Archives & Other Resources: https://rentry.co/cyoagAllsync: https://cyoa.allsync.com/s/owWor64yLTngDk3Previous thread: >>98504131You must Choose~~! edition
>>98514688https://imgchest.com/p/ljyq8pmdy25Lori T'Nara https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98397662/#98398332Force Navigator https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98440304/#98442102Surviving Padawan https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98397662/#98398639Mando Knight https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98397662/#98400830Mar Darik https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98408197/#98411551Ghost in the Droid https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98419432/#98420728Clever Guardian https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98440304/#98441601Solari https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98463295/#98466179Ph'rt'hly https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98419432/#98421577Master Byraan https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98427790/#98432584Lunath Vocasta https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98427790/#98433237Lala the Hutt https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98427790/#98434902Kyber Bomber https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98440304/#98440895Teronas https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98440304/#98441911Imperial Bastard https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98440304/#98443385Gigachad https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98471380/#98474788Young Jedi Padawan https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98488207/#98491595Soldier of The Force https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98494697/#98498345Cree'v'aak https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98494697/#98501212
>>98514688>You Must Choose Your Own Adventure GeneralWhy are you such a fucking faggot?
>>98514694Making a build rn, this is fun.
>>98514703>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LW4akQYWL40
War of Fakers>be master/servant>pick your pair from preexisting options, i.e. p. 13-24>no high/lethal servant upkeep>no servant extras for yourself>Additions:Broken Ritual, Odd Lineup, World War, Gibbous Moon>Grail Mechanics:Deadline: UnlimitedWar Cycle: One OffCycle End Condition: VictoryLesser Grail: Pot of FraudGreater Grail: Cavern (in Antartica)Homefield Rules: Free EntryAssassin Rules: Any Assassin>Points:Self: 500Partner: 900Turtle https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/98504131/#98513552
>>98514688Everytime I try to make a self-insert build I end up making another character build.
>>98514708oh shit there's a grail war?
>>98514719Such is the fate of waifufags.
>>98514724Nobody actually plays tankista cyoas don't make me laugh.
>>98514708Missed this important rule:>no Custodian's Mark, Transferred Insignia, and Stolen Regalia
when did this place become mpcyoag
>>98514708link?
>>98514803When we stopped gatekeeping blogposters and tripfags. Now they're everywhere.
>>98514803When the IC dried up.
>>98514708>>98514807https://imgchest.com/p/6eyraqxrl4p
>>98514814OC*
>>98514813>>98514814grimslow drawl to death I guessdidn't think I'd have to filter shit again but here we are
>>98514719The delineation isn't actually that important. You can have multiple self inserts that make radically different choices. A true self insert may try to be more optimal but if you have an easier time daydreaming about yourself as the character build with the emotional choices or what have you, it's still a self insert.
>>98514857
>>98514862What will you do when the time comes, /cyoag/?
OP is a fag, by the way
>>98514864The hormone bomb was nanites all along.The super-humane AI guiding them decided that the warlike gender had to be changed and improved for more sustainable and enjoyable life.Therefore, Hexalby's Futanari Revolution is the next CYOA you play after this.
>>98514869
>>98514873
>>98514868If I had a SFW version I would love to indulge this - quite a challenge
>>98514819>>98514803>Anons should NEVER make a collaborative effort at build posting EVER
>>98514887Yeah basically
>>98514887There is a difference between a collaboration and sucking each other off for months on end, drowning everything else with homosexual roleplay.
>>98514927Yea and I am not seeing that here. I see anons post builds, give each other a bit of feedback or a quick "I would team up with you" and move on. If you ever spy the actual MPCYOAG the difference is night and day.
https://imgchest.com/p/xny86ajm24b
>>98514708>AppearanceMaleAdultBlandUnassuming>RoleMagus>AlignmentNeutral Good>ResidenceAbandoned Building >SkillsIntel Gathering >Magic CircuitsAberrant (Pale Rider)Quantity A Quality B (Ex) >Command Spell3BackRedCrestPotency B >Elemental AffinityEther>OriginConcept (Night)>FoundationMystery A Ancient TimesOld BloodSchool of ThoughtWorldwideThaumaturgical Attribute (Ending)Clock Tower Education >Magecraft ExtraCursesRunesNecromancy >UniqueMagic Crest>ServantPale Rider This is either going to go extremely well or extremely badly. Idea is to capture the enemy masters/servants in Doomsday Come and kill them there with the other NP fueled by my ungodly amounts of mana. I will of course be going for the third magic, but since Pale Rider is basically a robot it shouldn't mind dying for me.
>>98514708Wait so we create a master and then pick a servant on top of that?Do I get this right?If so I'll make a build later today
>>98512823>Is anyone other than tok, dollanon and voidsoul making a cyoa? I know what to expect from each of them and I'm not that interestedDawn Millennium Novanglia is a fantasy team/companion builder in the midst of a Rome-inspired Empire that is collapsing under the weight both a godlike natural disaster and the barbarians emboldened in its wake. It is the end of an empire again, an awakening of a Human spirit that has been long repressed under the thumb of hypocritical dogma, and anyone of any race or doctrine may come out on top...if the dust can settle before the world is ash.
>>98514985Yes. Or you create a servant for yourself to be and pick a master.
>>98514989Ok ok, thanks.
>>98514708>Self: 500>Partner: 900So these are the max points that are available?Can either be the Servant or Master?>>98514986Will there be cute boys for me to fuck in a most masculine manner?
>>98514694I'm tired of shartwars posting
>>98515104
>>98514719I have this strange problem where I can't imagine myself as like, physically existing, as if I am meant to be some kind of immaterial puppet-master that merely pulls the strings of a doll to make it perform. I reckon this comes from a life time of being a shut in and consuming media that usually takes a third person perspective
>>98515208cyoas for this feel?
>>98515225i dont get it
>>98515225>theory>universal>Simulation>contradictionrate my IRL build
>>98515208I am really disconnected from mu own body too, its hard for me to look in the mirror because it feels weird that the person who is looking back at me me is actually me. Also probably due to being a shut-in.
>>98515208You weren't born that way, so connecting with pre-puberty memories, especially excitement is the way to go.
>>98515225Nature, MagicPrimordialSaturatedCan somebody flip me a dollar so I can get Sacred too?
>>98515225Universal Post-Human Virtual Haunted Vacant Memory
>>98515225Sacred, Malfunction, Contradiction, Universal, Magic
>>98515225Saturated Haunted Pastel Sacred Virtual Malfunction Calculation Memory Instinct Community.There is no obvious difference in quality between the cheap expensive ones, so the winning meta is to go for quantity.
>>98515225Psychedelic Magic Theory seems fun
>>98514857SurvivalistHuntingHorticultureMedicineHuntingEngineeringRemoteArmouryStoreroomAquiferSolar PanelsHydroponicsLiving QuartersExtra KnickknacksTons of tinsEscape planBug out bagAnthropologistSuspiciousHypochondriacDoomsayer4- Zombie ApocalypseYeah, I think I'd survive just fine. The escape plan should help me avoid all the 'bies.>heh, she totally wants to 'rebuild humanity' with me>Get off your ass and fix the fucking hydroponics machine
>>98515225Theory. Universal. Tautology. Instinct. Pastel.Things just happen. What the hell?
>>98515225Saturated x10TheoryI call it the hyper saturated theory.
>>98514708Amazing CYOA
>>98514708Name: Isaac>AppearanceMaleAdultStrongTall>RoleMagic User>AlignmentChaotic Good>ResidenceAbandoned Building>SkillsMartial ArtsMythological ExpertiseFirst AidElectricsSurvivalStealthIntel GatheringAthleticsVigilanceTacticsStrategyTracking>Magic CircuitsNormalQuantity: AQuality: B>Command SpellsNumber: 3Location: Left handColor: RedPattern: CrestPotency: C>Elemental AffinityDouble Affinity (Wind and Earth)>OriginFeeling (Joy)>FoundationBasis: >Magecraft ExtraBasis: MysticMystery: CAge: Middle AgesGeneration: Cadet BranchDepth: One Trick PonyCoverage: Nation>MagecraftFormal CraftElemental (Wind and Earth)Healing>WishJoy for all>ServantRichard Lionheart (Saber)Extra: VeteranMy origin is Joy, and my wish is to create a world where all people are happy all the time. The entire concept of negative emotions will be expunged from history. I have an affinity for Wind magic, which grants me superhuman speed, and Earth magic, which grants me superhuman toughness. My plan is simple, hunt down the enemy Masters and beat them into submission with my magically enhanced martial arts while Richard keeps their Servants busy.
