Archives & Other Resources: https://rentry.co/cyoagAllSync: https://cyoa.allsync.com/s/owWor64yLTngDk3Multiplayer Compilations: https://rentry.org/MCYOA_Comp_CompIn Case of Emergency, Break Glass: https://rentry.org/mcyoagCanaryThreadslave Rentry: https://rentry.org/ThreadKeeping2Backup Rentry: https://rentry.org/ThreadKeeping3capeshit editionPrevious Thread: >>98490968
>>98504410>cyoahttps://imgchest.com/p/9p4nzrxww4n>setting options (that anon took the first napkin)https://rentry.org/2x7e8ciz>faggots>>98493782>>98498275>>98500467>>98502596You guys should figure out a better way to format this.
Vampire>CYOAhttps://imgchest.com/p/6eyra829g4p>Build Listhttps://rentry.org/547i2532>>Camarilla>Rosa Carminehttps://rentry.co/Vampirecya>Montgomery Gartmanhttps://rentry.org/Montgomery-N-Flann>Salvatore Rodianihttps://rentry.org/WODSalvatore2>Elizabeth Ashfordhttps://rentry.org/WoDElizabeth>Ivoryhttps://rentry.co/TzimisceCYOA>Leon Rookhttps://rentry.org/wwdc9dxe>Lampros Hypatoshttps://rentry.org/vg2saavb>James Clarkehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98384592>>Anarch>Warren Chambershttps://rentry.org/xkddi2q4>Adalwolf Catulushttps://rentry.org/cwd56pbv>>Tal'Mahe'Ra>Edan Nemohttps://rentry.co/2sutb3yc>Erika Iizukahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/98280239/#98289327>>Relationship Charts>Montgomeryhttps://rentry.org/localLicks-v2>Jameshttps://rentry.org/qf95et7x>Warrenhttps://rentry.org/WarrenChambersChart>>Writefags>The Highs and Lows of Warren Chambers (Warren)https://rentry.org/6uvcwp9n>Awakening (Leon)https://rentry.org/bhg5phm9>Meeting with the Sire (Montgomery)https://rentry.org/np4cz43m>No Longer Lukewarm (Nemo)https://rentry.co/No-Longer-Lukewarm
https://imgchest.com/p/ljyq8pmdy25>A long time ago in a galaxy far,>far away....>THE GALAXY HAS BEEN FRACTURED>The Jedi Order stood on the precipice of greatness and the Galactic Republic was expanding, chartering new worlds with every passing day.>Without warning, the Hyperspace Disaster tears through known space collapsing the ancient routes the Republic relied upon. The Trymant and Hetzal systems are on the edge of ruin. Calamitous asteroids and debris is inbound to the planets of Hetzal, mandating evacuation on a scale never before thought of. Trymants planets undergoing tremendous ecological change with the sudden loss of their moons.>Across the galaxy the chaos spreads with emergency powers granted to the Bith Chancellor Taniss Ando, an ambitious politician who now rules with an iron fist significantly expanding the Republic Military and SIS.>A once moderate separatist movement surges as the senate flounders in emergency, with many worlds seeking to look after their own needs. Rumors abound that some of the separatists even have access to reliable if limited hyperspace travel.>Mysterious pirates strike from the shadows with impunity, and the Kaminoans as pragmatic as ever have begun selling clone soldiers to every warlord with credits to spare, stoking the fires of conflict galaxy wide.MP CYOA Rules.>FactionsReplace The Sith with "The Dark Brotherhood" - A group of powerful darkside adepts, acolytes, fallen jedi, and assassins. Their membership has influence in most if not all other factions. Their intent is unknown but they strike with proficiency and without mercy to their enemies.Replace The Clone Army with "Republic Strategic Intelligence Service (SIS)" Substitute mentions of clones with intelligence operatives.>MissionsTake and start with the rewards. Use these as plot points and connections between characters. Refluff as required.>Final MissionSkip>Complete Build BonusInclude in your post.
>>98504433>>Builds>Jedi Master Lucius Varrohttps://rentry.org/zdkorea7>Jedi Master Sen Rorishttps://rentry.org/SenRoric>Jedi Master Ur'Drachhttps://rentry.org/UrDrach
>>98504444Nice quads
>MHA Rentryhttps://rentry.org/uhx77ys6>RULES:> Timeline: Just Another Story> Location: Japan>The Hero Students are at Shiketsu.Instructions + Template for Making Cards: https://pastebin.com/NQ6JNH8r>New Stuff:>New Writefag:>Operation DESPERADO (Seiryu, Karma, Honoken, The Villain Known As Stormrazor)https://rentry.org/62g2miaz>CHARACTER PROMPTS (feel free to answer these whenever)Former 1-D Prompts 1-50: https://rentry.org/mhampFormer 1-D Prompts 50+: https://rentry.org/mhamp2Everyone else's prompts: https://rentry.org/mhamp3Same password for all of them (mha4)>Older Prompt Links Are in Herehttps://pastebin.com/Qr3TtGa6>Fighting Style Prompthttps://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/88693730/#88693888>Smokin' Sexy's Class Questionnairehttps://rentry.org/xudhyrnr>Former 1-D Timelinehttps://rentry.org/MHATIMELINEhttps://rentry.org/itmttw7n>Classes Compilationshttps://rentry.org/mcymha2Dhttps://rentry.org/mcymha2Eold former 1-D comp: https://rentry.org/9bf3g>Relationship chartshttps://rentry.org/MHA_Charts>Dorms PromptDorm Room Proposal v2 https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94701730>Tiermaker: https://tiermaker.com/create/mcymha-current-cast-16507969>Full Version of the CYOAhttps://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/97718092>Older Version of the CYOA (Both the old and new versions are legal for builds.)https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/94720077For more Characters, Writefags, Art, Memes, Tierlists, etc. check the rentry
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>>98504410>Name:Mako>Perspective:Anti-Heroic>Super Goal:Experience>Motivations:Self-Serving, Adrenaline, 'Responsibility'>Power Level:Catastrophic>Level Modifiers:Super World x1>Danger Level:Dark>Danger Modifiers:Evil Corps, Superhero Antics, Plot Protection>Source of Powers:All>Your Source:Alteration>Source Modifiers:Cosmic Earth, Greater Exchange >Common Threats:Thugs, Natural Disasters, Ferals, Delusional Veterans, Mutant Flora, Cryptids, Hired Crews, Crazed Scientists>Rare Threats:Organized Criminals, Mutant Freaks>Super Corporations:None (right now)>Powers:>Physical:Major Morphism (Shark)*, Major Aquatic* , Minor, Natural Weapons (Teeth) x2*, Minor Senses, Major Strength, Major Durability, Major Speed, Minor Regeneration, Minor Vision (Night Vision)>Elemental:Super Water>Spirit:Minor Imbuement>Dimensional:Minor Precognition>Super Body:>Foundation:Meta-Human>Body Traits:Special Eyes, Ideal Metabolism, Longevity, Beautiful, Acid Blood, Venomous Bite, Recovery, Fine-Tuned Hearing, Internal Furnace, Contortionist, Inhuman Feature (Radiance), Radiance, Tall, Peak Genetics, Enhanced Strength, Enhanced Durability>Benefits:In Business Baby,Hidden Lair,Fabulous,Execution,Magnet of Attraction,Martial Artist,Super Body,Bullet Time,No Pain,Steel Mind>Drawbacks:Super Metabolism,Animorph (Shark),Mannerisms,External Source (Water),Cosmic Earth>Canon Events:Power Bleed, Last Stand>Full Rentry: https://rentry.org/ypsn3tzvA visitor from the deep sea, Mako has caused havoc on the surface during her first real attempt to integrate into society. After causing millions in property damage and risking countless lives, she was finally subdued by the A-Team and put into custody... only to be offered a deal by the hero Bastion. Freedom, in exchange for being conscripted in the most dysfunctional hero team in the country - the Z-Team.Thankfully, this fish out of water doesn't have any idea what she's getting herself into.
>>98504896fuckable flippers
>>98503803Considering the builds so far, I'd like some ideological clashes between the masters that might happen. While they are still working for the good of the Republic, the outlook on what exactly that means and how to get there would differ. From the threats that might be good opposition, I think the Dark Brotherhood as not!Sith and the Separatists seem the most interesting. The Brotherhood is something that's unquestionably an enemy force that needs to be destroyed, and thus force them all to action, but it rises the typical threats of the Dark Side, and giving the different outlook on the force, personalities, weaknesses, and so on, might lead to interesting interactions. Separatists are also interesting because they are not as clearly evil, and Sen is allied with them, so the choice between aggressive and diplomatic solutions is more complicated and politically charged.
>>98503902>>98504095Like the other Anon said, physique matters. It might be different for Sen as he has an orthodox variant, but Ur'Drach's Soresu is nowhere near gentle. His physique is used to both enhance what Soresu does and to cover for its weaknesses.The most defining feature of his Soresu is the defensive ability. With his skill and reflexes, landing a hit on Ur'Drach is extremely difficult. When fighting against blasters, he deflects them back at you, when fighting in close range, his parries despite being short and efficient, are also powerful enough that they might break through your offense simply by swatting your weapon away.This creates openings for him, that he can't execute on as well as other forms can due to Soresu's shortcomings on the defensive side, but his physical aptitude means that even then his strikes are strong and fast. To expand on the range of option, he can throw in an unarmed strike, but it's not a core feature like ataru, it's an addition to stay dangerous while the weapon is occupied in a bind or a parry, or a backup in case he's attacked before he can draw his light saber. Also a less lethal option which fan be preferable. And even if most of attacks aren't instant fight enders, they don't have to be. A battle against a Soresu master is usually a dragged out event and a competition of endurance, and again, his physical skills mean that it's very difficult to outlast him.Even if you do manage to bypass his defences, it's not easy to put him down in one hit because of his toughness and his species' durability, and given his relentless nature it won't slow him down as much. Relying on the Force against him is also difficult for darksiders due to his Immunity.So in essence, fighting Ur'Drach is like fighting an avalanche, not in it's overwhelming force, but in it's inevitability. The goal is is to exhaust the enemy physically and mentally by making their efforts futile, and then slowly grind them down.
>>98504415How does level down work for this MP if power level also selects the level of the earth? Does that mean if I want to take level 3 for my own power level I can take level 4 then power down to take the benefits of level 3 with 2 extra benefits and body traits?
>>98505495nobody knows man just wing it
>>98505495You just build as if you took level 3 and that's it, power level only affects the individual build
>>98504415This cyoa is so convoluted, even for SP.Is everyone just doing Armageddon or what?
>>98505586Some are also doing Catastrophic and one claimed to be making a destructive build.
>>98504415Cool CYOA! Might play this.
>>98505495Don't listen to him >>98505563Get your benefits king
Hello! I was told to come take a look here as Platinum Age was being played for multiplayer. I am actually currently updating the CYOA to v2.0 which has been taking a lot of time because I wanted builds from v1 to still be legit (or as close as possible), whilst making the CYOA as accessible and easy to play as possible. Which means>removal of most conditionals>removal of power levels (lower pl in different DLC) and balance everything around armageddon>making some sections optionalAlso, it was floated to help me with making companions, since I kinda ran out of steam for making companions. If you want your character to be featured as a companion, then I could possibly feature them given they have the following:>a cool stylish image that is not an already well-known superhero from a different franchise(or at least one obscure enough)>4-6 powers>A list of things they like>A list of things they hate>Source of Power>Intro quip of 15-20 words>Background of 125-150 words
>>98505884I think all the builds aside from Witchbane fit all of that, except for the list of things they like or don't like
>>98505884How did you know we were playing this other than the obvious OP image?
>>98505947An underground Discord spy reported this activity to me. I see everything.>>98505905I looked over them, but still need the build maker to want it be included.
>>98505987I mean if you want to include the hatter you can, I just don't realy know how to write companion blurbs.
>>98505884Well, I have no reason to join now then. I was already getting a headache making sense of the cyoa, now I can just wait for the better version to come out. If people want to make a run for it I will join then.
>>98504410the only thing platinum about this age of comics is the credit cards of the parents used to by this stupid shit for their stupid 25+ yo spawn
>>98504415You seem to have omitted my builds.I'll re-post them here for everyone's convenience.
>>98504415
>>98506404>>98506408choose one
>>98506482Not the first time someone makes more than one build. In fact there was one anon who made it his job to keep dumping builds in several MPs.
>>98506758I don't care about anons having more than one build, even if they dump most of them, but that anon in particular really sucked. One of his npc students had the exact quirk concept I was going to use for a villain build.
>>98504912Faster than lightning.No-one you see is swifter than she.
In hindsight, how accurate was this?
>>98504410Once one of the most powerful heroes of her generation, Samantha Mercer’s career ended in catastrophe. In the years since, the former Sorceress has become a wealthy, alcoholic recluse with enough baggage to make most of the Z-Team look remarkably well-adjusted. Now, after decades spent hiding from cape society, she’s finally been recommended for a tentative return: assisting Bastion with the country’s most dysfunctional hero team.Full build and her drunk ramblings: https://rentry.org/teqfr77i
>>98507108>orochi dead centernot very
>>98507126Holy fuck that's long
>>98507134I couldn't tell you what Orochi's personality even was desu
>>98507108Well Sandy should be max schizo and Hoge should be max autist.
>>98506971>but that anon in particular really suckedI have bad news for you, this guy has the same style so it's probably him again.
>>98507126Jesus this lady might have more issues than Witchbane. A chronically drunk virgin with little to no motivations or aspirations left in life after being washed up in record time and still can’t go over her first love which might actually just have been a one sided crush. Oh and a potential nuke if she ever slips up.I think I’d rather spend a day around Hatter. She’s somehow more put together and I feel like she’d do less damage to me by making me worse than what would happen if I tried to fix whatever’s with Sorceress. Really liked the ramblings, thats really did go on uncomfortably long.
