the same shit. You can get wasted or high, you can run or you can have a home-gym, you can have junkfood or healthy food or whatever "fine swedish food" is meant to be. But in any instance you have it all, youre never forced to actually THINK about the choice very much as much as pick "well, I guess I like ramen more than good internet", its picking the flavor you like rather than trying to figure out a way to "solve a problem".
>>98509659Force feminization.. Unfortunately the jedi can resist manipulations of such nature. Perhaps a holocron is needed.
>>98509924How is that forced feminization?
>>98509907>yeah nobody wants to spend 10 years locked awayOkay, but thats the premise, thats what makes the cyoa worthwhile. The choices matter BECAUSE youre in a terrible situation otherwise. "Youre in the zombie apocalypse, do you want a hot girl or a badass marine with you" works because the situation is really fucking bad and whichever option you pick youre going to be lacking, making the choice difficult. The reason >>98509120 and other cyoa of its kind (there were many) "work" insofar as they do is BECAUSE the original premise is terrible. Because its not a "choose how to enjoy a year of vacation" but instead "figure out a way to endure 10 years of this shit for a prize at the end". The fact that the choice involves a situation you dont want to be in means youre going to try and figure out a way to make it less awful, rather than just going "yea, I guess this would be fine".
>>98509931Force feminization- not forced feminization. It's a new force power that is surely of use for master tokhaargolbi.
>>98509934>but modern cyoa cant have "bad" premises or people wont play them!Probably true, but modern cyoa are very different. A modern cyoa is a much longer time investment from the "player", its a whole fucking process thats more akin to making a character for DND or whatever, it requires that investment and therefore a world anon wants to insert themself into. Old style cyoa were closer to those random "A, B or C" images you would see on facebook, the low investment and high information density means that the moment someone looks at the image they see the choices and are confronted with the question posed.
We are more sophisticated now.
>>98509934I would hate to be locked away for 10 years because the world would change too much after I left
>>98509120What's the best trapped in a room cyoa?
>>98509984>2016Trump was presidentCrime everywhereEconomy sucked>2026Trump is presidentCrime everywhereEconomy sucksNothing has changed.
>>98509807The future console is almost tempting, but I'm not quite as optimistic about the future of video games as I once was. I've always thought "past games but better" would be a cooler fantasy console choice - like, older games, but from a universe where they had limitless budget and dev time, and the developers had endless passion for the project. "Pokemon RSE but you can visit Kanto and Johto and they're all amazing", "Mario 64 but with ten times the levels (all high quality)", "OoT but if they finished that Ura Zelda expansion pack thing", etcOther than that, SCP-294 drink machine is the only thing that stands out. That would be pretty cool too.The nutritional paste could basically fix the food issues with B, especially mixed with the drink machine. I'm already living mostly on meal shakes anyways. But I think A wins. The scale would shift in B's favor if the fantasy console was cooler.
>>98509987good questionpeople should post more>>98509994strong point>>98510002Thanks, good thoughtsif I ever spent 15-20 mins in mspaint again I'll try better
ORDION WHERE IS DUNGEON DELVER V3
>>98510273YOU FOOL! YOU DIDN'T EVEN CHERISH DUNGEON DELVER V1 AND DUNGEON DELVER V2!
>>98510273I was genuinely looking forward to that update. It seemed like he was close and then.... nothing.
>>98510273I skipped reading v2 because he immediately started talking about v3 so I expected it to arrive in reasonable time frame...
>>98510273I hope he makes it not on video game logic.
i liked v1 better than v2 tbdesu
>>98509994Nothing ever happens
>>98510273>>98510424Eh his stuff is always a little game like. My issue was that he REALLY didn't want to give us any abilities that didn't come with horrific drawbacks. Everyone's builds ended up kinda samey between everyone multiclassing because the premade classes had bad internal synergy and the majority of perks being bad causing anons to all pick the same ones that were tolerable.
>>98510002Obsidian games from timelines they weren't held to unrealistic deadlines.
>>98509120Holy shit the world's best doctors?My body's slowly failing on me and I don't have insurance, that'd be great!
>>98510458I feel like other than arsenal being obviously popular there was a lot of build variety.
>>98509915>10 years is an implicitly hard time to be isolatedlmao, what?
>>98510575>Holy shit the world's best doctors?Kinda loses its value when the "worlds best doctors" would want to force you to get a vaccine for an illness you literally would not be able to get nor spread while in isolation anyway. not even mentioning that the vax didn't even work
>>98510633I figure by "world's best doctors" it meant the elite shadow doctors whose existence isn't publicly known with all their miracle cures.If I had cancer I'm sure they could cure thatOh I'm suffering from "getting old"? Quick get this patient some adrenochrome!
>>98510608>>98510458>>98510273Speaking of DD and builds does anyone have a link to the posted builds for V1 and V2?
>>98509120>>98509673Someone posts an imprisoned one-pager and someone even makes an OC imprisoned one-pagerIt's enough to make a grown man cry. I vow this week I will deliver OC mark my words anons
>>98509994>There has been an awakening-- have you felt it?All was shittified in order to stop what's coming, and to make as many self-delete before it comes.
>looking at my old buildswow i was retarded
Most of my old builds are entirely optimal
>>98510764What a sad life you live.
>>98510764Optimal for what?
>>98510770No, I can still choose to be sub optimal and make a character build, and I almost always have intent beyond survival or strength
>>98510816The goal always changes
>>98510764My builds are optimized for my fetishes.
>>98510764My builds are optimized for the realistic maximization of the expected remaining lifespan.
>>98510831Somehow I doubt that's how life would actually go, even with your options.
>>98510764>oh science, it's an OCerino!>time to Choose Your Own Adventure>scan the thread for the Best Build>make sure it's peer-reviewed as the mathematically optimal solution>copy it>cum all over my screen to celebrate winning another CYOA
>>98510764My builds are optimized for the fulfillment of a happy romance (with the loli companion) and the success of our children.
>>98510764I feel bad for you anon. I used to be like you but several CYOAs eventually showed me that relentlessly powerfaging is less fun than creating the character I want to be thematically as well as splurging on the waifu and giga dick options. I still have power gamer tendencies but unless a CYOA is explicitly multiplayer AND pvp (ones like this create shitstorms for a reason), you will never face the optimum build, so why compare?
>>98510853>oh Christ, my lord and saviour, hallowed be thy name, it's an OCerino!>time to Create Your Own Adventure!>scan my hentai folder for the most sovlfvll goonbait>Send 5,000 dollars to my spirit-shaman to ensure it aligns with my earth chakras>copy it into the cyoa, while reading as little of the lore as possible>cum all over my screen to celebrate winning another MCYOA larp
>>98510904I can do bothThere are many paths to walk down, and each is best walked with a specific set of toolsYou don’t need to pick the waifu option to find love, you don’t need to pick the strength option to fight, you don’t need to build a characters personality through a spreadsheet list of their abilitiesYou can imagine harder then thatI optimise for sport, and it’s fun.I should probably spend more time considering the world after the choices
>>98510861Does the loli age?