>OCbut not mine
>>98514694Jedi Knight Mu-Gami Rhinda is from a race called Najjans from the planet Najja - a dark skinned mix between Mirialans and Sakiyans. They were born on a hostile world within Hutt Space - one of the abandoned wild worlds, where ancient Hutts had poured toxins as revenge for their independence. In the recent centuries, they have opened up to space travel after explorers re-evaluated the danger levels and found a self-sustaining civilization in the lush underground jungles. They retained force sensitivity, Upliftment projects began, heralded by the Sakiyans, who wished to protect them from Hutts. Not long after, the Najjans became another race known for crime.. and many spread across Outer Rim and Hutt territories - Mu-Gami's family lived in Nar Shaddaa, but found prestige in giving their sheson to the Jedi.As a troubled and rebellious youth, she was given to Jedi Master Saala Tii'Riis to train, and eventually rose to the rank of Knight. Her troublesome nature is more accepted in her role as a spy and undercover agent. Her path was already diverging from the Jedi during the war, but after order 66 she went rogue and began a life of crime. Eventually, this would lead to her forming a dangerous crew of space pirates...
>>98515544
>>98514985>Wait so we create a master and then pick a servant on top of that?>Do I get this right?>If so I'll make a build later todayYes. The premise of the Holy Grail War is that seven mages each summon a Servant (and thus become Masters), and then participate in a battle royale for the right to make a wish.So a build needs one of each.
>>98515544Nightstrike Femboys? Isn't that a very old cyoa? Or am I mis-remembering?
Any news on the Planeswalker Rising update?
>>98515104My Jedi has foreseen the Hutt brain stealing B'Omarr technology-based memory-torture complex expanding galaxywide, cascading into the shitshow known as the sequel trilogy.By brutally assassinating Lala the Hutt, this horrible future is never realized.
>>98515563I was just trying to see if anyone would notice. I havent seen it anywhere since 2022 when I downloaded it
>>98515563It's from 2048
>>98515545Nice visuals to your buildYou would probably cross paths with my padawan character who becomes a bounty hunter after his master disappears.
>>98515545Forgot to put enemies and allies to the pic- they're still in the calculation so the build remains.Enemies>The Hutt Cartel doesn't like meddling Jedi, nor competing pirates>Senate wasn't too pleased with my actions>Separatists took note (Medical Mission)Criminal contacts got my back, however. Maul the Shadowlord would have been a problem but he's already simping for Talon and won't have time to chase after another elusive, arrogant and powerful apprentice. >>98515615Thanks! Oh, and for sure. Didn't have enough points to add Thalia to my contacts but she might be a future client. Contacts are super expensive in this CYOA, but it makes them that much more impactful. Have to leave some leeway for stories, though- a character picked might have to represent an archetype more than an individual if the stories are crossing. Only Geonosis and Jabiim truly withstand the amount of Jedi roaming the galaxy with this CYOA.
>>98514708unironically v2 was better because there were a few servants beyond only the ones that appear in the gamesonly being able to pick from the same already used list is less interesting
>>98515225SacredUniversalTheoryMagic
>>98515225Anyone who chooses Sacred or Magic needs to be shot.
>>98515747>needs>to beThat's some magical language you are using. Such words can only be contextualized in a sacred universe. Otherwise they become sterile, impotent and dead.
>>98515747The universe is magical and sacred in every sence of the word one needs only look.
>>98514708Do we get the extra points from our Role choice?
>>98515808No, total 500
>>98515817I seeThank you
>>98515208Conduit Agent?
>>98514719>>98515208i can't even try to make a build for a character separate from me, it feels like there wouldn't be anything of interest in it at all
>>98515225>Post-Human Nature Universal CalculationBasically a true, perfect democracy and planned economy facilitated by a super AI like Helios in Invisible War>>98514857>Conspiracy Theorist>Firearms, Science, Medicine, Engineering, Literature Review>Suburb>Big Doors, Sick Bay, Armory, Lab, Living Quarters, Kitchen, Water Recycler, Solar Panels, Library>Concealed Carry, Discreet Building, Fort Knox>The Strong Silent Type, The Fed, The Revolutionary, The Anthropologist>Hypochondriac, Doomsayer, Messiah Complex>Viral PandemicSurvive and recreate a new, better society
>>98514708Wouldn't being the master of Merlin with powerful command spells be a sure win ?
>>98516158Why?
>>98516190Clairvoyance EX on a powerful Caster and powerful command spells so he doesn't fuck around.
>>98514694>>98515545Fixed version: Jedi Knight Mu-Gami Rhinda is from a race called Najjans from the planet Najja - a dark skinned mix between Mirialans and Sakiyans. Species born on a hostile world within Hutt Space - one of the abandoned wild worlds, where ancient Hutts had poured toxins as revenge for their independence.In the recent centuries, they have opened up to space travel after explorers re-evaluated the danger levels and found a self-sustaining civilization in the lush underground jungles. They retained force sensitivity, strength and longevity from their parental races, and some of the higher intellect. Upliftment projects began quickly after they were found, heralded by the Sakiyans, who wished to protect them from Hutts.Not long after, the Najjans became another race known for crime.. and many spread across Outer Rim and Hutt territories.Mu-Gami's family lived in Nar Shaddaa, but found prestige in giving their sheson to the Jedi.As a troubled and rebellious youth, she was given to Jedi Master Saala Tii'Riis to train, and eventually rose to the rank of Knight. Her troublesome nature is more accepted in her role as a spy and undercover agent.Her path was already diverging from the Jedi during the war, but after order 66 she went rogue and began a life of crime. Eventually, this would lead to her forming a dangerous crew of space pirates--After Order 66 she will have to recruit a new crew - only the second in command is trustworthy.Every mission has made her more cruel and lustful, but she intends to keep the dark side in check, having seen its detrimental effects.Even this fall is the will of the living Force...
>>98516345Tok you already made a build for this cyoa.
>>98516392thats wodans build
>>98516345>2.07 MBIncrease the size by up to 5.93 MB for less artifact.
>>98515225>Art House>Magic>Sacred>Contradiction>Primordial>MalfunctionThe universe is painted by a Salvador Dalí with schizophrenia.
>>98516392>>98516396I haven't namefagged on this site, not properly at least. Tok is a swede so I dislike liking his stuff, but as a fellow futafag, I have to respect him more than the permaoffended anons. >>98516405Oh right. I'll see if I can squeeze out a png that can be posted on this site, first.
>>98516415
>>98516158I did consider that, it should be extremely powerful. Though not necessarily an auto win.
>>98516455>"Hmm... I think I'll name this planet 'SEX WITH HITLER'..."
>>98515225I quite enjoy abstract CYOAs like this. It's quite fun imagining *how* exactly the choices will take shape.
>>98515225>Universal>Post-Human>Simulation>Memory>Saturated>SacredOgres have layers, spiritual simulations have layers.
>>98515225SacredPost HumanPsychedelicMagic
>>98514869>Industrial Wastes>Path of the Psion>>>Crusher>>>Slider>>>Drawback: AntisocialOne friendly contact less>Boons:>>>Surgeon's ID card>>>High level security codes>Contacts>>>Mad scientists>>>Municipal analysis AI>Hostiles>>>Splicers>>>Duelists
I hate to say it but tok was right about his fanaticism of everything needing a border/frame and unified art style (even though I was doing that one already), this looks way better.Still dont know what ill call the cyoa. Im just using outer revival as a placeholder rn.
>>98517141gotta ask the bacteria to read this for me
>>98517141Don’t keep us updated
>>98517141>Still dont know what ill call the cyoa.you have a name right thereill cyoa
>>98517141>outer revivalI'm so tired of outer cyoas
>>98517141>I hate to say it but tok was rightJesus christ, how cringe can you get?Creating a sockpuppet account just to fellate your own egopathetic
>>98517141Good to see your WIP exists.