>>98504410>NameNathaniel "Nate" Rowe>AliasParagon>PerspectiveHeroic of course!>Super GoalsGuardianPowerLeadership>MotivationsGood HeartedResponsibility: Duty until Death>Power LevelArmageddonOne Level AboveGreater Exchange>SourceUniversal>HyperAbsorption>SuperWillpower, Inner Power>MajorImbuement absorption, Nullification, Regeneration, Divination>Minor Pre-cognition, Probablity>BodyMaleHuman>Body TraitsLongevityCommanding VoiceHandsomeCut Like MarbleIdeal MetabolismInternal FurnacePeak Genetics>BenefitsBeacon of HopeFabulous ExecutionSuper BodyMagnet of AttractionMerge (Inner Power and Willpower for the ability to pull off super feats through determination!)Lessened Entropy (Regeneration)Secret Identity (gone now lmao)>DrawbacksUnpredictableSuper LifeAlways Active (Regeneration)Glass CannonBiggest of ThreatsSuper ScrutinyTrouble Magnet>Canon EventsGrand FailurePublic PerceptionImprisonedFrom Space!AbductedIdentity RevealedDefeated by TrashTragic deathUnlock PotentialPower Up x7Nathaniel “Nate” Rowe used to be one of the best heroes around and spent years proving that having one of the most villain-coded powers imaginable didn't mean he had to be a villain. Then he made the wrong call.During a major cape crisis, Nate tried to save everyone and thousands died for it. The resulting trial of the century became a years-long legal and political shitshow over whether he'd been criminally reckless or simply made the wrong decision in an impossible situation.The court eventually picked a side.Guilty of criminal recklessness. Fifty years.Now he's finally out, only to find his old life long gone. The A-Team has moved on, his name still carries enormous stigma, and putting him back among the country's premier heroes would be a PR nightmare. So, as part of his reintegration, Nate has been assigned to help Bastion manage the Z-Team.Rentry with the rest of the build: https://rentry.org/twsv2bi4
>>98507474Thanks! I had a lot of fun writing her ramblings (and I might have another batch of them ready soon). There's a lot wrong with her indeed, more if you consider that her mental state is directly tied to the corruption of the entire world! So I understand Hatter being more appealing as company.>>98507475Hey Sandyanon how's it going? I might have some ideas in mind for Paragon after reading his build. Would it be good if I handled them a bit like I did with the relationship between Sam and Nikolai? If you already had things in mind for him it's okay, I just remember you being cool with improvised interactions.
>>98507475>Power Up x7Power Up can only be taken up to 3 times
>>98507475>crazy smiling faceclaimOh. Another one of those.
>>98504896>>98507126>>98507475Forget about heroics, Z-Team will not survive their first press conference>>98507529You can ignore the limit and prerequisites through the Duty until death option
Why are so many builds coming in now that we know that a new version of the cyoa is in the works?
>>98507515hey anon I'm doing pretty greatand yes sure have fun with nate, i'll try to get a writefags or drawing done this weekend to get back into things
>>98507601Cause it doesn’t really diminish builds done in the original cyoa? They said older builds should be compatible. If we really need to change builds after the new version drops, no harm in a little classic comic retcon/sudden power change.
>>98507475To that anon saying that capeshit isn't shounen, this is just a shounen protagonist. Now this run is all shounen.
>>98504433Apparently this is what jedi look like these days.I should really figure out what's been happening since the clone wars show.
>>98507134She was both Schizo and an Autist, and not really homophobic nor racist.
>>98507641Why does she have a Rinnegan?
>>98507651because she’s a powerful force user, duh. Absolute Push is just a long ranged Force Repulse.
Capesloppa MPs be like>They call me 007>0 interactions>0 plot developments>7 dozen dumped builds
>>98507668I'm not playing either, but I think it's okay to let them have a week to start something.
>>98507676It's just light ribbing and pattern recognition, I mean no harm
>>98507619Great, and don't worry anon. After all, what's the worst that could come from being entangeld with Sorceress' fucked up life?
>>98507530Hey man, I'm ACTUALLY insane, what's his excuse?
>>98507703Those eyes.... the force is strong in this one.
>>98507703>Hey man, I'm ACTUALLY insa-AIEEEEEEEEEEE NO ANON DON'T MATING PRESS MEEEEEEEEEEEE-- AHHHHHHHH~~~*PLAP PLAP PLAP PLAP PLAP PLAP PLAP*GET PREGNANT GET PREGNANT GET PREGNANT
>>98507716That's a guy anon.
>>98507740If he wants to larp as a cute girl I'll larp hitting him with my sissification ray
>>98507740Hatter is whatever is funnier at a given moment.
>>98507755Anon really out here using ranged attacks on someone with every level of probability.You're the one getting sissified when it bounces off a mirror, a shiny hubcap, some bald guys head, and a conveniently timed glass pane carried by two guys.
>>98507758She has boobs, tf? Is that guy in pic rel retarded? She doesn't even look close to a guy.
>>98507766Doujin Force is a higher tier superpower than probability manip, sorry
Rolled 24 (1d100)>>985077661-2. nah, he'd win3-100. grand failure, humiliated, defeat by trash
>>98507769Its a long story.
>>98507716Anon has 0% Corruption resistance apparently. Can't even look at her without getting delusions and writhing around on the ground babbling.
Rolled 5 (1d8)>>98504415just checking
>>98504896Mako! Welcome officially to Z-Team, malyshka. I know surface world has not given you best first impression, but I think you will like it here. You will meet people, learn many new things, eat good food, and perhaps even make some friends. We will teach you everything you need to know.First lesson: when someone throws away hamburger, this does not mean you may take it. I also think this rule is stupid, but wife says we must teach you proper manners.>>98507126Ah, my dear Zvezdochka! How proud I am to finally see you joining us. Z-Team will be good for you, I promise. Fresh air, good company, responsibility, leaving house more than once per month. All very healthy things! And do not worry, solnyshko. You are only assistant. Nobody expects you to have your entire life together. Frankly, compared to some of team, you are not that bad....This is not just compliment, actually. But progress!>>98507475Nathaniel! It has been far too long, my friend. I have not seen you since trial. I am very glad to have you with us again. Z-Team will benefit greatly from your experience. Your previous experience, I mean. Hero experience. Not experience with accidental mass death. That came out wrong. Welcome back, Nathaniel, comrade!
Feed me relationship charts...
>>98507758dropped
This cyoa sucks ass and makes my brain sleepy, I skipped most options and don't care if my build is legal or not but it probably is>>98504415>NameWolfram Weiß>PerspectiveVillainous>Super GoalsFearmongerShepherdKnowledge>MotivationsSelf-ServingTraditionGlory>PowerArmageddon>ModifiersOne Level Above>SourceObject>PowersSpeed - Major PowerScience - Super PowerTeleportation - Super PowerTime - Major PowerPlanar - Super Power: Demonia, Kryptos, DistoniaTechnomancy - Major Power>FoundationHuman Male>Body TraitsGenius>BenefitsHenchmenEvil GoonsSteel Mind>DrawbacksExternal Force - Object, ElectricitySuper ScrutinyRelaxed KlutzThe Super LifeElemental Weakness x2 - Light (Jewish Magic, also, the Star of David and pride flags make him recoil like a vampire. This is strange because he actually tolerates minorities and is gay himself, he doesn't know why.)BarrenTrouble Magnet"Hans, I already told you, my calculations were perfect!" - last words of esteemed Nazi super secret scientist Wolfram Weiß before being vaporized in an experimental time machine accident in 1941.Or, so everyone thought. Reappearing instantly in the year 20[CANON], Wolfram resumed his goal of establishing a Fascist regime across the entire planet, which shortly became the universe, and then the multiverse. Besides his intelligence, his powers are actually the result of his exposure to the giant stationary experimental time machine. He can only access said powers within a 20 meter radius of the huge device, and it has steep electrical costs. It doesn't travel through time, but it can travel through space, dilate time, and cross into alternate dimensions. He's amassing an army of anything he can recruit (y'know, Nazis, robots, demons, leprechauns) to take control of the world, and defeat those pesky superheroes. Has terrible economic policies (and genocidal tendencies) so letting him be in charge is a bad idea for the multiverse. Hobby golfer. Casual sadist.
>>98507988If I did one for Prof I think it’d be nothing but absolutely horrified that some of the most unstable and powerful supes on the planet are gathered into one group with a single stable individual tasked to handle them, and not even sure if they are capable of that. Somehow, the experimental oceanic abomination is one of the least worrisome. Achilles seems pretty chill though, I guess a few thousand years of experience will do that for you.
How many times can we take Super World?
>>98504433I found a neat map.
>>98508275It is pretty amusing how the Armageddon level explicitly says only 5-50 people will awaken to that level, and yet all but two of the builds are a level above that.
>>98508429To be fair, not like we can expect 1,000 destructives to be made before we get to Armageddon. These are simply the 5-50 that are being referred to.
>>98508429So long as we don't get 50 builds at that level it's fineOther universes are just weak compared to us
>>98508468we don't even have 50 anons, we barely have 20, we don't run that risk.
>>98508550but they all took "above armageddon"which means for some reason the strongest people who have ever existed are all gathered around and just sitting there, maybe preparing to throw pies at each other
>>98507988>>98504415Okhttps://rentry.org/wvro73q3
>>98508550Unless they multibuild hard. Toybox Anon could do that by himself.
>>985082953, it says so in the cyoa
>>98508777Did anyone take it 3 times?
>>98508586Oh, it's you again. My fault for falling for it.
>>98508295>>98508809I assume all the builds that have "one level above" took it 2 times, because that option takes one of the picks from that section. The rest should have taken it 3 times, as it's the only one listed.It was also already discussed as something everyone gets for free last thread.
KTH Isekai anons, how's your progress? Don't wanna be suffocating, just worried if you got discouraged. The CYOA wasn't posted and PA saw a surge in activity, so just making sure.
>>98508912I buried my dog (I had to put it out of its misery after it had been defiled by Isekai).
>>98508976*drops off your wife and runs away*PRANKED!
>>98508981*stares at the body of my wife**it was difficult but I thought I came to terms with her being gone after all that time since I've learned she's been murdered by Isekai**but that was not enough for it**it had to defile her body by digging it out and dumping it so unceremoniously in front of me*CURSE YOU, ISEKAI!I SHALL HAVE MY REVENGE IN THIS LIFE OR THE NEXT!
>>98509022>IN THIS LIFE OR THE NEXT!Sounds like you want the isekai to get you.
>>98509033fuck... fight fire with fire or smth
>>98508912Yeah should be done in a few hours hopefully
>>98508586Anons always go for high power, you new here or something?
>>98509111No, he's the mudcorefag. He can't even imagine people with powers interacting without his brain exploding.
>>98504415Does anyone want to make a corpo cape and be work buddies?
>>98508912I couldn't get much progress, but I didn't give up. I should be done soon, depends on how pretty I want to make the rentry. Unless we wanna talk abput it now I guess I can leave the school life part out for later, just so I can post the build first, or give a generic version instead.
>>98509192What's the name you're using for the school and city?
>>98504433>The First Hours (Lucius Varro, Sen Roric)https://rentry.org/sbcz57hfThis is Lucius's reaction to news of the hyperspace disaster reaching Coruscant.I want him to rush to the outer rim to try and secure things. I'm thinking of having him establish a base of operations in the Gordian Reach. >>98508399 It's right next to the Hydian Way and nearby you also have Dathomir, the Sith Worlds, and Mandalore which are points of interest.I was thinking Ur'Drach could come along bringing knowledge of pre-holonet communications so we can establish courier networks for regions without holonet access. While he's there he can also investigate the source of the hyperspace disturbance.As for Roric, he can be the council's he can be the diplomatic anchor between the outer rim and the core, as well as serving as a check against Lucius's darkness. The council obviously sees the danger of having Lucius return to the source of his darkness and take up arms again.
>>98509203I'm not the right person to ask that, I suck at naming things. If you want my opinion I just got a name from a random name generator, Kunisaki-shi for the city, and Kumamoto for the academy. I was just going to leave it vague, we can use these unless someone has a better idea. I don't know japanese so I can't give a suggestion with a meaning.
>>98509365>Kunisaki-shi for the city, and KumamotoWorks for me.
>>98508912I'm done with the first draft of my build (https://rentry.org/rkpuht3o). if anyone wants to discuss backstories or lore details I'll be right here. I kind of assumed every build got summoned and found their cheats separately before partying together, but if you guys want a more shared event I can change things up.At first I wanted to format it with western terms like Magic/Martial/Mental instead of Qi/Body/Soul but I felt like that would be too confusing for something that's supposed to be a quick reference.
>>98509264>https://rentry.org/FirstHoursPt2 (Varro, Roric, Ur'Drach)Sen's goal will be to prevent the Senate and separatists escalating into civil war. But will also aim to move out to the forward hub. Whether that is because he fails and the separatists leave coruscant so he leaves as well, or because he is sent forward to help keep Varro on track.
>>98509546I get a 404 on the rentry
>>98509704Nevermind, the parenthesis got included in the auto link. I recommend just changing the build rentry url to include the closed paranthesis at the end.
>>98509574I can't imagine the council's going to be happy when Lucius immediately starts reassembling the 101st and ordering clone legions from Kamino.
>>98509546Cool build, mine is taking longer than I expected, I will probably just post a version with just the backstory and personality tomorrow and fill out the skills later.>I kind of assumed every build got summoned and found their cheats separately before partying togetherI assumed it was more of a group event, like a gaming club or something, but I'm fine with keeping things separate, it could help get past the "how do I use this?" stage. How old is she supposed to be? I assumed everyone was still in school because of the premise, and that everyone knew each other from there, so is she still school age or is she like a legend by now? Like the sudden dropout with no apparent explaination and endless theories.Because of how she used to be I guess pretty much anyone would know her at least.Are her life events supposed to be in the Sprit World or the human world?In a way I inadvertedly made the opposite of your character. You made someone who used to be the center of attention and turned into a rogue wanting to hide as much as possible in the other world. I made a guy who blended into the background and acted like a schemer in the mundane world but turned into a very flashy existance in the other world. It's funny how that happened.>SpoilerI'm writing down both, and I'm trying to come up with less xianxia names for stuff and more JRPG names. The original is still there for reference, but the other version hopefully sets the theme better. If you want I can tell you a way to make things appear in the Table Of Contents without it being visible in the rest, in case you don't already know.It got really late so I'm going to sleep soon, but hopefully I can do more tomorrow.