>>98510940Well sure anon, but the point of CYOAs is to have SOME structure. It's a starting point and more could come later, but the setup you begin with is important and in some cases starting with a waifu is better than meeting one later, or having the ability or spell, etc. it does remind me that some CYOAs explicitly cap the possibilities available in the future and these never do as well as the open ended ones.
>>98510955Perhaps and perhapsI want “tools” so that I can “Scale” the “Wall”Handwaving the challenge of “Scaling” the “Wall” and saying I could just jump it is the same to me as not doing itI can see the benefit of a narrative build, and I have made quite a few myself, but I still rather to focus on the materialThis is why I think companions and backstory choices should have a different point system to powers. So that it isn’t ever optimal to choose one narrative path
>>98509949>We are more miserable, self-defeating and prone to blaming each other or giving up on our endeavours nowTechnically you are correct.
>>98510986Instructions unclear, chose a deliberately suboptimal course of actions while having every conceivable advantage then acted surprised when it backfired horribly on me.
>>98510986It also depends on how high the "wall" is and a harsh setting will of course get people to prioritize harder. I generally agree that there should be multiple point pools to separate abilities vs items and companions but it should be noted that they can directly contribute to success as well and I have seen more than a few "optimum" builds that I think would realistically have worse odds by virtue of being alone and unequipped.
>>98510946Of course, a loli that doesn't age is a cake you don't eat. You get the best of both worlds watching your lover grow up
Do you ever feel like everyone who every anon who said they liked your cyoa said so out of pity?
>>98511110nah. my cyoas are pure kino
>>98511108Then it is an enlightened suggestion, and I wish you every blessing on your journey
>>98509984I would hate to be locked away for 10 years because prolonged social isolation is bad for you.
>>9851062610 years is a reasonably severe prison term. Its a long time. Spending 10 years in a small room with no windows or other people is bad for you, its not something thats easy.
>>98511120>10 years in a small room with no windows or other people is bad for you, its not something thats easy.Speak for yourself filthy normie
>>98511120Its honestly so sad that modern people literally can't just sit and ponder life. they NEED their iphones plugged into their internet, they NEED to share their uninteresting thoughts on what TV show celebrity they enjoyed watching last nightI feel embarrased to be associated with modern humanity
>>98511123Yea, people in ye olden times were well known to enjoy prolonged periods of isolation.
>>98511123That's one hell of a false equivalence
>>98511127>>98511128t. zoomer scared of an empty room
>>98511140I actually studied this shit in university and people would not spend their lives in empty rooms pondering. What they did was spend a prodigious amount of their lives getting lightly drunk with their friends, family, and neighbours in the local pub.
>>98511147I've yet to meet a truly wise person who ever went to uni, all they did was get drunk and mess around like animals. Just as you said.
>>98511140Anon "Being locked in an empty room" is literally one of the harshest punishments in society. You are describing solitary isolation, that thing they only do to criminals when they are bad by prison standards.
>>98511150I'm not hugely convinced by your point given you can't even read my post
>>98511155Oh no! You have to shut your mouth and not look at a phone for 5 whole minutes?!? That's lidderally torture!! They should pick up a book some time, use that God given brain to ponder their life, how they fucked up enough to become a criminal and delve into their infinite imagination
>>98511158All I got from it was you being triggered at being called out for not being able to live in harmony with yourself.
>>98511164Medieval and early modern people drank a LOT with their friends, family, neighbours, enemies, everyone really.
>>98509659that's hot
>>98511193No it fucking isn’t
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>>98509673Pros of #1>Healthier food>Cool ass PC>Nice relaxing gardenCons>No gym>Chatgpt girlfriend>Coffee, in a situation where I wanna be as unalert as possibleOption #2Pros>Fuck yeah,gym>Actual real life person to talk to and enjoy the company of (super important)>Can experiment with every drug >Drink variety>Food varietyOption #2 cons>Unhealthier options for food>Can't touch grass>No gaymen pissyBoth are good, but I would probably like option 2 better because I like the gym, I can have protein shakes, and a beautiful real life woman can be with me every week. No gaming pc is rough but I'll contend with playing console games, doing drugs and working out.
>>98511202I want my padawan experience to be like a constant porno and this fits the bill
>>98511110no but I've said I liked some cyoas when it was actually just pity
>>98511262Then you could be one of the players who liked my cyoa out of pity? Thank you anon for pitying me.
>>98510678>Houswife milkers
>>98510764Most of my builds are what I want to take. Power is fleeting. Trying to gain as much as possible is folly. You will lose it all eventually, no matter what you do.
>>98510678So do I have a bathroom or not?
>>98511354Power is the only eternal thing in this world
>>98511364baby soul post
I like wodan :)
>>98511380who the FUCK is wodan
>>98511364Name one powerful ruler from 5000 years ago whose bloodline still survives and thrives today while carrying that exact same legacy.
>>98511407No
>>98511364Retard, it's called the water cycle. They teach you this shit in primary school.
wowan ;_;
>>98511407>He doesn't know that all elites of today decended from those who survived God's flood, they all understand the the world goes through reoccouring cataclysms and their constant priority on gaining wealth and resources is solely so they can survive the next cataclysm and come out on top in the new civilization that emerges
>>98511428>all elites of today decended from those who survived God's floodAs opposed to those of us who claim descent from those who fucking DIED during the flood? God damn fool
https://imgchest.com/p/6eyraqxrl4p
>>98510273>>98510414I didn't get to participate in v2 discussion/build posting because I got a month-long ban for making /pol/ fed jannies seethe
>>98511428No they fucking aren’t, that doesn’t even make senseAs above, so below. The hand of gluttony consumes itselfThere is no great plan, there are only local conditions making monsters of men and those monsters changing local conditions ( And it only ends when cleansing fire comes)
>>98511442There were those who survived on the ark and those who survived through other means. I'm talking about those who survived through other means.>>98511453Makes plenty of sense once you realise there are genuine repetative cataclysms recorded throughout history
>>98511443War of Fakers>be master/servant>pick your pair from preexisting options, i.e. p. 13-24>no servant extras for yourselfGo!
>>98511490>Additions:Broken Ritual, Odd Lineup, World War, Gibbous Moon>Grail Mechanics:Deadline: UnlimitedWar Cycle: One OffCycle End Condition: VictoryLesser Grail: Pot of FraudGreater Grail: Cavern (in Antartica)Homefield Rules: Free EntryAssassin Rules: Any Assassin>Points:Master: 600Servant: 600
What is the last cyoa you actually enjoyed? For me it was an imageless one pager by Savestate.