>>98517264>>98517260>>98517244>>98517230>>98517188>>98517162I know for a fact the majority if not all of these are samefags
>>98517162maybe not this one
>>98517312That was all me, baby! How did you know? What gave it away?
>>98517344actually the first post was made by me
>>98515210Look up "Chooser of the One" by Languid Cicada.
>>98517141Despite him being a massive faggot about it, it is good advice to keep in mind. It just makes things tidier.Heartbreaking. The worst person you know just made a great point.
>>98517312Actually only the 2nd and 3rd posts are meYou genuinely are that hated wodan
>>98517312>>98517344*sigh* he's replying to himself again...
>No you can't like futa or shemales it's gay>No you must have men in your world and they must be at least 90% of the population, that's not gay>Nooo you're too manly and gigachad you're doing what you like noooo! That's gay that's gay!What the fuck do you angry sissies want?
What
>>98517427this has nothing to do with anything. go to bed.
>>98517427they just want rape correction
>>98517433All this hate Tok gets and that's my diagnosis of it. Never anything of substance. Guess there were a couple comments years ago that didn't like his prose.
>>98517427A world filled with only women except for me.
>>98517344SASUGA TOK-SAMA!
>>98517141He is a sperg about it for sure, but the principals are real.
Considering Tok and Wodan tripfag, should I tripfag as well to maximize the thread's faggotry levels?
>>98517427The imposing of femininity on men is homosexual. Vanity is feminine. Hence when the appearance is just for vanity, that is homosexual.Do these supposed gigachads have anything to do with their physique? No? Gay.If you need to be told why futa is gay, you are hopeless.
>>98517472Tok balances it out with tasteful hetero content, effectively nullifying his presence here altogether. What do you post since you're already increasing it even without the trip?
What if we all used trips but then changed them every post?
>>98517479Gay is only bad because men are not hot. If men were hot like women, gay wouldn't be bad.Attraction to men is unnatural and indirect- it's a survival strategy akin to being prison gay. Indeed, that's one of the main reasons for why women are so angry and insane- 100k years of being raped by shrek.
Soon.The VA recordings are 80% done.
Gay is only a form of degeneracy, and it is milder then some of the bullshit I see hereAll degeneracy is on one path though, meaning degenerates are more likely to be gay, and vice versa
>>98517501If only
>>98517481I post OC once every blue moon and often nitpick on certain topics discussed here
>>98517472>>98517484>>98517501So much tripfagging... It feels just like my beloved 2016 cyoag... I-I'm finally home...
>>98517506>All degeneracy is on one path thoughTowards apes or towards dirt, yes. All generacy is on the path towards elves and beauty. Thus, futa is superior to man, if it is natural.
>>98515104We will post Star Wars every day until you like it.
I have always thought my ideal society would be one where everyone was a gentically augmented immortal post-human who lived on a terraformed planet that essentially replicated the conditions of Paleolithic Earth (except a lot more friendly to human habitation) and lived (larped) as hunter-gatherers. Does anyone know a cyoa for this feel.
>>98517592Village CYOA is your friend.
>>98517592I don't know a cyoa but you should read Last and First Men by Olaf Stapledon
>>98517528As long as you are an author you get to tripfag
>>98517560>>98517628https://youtu.be/6MzKX0ASS3I
>>98517607That doesn't really seem like it at all, I'd still want us to remain human in form and mind. Think Custodes.
>>98517647>anybody in 40k>human in mind or bodyHa.
>>98517601You gotta post it too
>>98516158>Wouldn't being the master of Merlin with powerful command spells be a sure win ?You'd think. But the founders of the Holy Grail War have been minmaxing their builds - and even outright cheating - for centuries, and still haven't pulled off a win. There simply may not be a guaranteed victory build.
>>98517660I had a cat sitting on my mouse-hand.
>>98517670Then you are more then forgiven
>>98517680
>>98517647Yeah, that's the fifth men. They were all innate psykers iirc
>>98517665Sounds like minmaxing is a losing strategy. As it should be.
>>98517683
>>98517692Is there any automation for posting a bunch of pages ? This is tiering
>>98517703
>>98517710
>>98517680>cyoas that you know are boring garbage just from one glance at the first page
>>98517779He says about a top 50 cyoa of all time
>>98517796Top 50 artsy faggot cyoas of all time maybe
>>98517823
>>98517831
>>98517840
>>98517849
>>98517823What are your top five cyoas anon
>>98517892
>>98517903>Dragonfall>Magic The Awakening>Nemesis>Princess>World of Whorecraft
>>98517929
>>98517940
>>98517946
>>98517954
>>98517967
>>98517929Oof
>>98517929The artistic taste of a dung beetlealso can someone post the greenhouse cyoa
>>98517977
>>98517929Not even tok has taste this bad and he made all of those.
>>98517989
>>98517982From the cyoas you post you have the taste of a redditor :/
1/2 gimme some feedback on this shit I made .
>>98518000
>>985180052/2
>>98518001No, redditors tend to get overwhelmed the moment a cyoa has more then 4-6 choices. Just look at their top of all time
What's CYOAG's thoughts on ai-genned images for CYOAs?
>>98518043Better than generic 2D anime art.I for one welcome our AI overlords, if it means anime and weebs will be outlawed.
>>98518086>Better than generic 2D anime art.homosexual
>>98518086
>>98518086>ancient>released after ObamaPick one. Cruxador's Demiurge is recent.
>>98518043It tends to strongly downgrade a cyoa its used in. Its usually better to use a less fitting image then to use ai.Using it to improve image quality or change parts like the background can work though
>>98518094>>98518093Projection. Show anime to a straight gay-hating man from the past, and he'll think it looks fruity as fuck.
>>98518101>It tends to strongly downgrade a cyoa its used in.Could you elaborate? Is it in terms of image-quality or inherent to it being from AI? As in, if it was "well-made" enough that you could not tell it apart from an artwork from danbooru, would it still be a downgrade?
>>98518097No I meant the AI art was generated by obsolete means, not that the CYOA itself was ancient.
>>98518043Most people just aren't artistically talented enough to make it work, they don't know how to make high quality ai images. Just stick to small image edits
>>98518043I hate the way it looks, you know that kind of rubbery look it got I dunno how to describe it but it's like super clear it's AI
>>98518159Oh, I know what you're talking about. I agree. Iirc it was more common back when stable diffusion was big. Nowadays, it's the granularity from chat-gpt.
>>98518159That's what you get when you don't know how to prompt engineer or how to set steps, samplers and cfg properlyThe only reason AI art gets a bad rep is retards with deviant art tier artistic talent not knowing what they're doing
>>98518113You are straight up a gay homosexual.
I'm burnt out from replaying cyoas and video games.I want to play them, but I just can't anymore.I'm going to die of boredom.
>>98518187Do something else for a while, give a break to your funny dopamine meaty beats. Boredom is HEALTHY, you know.
>>98518191>Boredom is healthyNot really.
>>98518199Don't sass me faggot, do what I say!
>>98518184Much better than anime girls. We should've nuked Japan into Oblivion.
>>98518127Was clear to me anon. AI images from even 2 years ago were rough, but did have a vibe
>>98514708Guys, you're supposed to pick your starting location.
>>98518211They had a vibe as early as 2022.
>>98518244For sure anon
Getting anything good out of AI back in those days was extremely difficult mostly down to luck in many cases.
>>98518237o. Then i'll >>98514976 start in Trifas for some extra starting stealth.
>>98518244sovl
>>98517903Lavender Marriage (+ Coronation)Empress (Sylen)Pantheon of PleasureAmazon KingdomJedi Guardian
>>98518043It’s usually pretty bad, and I wouldn’t really consider it art
>>98518113Show a chimpanzee or a man to a woman and she sees an animal. All traits that separate man from woman are also traits that separate ape from man.
>>98518043Ai generations are only good for very small pictures such as tokens or pfps or big fantasy landscapes in the background, covered by all kinds of other things.