>>98504410Insomnia / Jackson LeedsCode Name: Chameleon"Let's just get this over with so we can go home as soon as possible">PerspectiveAnti-Heroic>Super GoalsGuardianFearmongerVigilantism>MotivationsJusticeResponsibility>Power LevelCatastrophic>Your SourceAlteration>Source ModifiersGreater Exchange>PowersMinor StrengthMinor DurabilityMinor SensesMajor ShapeshiftingMinor EmpathyMinor DarknessSuper DarknessMajor PortalMinor Pre-cognitionMinor Planar>Common ThreatsNatural DisastersViolent RadicalsDelusional VeteransMongrelsCultistsHired Crew>Rare ThreatsAssassinsOrganized Criminals>FoundationMeta-human>Body TraitsPeak GeneticsEnhanced DurabilityEnhanced StrengthSpecial EyesHypnotic GazeInhuman Feature (Hypnotic Gaze)RadianceRecoveryFine-tuned HearingCommanding VoiceContortionist>BenefitsLessened EntropyHidden LairSuit UpMartial ArtistIncredible Skill x4 (Stealth, Gunplay, Cryptography, Computers)Secret IdentityEscape ArtistFlavor Boost (Empathy)Merge (Portal & Darkness)>DrawbacksThe Super LifeElemental Weakness x2 (Light)Nemesis>Canon EventsAlly TurncoatPower Bleedhttps://rentry.org/6petn6u5Orphaned at birth, Jackson was born with demonic features, but that wasn't the only thing unique about him. By 12 he discovered his latent powers after a bullying incident at the orphanage which caused him to be ostracized even more, and by 16 the bullying went too far and ended with the death of 1 or 2 bullies according to him. Since then he's been on the run, enacting vigilante justice from the shadows to ensure that accidents like his could never be triggered again, which led him to Z-team.Or at least that's his cover story this time. Jackson is part of the newest batch of shadow supers having recently graduated from their facility. While he is an orphan, he was taken in since birth and trained to counter other supers, and this time, keep Z-team in check.
let it be known that the lower your power level, the more powerful you areall the armageddons are jobbers
>>98509999Wrong. The author just comfirmed that Armageddon is the intended power level. Anything less is just voluntary crippling.
>>98504410>https://rentry.org/sf8qeq25A natural born metahuman a powerful mutant he has dedicated his life to using his powers for the good of all. As Radiant he travels the world putting out fires, rescuing people in need, and capturing ne'er-do-wells. As RM Ashford he is an enigmatic globe trotter, always 'researching' his next novel. >NameRadiant>PerspectiveHeroic>Super GoalsGuardian, Legacy, Conversion>MotivationsGood hearted, Responsability (Adrenaline)>Power LevelArmageddon, One Level Above, Superworld (3)>SourceGenetics>Common TreatsThugs, Ferals, Thieves, Hired Crews, Disasters, Crazed Scientists, Cultists, Violent Radicals>Rare ThreatsCosmic Disasters, Organized Criminals, Mutant Freaks>Super PowersDurability, Speed (Hyper)>Major PowersFlight, Strength, Adaptability, Vision (Plasma)>Minor PowersPrecognition (Danger Sense), Regeneration, Senses, Vision (X-Ray), Vision (Zoom), Vision (Thermal), Aquatic, Ice>Super BodyMeta-Human>Body TraitsTall, Longevity, Cut Like Marble, Ideal Metabolism, Radiance (Tanned), Fine Tuned Hearing>BenefitsLessoned Entropy, Beacon of Hope, Fabulous Execution, Plane Carrier, Wealthy, Secret Identity, Day Job (Novelist), Steel Mind, Incredible Skill (Detective Noir Writer), Super Body>DrawbacksAlways Active (Strength), Rival, Barren>Canon EventsGlorious Entry, Last Stand
>>98509156Anon sniped my idea, so I'm in the market for a new one. What are you thinking for the corpos?
>>98510177Which one sniped your idea?
>>98510227Samantha. I too was thinking of an alcoholic failgirl that used to be a big shot hero, with a build using primarily chaos magic supported by inner power. I blame the telepaths for this.
>>98510246Huh. That is surprisingly close. Maybe it's still possible to do that idea and they can be drinking buddies? You could combine it with the corpo idea and have a washed up office lady who couldn't make it as a noncorpo hero?
Rolled 4 (1d4)>>98504410I have way too many build ideas so I'm gonna let the dice decide.1. Hero2. Antihero3. Antivillain4. Villain
You guys know there are more ideas that just clowns, alcoholics, and alcoholic clowns, right? You don't all have to make Popsy.
>>98510021>Speed (hyper)Dang, got ourselves a Metro-Man here!
>>98510385Just you wait, my totally original wine mime will be a smash hit…
>>98510466You jest but I can totally see a mime build using psychic barriers or something.
>>98504410Is there a way to use extra minor powers for something useful? Like trade them for benefits or body traits or something?
>>98510021>>98510389I IIII could save time in a booottle the first thing I would do is spend it with youuu
>>98510495You got to remember if you pick a higher tier power you don't gain the lower tier powers above it you got to buy them separately, some of the minor powers are pretty neat.
>>98510605Not really relevant to me. I was just getting too much from early choices and it felt like a waste not do nothing with it. The solution was to go back to the start and choose differently.
>>98509264>>98509574Lads, I wanted to continue the chain, but the topic shifted to Hetzal there at the end, so I wanted to look up the locations to know how to address that, and aren't all three mentioned pretty much all over the galaxy? Gordian Reach Is like P/Q-5/6 (top part of the map), Trymant is Subterrel K/L-20 (bottom left) and Hetzal is either also in Subterrel or in Savereen Q-16/17 (bottom right) depending on which wiki-page I look at.I assume our Hyperspace Disaster is more serious than the canon one, but this scale doesn't seem very cohesive to me, so I'm sure I missed something. Can someone please clear it up for me? Currently the most sense to me would be that if the Disaster is fucking up the Hydian Way, then focus being place on like the top left part of the map makes the most sense, but Hetzal and Trymant seem like completely separate problems, and comparatively minor then. Even if we assume they both are in Subterrel, that one shouldn't be affected that much by the disaster on the Hydian Way as it's close to Corellian Trade Spine.
>>98510662I think our setting has more or less the whole of the hyperspace lanes suffer some sort of effect. The Hetzal and Tyrmant were set up as immediate causes of concern. Regarding if they are major or minor concerns I guess it depends on the perspective, as it is one planet is going to explode and another is going to suffer an extinction level event which is major to them, but yes on the scope of the galaxy being on the edge of war and maybe losing access to rapid intergalactic travel it is relatively minor.I think if you want to continue the meeting setting, you could set it up as a side-discussion thats going on while the meeting continues or skip the meeting itself.
>>98510662The main reason I suggested Gordian Reach is because it's at the center of Korriban, Mandalore, and Dathomir which might be interesting places to explore. Hetzal and Trymant seemed like pretty straightforward evacuation missions.I'll just second what >>98510704 said. While the council is talking about the droid attack on the wookies we can step aside and figure out how to save the galaxy.
>>98504410>JackdawJackdaw is a career villain, a henchman for hire and infamous criminal in his own right.He is a pragmatic man with an eye for trouble and a knack for keeping his head down. Despite over ten years in the game he has never once been unmasked successfully, always finding a way to escape even the most well laid traps and evade even the most ardent pursuers. A small timer by most accounts, he stands apart from his peers through audacity, strict code of hour, and ofcourse his amazing mind. >Power: Intuitive PrecognitionIt is often said the Jackdaw has never lost a fight it was possible to win. He has an innate knack for knowing when its best to cut and run and when its best to stay and fight, his mind is capable of tremendous subconscious calculation able to simulate precisely any given situation in less than a moment. This intuition leads him to the optimal course of action in times of duress and allows him to deal with even overwhelming chaos, danger, and threats in the most efficient manner possible seizing opportunities as they arise and avoiding traps before they are sprung. >His Code1. A Deal is a Deal - He sticks to his word always, but expects the same from others. Burn him or break his rules and your done. 2. Don't mess with Kids - A hard line that has cost more than one employer their life.3. Paybacks a Bitch - Debts always come due. He repays favors as soon as he can and with interest. Likewise, for those who betray him, he will extract a heavy toll.4. Old Town Rules - He is a criminal and dangerous, but not a killer. At least, not when it can be helped. He also has no interest in unmasking any capes, or going after loved ones. He is a professional and treats others with professional respect as long as they deserve it no matter what side of the situation they fall unto.
>>98510495The greater exchange source power lets you trade them for major powers
>>98510852NTA but is it allowed? Because it's a source modifier and it's not included in the setting rentry
>>98510938Yeah, it's allowed. Others have it and it only affects you rather than being a global thing. Several builds have it too.
>>98510021>One Level Above, Superworld (3)You can't have both. You can only have 3 choices total from that section so if you have One Level Above you can only pick Super World 2 times.>>98510938The setting rentry only includes the universal choices. Many sections in the cyoa include both choices that affect everyone and choices that affect only you. The individual ones aren't restricted.
>>98511019I see where I went wrong. I'll fix that up after work.
>>98509989>I assumed it was more of a group event, like a gaming club or something, but I'm fine with keeping things separate, it could help get past the "how do I use this?" stage.We can have both. Maybe they were part of a guild/in-game group before the isekai, were transported into different areas before finding each other>How old is she supposed to be? I assumed everyone was still in school because of the premise, and that everyone knew each other from there, so is she still school age or is she like a legend by now? Like the sudden dropout with no apparent explaination and endless theories.She's still in school age, would be in her senior year if she hadn't dropped out. Still time to have known the other builds during her freshman year before her big freakout
>>98504410>NameOwen Cooper>PerspectiveAnti-heroic>Super Goals-Guardian-Exploration>Motivations-Good hearted-Adrenaline-Glory>Power Level-Catastrophic, Greater Exchange>Source-Alteration>Common Treats-Delusional Veterans-Crazed scientist-Hired crews-Thugs-Natural disasters>Rare Threats-Rogue magi-Ancient weapons>Super Powers-Hyper Speed>Major Powers-Regeneration-Imbuement: Speed-Time>Minor Powers-Precognition-Adaptability-Lightning>Super Body-Human male>Body Traits-Longevity-Ideal metabolism-Internal Furnace-Contortionist-Peak genetics-Enhanced durability-Enhanced strength-Recovery->Benefits-Lessened Entropy: Speed-Escape artist-Heat immunity-Cold immunity-Flavor boost: Time is used on oneself, to speed them up even more or slow them down as needed, though this requires concentration.-Martial artist-Suit up!-Bullet time>Drawbacks-Always Active: Speed-Super life-Super metabolism-Cradle of power from the MP rules counts as a drawback>Canon Events-Mentor-Power up-Training Arc-Unlock Potential-Tragic death-From space!-Abducted-ImprisonedHaving spent most of his (perceived) life stuck permanently at super-speed, he found an outlet in heroism as the sidekick to an experienced cape and acquaintance of Bastion, who somehow managed to turn the impatient little bastard into a genuinely promising hero. Then his mentor died right before Owen was supposed to go solo, and his professional debut went spectacularly to shit. Blitz still saved plenty of lives, but grief, instability, impatience and an increasingly fucked sense of what constituted “reasonable force” led to a disciplinary file growing almost as fast as he moved. Owen was dumped into the Z-Team for reformation.>Full build and fluffhttps://rentry.org/27bhfvdf
>>98509992Another darkness user, yay! Really solid powerset for what's basically a caped spec ops operative. Also, you need Always Active to take Lessened Entropy, and it only covers that one power. Welcome to the circus and gool like wrangling everyone.Actually, I feel like there's several members that were recruited for that purpose. Imagine if everyoen else is here thinking they're the oens in charge.>>98511218>be me>unpowered mugger>try to take an old man's wallet or something>push him over>start running>kneecaps broken at Mach 20 before I realize what's going onSpeedster police brutality is a crazy thing. He could beat up a suspect even ebfore most cameras could catch it. Welcome to Z-team though!
>>98511279Thanks for catching that, I forgot to remove it while shifting around the powers. I wanted to ask for an audit in the post too, but ran out of characters from using spoilers.>Imagine if everyoen is here thinking they're the oens in charge.That's a good point. The only members that aren't here to wrangle each other are Mako and Owen probably, and Samantha and Nate have years of experience ahead of him by comparison. It could either be something he could exploit to make himself look less like the one pulling the strings from behind, or it could lead to him being pissed off at all the ways that they're making his job harder to do. It doesn't help that most of the Z-team recruits seem to be morally dubious anti-heroes.
>>98511191>Maybe they were part of a guild/in-game group before the isekai, were transported into different areas before finding each otherThat can work, like they already played the game for a bit then a sudden "update" is what brought them into the world. And they all get transported to different places because that's where the starting point for the character would be, but they have their own body (bar any modification from bloodlines and stuff).An in game guild makes sense in that case, and it's a good starting point as far as how much they know about each other.>She's still in school age, would be in her senior year if she hadn't dropped out.I see, I get the timeline now. So the change was relatively recent.
>>98511406>It could either be something he could exploit to make himself look less like the one pulling the strings from behind, or it could lead to him being pissed off at all the ways that they're making his job harder to doHim using their own anti-social behavior to nudge the group in certain directions while those same behaviors make wrangling around efficiently is a fun image, yeah.I really enjoy the idea that the team isn't just quirky underdogs that were unjustly discriminated against by the rest of the world. A-Team and other big hero groups don't have to be secretly incompetent or corrupt. Z-Team is genuinely dysfunctional. Very powerful overall, yes, but also truly dangerous and in desperate need of fixing.
>>98511702>while those same behaviors make wrangling around efficientlyI meant while those same behaviors make wrangling them aroung efficiently a pain. Drinking to get into character isn't the best idea.
>>98511218Bro I deadass thought that was sans undertale in the thumbnail, I need more sleep
>>98511981You're deadass a faggot
>>98504415We can all agree that Electricity at Super doesn't mean you can just shut peoples brain off right?
>>98512045no it doesbetter figure out a counter chuckles
>>98508656Basedsovl
>>98512045Ehh... it's like a lot of insta kill power it can probably be resisted by durability, adaptability or nullification, but as this one is less absolute you can probably also use a ton of other powers.
>>98512266Quit being such a coward.You wanted armageddon. That means everyone can kill everyone with a thought.
>>98512632but who's the strongest
>>98512638Prep time magic/sciencechads who can do everything >>>> stupid chuddie weaklings
I would honestly make a build for Platinum Age if Sylen wasn't a retarded faggot who designed the most convoluted CYOAs of all time.