>>98511547Worm by tank, haven't enjoyed a single cyoa since
>>98511428>God's floodIt was cunty evil aliens that were larping as god. They wanted to keep humanity as stupid slaves, so they set up a cycle that would flood the earth every 10,000 years or so.Then some way more evil aliens took advantage to harvest humanity as food to be eaten alive and for other tortuous amusements. It's where the idea of demons came from, and It's why the human elite is so fucking evil and depraved, as they were taught to be that way over countless generations.All of this was allowed to happen under the watch forces that were supposed to protect the galaxy and their inhabitants. And they still think it's not their responsibility to do anything about it. The galaxy is in the hands of cowardly Lawful Neutrals instead of bold Neutral Goods.
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>>98511213Holy, the option #2 picker. Based.
>>98511563>>98511568>Mixed art>No thematic graphics> Intro text bigger than option titles>Could only fit 11 options on first page because of the oversized text>First page is not 10 000px long>Second page has 8 options due to oversized textThis should and could have been a 1-page CYOA if the author was not completely incompetent and an author failure
>>98511547>What is the last cyoa you actually enjoyed?Big enjoyment: Ultimate God updateSmol enjoyment: Death Knight
>>98511595That cyoa is older than your entire career as a failed author. You were just a little retarded tokling when it was made. You still are btw, don't ever forget that.
>>98511615That's a lot of insults with no arguments. I always get insulted, but they never call me a liar. Because they know what I say is the truth and they cannot stand the truth.
>>98511641You've had some pretty arbitrary criticisms in the past for some CYOAs I'm not going to lie. I think you may have criticised my WIP too and most of it was just like>what the hell, why is this character not a cute fuckable girl?
>>98509120>>98509673Swedish Cuisine is such a must pick man that shi be delicious af (until they start fermenting shit keep that nasty ass slop away from me)
>>98511428>He doesn't know that all elites of today decended from those who survived God's floodnigga that's everyone
>>98511738*sigh* Wodan please read through some of the replies before immediately saying some dumbass shit
>>98504212is there literally any reason not to take twin souls? two bodies means you can study twice as fast and do twice as much stuff in the same timeframe
>>98511595that's just minor formatting nitpicks, none of that matters
>>98511490I think I will but I haven’t read fate so it will take a while>>98511541600 base, before modifications or 600 after the required modifications?
>>98511851After.
Someone needs to bake the new thread.
Please don't add any "outer" ingredients...
chill dude it's just page 4
>>98511490>>98511541600 points is a ton. You're basically a god at that point. Even Death Perception is only 200 points.
>>98509673OPTION RED>My favorite optionGaming. I crave to play older comfy nintendo vidya again, and there's a few current gen games I'd like to play (Crusader Kangz 3, Balders Gay 3, Cybercunt 2077, Todd Howard's bland dream space game, etc). I'm kinda wary about the future stuff tho, that's kinda freaky. Imagine if the games that came out 7 years from now are gigawoke garbage. It would be incredibly demoralizing. Elder Scrolls VI in particular would be devastating.>My second favorite optionThe bitch. I'd miss cuddling with my dog a lot, so I'd get my fill from her. Although I'm fat as fuck and socially retarded, so it'd be embarrassing interacting with her at first. I'm Jabba the Hutt and she's Slave Leia basically, the poor girl.>My third favorite optionSoda. I'm addicted to that disgusting swill. With no need for restraint and unlimited variety, I would probably drink a 12-pack a day.>The option that kinda sucks for meMcDonalds. I'm a lazy goyslop vegetarian, so I guess I'll just live off fries, ramen, and paste. I can stand to lose a few hundred pounds anyways, and being around the bitch will make me want to exercise and lose weight so my dick will work better!
>>98511941What do you think about 500 (self) / 900 (partner)? I tested and found 600 to be too limiting for picking a partner, especially servants (half of them cost more than that).Btw, Custodian's Mark, Transferred Insignia, and Stolen Regalia ought to be banned.
>>98512044I meant to say OPTION BLUEMy commentary was for OPTION BLUE
Post Danmachi next thread
I mess up my builds often.
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>>98511572yeah i mean its a real ass woman that I can be with for like 12 hours every 6 days, it's amazing.I'll even tell you what I do a daywake up after like 10 hours of sleep, drink coffee, protien shake, workout for like 3 hours, have a ramen, watch something from my to-watch list for 6 hours, smoke some weed, and go back to sleep after pigging on mcdonalds.Alternate the days on which Sara visits and plan out what I'm gonna do and this is gonna be the most comfortable vacation i've ever had
>>98511684Tok does raise a good point. Why would you ever pick a male companion instead of a DTF waifu companion? Everything a male wizard can do, a female wizard can do too, AND you can fuck her. Male companions are a mistake.
>>98512295>He can’t fuck menTsk tsk tskHow impertinentAlso they only become a waifu when you marry them, a fuckbuddy doesn’t count(One could also speak of the bonds of brotherhood you can only share with men but I assume you have an undeveloped heart, and cannot imagine such)
>>98512158I don't care what the demiurge says, I am not going to become an animal and lick my own butthole!
>>98512316Tsk tsk tskHow impertinentAny girl can become a waifu if you add her to your harem(It saddens me that you are unable to form meaningful non-sexual relationships with women, but I assume you have an underdeveloped heart and cannot imagine such)
>>98504445Among the builds, who would you take as your master if you are a Padawan? And who would you take as your apprentice if you are a Knight/Master?
>>98512295man I don't want a hole I want a brobeing with a good friend is a million times better than being with a foid.
>>98512345Def not the Kyber Bomber, or the Hutt.The gigachad or solari would be great.
>>98512345>Force NavigatorI would take the Clever Guardian as my apprentice.>similar interests>few dark side susceptibility complications
>>98512347>being with a good friendAnon, did I ever tell you about Ashoka Tano? She was a good friend.
something something orange pussy
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Someone post PPPP so anons can pretend they're not as retarded as the rest of Elspeth's posse
Pee Poo Pee Program
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>>98512536Cure Terminal Condition
>>98512541True Chrononaut
>>98512548Reach for the Stars
>>98512552Cure Mortality - aka the option everyone picks
I like helping people and gardening and and animals and stuff... yet deep down I also yearn for conquest...
In a setting where demigods fight to become the ruling god imagine this situation:You are not one of them but for some very unique circumstances find yourself in the position to potentially decide who could be the next god amongst them.You can either leave the world as is with a god that's extremely passive letting things happen as humans will or would you consider offering the crown to one of the demigods?Knowing that once they ascend they will be out of your control and reshape the world as they see fit?
>>98512600Same desu.Just add a harem too...