>>98518344In english doc
>>98518005not sure what to tell you other than choosing core and familiar is hard to do
>>98518356Ape big str, much hair, smell badMan big str, much hair, smell badLots of wrinkles, chimpout violence, rape, cannibalism, war. Small beady eyes, low dexterity, maximum dehumanization. Woman big neoteny. Man low neoteny. Ape low neoteny.
>>98518113If they're like most men, they'd like the titties and hips but be confused by the medium and think the glowing screen you showed them was somehow magic.
>>98514708>Identity:Servant>Location:Atlas Mountains, Egypt>Class:Ruler>Parameters:Strength: EEndurance: EAgility: EMagical Energy: ALuck: A>Master Upkeep:Medium>Noble Phantasm:Web of FateRanking: EXTarget: Anti-WorldNature: SpellResult: Buff/DebuffGeneral fate control. Can be anchored and bolstered in items and locations.>Skills:Item Construction: ATerritory Creation: AIndependent Manifestation: CClairvoyance: AInnocent Monster: D>Slot Order:#7>Master:Ozymandias (Living Legend)With Ramesseum Tentyris and Atlas' superweapons, we are in an invincible defensive position, so we can stall for as long as we want. I will control fate to subtlety manipulate the war in a way most advantageous to us (e.g. enemies kill each other and neglect us), strengthen our forces to exert greater influence in the world and funnel more resources to us, and prepare for eventual confrontation by creating more, better superweapons and improving the existing ones.
>>98514857This feels like the oldies, any more CYOA with this feel?
>>98518447I don't go with that rat piece of shit's face.
>>98518126I dont appose it for any moral reasons, I just dislike the way it looks. I think this anon put it well >>98518159 . If its well made enough to not be noticeable then it wont be an issue. I just havent seen that happen in any cyoa yet.
>>98518086Unfortunately,, a huge chunk of generated AI images are the most generic 2d anime art you've ever seen.I think AI art can look good in certain cases, especially if you're willing to put in the effort to properly refine it with manual edits and inpainting and you have decent taste. But many, many people using it are lazy and have bad taste, and now gross generic NovelAI-style anime images have flooded everywherePersonally, I'm just using it for scenery images showing off parts of my CYOA's world
>>98518440>being Ozy's servantwhy would you do this to yourself?
>>98518261Biblica of Divine SoulBiblical angels are, for the lack of a better word, overpowered. They can, among other things, just think of something and know whatever it wants to know about that thing, skipping senses, reasoning, etc. to the truth directly, and can use telepathy and telekinesis.I publish the book everywhere and usher in heaven on earth.
>>98517929>dragonfallvery good cyoa, amazing one even>magic the awakeningshit, like massive shit>nemesismeh, too short to be something good but not exactly something bad>princessit's alright, not exactly the type of cyoa I love but I can agree it's well made>world of whorecrafteasily one of my favourite cyoas, I still get nostalgic remembering when it first came out with plenty of anons discussing their plans (most plans of course involved slavery)
>>98518584What's wrong with him? Seems like a decent person.
>>98518613he has gilgamesh levels of ego
>>98518625NTA and not familiar with fate but Gilgimesh always came off as the goofy over the top anime character sort of egomaniac, not the kill you for failing type.
>>98518659He's less the 'kill you for failing' sort and more the 'kill you for not treating him with the appropriate respect' type, with what counts as 'appropriate respect' being known basically only to him. You are walking a very fine tightrope with him.
>>98518625I read the wiki, and it seems like he's really not as bad. Sure he acts like a god (because he is one), but he's ultimately a good person who cares a lot about personal relationships.>wants to bring peace and prosperity to the world>no ill will towards Moses despite the 10 plagues debacle>His love for his foster brother is great even with how their parting went, he thinks that had Moses been his actual blood brother, he would have been made heir to the throne and Ozymandias would have gladly, albeit with slight jealousy, served Moses.
>>98518805Yeah, that's just Gil again.
>>98518596I think the guilds were one of the best parts of world of whorecraft.
>>98517929One specific, tiny part of Dungeons and Deviants (unfortunately) played a big part in inspiring the CYOA I'm working on
>>98515581>I was just being a retard again
>>98517929Infection and Princess are Tok's best works.
>>98517420Getting harder and and harder to deny
>>98518447>This feels like the oldies, any more CYOA with this feel?Doomsday Prepper IS one of the oldies at this point. If you like the style, check out ScottishAnon's folder. It's one of his, and he organized a lot of his CYOAs in a similar order.If it's the premise you like, check out the locked-in-a-basement genre. Or some of the horror survive-the-night ones. You know, where something big and bad is coming for you, and you have to survive until dawn/help/etc arrives.
Wodan why are you such a bitch
>>98519509
>>98519515
>>98519523
>>98519527
>>98519531
>>98518517Holy unc that's like $15.99 now
>>98518805>>98518864Ancient world god-king syndrome. They weren't necessarily evil, just arrogant and used to getting their own way. Even Gilgamesh in the original Fate shows/games wasn't a "real" villain. He was just an entitled trust fund brat who'd never had to worry about consequences, because everyone had always deferred to him because of his wealth/royal status/personal power. Beating him wasn't a power match, per se. It was about telling him, "no", for once in his life, and making it stick. Which ultimately involved beating his spoiled princely ass into the ground, but . . .well, you get the idea.(In that respect, he was foreshadowing for the finale and the corrupted grail.)
>>98519515>>98519523I still think SDA did a nice job on the different styles of magic. They were all written to be attractive, and what I end up picking is often directly related to which one I read first. :)
>>98516158UnlikelyIf he agreed to being summoned, it would likely be for a purpose beyond winning the grail war and you'd have to be a god tier master to be able to force him to do shit via command seal.
>>98514708So if I take Profane as my Foundation can I still take options in the Magecraft Extra section?I'm just unsure whether or not it is it's own section rather than a continuation of the Foundation section (which is skipped when taking Profane).Also I assume I don't get the extra points from Profane in regards to this proposed Faker War?
Hey, does anyone remember the series of CYOA images that were super popular here like ten years ago where you selected your party members... I think it was Pauldron Knight? Pauldron Quest? I'm not sure why I think there was something to do with pauldrons. Super distinct art style. I remember early options were a rival of yours and a 'not so spoony bard' who looked like an intense, black freddy mercury. Later additions included like an eldritch knight with purple spikey armor, and an automaton. It kept expanding and showing the ways different companions could interface, so like, if you had the technologist or the time mage it would impact the automaton and make him more badass, for example. I hope I am giving enough info, it's so specific! It kept on expanding until there were images showing tons of different antagonists, too. I remember a cursed hero with kind of long hair that was sandy blonde.
>>98519580Reasons I dislike this CYOA:- It has the "AI artstyle", it may have an ACI of 100, but it picked a thoroughly ugly artstyle. It's still possible to stylize an AI generated image (Entropist would be the most obvious example) so this is not the fault of the tool, only the author.- It manages to say almost nothing about its universe, the only thing We're told about is the galactic hierarchy and the positions that other species occupy inside of it. There is no other setting, it's not clear what else they're doing, or what else is happening in the universe. Towergirls managed to achieve the feat of creating obviously different races with the same gimmick of power up + sex partner (this is basically a worse version of the space Towergirls).- Many options in this universe depend on the context of a setting where the player has struggles to confront with those options, which are not detailed, and the struggles in real life are gone because of the introduction vehicle. There is nothing to do with the tools that are given.
>>98519748>So if I take Profane as my Foundation can I still take options in the Magecraft Extra section?Yes.>I assume I don't get the extra points from Profane in regards to this proposed Faker War?You do.I gotta specify the points next thread I post. I meant for them to be your starting points regardless of the additions, but still changeable by other choices, e.g. Profane still gives points.
>>98519983Thanks!>You do.>I meant for them to be your starting points regardless of the additions, but still changeable by other choicesIf that's the case I propose you decrease the amount of available points.Hell I'd go so far as making it 1000 points that could be split between you or your partner how you see fit.It would really make us have to choose between being powerful or having a powerful servant/master. But that's just me. I like to scrimp and scrape for my points.
>>98520013>1000 points that could be split between you or your partnerThat's not gonna work because 9/10 people will pick to max themselves and either get a minimum servant/master or not get one at all, so we would end up with a bunch of lone/effectively lone builds.