>>98512723Just pick a few powers and ignore everything elseY'knowto dump like everyone else
>>98512731But I dont want to dump, I want to play multiplayer
>>98512638The golden protector they are always the strongest no matter the build
>>98512738>playing multiplayer>modern /mcyoag/>capeslop of all thingshahahahaha
This CYOA is giving me a headache but I’m working on a Platinum Age build. Basically a Mexican wrestler version of Ant-Man
>>98512758Whose penis and/or butthole does he wanna go up
>>98504415https://rentry.co/g6rouecy Boo, Spooky Ghost for the Z Team.Now not only do you get your ankles broken by a speedster if you drop a cigarette butt on the ground, you might get jumped by someone you can't even percieve too.
>>98504433>>98509574>The First Hours Part 3 (Ur'Drach, Varro, Roric)https://rentry.org/FirstHoursPt3I might have gone a bit exposition heavy, but considering the MP is just starting, I hope you'll forgive me.
>>98511218Good luck anyone trying to write a speedster without invalidating everyone else in the scene.
>>98513282.....writing for this MP? lollmao
>>98513299I'm still in shock that star wars got three writefags this thread basically a thread after it got some builds. Silver age might do the same next thread. Maybe more given it has more builds.
>>98513341Not hopeful, one's a few autists' pet MP and the other is capeslopI prophesize that PA will get at most 4 writefags total, over the course of the next 3 weeks
>>98512829What part of her actions make her anti-heroic exactly?
>>98513468Actually since she's an anti-hero according to this cyoa that just means she acts as a hero but is secretly evil
>>98513282My Hyper Strength and Durability build solos all speedsters by clapping his asscheeks, which releases a MFTL+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ sonic wave that obliterates everything in its path.
>>98513221Alright, this is shaping up to be an interesting dynamic. You've got Roric playing the friendly old man, Ur'Drach playing the tough sheriff, and Varro playing the passion driven youth.I think I'm going to try and flesh out the 101st next. We could skip straight to the Gordian Reach or we could have an interjection during the journey as we see the immediate impacts of the disaster and send our final messages before holonet access cuts out.
>>98513468Shes definately a vigilante judging by the hidden text.
>>98513605I find it funny that the "youth" is a PTSD having war veteran but just from a competitively short lived race. I wonder if we'll get anyone else.
>>98513624>I wonder if we'll get anyone else.I'm in a build making mood so I'm considering making one, dunno
>>98513672Any character ideas you have already? Another master or something else?
>>98513606She's just being edgy from being alone all the time. She wouldn't even hurt a fly!
>>98513682Making another Master would make sense, but maybe I'll try and be a little more unique
>>98513711Soul magic is ontologically evil Anon.
>>98513720not as evil as telepathy
>>98513718There is the option of non force sensitive that could get involved, and if you pick a padawan then you get your choice of masters.
>>98513725I feel like its lower on the fucked up scale than anything involving your immortal soul. Jay Jonah Jameson wouldn't even have to try to demonize that creep/
>>98504410>Name: Powerhouse>Perspective: Villainous >Super Goals:WealthConversionLegacy>Motivations:GreedAdrenalineResponsibility (Adrenaline)>Power Level: Armageddon>Level Modifiers:One Level AboveSuper World x2>Power Source: Psionics>Source Modifiers:Cosmic EarthGreater Exchange>Common Threats:ThugsProfessional ThievesNatural DisastersViolent RadicalsFeralsSaurusDelusional VeteransMongrelsCryptidsCultistsHired CrewsCrazed Scientists>Rare Threats:Failed ExperimentsRogue MagiLower DemonsMutant FreaksAncient Weapons>Powers:Strength (Minor)Adaptability (Major)Lightning (Super)Nullification (Major)Inner Power (Super)Transformation (Major)Willpower (Major)Destruction (Hyper)>Body Traits:Peak GeneticsLongevityTallCut Like MarbleRecovery>Benefits:Lessened Entropy x3 (Strength, Inner Power, Lightning)Suit Up!Martial ArtistEscape ArtistPlane CarrierCold ImmunityHeat Immunity>Drawbacks:Always Active x3 (Strength, Inner Power, Lightning)Biggest of ThreatsThreateningTrouble Magnet>Canon Events:Mentor (Super Villain)Unlock PotentialTraining ArcPower Up x3Imprisoned x3The Living Lightning, Apex of Energy, One Million Volt Villain, the one and only:POWERHOUSE.Generating a near infinite current of energy within themselves, Powerhouse is an unstoppable juggernaut, able to surround and even transform themselves into pure lightning, and channeling it to perform feats of awesome power. Believes those with power should use it to suit their own ends. Attempts to stop or contain him have not been successful, as he's smashed through super prisons, survived being thrown into space, and even once was sent to an alternate dimension to be banished forever, only to get dropped back off because they didn't want to deal with him. So far the only method to slow him down is to make him someone else's problem, which is easy to do as almost everyone who knows of him hates him for ruining everything he touches.
>>98513739imo telepathy is worse because there's feasibly beings that may not have souls but can have their minds tormentedif a being doesn't have a mind but can have their soul "tormented" that's not really evil, that's more like picking a fruit
>>98513727>There is the option of non force sensitive that could get involvedWhat's the current conflict again, if you don't mind answering?>and if you pick a padawanTrue but I don't like padawans lol
Anyone else get the feeling some of the mps are just singlerplayer, but anons want to talk a bit about their builds before moving on to the next one?
>>98513760That's all capeslop MPs after their golden age
>>98513760Common capeslot experience
>>98513760Spirit Conscript.
>>98513760Overlord.
>>98513760It's less the mp and more the anons or their builds that give me that feeling, especially if don't make any connection to any other builds from the start or after. Like lizardanon felt that way even though stuff like the round table and robotanon was happening at the same time.
>>98513795>>98513802my FUARKING heroes...
>>98513795PA does feel a bit like SC with how it's getting shat on before things get established.
>>98513746>Armageddon>one level aboveDaring arent we
>>98513910https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6ZKZEpKzENU
>>98504415Have we decided which city to set it mostly in? It's technically possible for this to be international with how many movement options each super is given.
>>98513944Gary, Indiana
>>98513910Blame the anons who made it the rule
>>98513944Nobody disagreed with new york from last thread so by napkin rules I'm going with new york for my vote.
>>98504415It’s been a while since I’ve made something for here, so here’s my build. Might be wrong here and there, I can fix things if needed.https://rentry.co/locustman>The Unbelievable Locust-Man!Mexican-American amateur pro wrestler David Espósito can change his size at will, and he’s a tough cookie to crack! Watch out, crime — you’ve got a pest comin’ your way!
>>98513840A lot of builds in past MPs didn't have strong connections to other builds right away. Actually, I think the builds that try to force that too early often dump, or those connections get dropped or forgotten about to focus on new relationships instead.
>>98514074Its a bit of a conundrum, if you don't force your character into a team or partnership or whatever you run the risk of falling to the wayside. But if you do, its just that, forced. Only rarely do characters naturally fit together.
>>98514039Ay-ay-ay! Es un langosta grandé!
>>98514039Oh, and of course: - https://youtu.be/31NxuMrtWsk
>>98504415https://rentry.org/fqfcwf32So many characters im sure some were missed. Let me know if you were one of them.
>>98514575nice chart anonmy build's in it so its an s tier
>>98514575I just think you're brave for actually reading so many builds and figuring out what they do.
>>98514575You missed Ra & the Indivisible Man.Other than that, seems like a good list!
>>98514575>>98514790Oh, also you mix up 'through' (as in; to move through something) & 'threw' (as in; the past-tense of 'throw') when you talk about Radiant throwing Power House into space.
>>98506404>>98498275What are your material weaknesses?
>>98504433Update for Lucius. I added a whole section for Vaapad, explaining how it came about and what it means to Lucius. This was mostly inspired from our earlier discussions.https://rentry.org/zdkorea7
I just woke up from a coma, I've been asleep for 5 years. What happened while I was away?
>>98514971Russia invaded Ukraine.Gaza attacked Israel.The US started bombing Iran.Everyone is now openly racist and homophobic./pol/ took over the democrat party.Elon Musk became a trillionaire.Predictive text algorithms now dominate the world economy.
>>98513758The initial post has it described, and those first three writefags mostly discuss that, but in short:A disaster in the hyperspace damages the Hydian Way, one of the main superlanes in the galaxy, and threatens to spread. Without access to safe hyperspace travel, many worlds in the Outer Rim won't be able to survive due to their reliance on trade for basic resources. This likely means war for those resources. Another smaller disaster threatens the planets Trymant and Hetzal. Separatists are trying to exploit the chaos to secede.Pirates try to use the chaos too.
>>98514981Uh, what about /mcyoag/?
>>98514799>>98514790Updated and fixed.
>>98515105The most recent news is that we nearly died because someone wanted to play jrpg traitor. There were a ton of builds and then total silence. Threads were lasting 10 days. We got maybe 1 contribution to an mp a week. And now we have Jedi and Capes which seem to be revitalizing things.The rest is in the compilation, not fully updated but it has most of it.https://rentry.org/MCYOA_Comp_Comp
KTH build mechanics done, took longer than it should have and now I'm exhausted because I stayed up too late. Flavor tomorrow. 'Nite 'nons.
To capeslop or not to capeslop...
>>98514906The Indivisible Man's weakness is plutonium, as it says on his image build.
>>98515153Thx!
Not sure if I've become captain nofun or if platinum age just sucks
>>98515863Its a really unintuitive cyoa but the more I read it the more it grows on me.Unfortunately I have no clue what the characters that are made do, or who they are, or what teams or sides they're on because the posts are so obtuse to read.
>>98514906Velesite! Comes from homeworld. Mostly. Was already pain in ass there. Earth originally had almost none, until meteor showers, alien invasions and their spaceships exploding in atmosphere brought larger pieces here. Scientists later found microscopic natural deposits deep in Earth too.What does it do? Simple. My body does not like. Adaptation cannot properly adapt. You put piece inside me, wound does not heal properly. Very unpleasant. Scientists have complicated explanation. I call bastard rock. Naturally occurring velesite is extremely rare. Can also be made artificially, but you need supergenius and very expensive equipment, so average asshole cannot make bullet in garage.Important clarification: velesite makes me vulnerable but not instant. If you have velesite knife and stab me, congratulations! You have achieved what nuclear weapon struggles to do. Unfortunately, you are now standing within arm's reach.
>>98515941I love reading this in his accent. What would Bastion think of Locust Man? I don’t think he’s gonna be a Z-Team member but crossovers can always happen
>>98515887>>98515863Its not great
>>98515863The cyoa is very bad, out of all the options (worm, mha, harbinger) this thread somehow stuck out with the very worst one
>>98515941Locust Man? Da, David. Good kid. I like him. First time we meet, he thinks I metahuman thug, tries wrestling move on me. Very enthusiastic. I tell him, "Kid, you understand I weigh nearly as much as small car?" He says this makes it more impressive. I like him immediately.Very cheerful boy. Good heart. Maybe too good sometimes. Runs himself half to death between wrestling, cape work and taking care of his grandpa. I tell him he cannot help old man if he himself collapses in street. He says he is fine. This means he is both dedicated and stupid. His wrestling is good. Very entertaining. When he becomes tiny and throws whole body into punch? Ha! Like being attacked by very angry powerful tiny insect. When he becomes giant, even better. Now he's angry powerful giant insect! He calls me old man sometimes. Very disrespectful. I call him grasshopper. He hates this so naturally I continue.Good cape. Good wrestler. Good grandson. If he comes by headquarters, I feed him. Boy needs calories. If he refuses, I feed him anyway because it fits theme of locust to eat much.
>>98516178>>98516170This fuckup is a sign that I should sleep
>>98507690yea hahaalso wow we got even more team members, so many messed up problematic capes around
>>98504433I'll join with my new build soonish- I just need to do the writefagging. Is the new Hyperspace catastrophe the new Naboo, the new Geonosis or the new end of the Clone Wars in terms of galactic political development? Regardless, as I see it, the Hutt space will see a lot more traffic after the event, and we may end up in a threeway war - outer Rim (headed by Corporate Space?) vs Core vs Hutts. Without the droid army (in the same quantity), the clone army it's a more balanced and less controlled event. Well, I'll have to write more on it soon. But first, the build must go to rentry ->
>>98516479I don't think it's any of those, as it doesn't have a clear enemy (at least yet). From those, I guess Naboo would be the closest. Some suspicions of dark siders come about, and Separatists stir sensing an opportunity. Hutt space is pretty much the space most removed from the Hydian Way, so it'll be among the last impacted even if the issue continues to spread, so it makes sense that they'd get more active in politicks.
>>98516479Right now we're in the fog of war. All we know is that one of the largest trade routes in the galaxy is shut down. Think of it like the Suez and Panama canals suddenly being filled with concrete, but at a billion times the scale. At the same time two entire planets are about to explode, the chancellor is going full Palpatine, a separatist movement is gaining momentum, and pirate armadas are forming left and right.
>>98516225>”Hey, lady! Where’s your costume? Y’know, we’re supposed to be superheroes? If it’s just a slow day at the dry cleaner’s, I totally get it, though.”
>>98516597>Yeah, because the costume's the important part. Can't be a real superhero unless I'm dressedin skintight spandex. What even were you anyway? Lice-Man?Her expression is perfect though, look at that face!>>98516225Aw she looks awesome! You just know she'll puke and cry any time now before passing out.
>>98516547>the chancellor is going full PalpatineSure, but it's a Bith. No way anybody who's species rhymes with Sith would be one. That's crazy talk.
>>98504410Make way for the APEX being of AMPERES, the PRINCE of POWER, the EMPEROR of ENERGY, the (Now accurately adjusted) TRILLION volt VILLAIN: POWERHOUSE.You have to go through at least 3 titles before introducing him, its in his contract. Small silly chart, think I got everyone in.https://rentry.org/PowerhouseChart
>>98516727I love how this guy talks lmao
>>98516547>Suez canalOkay, who drifted the Interastral Ever Given across the Hydian and got stuck?
>>98514575Nice, I really enjoyed his evaluations, very pragmatic. at first glance the only ones I think are missing are Paragon and Sorceress.>>98516727Yeah, looks like you got everyone. His way of speaking is super fun and the puns were great, nice job anon!