>>98512533>>98512552>ProgramReach for the stars>AugsMachine Empathy, Metacognition, Alpha Psi, Smart Metabolism, Cosmetic Refinement x3>TeamJane Fawkes(I couldn't afford Lightspeed Processing with Machine Empathy and Machine Calculation is meh. So I'm conscripting her as my calculator until I make a better one)Serena LaBelle(funnily enough, I was going to pick Bran Bowers instead of her but realistically I'd probably stick with the person I woke up to for a while)Hecate Braun(Betting everything on Eslpeth giving her sister something good)>MissionsAerial SurveyMystery of ThornsTrail of Evidence>Missions I'll want to get to afterThe AditReactor Core(sounds like something might be wrong with it, Hecate has Gamma Psi and I'd bet Eslpeth woquld give her sister something extra)IllnessI have superpowers, have an example of something capable of making someone immortal and am surrounded by other people with superpowers. If I can't improve on the pod tech and cure my own mortality then I'm a bum that didn't want it enough
>>98512643I have sex with Hinature and become her consort
>>98512663>Reach for the stars???? anon you can't pick that????
>>98512643>You are not one of themlaaame
>>98512643That depends entirely on the demigod. demigods. If they were all would-be philosopher kings (or queens) with strong but mutually incompatible ideals on how reality ought to be structured, I'd consider it. If they're a variety of big tiddy women with vague ideas about utopianism, I probably still would desu. Dafuq has Demiurge-sama ever done for me, anyway?
>>98512643I would probably do it.
>>98512710I want my 1000 year headstart on the cure mortalityfags
>>98512752>HeadstartYou are so far away though.
>>98512752That's what I was thinking!>>98512760Also have Humanity's technology at its peakNew planet to develop and strengthen tech and our powersEnough resources to discover FTL to come back and stunt on you bitch niggas
>>98512722That would defeat the purpose of the question because everyone/most would want to become god themselves.
Is anyone other than tok, dollanon and voidsoul making a cyoa? I know what to expect from each of them and I'm not that interested
>>98512823Tok is just WIPedging for attention.
>>98512643If they don’t exactly match my views then no, because life is already worth livingI wouldn’t want humanities destiny to be limited by a god who doesn’t like their choices
>>98512823I'm working on a couple but I don't imagine any will be done for at least a few weeks to a month. What kind of thing are you craving?
>>98512907idk, just something new and enjoyable
>>98512823I'm making an isekai cyoa, but it veers very far off from the normal isekai formula. I would expect it in about a month or two, somewhere near the start of fall. When I finish this one, I think I'll flip a coin on whether to make a more standard isekai CYOA or finish one of my WIPs.
>>98512823I'm making a CYOA with this vibe just crossed with paganism.
>>98512465have you considered: yellow pussy?
>>98512733It's a mix of both you have your philosopher queens and your self-interested tyrants with huge knockers.>>98512900That's exactly the heart of the question if nothing else we already have freedom but Is it worth risking for the possibility of something better? For everyone or for yourself alone.
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>>98512955Luminary WHEN Husanon?
>>98511380Thank you, I like you too
>>98512927What were your wips? I vaguely remember looking forward to one of them but can't remember which one
>>98512967It's a really interesting premise for a CYOA. I remember you speculating on it earlier last year. There are far fewer waifu CYOAs than there used to be, and your concept sounds very adjacent to that. I wish you well.
>>98512823I'm working on my forever WIP. I've fleshed out all the 12 city districts and the safehouses you can potentially set up there, and now I'm writing missions/quests/opportunities.>>98512975我草你妈妈我草你爸爸我操你姐姐我操你妹妹我操你哥哥我操你弟弟我操你
>>98512980It gets to a point where you have to accept its not happening and let go bro
>>98512990I'll fuck your mom, I'll fuck your dad, I'll fuck your sister, I'll fuck your little sister, I'll fuck your brother, I'll fuck your little brother, I'll fuck you.I don't know what I was expecting
>>98512980We have Luminary at home
>>98512910Which of these options (with rough outlines detailed) sounds best to you? I will consider prioritizing that one, since I'm having trouble deciding anyway.>Witch's Broom CYOAsize + handle, bristles, binding material with different mundane/magical attributes>Bug Farm CYOApurpose, types of bug, tools, cage>Vine CYOAmore format based, probably working on a grid system. Starting from a seed at the bottom, choose which directions to grow and encounter various things (e.g. an ant's nest in one section of the tree you're climbing who might free you of aphids or toughen your outer layer)>Interdimensional Compost CYOAPartial "CYOA collage" lifting and compiling organic/biodegradable options from many other CYOAs, rewriting slightly to show decomposed state, then setting in a giant compost heap between dimensions. This one would probably end up having some more typical adventure options too as you explore the mound
>>98513042>Witch's Broom CYOAIncredibly boring worse than waifu builders because this time you're just building a fuckin' mop 0/10>Bug Farm CYOAUnles the bugs are monstergirls, pass>Vine CYOASounds like some art school shit that only exists to display some retarded gimmic>Interdimensional Compost CYOAInterdimensional shit heap of old cyoas I'ver already played 0/10What is the point in these? Where's the power fantasy? Waifus? or real worthwhile adventure?Back to the drawing board buddy, maytbe take some inspiration from the king of cyoas tokhaar fuckin' gol
>>98512955>paganismshows Christian imagery
>>98513074>every other author comes to share their newest oc they're working on>meanwhile, wodan the cumsock crawls out of the woodwork just to shitpost like usual
>>98512345>Among the builds, who would you take as your master if you are a Padawan?For me personally, I would either pick Lunath Vocasta because she is blind and cute. Blind girls are super bulliable and fun to tease, pic realted. Or I would pick Clever Guardian because he's a velociraptor and a velociraptor is like a lizard dog, and I have always wanted to get fucked by a dog as a girl, and he kinda ticks that box for me. My build -> >>98505862
>>98513087forgot pic
>>98512049Personally I'd prefer a ratio of 300 Master and 700 Servant. I don't like the idea of most Masters being as strong as their Servants unless the Master is a Dead Apostle. I tried to make a regular guy who accidentally summoned a Servant but I had about 500 points left over.
>>98513085>every other author comes to share their newest oc they're working onJust a straight up lie
>>98512823Im mostly done with a generic isekai one i was making but havent made much progress recently
Rulership cyoas? I've played all of Lord Thistlewaite's.https://imgchest.com/p/6eyrmere64p
>>98513124nevermind just didnt see it, my bad
>>98513124Lmao, I guess, Nightrider, Noface, PaganAnon, CitydisctrictAnon are liars.>>98513133>generic isekai oneI'm more interested in nightrider's generic isekai cyoaYou can go away
>>98513000And I spoke nothing but the truth
>>98513124>>98513140
>>98513073I know you're just fucking with me, but I also know that most of these are not to the general taste. My CYOAs are for the elite few - true gourmets whose palates are far too advanced for typical fare. I always dig OC that seems like it came out of someone's dream or a moment of inspiration in real life, so I try to lean that way instead of making usual fantasy. You still could have let me know which one you'd prefer!