>>98520117Absolutely. Why would I invest points in something else? That's stupid. It's all going to me. Not focusing on yourself is basically begging for NTR.
>>98517929I like dungeons and deviants more than whorecraft to be honest
>>98518005here is my feedback: i love the stylization as code and libraries. it's fun imagining poring over a huge messy codebase and trying to put it all together in your mind in order to not blow yourself up when you try to cast magic missile. it's a cool reason why magic would be actually hard when in some media it's just "read a book and say the words to cast a spell". i also love the deadpan humor style like calling a wizard robe PPE and "It is the most common cause of death among non-robe-wearing wizards." and "Succubus_Harem_SAFE".sorry, it's not very actionable.here is my build:>Librariesforces.libbiology.libdimensions.libspace.lib>Mana Corecold_iron_mainframe.core>Familiargit.familiartime to go explore the planes and/or chill in a pocket dimension. i'll use the cold iron mainframe to maintain dimensional and personal protections. git seems like the most useful familiar, i'm sure i'll need to adapt forces and biology spells depending on the situation all the time.
I hate WAAC fags so muchBasically that kid on the playground that goes "Nu uh! I have Invincibility x1000!!!"Basically how I imagine t*k was as a kid.
>>98519509Thank god the non-ai version is still readily available. Cannot believe the author did nothing to this cyoa but make the art worse.
>>98520529>Not giving yourself Invincibility x Infinity.Classic noob mistake.
>>98515808Sorry, I misunderstood you. Yes, you do get points from your role, e.g. Mundane gives 125 points.
>>98514708My build so far. The idea is a massive nerd and history geek stumbled on magic. Shenanigan's followed and is now in way over his head.Can't decide between taking Noah, Astolfo or Hans Christian Anderson.I still have a shitload of points I need to spend. Suggestions?MasterGender: MaleAppearance: TeenagerTraits: BlandRole: Magic UserAlignment: Neutral GoodResidence: Abandoned BuildingSkills:>Common Sense>Operating Electronics, -5>Mythology Expertise, -10>Investigation, -30>Intel Gathering, -20>Tracking, -30>Speech, -25>Servant Negotiation, -50>Cooking, -5>Driving, -5>Multitasking, -15Magic CircuitsComposition: NormalQuantity: C, -35Quality: A, -150Command SpellNumber: 3Location: Left HandColour: RedPattern: OrderlyPotency: D, +10Elemental Affinity: EtherOrigin: Feeling (Bittersweet)Foundation: Profane, +100Magecraft Extra:>Runes, -20>Familiar, -15
>>98518005>Materials.libIt's easy money but it is fun to mess around with matter in general>Biology.libTo become an absurdly powerful little girl (tm) but it probably has some synergy with Materials.>Dimensions.libI do want my own demiplane to NEET up. That aside i bet that there is some fun places out there for when i want to go outside.>Space.libMainly because i want to set up good sources of mana so i don't have to worry about them running out but it obviously has synergy with dimensions to expand its potential.>M.E.D.U.S.AIt is an interesting core that's for sure. Chances are that there is not much things that can handle a multithreaded wizard... So long they don't delete themselves because of mana drain. Well there is also the extreme mana pollution it causes so it might be wise to either use it sparingly or find out a way to recapture it.>SlurmM.E.D.U.S.A usage is going to need some proper mana/spell management to use effectively. I just hope he can handle it sounds like a lot of work.
>>98514708updated >>98514976>LocationTrifas>AppearanceMaleAdultAttractiveUnassuming>RoleMagus>AlignmentNeutral Good>ResidenceThe Streets >Magic CircuitsAbnormal (Paralysed legs)Quantity EX Quality EX >Command Spell1 BackRedCrestPotency B>Elemental AffinityNothingness >OriginNothingness>FoundationMystery A (Centered around the concept of death)Ancient TimesOld BloodMystical ConceptWorldwideThaumaturgical Attribute (Ending)Clock Tower Education >Magecraft ExtraCursesRunesNecromancy>UniqueMagic CrestIncapacitated Sealing Designation >WishThe Root (For the third magic)>ServantPale RiderThis is either going to go extremely well or extremely badly. Idea is to capture the enemy masters/servants in Doomsday Come and kill them there with the other NP fueled by my ungodly amounts of mana. I will of course be going for the third magic, but since Pale Rider is basically a robot it shouldn't mind dying for me. Apparently you can actually get more points via drawbacks. Now I'm a wanted cripple with only a single command seal to my name, but in exchange I am a truly monstrous mage with ties to the Root and what should be the right kind of magic to fully exploit this connection. Given how far apart everyone is my weaker starting position shouldn't matter too much since I should have plenty of time to heal before anyone finds me, and also I can just hide in Doomsday Come. Also there's a different image now since I can't repost the other one.
>ties to the RootYeah, this is One True Build and we should ban it.
>>98520954It's not THAT good, you still have to figure out how to use it.
>>98519851>Hey, does anyone remember the series of CYOA images that were super popular here like ten years ago where you selected your party members... I think it was Pauldron Knight? Pauldron Quest? I'm not sure why I think there was something to do with pauldrons. Super distinct art style. I remember early options were a rival of yours and a 'not so spoony bard' who looked like an intense, black freddy mercury. Later additions included like an eldritch knight with purple spikey armor, and an automaton. It kept expanding and showing the ways different companions could interface, so like, if you had the technologist or the time mage it would impact the automaton and make him more badass, for example. I hope I am giving enough info, it's so specific! It kept on expanding until there were images showing tons of different antagonists, too. I remember a cursed hero with kind of long hair that was sandy blonde.The ones from this series of cyoas?
Do NOT post AI-slop.....
>>98520132>Absolutely. Why would I invest points in something else? That's stupid. It's all going to me. Not focusing on yourself is basically begging for NTR.Because as a physical manifestation of a legendary hero or villain, a Servant is ten times more powerful than (you) can ever dream of being? And there are six other Master/Servant pairs competing for the wish, and killing (you) is the fastest way to knock (you) out if the running?In other words, (you) are the squishy spell caster who bleeds and screams a lot. (Your) Servant is the tank, DPS and cheat ability, standing between (you) and certain death Think twice before cheaping out on them.
>>98521062>post AI-slopCertainly!
>>98520344>love the stylization as code and libraries. it's fun imagining poring over a huge messy codebase and trying to put it all together in your mind in order to not blow yourself up when you try to cast magic missile. it's a cool reason why magic would be actually hard when in some media it's just "read a book and say the words to cast a spell". i also love the deadpan humor style like calling a wizard robe PPE and "It is the most common cause of death among non-robe-wearing wizards." and "Succubus_Harem_SAFE".I like the idea, to.(However, PPE was giving me flashbacks to Palladium's tabletop RPGs. Gotta have enough Potential Psychic Energy to cast spells, you know.)
speaking of ai slop, have you ever tried doing this, it just came up with something i never thought of before
>>98521177It's not long now till the day we no longer need human players for our cyoas!
>>98521186yeah, earlier i dumped a 60kb txt build and after wasting time glazing me a lot it came up with a bunch of things i didn't think aboutit gets really weird after you post several of your old builds and ask it to psychoanalyze you
>>98521177If I still enjoyed cyoas I would love to roleplay them with AI. but nothing made this decade has had any hold on me whatsoever
>>98519851was it broquest?https://imgchest.com/p/o24akwkw7lj
>>98521210you reminded me of years ago when i roleplayed a star wars cyoa with a solo roleplay system with dice, maybe it could work better with ai
Exalted conquest, it will... I-it will release, I know it will.... It must...!
She’s exalting my conquest until I release
>>98521391>beliving in WIPorwere
>>98521408my WIP will surely release at some point
When I die I want my WIP txts and psds to be rendered as chunks of lead with the text and images engraved on them and I want to be buried beneath them in my grave.
>>98521525i'll grab them and upload them to an ai so it can shitpost misunderstandings about your builds and judge your moral character forever
>>98521073Nah. I'd win.