>>98516479>>98504444>>98504433>https://rentry.org/7co3pbkdNew build!I need to eat before writing the personal lore though. However, the build is ready. 0 points remain.
>>98517112>Gender: ShemaleMate...
>>98517112blatant fetish shit is where I draw the line
>>98517232There are no panties in space. Blatant fetish shit has always been canon.>>98517191Less perverted than attraction to men.
>>98517263>>>/d/
>>98517279>sarlacc pit>sex slaves>femdom catgirl queenShemales have a right to exist beyond porn.
gatekeeping troons out of mcyoag during this reset will be imperative for the longterm health and prosperity of the generalignore at your own peril
>>98517191Huh... where does shemale fall in? Is it a futanari? So a full herm or is it just a girl with a dick and nothing else?
>>98517295>just a girl with a dick and nothing else?This one. Like creating a Cyberpunk character and putting the genital slider to penis 1 (the uncut one). These wannabe prudes just make a huge deal out of it, likely because they've been memed into parrot style reactions, à la >>98517289I'm not even a troon, you can't change gender with a knife.
>>98517112clear trojan horse by the platinumkeks
>>98504410Since the author of Platinum age is making a 2.0 should I just wait for that one before making a build or like...
>>98517318>wait X weeks to finally make a build for an MP that died X-3 weeks ago
>>98517318>>98507620
>>98517314Technically speaking, it's not a legal build by RAW, but what is your goal with designing a custom race just to implement that despite that?
>>98517314A shemale is literally a transsexual. It's a dude.
>>98517317100%
>>98517339Except this one is a virile male who just looks like a woman because his/her species doesn't produce any uglier sexes. Imagine if women bred men to be physiologically like them for a few generations.. the distinctions would reduce, and it would be natural.
>>98517353>>>/trash/cyoar
>>98517338Shemale in this case is just [male] but does not look like the stereotypical male.Custom race is legal and there are millions of them in Star Wars galaxy.
>>98517363okay, well you enjoy your single player build then
>>98517339Obese hermaphroditic reptile-slug rapists were a thing before Disney.
>>98517289I'd say this applies to all fetish shit whether they are technically a troon or not.
>>98517371K, enjoy playing with Luuuke.
Platinum Age-ers, what’s a team-up you’d like your build to have? Could any heroes and villains become each other’s nemesis?
>>98517374How do you un-fetishize Jabba?
>>98517411You can't slug people will inherently be someone's fetish, you would need to make them just a dude
>>98517411This is pure love, as God intended.
>>98517451No fetish shit allowed, it's a pure and pristine Disney product™ now. They will desexualize Darth Talon - at least it aligns with the eunuch party line.
>>98517363It should be marked male then. Other race doesn't quite specify whether it's custom or just picking from existing ones that don't fit the other categories.But still, you avoided the main question. Why? What do you hope to add to the MP by choosing this instead of something that doesn't sound like a fetishbait? How are you planning to use this in writefags and interactions?
>>98517513>It should be marked male then.It is, she_male. Don't want to add pronoun line, it gives me the ick. It's a very harmless addition. >Why? Why do I have to justify fixing an ancient mistake? Having an uglier sex is inherently wrong.
>>98517527But, just as there are entirely ugly species, there are a number of species with an uglier sex, or uglier age group or whatever. So I just had a fixed species. So that life in that galaxy won't be meaningless and self-mutilating.
>AGPthat explains it
>>98517527Your answer is telling. I wanted to give you a benefit of the doubt, but now I have to agree with others and admit you're just pushing your fetish. I believe you should go to /cyoag/. They have their own star wars run right now. It seems like your build would be more at home there.
>>98517585>I want there to be an uglier sex because I had the misfortune of being born as oneGee, I bet the people in your fantasy worlds pay taxes and get their dicks mutilated at birth too.
>>98517596Harahel was the first multiplayer cyoa and it started here, long ago. Wasn't like this. You mindrotted neckbeards just keep ruining everything, don'tcha?
>>98517616That was before this general existed fetishbro
>>98517387POWERHOUSE doesn’t really MESH well with OTHERS. If he HAD to CHOOSE, having a TEAM-UP with the SUN GOD as an AVATAR (but NOT in the DIVINE sense like ACTUAL deity possessed) of LIGHTNING himself would be PRETTY COOL. Except for the WHOLE enslaving the WORLD thing. NOT cool. A different INCOMPATIBILITY would be the ACTUAL Nazi. POWERHOUSE has dealt with a LOT of SCIENCE types who’ve tried to USE his POWER for their MACHINES, but they’ve NEVER been successful because he just SUCKS the power RIGHT back with INTEREST. Also he’s a NAZI which is KIND of a BIG DEAL.For those who POWERHOUSE disagrees with on IDEALOLOGY that’s different than POLITICS, Radiant is a PARTICULAR menace that is ONE of the FEW individuals that can KEEP UP with the LIVING LIGHTNING. Also able to TAKE a few BILLION volts which is ANOTHER rare FEAT few can lay claim too. Just KEEP that GHOST chick away, POWERHOUSE does NOT know any EXORCISTS to DRIVE them out.POWERHOUSE also thinks you SHOULD link BACK to the ORIGINAL post to GET more REPLIES.
>>98516597Ghost looks cute in this picture.
>>98517616You are wrong about both things. Harael wasn't the first multiplayer, and it wasn't here, it was on trash. So you should joing the rest of your kind there instead of infecting a blue board with your blatant fetish shit.
Well, Sw is dead, it was a good effort but someone had to ruin it.
>>98518010stop being so dramatic
>>98504433Another update for Lucius. This time it's a description of the Red Raiders. They're about to enter the story so it seems appropriate to give them a proper identity first.https://rentry.org/zdkorea7
>>98517318As someone who was thinking the same I would say to make a build anyway. Sylen didn't give a timeframe, and the run is active now, it could be dead by the time the new version comes out. If you want to be part of this now is the time.I have a different problem now, my build idea was already made by like 3 people and I don't feel like coming up with something else, so I will just wait for the next run.
>>98518048>my build idea was already made by like 3 peopleFor real? Sounds hard to believe, no offense
>>98518017Sw is 2 autists having a conversation. I mean, good for them if they can keep it going but now that the fetish shit started the rest of the thread will start piling up on it.
>>98518048It’s difficult to tell if its referring to Invulnerability builds, Chaos Magic, or Super Speed. Still hard to believe you couldn’t find some way to spin an existing build, I had a Chaos Magic set up despite it already being done twice over before I settled on a different powerset.
>>98518080the fetish shit just got gatekept
>>98518080every MP is a few autists having a conversation
>>98518071We already have several very similar PCs. 3 indestructible bricks, 3 hyper speedsters, 2 magical chaos girlfailures, 2-3 stealth assassins. Of course it's not 1 to 1, but anons only care about the powers for the most part so even if the flavour is different it doesn't help much.
>>98518107Nah. Some failed MPs are autists just sitting in the same room, being awkwardly quiet and not interacting with one another.
Be honest, how many Platinum Age builds did you make?
>>98518083>Still hard to believe you couldn’t find some way to spin an existing buildThe personality would have been different, and it would't be a total copy. But people here don't care about the backstory and personality as much as the powers.
>>985181340
>>98518135Many of the more active anons actually do care about the character besides the powers, and I'm pretty sure it could result in some fun interactions
>>98518134That I’ve made? 3, with another unfinished build that would’ve made a fourth.Only posted 2 builds though.
>>98518147Rha and that other dude?
>>98518107If only that was the case. It would be enough to have an MP, but most of the time it's just a handful of dumps and like 1 guy attempting to keep the thing afloat. If it really was just 2-3 dedicated autists it would be better.
>>98518034They seem perfect for the job. Are you planning to expand on the second in command to make them a more important NPC or will they stay nameless?
>>98518189I hadn't gotten that far. Honestly, I just keep picturing them as Commander Fox of the Coruscant Guard.Part of me thinks it would be interesting if someone made a non force sensitive build to fill the role, but more likely it will be an npc. Lucius has to talk to someone to coordinate forces after all.
>>98518152That’d be far too easy.
>>98518080There is 3 of us, we are unstoppable.
>>98518338Always two, there are. No more. No less.
>>98516692thanks anon she's pretty fun to draw>>98516727honestly awesome work i had a blast reading through it
>>98514575Good chart, anon. There's a good chance Jackdaw has encountered one or a few of Jackson's alternate identities already, or maybe a more funny possibility is that Jackdaw has had a few close calls with him out of sheer luck or even due to his powers without him ever realizing he was really close to his lead.>>98516727A fun chart to compliment his fun personality and power. I like how he basically trails off due to his ego, and its probably a good way to cover for someone who he might not get to interact with often.>>98515941I didn't have the space to ask this in my build post, but are you cool with Insomnia being a secret plant placed in by the shadow government to monitor the Z-team? I'm totally fine with Bastion knowing about it from the start if that doesn't fit with your idea of the Z-team.>>98516597>>98518772Man, you guys draw pretty quick. Good work, anons. Couldn't link the other one due to (You) limit.
>>98507126I ain't reading all that.
>>98504410>NameMaia Ericson, “All-Mother”, Queen of Thorns>Perspective: Heroic (1 Be 1 Bo)>GoalsGuardian (1 Be)Knowledge (Genius Ma->Mi)Experience (+1 Source Mod)>MotivationsGood-Hearted (1 Mi)Responsibility (Adrenaline: 1 Ma 1 Be)Glory (1 Be)>Power Level: Armageddon (2 Ma 1 S 8 CT 3 RT)>Level Modifiers1 Level Above (3 D 1 S)Super World x2 (1 Be 1 Bo)>Danger: Dark (1 Mi 2 Be)>Danger ModsEvil Corps (3 Be)…>SourcesGenetics (3 Mi/P 1 Bo)Object (2 Mi 2 Ma) (Symbiote)>Source ModsCosmic Earth (-1 D)Ultra Source (-1 Be)Greater Exchange (-2 Ma 1 S 2 D)Life Support (1 Ma)>Common ThreatsThugs FeralsDelusional VetsMutant FloraMad ScientistsSaurusRadicalsHired Crews>Rare ThreatsMutant FreaksSuper PlaguesOrganized Criminals>Super Corporations (Wealthy)Scarlet BiologicsCreation Program (-1 D)>Genetic PowersMinor: Elasticity, Durability, Adaptability, Creativity, ScienceMajor: Nature>Symbiote PowersMinor: Telepathy, EmpathyMajor: Regeneration, BiomancySuper: Senses, Purification, Bio.>Foundation: Meta-Human (2 Bo)>Body Traits (buckle up)Peak GeneticsLongevityGenius (-1 Ma)BeautifulIdeal Metabo., Bod. & Bouncy: softer figure but still not “fat”.Selected Fertility, Partheno.: permanently distended abdomen.Pristine SkinBrilliant Hair: pinkSensual SirenInternal Furnace>Benefits (3 D)Lessened EntropyIn Business BabySuper BodyWealthy (free)Incredible Skill x2No PainSteel MindMerge x3 (Senses+:Tele., Nat., Bio.): Range increase.Merge (Purification+Biomancy): Purifies genetic defects.Merge (Tele.+Empathy): Empathy piggybacks on Telepathy's range.Merge (Biomancy+Tele.): [DATA EXPUNGED] >DrawbacksHypersensitivityAlways Active x3 (Senses, Telepathy, Purification)Hyper SnoozeThe Pain TrainHyperfertilitySymbiote (REGINA)Alter Ego>Symbiote TraitsPerspective: Anti-VillainGoals: Shepherd, Attraction, AscensionMotivations: Self-serving, Tradition, Glory>Positive EventsMentorTraining ArcPower
>>98519114Maia Ericson is sweet, kind, phenomenally intelligent, & prone to teasing. After receiving her second set of powers, she'd get on the radio daily & sing a lullaby for babies’ & small childrens’ nap time, & again at night for all who wanted to sleep. Her perpetually swollen middle after her one & only Parthenogenesis “mistake into miracle” torpedoed much chance of a secret identity, but she didn't mind. She happily accepts the role she's been cast into as a “mother”: soothing hurts, banishing monsters, providing nourishment, knowing everything happening in her area (& orchestrating an unsettling amount of the same), &, yes, bringing forth new life. & if someone needs to be spanked every once in a while… oh well.REGINA is cold, imperious, egotistical, & just as intelligent. It sees their womb as a tool to summon tailor-made servants, & sapient beings as a cross between subjects that don't yet know they're subjects & tools just slightly too useful to destroy (usually). Biological life within its reach ought to be bent to its will; for their own good. Supers receive a certain measure of respect, but still “deserve” to yield to its word.REGINA was a beneficial, if occasionally tiresome, passenger… until the invasion & abduction. Then The Queen of Thorns arose, showing just what their powerset was REALLY capable of… unfortunate for the aliens that their ships were biological. 1 failed CK-Class Restructuring Scenario, 1 terribly frightened daughter, & conspicuously 0 casualties later, & the Symbiote has returned to the back seat. But no one's forgotten what happens when mom REALLY loses her temper.All-Mother is a master of indirect power. Being able to chide would-be criminals & feeding information to cops allows her to stop many crimes before they start. Her constant Purification aura creates a sanctuary in which even genetic disorders are removed from those entering it; even mutant monsters are cured or turned into something hardly monstrous. (2/3...)
>>98519114clear false flag by the star whores
>>98519127>Positive EventsMentorTraining ArcPower UpUnlock Potential>Negative EventsTragic DeathFrom SpaceAbductedPossessionhttps://rentry.org/MCYOAGSupermom26 (WIP)Not 100% on things like Benefits but definitely close enough to post. Kinda bummed some charts got out before I managed to post. Also it's fucking hard to find preg art that's neither "small" nor fucking gross.
>>98519128Dont put this hate on us. All fetish builds are best ignored.
>>98519128If it was any other fetish I would say you're right. But this is just pregfag, he's back.
I saw some of the benefits and knew pregfag would be on it like a fly.
>>98519165This is a bit of a strange one by sylen standards. Instead of having the nsfw stuff all on a separate page at the end they are sprinkled all over the cyoa, and yet it's still sfw. Like he wanted to make it nsfw but held back at the last moment.
>>98519159>Also it's fucking hard to find preg art that's neither "small" nor fucking gross.It's not pregfag.