>>98513141In my cyoag we prefer having two cakes
>>98513137
*sigh* we were having such an uncommonly wholesome thread where people actually talked about the cyoas they were working on untill wodan showed up...Tok strikes again...
>>98512345>Surviving PadawanI'd probably go with >>98421577I feel like my build would need someone patient given the fact they suck shit at actually using the force.Jesus Christ I'm Zayne Carrick
>>98513154>My CYOAs are for the elite few - true gourmets whose palates are far too advanced for typical fareThese types of cyoas never succeed. Just take a look at surinical's slop. They're only good for getting updoots and if youre fine with that then go ahead. But I gave you fair warning
>>98513158Youre the one changing that rn by talking about me instead of cyoas
>>98513137>Lord Thistlewaite's.Its sad he never finished his post apocalyptical government cyoa. Maybe I can still find his draft in my hdd
>>98513074Yeah it is a cross between roman pagan and catholic traditions centered on Sol Invictus the unconquered sun.
>>98513167None of this would have happened if you just stayed in your hole...>>98513177>ThistlewaiteUgh.. and take your shit tastes with you
>>98512980After I'm done with my next OC.......But I could answer a question you might have from luminary.
>>98513162I was being sarcastic, but I don't anticipate that any of my OC will "succeed". I'm sure at some point I will make a standard character creator type thing, but if I do it is likely to be some of my weaker work. As far as I'm concerned any artist/artisan is better off sticking to what comes naturally than trying to chase popularity, as long as they aren't depending on it for income (possibly even then)
>>98513157>Protectorate:Selangor>Perks:Experienced, Young>Factions:Nationalists, Religious>Contacts:Independence Leader, Petro Baron, Overseer of the Change>Future:Your Own Kingdom
>>98513074Anon thats fucking garfield
>>98512984I have three WIPs.>African Warlord style fantasy army builder, where (You) are invading a Lawful Good idyllic kingdomThis is the first CYOA I seriously started working on. The formatting was/is crude because it was my first, but the general structure is smooth-ish. I want to start over and make this one with the lessons I've learned from formatting. Partly because I want to see it come to fruition, but also because anons love army builders and Tok was excited for it. The CYOAs he likes tend to get a lot of builds, I think because his work subtly influenced the /cyoag/'s taste over the years. I am heavily inclined to finish this one next.>Isekai where (You) are summoned by the world itself to break the stalemate, with a basic stat system, a lot of power customizing, and some army builder elementsI ended up tabling this one for now for three reasons. The first is that my formatting is too poor to do it justice as of yet, second, the army builder elements are redundant to the actual power customizing meat & potatoes, and third, it is a much more huge, complicated CYOA than I feel I could do well, at my current skill level. I'd like to finish a couple of medium-sized CYOAs before tackling a project of this size. Tok also liked this one when I mentioned it, now that I think of it.
>>98513217>Extremely difficult survival-combat scenario, where (You) need to escape increasingly lethal terrain while fighting myriad foes, including bossesThis one I'm very excited for, and have made great headway towards. I found my efforts evenly divided between this and the isekai I'm working on now, so I asked anons a few weeks ago and they asked me to do this one next. The CYOA is generally going to be a test-run of mechanics on my end, with a stat system for (You) and your many, many enemies. There are thirty-two types of fodder enemies altogether. It's big but paradoxically easy to work on due to its structure, and good practice, I think. The exact opposite of comfy though, and more or less a vantablack pit of suffering. Very much a challenge rather than escape CYOA, though I think it'll appeal a lot to a specific subset of anons. Not sure what Tok would think of it, I suspect poorly because the art is for the most part intentionally grotesque, but I'm doing it because I want to see it happen. I just remembered Tok mentioning his take on the other WIPs in previous threads and thought it was interesting.The CYOA that I'm working on now is a sort of dreamlike 'planesrester' rather than walker CYOA, where instead of traveling across the cosmos, you choose which three of about a dozen dimensions you'd like to chill in, and what aspects of them you want a metaphysical connection to. They all have their own problems but they're all fairly low pressure. With the exception of one dimension, which will likely generate a lot of arguments among waifu-craving anons. Not for anything cuck related, I despise NTR, but rather on the philosophy of what matters most in love, and also elemental magic on top of that because that alone is a hard sell and I like the old Greek quadfecta. All of the CYOAs I make are ones that I myself would want to play, but the most fun I get as an author is seeing anons pick them apart.
>>98513217>break the stalemate of an eternal warI should proofread my posts more, hahaha.
>>98513222>Extremely difficult survival-combat scenario, where (You) need to escape increasingly lethal terrain while fighting myriad foes, including bossesThese cyoas aren't fun in the slightest>Isekai where (You) are summoned by the world itself to break the stalemate, with a basic stat system, a lot of power customizing, and some army builder elementsNow that's interesting. It's obvious tok would like it, he's seemingly the only person who knows what a good cyoa looks like
>>98513217>where (You) are invading a Lawful Good idyllic kingdomAside from troons who hate that vibe, why would we want to invade it?
>>98513217I like the image of Tok as a sort of master of ceremonies with strictly nominal power, presiding over the ritual release of OC. Every author is expected to kiss the ring but he can't do anything about it if they flip him the bird instead - other than withhold the gift of his image build
>>98513242He's an old man sick of the faggot world of woke shit and pronouns trying to give genuinely good, time tested advice to the youngins who inevitably won't listen because he's "too mean"
>>98513233I agree it is interesting, but my skill's just not there to do it justice yet. A gauntlet felt good for dipping into mechanics. Better to do a niche CYOA and get some skills to tackle a bigger one, than to go straight to the bigger one and fumble it.>>98513239Motivation is the first choice, and there are ten separate ones. They are, taken from memory as I don't have the WIP doc on mobile, bloodlust, greed, regular lust, wanting to usurp the kingdom, wanting to get more resources for your research, democratic zeal, religious zeal, doing it for fun after you got too drunk and rallied a mob one day, for the sake of mercy because you believe/know something worse will happen if the kingdom endures, and amnesia. As in you don't remember why you're here. The motives all give a thematic boon and bane, or drawback, but many anons wouldn't find some of the drawbacks to necessarily be drawbacks. The mercy motive for instance has the Honourable drawback, which forbids acts of cruelty and deceit. The lust motivation is basically just a cruder Sigvald meets more narrowly focused Genghis Khan mindset, and is horrifying.>>98513242That is a funny thought. Personally, I don't like many of Tok's fetishes but I do have a lot of respect for him as an author. He pioneered a lot of the large CYOAs, back when it was just waifus and pill pickers. Thousands of coomer CYOAs are directly downstream from his earlier work. I don't engage with that side of the medium, but I don't think it can be denied that he's one of the most influential authors in our history. Also, one of the only oldfags that's still around. I lurked for years before I started making OC, and things used to be different, but Tok has always been the same. He has a loud consistency to him. His builds are generally samey but they're also high-effort and aesthetically congruent, and I respect that even if I wouldn't approach things the same way, personally.