I don't really refer to my unfinished CYOAs as WIPs. I always call them their names, like I never once called Hentai Heroine a WIP. I just use the regular name, because once I decide to make a CYOA, it's already done in my mind. All I have to do is put in the work, assemble and finish it. I think calling your unfinished CYOAs WIP is a case of loser mentality. What is loser mentality, you might ask? It's when you think about things in a loser kind of way that holds you back mentally. For example, a loser who quit smoking would call themselves a former smoker, a normal person who quit smoking would just call themself a non-smoker. Studies also show that people who cling to the former smoker label often relapse into smoking, while non-smokers have a much lower chance.
>>98521629I'm calling mine a WIP because the title is confidential until I'm closer to a release window. If you throw the title out too early it just becomes slowly associated with the concept of a "never ever CYOA", and that's both bad PR and bad juju
>>98521629>I don't really refer to my WIPs as WIPs
>>98521629"wip" doesn't replace the name, it replaces the "cyoa"
>>98521652>I'm calling mine a WIP because the title is confidential until I'm closer to a release window.Unless you name things like me, Hentai Heroine or World of Whorecraft, people won't know what it is about. There are a billion CYOAs named Luminary for whatever reason, and I couldn't have guessed what any of them were about prior to release. Alternatively, you could call your CYOA by a codename similar to how some game developers refer to secret games they are working on, like Project L, which was 2XKO (really retarded name tho).>If you throw the title out too early it just becomes slowly associated with the concept of a "never ever CYOA"I don't think that is true at all. That has more to do with your reputation as an author. Like, people don't call my CYOAs never-evers because I always finish my CYOAs. Italics, however, there we have a never-ever author. He hasn't even finished Magi Case, which took 50 billion years to release some kind of WIP alpha build. If anything, what you said tells me that you don't won't want to fail and become known for having created a forever WIP like Holdfast. >and that's both bad PR and bad jujuIt can be bad PR to hype up your CYOA and describe things loosely before you release it, which I have done multiple times. Because when you do that, then anons will use his imagination to create some crazy fantasy CYOA that your CYOA could not compete against because anons' fantasy is just too powerful. While I do hype my CYOAs because I think every Tok CYOA is just that good and worthy of hype, I try to avoid describing things I'm gonna put into it, to avoid the CYOA having to compete against anon's wildest dreams. And about the juju, that's all you. I don't believe in luck or superstition. If I say the CYOA will be finished, it will be finished, and that's that. Things happen because people believe it will happen. If you think you are going to get unlucky because you said so, then you will unconsiously self sabotage to make it true.
>>98521745Expanding on the bad luck. If you don't see your failures as bad luck but just regular faligues, then you can deal with them, overcome them, and fix what is broken in your CYOA that you are working on. But if you think it is bad juju, aka bad luck or something like that, how can you fix it? No one can control luck, that is something that is beyond human control. So how can you fix your mistakes if you have no control over them? That is a case of loser mentality if I ever saw one. Who decided taking a specific action made you unlucky? You are the one who decides, you are the author of the CYOA. No outside forces can ever change that, you alone hold the power over your own CYOA. Everything in it is by your will and your will alone. Did luck influence the songs that Ludwig van Beethoven composed? Did luck have anything to do with Michelangelo di Lodovico Buonarroti Simoni's sculptures? Was luck a factor for Leonardo da Vinci's paintings? No, so why is luck something that would influence your art? There is no luck involved in creating art. I see myself as an artist, you see yourself as a victim of random chance. You tell me, which one of us is more likely to create a forever WIP? The answer is quite obvious, the one who does not believe in himself and clings to superstition to excuse his failures.
>>98521848So what were the specific actions you took that made cyoas like the shard cyoa and super slut terrible? What did you learn from them that will make hentai heroine different?
we know hentai heroine is going to be garbage because we already have cyoas that do twenty billion drawbacks to get anywhere like fixing god's fuckups and harahel, and both essentially amount to you creating a complete fuck up of a character with twenty differing simultaneous issues active at once that make you look like a complete joke in universe who also just happens to be inexplicably powerfulthere's no narrative coherence or integration with drawbacks in cyoa that have more than one or two pages of them, because interesting drawbacks that add rather than subtract complexity to the build are difficult to create, something tok hasn't succeeded at prior anyway
>>98521745Yo Tok, I decided to make a build following your method and I had tons of fun doing so - even if gay neckbeard-anons hate me for it. So I'm now making a new CYOA. Thanks to you.
>>98521973>So what were the specific actions you took that made cyoas like the shard cyoa and super slut terrible? Shardkeeper had conflicting themes of empowerment and lewd submission. Conflicting themes can work together in a CYOA if it is done in a way that has cohesion. But Shardkeeper lacked that cohesion, instead, you had this power fantasy of the draining shards and then being sexually dominated in the energizing shards. For me, as a switch I liked Shadkeeper, but for someone who is submissive, they might not care too much about the power fantasy of the CYOA and just want to focus on getting dominated, while those who want the power fantasy are forced to do lewd subby shit to engage with the power part of the CYOA. So for the 2 different kinds of people who would play Shardkeeper would have a CYOA that they like half of, while the other half of the CYOA is completely uninteresting to them. Hentai Heroine will have themes of empowerment and disempowerment, but unlike Shardkeeper, it won't lack cohesion and feel like 2 different CYOAs slapped together.Super Slut was well received by those who like capeshit. It was not an unpopular CYOA by any stretch of the imagination. Was it my most popular CYOA? No, but I don't view it as an anon-disliked CYOA like Shardkeeper or Magic: The Awakening.
>>98522069>Hentai Heroine will have themes of empowerment and disempowerment, but unlike Shardkeeper, it won't lack cohesion and feel like 2 different CYOAs slapped together.so people who aren't like you were able to like half of shartkeeper, but by forcing the two components together you'll make sure they can't like any part of hentai heroine
>>98522061What would you consider well-done drawbacks? I want a reference for my WIP
>>98522069>Hentai Heroine will have themes of empowerment and disempowerment, but unlike Shardkeeper, it won't lack cohesion and feel like 2 different CYOAs slapped together.So it'll be different because it'll be different? How?>Super Slut was well received by those who like capeshit. It was not an unpopular CYOA by any stretch of the imagination.Lol. Lmao.
>>98521745>Like, people don't call my CYOAs never-evers because I always finish my CYOAs.it’s been over a year since you’ve made anything, except for a single one-pager after i goaded you about that factat this point you are a never-ever author
>>98522101>So it'll be different because it'll be different? How?like i said in >>98522081, he learned that people didn't want to do both parts of shartkeeper when it was optional, so now he's gonna force them to do both parts, literally the opposite of the lesson
>>98522062>Yo Tok, I decided to make a build following your method and I had tons of fun doing soYou mean image build? Were you the fellow Star Wars futa chad? Really cool build and aesthetically pleasing.>So I'm now making a new CYOA. Thanks to you.I never thought that image builds could do that. But when I think about it, it does make a hell of a lot of sense. Most anons lack the confidence to make their own CYOAs. But making a detailed image build is like making a CYOA in a way, at least when it comes to graphic design. Image builds could actually be a stepping stone to authordom. This also happened with theotherangelanon when I think about it. He would make angel image builds until he decided to make his own angel CYOA and that CYOA was really fucking solid. I'm so glad I invented image builds. Sometimes my pure genius almost frightens me. I hope your CYOA will be really good, just like theotherangelanon's first CYOA was.
>>98522069>Super Slut was well received by those who like capeshit.I wouldn't be so sure that's a compliment...
>>98522095>>98522095making well designed drawbacks is probably the pinnacle of cyoa making, or at any rate an indication the author is very competent and understands that each part of the cyoa should serve a purpose, both in fluff and in crunch, rather than just being something you pick any number of times to get sufficient points for your buildfor particulars, you could look at lord thistlewaite (such as in Scion), mirrorseeker (such as in Necromancer), apotheosis (specifically in Guardian Angel, which is by far her best cyoa) or micha (for Isekai Dark Overlord)most of the mentioned examples have drawbacks that colour your build in thematically interesting ways, and tend to serve certain archetypes or ideas which gives both the cyoa and the builds more depth and memorability
oh hey we're back
>>98519550Ah yes, this CYOA was before the evil corporations started price-gouging people for everything.