>>98519177There is some plausible deniability for some of the horniness when it comes to capeshit so I think he just thought he could get away with somethings because they're also present in some of the comics.
>>98519114How does she have Creativity and Science as Minor powers? You can only take one, and you need Knowledge to take it as though it were a Minor.
Can people actually summarize their grab bag of powers in a way that is actually readable. Going through builds is a fucking drag trying to understand what is actually going on.
>>98519201My bad, realized I missed her having Knowledge. Still, your Genius can only be defined by a single power in that section.
>>98519206What problem do you have with the builds? What's so difficult to understand for you? The cyoa is a mess to build for but the builds are pretty easy to read, so I don't see the problem.
>>98519207I guess I misinterpreted the wording, I thought it meant one had to be dominant but that you COULD still take more for... a lesser boost I guess? Would be Creativity. >>98519159>>98519182Not him but he has good taste.Pregnancy is... powerful. If you can just look past coombrain, it's one of the most remarkable things about the human condition. It's also the very peak of the feminine, the ONE thing men can't do. I think it's fun to contrast the intimate human version with the detached version social insects engage in. I don't need or want to put the gross parts into much focus to do that.
>>98519224Can you tell me in your own words without looking at someones build what the cape actually does?There is very little from what ive read of them that is concise, you have to jump between different tiers, how different powers interact (if they do), benefits such as enhanced body, and then drawbacks.
>>98504433>Departure (Lucius Varro, Ur'Drach)https://rentry.org/z9s9dntfShort interaction between Ur'Drach and Lucius as they're leaving the temple. Just trying to get a feel for their dynamic since I wasn't able to in my initial writing.
>>98519252NTA but from just reading out of a line up, generally yeah I can. Specific power interactions maybe not since I don't know why people decided to choose certain options if they didn't outright say so, but I can draw some basic conclusions. Some options I do gloss over because its lower importance. Like Bastion's powerset is straightforward brusier with random misc powers like Aquatic and Elasticity, but I'd only really care to notice Plane Carrier and Indestructible and its accompanied Material Weakness instead of Hyper Snooze. Similarly, Witchbane is a very Chaos Magic focused build with a lot of Dimensional powers but I'd focus a lot more on her drawbacks like Chaos Conduit instead of Contortionist as its less important.I have read over the CYOA multiple times though so I generally know the power ranges, really only the Elemental ones I'd have to actually go back and check because they aren't as simple scaling as some of the others, and a handful of Dimensional ones for similar reasons. Other than that it's not too much of a problem.Except for Golden Sorceress she's got way too much going on. There's like 6 Supers she's got if you include her Hyper, and getting more than 3 from any choices will make you explode. Could really do with slimming it down, I think she can easily do with half the amount without sacrificing too much, cause Chaos magic provides basically the entire Mind/Dimension list on its own.
>>98519297>maybe not since I don't know why people decided to choose certain options if they didn't outright say soWhich is what I'd like anons to do. >but I can draw some basic conclusionsI can guess sure, but its just guesses.>Like Bastion's powerset I have a mental note of him as a walking tank. Essentially a captain america type that is just harder to hurt.>Witchbane is a very Chaos Magic focused build with a lot of Dimensional powers Chaos magic in particular doesn't really mean anything by itself. If you had twenty people describe what someone could do with it I think you'd end up with twenty different answers.>and getting more than 3 from any choices will make you explodeI missed this line in the CYOA what page is it on? I do remember reading a line about 3 supers but didnt see the consequences.
>>98519321>I missed this line in the CYOA what page is it on? I do remember reading a line about 3 supers but didnt see the consequences.Nta. Literally the first page. You can only have 7 minor, 4 major, 3 super. The power section then specifies that Hyper counts as super but is limited to 1, so if you have one hyper you can only have 2 more supers.
>>98519297About Sorceress her choices of source modifiers and canon events make it possible to go over the power choice limit
>>98519321I feel like most powers and combinations are pretty straightforward and speak for themselves, I just can't guess on if the anon had an even more advanced way to try and game them beyond what I can guess in like a minute after reading the build, like using Hyper Nature to stack some crazy power combos for your plants. Also I consider any build with Hyper Chaos magic a Chaos Magic build. It literally JUST the dimensional/mind sections with some prep time and risks.>I missed this line in the CYOA what page is it on? I do remember reading a line about 3 supers but didnt see the consequences.Number 7 on the Rules in the first page.
>>98519360That doesn't really mean anything when you can't go over the limits no matter what you do.
>>98519360what, how?
>>98519369Nta but her options explicitly say that powers obtained from her Object don't count towards her maximum amount of powers
>>98519375Pick the Object line of Canon Events, have that Object alone be your only power source.
>>98519383She'd still be one over even if that's the case right? Hyper is the same thing as Super in terms of choice limits, it's just a restriction so you can only take one busted power. Unless it retroactively applies to every option you take and not just the free added ones from the questline, which is not how I think its intended to work.
>>98519297>There's like 6 Supers she's got if you include her Hyper,>>98519360>>98519369>>98519375>>98519383Nta, but even after all that she is still 1 super power over the limit. Life support takes away the Major power limit (Which she doesn't even use since she has only 3), while the Celestial relic also gives more major powers and super powers. But, the relic specifically gives Corruption and Purification OR a super of your choice, not both. She has 3 more supers and 1 hyper, since hyper counts as super that's 1 over limit, making her build illegal. I looked at other parts of her build but she should have no other things that raise the limit even more.
Speaking of builds that have rule breaks doesn't Paragon have glass cannon and absorption?
>>98519407The relic cannot be your Life support source. It's specifically a separate source. Which I guess it means technically she has 2 different object power sources.>>98519397The object from that line is actually pretty limited. It can give a max of 1 minor, 1 major, and 2 supers, or just 1 if you want to pick it. It can't be your only power source.
>>98519397>>98519442Object is in fact the way to go over the limit, but not like that.
>>98519397Yeah that was the idea.>>98519407This is how I understood it, yeah, only the extra ones from the questline.>>98519410I listed Darkness on Super by mistake, it should only be on Minor, my bad!I'll edit the rentry when I'm free.
>>98519435Nah that's only Absorption at Major. He's got it at Hyper which does an entirely different thing, so he qualifies.
>>98519435Radiant has 1 too many minor powers. He has 8 when the limit is 7.
>>98519435Absorption Major makes you immune kinetic energy (to a degree), Absorption Hyper is power stealing, which doesn't really affect durability (by itself anyway). Most powers logically do include lower levels, despite what the cyoa says, but some clearly don't. Like Planar, Minor is Spiderman's wall crawling, Major is wireless punches, and hyper is dimentional gate.
>>98504415My god, this CYOA is so bad
>>98519617that's the prevailing opinion
>>98516827Updated to include Paragon and Sorceress.
>>98519456I am waiting for next thread to repost. I had another issue with level modifiers and changed out aquatic for wind to better represent super lungs.If you see any other issues happy to fix them, I did struggle abit with keeping track of everything.
>>98519244Bro nobody wants pregnancy here*. That shit literally rewrites your brain. It grosses me out the whole 'oh you'll change your mind when you have kids of your own' thing and everyone pressuring them to have kids.Freaky ahh parasite shit man, aint for me. Just have the fun part without the consequences and everyone can be happy.*Pregfag not included.
>>98519244>It's also the very peak of the feminine, the ONE thing men can't do.And it's the same retard as the other build. Why am I not surprised.
Choujin X MP when?
Is there a special police force in this universe to handle the super villains or just rely on superheroes?
>>98519738>>98519746Pregnancy is the past, the present, and the future, retard. If it freaks you out that bad just admit that you'd rather die out.>ahhActually, you might as well just kill yourself now.
>>98519788Anon, I accept prengnancy as a part of life. But I don't venerate it as a god, nor make it a fetish. It has a place in the world, and that place isn't here.
>>98519788If you willingly bring a child into this world you are the worst sort of narcissist who would force someone to suffer 80+ years of this shit just so you can leave a legacy or whatever.
>>98519772Not necessarily a special police but there are soldiers with superpowers as part of the military and glowie supers, we even have a build of one.
My build for isekai KTH is done, but I need to sleep so I will not post it, I will fuck something up if I do.
>>98519738Imagine being this mentally raped
>>98519801Euphoric take. What's the alternative, faggot? It's not about YOU. It's about your ancestors that all made it this far before you, and the hope for a better future, which won't happen without new hands to MAKE it happen. Yeah, things suck, but a lower birth rate will only make it suck harder, longer. Don't be a fag.
>>98504410>https://rentry.org/mistersuitThe Suit has actually already taken over New York in every way that really matters. He has control over the Mayors office, the courts, the newspapers, and major holdings in every corporation that he doesn't own outright but recently he has hit the radar of the local deliquent group and a number of online armchair investigators. Through his anonymous control of a number of cape-corps and significant investment into federal politics he even has more than a few 'heroes' working in his interests completely unknowingly. He intends on bringing down Z-Team before they do any more harm to his organisation through their wanton destruction and complete baffoonery.
>>98519932Where the fuck is my foxgirl vtuber mascot?!
>>98519994Why bother thirsting for a vtuber when the heroes are wearing skintight sheer spandex and getting holes cut into it every other day?
>>98519831same, but maybe I'll post it after overview in a few hours
>>98520015That doesn't answer my question, mr. black, and also none of the girl heroes right now are wearing spandex.
>>98519994You need to subscribe to foxplay with a platinum account for that. If you'd like to revise your account settings call the hotline, I don't have time for such mediocre problems.
I wonder if it's worth it to go through that mess and make a fox girl that eats your liver.
>>98520108wrong thread?
>>98520122Nah, for platinum age due to this >>98519994
>>98520073Ghost ... Might be? We'll never know really.
>>98519114This is NOT pregfag. Its someone new and even worse apparently. Is this the price of being alive?
weekend is overwe return to sleep
>>98519788Artificial wombs could theoretically take care of it in the future.
>>98519001>are you cool with Insomnia being a secret plant placed in by the shadow governmentSounds good, I say go for it anon. I think it's more interesting if Nikolai doesn't know Jackson specifically is the plant. He just knows there's bound to be at least one mole judging from experience, since the group is full of dangerous fuck up capes that the powers that be would obviously have an interest in keeping an eye on.
>>98519801>t. 14yo who just got his Xbox taken away
>>98519801I can't fault that logic beyond the knowledge that childhood is wonderful. Your list of wrongs might be the scrape on a knee as a child learns to ride a bike, or a bruise they get from learning how to jump to the water. We feel like we are being tortured because every aspect of us is brought to question and deemed evil, vile, vulgar, uncouth, unacceptable and shameful.The issue is not therefore in us, but in the systems around us, and people subjecting themselves to those systems- keeping them in place.
>>98517959>it was on trashIt was moved there after being spammed on /tg/
>>98519738>That shit literally rewrites your brain.For a good reason. If you were a mind reader, you'd wish to rewrite women's brains in a non-hostile manner, as an act of public service cleaning. Women are perverts, anon.
>>98520547Industrial farming and systematic breeding (for profit/control) has reduced the nutrient value of all foods dramatically. Potatoes and tomatoes have lost around 50% of their nutrient value within a century.Humanity would be even more demented and ugly if it were to use those for any other reason than surviving a cataclysm. Even then, bagbabies might want to outcompete the wombborn and are likely to sabotage human fertility just to have more favor for bags.
>>98521369It couldn't even be posted on tg. It's always been nsfw. It started on trash, briefly invaded after it already became a problem there, and was kicked out again. They were already kicked out of trash for spamming the cyoa thread there.
>>98521769A ton of nsfw was posted on /tg/ as an edited intro pic + link to the nsfw content. pdfs were allowed and they had a lot of ecchi to hentai content. Lavender cyoas would have been amazing for multiplayer...
>>98521788It doesn't change the fact that it started on trash. And no, lavender is not good for multiplayer. You are in the wrong place if you want that kind of shit.
>>98521842>You are in the wrong place if you want that kind of shit.>4chan is neckbeard puritanism>Reddit will ban you for everything>Discord will ban you for everything>Mainstream sites are botted to an unusable >Real people mirror internet sites and caricatures because they're all cowardsGuess humans truly do want to kill themselves.
>>98504410>>98517387I’d rather have conversations on more fun discussions, and also I’m disappointed in both the anon who posted this prompt for not linking and the other anons who looked over it, so here’s a boost for our heroes and villains to chew on:>Platinum Age-ers, what’s a team-up you’d like your build to have? Could any heroes and villains become each other’s nemesis?
>>98521911Why yes, people do tend to form groups based on common interests. Your interests aren't welcome here, you have been told where they are accepted, and yet you keep sticking around trying to make others feel bad for not liking the same shit as you. It will not work, so the only reasons you could have for doing that are mental illness or the desire to ruin the fun of anyone who doesn't aggree with you.
does the trash general have multiplayers
>>98521975>Your interests aren't welcome hereI don't know. Pretty much 90% of CYOAs involve what I like. The people who hate it seem to never make their own CYOAs, but are very vocal about hating what others do and like. I find that.. suspicious. Almost damning evidence of subhumanism.
>>98522001Nobody is interested in your gay fetish, retard. Just fuck off.
>>98522015A ton of people are interested in it, it just seems to irk some lesser beings a ton. No wonder this general is dead. It happens to all the places that treat my harmless desires that way.
>>98522025>A ton of people are interested in itBaldur's Gate 3 and Cyberpunk 2077 had genital sliders. Despite screeching, people seemed to enjoy the feature. The games sold millions and became big hits.The vast majority of CYOA enable playing as a hot girl or even customizing the body. They are popular on all CYOA sites, but for some reason, multiplayer tends to attract the harpies who hate seeing others have fun. It's like the black magic spam that killed the cyoag...
He's samefagging support now. That looks familiar...
>>98522042>Baldur's Gate 3 and Cyberpunk 2077 had genital sliders. Despite screeching, people seemed to enjoy the feature.As things to make fun of, yes.>The games sold millions and became big hits.Something that had nothing to do with the dick slider. It's because they are either good games, or overhyped garbage.>The vast majority of CYOA enable playing as a hot girl or even customizing the body.The problem comes when you push your fetish shit onto others. Nobody complains about girl characters.