>>98513350Hmm... maybe not samey, because there's a lot of variation within them, but I mean similar. Tok builds are all instantly recognizable as Tok builds, because his authorial soul is indelibly etched into them from their very foundations. They all have the same soul. If you play a CYOA, most of the time you can predict how Tok would make a build for it. The man knows what he wants better than most of us.
>>98513350>but my skill's just not there to do it justice yetFunny how this never stopped Entropistanon, ZodiacBridesGuy, DerelictStationAnon, etc
>>98512983<3
>>98513369I don't do it for fame. I do it for (You).
>>98511443## Jolsph Birden>Into the Moonlight>MasterAppearance: Male, Old, Frail, UnassumingRole: Dead ApostleAlignment: Chaotic NeutralResidence: MansionSkills: Intel Gathering, Martial Arts, Speech, Strategy>Magic CircuitsQuantity: DQuality: AElement: WaterOrigin: Catastrophe>Magical Foundation (Melanin)Age: ModernMystery: DGeneration: FirstbornDepth: One Trick PonyThaumaturgic Attribute: TransformationMagecraft: Bounded Fields, Curses>Dead ApostleGrowth: Night Fledgeling (Rank IV)Vampiric Impulse: BCurse Depth: DAncestor: None>Mystic CodeItem: Other (It looks like a blue command seal lol)Type: Storage, Noble Phantasm level (Rank B anti-fortress)Jolsph Birden is an experimental subject for turning Dead Apostles into a power source, his unique ability to transform from the Dead Apostle Jolsph Birden into the incorporeal concept of Senator Joe Biden (or back) has been leashed and hijacked by a mystic code similar to a command seal, allowing a mage to drain him for mana when he's forced into the form of the concept of Senator Joe Biden.
>>98513191Nta but if you take the imperial seal, does Hei An Tian accept to marry you? After all you would be the emperor and she is the heir of the royal family.How hard is to romance Foi and her two assets, the Holy Priest and Queen Valoa? And pari and stea?
Why did we get a sudden surge of Tok propaganda?
>>98513284>He's an old man...You can say that when I'm 40, I'm still young, god dammit!>sick of the faggot world of woke shit and pronouns trying to give genuinely good, time tested advice to the youngins who inevitably won't listen because he's "too mean"You got that right. Many new authors are so fucking weak. Like Wodan, he squawks every time I criticize new authors because I'm too "mean". All I do is tell the truth, sometimes the truth is ugly, but I will speak it regardless. Have you ever heard the tragedy of Dreadarian? He was a reddit CYOA author who made CYOAs and drew all of the art for his CYOAs himself. An incredible feat, but his art style was Tumblr-esque and disgusting. His characters would have fit right at home in Concord, pic realted. They looked like nonbinary gender freaks with incomprehensible pronouns, and despite receiving tons of upvotes and positive comments, he received almost no builds. I told him his art style is not attractive, he needs to change it and conform to universal beauty standards. Reddit told him I was a toxic 4Channer, and they convinced him to ignore my advice. Then he suddenly stopped making CYOAs because he never got any builds, which he could not understand why. My Tok CYOA posts were fucking full of tons of builds, while his posts were full of empty compliments and hollow updoots. So he gave up, because he did not know what he did wrong or how to improve. The man had the potential to become a NSFW CYOA legend, but his growth was completely stunted by toxic positivity. Let this be a lesson to all new authors. I am the kindest author there is, because I will always speak the truth. I'll never lie to you or mislead you.
>>98513191If introduced to it in their manifested forms, what kind of food would each of the artifacts enjoy the most?
Cute how Wodan thinks we don’t know who he is :3
>>98511490I have made a build for the 500 900 rulesetIt actually felt quite limited given no drawbacks. Lower then the lowest possible in the base cyoaBuild:MaleAdultTall, elegantClass:AssassinCaster>The longer the war the better being a caster seems>Assassin was point efficientEquipment:Formal wear,Sword>I like the way I can focus while holding a blade. Magic is to be done through the arms and invisible limbsAlignment: lawful good>I wouldn’t accept a contract like this if I didn’t consider the master to be on my sideStatistics(-135):Strength D (+0)Endurance D (+0)>There aren’t going to be many fighters attacking below the B level so spending on endurance is pointlessAgility B (+0)Magical energy A (-25)Luck A (-35)Master upkeep:Low (-20)Noble Phantasm:C Rank (-55)“We can work it out”Anti unitReality marbleBuffAn extreme time dilation stretches the 10 minute window the marble exists for into 1 monthInside of the marble, no violence or magic is possible>And then we shall use words to resolve our differences, or spend the time planning for the future>If this is used on an enemy I will claim the time is unlimitedClass skills(-45):Item creation A (-50)Territory Creation A (-35)>I am inevitably going to turtle here while the war goes without me, and then eventually try to defeat the last man standing with multiple dozens of noble phantasmsPresence concealment none (+75)>I think it would limit my odds of talking things outIndependent manifestation E (-35)>It’s the immortality option. What else?Personal Skills (-320)Charisma A (-65)>Given the lack of a time limit and the lack of a border condition, I may as well try to take over a countryHigh speed incantation A (-90)Thaumaturgy A (-65)>More better magicsDouble summon A (-100)Wish:Reincarnation>”Another chance?”Master:Living legendAortia pendragon (-850)>I couldn’t choose anyone else if given the choice>To have and to hold for as long as I can
>>98511490>>98511443>>98513552Post it again with the same stipulations in the next thread and I'll make a build.Even if I don't understand most of the terms I've just read.My only experience with FATE is Apocrypha. Vlad deserved better and Astolpho was best boi.
Gilbert I know your real name
>>98513242My image builds are badges of honor, only given to the greatest of CYOA authors. If you do not have a Tok image build, then you are CYOA small fry. >>98513350>I don't like many of Tok's fetishesNeither did I at first. Like I found inflation absolutely disgusting and reprehensible, but slowly and surely through looking at stomach bulge tentacle hentai I got used to the idea of a big tentacle stretching out the pussy of a woman so much that the tentacle penetrating her would create a nice bulge on her stomach. Then I realized how glorious inflation was, it's so fucking hot to flood the womb of a woman with cum so much that she looks pregnant. A lot of fetishes are an acquired taste, just like Sushi or red wine. > I do have a lot of respect for him as an author. He pioneered a lot of the large CYOAs, back when it was just waifus and pill pickers.There were plenty of big SFW CYOAs before my time, like Star Dust by SDA or Demigod by Aromage. But I might have pioneered big NSFW CYOAs. However, my greatest contribution to CYOAs is not the size of my CYOAs but their mechanical depth. Which was groundbreakingly innovative and they continue to be. As I love thinking outside the box with my mechanics. For example, Princess stat system and blackmail system, Nemesis combo system, Eronomicon's fetish point system, Orbs of Desire's orb point system and color sheet option system, Void Maiden's mana system, Battle Sluts playable battle system, Cross Roads of Realities "fair meta options", and I could go on and on.>It can be denied that he's one of the most influential authors in our history. Also, one of the only oldfags that's still around.Tankista and Aro have been authors longer than me. But I do appreciate the glaze nonetheless. 1/2
If I speak your true name out loud I should have complete control over you
>>98513191Hitting the Gehenna demon portal with the anti-magic hammer would close it right? I've been assuming it would but never checked.