>>98522081>so people who aren't like you were able to like half of shartkeeperYeah I mean, if Shardkeeper were 2 different CYOAs I think it would have been popular.>by forcing the two components together you'll make sure they can't like any part of hentai heroineNo, opposing themes can exist in a CYOA, but they need cohesion. They should not go in different directions and point towards different goals. Both of the concepts should enhance each other and work together in unison towards a single goal. I had empowerment and sexual sumbission in World of Whorecraft, which was really popular. The difference between Shardkeeper and World of Whorecraft was that Shardkeepers either wanted to go on power fantasy trips or be forced into lewd scenarios all while not wanting to interact with the other part. World of Whorecraft was about rape and sexual slavery. Empowerment and disempowerment worked hand in had to create a isekai world where you rape or get raped. Hentai Heroine will be cohesive too, but with a larger focus on being low tier rape-bait heroine who gets raped a lot. Like you can't be a heroine without power. So in that way empowerment and disempowerment will have cohesion.>>98522101>So it'll be different because it'll be different? How?Read the reply above ^>like i said in >>98522081, he learned that people didn't want to do both parts of shartkeeper when it was optional, so now he's gonna force them to do both parts, literally the opposite of the lessonRead the reply that is 2 times above this one ^^
>>98515573which of the planeswalker is that one? is it that one with you know the thing?
>>98517929hahaha just kidding Tok cyoas suck
>>98522061>we know hentai heroine is going to be garbage because we already have cyoas that do twenty billion drawbacks to get anywhere like fixing god's fuckups and harahelHarahel has a lot of different problems, but when I count the pages of drawbacks, it only has 2 pages of drawbacks (which is within the limit of acceptable pages of drawbacks that you set yourself): the Bane section and the Fuck My Shit Up section, each 1 page in size. Fixing God's Fuckups is a dumpsterfire of a CYOA because it's 76 pages long. It has too much of everything, and if the author would cut out the drawbacks from the CYOA it would still be way too spread out and disorganized. Fixing God's Fuckups's problem is that it lacks focus, and there is way too much of everything. The CYOA does not know what it wants to do, so it does everything all at once.>there's no narrative coherence or integration with drawbacks in cyoa that have more than one or two pages of themThis is simply not true. Why would a CYOA lack narrative coherence if there were more than 2 pages of drawbacks? Where did you get this number from? If I were to add 2 additional pages of drawbacks to Dragonfall so that it had 3 pages of drawbacks, it would not impact the narrative coherence of Dragonfall at all. Maybe I'm misunderstanding what you mean, could you define what you mean with "narrative coherence" and "integration with drawbacks in cyoa".
>get off work>enter thread>ctrl f "Echoes PSY">no result>go to sleep>go to work>repeatI hope the cyoa never release at that rate, because I'd lose my motivation to keep going.
How many people do you think are actually active here? Feel like it cant be more then 20.
>>98522124>You mean image build? Were you the fellow Star Wars futa chad? Yes! Thanks~>Really cool build and aesthetically pleasing.You ain't seen nothing yet.>But making a detailed image build is like making a CYOA in a way, at least when it comes to graphic design. Image builds could actually be a stepping stone to authordom. This is indeed what happened. Now I just need to figure out how to tripfag here. >>98522284I quit way back when the black magic troll campaign was around. I bet most did.
>>98522275Isn't it out already?https://imgchest.com/p/m9yx3joepyq
>>98522297>Now I just need to figure out how to tripfag here.oh great, more of them
>>98522298Anon meant the update. A new version of Echoes Psy has been on Italics's to-do list for years.
>>98522326Why do you continue to drink the niggtalics cool aid? Everytime he "finishes" a CYOA it is mediocre and needs an update, which he promises but never delivers.
>>98522358Same thing with tok except replace mediocre with dogshit and that his cyoas that need updates actually never get them. Lol, lmao.
I'm going to play Shartkeeper again. Any advice?
>>98522234FINISH YOUR CYOA ALREADY
>>98522234>Harahel has a lot of different problemsIt hasn't been updated in 5 years and it'll never reach 1.0?
>>98522234it's a matter of if each drawback is in and of itself significant, unique and differentiating as opposed to merely being a bank of points to draw from that you imagine you might be able to overpower with sheer strength via perks or other sources, that is they don't result in a narratively or archetypally coherent character when you stack that many drawbacks at oncenarrative coherence in this instance specifically refers to a character to whom all their aspects, both their strengths and weakness's make sense, are legible and combine to form a greater whole taken together, rather than being aking to a machine with dozens of incogruent and varied coloured partsfor instance, if i were to look at dragonfall since you mentioned it, what would the narrative coherence be of my build if i were to take a decent number of drawbacks, like nightmare visage, whelp, tiny wings, aquatic, horny, destroyer, multiple personalities, scaleless and battle musknone of these drawbacks particularly synergise or create a cohesive character who i could somehow imagine becoming real by any sensible backstory or creation process, they purely exist so that i might get more ur-embers and serve no narrative purpose as any sense of immersion of the story is effective cut short by my character being this nonsensicalgood drawbacks are not just a source of points you plunder to get more powers, they are significant and notable, and do not diminish but rather emphasise the nuances of the character, something you have shown no capacity for understanding up until nowhentai heroine as you've described it prior, as being about attaining "synergistic drawbacks" and so on essentially means becoming a walking orgasm rug that is obliged to use the pure mechanism of the cyoa to attain any reasonable power level to affect the world, rather than a internally coherent and nuanced character with it's own strengths and weakness'' you could reasonably relate to
>>98522201>Hentai Heroine will be cohesive too, but with a larger focus on being low tier rape-bait heroine who gets raped a lot. Like you can't be a heroine without power. So in that way empowerment and disempowerment will have cohesion.That's not cohesive at all. It sounds like you're making a bad fantasy cyoa and stipulating that anyone who plays it will be raped repeatedly.
>>98522275>Echoes PSY releases>Replies are all variants of "Thanks for the good times, /cyoag/. Take care">thread's activity drops afterwards
>>98522284We used to have bigger numbersn but...
>>985222846 anons at most desu
>>98522519You need power to be a heroine, but you must have weaknesses that make you rapebait. Having played many PnP adventures - I can tell that he's onto something. However, even if you like the scenario of high lethality (or in this case, bad end rape slave), you need goals that can carry a portion beyond that line. Therefore, there needs to be promise of further power. Sometimes the powerful fall to a stroke of bad luck, and the weak survive because they are just that stubborn. I've had both occur to my characters.
>>98522591Needs more fresh blood and more encouraging audience. Not blind validation and patting, but something more than >YOU SUCK I HATE YOU
>>98522483NEVER
>game centered around getting raped>only way to get raped is to loseit's bad game design, like why is the player being punished for winning?this is why I can't play ero-games centered around being raped because they are designed in such a counter-intuitive way like damn I want to jerk off but I don't want to lose you know
>>98522661
>>98522661>like why is the player being punished for winning?Being raped by the hottest beings you have conflicted feelings for is both horrible and wonderful. Being forced to experience unbearable pleasure is wonderful. The concept can break the binary of win/lose, which is one of the reasons for its success as a fetish. Women don't fantasize about the ugliest orc raping them, but the best dick and magnificent holder of it. They tend to take the abuse much further than men, however- as it's merged with their coping mechanisms for when it wasn't desirable at all. Notably, both men and women fantasize about domination loss - either the hot dominatrix loses to you, or the woman tames and civilizes the orc. > like damn I want to jerk off but I don't want to lose you knowIf the game makes you work to that point all over again, it's tedious. If the game is more lenient, it's fine.
>Women don't fantasize about the ugliest orc raping themJarvis, who is the primary audience for ugly bastards?
>>98522737Asian men
>>98522321Not him but oh it is only just begining
>>98520635>Suggestions?Hans Christian Andersen. Better circuits, command spells, and affinity.
>>98522191damn it's from the 18th century?
>>98516345Finally, an overt dark sider!
>>98522819Mind giving your reasoning for HCA?>Better circuitsHow do people in setting get circuits anyway?I was really trying to go for a character that grew up outside the midnight world stumbling into things but if the circuits are hereditary then it doesn't make much sense for him to have them at all.I guess maybe he comes from a bloodline that was thought to have died out. Idk.
>>98522737>Women don't fantasize about the ugliest orc raping themReally? Ever heard of Morning Glory Milking Farm?