>>98522025>>98522042this nigga flashes birdwatchers in the park because birdwatchers probably masturbate sometimes
>>98507126>>98507475>Be me>Making destructive tier>See Armageddon>ArmageddonIs this how Punisherkeks and Spiderfags feel?
>>98504410>NameThe Idolatress>perspectiveanti-villainous>super goalsshepherd, attraction, ascension(Delusional Veteran)>MotivationsTragedy, Glory, Responsibility(Adrenaline)>Power LevelsArmageddon>Level modifiesOne level above, Super world x 2>Your sourceGenetic>Source modifiersCosmic Earth, Greater exchange>Common threatsthugs, ferals, saurus, mongrels, mutant flora, cryptids, cultists, crazed scientists>rare threatsfay creations, failed experiments, mutant freaks>super corporationsX-tralicious, scarlet biologics, team effort, creation program, merchandise, mature merch>Minorstrength, durability, speed, adaptability, cloning, precognition>Major powergenius, nullification, biomancy>SuperEmpathy, Science>HyperNature>FoundationAlien physiology>Body traitsLongevity, Beautiful, Genius, Parhtenogenesis, Internal furnace, bodacious and bouncy, sensual siren>Benefits Lessened entropy, Hidden layer, in business baby, Filthy rich(free), Magnet of attraction, Fanatical followers, Escape artist, bullet time, Incredible skill(genetics), star power(genetics), flavor boost(empathy euphoria focus), Merge(Science+biomancy analysis speed boost), super body, fabulous executionDrawbacks:Super metabolism, relaxed klutz, super scrutiny, Always Active x3(empathy, science, pre-cognition), hyperfertility>cannon eventsMentor(biology), Unlock potential, Power up x3, training arc, public perception, grand failure, humiliated, from space, abducted, power bleedhttps://rentry.org/27a5u28kfinally finished writing it, trying to shove in all the canon events and stuff in the backstory took longer than expected. But finally finished up the goofy traumatized bug hivemind, they will steal all your genes and will try to fix you even if you try to resist. All will be forced to be happy.
>>98516727Nice chart! Mentioning Radiant and Bastion get confused all the time is pretty funny since Powerhouse says Bastion tossed him into space while Jackdaw's chart said Radiant did (unless they both did on separate occasions?).I'm working on a piece right now where Powerhouse is robbing a bank, and Mako and Insomnia try to stop him (and fail cause he's way above their level and counters both of them, they barely manage to get the hostages out). Just wanted to ask how lethal Powerhouse usually is - does he lightning dash through people and dust them after turning their powers off, or turn off their nervous systems as soon as he sees them? Or does he fight with 'kid gloves' against less durable opponents (doesn't see the point in fighting weaker enemies and just does his mission, doesn't want to get tossed into another dimension again as retribution, etc)? >>98517387>>98521950For Mako, so far I like Insomnia as a teamup the best - she can see in the dark so she's one of the least affected by his powers, and he seems like a really good straight man that can act as a wrangler for her. I could also see some interactions with Ghost later since she's also been ostracized by her power, especially once Mako gets more serious about finding more out about her parents.I like the idea of her 'rival' being Jackdaw - she outclasses him to an obscene degree and is basically untouchable, but he always manages to finish his job and get away by tricking her.
>>98522244I will bite the bullet. I will not take the cowardly route and pump up his power level.
>>98522244I made a Destructive tier and I’m pretty much fine anon, just stop overthinking power levels and make a build >>98522260Call me a xenophile because I wanna FUCK that Tyranid
>>98512829Im gonna be honest Im not feeling Ghost I don't think they can really function as part of the MP as funny as being invisible and impermeable is.So don't add them to the list and I'll work on a new thing when I get back from doctor
>>98522260I'm seeing a... very interesting relationship emerging between Eden here and Maia. Rivalry perhaps? Maybe a team up during an Abduction?>>98519114I've scaled back the pregnancy stuff in the build's Rentry. Reception was rockier than I expected, if any build Anons want to NOT interact, let me know. I don't intend to gross people out, but I don't want to give up on the concept entirely either.
>>98504410>Name: Kirill Dragunov>Hero Alias: Kalchey>Perspective: Heroic>Goals: Guardian>Motivations: Good Hearted, Adrenaline, Responsibility (Good Hearted) (+2 Minor, +1 Major)>Power Level: Destructive (+1 Major, +1 Minor)Common TreatsDelusional Veterans, Cultists, Cryptids, Crazed Scientists>Rare ThreatsOrganized Criminals>Source of Power: Mutation>Your Source: Alteration (+1 Major Physical, +2 Minor)>Source Modifier: Greater Exchange (-2 Minor, +1 Major)>Major:RegenerationHemokinesisOsteokinesisWillpower>Minor:DurabilityStrength2x Natural Weapon: Skin becomes sharp bone-scales>Foundation:Meta-human>Body Traits:LongevityEnhanced Durability>Peak Genetics<Enhanced StrengthRecoveryTallHandsomeInternal Furnace>Benefits:Low Entropy: RegenerationMartial ArtistFabulous ExecutionBeacon of HopeNo Pain>Drawbacks: Always On: Regeneration, Rival (Please, someone choose me over the other guys with Rivals, jk), Barren, Poor Fucker, The Super life>Canon Events: Glorious Entry, Last Stand, Grand Failure, Tragic Death1/3
>>98522443Kirill was born a mutant, although one of lackluster powers and prowess. Born of a poor family, he found a way to make money and help his family in the military, where he stood for quite a few years, until World War I (or its equivalent, dunno if the setting is earth or not) started. There, Kirill was enlisted to a secret project to make a Super Soldier. Amidst a myriad of failures, Kirill was one of the few that survived the transformation without gruesome side effects. The process of becoming a super soldier enhanced his mutant super powers, growing from a slightly rougher skin, denser bones, and quickly scarring and coagulation of his wounds, to the ability to manipulate his own blood and bones, growing laminated-bone scales throughout his body, like an armor, and great regeneration, besides the expected effects of the super soldier transformation, great durability and strength, although his speed was relatively lackluster compared to other few successful subjects.Kirill passed through and survived many wars, by the time he formally abandoned any governamental ties, he was well into a half century old, from there on he took on the Hero Alias Kalchey, and dedicated his life to help and rescue fellow survivors of Super Soldier experiments throughout the world, or merely trauma-ridden capes like him (Delusional Veterans), while dealing and bringing to light shady cults, which may or not have ties with his main focus of helping fellow Super Soldiers (Cultists), and of course, stopping Mad Scientists trying to repeat the mistakes the governments made in the past, and still repeat to this day (Crazed Scientists).He is a brash individual with a strong honor code and morals, so he made many enemies in the mafia and organized crime rings, busting their operations, their head honchos, and anyone he could grab in the meantime (Organized Criminals)2/3
>>98522452Kirill, both as a super, and especially as a person, is a righteous individual who believes in hard work and that people can change, having a strict no kill rule, as he is no executioner, no more, leaving the right to decide the destiny of someone to both the authories, and to the people should the legal powers fail them. While he could make a fortune, he took the path of a down to earth hero who prowls from one cheap habitation to another, often times taking overcrowded apartments with many other tenants for a few weeks before vanishing under a new name and identity, as the way he fights crime makes it near impossible for him to remain anonymous. He tries to retire from Super Hero life, but it always calls back to him, and he answer the call always. He has been trying to retire for nearly four decades now, all without success.As a fighter, Kirill uses martial arts and military training, and can use his bones to make boxing gloves on his hands, and then unleash devastating punches that end in explosions of literal blood to knock foes down, or make thrusters on the sides of the glove for literal blood jets to greatly enhance the impact of his blows. He also tends to use them on his feet for devastating martial maneveurs and in similar vein to the blood jets he uses on his hands. Against harder foes, he transform his hands and feet into powerful blades, and use his own blood to greatly extend their reach or make temporarily weapons to catch his foe unexpected. His trump card is to make a literal armor of bone-scales around his legs and upper body, comboing his physical prowess with the blood manipulation. In case it is not clear, he can only manipualte his blood, which he hytper generates via regeneration. While not liking it, he can make conventional weaponry out of his bones such as knives and swords, but he prefers to punch evil-doers on the face.3/3
what's the appeal of capes?
>>98522482Just about to post something about thisanons have brain damage, I fucking hate their shitty tastes
>>98522482It's expected for there to be a huge cast of characters and it's easy to write different types of stories about them. This particular cyoa does not inspire me at all, however.
>>98522482flashy characters with flashy powers and low stakes
>>98522277Understandable anon. I was halfway through a writefag but I can change things up since she hadn't shown up yet. Maybe even include whatever build you make instead. Good luck at the doctor
>>98522552Has the memory gone? Are you feeling numb?
>>98522329Eden thinks weird so rivaling them would be a strange arrangement. Like if it a casual rivalry they will just consider you a friend. But if it's actually serious and their important plans get significantly hindered repeatedly they might get a bit obsessed. Like it goes from a scale where they try all sorts of goofy convoluted plans to steal your genes like some cartoon villains. To full on horror if they actually despise you, where they will attempt to replace or assimilate all your acquacquaintances and warp your flesh and mind until you are turned into a friend.Abduction will be quite a hard moment as it's their great failure moment. Pretty much the moment when their ideology of pacifism and respecting individuals free will shatters. As they tried to peacefully resolve it with the aliens and it went really badly. So they are going to be pretty mentally unstable. They were practically suppressing their high tier powers due to moral reasons. So an escape from an abduction would probably be a moment where they snap and go full bioweapon unleashing their powers at full throttle for the first time. They will probably go way overboard, full body horror, mindfuckery as revenge against the aliens for all the torture they committed, but afterwards they will probably feel really guilty from doing it.
>>98504415>>98498275>Kalchey:"Ah, comrade Nikolai. Would you care for a Borsch late tonight? I would love to treat you to a better dish, but as you can see, my funds are running low lately. How are the things going? You know, I don't think managing a Z team is bad. Back in the day, even them would be considered quite manageable. Our folk back then had no rules, and you know as the construction workers say: Rules are written in blood.">>98504896"Didn't know Merfolk came in shark shapes. On closer inspection, your tail-fin is horizontal, so it would not be better to call you an Oreca, young lady? How I know this? Lets say I had a bad run in with sharks on Siberia. Well, as you are one of Bastion's kids, you must be good enough on the inside. Listen to what he says, and pay attention to his nagging. You can find a good advice from him here and there.">>98507126"Not my problem to pry on alien deities stuff. As far as I am concerned, you are like a goddess or something of that degree, same goes for Nikolai... as long as you are good you are good, kiddo. Even a grizzly old fox like me have no good advice for beings on the level that you are.">>98507475"It seems time was kinder to you than it was to me. He. Good to see you are in good shape. That event was a shit show. Take this from a tired old man, and I can call you that, I am at least fifty. Wait, fifty? What years is it again? Well, it does not matter. Take this advice from an old man: things get bad, things get ugly, but people like us are meant to always go forward, and things can always get worse. By the time I was a mature man, the world leaders said the last war was a war meant to end all wars, and then there was ANOTHER one. Know that the stigma you face will pass, and that you did nothing wrong. The hart is what matters, and you tried to do good despite everything being stacked against you."Part 1/?
>>98522244Don't worry about it; power levels are irrelevant in comics anyway.We all know the Karate Man can beat Infinite Sun-Puncher Man as long as the story is taking place in his comic.
>>98504415>>98522723>>98510021"This guy looks straight from the post war world. I remember when folk like him were more common. Well, I doubt he ever heard of me, I was never that famous, but it is a good thing that names like Radiant are famous, so people keep hope and faith in their hearts, and children have good role models to inspire them.">>98511218"Hm. They are recruiting them young it seems. Jests aside, Speedsters are always a troublesome sort. No offenses to you, kid. Speed equals force, and let me tell you: no matter how light you are right now, once start speeding up, you will hit harder than Dorothy after she crushed that poor sod under her. I am not elaborating. Either way, you are young, and young people make mistakes, like joining the army. Just be sure to survive your mistakes, and the weight they will bring and you will be good. Be like the light, the first to arrive, last to leave, and bringing warmth and joy to the hearts of people.">>98522443"That's a handsome fella alright. I wonder who he truly is?"Time to tackle the Villains I guess.
>>98517387Currently working on a writefag about how Ra ended up imprisoned as per his background / canon events, and I have Bastion as the one who defeated him, so I suppose Bastion is Ra's nemesis?
New thread?
>>98522267Powerhouse doesn’t really use his powers to the fullest. He thinks being a HUGE hulking FIGURE of POWER is PRETTY SICK. When he uses Lightning, it’s mainly in the metaphysical form. Its commonly used alongside his Inner Power, as he amps up and replicates basic abilities like Natural Weapon to form a Lightning blade with it, or making a big electricity fist with Elasticity, or simply increasing natural attributes like greater strength or durability reflexively if he feels like . He's not purposefully holding back, he just doesn't ever pull forth that much power to completely evaporate someone because there's not a reason to. Usually, he starts ramping up if he's not getting results as he draws more from is inner power. There will still be a huge shock on contact, but it's not as used offensively as you'd think from the Lightning guy. He's more a slugger type.He's all about using your power to live as you want, but wanton killing is different than simply being selfish. That's just being a complete psychopath. He's also not very creative, as a part of being unstoppable means he's never had to be. It doesn't mean he's dumb though, maybe a little tunnel-visioned or single minded. He's pretty confident against any opponent, as very few forces can deter him, like high tier Dimensional powers or extremely high temperature ranges, and even if he gets trapped by any means he doesn't treat it as anything but a minor detour since he'll adapt to it in time or escape.For Nullification, I kind of took it just because I had a Major left and didn't want to be left shit out of luck if he had to run into another Nullification user. It'd only ever come into play against another Nullification user so Powerhouse can slug it out while dragging someone else to his level. If you want to include it, you can flavor it as repeated contacts causing increasing numbness with shocks that makes it harder to access powers, but it'd be passive and not intentional on his part.
>>98522443>>98522723>>98522771Very nice anon, I can't link all the posts but just wanted you to know I like him already
>>98504410>>98504415>Kalchey Relationship Chart:https://rentry.org/kmhhny8h4chan was being mean to me, so I had to put it all on a rentry. >>98522873Thanks anon.