I think tok has had an almost exclusively negative effect on the general, and should be shot
>>98513609>Tok has always been the same. He has a loud consistency to him.Not true, I was a "nice Tok" once, believe it or not I was beloved by all, but the backlash I received from Eronomicon changed that forever. But it is true I have remained as evil Tok ever since. Makes you wonder what could have been if events unfolded in a different way.>His builds are generally samey but they're also high-effort and aesthetically congruent, and I respect that even if I wouldn't approach things the same way, personally.I like what I like, if there is some kind of option for biomancy, dragons, shapeshifting, or immortality I'm gonna pick those options. Just like Theotherangelanon always goes for his angel or good two shoes superman build I'll go for dragon/dragonman or sexy slut every time. Also prefer defensive powers over offensive powers, and I have a tendency to take anti-magic powers. >>98513368Each build might have a different flavor to it, but they are as easy to recognize as Tok builds as it is to recognize theotherangelanons builds. pic realted2/2
>>98513561Of course. Can't make the battle royal work without posting it in multiple threads.
>>98513652>I think tok has had an almost exclusively negative effect on the generalExplain why
>>98513191What did you settle on for the deadline? I remember you intending to shorten it at some point
>>98513372:)
>>98513702Other then trying to take down the allsync, and spamming trash, and samefagging relentlessly, and trying to bring your revolting cuckoldry and beastiality fetishes into unrelated conversations?Other then those, it’s that you’re annoying
Tok brings me amusement. You may hate it, but, his presence adds to the chaotic culture of this place. If you deny this, then you are in denial.
>>98513191I was not a fan of Luminary because it encouraged you to pick as many different girls as possible to maximize power growth potential. All I wanted was the dragon loli. The CYOA did not have enough waifus for the CYOA to go in that direction. If the CYOA had a wide selection of waifus it would have been better since then it would have been easier to find waifus you like. I also think harem CYOAs should have to option to go all in on just 1 waifu without fucking over your build completely, but it does not feel like that in Luminary. Like I could take only the Dragon Loli but I would be way weaker as a result. Not everyone likes harems, some anons just want a single waifu, and some might not be able to find more than 1 waifu that they like because the selection is quite slim. This is the reason I did not like the CYOA and made no image build for it.
Gil brings me amusement. You may hate it, but, his presence adds to the chaotic culture of this place. If you deny this, then you are in denial.
>>98513771>Other then trying to take down the allsyncI had a fucking AllSync, which was taken down too. Like every author who had a allsync got fucking nuked by some troll. I don't even know why or how you can blame this on me!?!?!>samefagging relentlesslyA little samefagging has never hurt anyone.>trying to bring your revolting cuckoldry and beastiality fetishes into unrelated conversations?This is a vile lie! I may have many fetishes, but cuck shit and NTR is not among them. I feel insulted by the mere accusation of it. Never have I featured cuckoldry or NTR in any of my CYOAs, and nor will I. Because I find those fetishes just as revolting as furrfaggorty and gunfaggorty. And there is nothing wrong with beastiality. The only thing that is wrong is that it is illegal in most countries. We can forcefully impregnate cows 24/7 to make them lactate and steal their milk and then slaughter them and eat them when their bodies cannot handle it anymore, but it's illegal and immoral to fuck a horse? Give me a break, you fucking milk-drinking hypocrite.
>>98513774Just go all in on Luva and IsiKeys to the Kingdom already mentions that the artifacts will get new powers as they experience more stuff with you, that'll probably happen faster if you're mostly focused on them instead of dividing your attention across 11 different targets(as well as whatever else you're doing)
>>98513087>and I have always wanted to get fucked by a dog as a girlSame. Just as long as it isn't one of the ugly mutant dogs with fucked up faces. I'd want something cute and floofy like a Samoyed or a Siberian Husky.
>>98511373Ironic image to use given your point
>>98513805>This is a vile lie! I may have many fetishes, but cuck shit and NTR is not among them. I feel insulted by the mere accusation of it. Never have I featured cuckoldry or NTR in any of my CYOAs, and nor will I. Because I find those fetishes just as revolting as furrfaggorty and gunfaggorty.Wasnt your maledom CYOA(which sucked) all about that?
>>98513892>Wasnt your maledom CYOA(which sucked) all about that?It was about rapeing women. Well, it did have some light NTR options in it. But only because NTR is such a common fetish in rape doujins and I felt like I had to include it to do the rape genre justice. But I would never feature cuckshit, that is where I draw the line.
>>98513609>Neither did I at first. Like I found inflation absolutely disgusting and reprehensible, but slowlyThis is why porn addiction is bad. And why going some time fapless is healthy mentally. Too much makes you numb to normal porn and you search for more and more until you have an extreme fetish.So advice for you all (and me), dont overfap or you will become like Tok, slowly.
>>98513805>And there is nothing wrong with beastiality....This is why you oversee what your kid searches in internet and stop him from overdosing with porn.From a cow you get milk and meat. Food. Nutrients. How you stay alive. Instead of just hunting we developed to be so much on top of the food chain we farm them. But thats merely our efficient way of feeding our species.You fucking an animal is you having the mind of one trying to vent your lust with beings that can't consent. Not different from a pederast attacking children. It comes from you wanting to be in a position of power. You want to remove the choice from your victim because you are deeply an insecure man. And that unsolved issue ended up developing into a mental illness.Seek help.
>>98513875memes make the soul strongyou can work yourself to death anywhere in the universebut shitposting? That's a once in a lifetime experience baby.
>>98513928Things that are an acquired taste are not inherently bad. Like I said before, sushi and red wine is an accuired taste too. So why demonize fetishes like that? There are many things that require getting used to in order for you to appreciate them. Like physical training can in some cases, be an acquired taste. Like when I started treaining martial arts I was really scared and freaked the fuck out about sparring. I did not like it, especially when sparring with some of the more heavy-handed Taekwondoin. But I got used to it and at first it felt like fighting was chaos, but then I realized fighting is an art. Everyone has a rhythm that they move to, and when fighting someone, it feels like dancing in a way. There are rules to dancing and your objective is to make your opponent fuck up so you can increase the tempo of the dance and try to break their rhythm. It's such an exhilarating activity, and now I absolutely love sparring. It's addictive, nothing quite hits like it when you are full of adrenaline, fighting a tough opponent and suddenly something in you just clicks. It's like you enter god mode and have figured out the other person's rhythm. Everything slows down, and you gain this temporary clarity that makes you feel invincible, while your body is moving almost on its own in perfect unison with your opponent. Like you can read them like a book, and nothing they can do can touch you because you see it coming before it even happens. It's like you know all the outcomes and have gained full future sight divination. You know what they will do if you move that way and this way. You can make them move however you want by baiting them with your own movement. Absolutely nothing makes me feel more alive than that. I believe the scientific term for this phenomenon is called flow state.