>>98522877nta but they're innate/hereditary, Most people don't even have them, and if they do they aren't going be very good. That said outliers do exist.
>>98522852very sad, we can only mourn him now...
>>98522877>reasoning for HCA?He writes tragedies. Your origin is Bittersweet. Seems like a natural choice, though perhaps not an optimal one, but the build isn't optimizing much anyway, right?
>>98522893that's my fantasy as wellbecoming a werewolf that lovingly "rapes" average looking female humans.
>>98522953
>>98522964
>>98514708>>98518440Update.>Identity:Servant>Location:Atlas Mountains, Egypt>Appearance:Male, Adult, Attractive, Elegant, Unassuming>Class:Ruler>Equipment:Threads, Knife, Robes, Formal WearMy weapons represent the weaving and unraveling of fate, respectively.>Parameters:Strength: EEndurance: EAgility: EMagical Energy: ALuck: A>Master Upkeep:Medium>Noble Phantasm:Web of FateRanking: EXTarget: Anti-WorldNature: SpellResult: Buff/DebuffGeneral fate control. Can be anchored and bolstered in things like people, items, and locations.>Skills:Item Construction: BTerritory Creation: BIndependent Manifestation: DClairvoyance: BDivinity: BHigh-Speed Incantation: BInnocent Monster: D+++ (looks like Satan)Inherent Wisdom: A->Slot Order:#7>Master:Ozymandias (Living Legend)With Ramesseum Tentyris and Atlas' superweapons, we are in an invincible defensive position, so we can stall for as long as we want. I will control fate to subtlety manipulate the world to our advantage (e.g. enemies kill each other and neglect us), strengthen our forces to exert greater influence and funnel more resources to us, and prepare for eventual confrontation by creating more, better superweapons and improving the existing ones.
>>98522967
>>98522974
>>98522968I feel like trying to take over Atlas is a Bad Idea.
>>98522990I'm not taking over. Ozymandias is literally their king (of kings).
>>98523001I am like 99% sure these guys aren't going to just let Ozymandias boss them around.
>>98522896I'll build other characters too, don't worry.
>>98523014He's been their best ruler since forever.
>>98522895Thanks for the confirmation, anon.>>98522904Yeah that's what initially made me consider him.But you're right in that on a mechanical level we're not very synergistic. Ideally I would be a badass combatant to keep him alive.But fuck it what if I go for flight instead of fight.My main goal will be covering our tracks and running away until he can finish writing his story.We'll drive around, witness natures beauty, watch people live their lives and talk long into the night.One of us will probably die and the other meet a tragic fate but it'll be keeping theme and I think that would make us both happy.Thank you anon. I now have a clearer idea for my build.
>>98523025These guys aren't from ancient egypt? I feel like you are vastly overestimating how receptive people are to random historical figures asserting leadership, especially people as autistic as the Atlasians.
>>98523044This is not "asserting leadership". He *is* their leader, from the Age of the Gods until now.
MY TOP 5 MOST HATED CYOAS OF ALL TIME>#1: Lord of Mysteries>#2: Fate Another Pretender>#3: Luminary Magical Girl>#4: Mother of Learning>#5: Spirit ConscriptNote: I like these authors and some of their other cyoas.Note 2: Does not count nsfw or interactive cyoas.
>>98523063> He *is* their leader,Is there a source I'm missing or what?
>>98523071>Luminary Magical Girlwtf are you talking about, this is the best Luminary out of all the Luminary CYOAs
>>98523081Living Legend, page 22. Ozymandias never died.
>>98523092Okay, i'm still pretty sure that Living Legend isn't intended to retcon world history to that degree but whatever, i'll just ask tanky
>>98520937>attractiveNigga you're a skeleton
>>98523191and?
>>98523194I consneed...
>>98514708Question, are the points in the "You" section counted in the total, or not yet? Just to make sure I'm making my correct calculations.
>>98523209Not yet.>>98519983>I meant for them to be your starting points regardless of the additions, but still changeable by other choices
>>98522620Impossible with the current thread culture.Why would someone without sunk cost fallacy stay here?
>>98523218Fresh OC?
>>98522953>the harem is the main character(s)I guess I'm guilty of reading this CYOA wrong.
>>98521044>DoldorfMildred except less likely to fuck me over. The 'honorable' thing is annoying but, preferably, we wouldn't be getting into fights to begin with. If we do get into fights:>CalymureBy shitting on Doldorf and ensuring he enforces a fair duel on both ends, Calymure becomes unbeatable. We can also research a way to break the curse somehow.On an unrelated note:>Unvirtuous physical contact will result in being brainwashed into walking naked through brambles.So this bitch nigger whore can just suck your blood as much as she wants while you sleep, and anything on the other end will have that happen? Personally, I'm all for seeking out the king of diamonds on the fourth year, just to feed her to him.
>>98522953Am I the only one that just put spent all their points on becoming the peak of evolution and ignored the bitches?
>>98523254>So this bitch nigger whore can just suck your blood as much as she wants while you sleep, and anything on the other end will have that happen?I think it's a physiological need for her to do that.
>>98523288Is it a physiological need that she does it unawares
>>98523294Do you wanna be awake while she does that? Well, I guess she could Charm you to like it but that's a cloudy and subjective solution.
>>98523338>she could Charm She'll do it anyways, read her description. She'll charm you to do whatever she wants, dude, that's just the type of person she is.
>>98523271
>Wodan is the Meg of /cyoag/
>>98523271Holy Reddit
>>98523033Hans costs so little that you can actually pick Two Servants (page 8). Can't take Noah alongside him, but can take Astolfo.
>>98514708>>98523217 (me)>IdentityMaster>locationLondon, Britain (not out of choice)>AppearanceMaleAdultBlandUnassuming>RoleMagic User>AligmentNeutral Good>ResidenceApartment>Skills>free from magic user:Myth expertise, Martial Arts, and intel gatheringInvestigationTrackingCommon senseOpperating electronicsFirst aidAtlethicsSurvivalCookingMultitaskingDriving>Magic CircuitsQuality:A+Quantity:A>Command Spell1, Potency DRed, Chaotic, ChestPerpetual SealPersistent Stigmatahidden sigil>Elemental AfinityAverage One>OriginAction (Protect)>FoundationProfane (Not because he isn't part of a family, More because he ditched the life.)>Magecraft ExtraFormalCraftAlchemyElementalBounded FieldsFamiliarsHealing>WishNone (Forced to join)>ServantHonestly this one is hard for me to choose, I'm considering either Da vinci, Spartacus, Danzo or Dantes. But it could also be Willian Tell, Saint George or BradamanteMy idea is a mage that kind of fell off from magic practices, if nothing else because of how most magi are monsters or incredibly self-absorbed, He was meant to be the next head of the family, but he rejected the idea, leaving behind the mystery of his family.Sadly, the Mage association caught wind of his existence, kidnapped his family, and used it as leverage to make him enter the HGW to get a wish on their behalf, being forced to comply to keep them safe.The thing is, in FATE, the relationship with Servants is Bidirectional, both affect each other and will bring doom or salvation to the other, and each servant can bring a different story.Da vinci can make him come to terms with his magic, accepting his magical existence. Spartacus would empathize completely with his predicament and help him "get rid of his chains", Danzo would bring a story of being puppets in the schemes of others, and Dantes can motivate a revenge plot to bring the mage association down for this injustice.The other 3 are just compatible with him.
>>98523828>>>98523217(You) (me)Erm, that's me, not you.
Every single post on this thread is me, actually. I'm so fucking lonely, you have no idea. If anybody's lurking, please let me know.
>>98523841bruh, sorry for the incorrect (me)
tfw no gf to distract me from waiting months for good OC
Lucky for you you can just cook good food
>>98523848skshkshkshksh
>>98515468>My plan is[:] beat [the enemy Masters] into submission [...] while Richard keeps their Servants busy.For that plan, you should up your circuit quality and especially foundation to A, if not higher. Your combat power is very low for a Master.
>>98523946Feel Good.
>>98523271I did that too. A true alpha male will be able to fill out his roster anyway.
>>98524174>>98524174>>98524174>>98524174>>98524174Get along, little dogie