>>98522772Very cool. I think nemesis-ship should probably be a mutual thing but it’d be funny if it’s one-sided, not sure what Bastion-anon will thinkPersonally I’m waiting for a crime boss villain to be a good Locust-Man nemesis but the Suit seems a bit too high concept
>>98522912Weird how there's a good chance freaks like Sorceress and Paragon are older than him and yet he truly does speak like an experienced elder. I guess it's the difference between living for real and spending all that time basically isolated from the world in different ways.
>>98522986"Babushka would have my skin on a rack if I grew to be an unwise man."
>>98522914Not sure if it fits but I was going to have Jackdaw be a member of The Suits organisation since he is missing a face for it. No issues if he doesn't fit though, I'm still trying to get a handle on the character and if I want to lean more into the henchman for hire aspect.
>>98522697Hmm. It's an interesting comparison in powers and contrast in mindset, for sure. Maia would probably take exception to the secrecy and dismissive inner attitude towards humanity, while REGINA still believes all organic life belongs under HER will, and even she probably holds more sanctity for life (now at least) that the independent alien. Neither has a real means to mind control the other, and one's not even inclined to show up in person. What'd actually go down is probably a dissapointed push for greater transparency on one end and catty sniping on the other.Gentle reminder that Humiliated is Bleak only, and Always Active isn't compatible with Minor Powers. What's the timeline on your end? About how many years ago did Sprig get Abducted?
>>98523131I like Jackdaw, I just don’t really see him having particular distaste for specific heroes. Locust Man could face him eventually though. >random lore thoughtLocust Man doesn’t really quip as much as he does WWE promos on villains as he fights. More “witty comeback” and shittalk than traditional quips, he’s trying to put on a good show
>>98522912"On the one hand, its flattering to have your work recognized, all too often in this city all the fame, all the headlines go to the idiots who won the genetic lottery. On the other hand comrade dick puncher is not someone I want paying more attention to me than is necessary. I remember the first time we tussled in Moscow he fought practically barehanded, that was a good biff. I snapped his rotor cuff clean as you like, not that it lasted long mind you. But then last time I saw the red menace he was flipping all over the joint making a real mess of things with his blood, and covered in creepy bone armor. Still, I've seen him down at the local a few times and he seems an alright sort, buys beers for some of my mates who signed up when they were younger."Physicals: C+ Lethality: E-
>>98523175That's true, he doesn't have an strong emotional response to most capes whether hero or villain. He only would have professional rivalries or would maybe elevate his attitude to annoyance or disgruntlement if he routinely encountered and was forced to withdraw from someone he couldn't work around.Someone like Bastion or Radiant where once they are on the scene, unless he was ready and waiting for them their is no possible way to win the fight so he has to make a run for it. >>98522267I can see Mako as a good pairing. She seems susceptible to his shenanigan's but has the edge on him in a straight up fight. His contortionist+martial arts+enhanced body also gives enough leeway for them to fight at least briefly without it being an immediate game over.
>>98504410Okay, as far as I'm aware this is the first action writefag for Platinum Age!Sunset (feat. Bastion & Ra): - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gLQOhTjqGRkl_EC6jsNYzSZTXBv_MGmOsJ8UEJSkDR0/edit?pli=1&tab=t.0Rentry version: - https://rentry.org/aistaztxA prequel of sorts, explaining how Ra was originally imprisoned as per his canon events.Any and all feedback very welcome!
>>98504415https://rentry.co/9ibpb89sThe Delinquent Sukeban has arrived to Z Team, surely they can reform her and they won't all be terrible influences on eachother.I'm tired.
>>98504410Also, for the convenience of record keeping I've done Rentry versions of The Indivisible Man & Ra.Indivisible Man: - https://rentry.org/hxvue6fdRa: - https://rentry.org/g8nip3hv
>Every single MP idea I was interested in went nowhere>The only option I had no interest in won againEvery timeLast time complaining, I'm just going to read some other stuff instead
>>98523386but there are two mps at the momentwhich one are you talking about?
>>98523386Are you talking about KTH? Because that didn't even start yet, I'm pretty sure anons are waiting for a new thread to be made to post the cyoa in.
>>98523350I can see Locust-Man having a fun dynamic with her if they ever meet. They’re both melee combatants with vastly different styles, powers and attitudes, but they’re both young and hot-headed. David would probably try to keep her rage in check lol
>>98504433>>98509264>>98519289before someone makes a new thread I figured I should change these link names to be more in line with what's already been postedhttps://rentry.org/LuciusVarrohttps://rentry.org/FirstHoursPt1https://rentry.org/FirstHoursPt4
>>98523350Am I crazy or would this character be better at a lower strength level. Something about a martial artist prodigy just falls apart when they can throw cars, shrug off bullets, and move at the speed of sound. Kungfu is meaningless with her power set.
>>98523467>Pt4Badboy is going rogue immediately. He has practically fallen to the dark side already.
Someone at my workplace asked why everyone wears jeans to work or suits to events; I responded with something like “well whites kind of invented everything, and everyone kind of copies them so…”, and now I’m in BIG shit because she was black and then she blurted out “but what about Africa?? HUH???” and I mentioned something about the wheel and then she left the room. Meeting with the boss tomorrow.
>>98523503The republic isn't the same as the light side.Besides he's not exactly on great terms with them after they abandoned the Outer Rim during the war.
>>98523506rip bozo
>>98523506K
>>98523519Republics got nothing to do with being impulsive, craving power, ignoring restraint out of the desire to "do good". When Anakin murdered all those tuskans he didn't set out to do so. He set out to get his mom. This guy is completely "my way or the highway" thinking he is the only one who cares about anything and only he has the guts to do "what is needed" Dude is a classic case of set up for the path to hell is paved with good Intentions.
>>98523506At the time the first white man set foot on sub-Saharan Africa, most of the natives understood and could use fire. A few of them could actually make fire, but the rest were really good at catching it from wildfires and what not. But the wheel was completely foreign to all the black tribes. Imagine that, some black people left Africa, turned white. Mastered the flame, figured out that round things roll which is far easier than carrying them, developed sailing, grew curious and board of fighting with each other, and set out to concur the unknown world... run into black people, who live the same existence that their ancestors lived... and said ..... wake the fuck up!!! ROLL, BITCH. ROLLLL!!!
>>>/pol/
>>98523581Well that was the main point of tension I was getting at. I'm just surprised you're so adamant that he's a power hungry dark sider on the path to hell because he used a technicality to get troops into position to act faster than the bureaucracy would have allowed.
>>98523663I'm not adamant. I don't have a horse in this race, just giving my take on the story as it develops.
I guess I'm the only person who made a Lethal character
>>98523699Don't worry, Jackdaw is there if you need someone to beat up if you want to feel better about yourself.
>>98523699I wish we all agreed on a power PL cap or something. W/E its comic heroes we can all be jobbed out at any moment
>>98523720It seems easier to write a lot of the other characters in battle. Despite being of a lower power level Jackdaw has basically Path to Victory lite in all but name
>>98523699Which one's yours?
>>98523770I think it actually makes him versatile. He can be as good or bad as you want him to be. He can job, hold his own, or even win and each of them make sense.
>>98523721>W/E its comic heroes we can all be jobbed out at any momentExcept for the Sinister Sovereign of Sparks, Lord of Lightning, the Thunderous Tyrant himself: POWERHOUSE!Unless it's against TELEKINESIS, in which case POWERHOUSE is slightly FUCKED because ESP tends to trump EMF, but so FAR no one's MIND is as (physically) STRONG as HIS OWN. Nor ANYONE else's BODY but that MAKES a lot of SENSE considering the BRAIN is a MUSCLE so it's just FOLLOWING the REST of them. Much LIKE how POWERHOUSE sets an EXAMPLE in the art of ASS KICKING.
Let me know if I missed something.>Full CYOAhttps://imgchest.com/p/9p4nzrxww4n>Setting Options https://rentry.org/2x7e8ciz>HeroicIndivisible Man / Achilles Palterhttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1786/57/1786570068492.jpghttps://rentry.org/hxvue6fdRadiant / R.M. Ashfordhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98510021/https://rentry.org/sf8qeq25Locust-Man / David Espósitohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98514039/https://rentry.co/locustmanAll-Mother / Maia Ericson / Queen of Thorns / REGINAhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98519114/https://rentry.org/MCYOAGSupermom26Kalchey / Kirill Dragunovhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98522443/>Anti-HeroicThe Professor / Jonathanhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98493782/https://rentry.org/q67pcv7r>Anti-VilliainousWitchbane / Sophiahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98500467/The Idolatress / Eden Johnsonhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98522260/https://rentry.org/27a5u28k>VillainousThe Mad Hatterhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98502596/Ra / Arthur Cavendishhttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1786/67/1786677435808.jpghttps://rentry.org/g8nip3hvWolfram Weißhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98508235/Jackdawhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98510778/POWERHOUSEhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98513746/The Suit / https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98519932/https://rentry.org/mistersuit>Z-teamBastion / Nikolaihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98498275/Makohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98504896/https://rentry.org/ypsn3tzvSorceress / Samantha Mercerhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98507126/https://rentry.org/teqfr77iParagon / Nathaniel "Nate" Rowehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98507475/https://rentry.org/twsv2bi4Insomnia / Jackson Leedshttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98509992/https://rentry.org/6petn6u5Blitz / Owen Cooperhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/98511218/https://rentry.org/27bhfvdfSukeban / Yuki Tomahttps://rentry.co/9ibpb89s
>>98523868>WritefagsSunset (Bastion, Ra)https://rentry.org/aistaztx>Relationship Charts>Wolframhttps://rentry.org/wvro73q3>Jackdawhttps://rentry.org/fqfcwf32>Powerhousehttps://rentry.org/PowerhouseChart>Kalcheyhttps://rentry.org/kmhhny8h
>>98523721Yeah, as is it's kind of weird that there is a power level that the CYOA says have only 5-50 people in the entire world at that level... and yet 75% of the cast is a level ABOVE that, and all concentrated in a single city. Catastrophic or even Destructive would have been a better limit for street level stuff, but if we're actually doing cosmic level stuff it might be a nice change of pace from our usual cape stuff.
>>98523859Hey you mind if I make your character my rival/nemesis. Also when was power house first active? 1950s, 60s...2000s?
>>98523826I still haven't posted the build yet. But it's going to be a street tier D-list animorph.
>>98523721It's probably just me, but I can see the power level difference leading to some good interactions/scenarios like Sea King vs Mumen Rider. Even if there's a lot of very high powered people, they're not exactly omnipotent so lower level builds can still have times to shine.
>>98523892Which character are you planning to make him the rival or nemesis for? As for his villainous career timeline, I like to imagine that Powerhouse has been in the game for quite a bit but not so long that his longevity has been too noticeable by others or even himself. It's hard to tell when you're not getting a gray hair or wrinkles when you are constantly buzzing with electricity from head to toe. I'd probably say the 2000's was his "Prime" active years that established him as the behemoth he is today, but I'd be fine with the 80's as his early period of activity. He'd just be the type that hasn't reflected on the passage of time and thinks that commercial touchscreen smartphones are still pretty new as a concept and not almost 20 years old since the first IPhone came out.
>>98523894Hero or villain?
What happens if two characters with nullification target each other?
both images for new threads are used so I guess vampire sticks around another week
>>98524028The faster one wins I suppose. Unless you can break concentration in some other way, then you can reverse it. It also depends on the tier, minor major and super work differently.
>>98523983>thinks that commercial touchscreen smartphones are still pretty new as a concept and not almost 20 years old since the first IPhone came out.You didn't have to make him so relatable.
Hogs, go make a genuine effort to be better swine>>98524048>>98524048>>98524048
>>98523983>thinks that commercial touchscreen smartphones are still pretty new as a concept and not almost 20 years old since the first IPhone came out.Fuck you.And fuck the passage of time.And fuck the 2000s being twenty fucking years ago.
>>98524115Closer to 30 years ago than 20 actually.
>>98524123technically 2009 is the 2000s and that was 17 years ago
I don't like that everyone is treating platinum age as low stakes.If there are no stakes what is there to care about?Because I don't particularly care for apocalyptic monsters destroying a city for no reason, being defeated in 2 minutes, and the biggest loss being the quality of someone's shopping experience.
>>98524138Then make a villain that threatens the lives of all builds
>>98524138>I don't like that everyone is treating platinum age as low stakes.Then you don't like the whole premise. People started it because they wanted low stakes, so we have low stakes. If you want high stakes start an MP with high stakes.
>>98524138When? it just started so we still don't know where it's heading or if it'll even reach the point of where we can choose the type of stakes we have.
Wtf is a villain build even supposed to do kekThe Z Team has like 10 unstoppable monsters
>>98524364Lock in.
>>98524364Not fight them all at once. We're reserving a full team up for the season finale.
>>98524364Literally pic related.
>>98524364Villains are pretty yoked as well. Mad Hatter has Ultra Instinct and Corruption, RA is a flying nuke, Wolfram is his domain practically controls time and space. Powerhouse is POWERHOUSE and the Suit can walk straight out of any conflict with the old "whats that behind you" trick.
From hence forth Powerhouse is only allowed to be referred to as Mitochondria.Violation is punishable by death.
>>98524399You'd have to successfully keep him in a cell first.
>>98524387A villain for fun could be interesting to try out honestly. Someone who minimizes the casualties of his crimes, and is only doing just enough to heroes catch the heroes' attention for a fight.
>>98524387this anime is so hot
>>98524387Isn't this the chatacter that's into heroine ryona?
>>98524459She's the 14 year old who abuses and molests other 14 year olds yeah
>>98524459just watch her animeit's one of the few good things made in the last few years
stop with the obvious samefagging
>>98524468I don't see who the samefag is
>>98524453>>98524465MHAbro btw
To do list for capefags:>flesh out the setting>create a build list page so people don't have to click through 20 links and read a dozen dumped builds to figure out what characters exist>figure out a main plot and start progressing it
>>98524522>>flesh out the settingI've watched Avengers before>>create a build list page so people don't have to click through 20 links and read a dozen dumped builds to figure out what characters existNot important>>figure out a main plot and start progressing itWhat if the evil corporation GassyCo made stinky gassy pills that made you fart everywhere, and THIS PLOT NEEDED A HERO?
>>98524522Why didn't you post this in the new thread?
>>98524544because everyone is in this thread
>>98524548It's a bit late right now so you'd probably get more responses eight hours after.