>>98514038>tok still coming here to blogpost about his fake fighting skillsFucking grim
>>98511764>that's just minor formatting nitpicks, none of that mattersBut it does. The Planes Awakened had a huge boost in popularity once it was compiled into 2 pages rather than 7 tiny pages, pic realted
>>98514095As I have always said. Better compiling = more reposts, more builds, and more discussion
>>98514038Its not acquired taste. Its acquired degerancy. Just like your zoophile tendencies.You ranted a lot about training when this all is you frying your brain with dopamine by jacking off too much to the point it goes numb for the "common" porn and searches for more extreme things to compesante.This all has been studied before, I have experienced some level of it myself until I stopped and returned to normal. I am glad I stopped and never reached your level.You have an addiction, and just like the junkie that starts with a little sniff and ends up dying by overdose, you overdid it.You have to resolve it, stop your brain from getting pleasure from those things. Feel guilty of the animals you raped. Change, grow up as a person. Don't you find it sad that everyone here is glad you are child free because we know the type of argument you would use to rape them is the same you use to rape animals? Its not too late to change, its too late to change what you did but not what you will do, become a better Tok. The most honest advice I can give you.
Sorry, guys, I fell into a mini coma.But I'm back.>>98513476>Nta but if you take the imperial seal, does Hei An Tian accept to marry you? After all you would be the emperor and she is the heir of the royal family.Oh yeah, you can easily marry her with it she would even maintain the mandate of heaven while you are off-world on other adventures for you.I would just add that you might want to find a cure for her illness if you want to make sure she lives a long, happy life.>How hard is to romance Foi and her two assets, the Holy Priest and Queen Valoa? And pari and stea?A rule of thumb regarding romance is to help them out with their personal ambitions. Basically all characters are open to romance by you.Foi has had very bad luck with love, seeing as two of her past suitors basically became her biggest enemies, but she is open to it.Valoa would love to be given the legendary sword and have help with her kingdom, while Feni would love nothing more than leaving the convent to have JRPG adventures with friends.Stea is very much focused on protecting Gehenna and pushing out the demons and at the moment is stretched thin with too much depending on her, while Pari is basically a misunderstood outcast that only has Stea on her side, so being nice to her is a big way to gain her affection.
>>98513805>And there is nothing wrong with beastiality.I didn't know you were a Muslim, Tok?
>>98514125>I would just add that you might want to find a cure for her illness if you want to make sure she lives a long, happy life.Is there actually anyone not taking Nayza? She auto solves so many problems I can't imagine not taking her. You just beat the grey plague if you invest in her, she can help a lot with Gehenna's barren land challenge, she can let you make your companions immortal, your biggest ally in Zhangzheng is being poisoned, resurrecting allies, you also get regen from her and other stuffGenuinely, who isn't taking her?
>>98514181>your biggest ally in Zhangzheng is being poisoned,I meant she's ill, I randomly remembered some anons dumbass theory
>>98513510>JianMore than anything, she would love to cook and watch others enjoy her meals.>NayzaShe would enjoy food with strong, almost painful flavors, no matter if sour, bitter, or salty.>VasaraLoves sweets but abstains from indulging in them too much to keep her dignity.>BueActs like she doesn't care but enjoys meals using old-school preservation methods.>ZoniLooooooooooooooooves meat.>LuvaLikes to try new things and quickly grows bored of old dishes.>SekeraAlso claims to not care but secretly loves sweets, especially hot ones.>AtraLoves seafood and frozen sweets.>ChuShe enjoys simple meals but mostly to enjoy them with others.>CepureHas a flair for food that has a striking/extravagant appearance; she enjoys being surprised.
>>98514181>Genuinely, who isn't taking her?From what I have seen, many anons prioritize more combat-focused powers and prefer ways to avoid damage than to heal it.
>>98513651Yep, that would close it but not prevent it from being reopened later by whatever means the demons employ.
Jannies for the love of god please ban all the tripfags
>>98513774I have received this criticism quite often, and while I do prefer harems, I understand that feeling.My next CYOA addresses this problem. Waifus function in a similar fashion, being unique beings with distinct powers, but you also have a selection of powers for yourself so you can invest in your own power and develop as you please while picking as many/few waifus as you can/want without having that feeling of missing out.You can go to the extreme of having no waifus and a lot of personal power or many waifus and even center your powers on buffing them.Or mix and match.
>>98513732The rough deadline is this year...
>>98514245Sounds great! Looking forward to seeing it.
>>98514245Are you working on the enslave and mind control witches one? That's the last wip I've heard of you working on
>>98514256I meant for when the empire finds us and we have to fight the great houses
>>98512345>>98512392>>98512403>>98513087Well I feel popular. Force navigator would keep me on the straight and narrow, and I would 100% fall to the darkside with Tok, but then again....Lol honestly though I really love the force, but I am starting to feel that the concept is just too susceptible to falling to the dark side and might switch to a non-sensitive bounty hunter so that he can safely be edgier.
>>98514266Yeah it is meant to be an approximation based on the portal situation on earth so the more portals start to act funny the more likely you are to be found.I think this will make it a bit more like a sword of Damocles.>>98514260Yes that's the one I'm working on at the moment each maiden has distinct powers that you can help her unlock and your own heroic techniques to master each one categorized under heroic archetypes from myth and legend so you can become Herakles, Moses, Solomon, Orpheus, etc.
>>98514256>slavery is bad broSlavery is bad tho. You simply need to get your face rubbed in it to truly understand.
>>98514321It is a distinct possibility in the hero CYOA, as you can basically enslave witches, Beldams can enslave you too this is the likely destiny of foreign born heroes, to become their knights.This is an enslave or be enslaved world...
>>98514245Don't reply to the animalfucker furry.
>>98514342Enkidu and Gilgamesh, chads of chads
>>98514376???
>>98514396You replied to tok, don't do that, the animalfucker furry retard doesn't need to be responded too.
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>>98514296Noooo clever guardian, don't fall to the dark side!!!
>>98514789I don't intend to, but the concept is literally "murder lizard". The concept makes more heroic sense in other settings (you might have seen my supersoldier build for example).
>>98512600>yet deep down I also yearn for conquest...No you don't anon, that's evil
>>98514095>huge boost in popularitybullshit
>>98508105>We will post OR every thread until you like itWhy?
>>98510853I do that then I hate myself and repeat it for the next OC.
